Nivrad00 wrote:

hi again kami damn nigga, u gold
S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[8K Normal+]
00:03:566 - lol you inverted the pitch in the beginning ok ayy fixed
01:14:810 - make this a jack or something This has a bit diffrent vibe from those notes that I jacked, so I don't want to jack this one too (le variety mang)
01:19:034 - maybe add a note Sure
02:00:379 - awkward for left scratch x: meddled with patterns, much better now

[Rayz' 8K Hyper]
Updated

[8K Melodie de tristesse]
00:11:078 - come on kami spread those notes out a little lmao P O L Y R H Y T H M B O I Z Seriously tho, I'm keeping this because I'm being consistent on pitches within layers (00:11:078 (11078|4,11189|5,11300|6,11411|4,11516|5,11621|6) - thingy)
01:08:458 (68458|3) - looks like you forgot to resnap this one P: Nice catch!
01:08:361 - it's a bit strange that you started the 1/6 stream here when the piano starts at 01:07:123 - and the intense percussion starts at 01:08:583 - Yeah, but it feels too ahrd with full pano layer and chords, started piano earlier for now, might revamp this after more mods
01:25:562 - there's no crash here If you listen closely you'll hear it, it's not clear, but it's a doubled crash there
01:25:445 - I feel sorry for the french players b: =^)
01:46:934 - maybe add note Sure!
02:01:156 - jesus christ RIP french players = ^ )

for everyone:

00:58:652 - only Kaito's diffs use 1/3 here for the melody, so either Kaito should use 1/2 or every other diff should use 1/3 lol
00:48:177 - D's 8K Another uses 1/8 here but Whagwha Victus' 4K Another uses 1/3, so one of those needs to be changed

OK good luck getting that ranked without having to nerf the end of melodie de tristesse
tbh I don't even have to nerf it. Official BMS chart uses 7-chords there for piano smash, so 6-chords aren't that much diffrent and they're making musical sense lol

Kaito-kun wrote:

PS: Also noticed something, the 8K Melodie of tristesse and Rayz' 8K Hyper has different snaps at the very end of the map (around here 02:02:582 - to be exact), so take a look at it, I went with Kamikaze's snap, but you should check it out, because this may pose a problem later on

NlHIL wrote:

8K NM+

00:34:902 - lol l0l
00:48:327 - add a note for cymbal note for cymbal is on S, added for piano tho
01:16:310 - ^ it's on S already

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my mania queue I will mod your 4K here. No kudos if this isn't helpful to you
1|2|3|4

[General]

Check Aimod, you have a lot of job to do Fixed preview points, timing on Yuno's diff will get fixed in future


[4K Normal+]

00:43:977 (43977|1,44277|2,44577|3) - ctrl+g? the pitch seems lowering... and literally is the same noise like - 01:42:372 (102372|3,102622|2,102872|1) - Fair point, done
02:02:484 (122484|3,122484|2,122581|1,122581|0,122708|0,122834|1,122959|1,123083|2,123205|2,123326|3,123446|3) - ctrl+h. cuz the pitch is lowering and you mostly mapped a low pitch in col 1 imo Done
02:03:564 (123564|0,123682|1,123797|2,123912|3) - Ctrl+h too if you accept above y
and move - 02:02:388 (122388|1) - to 3 I don't want to jack it here already so I moved it to 3

[Whagwa Victus's 4K Another]
(This guy has been quit isn't he?) Yeah, he did quit and I took over his diff with his permission

01:07:710 (67710|1,67710|3,67757|2,67804|1) - ctrl+h for hand balance when bursting Done and rearranged next pattern to avoid an anchor

Can't mod Tidek's diff. too hard for me
Kaito's diff seems fine :3

Good Luck guys I'm waiting my PP LOL :v

Adtw_ wrote:

From

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4K Normal+

01:02:352 (62352|0) - move to 3 Leaving for pitch
01:03:661 (63661|2) - ghost note? Piano and snare are there
01:09:901 (69901|3,70037|1) - ctrl+g Okay

Whagwha Victus' 4K Another

00:35:352 - Missing note? Added
00:38:577 (38577|3) - move to 3 Okay
01:11:401 (71401|1,71469|0) - ctrl+g Nah I like that pattern more
01:34:622 - delete 1 note Okay
01:47:934 - add note Tha will create a really awful minijack which I would like to avoid

[MOD END]

it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject
Goodluck

FrenzyLi wrote:

Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!

