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Yumeno Himiko
oh wat 62 stars from vhy OAO
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GAMI

examination wrote:

oh wat 62 stars from vhy OAO
yes Examoenation *A*
Spectator

General

  1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
  2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
  3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
  4. Timeline Issues : ☑
  5. Combo Colors : ☑
  6. Unused hitsounds : ☑
  7. Hitsounds Issues : ☑
  8. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑


Metadata


According to official website and official nicovideo,
The artist name should be 星空 凛 (CV.飯田里穂) & 西木野真姫 (CV.Pile) which would be romanized as Hoshizora Rin (CV.Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile).
  1. Official YouTube Lantis channel : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nvpXPyTtjE (0:53~1:40)
  2. Official NND vid uploaded by Lantis : http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/1409214443



when I was writing mod, the metadata was obviously wrong lol
anyway... I just hope this would be helpful at least





Salad

  1. 00:02:470 - Inherited point here MUST be removed to avoid unranking. Just make redline having 40% instead of having another inherited one, otherwise it is unrankbale
  2. 01:05:670 (1) - I'd move this to about x:22 for a better movement & flow
  3. 01:06:470 (2) - If you agree with above suggestion, please move this to a bit right
  4. 01:34:470 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are quite unexpected imo(which means they are quite tough for the salad). How about reducing a distance slightly?
  5. 01:34:670 - In addition, there's no beat i can hear actually. It'd be better off if you change this part into 1/2
  6. 01:47:670 (1,1) - Personally I don't understand these sliders. Rather than having them I'd remove them and try this actually(also don't forget to remove greenlines if you're gonna apply my suggestion)
  7. 02:28:870 (5) - Could you please remove this note? I feel like it literally is unnecessary.



Platter

  1. 00:02:470 - Already mentioned in the mod for salad. Please remove the green line here and adjust the volume to 40% as well
  2. 00:02:470 (1,2,3,4) - Using 1/4 sliders in platter isn't recommended as well. Try using 1/2 for it
  3. 00:13:470 (2) - This can be moved to the left slightly(about x:293) to make the movement better
  4. 00:14:270 (4) - The flow here can be improved. Try this
  5. 00:18:870 (1,2) - Blind jumps are not recommended to use in every ctb diffs. Please consider reducing the distance slightly between 1 and 2
  6. 01:48:070 (1) - This slider should be vertical to avoid the 1/4 jump between 1 and 2. Make it vertical and move to the right slightly
  7. 01:54:870 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, this part should be mapped with 1/2 slider instead of these 1/4 notes. Try this instead
  8. 02:11:270 (3) - I'd move this to x:320 for a better flow
  9. 02:25:270 (2,3,4,5) - This jumps are just too hard for the platter. At least you should consider reducing the distances
  10. 02:28:570 (2,3,4) - In platter, it's still better to not have jump between 1/4 notes even the distance is small. I'd like to get rid of jump actually.
  11. 02:29:070 (1) - Add whistle on spinner's end just like you did on salad




Rain

  1. 00:02:470 - Duplicated timing points are unrankable. Please remove two of inherited points.
  2. 00:27:470 (4,5) - The jump between 4 and 5 is quite unexpected. Please reduce the distance between them
  3. 00:52:070 (1) - I'd ctrl+H this and move it to x:176. Current one makes the movement pretty unnatural
  4. 00:57:470 (1,2) - The jump here is pretty hard as there's the HDash right before this jump. Please move 2 to a bit right
  5. 00:59:670 (2) - How about ctrl+g this and move it to x:212? It seems better imo
  6. 01:08:470 (7,8) - Actually the jump here is quite forced. Try this instead?(ctrl+g and moved to 256)
  7. 01:12:070 (3) - Move this to x:256 to make streams seem better.
  8. 01:12:470 (4) - After applying above suggestion. Please move this to x:360 to make the flow better
  9. 01:17:270 (2) - Could you move this to a bit right to avoid the edge-to-edge jump?
  10. 01:17:670 (3,4,5) - It's your choice, but I'd make this part like this picture for the sake of flow
  11. 01:19:670 (4) - Please add HDash between 4 and 1 by moving this to the right slightly. It makes the movement way smoother
  12. 01:20:470 (3,4) - Consider reducing the distance. Since it's kinda easy to make a miss here
  13. 01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd make this easier since it's quite unexpected and someone would be irritated by this. Plus, there should be a NC on 7 to avoid fruits piled up too much
  14. 01:24:470 (1) - Remove finish
  15. 01:37:670 (1,2) - I'd ctrl+g this to a better flow and movement. As these notes come right after the kind of rough 1/4 jumps, it's movement should be arranged
  16. 01:37:670 (1,2,3) - Try this if you agree with above suggestion
  17. 01:46:470 (7,8) - It's pretty easy to make a miss here. I'd add new hdash between 7 and 8
  18. 01:48:070 (1) - Ctrl+G
  19. 02:01:670 (1) - How about moving this to x:384? It will make this part plays better
  20. 02:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -. Also don't forget to add NC on 02:13:170 -
  21. 02:24:070 (1,2) - Try this instead? or at least reduce the distance please
  22. 02:24:870 (3,4) - Same as above, try this. You just need to ctrl+h 4
  23. 02:27:970 (6) - I'd move this to x:484 to emphasize the tail part of the song
  24. 02:28:170 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - If you agree with above, I'd ctrl+h this and just move it to about x:328. Please take this into consideration
  25. 02:29:070 (1) - It's same as platter. Please add whistle on spinner's end as you did on salad



Crystal's Angel

  1. 02:29:170 (1) - Spinner here should be finished at 02:34:570 - like the lower diffs. Also whistle would sound pretty nice so consider having a whistle at the spinner's end
No Kudosu

Call me back when it's ready
Krah
Just dropping some words because for me it's not really ready.

