Ok, sorry for the delay <_<
[General]
Will need an easier diff.
[Normal]
00:16:838 - This combo could slide for a normal diff. I'd replace it with a slider, though.
00:35:261 (3) - Shorten to 00:36:061
00:52:663 (1) - Why is this a NC? Same goes for 00:58:928 (1), 01:05:059 (1) and 01:11:178 (1)
01:49:665 (2) - Considering the previous pattern, I was expecting a NC here.
Ahhh, I just got too confused at the end, patterns are not consistant within all the song, the switches between the lyrics and the music is too random >_<! Uhh, Why don't you just ignore the lyrics for the easiest diff and map the music. Right, there's almost no music >_<"
[Hard]
Why don't you use faster sliders?
00:23:166 (4) - Uhhh, are you sure about this being here?
01:02:123 - Random break is random, and it's not the only one <_< Maybe replace these breaks with long symmetrycal sliders
00:58:928 (1) - Same as normal, for all of these hitcircles.
02:09:838 - Omg I just died here. It's fitting to the, uuh, lyrics? but un-readeable D:
02:53:443 (1) - Why the NC?
Again, at the end I could not understand anything >_<
[Insane]
Uhhh...
...listen, the main problem with this song is that there's no place for creativity, so all the diffs look waaay to similar :S, and if a new pattern is created, it looks completely out of place >_<! I insist, this is a hard song for the first beatmap, and I suppose I can't stop you from mapping this, but belive me, I see a lot of mapping potential and it just cannot shine with this song. If you want to get a Katamari song ranked, why don't you try another one?
I'm sorry I didn't finish the mod post, please don't kudosu (as this is a follow up)
[General]
Will need an easier diff.
[Normal]
00:16:838 - This combo could slide for a normal diff. I'd replace it with a slider, though.
00:35:261 (3) - Shorten to 00:36:061
00:52:663 (1) - Why is this a NC? Same goes for 00:58:928 (1), 01:05:059 (1) and 01:11:178 (1)
01:49:665 (2) - Considering the previous pattern, I was expecting a NC here.
Ahhh, I just got too confused at the end, patterns are not consistant within all the song, the switches between the lyrics and the music is too random >_<! Uhh, Why don't you just ignore the lyrics for the easiest diff and map the music. Right, there's almost no music >_<"
[Hard]
Why don't you use faster sliders?
00:23:166 (4) - Uhhh, are you sure about this being here?
01:02:123 - Random break is random, and it's not the only one <_< Maybe replace these breaks with long symmetrycal sliders
00:58:928 (1) - Same as normal, for all of these hitcircles.
02:09:838 - Omg I just died here. It's fitting to the, uuh, lyrics? but un-readeable D:
02:53:443 (1) - Why the NC?
Again, at the end I could not understand anything >_<
[Insane]
Uhhh...
...listen, the main problem with this song is that there's no place for creativity, so all the diffs look waaay to similar :S, and if a new pattern is created, it looks completely out of place >_<! I insist, this is a hard song for the first beatmap, and I suppose I can't stop you from mapping this, but belive me, I see a lot of mapping potential and it just cannot shine with this song. If you want to get a Katamari song ranked, why don't you try another one?
I'm sorry I didn't finish the mod post, please don't kudosu (as this is a follow up)