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Nokris

258 posts

Joined February 2015

Nokris 2015-07-14T17:14:12+00:00

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RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2015-07-16T19:10:14+00:00

Hello, m4m right here!

Dream

I just found two main mistakes in your map

1) The NC pattern you followed is unconsistent... I mean, you should put NCs on big white ticks, generally. Well, you didn't follow a precise pattern... Some combos are longer, some are shorter, some start on red ticks. This is not really good, and you should re-make your NC pattern, or at least adjust it... My suggestion is: put NC every 2 big white ticks, and if you need to emphasize some parts you can spam them.
If you need me to help you out with NCs you can catch me in-game

2) 04:31:678 - This section is completely off. Change the offset to 431663, it sounds muuuuuuuch better. Oh, and if you change this, you have to delede the following red line, since it's useless. Probably you noticed the wrong timing and tried to fix it with that red line, but it's definilitely useless.

The following are just suggestions!

01:02:837 - I really feel like you need to add a note here
01:21:872 - Same, especially because there is the kiai here
02:08:010 (5,6,7,1) - Uh well, I don't like the spacing you used here, it's really irregular. I know you wanted to make that simmetry with (7) but in my opinion the entire pattern looks ugly with that spacing
03:02:216 (1) - It would be really nice if you menaged to put claps on the sliderticks that need them ( this 03:03:044 - and this 03:04:699 )
03:08:837 to 03:33:665 - Uhm, maybe it's just bullshit but what about reducing the SV to 0.5x? 0.75x is completely fine but this part is really, really, really calm and 0.5x would look nicer maybe?
03:20:423 (1) - This slider is asymmetrical and I don't like it
03:32:010 (1) - What about ending this in 03:33:251 - ? It fits the song better imo
04:05:113 (1) - What about a CTRL+G here? It would create a better flow and a nice jump to fit the song
04:55:733 (1) - This note should be on the red line o.o Maybe I messed everything up by trying to find the right offset, I don't know. Just, make sure this note is on the red line xD

__

Really good map, I just disagree with you NC pattern and I think you will have to change it. Good luck ^^
Have a star.

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-16T20:40:41+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Hello, m4m right here!

Dream

I just found two main mistakes in your map

1) The NC pattern you followed is unconsistent... I mean, you should put NCs on big white ticks, generally. Well, you didn't follow a precise pattern... Some combos are longer, some are shorter, some start on red ticks. This is not really good, and you should re-make your NC pattern, or at least adjust it... My suggestion is: put NC every 2 big white ticks, and if you need to emphasize some parts you can spam them.
If you need me to help you out with NCs you can catch me in-game

2) 04:31:678 - This section is completely off. Change the offset to 431663, it sounds muuuuuuuch better. Oh, and if you change this, you have to delede the following red line, since it's useless. Probably you noticed the wrong timing and tried to fix it with that red line, but it's definilitely useless. fix

The following are just suggestions!

01:02:837 - I really feel like you need to add a note here
01:21:872 - Same, especially because there is the kiai here
02:08:010 (5,6,7,1) - Uh well, I don't like the spacing you used here, it's really irregular. I know you wanted to make that simmetry with (7) but in my opinion the entire pattern looks ugly with that spacing fix
03:02:216 (1) - It would be really nice if you menaged to put claps on the sliderticks that need them ( this 03:03:044 - and this 03:04:699 ) fix
03:08:837 to 03:33:665 - Uhm, maybe it's just bullshit but what about reducing the SV to 0.5x? 0.75x is completely fine but this part is really, really, really calm and 0.5x would look nicer maybe?
03:20:423 (1) - This slider is asymmetrical and I don't like it fix
03:32:010 (1) - What about ending this in 03:33:251 - ? It fits the song better imo fix
04:05:113 (1) - What about a CTRL+G here? It would create a better flow and a nice jump to fit the song fix
04:55:733 (1) - This note should be on the red line o.o Maybe I messed everything up by trying to find the right offset, I don't know. Just, make sure this note is on the red line xD

__

Really good map, I just disagree with you NC pattern and I think you will have to change it. Good luck ^^
Have a star.