To begin I don't think red combo is a good idea specially your combo4 who is the same as the hdash glow.

[Spread Issue]

The thing who bother me here is your spread from platter to rain.
While your platter only have a few number of hdash and easy one, your rain is full of it (even 1/4 and double 1/4).
If you have any doubt you can just compare the begining of the map (till the 1st spinner 00:16:470 (1) - )
Your platter is basically a really easy one when your rain is a hard one.

It's not that worse and it can be easily solved by boosting a bit the platter. Rain can +/- stay even if currently it could be considered as an overdose for this song.


[CLSW's diff]

Ok here we go ...
This diff seems really really overdone for this kind of song because yes a map is supposed to be for a song.
A lot of the diff is mapped as a 300bpm song with a special mention to the 1/8 triplet who doesn't make any sense and who seems random.
Some specific examples :
  1. 00:02:470 - 00:16:070 - All this part is basically 1/4 spam (with the famous 1/8 triplets) you don't follow the song when you map it. You basically try to create something else, Spec said it was "additional rythm" but I prefer to call it as it's supposed to be , overmapping.
  2. 00:59:270 - 01:12:070 - ^
  3. 01:12:070 - 01:18:270 - Repetitive, doesn't make any sense with the song. It's basically a 1/4 slider spam where you just need to hit the dash button and left/right (during 6seconds).
    To justify it like that is the proof that you don't have any reason for this kind of stuff (and btw it's some kind of lack of respect to modders)

    CLSW wrote:

    this is not overmapped and pure love.
    And seriously don't give me the same answer as vhy. You are supposed to map the song not the video.
  4. 02:01:670 - 02:08:070 - ^ Again the same repetitive and totally not fitting thing
  5. 02:08:070 - end - Same as previously, 1/4 spam & 1/8 triplets

tl;dr: The diff absolutely doesn't fit to the song. Rank harder maps why not but with the songs who fit please.

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My pm box is always open if you have any question
feel free to kd it or not
CLSW
Had a discussion with Krah and I decided to remove some 1/8s.

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Artist:Hoshizora Rin (CV : Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV:Pile)
ArtistUnicode:星空凛(CV.飯田里穂) & 西木野真姫(CV.Pile)
Creator:GAMI
Version:Crystal's Angel
Source:Love Live! School idol project
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192,320,36270,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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64,176,43070,5,4,0:2:0:0:
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512,112,44470,2,0,P|470:194|384:226,1,189,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,216,45470,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,192,45570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,135,45670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,45870,2,0,L|128:48,1,126,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,46270,2,0,L|448:176,1,126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,208,47470,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,146,47570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,85,47670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,64,47870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,160,48470,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,48670,2,0,P|160:240|336:288,1,252,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,49270,2,0,L|112:352,1,63,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,49470,2,0,L|320:352,1,63
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208,224,50070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,240,50670,2,0,L|208:365,1,126,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,352,51070,6,0,P|400:304|480:208,1,252,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,51670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,144,51870,2,0,L|320:144,1,126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,52270,2,0,L|318:144,1,126,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,52670,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,272,52870,6,0,P|400:224|320:128,1,252,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,53470,2,0,L|256:176,1,126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,112,54670,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,160,54870,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,160,55070,2,0,L|368:288,1,126,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,288,55470,2,0,L|33:165,1,126,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,224,56270,1,14,0:0:0:0:
336,224,56470,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,176,56670,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,176,56870,6,0,L|368:240,1,63,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,57070,2,0,L|144:130,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,57270,2,0,L|384:288,1,63,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,57470,2,0,L|128:226,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,57670,6,0,P|448:256|464:176,1,126,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,57970,6,0,L|320:160,1,126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,58270,6,0,P|96:268|68:255,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,58470,6,0,P|272:224|160:192,1,189
384,224,58870,2,0,P|352:160|240:128,1,189
480,96,59270,6,0,L|464:160,1,63,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,59470,2,0,L|304:160,1,63
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384,304,59970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,60070,6,0,L|368:304,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,60270,2,0,L|176:240,1,63
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240,208,60670,2,0,P|176:176|224:144,1,126,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,60970,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,61070,2,0,L|80:128,1,63
320,128,61270,2,0,P|384:160|400:224,1,126,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,61570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,61670,6,0,L|256:176,1,63,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,61870,2,0,L|320:112,1,63
112,176,62070,2,0,L|176:176,1,63,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,208,62570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,62670,2,0,L|480:272,1,63
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320,272,63370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,63470,2,0,L|432:336,1,63
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336,352,63870,2,0,L|400:352,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,352,64070,6,0,L|80:352,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,208,64670,2,0,L|144:128,1,63
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376,176,64920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,98,65370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,272,66370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,66470,6,0,L|320:272,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,176,67470,2,0,L|271:237,1,63
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336,336,67970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,128,69370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,218,71970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,99,72070,6,0,L|530:110,1,63,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,72270,2,0,L|253:207,1,63
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226,219,72670,2,0,L|206:288,1,63
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169,266,73470,2,0,L|135:325,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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103,230,74670,2,0,L|39:267,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,74870,2,0,L|259:377,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,372,75270,6,0,L|235:310,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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24,214,75870,2,0,L|84:194,1,63
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48,261,76270,2,0,L|103:230,1,63
332,296,76470,2,0,L|321:236,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,290,76670,2,0,L|123:249,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,267,76870,6,0,L|350:208,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,77070,2,0,L|145:280,1,63
410,235,77270,2,0,L|379:181,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,352,77470,2,0,L|160:299,1,63
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160,360,77870,2,0,L|184:302,1,63,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,165,78070,2,0,L|438:126,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,78270,2,0,L|209:292,1,63,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,120,78470,6,0,L|512:120,1,63,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,78670,2,0,L|272:128,1,63
352,112,78870,2,0,L|368:176,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,79070,2,0,L|128:112,1,63
320,160,79270,6,0,L|384:208,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,79470,2,0,L|144:224,1,63
224,224,79670,2,0,L|240:288,1,63,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,79870,2,0,L|0:272,1,63
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192,208,80270,2,0,L|176:144,1,63
384,208,80470,2,0,L|448:208,1,63,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,80670,2,0,L|160:160,1,63
384,192,80870,6,0,P|448:240|384:288,1,126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,81170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,81270,2,0,P|64:240|128:288,1,126,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,81570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,81670,6,0,L|416:176,1,126,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,82270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,82670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,208,83070,6,0,P|80:128|192:96,1,189,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,83470,6,0,L|384:128,10,31.5
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144,224,84470,6,0,P|48:256|16:352,1,189
256,336,84870,5,12,0:0:0:0:
320,80,89670,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,119,89770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,89870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,238,89970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,292,90070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,327,90170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,90270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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65,160,140570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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289,48,143770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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112,128,144270,2,0,L|192:128,1,63,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,144470,2,0,L|64:224,1,63,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,144670,2,0,L|288:224,1,63,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,144870,5,4,0:0:0:0:
33,277,144970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,256,145070,2,0,L|352:256,1,63,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,145270,2,0,L|176:288,1,63,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,145470,2,0,L|496:288,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,327,145670,5,6,0:0:0:0:
287,312,145770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,208,145870,2,0,L|280:208,1,63,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,146070,1,12,0:0:0:0:
385,114,146170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,146270,2,0,L|112:96,1,63,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,146470,5,4,0:0:0:0:
353,146,146570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,144,146670,2,0,L|96:208,1,63,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,146870,1,6,0:0:0:0:
431,191,146920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,190,146970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,147070,2,0,L|32:192,1,63,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,147270,5,2,0:0:0:0:
471,144,147370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,206,147470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,263,147570,1,4,0:0:0:0:
346,310,147770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,320,147970,1,6,0:0:0:0:
135,272,148170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
143,209,148270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,153,148370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,108,148470,1,4,0:0:0:0:
270,80,148570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,70,148670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,82,148770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,149070,5,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,149170,12,2,154070,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
GAMI

