Hi~ M4M from userpage.
Really nice map, mostly nitpicking. I'm not sure if I'm going against your style so tell me if I did
Mod comes first.
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00:11:648 (5,1) - This blanket needs some quick revising. The end of slider doesn't blanket well.
00:12:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow kinda broken by the slider, perhaps moving it a little bit lower to make a smooth curving flow? Or you can keep it to make the beat feels stronger.
00:34:048 (4,5) - This is strange when compared to 00:35:648 (5,6) , which flows better. I think you can copy the latter and rotate it till it fits your needs. In the picture I rotated 00:34:048 (4,5) till it looks similar to the latter and place them next to each other, this is the difference.
00:47:648 (3,4) - I don't know what to say but it looks strange for me. Just like the above one.
01:32:448 (3,4,5,6,7) - Flow problem like i mentioned above.
02:03:648 (4) - In my opinion two stacked circles will play better here, both the end and the start are so convincing to tap.
02:06:948 (7) - This tilted a little too much imo. It should be like a horizontal flip of 02:06:448 (5) , dunno just my idea.
02:21:348 (8) - Why not straight slider? It can play pretty well as a mirror-like flip of 02:20:848 (6)
**a little rant about the really inconsistent ds during bridge okay ignore me**
Alright I can't stand this one 03:32:448 (1,2,3) - it's confusing like it's having the same ds as 03:33:648 (1,2,3) but heck they are really different in speed.
**runs through the off-beat part I suck in modding off-beat stuff**
04:15:248 (1,2,3) - I think they deserve a significant slider velocity burst though. You might understand me.
04:29:248 (5,6) - Because you let them have a loud sound so I think separating them from the slider and forcing a cursor movement will work better.
05:01:648 (1) - This is real nitpicking. Because of the vocal's high pitch i think a movement going upwards will be better.
05:20:848 (1) - Perhaps making an anti-jump towards the center of screen, suits the spinner and the music too (ending, moving the cursor downwards seems fitting for me).
That's what I can find, sorry if I didn't helped much :3
Btw modding an experienced mapper's/BN's map is so hardOkay my map below.
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My map:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311473