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Au5 & Fractal - Blue

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Topic Starter
xChorse
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015 m. lapkričio 24 d. at 13:28:39

Artist: Au5 & Fractal
Title: Blue
Tags: monstercat drumstep dubstep aus insane
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8163kb
Play Time: 05:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Depths (4,72 stars, 1116 notes)
Download: Au5 & Fractal - Blue
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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feeling blue Kappa
Affirmation
Hi. It's my turn to mod.
00:01:470 (1) - This spin is too long.
01:25:813 (1,2) - 01:26:156 - ???
04:58:043 (5) - Note is not locked in timing.
04:58:554 (1) - ^
04:58:729 (3) - ^
Sorry. I'm poor at English and modding.
Topic Starter
xChorse

Neoskylove wrote:

Hi. It's my turn to mod.
00:01:470 (1) - This spin is too long. I think it fits :s
01:25:813 (1,2) - 01:26:156 - ??? Made bigger gap between them
04:58:043 (5) - Note is not locked in timing. Fixed
04:58:554 (1) - ^ Fixed
04:58:729 (3) - ^ Fixed
Sorry. I'm poor at English and modding.
Thanks :)
Asserin

Depths

  1. 00:20:499 (7) - It can be weird to play, what u about stack it on 00:19:813 (4) - ?
  2. 00:21:013 (4) - In my opinion the beginning of the slider should be as simple on its way to its end x:448 y:215 http://puu.sh/ktOdm/65250f492c.jpg
  3. 00:25:127 (4) - This should have an angle of 45* for me
  4. 00:26:156 (1) - y:324 pls it should be same like 00:25:813 (6) - and u can make it http://puu.sh/ktOtc/b9d660b26d.jpg
  5. 00:28:041 (1,2) - y:320 same like 00:27:527 (5,6) - pls
  6. 00:30:956 (6) - This should have an angle of 45* for me and u can round it more
  7. 00:54:613 (5,6) - Stack it on end of slider ? I think it can works nice :3
  8. 01:00:784 (5) - This should be in the middle 01:00:441 (4,6)
  9. 01:02:670 (5,6,7) - Do it so that it looked like a trapeze pls :3
  10. 01:08:670 (3) - What u about this ? http://puu.sh/ktOY4/4346eb9c5b.jpg
  11. 01:49:127 (9) - Triangle will find better (of course is the right move)
  12. 02:03:870 (4) - WTF ? XD
  13. 03:34:899 (7,8) - CTRL+G pls
  14. 03:53:241 (2,3,4) - Its not on rhythm ;-; , make this rhythm like on gryph http://puu.sh/ktPKg/fec003a620.jpg
  15. 04:29:584 (1,2,3,4) - ^http://puu.sh/ktPZ2/e21c40c3bf.jpg
  16. 04:41:756 (5,6) - CTRL+G
Nice map, good luck !
Topic Starter
xChorse

Asserin wrote:

Depths

  1. 00:20:499 (7) - It can be weird to play, what u about stack it on 00:19:813 (4) - ? Done!
  2. 00:21:013 (4) - In my opinion the beginning of the slider should be as simple on its way to its end x:448 y:215 http://puu.sh/ktOdm/65250f492c.jpg Done!
  3. 00:25:127 (4) - This should have an angle of 45* for me Done!
  4. 00:26:156 (1) - y:324 pls it should be same like 00:25:813 (6) - and u can make it http://puu.sh/ktOtc/b9d660b26d.jpg Changed both to y:324
  5. 00:28:041 (1,2) - y:320 same like 00:27:527 (5,6) - pls 6 to y:324
  6. 00:30:956 (6) - This should have an angle of 45* for me and u can round it more Done!
  7. 00:54:613 (5,6) - Stack it on end of slider ? I think it can works nice :3 Done!
  8. 01:00:784 (5) - This should be in the middle 01:00:441 (4,6) Done!
  9. 01:02:670 (5,6,7) - Do it so that it looked like a trapeze pls :3 Changed to make it look smoother
  10. 01:08:670 (3) - What u about this ? http://puu.sh/ktOY4/4346eb9c5b.jpg I like the one I made. Will keep it for now unless more people point it out
  11. 01:49:127 (9) - Triangle will find better (of course is the right move) Done, but also changed to make the flow better, though it's a bit harder now
  12. 02:03:870 (4) - WTF ? XD oops i have no idea how that even happened lol, thanks for pointing it out
  13. 03:34:899 (7,8) - CTRL+G pls I really like that! Done!
  14. 03:53:241 (2,3,4) - Its not on rhythm ;-; , make this rhythm like on gryph http://puu.sh/ktPKg/fec003a620.jpg Changed it to match the rhythm more, but it looks different
  15. 04:29:584 (1,2,3,4) - ^http://puu.sh/ktPZ2/e21c40c3bf.jpg Looks fine to me
  16. 04:41:756 (5,6) - CTRL+G Done!
Nice map, good luck !
Thank you! :)
Sky Future
hi~ modding now hajime!