Thank you very much!:3

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-07-19T14:59:39+00:00

IRC mod

20:32 Lama Poluna: Hi
20:32 Lama Poluna: Can u BN req my map?
20:32 Hinsvar: What map?
20:32 *Lama Poluna is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707985 Denkare - When Dreams End]
20:33 Hinsvar: I have to see the map first before I can say I want to mod or not.
20:33 Hinsvar: Wait.
20:33 Lama Poluna: Ok.
20:34 Hinsvar: whoa
20:34 Hinsvar: hmm
20:34 Hinsvar: How long will you be online?
20:34 Hinsvar: If you're still here in the next two hours, I'll do an IRC mod.
20:34 Lama Poluna: As you will need it
20:35 Lama Poluna: Ok
20:35 Lama Poluna: Go
20:35 Hinsvar: Uh.
20:35 Hinsvar: Not now; I have to finish a mod first lol
20:35 Hinsvar: Should be done in 30 minutes.
20:35 Lama Poluna: Ok :3
20:35 Hinsvar: Cool.
20:35 Hinsvar: I'll poke you once I'm done.
20:47 Hinsvar: ok I'm done
20:47 *Hinsvar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707985 Denkare - When Dreams End [Dream]]
20:48 Hinsvar: oh my
20:48 Hinsvar: custom hitsounds
20:48 Hinsvar: LOL
20:48 Lama Poluna: :D
20:49 Hinsvar: uhm first thing first
20:50 Hinsvar: you can't have both the sliderslide and tick silenced in the same sample
20:50 Hinsvar: so it means S:C1 right now is invalid
20:50 Hinsvar: pick either one to remove
20:50 Hinsvar: I'd say remove the silent ticks.
20:51 Lama Poluna: ok, i remove silent ticks.
20:52 Lama Poluna: 03:04:699 -
20:52 Lama Poluna: 03:03:044 -
20:52 Lama Poluna: Can not remove?
20:53 Lama Poluna: Remove sliderslide, ok?
20:53 Hinsvar: Those are okay.
20:53 Hinsvar: Since the tick is not silent.
20:54 Hinsvar: 02:11:941 (9,10,11) - I'm not too sure with the drum here, though.
20:54 Hinsvar: They blend so well with the song it feels as if there were no hitsounds.
20:54 Hinsvar: And that's a bad thing since it means you can't really feel anything.
20:54 Lama Poluna: I don't like how they sound long sliders with tick...
20:54 Hinsvar: :)
20:55 Hinsvar: oh and
20:55 Hinsvar: the silent slide/tick applies to normal samplesets too
20:55 Hinsvar: so you may want to remove normal-slidertick and normal-slidertick2
20:56 Lama Poluna: Have to redownload map
20:57 Hinsvar: Sure.
20:57 Lama Poluna: Ok
20:57 Lama Poluna: I remove.
20:57 Lama Poluna: Only normal.
20:58 Lama Poluna: 02:11:941 (9,10,11) -
20:58 Hinsvar: Sure.
20:58 Lama Poluna: Need to replace?
20:58 Hinsvar: Yeah.
20:58 Hinsvar: With something that sounds more notable.
20:58 Lama Poluna: Soft drum?
20:58 Hinsvar: No, something that sounds a little harder.
20:58 Hinsvar: I'm not the best at finding custom hitsounds, unfortunately, so I can't help.
20:59 Hinsvar: :(
20:59 Lama Poluna: 02:11:941 (9,10,11) -
20:59 Lama Poluna: add finish?
20:59 Lama Poluna: or clap
21:00 Hinsvar: Use the default Drum sampleset.
21:00 Lama Poluna: Ok
21:00 Lama Poluna: :3
21:00 Hinsvar: It means you'll need to remove the custom drum hitsounds :D
21:00 Hinsvar: Remember to do that.
21:00 Hinsvar: After that, update the map.
21:01 Hinsvar: I'll have to redownload, yep.
21:02 Lama Poluna: Ready
21:04 Hinsvar: uhm
21:04 Hinsvar: you haven't removed soft-slidertick yet
21:04 Hinsvar: did you forget or misunderstood
21:05 Hinsvar: lol
21:05 Lama Poluna: Ready
21:05 Hinsvar: ok
21:06 Lama Poluna: update
21:06 Hinsvar: sure
21:06 Lama Poluna: yep
21:07 Hinsvar: 01:17:527 (2) - Make it like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411127 this] for a better flow?
21:08 Lama Poluna: Ok
21:08 Lama Poluna: :3
21:08 Hinsvar: 01:48:561 (5,6,1) - Ah why do you have to space it like this?
21:08 Hinsvar: Something like 01:50:217 (2,3,4) - would be better.
21:09 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4RmD/9c69516d9c.jpg
21:09 Hinsvar: Nice.
21:10 Hinsvar: uh wait
21:10 Hinsvar: uh 01:50:217 (2,3,4) - 's fine
21:10 Hinsvar: it doesn't need a change
21:10 Hinsvar: the one that needs a change is 01:48:561 (5,6,1) - 