4K Normal+

Comment: I can't really suggest anything else here because I believe this map is pretty smooth. However, I do believe that some notes should be doubled instead.
My2cents: Didn't spot anything unusual from my current level though. I still believe slider + end note is easier for beginners to hit accurately instead of the slider alone.

1. 00:46:377 (46377|1,46677|0,46827|2,47127|3,47127|2,47427|3,47577|0,47577|1) - Comment: This sequence really tests left/right hand balance. that's cool I guess lol
2. 01:08:583 (68583|3,68740|0,68898|3,69048|0) - How about doubling up the notes... 23,01,23,01? It kinda goes against my idea of making doubles for really strong pianos or crashes and I feel like it would be kinda weird to double those
3. 02:05:438 (125438|1,125727|2) - Maybe doubling up here as well... 01,23? First yes, second no. Same reason as before with crashes

NlHIL wrote:

Kaito's 8K NM

00:33:927 (33927|4,34827|2) - rearrange pls Please be more specific next time, I don't know what you mean with this, if you mean it for hand balancing, I did a small something to sort of fix it, but that's the only thing I can think of that you meant (if I'm wrong, please enlighten me, as I'm having a hard time deciphering wtf you meant with this -_-'')
00:52:152 - add for piano? I don't hear any piano there. If you meant by the sort of drum sound there, it's a no. I'm not mapping that sound at that moment, so I'll abstain from mapping it
00:59:352 - ^ ^^
00:59:502 - ^ ^^
01:44:622 (104622|6,105247|7) - remove Removed it and added some notes to the sounds I was mapping, looks better now
01:44:747 - add I don't see the purpose of making it a double, so rejected
01:44:997 - ^ ^^

Adtw_ wrote:

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Kaito's 4K Normal

00:28:377 (28377|3) - move to 3 Feels better both pitch-wise and playing wise, applied
00:28:527 - missing note? I barely even here something on 25% playback, so I'll abstain from mapping it (I ignored that sound on purpose)
00:38:127 - ^ ^^
01:38:372 (98372|1,98497|2) - move 1 column right Sure, applied
01:39:247 (99247|2,99372|3) - ctrl+g Looks good, applied
01:39:497 (99497|1,99622|0) - ^ if yes, ctrl+g ^^

[MOD END]

it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject
Goodluck

FrenzyLi wrote:

Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!

Kaito's 4K Normal

Comment: I tried to do some hand balancing based on pitch information to correct some things that I think are incorrect.
My2cents: My 2 cents: I think it's okay to use sliders to mark the beginning of a chain of complex stairs that beginners' aren't capable of playing, but it's hard for beginners to release timely at the end of the sliders. They need a note at the end of the slider to know when the sliders end. When does the slider end? A slider itself isn't enough a clue for beginners. If a beginner is only 2 days into the game, both sliders and slider + end note is hard. But after a week of playing, slider + end note is more likely to result in higher accuracy. Maybe a lot of parts with sliders should be swapped with [4K Normal+]. I understand what you mean, but if there is no reason to add a note at the end of a slider, then I won't add it, I'll try to simplify things tho. And regarding your comparation with 4K Normal+, I would like you to avoid comparing one diff with another, as we have different purposes, targeted player levels, mapping styles, etc. So no matter how good both maps are, there are some things that are bound to pop up when comparing them.