Spectator wrote:

General

  1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
  2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
  3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
  4. Timeline Issues : ☑
  5. Combo Colors : ☑
  6. Unused hitsounds : ☑
  7. Hitsounds Issues : ☑
  8. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑


Metadata


According to official website and official nicovideo,
The artist name should be 星空 凛 (CV.飯田里穂) & 西木野真姫 (CV.Pile) which would be romanized as Hoshizora Rin (CV.Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile) fix this , thanks for it .
  1. Official YouTube Lantis channel : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nvpXPyTtjE (0:53~1:40)
  2. Official NND vid uploaded by Lantis : http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/1409214443



when I was writing mod, the metadata was obviously wrong lol
anyway... I just hope this would be helpful at least





Salad

  1. 00:02:470 - Inherited point here MUST be removed to avoid unranking. Just make redline having 40% instead of having another inherited one, otherwise it is unrankbale fix
  2. 01:05:670 (1) - I'd move this to about x:22 for a better movement & flow ok
  3. 01:06:470 (2) - If you agree with above suggestion, please move this to a bit right ^
  4. 01:34:470 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are quite unexpected imo(which means they are quite tough for the salad). How about reducing a distance slightly? ok
  5. 01:34:670 - In addition, there's no beat i can hear actually. It'd be better off if you change this part into 1/2 ok
  6. 01:47:670 (1,1) - Personally I don't understand these sliders. Rather than having them I'd remove them and try this actually(also don't forget to remove greenlines if you're gonna apply my suggestion) re-edit at this part
  7. 02:28:870 (5) - Could you please remove this note? I feel like it literally is unnecessary. mkay



Platter

  1. 00:02:470 - Already mentioned in the mod for salad. Please remove the green line here and adjust the volume to 40% as well yeah
  2. 00:02:470 (1,2,3,4) - Using 1/4 sliders in platter isn't recommended as well. Try using 1/2 for it ok
  3. 00:13:470 (2) - This can be moved to the left slightly(about x:293) to make the movement better ok
  4. 00:14:270 (4) - The flow here can be improved. Try this ok
  5. 00:18:870 (1,2) - Blind jumps are not recommended to use in every ctb diffs. Please consider reducing the distance slightly between 1 and 2 ok
  6. 01:48:070 (1) - This slider should be vertical to avoid the 1/4 jump between 1 and 2. Make it vertical and move to the right slightly sorry , I re-edit at this part
  7. 01:54:870 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, this part should be mapped with 1/2 slider instead of these 1/4 notes. Try this instead ok
  8. 02:11:270 (3) - I'd move this to x:320 for a better flow ok
  9. 02:25:270 (2,3,4,5) - This jumps are just too hard for the platter. At least you should consider reducing the distances ok
  10. 02:28:570 (2,3,4) - In platter, it's still better to not have jump between 1/4 notes even the distance is small. I'd like to get rid of jump actually. ok
  11. 02:29:070 (1) - Add whistle on spinner's end just like you did on salad ok