21:10 Hinsvar: since the pattern looks different compared to what have you made so far
21:10 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4Rri/d9cb72cee1.jpg
21:11 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4Rsb/e9e8549574.jpg
21:11 Hinsvar: oh that's okay
21:11 Lama Poluna: :3
21:12 Hinsvar: 02:17:114 (3) - Do something like [http://puu.sh/j4Rvk/b511ef07f6.jpg this]? Plays more comfortably.
21:13 Lama Poluna: Ok
21:14 Hinsvar: 02:40:285 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411157 ?
21:15 Lama Poluna: Yes.
21:15 Hinsvar: 02:58:079 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411161 so this part will be more spaced and is more comfortable to play?
21:17 Lama Poluna: okokok
21:20 Hinsvar: 03:58:493 (5,1) - Swap NC? Fits the song better, IMO.
21:21 Lama Poluna: Yeeees
21:21 Lama Poluna: :3
21:23 Hinsvar: 04:18:354 - [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411193 Try this?]
21:23 Hinsvar: If you follow the song, I'm sure enough you're supposed to start a new combo and change the direction of the stream starting at 04:18:354 - 
21:23 Hinsvar: instead of 04:18:148 - 
21:26 Hinsvar: oh and one last thing: the BPM right now is doubled
21:26 Hinsvar: and it is uh
21:26 Hinsvar: wrong
21:26 Hinsvar: don't worry if we change the BPM you don't have to remap
21:26 Hinsvar: the map can stay as is
21:27 Lama Poluna: I can't made https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411193
21:27 Lama Poluna: :с
21:27 Hinsvar: You don't have to be exactly following me.
21:27 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4ScK/dc168b9bfb.jpg
21:27 Lama Poluna: >__<
21:27 Hinsvar: Well that's okay too.
21:27 Hinsvar: Not bad.
21:27 Lama Poluna: I cannnnnt
21:28 Hinsvar: I was just trying to imitate you but failed :P
21:28 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4Seh/6beed49250.jpg
21:28 Lama Poluna: How?
21:28 Hinsvar: hmm unfortunately you have to figure how to make that perfect by yourself
21:28 Hinsvar: I can't assist on things like this.
21:28 Hinsvar: Since I don't know the exact position of the objects.
21:28 Hinsvar: Anyway, we have to change the BPM first.
21:29 Hinsvar: And the SV.
21:29 Hinsvar: So it'll be actually correct with the song.
21:29 Hinsvar: (yeah you don't need to remap don't worry)
21:29 Lama Poluna: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
21:29 Lama Poluna: I CANT
21:29 Hinsvar: calm down
21:30 Lama Poluna: i remap it
21:30 Lama Poluna: w8
21:30 Hinsvar: well it's ok to remap that stream
21:36 Hinsvar: Umm hello; are you there? :D
21:36 Lama Poluna: i made
21:36 Lama Poluna: Yes :D
21:36 Hinsvar: sure sure
21:36 Hinsvar: now the last thing
21:36 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/j4SCj/b06d02d9c0.jpg
21:37 Hinsvar: 00:00:148 - 72.5 BPM | 03:35:320 - 145 BPM | 04:31:663 - 70 BPM | 04:55:733 - 57.5 BPM | 04:56:254 - 49.5 BPM | 04:56:860 - 44 BPM | 04:57:541 - 38.5 BPM
21:37 Hinsvar: 2.2 SV
21:38 Hinsvar: yep that stream is good
21:38 Hinsvar: basically you cut the BPM of everything by half, change the inherited timing point at 03:35:320 - to an uninherited one and use 145 BPM, then change the SV to 2.2
21:38 Hinsvar: it should work
21:39 Hinsvar: you don't have to remap anything
21:39 Hinsvar: this is for more accuracy in timing
21:40 Lama Poluna: What about the speed of the slider?
21:40 Hinsvar: hmm
21:40 Hinsvar: keep them as is
21:40 Hinsvar: it's ok
21:40 Hinsvar: as long as they look playable
21:40 Hinsvar: and are snapped right
21:41 Hinsvar: if it's error it should be easily fixed
21:42 Lama Poluna: BPM
21:42 Lama Poluna: Fixed
21:43 Lama Poluna: Ok
21:43 Hinsvar: cool
21:43 Hinsvar: if you have anything you want to fix, fix first
21:43 Hinsvar: then upload
21:43 Hinsvar: if there is none, upload
21:43 Hinsvar: I think I can bubble this now.
21:44 Lama Poluna: I was just very hard. I have to translate everything on the translator.
21:45 Lama Poluna: :с
21:45 Hinsvar: lol
21:45 Hinsvar: :c