1. 00:03:566 (3566|3,4316|2,5022|1,5689|0,6321|1,6921|2,7492|3,8037|2,8297|1,8297|0,8559|0,8559|1) - Move note(s) at each time point to 1/2/1/0/2/3/2/1/23/23. Reason: Take the first note of each triplet just like in [4K Normal+]. Rejected the suggestion, but did some changes to that section instead
2. 00:13:527 (13527|3,13677|1) - Maybe: Ctrl+J. Matches with 00:17:277 (17277|1,17427|3,17577|2,17577|0) Applied
3. 00:20:052 (20052|0,20202|1) - Do you prefer this or just a slider at column 0 that lasts 1/2? Sounds similar to sliders like 00:19:602 (19602|3), just shorter. I prefer it as it is. Making smaller LNs isn't really a good option imo, and making the LNs into notes feels weird, so I'll leave the section as it is for now
   00:20:352 (20352|3,20502|2) - Same question for this as well. ^^
   00:21:177 (21177|0,21327|2) - Same here. ^^
   00:22:002 (22002|2,22152|0) - Same here as well as potentially a lot of other sliders. ^^
4. 00:25:977 (25977|2,26127|3,26427|1,26727|1) - Even though it's weird to have same pitch notes in separate columns (2,3) and different notes on same columns (1,1), and even though following the drum (whatever instrument down there) seems fine, how about 2,3,2,2 here? puxtu has already pointed that out, and again, I don't see any problem regarding pitch, both patterns seems perfectly fine while both playing it and looking at it in the editor (2,3 pattern is separate because it's a different pitch, and same column because same sound). Rejected, as the suggested changes aren't very comfortable either
   00:27:177 (27177|2,27327|3,27477|0,27627|1) - Just a comment... I spent some time, and now I know why you put these here. Because I was mapping that sound....... (?)
5. 00:30:627 (30627|0,30777|1,30927|2,31077|3,31227|0) - Comment: Remind you that there is a fore-jack here. Yeah... doesn't make much a difference. I know, but adding it will turn this map into a full-jacks map, and I would like to avoid that (jacks are ok, but I would like to keep it to a minimum)
6. 02:05:941 (125941|0,125941|1) - Make both into sliders that end at 02:06:541 just like in [4K Normal+]. I prefer it as it is, so rejected.

Jole wrote:

You have been visited by J O L O
praise the jolo

[Whagwha Victus' 4K Another]

General
There's hardly anything to say about this. Great overall with only one little issue to find

Notes
Priority: High
This one little issue I found isn't one to look past even if it's the only thing that's wrong with the map. I can't wrap my head around why there is a minijack here 00:22:077 (22077|0,22152|0) -

Show pattern

If you look at the pattern mapped to the same sound just before it ( 00:21:177 (21177|2,21252|1,21327|2,21327|0,21327|3) - ), there's no minijack. To make this more enjoyable to play, I have 2 suggestions - each one will remove the minijack. First option is to just make it a simple [34] [12] [34] jumptrill. The second option would be to literally just copy this pattern 00:21:177 (21177|2,21252|1,21327|2,21327|0,21327|3) -

Currently, that little minijack is a stain on an otherwise perfect map
Did a simple jumptrill (so just removed le minijack note)

[8K Melodie de tristesse]

General
Looking past the intro which I don't quite agree with, I have to say this is well made. Even though it's a hard map, almost none of the patterns are uncomfortable. They're also fair and have great flow

Notes
Priority: High
Now, let's start off with the intro. In the other difficulties, you can see it mapped correctly to the high pitch tone like shown here (Image from D's 8K Another @ 00:03:566 (3566|6) - )


In this difficulty, however, that's not the case. It looks like this



I really feel like this has to be changed to the way it's mapped in the example shown from D8's 8K Another. Not only does it feel wrong to play high pitch tones on the left side of the playfield, but it also creates inconsistency in the mapset. I really hope you'll change it since it can make you get the feeling that the map won't be very good further into the song. Maybe a bit harsh, but that was my first impression of the map when I saw the intro. Though after checking out the rest of the map, I discovered it is really good

That said, I don't see any more issues with the map!
fair point, redone intro like in D's diff (lol that polyrhythm is such a mess)

J O L O out

Kiviman wrote:

Hi! From cute queue :3
Sorry for delay, i needed to take a little break from modding.

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8K Normal+

00:22:677 - Add note to 7, cause you have 3 notes at 00:23:277 -. not really fond of the idea but it makes sense
00:34:377 (34377|6) - End this LN at 00:34:677 - for consistency with previous. 00:34:902 - Add note for cymbal and start LN here maybe. nice catch! shorthened LN and added S for cymbal
00:49:377 - Add LN till 00:49:527 - and 00:49:677 - another LN till 00:49:977 - . That tiny part seems pure layered. I have a feeling that there must be something else when i see it after analyzing first half of diff. added 2 1/4 triplets instead to make it more diverse
00:58:602 - 00:58:752 - 00:58:902 - Add notes. no for first, yes for rest
01:12:219 (72219|1) - End at 01:12:901 - sure
01:17:674 - Add note to 1 for cymbal.
01:18:492 - ^
01:19:170 - ^
01:20:258 - ^ I've intentionally not placed any more cymbal notes because those go all for scratch and it would be too hard for NM+ diff to have so heavy scratch usage
01:19:442 - ^, move 01:19:442 (79442|5,79442|1) - to 5 and 7 for balance. okay
01:22:303 - Move one of them to 1. okay
01:23:085 - ^
01:23:346 (83346|0) - Move to another column.
01:23:601 - Move one to 1, 01:23:856 (83856|0) - move to another column, 01:24:106 - Move to 1.
There are 2 cymbal sounds and you used left column for one that more intense before. These suggestions are to use left column for strong cymbal only. for that and all unanswered above: I've decided to accent opening crash instead of latter (arguably stronger) cymbal because it feels more natural to play for me. I've also adjusted the idea to be consistent around 01:24:723 - mark, it was inconsistent before
01:46:997 (106997|2,107372|1) - Add one more note to both for consistency. done
01:53:809 - Add to 1 for cymbal. done