(i cant english but, you can read)

Depths
00:11:070 (1) - circle move x156 y104

00:13:813 (1) - ^ x92 y192

00:15:184 (5) - ^ x308 y80

00:17:927 (2) - new combo

00:33:013 (5) - slider shape change
http://puu.sh/kvOVV/8fec720f15.jpg (tip : ctrl + h)

00:33:699 (8) - circle move x496 y292

01:01:470 (7) - ^ x140 y252

02:24:784 (7) - ^ x340 y180

02:33:356 (1) - 6repeat end and 02:34:041 - new slider make!
http://puu.sh/kvPkw/c3291e967d.jpg look

wow good notes Arrangement <3
Topic Starter
xChorse

Sky Future wrote:

hi~ modding now hajime!

(i cant english but, you can read)

Depths
00:11:070 (1) - circle move x156 y104 Seems fine to me

00:13:813 (1) - ^ x92 y192 Changed, but in a different way

00:15:184 (5) - ^ x308 y80 Changed, but in a different way

00:17:927 (2) - new combo Done!

00:33:013 (5) - slider shape change
http://puu.sh/kvOVV/8fec720f15.jpg (tip : ctrl + h) Done!

00:33:699 (8) - circle move x496 y292 Seems fine to me

01:01:470 (7) - ^ x140 y252 Seems fine to me

02:24:784 (7) - ^ x340 y180 Changed, but in a different way

02:33:356 (1) - 6repeat end and 02:34:041 - new slider make!
http://puu.sh/kvPkw/c3291e967d.jpg look Done!

wow good notes Arrangement <3 Thanks <3
Most of the things you pointed out are caused by my mapping style so I didn't change them for now. Thank you for the mod!
Makeli
Yo! From my que.

[General]


Add kiai times to:
01:27:870 - 02:11:756 - and 03:53:241 - 04:37:127

[Depths]


00:21:356 - I think that sliderend should be a slider because of that "aaaaa"
00:21:699 (5) - Slider again because "uuuuuu".
Like this
http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg or http://puu.sh/kywAv/674668d969.jpg
00:46:384 (1) - Change to 2 circles?
01:27:184 (1) - What's up with this random 1/16 slider lol I'd go again with http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg
01:28:556 (3) - This should end on the white tick and on the red tick a new slider should start
01:29:584 (4) - Slider
01:29:927 (5) - Make this into a 1/4 kickslider and add a slider to 01:30:099 -
01:43:641 (9) - Extend this to the red tick or the blue tick
01:44:327 (1) - Snap this sliderend to the red or the blue tick and add a new slider to 01:45:013 -
01:45:356 (2) - Make this more wiggly with red control points like this: http://puu.sh/kyxBO/b0ada1a03a.jpg
01:46:041 (4) - This should be 2 1/4 kicksliders
01:50:670 (6) - Slider
01:51:013 (7) - Slider
01:52:041 (2) - Slider
01:54:613 (2) - Snap sliderend to red or blue tick and add a new slider to 01:55:299 -
01:56:670 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kicksliders would fit better imo
02:06:270 (3) - Not really sure about this one. You could maybe snap this to the blue tick and add a new slider to 02:06:613 - or just simply extend it to 02:06:784 -
02:07:984 (8,1,2) - Kicksliders?
02:11:241 (3) - End this at the blue tick
02:46:727 (2) - http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg
03:58:041 (3) - Same as 02:06:270 (3) -
03:58:727 (4) - Slider
03:59:070 (5) - Slider
04:09:699 (2) - Same as 03:58:041 (3) - and 02:06:270 (3) -
04:10:384 (3) - Slider
04:11:413 (7,8) - 3 Kicksliders?
04:16:384 (6) - Slider
04:16:899 (7) - Slider
04:17:241 (8) - Make this into a 1/4 kickslider and add a new slider at 04:17:413
04:18:270 (2) - Make this more wiggly like I showed you above and the sliderend at 04:18:613 - is a pretty loud and hard kick so I recommend you to at least consider making it a circle or a kickslider
04:18:784 (3,4,5,6) - 3 kicksliders?
04:22:556 (1) - Make this into a circle and then add a slider at 04:22:727 -
04:26:156 (4) - Snap into the red or the blue tick and add a slider at 04:26:499 -
04:27:870 (9) - Snap this into the blue tick and add a kickslider at 04:28:213 -
04:28:384 (1) - Slider
04:29:583 (11) - Remove this. Then move 04:29:584 (1) - to the white tick and make it repeat 4 times so that you stream looks like this http://puu.sh/kyAJJ/9b591b0f24.jpg this is just for better rythming imo
04:56:327 (5) - Stack this to (4)? If you do this move (6) further away from (5).
05:09:356 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg

