Hello, M4M from my
queue.
Easy- 00:04:354 (5) - Minor: This could be a blanket if you wanted it to be.
- 00:18:387 (2) - I personally don't like the rhythm of this slider. You have the repeat on the red tick and leave the downbeat to be mapped by the slider tick. The reverse arrow puts emphasis on the bell at 00:19:596 even though the first bell is on 00:19:112 and so missing the first bell but mapping to the second sounds kind of odd. If it were me, I would shorten this slider to either repeat on the downbeat or 00:19:112. Either works fine and sounds better in my opinion.
- 00:26:129 (2) - Same thing appiles to all of the other times you've used this slider. I won't mention them again for now unless you want me to.
- 01:00:241 (1) - Having these on the red tick and missing the downbeat threw me off every single time. I understand that it's within the music, but the rhythm feels kind of unintuitive unless you know it's coming. Using a normal 2/1 slider from the downbeat works fine in my opinion, but it's up to you. Again it happens more than once, so I won't mention it again. It might just be me though so ignore at your discretion.
- 01:06:290 (5) - Minor: The blanket is slightly off. View the approach circle from [01:05:201].
- 01:14:032 (1) - NC on here seems kind of unusual since it's not a downbeat, but it works. Up to you whether you want to move it to 01:13:548 or 01:15:483 or just leave it.
Normal- 00:02:661 (2) - Slightly uneven spacing through this (Prev1.24|Next1.30).
- 00:07:499 (5) - Minor: This blanket is slightly off [00:08:588].
- 00:17:419 (1) - Perhaps move t x84:y92 for a slightly better visual flow?
- 00:50:080 (4) - This has inconsistent spacing following from 3 (Prev1.13) and the blanket about 5 is a little off [00:51:169].
- 01:04:596 (2) - Slightly uneven spacing through this (Prev1.23|Next1.18).
- 01:08:709 (2) - As above (Prev1.15|Next1.22).
- 01:09:435 (5) - Minor: The blanket is slightly off [01:09:314].
- 01:23:951 (3) - As above [01:23:830].
- 01:34:838 (1) - As above [01:35:927].
- 01:37:499 (5) - Slightly uneven spacing through this (Prev1.17|Next1.23).
- 01:40:160 (3) - As above (Prev1.23|Next1.18).
- 01:55:886 (5) - Minor: Very slightly off blanket [01:55:766].
It's probably worth noting that Easy and Normal don't have any breaks for a 2:20 song. Might be fine though.
Hard- 00:07:258 (4,1) - Not sure about this jump. I read this as 1 having a later timing since you used a NC (like you did at 00:03:145 (4,1)), but you actually started it on the red tick. This may be a little easier to read if you reduced the jump or even removed it. Might be fine though.
- 00:17:419 (1,2) - I'd aim to have these be the same shape and blanket around 00:18:387 (3) so that it looks a little nicer.
- 00:57:096 (3,1,2) - This is a fairly unusual flow since you're asking the player to constantly go back and forth, which isn't very intuitive to play when you use a mix of sliders and reverse sliders. I tried to throw a random example of what I'd do, but you can do whatever.
- 01:33:387 (3) - Uneven spacing through this (Prev1.08|Next1.22).
- 01:54:677 (2) - Minor: The blanket is a bit off [01:54:556].
- 01:59:032 (3,1) - Not a huge fan of the flow here. The curve of the slider points towards the bottom left corner, but you're asking the player to go straight down and up again on the slider, which isn't the best in my opinion.
Insane- 01:05:564 (6) - Not too sure about having
5-6 be a jump, and then returning to normal spacing in the new combo, since I'd say there's a stronger beat on 01:05:806 than 01:05:564.
- 02:07:016 (4) - Minor: The blanket is slightly off on the tail of this slider [02:06:471].
Apologies for the nazi-ish mod. Good luck