Rain

  1. 00:02:470 - Duplicated timing points are unrankable. Please remove two of inherited points. LOL rip
  2. 00:27:470 (4,5) - The jump between 4 and 5 is quite unexpected. Please reduce the distance between them okay
  3. 00:52:070 (1) - I'd ctrl+H this and move it to x:176. Current one makes the movement pretty unnatural ok
  4. 00:57:470 (1,2) - The jump here is pretty hard as there's the HDash right before this jump. Please move 2 to a bit right ok
  5. 00:59:670 (2) - How about ctrl+g this and move it to x:212? It seems better imo move a bit to x:208
  6. 01:08:470 (7,8) - Actually the jump here is quite forced. Try this instead?(ctrl+g and moved to 256) ok
  7. 01:12:070 (3) - Move this to x:256 to make streams seem better. ok
  8. 01:12:470 (4) - After applying above suggestion. Please move this to x:360 to make the flow better ok
  9. 01:17:270 (2) - Could you move this to a bit right to avoid the edge-to-edge jump ? ok
  10. 01:17:670 (3,4,5) - It's your choice, but I'd make this part like this picture for the sake of flow ok
  11. 01:19:670 (4) - Please add HDash between 4 and 1 by moving this to the right slightly. It makes the movement way smoother ok
  12. 01:20:470 (3,4) - Consider reducing the distance. Since it's kinda easy to make a miss here ok
  13. 01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd make this easier since it's quite unexpected and someone would be irritated by this. Plus, there should be a NC on 7 to avoid fruits piled up too much ok, re-edit at this part , idk it will be good or not
  14. 01:24:470 (1) - Remove finish ok
  15. 01:37:670 (1,2) - I'd ctrl+g this to a better flow and movement. As these notes come right after the kind of rough 1/4 jumps, it's movement should be arranged ok!
  16. 01:37:670 (1,2,3) - Try this if you agree with above suggestion ^
  17. 01:46:470 (7,8) - It's pretty easy to make a miss here. I'd add new hdash between 7 and 8 ok
  18. 01:48:070 (1) - Ctrl+G ok
  19. 02:01:670 (1) - How about moving this to x:384? It will make this part plays better ok
  20. 02:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -. Also don't forget to add NC on 02:13:170 - yep
  21. 02:24:070 (1,2) - Try this instead? or at least reduce the distance please re-edit at this part, hope it's good
  22. 02:24:870 (3,4) - Same as above, try this. You just need to ctrl+h 4 ^
  23. 02:27:970 (6) - I'd move this to x:484 to emphasize the tail part of the song ok
  24. 02:28:170 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - If you agree with above, I'd ctrl+h this and just move it to about x:328. Please take this into consideration re-edit at this part , I hope it's good
  25. 02:29:070 (1) - It's same as platter. Please add whistle on spinner's end as you did on salad ok



Crystal's Angel

  1. 02:29:170 (1) - Spinner here should be finished at 02:34:570 - like the lower diffs. Also whistle would sound pretty nice so consider having a whistle at the spinner's end
No Kudosu

Call me back when it's ready

Krah wrote:

Just dropping some words because for me it's not really ready.

To begin I don't think red combo is a good idea specially your combo4 who is the same as the hdash glow.

[Spread Issue]

The thing who bother me here is your spread from platter to rain.
While your platter only have a few number of hdash and easy one, your rain is full of it (even 1/4 and double 1/4).
If you have any doubt you can just compare the begining of the map (till the 1st spinner 00:16:470 (1) - )
Your platter is basically a really easy one when your rain is a hard one.

It's not that worse and it can be easily solved by boosting a bit the platter. Rain can +/- stay even if currently it could be considered as an overdose for this song. i'm making reduce the rain star to 3,34 for balance with salad & platter too , I hope it's good


[CLSW's diff]

Ok here we go ...
This diff seems really really overdone for this kind of song because yes a map is supposed to be for a song.
A lot of the diff is mapped as a 300bpm song with a special mention to the 1/8 triplet who doesn't make any sense and who seems random.
Some specific examples :
  1. 00:02:470 - 00:16:070 - All this part is basically 1/4 spam (with the famous 1/8 triplets) you don't follow the song when you map it. You basically try to create something else, Spec said it was "additional rythm" but I prefer to call it as it's supposed to be , overmapping.
  2. 00:59:270 - 01:12:070 - ^
  3. 01:12:070 - 01:18:270 - Repetitive, doesn't make any sense with the song. It's basically a 1/4 slider spam where you just need to hit the dash button and left/right (during 6seconds).
    To justify it like that is the proof that you don't have any reason for this kind of stuff (and btw it's some kind of lack of respect to modders)

    CLSW wrote:

    this is not overmapped and pure love.
    And seriously don't give me the same answer as vhy. You are supposed to map the song not the video.
  4. 02:01:670 - 02:08:070 - ^ Again the same repetitive and totally not fitting thing
  5. 02:08:070 - end - Same as previously, 1/4 spam & 1/8 triplets

tl;dr: The diff absolutely doesn't fit to the song. Rank harder maps why not but with the songs who fit please.

[]


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updated all of it ! thank you !
Deif
Okay, the map cannot be touched until the end of the Semifinals of the CWC, but I'd like to take a look at it when it's over.

Krah wrote:

This diff seems really really overdone for this kind of song because yes a map is supposed to be for a song.
I wholeheartedly agree with this statement. I'm afraid some limits are being touched letting this beatmap get ranked, so I'll mod it when the time comes.
Topic Starter
GAMI

Deif wrote:

Okay, the map cannot be touched until the end of the Semifinals of the CWC, but I'd like to take a look at it when it's over.