Right now as this map is, I feel like it's really undermapped.

That's it from my mod. Hope this helps at least in some way and hope you don't feel like I'm trying to interfere with your mapping style.
If you didn't understand something I mentioned feel free to pm me!
Good luck with this!!
Topic Starter
xChorse

Maakkeli wrote:

Yo! From my que.

[General]


Add kiai times to:
01:27:870 - 02:11:756 - and 03:53:241 - 04:37:127 Don't really feel like this map needs Kiai at all, but I added it at 01:22:213 - and 03:47:584 -

[Depths]


00:21:356 - I think that sliderend should be a slider because of that "aaaaa" Done!
00:21:699 (5) - Slider again because "uuuuuu". Done!
Like this
http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg or http://puu.sh/kywAv/674668d969.jpg
00:46:384 (1) - Change to 2 circles? Done!
01:27:184 (1) - What's up with this random 1/16 slider lol I'd go again with http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg Done!
01:28:556 (3) - This should end on the white tick and on the red tick a new slider should start Done!
01:29:584 (4) - Slider Done!
01:29:927 (5) - Make this into a 1/4 kickslider and add a slider to 01:30:099 -Done!
01:43:641 (9) - Extend this to the red tick or the blue tick Done!
01:44:327 (1) - Snap this sliderend to the red or the blue tick and add a new slider to 01:45:013 - Done!
01:45:356 (2) - Make this more wiggly with red control points like this: http://puu.sh/kyxBO/b0ada1a03a.jpg Done!
01:46:041 (4) - This should be 2 1/4 kicksliders Changed in a different way
01:50:670 (6) - Slider Done!
01:51:013 (7) - Slider Done!
01:52:041 (2) - Slider Done!
01:54:613 (2) - Snap sliderend to red or blue tick and add a new slider to 01:55:299 - Done!
01:56:670 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kicksliders would fit better imo Done!
02:06:270 (3) - Not really sure about this one. You could maybe snap this to the blue tick and add a new slider to 02:06:613 - or just simply extend it to 02:06:784 - Done!
02:07:984 (8,1,2) - Kicksliders? Done!
02:11:241 (3) - End this at the blue tick Done!
02:46:727 (2) - http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg Done!
03:58:041 (3) - Same as 02:06:270 (3) - Done!
03:58:727 (4) - Slider Done!
03:59:070 (5) - Slider Done!
04:09:699 (2) - Same as 03:58:041 (3) - and 02:06:270 (3) - Done!
04:10:384 (3) - Slider Done!
04:11:413 (7,8) - 3 Kicksliders? It's good as it is imo
04:16:384 (6) - Slider Done!
04:16:899 (7) - Slider Done!
04:17:241 (8) - Make this into a 1/4 kickslider and add a new slider at 04:17:413 Done!
04:18:270 (2) - Make this more wiggly like I showed you above and the sliderend at 04:18:613 - is a pretty loud and hard kick so I recommend you to at least consider making it a circle or a kickslider Done!
04:18:784 (3,4,5,6) - 3 kicksliders? It's good as it is imo
04:22:556 (1) - Make this into a circle and then add a slider at 04:22:727 - Done!
04:26:156 (4) - Snap into the red or the blue tick and add a slider at 04:26:499 - Done!
04:27:870 (9) - Snap this into the blue tick and add a kickslider at 04:28:213 - Changed in a different way
04:28:384 (1) - Slider Done!
04:29:583 (11) - Remove this. Then move 04:29:584 (1) - to the white tick and make it repeat 4 times so that you stream looks like this http://puu.sh/kyAJJ/9b591b0f24.jpg this is just for better rythming imo Done!
04:56:327 (5) - Stack this to (4)? If you do this move (6) further away from (5). Done!
05:09:356 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/kywwv/8c0ac1aef1.jpg Done!

