Doyak wrote:

1:1 req, in English as requested.

[Easy]
* I hope you DON'T use grip snap for Easy diffs, since it hurts ds consistency a lot, like 00:25:967 (1,2) - and 00:28:467 (2,3) -
* I remember I told you, to PLEASE use ONE FIXED DISTANCE throughout the map, but why you didn't? like 00:28:467 (2,3,4,5) - you used 0.8x here but 00:34:967 (2,3) - here 0.47? This applies through the whole map, so I'm not gonna point out every one of them. I repeat, Please use one fixed distance.
* 00:40:967 (3,4) - and I definitely told you not to stack on Easy diff, unless they're rhythmically far away to be read easily. Same for 00:54:967 (1,2) - 01:29:967 (1,2) - and so on.
* 02:15:967 (5,6) - Oh please, do not reverse more than 1 time when the slider is short. I've already told you that before...

In this state, I don't really feel like mod any further, please fix the basic things I listed above and call me back, then I'll recheck.

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

1. I don’t think having the slider tick rate set to 2 is necessary; set it back to 1
2. 00:28:091 (3) – Fix this blanket so it blankets 00:27:591(2) more nicely
3. 00:37:091 (5,1) – I think you should move the (1) here to y96 so that it’s on the same level with (5)
4. 00:44:091 (2) – Move this to the right so there’s no overlap with 00:42:091(4)
5. 00:47:091 (5) – Move this slightly to the left so there’s no overlap with 00:46:091
6. 00:50:091 (1) – I think you should stretch this into a 4/1 slider; this slider feels like it ends too shortly.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:10:091 (5) – Make this slider parallel with 01:08:091 (3), perhaps? I think it’d be more aesthetically pleasing
8. 01:18:591 (1) – Why not make this slider be blanketed 01:17:091 (6)?
   
   SPOILER

   not the best example, but you get the idea, right?
   
9. 01:22:091 (1,2,3) – Make these parallel with each other

1. 00:30:091 (6) – Make this the new combo instead of 00:30:591 (1)
2. 00:37:091 (3,4,5,6) – Personally, I think you may be overdoing it a little bit too much with all these circles like this. Maybe try replacing some of these four-circle patterns with two 1/1 sliders?
3. 00:38:841 (2,3,4,5,6,1) – ^
4. 00:41:591 – Feels like you’re missing a beat here. Maybe try putting in a 1/1 slider here?
5. 00:42:091 (1) – I don’t think a 1/1 slider is the best choice for the rhythm here, since you skipped a pretty strong beat on 00:42:591. Make this a 2/1 slider instead?
6. 00:45:091 (1) – Have the new combo start at 00:46:091 (2) instead
7. 00:49:591 (1) – Have the new combo start at 00:50:091 (2) instead
8. 00:51:091 – Missed a pretty strong beat here; add a circle here?
9. 00:58:841 (3) – I think this rhythm is a little off with the song. I’m pretty sure there’s a beat on the 00:58:966..
10. 01:01:091 (2) - ^; beat’s on 01:00:966
11. 01:52:591 (3) – This blanket could be made a little nicer so that it better blankets 01:54:091 (1)

1. Given the BPM of the song, your approach rate is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too slow, and it may affect playability. Raise it to something like 8.
2. 00:28:841 – Missed a beat here, I think. Add a circle?
3. 00:30:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:30:091 (3)
4. 00:34:341 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:34:091 (5)
5. 00:37:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:38:091 (2)
6. 00:51:341 – Missed a beat here too. Add a circle?
7. 00:51:591 (1) – Make this into a 1/1 slider so that it better follows the vocals? Also, move the new combo to00:52:091 (2)
8. 00:53:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:54:091 (2)
9. 00:55:091 – Missed another beat here; add a circle. Also move the new combo from 00:54:841 (1) to here
10. 01:40:091 (2) – Adjust this blanket so that it better blankets 01:41:091 (3)
11. 01:53:591 – It feels like you could put in another 1/1 slider here
12. 01:58:591 (1) – Move the new combo so that it starts at 01:58:091 (7)

1. Sorry, but I don’t think this one is playable. It has too many confusing patterns and rhythms that conflict with the song, in my opinion. Only thing I can point out to you for this difficulty is that the AR is also way too low; try setting it to 9.

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my NM Queue- sorry about the delay, already have midterms to write =w=;;

awaaa a vocaloid song I haven’t listened to these in a while..

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

Easy

1. I don’t think having the slider tick rate set to 2 is necessary; set it back to 1 ->Humm.. 1 is better
2. 00:28:091 (3) – Fix this blanket so it blankets 00:27:591(2) more nicely - > fixed
3. 00:37:091 (5,1) – I think you should move the (1) here to y96 so that it’s on the same level with (5) ->Fixed
4. 00:44:091 (2) – Move this to the right so there’s no overlap with 00:42:091(4) ->Fixed
5. 00:47:091 (5) – Move this slightly to the left so there’s no overlap with 00:46:091
6. 00:50:091 (1) – I think you should stretch this into a 4/1 slider; this slider feels like it ends too shortly. ->Go right along with vocals
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:10:091 (5) – Make this slider parallel with 01:08:091 (3), perhaps? I think it’d be more aesthetically pleasing
8. 01:18:591 (1) – Why not make this slider be blanketed 01:17:091 (6)? ->Because beatmap quality i hold on
   
   SPOILER

   not the best example, but you get the idea, right?
   