Krah wrote:

This diff seems really really overdone for this kind of song because yes a map is supposed to be for a song.
I wholeheartedly agree with this statement. I'm afraid some limits are being touched letting this beatmap get ranked, so I'll mod it when the time comes.
okok ! really thanks for it and I will wait for it
iiyo
^^ I love this map
Topic Starter
GAMI

Storm- wrote:

^^ I love this map
thanks ~ ♥

also updated about CLSW overdose difficult
koliron
*o*
Bunnrei
rank when

; w;)
Spectator
is this going to be rip? :(
Topic Starter
GAMI

Spectator wrote:

is this going to be rip? :(
no LOL , I just want this map get rest for while (:
PatZar
tai alibi ccd
Vhy
when?
koliron

Eclipst wrote:

when?
^
Topic Starter
GAMI
be patient please..
koliron
uggghhhhh

7 whyyy ; A ; )
Topic Starter
GAMI
revived
ZiRoX
Offset should be 3270.
Topic Starter
GAMI

ZiRoX wrote:

Offset should be 3270.
eh really ? I though the offset was right..
but sorry , I still can't change it since i'm not sure of it
ZiRoX

GAMI wrote:

ZiRoX wrote:

Offset should be 3270.
eh really ? I though the offset was right..
but sorry , I still can't change it since i'm not sure of it
It doesn't change the timing of the objects, but shifts the positions of the large white ticks. You can notice that, with this change, verse changes like 00:32:070 - , 00:44:870 - , or even the start of the Kiai at 00:59:270 - land on large white ticks, which is what's musically correct.
Xinely

ZiRoX wrote:

Offset should be 3270.
confirmed with me
Topic Starter
GAMI
I was do that on a long time ago but the pattern before the offset 3270 become like this and I don't know how to fix that since i'm super noob at it. that's why I still stand on offset 2470... ;w;
ZiRoX

GAMI wrote:

I was do that on a long time ago but the pattern before the offset 3270 become like this and I don't know how to fix that since i'm super noob at it. that's why I still stand on offset 2470... ;w;
1670 can do then.
Topic Starter
GAMI

ZiRoX wrote:

GAMI wrote:

I was do that on a long time ago but the pattern before the offset 3270 become like this and I don't know how to fix that since i'm super noob at it. that's why I still stand on offset 2470... ;w;
1670 can do then.
okay , updated
Rocma
GAMI's request

[Salad]

Cheer up!


[Platter]

00:14:270 (4) - Ctrl G.
00:30:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing
01:36:070 (1,2) - exchange the timing with 01:36:870 (1,2). If so, 01:37:670 (1) doesn't have hdash. make hdash

Far
00:07:670 (5) -
00:13:870 (3) -
00:21:270 (5) -
00:34:870 (3) -
01:10:870 (2) -
02:09:470 (1) -


[Rain]

00:04:070 (1,2,3) - Confusing pattern @_@ reduce the distance between 1 and 2
00:05:670 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about Ctrl G
00:47:070 (2,3) - Make hdash or reduce the distance between 2 and 3
01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing beat. I recommend ->
01:17:970 (4) - move to x224
01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - Considering flow with 01:22:670 (5) , Ctrl H is more better.
and why 01:23:970 (7,8) is vertical?
02:00:370 (2) - XD plz...move to the x288. this was too far
02:07:670 (6,7,1) - quite hard. 02:07:870 (7) - has to move to the left a little
02:13:570 (7,8) - same with 01:23:970 (7,8)
02:27:970 (6) - TOO far...


[Crystal's Angel]

00:16:870 (1,2,3,4) - 앞패턴보다 조금 좁게 만들어야 뒷패턴과도 어울리는것같아요
00:19:570 (2) - x288정도로 옮겨야 더 보기가 좋지 않을까요
00:57:670 (1,1,1) - 이패턴을 드림리스에서 본거같은데 이정도 패턴이라면 ar이 9.5정도는 돼야 리딩이 편하지 않을까요
01:11:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 받는데에는 무리는 없지만 그 노래파트에 비해 대쉬를 많이 끊게 하네요
01:24:470 (1) - 무빙하는데 있어서 이것도 좋지 않을까요
02:08:270 (2,3) - 이패턴이 주가 되는 패턴이라면 상관이 없는데 이게 다른패턴과 복합적인 패턴의재료로 사용되다보면 무빙하는게 꽤 꼬일수 있어요.
02:09:070 (2,3) - ^

개인적인 의견이지만 ar올리셔도 될듯?




gl :)
CLSW
Shaymin

No492_Shaymin wrote:

GAMI's request

[Crystal's Angel]

00:16:870 (1,2,3,4) - 앞패턴보다 조금 좁게 만들어야 뒷패턴과도 어울리는것같아요 00:16:070 (1,2) - 와 대칭구도이므로 놔두겠습니다.
00:19:570 (2) - x288정도로 옮겨야 더 보기가 좋지 않을까요 1의 슬라이더 끝부분과 거리가 너무 머네요. 이러면 대시키를 쓰게됨으로써 움직임이 불안정해집니다. 게다가 곡의 흐름상 쉽게 만들어야 하는데 말이에요.
00:57:670 (1,1,1) - 이패턴을 드림리스에서 본거같은데 이정도 패턴이라면 ar이 9.5정도는 돼야 리딩이 편하지 않을까요 수정 완료
01:11:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 받는데에는 무리는 없지만 그 노래파트에 비해 대쉬를 많이 끊게 하네요 01:11:270 (1,2,3,4) - 부분 걍 붙였습니다
01:24:470 (1) - 무빙하는데 있어서 이것도 좋지 않을까요 하이퍼대시는 좀 어색하네요.
02:08:270 (2,3) - 이패턴이 주가 되는 패턴이라면 상관이 없는데 이게 다른패턴과 복합적인 패턴의재료로 사용되다보면 무빙하는게 꽤 꼬일수 있어요.
02:09:070 (2,3) - ^ 이 부분은 리메이크.

개인적인 의견이지만 ar올리셔도 될듯?




gl :)
Thank you!
Topic Starter
GAMI

No492_Shaymin wrote:

GAMI's request

[Salad]

Cheer up!