Right now as this map is, I feel like it's really undermapped.

That's it from my mod. Hope this helps at least in some way and hope you don't feel like I'm trying to interfere with your mapping style.
If you didn't understand something I mentioned feel free to pm me!
Good luck with this!!
Thank you!
riktoi


mod from my qqqqqq

[Depths?]

02:12:956 (6,7,8) - try stacking them instead
02:18:441 (7,8,9) - ^
02:32:156 (1,2,3) - ^

02:41:927 - you could map the vocals here
02:43:984 - ^

03:00:441 (3) - change this into a 1/1 slider

03:22:727 (6) - I think 2 hitcircles fit better (2 distinct sounds)

03:25:299 (8) - stack this on 03:25:470 (9) -

03:45:013 (1,2) - try mapping this like 03:43:470 (4,5,6) - but in reverse (1 slider then 2 hitcircles) or leave it the way it is

03:54:270 - sv could be increased here

04:22:041 (6,7,8) - maybe try something like a 1/4 slider and a hitcircle after it

04:58:213 (6,7) - make the jump between these bigger

Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
xChorse

riktoi wrote:



mod from my qqqqqq

[Depths?]

02:12:956 (6,7,8) - try stacking them instead Done!
02:18:441 (7,8,9) - ^ Done!
02:32:156 (1,2,3) - ^ Done!

02:41:927 - you could map the vocals here Done!
02:43:984 - ^ Done!

03:00:441 (3) - change this into a 1/1 slider Done!

03:22:727 (6) - I think 2 hitcircles fit better (2 distinct sounds) Done!

03:25:299 (8) - stack this on 03:25:470 (9) - Done!

03:45:013 (1,2) - try mapping this like 03:43:470 (4,5,6) - but in reverse (1 slider then 2 hitcircles) or leave it the way it is Changed in a different way

03:54:270 - sv could be increased here Done!

04:22:041 (6,7,8) - maybe try something like a 1/4 slider and a hitcircle after it Done!

04:58:213 (6,7) - make the jump between these bigger Did Ctrl+G on 04:58:213 (6,7) -

Good luck with your map
Thank you!
Inversal
Red = Unrankable
Black = Suggestions
Blue = strongly recommended
Depths
SPOILER
00:14:156 (2) - Move to x:152 y:340
00:33:870 - Add a note here. There's a strong sound here (You can add up to a 1/2 slider)
00:44:841 - 1/2 slider
00:45:527 - Circle You have a high-starrate map. so adding these will not affect your star and make it more fun to play
00:45:699 - Circle
00:46:041 - 1/2 slider
00:47:756 - ^
00:49:984 - Circle
00:50:156 - ^
00:50:499 - 1/2 slider
00:52:727 - circle
00:52:899 - ^
00:53:241 - 1/2 slider
01:23:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can jump here
02:22:727 - The part after this can add notes or 1/2 slider to make the continonus play.
02:51:527 (5) - 1/4 pls
03:49:041 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can jump here
04:01:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You can stream here