Normal+&Hyper

From 02:02:582 - till 02:03:912 - 1 note in Hyper and 2 notes in Normal+. I see that they've done by different mappers, but QATs are mad now, so you should do something with it to reduce the dq chance. for now I've done that pattern like in ray's diff, this is a subject to change tho because it feels underwhelming

8K Melodie de tristesse

00:09:950 - Better make this more readable. Distribute 1/4 and 1/6 streams to make both visible. I see, you don't want to use "classical" o2jam polyrhythm with 1/4 on one hand and 1/6 on another without any changes through one stream, but BMS style here is really hard to play. There are still some ways that enable you to get both variety and readability. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/jSI1M/6ccf5699fa.png. While I do agree that this is quite hard to read, I'll stick with pitch in this part for now. Also I've asked playtesters about this before and they said it's fine lol. I'll keep your suggestions in the back of my head tho
00:42:327 - Now about this for balance: http://puu.sh/jSItk/95d089bd5d.png? looks great, applied
00:43:077 - 00:45:177 - Add notes each 1/2 for low pitch (piano?) I added beat notes from 00:43:977 - instead with a yummy 1/4 x 1/6 polyrhythm inside hehe
01:12:219 (72219|1) - End at 01:12:901 - okay
01:27:622 - Add note. ^
01:42:497 - 01:42:747 - Add note. ^
00:14:427 (14427|2) - End at 00:15:402 - ^ also moved 1 left
00:20:802 (20802|2,20952|6) - Try ctrl+j for some consistency, then 00:20:502 (20502|7) - 3 for balance. ^
00:20:727 (20727|4) - 4 for balance. that kinda breaks my 00:20:727 (20727|4,20802|6,20877|4,20952|2,21027|4) - pattern, so I'll leave it for now
00:58:902 (58902|5,59052|3) - 7-6 maybe. (ok)
I suggest you to refuse of triplet structure further or make it more clear, like http://puu.sh/jSJXc/5c9d0f74bd.png (00:59:252 - ), then http://puu.sh/jSJZ4/66d8c4701d.png (01:00:852 - ). I've cleared it up to some extent, but also took some liberties on that further into those. Not refraining from triplet structure there tho
01:12:424 (72424|6,72492|5,72560|6,72628|5) - Maybe 8-7-6-8? due to the fact that there's an LN there I've decided to do a very easy to hit trill there, I'm going to keep it
01:29:372 (89372|5) - 3 for balance. ok
01:37:372 (97372|3) - 7 for balance. ok
01:54:059 (114059|4,114184|4,114559|4) - 2 or 3 for balance. There's no need to put them to the same column with one of chord notes. I do believe that those notes are connected with chord musically, but even if they're not, I think that keeping tension with those jacks is a good idea and I don't want to change that.

It's one of the most interesting reqs that i ever recieved And this is probably the best mod I've recieved for this map so far
Good luck and take my stars

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234, sorry for the late mod D:

I like watching the bpm changes in the song at 100% speed and the twitchy white lines lol

Not sure how much of a stickler you are with pitch, so I gave it mild consideration for NM, and none at all for hyper.