[Platter]

00:14:270 (4) - Ctrl G.ok
00:30:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing re-edit at this part
01:36:070 (1,2) - exchange the timing with 01:36:870 (1,2). If so, 01:37:670 (1) doesn't have hdash. make hdash umm, not changed at this part , sorry

Far
00:07:670 (5) - make become HDash
00:13:870 (3) - not change
00:21:270 (5) - make become HDash
00:34:870 (3) - not change
01:10:870 (2) - ^
02:09:470 (1) - make it kinda closer


[Rain]

00:04:070 (1,2,3) - Confusing pattern @_@ reduce the distance between 1 and 2 ok
00:05:670 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about Ctrl G it will be weird for next pattern so sorry ;w;
00:47:070 (2,3) - Make hdash or reduce the distance between 2 and 3 ok
01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing beat. I recommend -> not changed on this part , sorry :<
01:17:970 (4) - move to x224 umm sorry
01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - Considering flow with 01:22:670 (5) , Ctrl H is more better. wow! thank you
and why 01:23:970 (7,8) is vertical? idk lol
02:00:370 (2) - XD plz...move to the x288. this was too far moved to 308
02:07:670 (6,7,1) - quite hard. 02:07:870 (7) - has to move to the left a little ok
02:13:570 (7,8) - same with 01:23:970 (7,8) ok
02:27:970 (6) - TOO far... not changed sorry

gl :)
updated , and "Crystal's Angel" difficult is removed due overmapped issues...
also , added SB from Kuey, thank you !
Sey
[General]
  1. Comparing the Ryuuta plate with your other skin elements it looks very diligent. Could you try to modify it as blurred as your other skin elements?
  2. Add an epilepsy warning concerning the rapidly changing storyboard and its colours.
  3. AiBat points out plenty of missing SB elements, which I think is a bug. I want you to double-check your story board (Just in case).
  4. Offset ~1671 or ~3271. Matter of preference.
  5. This mapset has a few spread issues. You proceed from almost no jumps in your Salad to plenty of HDashes in your Platter. The difference is intense. In order to solve this, you'll have to work on the spread in general. I will focus on that in any further modding steps.
[Salad]
  1. In order to provide a better spread between your Salad and Platter I will point out notes where you can/should add more space between notes.
    Gap rearrangement suggestions
    1. 00:03:270 (2) - x400
    2. Select 00:04:870 (1,2) - and then CTRL+G. After that move 00:05:270 (2) - to x448
    3. 00:09:270 (5,1) - Absolutely necessary! 00:09:670 (1) - CTRL+G
    4. 00:31:470 (3) - Try something like x224 to increase the distance between 00:31:470 (3,1) - .
    5. 00:36:870 (5) - CTRL+G and then move 00:36:870 (5) - to x256 and 00:37:470 (1) - to x368
    6. 00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm becomes louder from note to note, so please try something like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825828
    7. 00:58:870 (2,1) - Lol what is this? There is just a Kiai starting and not even a bit of a jump? Try the following: Step 1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825855
      Step 2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825858
    8. 01:05:470 (6,1) - Same as above, this part needs a dash.
    9. Noteworthy thing: Your first kiai could be harder in general. It can be done without a single Dash and that makes it easier than the previous section. Please go through this again.
    10. 01:14:870 (4,1) - Another perfect spot for another Dash.
    11. 01:17:870 (4,5,6,1) - Try the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825912
    12. 02:14:070 (5,6) - Implement a dash at this point, please.
  2. 00:14:470 (1,2) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825769, or this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825774
  3. 00:21:270 (5,6) - and 00:24:470 (3) - have the same rhythm, keep it consistent.
  4. 00:27:070 (3) - I appreciate to see a reverse arrow at 00:27:270 - because it is not the same rhythm as the 2 previous sliders.
  5. 00:38:070 (2) - CTRL+G for a bit of better flow. Feels weird.
  6. 00:50:270 (2) - Does not really go so well with the rhythm, suggestion:
  7. 01:10:470 (3) - Meh... Make it at least a bit more interesting by adding a reverse arrow at 01:11:070 - or something.
  8. 01:21:670 (1) - Were you just lazy on this point? I think the spinner does not go well with this music, so please consider mapping it normally as you did in the other difficulties.
  9. Add some note at 01:44:270 - to better follow the music
  10. 01:45:470 (1) - This slider also could be more consistent with the previous section at 01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - , please do not use single notes once and then a slider with 2 reverse arrows, it is awkward.
  11. 01:52:470 (3) - Triplet could be nice: There should also be a slight jump between 01:52:670 (4,5) - then.
  12. 02:11:270 (1) - I have some tricky pattern for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825986
  13. 02:28:070 (3) - x338 02:28:470 (4) - x174
[Platter]
  1. One thing straight up: The 1.6 SV in this difficulty is really bad. Let me show you an example: 00:20:670 (4,5) - The HDash feels terrible due to the Slider Velocity, you already need to dash while catching the droplets of slider 00:20:670 (4) - .With that the resulting HDash feels forced and for many it will lead to frustration. I will point out more sections in my mod, but you will have to consider if you really want to stick with this SV.
  2. 00:02:470 (1,2,3,4) - This movement is too rough for just the beginning of a song, decrease the note gaps a little, please. Some tiny 1/4 sliders with a proper hitsounding can be nice, too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826017
  3. 00:11:270 (1,2,3) - The movement of these HDashes feels kinda forced in comparison to the spot before with the same rhythm. A little consistency cannot hurt, or at least not directly 2 big HDashes at this part of the song already.
  4. 00:19:670 (3,4,5) - , 00:22:870 (2,3,4) - ,... and so on. Go through your map again, fully horizontal sliders do not work on this SV, as I stated above already. The movement is rough and feels unpleasant. I will not point out all of these sliders in my mod again, it is your job to go through your map again and make more use of diagonal and lopsided sliders!
  5. Select 00:27:270 (1,2,3,4) - and CTRL+H for more movement at 00:26:470 (2,1) - .
  6. Please mind consistency between 00:39:470 (2,3,4) - and 00:37:470 (2,3,4) - .
  7. 00:41:070 -, 00:40:470 - Reverse arrows
  8. 00:56:270 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Feels bland for a Platter, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826096
  9. 00:58:470 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826108
  10. 01:05:470 - Add note at this point and create a HDash from this note to 01:05:670 (3) - .
  11. 01:24:670 - Another note here maybe and another HDash to 01:24:870 (3) -
  12. 01:30:870 (1,1) - ...? I mean why is there no jump at all? Just listen to the music.. And 01:31:270 (1,2,3,4) - is boring, too. At least increase distance a bit. The music really shouts for it.
  13. 01:34:470 (1) - What is this doing in a Platter, there is so much music going on and you make a 3/1 slider? Let me show you what works out fine instead:
  14. Add notes at 01:39:070 - , 01:39:870 - . This density too low for a Platter.
  15. 01:42:470 (5) - Nope, skips too many important beats again, try:
  16. 01:47:570 (4,1) - , 01:47:970 (4,1) - Keep the 1/4 Hypers for your Rain. Also: 01:48:470 (5) - No just no, especially not after this combo, NOT in a Platter. Make the movement softer.
  17. 02:11:270 (3,4) - Make them maybe a small HDash for a bit more challenge at the end of the song? Makes a good final.
  18. 02:12:670 (1) - For a Platter very easy, map the notes: http://puu.sh/kNuaM/80d2aa450d.jpg or http://puu.sh/kNudD/c9f8b1f96e.jpg
[Rain]
  1. 00:22:870 (1) - Feels very weird to play, try another shape: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826247. Also, move the slider a little more to the right to make the previous jump a little less painful.
  2. 00:27:070 (1,2,3,4) - These shouldn't all be fully straight or it doesn't go well with the flow, another suggestion: Step 1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826265 Step 2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826270
  3. 00:39:470 (7) - CTRL+G for a better flow.
  4. 00:49:270 (6,7,1) - The jumpy pattern feels a bit surprising because the vocals don't give too much action at this point. Please move (7) slightly to the right.
  5. 01:02:270 (2) - CTRL+G, then move it 2-3 grids to the right for a better flow again.
  6. 01:17:670 (3,4,5) - Feels so weird, please try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826301
  7. 01:31:270 (1,2) - Can you explain me this jump, and why it must be that extreme? I see the point of the loud guitar sounds, but this is too exaggerating and I did not feel prepared for it just after the break. Nerf this a little, please.
  8. 01:55:270 (3,1) - Please no, after this Hyper you will drift to the left and you need to be super fast to reach (1) in time. You could CTRL+G 01:55:670 (1) - and then move it a bit more to the left to make this whole jump more approachable.
  9. 02:06:869 (3) - x112
The Rain seems good, Salad and Platter still need work. You should gather a few more modders before moving this any further.
Good luck!
koliron
wut
Kuey