New combo Issues
SPOILER
00:15:184 - NC
00:15:527 - No NC
00:18:613 (1) - No NC
00:19:299 - NC
00:23:756 - NC
00:25:984 - No NC
00:26:156 - NC
00:27:527 - NC
00:28:041 - No NC
00:29:241 - NC
00:31:641 - NC
00:31:984 - No NC
00:34:727 - NC
00:37:127 - NC
00:38:499 - NC
00:39:013 - No NC
00:41:241 - NC
00:41:927 - No NC
00:42:613 - NC
00:45:356 - NC
00:49:470 - NC
00:50:327 - No NC
00:56:327 - NC
00:57:184 - No NC
00:57:699 - NC
00:58:899 - No NC
00:59:070 - NC
01:01:813 - NC
01:02:670 - No NC
01:03:184 - NC
01:07:299 - NC
Try to NC every downbeats (big white line) but if you wish that part to be a draining section you can lengthen some combos (suggest to do this on the slow part of the song)

Last suggestion : Try add more beats where you can to make a continous play. So it wont be boring to play

P.S. I'm a newbie modder. Sorry for any errors or unusable mods.
Topic Starter
xChorse

bestza55567 wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Black = Suggestions
Blue = strongly recommended
Depths
SPOILER
00:14:156 (2) - Move to x:152 y:340 Done!
00:33:870 - Add a note here. There's a strong sound here (You can add up to a 1/2 slider) Done!
00:44:841 - 1/2 slider Done!
00:45:527 - Circle You have a high-starrate map. so adding these will not affect your star and make it more fun to play The map has progressive difficulty, so I don't feel like a part so early needs to be overmapped
00:45:699 - Circle ^
00:46:041 - 1/2 slider ^
00:47:756 - ^ Made 00:47:584 (5) - a slider
00:49:984 - Circle Made 00:49:813 (5) - a slider
00:50:156 - ^ ^
00:50:499 - 1/2 slider Don't want to overmap as it's so early into the map
00:52:727 - circle ^
00:52:899 - ^ ^
00:53:241 - 1/2 slider ^
01:23:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can jump here Done!
02:22:727 - The part after this can add notes or 1/2 slider to make the continonus play. You can jump here Done!
02:51:527 (5) - 1/4 pls You can jump here Done!
03:49:041 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can jump here Done!
04:01:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You can stream here Done!

New combo Issues
SPOILER
00:15:184 - NC
00:15:527 - No NC
00:18:613 (1) - No NC
00:19:299 - NC
00:23:756 - NC
00:25:984 - No NC
00:26:156 - NC
00:27:527 - NC
00:28:041 - No NC
00:29:241 - NC
00:31:641 - NC
00:31:984 - No NC
00:34:727 - NC
00:37:127 - NC
00:38:499 - NC
00:39:013 - No NC
00:41:241 - NC
00:41:927 - No NC
00:42:613 - NC
00:45:356 - NC
00:49:470 - NC
00:50:327 - No NC
00:56:327 - NC
00:57:184 - No NC
00:57:699 - NC
00:58:899 - No NC
00:59:070 - NC
01:01:813 - NC
01:02:670 - No NC
01:03:184 - NC
01:07:299 - NC
Changed all NCs
Try to NC every downbeats (big white line) but if you wish that part to be a draining section you can lengthen some combos (suggest to do this on the slow part of the song)

Last suggestion : Try add more beats where you can to make a continous play. So it wont be boring to play

P.S. I'm a newbie modder. Sorry for any errors or unusable mods.
Thank you! :)
transcendental
Depths

This is a sweet map. The way you have it set up with the very fast repeating sliders makes sliderbreaks really easy though, which was kinda frustrating - just something to keep in mind. Additionally, there were a few parts of the map that felt kinda empty - not fast enough to be interesting but not slow enough to be a break. Also, there's some misleading spacing in the map where you'll have several notes with the same spacing visually but very dfiferent spacing temporally. I'll try to point a couple of those out, but there's no way I can get all of them, so go through yourself and see what you can find. I'd fix those if possible, they were very offputting when playing through.