[4K Normal+]
00:08:297 (8297|3) - Add note, sound literally has the same impact and pitch and everything as the one right after it The thing is that piano sounds are happening on 1/3 and this is not a 1/3 note, that's why I left it as 1 note and I will keep it like that. Second one has both this and the other one that's why it's doubled
00:57:702 (57702|0,57852|1,58002|2,58152|3) - Should staircase to the left for pitch, and change isn't a hard pattern I swear to god, someone told me to make it the other way :V anyway fixed
01:00:552 (60552|1,60702|2,60852|3,61002|0,61152|1,61302|2,61452|3) - ^ aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA
01:02:352 (62352|0) - Move to 3 for pitch increase ok
01:05:342 (65342|3,65457|2,65572|1,65688|0) - Staircase to the right for pitch ^
01:06:266 (66266|0,66480|1,66694|2,66908|3) - ^, but to the left ^
01:31:372 (91372|1,91497|1) - Consider moving to col 3 or rearranging for hand balance ^
02:02:834 (122834|2,122959|2,123083|1,123205|1,123326|0,123446|0) - Mini jacks probably too hard for an NM+ diff, consider remappingq there is literally no other way I could do this without making it either harder or massively underwhelming

There are a bunch of pitch related issues that I have with this map, but not sure if the mapper adheres to it, so I'll abstain from commenting on them :>

Kiviman wrote:

Hi! From cute queue :3 We meet again >_>
Sorry for delay, i needed to take a little break from modding.

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Kaito's 8K Normal

00:12:927 (12927|7) - 4 for balance. Applied
00:13:677 - Add note for consistency with 00:14:277 (14277|6) -. I suggest 4th column, then 00:14:127 (14127|5,14277|6) - 7-5. I'm actually mapping two different intensities there, previously, it was sort of a blurry sound, while 00:14:127 (14127|5,14277|6) - is an easily hearable sound (not really tbh, but keeping the how the song is, this is as clear as day lol). I'll try to do some changes regarding that, if not, I'll leave it like that
00:17:427 - Same, add note. ^^^
00:17:877 (17877|3,18027|5,18177|4) - 5-8-4 maybe. Seems unbalanced because of empty 8th column. Moved 00:19:227 (19227|7) - to col 8, to hopefully fix the problem
00:19:602 (19602|3) - I think, it would be better to put note at the line where LN ends. There's accented sound, it needs more emphasis like note+LN release. LN release itself doesn't make any emphasis at all, but it can strengthen note at the same line. Added note on col 5
You can also make 00:19:227 (19227|5) -, 00:20:052 (20052|6,20352|1) - 1/2 LNs to show accent at 00:19:377 (19377|4,20202|5,20502|2) - . I think, it would be nice and consistent (maybe a bit hard also). I'll keep it as it is, I tried having them as 1/2 LNs, and after some testplays with some players around that rank, they mainly got horrible acc with those LNs
Same suggestions till 00:22:152 - Added the notes at the end of the LNs
00:28:527 - Add note. Sound is way too faint, so I'll abstain from mapping it (I honestly think I accidentally mapped one or two of those sounds, but I have yet to find a mod point it out, and I can't find them myself, so idk if my intuition is true or not lol)
00:34:827 - Make note here and start LN from 00:34:977 - cause this point needs emphasis as well. I already find it uncomfortable enough having the LN right before the note, and this will make it more uncomfortable.
00:38:127 - Add note. Nope, same reason as before
00:58:602 (58602|6,58752|5,58902|4,59052|3) - How about 6-5-6-7 for pitch? Then 00:59:652 (59652|2,59852|4) - move 1 column left fo some balance, 01:00:552 (60552|4,60702|3,60852|7,61002|6,61152|5,61302|4,61452|3) - 7-6-5-4-3-2-3 for pitch, 01:01:652 (61652|4) - maybe 4. Accepted everything except last suggestion, I like it better on column 5, and moving it to column 4 doesn't really break pitch (?)
01:17:946 (77946|0) - Move to 5. There's another cymbal, lol. And add note to 7 for consistency with 01:18:763 (78763|3,78763|5) - . Lol, overlooked that one, fixed it
01:19:170 (79170|2,79170|3) - Delete one and move another to 1 for cymbal. 01:19:306 (79306|1) - Move to 3 for some comfort. I'm honestly not so sure about this one, but I'm not so sure about my choice either at that point lol. So I' applied it for now, may change if another mod suggests something else there
01:24:723 (84723|4) - 3 and 01:25:085 (85085|2) - 6 for some consistency, 01:25:445 (85445|5) - 8 then. Don't really see much difference lol, but applied, as it actually looks better
01:47:372 - Add note. Applied
01:49:309 (109309|5) - Make 1/2 LN. Nope, same reason as before
01:50:684 (110684|3) - ^ ^^^
01:52:309 (112309|2) - ^ in 5th column. ^^^
01:54:684 (114684|5) - 1 for cymbal. Deleted a note and moved it to col 1
02:05:168 (125168|0) - Add note to 5, 02:05:941 (125941|0) - 5 and 8. I think, last chords deserve a bit more emphasis. Keep, I don't think last chords deserve more emphasis unless they are stronger in sound, and up to what I hear, they are the same as the others before

