AsakuraNe
Thanks.AsakuraNe wrote:
Heloo~ :3 M4M from your queue~
These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it. Feel free to do soGENERAL
- Add to tags: Season 2 4th(because it's the 4th ending) No, that's unnecessary.
- xD lol it's hard to find the right romanization for the title~
EASY
- 00:09:514 - Change pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hSSjH/25d694dd58.jpg because this pattern emphasizes the beat on the middle more. No, it doesn't really.
- 00:13:317 - Better if this wasn't a reverse slider so to click the finish at the end :3 Make a 1/2 slider and a circle instead I don't think so. The note at the end is weaker than the downbeat on the reverse. Better to have fewer clicks too, as it's winding down here.
- 00:49:232 - Fix blanket by moving middlepoint to x:144 y:208 and endpoint at x:216 y:252 No. That makes the blanket worse.
INSANE(First time modding an insane. Sorry if it's not good~ )
- I used 1/8 beat snap divisor and 50% playrate in modding this~ I recommend using normal speed when modding.
- 00:01:697 - Make the spacing of 3 and 4 the same with the spacing of 1 and 2 No.
- 00:01:380(2,3) - When I looked at the timeline, 2 and 3 have a different beat snap divisor. I don't if it's intenional but I think it would be better if they were the same It's intentional. It matches the rhythm in the music.
- 00:08:458 - It's already in the purple tick(I looked it in 1/12 beat snap). Make sure that it's in the red tick and blue tick. No.
- 00:14:373 - ^^ No.
- 00:14:585 - Move this to x:328 y:128 for a perfect triangle No.
- 00:15:641 - Same as above(1/6 reverse) If this intentional, Nevermind. :3
- 00:20:077(5) - Too much spacing. You used 1.7x spacing on 3 and 4 then use it also on 5 Jump to (5) is for emphasis of accented note.
- 00:20:922 - Make the spacing of 2 and 3 the same with 1 and 2, there's no beat/vocals that make them special for a short jump It just looks better in the current placement.
- 00:21:134 - Well, i guess you could make a jump from this 3 to 4 then to 5. Just make the spacing consistent No.
- 00:22:824 - This bothers me xD I can't think of anything that would make it the same with all the reverses you used up, Even if it's right with the red tick and white tick usage. Well, just telling Yeah, I can't really do anything about that, since it's for rhythmic accuracy.
- 00:24:725 - How about this pattern instead? http://puu.sh/hTOE4/aa82b083f7.jpg To make the 3 circles have the same spacing and also making a diamond shape. Move 3 to x:168 y:60, Move 4 to x:196 y:224 or just stack with 6 and Move 5 to x:356 y:248 No, the angle is too wide. It doesn't get the "popping" feeling of the vocal in the music.
- 00:28:317 - Example of the right reverse ...
- 00:31:063 - Move this to x:128 y:164 to make a perfect rectangle pattern No.
- 00:32:965 - End this in the blue tick instead. :3 Follows the sound more~ http://puu.sh/hTOTE/9027d5e638.jpg No, it doesn't. That skips the drum beat.
- 00:38:246 - Stack 3 to 00:36:134(4) Not really a visible stack, but ok. Stacked.
- 00:39:303 - ^^ Same a the ones above
- 00:39:725 - ^^
- 00:43:951 - ^^
- 00:47:331 - ^^
- 00:48:282 - Remove circle~ Follows the vocals more The circle follows vocals. It's on the "shi" syllable.
- 01:02:120 - I feel like 4 and 5 doesn't have the same spacing as 3 and 4. (I actually used my hand to measure through the screen xD) It's close enough http://puu.sh/hXy74/5f36711c9a.jpg
- 01:26:944 - Looks better if this is curved like this: http://puu.sh/hTQ4g/7b4efab4d3.jpg Doesn't fit the feel of the song.
-Okay~ That's all Still CHITOGE IS THE BEST GIRL No.
Good Luck for Ranking I'll have a ticket as promised~