9. 01:22:091 (1,2,3) – Make these parallel with each other ->Fixed

Normal

1. 00:30:091 (6) – Make this the new combo instead of 00:30:591 (1) ->ok
2. 00:37:091 (3,4,5,6) – Personally, I think you may be overdoing it a little bit too much with all these circles like this. Maybe try replacing some of these four-circle patterns with two 1/1 sliders? ->I Think is not better
3. 00:38:841 (2,3,4,5,6,1) – ^-> ^
4. 00:41:591 – Feels like you’re missing a beat here. Maybe try putting in a 1/1 slider here? - > humm now is not good
5. 00:42:091 (1) – I don’t think a 1/1 slider is the best choice for the rhythm here, since you skipped a pretty strong beat on 00:42:591. Make this a 2/1 slider instead? -> later i add sorry ;(
6. 00:45:091 (1) – Have the new combo start at 00:46:091 (2) instead ->ok
7. 00:49:591 (1) – Have the new combo start at 00:50:091 (2) instead ->ok
8. 00:51:091 – Missed a pretty strong beat here; add a circle here? - ->add
9. 00:58:841 (3) – I think this rhythm is a little off with the song. I’m pretty sure there’s a beat on the 00:58:966.. -> playback rate 25% and hear it, is correct beat :<
10. 01:01:091 (2) - ^; beat’s on 01:00:966 ->Fixed
11. 01:52:591 (3) – This blanket could be made a little nicer so that it better blankets 01:54:091 (1) ->Fixed

Hard

1. Given the BPM of the song, your approach rate is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too slow, and it may affect playability. Raise it to something like 8.
2. 00:28:841 – Missed a beat here, I think. Add a circle? - >ADD
3. 00:30:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:30:091 (3)
4. 00:34:341 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:34:091 (5) -> okay
5. 00:37:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:38:091 (2) - > okay
6. 00:51:341 – Missed a beat here too. Add a circle? - > if add note is littel worng beat ;w;
7. 00:51:591 (1) – Make this into a 1/1 slider so that it better follows the vocals? Also, move the new combo to00:52:091 (2)
8. 00:53:591 (1) – Move the new combo to 00:54:091 (2) - > fixed
9. 00:55:091 – Missed another beat here; add a circle. Also move the new combo from 00:54:841 (1) to here - > Done
10. 01:40:091 (2) – Adjust this blanket so that it better blankets 01:41:091 (3) - > fixed
11. 01:53:591 – It feels like you could put in another 1/1 slider here
12. 01:58:591 (1) – Move the new combo so that it starts at 01:58:091 (7) -> okay

Insane

1. Sorry, but I don’t think this one is playable. It has too many confusing patterns and rhythms that conflict with the song, in my opinion. Only thing I can point out to you for this difficulty is that the AR is also way too low; try setting it to 9 -> 7 is better me ;w;.

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Anyways, I hope this helps. Good luck

Julie wrote:

Seem like no one really mods insane, so I'll give it a try, and explain the best I can. And you know me, if you don't understand just PM me, I will go through all the map with you x3!

Try go on qualify, check a bit the insane, they don't go much straight, like let's just take a look at the begining (example):
00:26:091 (1,2) - straight right movement
00:26:841 (2) - straight down movement
00:27:091 (3,4,5) - straight down movement
00:27:591 (5,6,1) - straight left movement
00:28:091 (1,2) - straight up movement
00:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - straight right movement
etc.
Just imagine it look really robotic, all straight line, maybe this can let you view more 00:51:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .

Sound from the song that are really important (example):
00:28:091 - You map this loud sound, really good, really important sound, but then what about this sound 00:28:466 - ?, same main instrument there.

You been mapping vocal like this part 00:54:841 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - , and I supose you try here as well 00:59:091 (3,4,5) - , but the vocal for this part start here 00:58:966 -

Spacing issue :
Spacing issue isn't only in easy and normal. Of course in Hard, Insane or Extra, we can ignore AIBat detecting spacing issue, but the problem is, if they spacing is not well done, then it doesn't really play well.
Ok let's take example of this : 01:46:091 - + should all be same rhythm, you even map the rhythm consistent, but then you can see some different spacing, for example 01:59:591 (2,3,4) - got lower and this 02:01:341 (7,8,1) - got even more lower spacing.

Playability :
Some pattern look like is REALLY fun to play since it look so funny and fun on editor, but is actually not, for example 02:10:091 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - , really really not fun to play at all, it look really good, but is not really for playability, You should get some tester, most will probably miss this part for 5 stars player, because is really long train stream as well.

Another thing of playability, is what you listen and what you tap, for example 02:17:778 (10,1,2,3) - , you probably map this because you heard a 5 notes stream, the problem is, that the 5 notes stream start at 02:17:841 - , but you make player start tapping the stream at 02:17:778 - . Even if you make it different combo, which was a good idea, the problem is the way player play, they won't really feel that new combo, since song go really fast.

Green line :
02:10:091 - try avoid 30% volume, mostly when your drum go REALLY loud here xD. So is not actually supose to go SUPER LOW suddendly and then go up and up the volume. You can make the drum stream go up, but you should make it suddendly going down between this 02:09:841 - and this 02:10:091 - .

I point out some big point. Gl for improving insane a lots! >w<!!!