It's one of the most interesting reqs that i ever recieved Hopefully this applies for my diff too :v (lololololol)
Good luck and take my stars Thanks

NlHIL wrote:

Rayz' 8K Hyper

00:58:452 - add a note for cymbal okay
00:59:252 (59252|4,102465|4) - remove? okay
01:02:052 - add? okay
01:26:396 - why ignore cymbal? intentionally left out all three smaller cymbals
,..
01:46:622 - add? okay

Jole wrote:

You have been visited by J O L O

[Rayz' 8K Hyper]

General
A very satisfying and fun difficulty in general. Not much to clean up here

Notes
Priority: High

I didn't notice any issues up untill this point 01:37:247 (97247|4,97247|7,97372|5,97372|7,97497|7,97497|5) - where a difficulty spike appears with a triple jack being placed

Show pattern

The pattern technically makes sense, but it's the usual random little diff spikes that often appear in ranked maps. I can understand the choice of mapping it like this, but to make it more comfortable and a bit more correct according to pitch from what I can hear, I suggest changing it to this



Having a minijack instead of 3 in a row will be a better experience for the player. That said, I suggest changing this pattern 01:39:372 (99372|1,99372|3,99497|1,99497|3) - up a bit as well, since it has the same effect. Maybe move the notes to column 4 and 6 like shown here



This will also tie 3 patterns together, and these are
01:38:372 (98372|7,98372|5,98497|5,98497|7) -
01:39:372 (99372|3,99372|5,99497|3,99497|5) -
and 01:40:372 (100372|3,100372|1,100497|1,100497|3) -

First one is placed in column 6 & 8, second one is in 4 & 6 and the last one is in 2 & 4. You see what I mean by tying them together?

J O L O out

Kiviman wrote:

Hi! From cute queue :3
Sorry for delay, i needed to take a little break from modding.

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Rayz' 8K Hyper

00:15:477 (15477|7) - Delete, 3 notes are enough. okay
00:19:677 - Add note. okay
00:20:802 - ^ okay
00:21:627 - ^ okay
00:22:452 - ^ okay
00:59:252 (59252|4,59352|5,59502|6,59652|7) - 4-2-3-4, then 00:59:852 (59852|4,60052|5,60252|7,60252|6) - 3-4-56, 00:59:952 (59952|2,59952|1) - 78 for balance. done diffrently
01:25:445 (85445|3,85565|4,85565|1) - Delete, 01:25:445 (85445|6) - move to 5 for consistency. okay
01:26:396 - Add to 1 for cymbal. okay
01:26:880 - ^ okay
01:41:247 - Add note. okay
01:45:309 - Add to 4. added to 6 instead
01:52:309 (112309|1,112372|3,112434|5) - Maybe 4-6-2? Your pattern is too uncomfortable for left hand. done diffrently

Hyper&Another

00:48:177 - 00:48:327 - 1/6 or 3/16+3/16+1/8? I think, it's more like 3/16+3/16+1/8, but it doesn't really matter, cause no one will check it, lol. The most important thing about those notes is to make the same timings in both diffs. Adjusted to be like in Another

It's one of the most interesting reqs that i ever recieved
Good luck and take my stars

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my mania queue I will mod your 4K here. No kudos if this isn't helpful to you
1|2|3|4

[Fanatic's 4K Hyper]
Some of the notes in the beggining, seems unsnapped. or is that because the BPM Change? (I can't find the correct snapping in any beat snap divisor ;w;) that's because of BPM changes, fixed some inconsistencies already tho

00:21:161 (21161|2) - seems uncomfortable, move to 1? and how is that beneficial lol, changed pattern a bit tho
00:23:711 (23711|2,23786|1,23861|0) - move to left one step for balance ok
00:26:111 (26111|0,26186|1,26261|2) - move to right one step ^ok
00:27:311 (27311|2) - to 4? ok
00:34:886 - a cymbal, consider to add note in col 1 ok
01:36:247 (96247|2,96309|1,96372|0) - move to right one step. for balance ok
01:45:372 (105372|0) - to 2? ok
01:54:059 (114059|1,114059|2,114184|1,114184|0) - ctrl+g? better playability I don't think it hinders playability enough to change it