00:16:384 (4,5,6) - Here's an example - 4 to 5 has the same spacing as 5 to 6 but is only half the amount of time! To fix this you could move 6 farther away.
00:22:727 (3,4,1) - Another one - very similar spacing from 3 to 4 and 4 to 1, but three times the time!
00:52:213 (1,2,3) - Another one.
00:56:670 (2,3,4) - Another one.
01:33:356 (1) - These are short enough that you can't see the repeat arrow - don't think that's rankable (check in the default skin). There's more of these whenever you have a slider that repeats this fast - just up the SV a bit for those in particular and you should be fine.
02:14:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is one of those parts that feels empty.
02:47:413 (4,5,6,7,8) - More misleading spacing.
02:53:413 (3,4,5) - Same thing.
02:55:299 (1,2,3) - More.
03:59:584 (1,2,3,4) - The way this pattern overlapped with itself (especially 1 and 3) made it really hard to read. Maybe move these so they don't overlap as much and there's a bit more space between them.

Other than the spacing issues, though, I really enjoyed the map. It flowed very well and played very nicely.
Topic Starter
xChorse

bigjoe97 wrote:

Depths

This is a sweet map. The way you have it set up with the very fast repeating sliders makes sliderbreaks really easy though, which was kinda frustrating - just something to keep in mind. Additionally, there were a few parts of the map that felt kinda empty - not fast enough to be interesting but not slow enough to be a break. Also, there's some misleading spacing in the map where you'll have several notes with the same spacing visually but very dfiferent spacing temporally. I'll try to point a couple of those out, but there's no way I can get all of them, so go through yourself and see what you can find. I'd fix those if possible, they were very offputting when playing through.

00:16:384 (4,5,6) - Here's an example - 4 to 5 has the same spacing as 5 to 6 but is only half the amount of time! To fix this you could move 6 farther away. High enough AR makes it look fine, so not changing it for now
00:22:727 (3,4,1) - Another one - very similar spacing from 3 to 4 and 4 to 1, but three times the time! Normal jump, don't see what's wrong with it
00:52:213 (1,2,3) - Another one. Feels normal with high enough AR, and this part is supposed to be something like a small break
00:56:670 (2,3,4) - Another one. Made a jump between 00:56:327 (1,2) - so 00:57:184 (3) - would have better spacing
01:33:356 (1) - These are short enough that you can't see the repeat arrow - don't think that's rankable (check in the default skin). There's more of these whenever you have a slider that repeats this fast - just up the SV a bit for those in particular and you should be fine. Seems fine to me, but will look into it and change if it's not rankable.
02:14:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is one of those parts that feels empty. I had the entire section from 02:11:756 - to 02:34:813 - act as a resting point, as constant notes kind of make it feel overmapped in my mind
02:47:413 (4,5,6,7,8) - More misleading spacing. Seems like a normal jump to me
02:53:413 (3,4,5) - Same thing. Is normal with high enough AR
02:55:299 (1,2,3) - More. Changed!
03:59:584 (1,2,3,4) - The way this pattern overlapped with itself (especially 1 and 3) made it really hard to read. Maybe move these so they don't overlap as much and there's a bit more space between them. I honestly hate how I mapped this part, but I have no idea how I would map it any better, will try experimenting a bit around this part

Other than the spacing issues, though, I really enjoyed the map. It flowed very well and played very nicely.
Thank you for the mod! :)
Cheesecake
Hi, from modding queue

[Depths]

Pls snap timing points
Also a lot of your sliders have minor flow issues, try to make it so that the start of the slider will go in the same direction as the player's cursor, follow points are helpful here, but this only applies to things like 00:12:279 (4,5) - and 00:12:279 (4,5) - , not 00:13:822 (1,2,3) -
I noticed some of your triplets aren't straight, where they should be really

00:11:422 (2) - Move the final anchor point so that it overlaps the follow point and points towards (3)
00:12:793 (5) - Ctrl+J
01:25:822 (1,2) - Reduce the volume of these two sliders
01:26:508 (3,4) - Don't be afraid to increase spacing
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:365 (1,2) - Change these to wubwub sliders, no need for 1/8 sliders that sound horrible :(
01:38:850 (2,3) - ^

Well pretty much everything I've said can be applied to the rest of the map, overall placement isn't too bad and your combo's are fine

Good luck
Topic Starter
xChorse

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Depths]