Sey wrote:

[*]Add an epilepsy warning concerning the rapidly changing storyboard and its colours.
[*]AiBat points out plenty of missing SB elements, which I think is a bug. I want you to double-check your story board (Just in case).
Checked with Sey on the bug, so no problems with SB

GAMI can u delete the Effect folder in the SB folder (the Effect folder should have a white dot in it) i did not use a white dot anywhere so yea
and.. input epilepsy warning :D ~thankss
BoberOfDarkness

GAMI wrote:

"Crystal's Angel" difficult is removed due overmapped issues...
wut
CLSW
Just it was my own decision. I felt tired with 'fix or riot' stuffs.
autofanboy
Break down! rip Crystal's Angel

[ General]

  • Tags
  1. Add '畑亜貴' and 'Hata Aki' as she is the lyricist of the song.
  2. Add '倉内達矢' and 'Kurauchi Tatsuya' as he is the composer and arranger of the song.

    Design
  3. Enable Epilepsy Warnings throughout all your difficulties, there are plenty of flashes and strobes in the storyboard.

    Difficulty Spread
  4. Change the CS of Salad and Platter, CS 4 is really high for Salad and it is also a bit high for Platter.

[ Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. First 60 combo didn't even covered a dash so it is better to have some dashes. I suggest having dashes at 00:09:270 (5,1) and 00:19:270 (2,3)
  2. 00:58:270 (4,1) - I understand the reason to add a dash here but it is pretty hard to catch especially for the Salad beginners, since they may not be able to catch the ideal timing. I suggest lowering the distance here.
  3. 00:58:870 (2,1) - Why not having a dash here? Since (1) is the start of Kiai Time a.k.a the climax part.
  4. 01:42:870 (2,3) - It is not recommended to have straight sliders connected with dashes, it is really hard for Salad beginners to catch the head or the tail of the sliders, if they missed the ideal timing. I suggest curving the tail of (2) and (3) to the middle.
  5. 01:43:670 (4,5) - This jump is so surprising, also it is really easy to miss 01:43:970 (6,7) if the players cannot decelerate after dashing. I suggest changing the way of stream and maybe you can try something like *this.
  6. 02:14:070 (4,5) - A dash suits here in my opinion because (5) covers a strong sound and it can also emphasize the Finish.

    New Combos
    I found most of them are not in line, please double-check for all of them, it is better to go with same patterns.
  7. 00:03:270 (2) - NC
  8. 00:04:870 (1) - If you NC'ed the above, remove NC here.
  9. 00:06:470 (4) - NC
  10. 00:19:670 (3) - Better go with a NC here because the vocals start here.
  11. 00:27:670 (1) - Why not remove the NC and keep the combo? The vocal part is still ongoing here. If you decided to do so, add NC at 00:28:870 (4) and remove NC at 00:29:670 (1)
  12. 00:36:870 (5) - Pretty strange to not having a NC here but 00:37:470 (1) So please add NC here instead.
  13. 00:54:470 (3) - NC if you are going to NC every 4 white tick between 00:51:270 - 00:55:870 -
  14. 01:01:670 (1) - Why you cut the combo here but not 01:02:470 (3) that come up awkwardly in my opinion.
    The above are just the first half, please check the another half and ensure that the NC patterns are consistent.