Adtw_ wrote:

From

|1|2|3|4|

Fanatic's 4K Hyper

00:19:361 - add note ok
00:19:886 - ^ ok
00:20:486 - ^ ok
00:51:086 (51086|2,51161|3) - ctrl+g breaks pitch
00:54:536 - delete 1 note ok
00:56:336 - add note nah
01:30:247 - delete 1 note nah
01:30:497 - add note nah

[MOD END]

it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject
Goodluck

_underjoy wrote:

Monochrome

Mod

00:34:902 (34902|1,34902|0) - 3-chord tutaj bo finish jest słabszy od następnego finishu który jest 3chordem
00:39:627 (39627|1) - przesuń do 1, ten [24] nie pasuje do całości patternu
00:41:577 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3674170 hmm te dwa [24] chordy są użyte tylko w tym miejscu, może zrób coś w stylu tego screena dla consistency? tu też 00:31:977 - więc consistency już jest
00:47:277 (47277|0) - do 2? ten anchor trochę dziwny a dźwięk się różni. Możesz nawet dać obie do 2
00:58:602 - brakuje notki pod pianino (a je mapujesz)
01:15:355 (75355|1,75492|2) - nie jestem tego pewien ale można tu dać 2-chorda
01:15:628 (75628|0,75765|2) - tutaj też
01:19:306 (79306|2) - tu też
01:42:434 (102434|1,102559|2,102684|3,102809|1) - zmapuj tutaj pianino bo te notki są trochę randomowe. Co do akcentów, w tej części dawałeś 2-chordy na beat (nie pianino), więc można zastąpić pojedynczymi to orginalnie było 1/3 pod pianino, kami spierdolił snaping, fixd
01:45:122 (105122|0) - to co w 00:47:277
01:52:247 (112247|2,112309|1,112372|3,112372|2,112372|0) - offsync! (ogólnie ten fragment czuć że notki nie są IDEALNIE tam gdzie powinny, niestety bardzo trudno to zsyncować :/ )
01:59:578 (119578|0) - ogromny anchor na 1, pls fix

Nie cierpię modować twoich diffów, bo 90% z tego co napisałem to czepianie się na siłę dobrej mapy xD

Shoegazer wrote:

Kamikaze blackmailed me and told me that he'd stop doing that if I mod Monochrome.