We changed BPM values and did little fixes on flow and NC stuff.

Bubble #1.

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-07-20T03:01:42+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

The total length of the map is from 00:00:148 - to 04:59:878 - , which is less than 5mins. As we all know, Cry Thunder is dqed because of length<5min, so you have to fix the issue. My suggestion is to make 04:58:320 (1) - end at 05:00:657 - , that's the easist way.

Dream

00:04:285 (2) - 00:10:906 (3) - add whistle on the end
00:00:148 (1) - 00:03:458 (1) - add whistle on the head
00:06:768 (1) - 00:10:079 (1) - whistle
01:02:837 - as your former patterns follow the vocal, there should be a note imo
02:03:458 (1) - remove nc
02:09:976 (3) - this 1/4 hears quite weird from my side
04:24:976 (1) - ctrl+g?
04:31:663 (1) - 04:33:377 (1) - 04:36:805 (1) - 04:37:663 (2) - 04:40:234 (1) - 04:45:377 (1) - 04:47:091 (1) - 04:48:805 (1) - 04:50:520 (1,2) - 04:52:234 (1) - 04:53:948 (1) - whistle on the head?
04:34:663 (3) - add whistle on the end?
04:38:520 (1) - 04:41:948 (1) - 04:55:733 (1) - whistle?

call me back after checking the mod

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-20T06:45:50+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
The total length of the map is from 00:00:148 - to 04:59:878 - , which is less than 5mins. As we all know, Cry Thunder is dqed because of length<5min, so you have to fix the issue. My suggestion is to make 04:58:320 (1) - end at 05:00:657 - , that's the easist way. fix
Dream
00:04:285 (2) - 00:10:906 (3) - add whistle on the end
00:00:148 (1) - 00:03:458 (1) - add whistle on the head
00:06:768 (1) - 00:10:079 (1) - whistle
01:02:837 - as your former patterns follow the vocal, there should be a note imo fix
02:03:458 (1) - remove nc fix
02:09:976 (3) - this 1/4 hears quite weird from my side fix
04:24:976 (1) - ctrl+g? fix
04:31:663 (1) - 04:33:377 (1) - 04:36:805 (1) - 04:37:663 (2) - 04:40:234 (1) - 04:45:377 (1) - 04:47:091 (1) - 04:48:805 (1) - 04:50:520 (1,2) - 04:52:234 (1) - 04:53:948 (1) - whistle on the head?
04:34:663 (3) - add whistle on the end?
04:38:520 (1) - 04:41:948 (1) - 04:55:733 (1) - whistle?
call me back after checking the mod

Thank you <3

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-07-20T06:47:47+00:00

#2

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-07-20T12:17:06+00:00

timing:
там где у тебя 70 я бы подвинул на -6~

metadata:
http://www.denkare.net/archives/audio/album-x
не очень я уверен в романизированном тайтле, будет хорошо если ты покажешь где его нашел

general:
drum-hitnormal.wav и drum-sliderslide.wav не используются, удали их
2 osb файла в папке
так-же я тебя попрошу найти того кто понимает в сб и попросить его проверить