    General Comments
  15. There are not enough dashes in my opinion, some of them can still be caught without dashing though I know you tried to add the dashes in the corresponding spaces. I suggest checking the map once and add dashes at the part where climax starts or at some important beats.

[ Platter]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:02:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jumps here are quite large and players can easily miss when they didn't dash at the right timing.
  2. 00:06:070 (2,3) - Large distance here! Please shorten it and remain the dash.
  3. 00:07:670 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:08:870 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:11:270 (1,2,3) - Nah, not so necessary to have double hyperdashes here. Remove them all.
  6. 00:18:870 - 00:32:070 - That's not so appropriate to have such big slider velocity in my opinion. Since the difficulty is just Platter, it is still too early to include the long sliders. Please slant most of the straight-horizontal sliders so that it is easier for catching.
  7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4) - Definitely not suggestible to have quadruple hyperdashes. Please remove them all.
  8. 00:34:270 (2,3,4) - Ouch, so easy to miss here. Lower the distance of (2,3) and increase the distance of (3,4).
  9. 01:10:270 (1,2) - Easy to miss head of (2) in case the players missed the ideal timing.
  10. 01:10:870 (2,3,4) - I know it is climax and a good point to have hyperdashes here, but this is Platter and I don't suggest having triple hyperdashes. Please remove them all for lowering the difficulty.
  11. 01:33:470 (4,1) - Easy to miss (1), please lower the distance while remaining the dash.
  12. 01:33:870 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:36:070 (1,2,1,2) - No, don't use so many hyperdashes, it is so spammy! Remove all of them except 01:36:470 (2,1)
  14. 01:37:270 (2,1) - Surprising dashing pattern here that players can easily miss the rest after (1), since (1) is straightly horizontal slider and pointing to the left, it is so easy to overshot and miss if the players hold the hyperdash. Therefore reworking here is wise.
  15. 01:45:070 (6,1) - Add a hyperdash? Since you add hyperdash at 01:44:070 (1,2)
  16. 01:46:270 (1,2) - If you did the previous one, you can add hyperdash here too.
  17. 01:47:270 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Nah, don't use hyperdashes here, it doesn't really suit in my opinion.
  18. 01:48:470 - 01:55:670 - Oh my god the slider velocity 2.00 sliders, definitely not appropriate for Platter and most of them requires dashing to catch. Please remap this part.
  19. 02:07:670 (6,7,1) - Easy to miss head of (1). Better move (7) a bit to the left and add hyperdash at (7,1).
  20. 02:08:070 (1,2,3) - Remove the hyperdashes here, they are not necessary in my opinion.
  21. 02:09:270 (5,1) - Easy to miss head of (1) here and adding a hyperdash suit perfectly so try it out.
  22. 02:12:670 (1,2,3) - Not suggested to have holding dash pattern here. It is far beyond Platter. Please just keep it easy.

    General Comments
  23. Dashes are quite demanded in this difficulty. It is recommended to cut off most of the unnecessary ones, or the ones that are quite high in distances.

[ Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:02:470 (1,2,1) - Easy to miss the heads of the streams, because the distances between them are quite large while they didn't cover with hyperdashes. Please lower the distances here or just change the pattern when needed.
  2. 00:12:870 (1,2,3) - Ouch, so difficult here. Try reducing the distances here.
  3. 00:28:270 (4,5,1) - So difficult here as well as players can easily miss (1) and the rest. I would say rotating (1) for 180 degree and put it back to the same spot would be better.
  4. 00:30:770 (2,3) - That's so surprising for me because the distance here is so large.
  5. 00:58:270 (4,5) - So easy to miss (5) as well in case the players overshot.
  6. 01:23:920 (6,7,8) - Don't bend the path here, it plays weirdly here in my opinion. Just keep it straight to the horizontal.
  7. I am sorry but I really need to stop here, there are quite a lot of problems in this Rain that I deem they have to be fixed before moving onto the next stage.

    General Comments
  8. Sorry there are way too many hyperdash-spams in this difficulty, please review the whole difficulty once and remove them.
  9. Apart from the spams, most of the streams are way too quick and easy-to-miss, that some of them requires dashing to fully catch every fruits.

Honestly, Salad is on the track but Platter and Rain definitely require some more mods and checks from various modders. Please find more modders to take a look at Platter and Rain.

Good luck!
Sey
@afb: It's not the many HDashes that feel bad in the Rain. Also you mentioned plenty of stuff that has been mentioned in my mod already. Lol please wait next time till my mod is applied at least. T_T
@GAMI: If anything you need to re-arrange a few patterns to provide a better flow in your Rain. Jussayin' but don't nerf the Rain down to death, please.
autofanboy

Sey wrote:

@afb: It's not the many HDashes that feel bad in the Rain. Also you mentioned plenty of stuff that has been mentioned in my mod already. Lol please wait next time till my mod is applied at least. T_T
@GAMI: If anything you need to re-arrange a few patterns to provide a better flow in your Rain. Jussayin' but don't nerf the Rain down to death, please.
Oh didn't noticed lolz
PatZar
tobat gw anjing ngeladur lagu loplive `-`
Topic Starter
GAMI
for AFB & Sey ... I will check it soon after I moved to another city , will re-edit this post though

PatZr wrote:

tobat gw anjing ngeladur lagu loplive `-`
hahaha,iraha gaduh anjeun ranked?
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