SPOILER

[Tidek's 4K Monochrome]
OD9 please. 8 seems rather low for something as hectic as this. Agree, honestly idk why it was OD8 lol
00:08:559 - Same chord as the previous one, perhaps make this the same chord. fixd
00:12:627 - Very minor complaint, but I'd prefer to see something like this instead of the pattern you currently use. If you follow this, you'd have to do the same for 00:16:377 - , 01:10:583 - and other similar rhythms. fixd
00:26:127 - 00:43:077 - Any reason for the jumpstream to be unbroken? The music in 01:27:372 - (which is an unbroken run) is basically the same thing, only more intense and with minor differences. I think you can accent the chords just fine even if it's an unbroken stream, since you didn't place any consecutive doubles that are the same (e.g. [34][34]) for the parts where the chords are very different. actually u are right, I wanted to make it easy on beginning, but when i look at this now, that js should be unbroken, because next is already faster lol
00:29:577 (29577|0,29577|3,29727|2,29727|1) - Both doubles should be the same, but considering what you'd have to do to make both chords to be the same, it's fine if you don't do that. Regardless, I'd like to see the second chord being [12] instead for fluency.
00:31:977 (31977|2,31977|0,32127|0,32127|2) - Unnecessarily rigid transition, I'd prefer [34] but if the rigidity is intentional then by all means go ahead. If you're planning to make the stream unbroken however, [14] would be ideal for a balance of rigidity and other things. [34] is just a personal preference.
00:39:177 (39177|0,39177|3,39327|2,39327|1) - refer to 00:29:577 (29577|0,29577|3,29727|2,29727|1) -, but mirrored.
00:41:502 - refer to 00:31:977 (31977|2,31977|0,32127|0,32127|2) -, but mirrored.
00:44:577 - I wouldn't seeing some 1/3 and 1/2 polyrhythms here, I'd prefer to see that instead of just 1/4s. A 1/3 and 1/4 polyrhythm would be too difficult. fixd it in own way (to keep consistancy with other pattern)
00:48:627 - Try a pattern like this., would capture the melody falling well. looks nice, fixd
01:00:852 (60852|3,60852|2,61152|3,61152|2) - You should probably make these chords different, it creates an unnecessary accentuation that you didn't do for the exact sounds in this section. true, fixed
01:02:652 (62652|2,62652|1,62652|0,62952|0,62952|1,62952|2,63252|0,63252|1,63252|3,63252|2) - Think you should remove one note from each chord, but keep the [123]s [12] and the [1234] as [124]. I understand that you're trying to emphasise the sound but I don't think the sound is loud enough to warrant triples and quads, especially since the triples before it have cymbal crashes and other things that are louder than the first two chords. ok, fixed it, agree that its not that intense to put 3-4chords.
01:09:672 - would prefer a pattern like 23[124] for much easier transitioning, also gives a better emphasis on the triple since you're using your wrist to hit that part instead. fixed
01:24:356 - Don't think quads are necessary here, they can just be triples. If you want to keep the quads though, you should make the first triple of each gallop [123], [124] and [234] respectively to capture the pitch going up. If you don't want to keep the quads, [123][124], [124][134], [134][234] is how I'd do it. removed quads.
01:27:372 - 01:43:372 - The ending would be so hard that I think you can layer this more. It's mainly just adding doubles more than anything else, though. Adding every sound like 01:27:497 - and 01:28:372 - (doesn't have to be the same chord like [34][34] since you're already accentuating one part, but that would be a plus) would work. Here I have to disagree (finally lol). In my opinion it will break consistancy of that map, most of my doubles in whole map are for piano sounds, not gonna break it for one jump stream
01:39:497 - Should use the same trilly pattern you used for the rest of the stream for consistency. fixd
01:34:872 - 01:35:372 - There are pretty prevalent 1/2 chords here, I feel that it'd be best to capture them. Maybe use a [34] chord and make something like this. fixd
01:41:247 (101247|3,101247|0,101309|2,101372|0,101372|1,101434|2,101497|0,101497|3) - Rather rough pattern and it does stand out from the rest of the patterns used. I used similar pattern before and I think it doesnt play really bad, Its pretty basic JS pattern
01:42:872 - Again, would prefer a 1/2 and 1/3 polyrhythm here. Seems better than a 1/4 jumptrill. Will stay with that jump trill, for me those sounds are a lot more significant than 1/2 and 1/3 polyrhythms (fixd for 1/4 jump trill previous pattern to keep consistancy)
01:47:622 - Personal preference, but I'd prefer 23232[134] instead. Creates more emphasis than 13131[234], and I find it a more comfortable pattern overall. fixd
01:59:925 - 02:02:582 - Going to try and find ways to make this easier, it's hard to make something relatively reasonable given its density though.
01:59:925 - 02:00:938 - I feel that the easiest way of making handstream like that more manageable is by reducing as many one hand trills and possible and emphasising more on the handjacks. It's manageable if the jacks are on a particular hand, like [12] or [34]. I think it'd transition nicely into the handjacks/jumpjacks as well. Something like this maybe. Fixed, I had better pattern before, i really have no idea why i changed it to something that hard lol
02:01:047 - Very distinct lack of [12] or [34] doubles, which makes the handglut section as a whole pretty difficult to nail. It's not so much an issue for lower BPMs like 270-295, but I think it'd be nice for you to make the patterns progressively easier for the section before the 1/6s. By the time it hits 300 BPM I think some [12] or [34] doubles (the triples unchanged) should be necessary so that the player has more leverage on his wrist to hit the jacks properly. Not really sure how you'd do that though.. fixd, it has more 12 and 34, hope its better now
02:02:581 - Have the first triple be [234], then the second being [134], third being [124], fourth being [123] and repeat for the rest of that section. It'd make the last chord [123], which captures the lowest chord possible. fixed

It plays generally well, most of these are nitpicks and just ways to improve playability while keeping musical relevancy intact. I'll mod burn this moment eventually when I'm not feeling like garbage

Julie wrote:

"Mélodie de tristesse"

Kudo plox~! *runs*