dream:
хп бы я уменьшил до 6, марафон и довольно медленный
а од бы поднял до 8
00:25:804 (4,1) - тут спейсинг должен быть больше, переход к сильному биту и консистенси с твои предыдущими спейсингами на даунбиты
00:29:113 (4,1) - ^ тут тоже
00:31:182 (2,3) - я бы не стал стакать их, учитывая что у тебя тут же идет 00:33:045 (5,1) - ну или наоборот
00:38:217 (1) - конец слайдера должен быть играемым объектом, т.к. это сильный бит в музыке
00:53:114 (1,2) - джамп на слабый бит, почему зачем, если делать джамп там то при таком ритме http://puu.sh/j60Vi/f90ab582f9.jpg
00:58:907 (6,7) - спейсинг? почему 7 так близко
01:04:286 (2,3) - ^
01:12:147 (4,1) - я уже писал про консистенси, дунбиты и спейсинг на них
01:12:975 (1,2) - ^ а тут у тебя получается джамп на слабый бит с 1.0 ДС'ом на сильный
01:16:286 (1) - ^ ну и так далее
01:19:596 (1) - подвинь ближе к 5, чтобы у них не было одинакового спейсинга с 01:18:768 (4) - http://puu.sh/j61ps/96c1f9bbc1.jpg
01:31:182 (2) - может просто круг вместо него, не вижу причин для слайдера
02:10:700 (4,6) - сравни эти 2, у тебя большой джамп на 02:11:527 (6) - где нет ничего в плане музыки и обычный дс на 02:10:700 (4) - где сильный барабан, это не правильно
03:02:216 (1) - я бы не стал делать это со слайдертиками, все-таки они должны давать немного другой фидбек игроку в отличии от обычных хсов при игре, но оставь как тебе нравится, ничего страшного в этом нет
03:34:595 (5) - тут 1\12 но это вовсе не значит, что тут хорошо для игры будет просто поставить 1\2 вместо 1\8, может слайдер, подумай
03:34:907 (1,2,3) - может лучше сделать тут рипит слайдер, будет печально брейкнуть комбо на 70%, да еще это довольно заметный скачок в сложности
03:38:631 (1) - в этой части мне не нравится, что у тебя ужасный по силе хитсануд падает на концы слайдеров при том что хитнормал практически не слышно на фоне, имо это очень сильно портит ритм, может стоит их разбивать на 2 круга в этом случае или найти что-нибудь послабее для клапа и посильнее для хитнормала
04:15:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ну и это конечно неболшьой локальный пдц, лучше разбить на 3-4 части, хоть бмп и низкий такие огромные скачки в сложности не нужны
04:21:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - и тут где-нибудь по середине паузу
04:58:320 (1) - кривоват http://puu.sh/j62Oy/516b864eb3.jpg

1. соглашаться со всем в моде не обязательно
2. я пропустил\мог пропустить какие-то повторяющиеся моменты
3. если есть какие-то вопросы или что-то не понятно пиши пм

хороший мапсет

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-20T14:55:54+00:00

Sieg wrote:
timing:
там где у тебя 70 я бы подвинул на -6~ fix

metadata:
http://www.denkare.net/archives/audio/album-x
не очень я уверен в романизированном тайтле, будет хорошо если ты покажешь где его нашел

general:
drum-hitnormal.wav и drum-sliderslide.wav не используются, удали их fix
2 osb файла в папке fix
так-же я тебя попрошу найти того кто понимает в сб и попросить его проверить fix