Pls snap timing points Was just messing around with offset to see what works better, will snap.
Also a lot of your sliders have minor flow issues, try to make it so that the start of the slider will go in the same direction as the player's cursor, follow points are helpful here, but this only applies to things like 00:12:279 (4,5) - Done! and 00:12:279 (4,5) - , not 00:13:822 (1,2,3) -
I noticed some of your triplets aren't straight, where they should be really

00:11:422 (2) - Move the final anchor point so that it overlaps the follow point and points towards (3) Done!
00:12:793 (5) - Ctrl+J Done!
01:25:822 (1,2) - Reduce the volume of these two sliders Done!
01:26:508 (3,4) - Don't be afraid to increase spacing Wanted the visual appeal for that part, but increased it just a little bit
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:33:365 (1,2) - Change these to wubwub sliders, no need for 1/8 sliders that sound horrible :( Changed to 2 triplets
01:38:850 (2,3) - ^ Done!

Well pretty much everything I've said can be applied to the rest of the map, overall placement isn't too bad and your combo's are fine

Good luck Thanks!
Thank you for the mod! :)
Starset
Hi from our Queue
Really nice song and map just gonna point out some suggestions

[Depths]
-00:36:705 (2,3) - i would prefer that they go in the direction of the slider like this: http://puu.sh/lmh3I/38ea96014c.jpg
-01:00:447 (1,2,3) - u can make some more space between these 3 sliders
-01:12:790 (8,1) - it looks better like this: http://puu.sh/lmhbd/b50fe6a488.jpg
-01:14:162 (4) - ctrl+h maybe?
-01:51:019 (7,1) - blanket a bit off
-02:01:305 (2,3) - looks better like this: http://puu.sh/lmhkG/61391091f3.jpg
-02:06:619 (6,7) - blanket
-02:23:590 - there must be a note here
-02:25:133 - 02:25:305 - 02:28:562 - dont ignore these pls
-02:44:162 - u can add note here
-03:44:676 (8) - stack on 03:45:019 (1) -
-03:55:390 - missing note (u should begin this slider 03:55:476 (1) - here 03:55:390 - and end it here 03:55:647 - )
-03:58:047 (4,5) - i dont like it when they touch why not like this: http://puu.sh/lmhD2/04f3f8a288.jpg
same for 03:58:733 (6,7) -
-04:04:219 (2,3) - polish this blanket a bit more or move 3 down a little bit
-04:29:504 (8,1) - spacing
-05:00:790 (4,2) - blanket

Thats all best luck for your map 0/
Topic Starter
xChorse

HB24 wrote:

Hi from our Queue
Really nice song and map just gonna point out some suggestions

[Depths]
-00:36:705 (2,3) - i would prefer that they go in the direction of the slider like this: http://puu.sh/lmh3I/38ea96014c.jpg I feel like mine is better flow and sets up for 00:36:962 (4) -
-01:00:447 (1,2,3) - u can make some more space between these 3 sliders Done!
-01:12:790 (8,1) - it looks better like this: http://puu.sh/lmhbd/b50fe6a488.jpg Done!
-01:14:162 (4) - ctrl+h maybe? Done!
-01:51:019 (7,1) - blanket a bit off Done! Also extended 01:51:019 (7) - a bit to see how it works
-02:01:305 (2,3) - looks better like this: http://puu.sh/lmhkG/61391091f3.jpg Changed in a different way
-02:06:619 (6,7) - blanket Done!
-02:23:590 - there must be a note here Done!
-02:25:133 - 02:25:305 - 02:28:562 - dont ignore these pls Mapped all of them!
-02:44:162 - u can add note here Don't feel that it works
-02:44:162 - u can add note here
-03:44:676 (8) - stack on 03:45:019 (1) - Done!
-03:55:390 - missing note (u should begin this slider 03:55:476 (1) - here 03:55:390 - and end it here 03:55:647 - ) Done!
-03:58:047 (4,5) - i dont like it when they touch why not like this: http://puu.sh/lmhD2/04f3f8a288.jpg
same for 03:58:733 (6,7) - Done!
-04:04:219 (2,3) - polish this blanket a bit more or move 3 down a little bit Done!
-04:29:504 (8,1) - spacing Done!
-05:00:790 (4,2) - blanket Looks fine to me?

Thats all best luck for your map 0/
Thanks! :D
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