dream:
хп бы я уменьшил до 6, марафон и довольно медленный fix
а од бы поднял до 8 fix
00:25:804 (4,1) - тут спейсинг должен быть больше, переход к сильному биту и консистенси с твои предыдущими спейсингами на даунбиты fix
00:29:113 (4,1) - ^ тут тоже fix
00:31:182 (2,3) - я бы не стал стакать их, учитывая что у тебя тут же идет 00:33:045 (5,1) - ну или наоборот fix
00:38:217 (1) - конец слайдера должен быть играемым объектом, т.к. это сильный бит в музыке fix
00:53:114 (1,2) - джамп на слабый бит, почему зачем, если делать джамп там то при таком ритме http://puu.sh/j60Vi/f90ab582f9.jpg
00:58:907 (6,7) - спейсинг? почему 7 так близко fix
01:04:286 (2,3) - ^ Не думаю
01:12:147 (4,1) - я уже писал про консистенси, дунбиты и спейсинг на них fix
01:12:975 (1,2) - ^ а тут у тебя получается джамп на слабый бит с 1.0 ДС'ом на сильный fix
01:16:286 (1) - ^ ну и так далее fix
01:19:596 (1) - подвинь ближе к 5, чтобы у них не было одинакового спейсинга с 01:18:768 (4) - http://puu.sh/j61ps/96c1f9bbc1.jpg fix
01:31:182 (2) - может просто круг вместо него, не вижу причин для слайдера fix
02:10:700 (4,6) - сравни эти 2, у тебя большой джамп на 02:11:527 (6) - где нет ничего в плане музыки и обычный дс на 02:10:700 (4) - где сильный барабан, это не правильно fix
03:02:216 (1) - я бы не стал делать это со слайдертиками, все-таки они должны давать немного другой фидбек игроку в отличии от обычных хсов при игре, но оставь как тебе нравится, ничего страшного в этом нет
03:34:595 (5) - тут 1\12 но это вовсе не значит, что тут хорошо для игры будет просто поставить 1\2 вместо 1\8, может слайдер, подумай Там есь звук не попадающий в ритм, много чего меняли уже несколько раз в этом месте, мой вариант - лучший
03:34:907 (1,2,3) - может лучше сделать тут рипит слайдер, будет печально брейкнуть комбо на 70%, да еще это довольно заметный скачок в сложности Когда я мапал эту карту то я не знал об этом, не знаю что делать... наверно оставлю.
03:38:631 (1) - в этой части мне не нравится, что у тебя ужасный по силе хитсануд падает на концы слайдеров при том что хитнормал практически не слышно на фоне, имо это очень сильно портит ритм, может стоит их разбивать на 2 круга в этом случае или найти что-нибудь послабее для клапа и посильнее для хитнормала fix
04:15:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ну и это конечно неболшьой локальный пдц, лучше разбить на 3-4 части, хоть бмп и низкий такие огромные скачки в сложности не нужны Даже не обсуждается, стримчанский будет
04:21:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - и тут где-нибудь по середине паузу ^
04:58:320 (1) - кривоват http://puu.sh/j62Oy/516b864eb3.jpg fix

1. соглашаться со всем в моде не обязательно
2. я пропустил\мог пропустить какие-то повторяющиеся моменты
3. если есть какие-то вопросы или что-то не понятно пиши пм

хороший мапсет

Спасибо :3

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-07-20T15:39:19+00:00

Lama Poluna wrote:
Sieg wrote:
03:34:595 (5) - тут 1\12 но это вовсе не значит, что тут хорошо для игры будет просто поставить 1\2 вместо 1\8, может слайдер, подумай Там есь звук не попадающий в ритм, много чего меняли уже несколько раз в этом месте, мой вариант - лучший

звук не попадающий в ритм -> там в 1\12 снаппинге, ритм там такой http://puu.sh/j6903/387d889510.jpg
оставить текущий http://puu.sh/j694P/04c85c5a25.jpg вариант с 1\8 нельзя, т.к. это не правильно относительно ритма песни,
более того, если это заметит любой чекающий мапсет кат то это будет 100% поводом к дисквалифаю

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-20T16:12:32+00:00

Пофиксил, надеюсь правильно.

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-07-21T17:56:06+00:00

alright, all unrankable issues has been resolved (:
you may call your previous bns to repair their nominations

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-07-22T05:04:13+00:00

yeah ok sure

#1

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-07-22T06:58:21+00:00

#2

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-22T07:00:33+00:00

^

Thanks (*´▽`*)

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2015-07-25T08:54:09+00:00

Rank pls :c

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-07-25T18:17:11+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Rank pls :c

^^

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2015-07-29T14:22:16+00:00

Please check Metadata. There are a few questions and I think metadata is not accurate. Refer to Japaneses mappers?

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-02T16:31:59+00:00

why am I in tags

Rapthorn

234 posts

Joined October 2014

Rapthorn 2015-08-02T16:43:01+00:00

I was not prepared

grats ☆ﾐ(o*･ω･)ﾉ

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-08-02T16:51:39+00:00

DankHomie wrote:
I was not prepared

grats ☆ﾐ(o*･ω･)ﾉ

Thanks (´∀｀*)

Shoko84

80 posts

Joined August 2012

Shoko84 2015-08-02T17:49:10+00:00

Inb4 dq'ed because of <5min

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-08-02T18:00:10+00:00

Shoko84 wrote:
Inb4 dq'ed because of <5min

lol, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/186677.
Go away

Shoko84

80 posts

Joined August 2012

Shoko84 2015-08-02T19:22:39+00:00

You're rude when you're wrong mate.. : http://puu.sh/jmOMC/7246b1c167.jpg / http://puu.sh/jmOQd/be58a0fe53.png
I don't understand why there is 4:58 but well.. just saying

Rapthorn

234 posts

Joined October 2014

Rapthorn 2015-08-02T20:00:42+00:00

Shoko84 wrote:
You're rude when you're wrong mate.. : http://puu.sh/jmOMC/7246b1c167.jpg / http://puu.sh/jmOQd/be58a0fe53.png
I don't understand why there is 4:58 but well.. just saying

The map has no breaks, first note hits at 00:00:148 (1) -

Last slider ends at 5:00:657

We good

Shoko84

80 posts

Joined August 2012

Shoko84 2015-08-02T20:05:34+00:00

Osu pls :c
My bad, good luck then o/

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-08-03T05:45:58+00:00

DankHomie wrote:
Shoko84 wrote:
You're rude when you're wrong mate.. : http://puu.sh/jmOMC/7246b1c167.jpg / http://puu.sh/jmOQd/be58a0fe53.png
I don't understand why there is 4:58 but well.. just saying
The map has no breaks, first note hits at 00:00:148 (1) -

Last slider ends at 5:00:657

We good

I recommend the nominator.

Nomination Assessment Team

182 posts

Joined August 2014

Nomination Assessment Team 2015-08-08T11:30:53+00:00

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

General Technical Errors

There are two unused hitsound files in folder. It has to be removed.

normal-sliderslide69
normal-slidertick69

Metadata

Wrong Romanised Artist/Title.

About Romanised Artist: Denkare is an abbreviation for 電気式華憐音楽集団 and it is not really correct romanised artist.
So, Romanised Artist should be Denkishiki Karen Ongaku Shuudan.
About Romanised Title: It is not acceptable because it is not necessarily the correct English. In other words, it should not be translated into English.
So, Romanised Title should be Toki Hatsuru Yume by using the romaji.

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###AB

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-08-09T20:09:15+00:00

Quality Assurance Team wrote:
Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

General Technical Errors

There are two unused hitsound files in folder. It has to be removed.
normal-sliderslide69
normal-slidertick69
Metadata

Wrong Romanised Artist/Title.
About Romanised Artist: Denkare is an abbreviation for 電気式華憐音楽集団 and it is not really correct romanised artist.
So, Romanised Artist should be Denkishiki Karen Ongaku Shuudan.
About Romanised Title: It is not acceptable because it is not necessarily the correct English. In other words, it should not be translated into English.
So, Romanised Title should be Toki Hatsuru Yume by using the romaji.

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###AB

All fix

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-08-10T00:25:33+00:00

ok let's give this another chance

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-08-10T01:40:20+00:00

owo

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-10T13:28:45+00:00

requalified

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,959 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2015-08-10T13:38:40+00:00

o/

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-10T13:42:26+00:00

Karen wrote:
requalified

Don't you mean flame (approval)?

Anyways, re-congratz!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-08-10T14:08:49+00:00

Regratz Lama!

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Ayana Hana 2015-08-10T14:45:26+00:00

many thanks о.о

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-10T16:53:34+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Karen wrote:
requalified
Don't you mean flame (approval)?

Anyways, re-congratz!

oh, i forgot to use flame icon;;

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,959 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2015-08-10T18:02:22+00:00

edit your post to a flame icon then?

if you really care

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-08-10T21:37:35+00:00

i care a lot

toybot

1,067 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2015-08-13T22:39:27+00:00

having a heart icon is bad for your health

shouldn't denkare be in tags at least? seeing that the group is known by that abbreviation

Nomination Assessment Team

182 posts

Joined August 2014

Nomination Assessment Team 2015-08-16T03:10:50+00:00

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Unused file

There is an unused file in your song's folder. It has to be removed.

Denkare - When Dreams End (Lama Poluna).osb

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###A

Surono

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Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-08-16T18:30:47+00:00

.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-08-18T16:05:53+00:00

...yeah right

Bubble #1 again.

Koiyuki