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Frim4503
thank you for mod
fix all


Tornspirit
Hi!
1|2|3|4|5

Greget
00:30:025 (30025|4) - I think this note should be a LN
00:31:054 (31054|2) - Same ^
00:35:511 (35511|4) - ^
01:03:111 (63111|2) - Maybe move to 5?

I think this makes more sense than the current pattern
01:36:025 - add 2
01:36:197 (96197|2) - remove
01:36:282 - add 2 or 3
01:36:454 - add 3

01:47:082 (107082|2,107082|4,107168|3,107168|1,107340|1,107340|3) - Maybe use same pattern as 04:01:397 (241397|3,241397|1,241482|0,241482|2,241654|3,241654|1,241740|2,241740|4) -

01:51:882 - add 4 for drum

01:58:054 (118054|4,118054|2,118140|1,118140|3) - move back 1/4th to start at 01:57:968
01:58:225 - add 1+3
01:58:311 (118311|2,118311|0) - change to 2+4
01:58:397 - add 1+3

02:08:940 - add 4
02:09:197 - add 5
02:09:282 (129282|4) - move 3
02:09:368 - add 5

03:04:140 (184140|2,184140|3) - Not sure if this should be double... keep consistent with 04:34:654 (274654|0) -

04:12:454 (252454|2,252454|3,252540|1,252540|0) - Move back 1/4th to start at 04:12:368
04:12:625 - add 2+4
04:12:711 (252711|1) - move to 3
04:12:797 - add 2+4

04:23:340 - add 2
04:23:597 - add 4
04:23:682 (263682|3) - move 5
04:23:768 - add 4

04:34:654 (274654|0) - If you're keeping 03:04:140 (184140|2,184140|3) - as double, change this to double as well
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Tornspirit wrote:

Hi! For m4m
1|2|3|4|5

Greget
00:30:025 (30025|4) - I think this note should be a LN no. the sound stop right away
00:31:054 (31054|2) - Same ^ ^
00:35:511 (35511|4) - ^ ^
01:03:111 (63111|2) - Maybe move to 5? keep. for balance

I think this makes more sense than the current pattern
01:36:025 - add 2
01:36:197 (96197|2) - remove
01:36:282 - add 2 or 3
01:36:454 - add 3
^reject all. what sound you follow ?
01:47:082 (107082|2,107082|4,107168|3,107168|1,107340|1,107340|3) - Maybe use same pattern as 04:01:397 (241397|3,241397|1,241482|0,241482|2,241654|3,241654|1,241740|2,241740|4) - maybe it sound same it's obvious not

01:51:882 - add 4 for drum no drum sound

01:58:054 (118054|4,118054|2,118140|1,118140|3) - move back 1/4th to start at 01:57:968 fix
01:58:225 - add 1+3 fix
01:58:311 (118311|2,118311|0) - change to 2+4
01:58:397 - add 1+3

02:08:940 - add 4
02:09:197 - add 5
02:09:282 (129282|4) - move 3
02:09:368 - add 5

03:04:140 (184140|2,184140|3) - Not sure if this should be double... keep consistent with 04:34:654 (274654|0) - it's obvious difference sound :v. the first is clap(double) the after is hithat (single)

04:12:454 (252454|2,252454|3,252540|1,252540|0) - Move back 1/4th to start at 04:12:368
04:12:625 - add 2+4
04:12:711 (252711|1) - move to 3
04:12:797 - add 2+4

04:23:340 - add 2
04:23:597 - add 4
04:23:682 (263682|3) - move 5
04:23:768 - add 4

04:34:654 (274654|0) - If you're keeping 03:04:140 (184140|2,184140|3) - as double, change this to double as well
thanks for mod. other are ok

Verniy_Chan

Language : English
Hi Juna

Mod Via PM
: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue
General
■ Mapset


■ Metadata


■ Timing


■ Audio


■ Background


■ Other

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)

Greget
HP : 8
OD : 8

00:03:282 (3282|4) - change into Clap

00:06:025 (6025|0) - ^

00:10:140 (10140|4) - move to 3

00:11:682 - 00:19:568 - why you not put note all red tick 1/4, since there synth sounds

00:26:082 (26082|2) - move to 2

00:27:282 (27282|2) - LN here, seem hard to play

00:50:082 (50082|0) - you put jack pattern for low stream beat, but you not put in other red tick

00:58:311 (58311|3,58482|4) - move to left 1x

00:59:511 (59511|1) - move to 1, avoid spam pattern

01:03:282 - still hear sound here like 01:03:454 -

01:08:597 (68597|2,68682|1) - Ctrl + G

01:14:768 (74768|1,74940|0,75111|1) - considering some note move collum 4 or 5, for hand balance

01:15:454 (75454|4,75625|3,75797|4) - considering some note move collum 1 or 2, ^

01:32:597 (92597|2) - move to 5, 01:32:768 (92768|4,92940|3) - move to left 1x, then 01:33:111 (93111|2) - move to 5

01:40:311 (100311|1) - move to 1

01:50:254 - 01:51:625 - oh my.. too hard :P

01:55:740 (115740|2) - move to 2

02:03:797 - add note, still same pitch like 02:03:625 - 02:03:454 - 02:03:282 -

02:18:540 (138540|3) - move to 1

02:24:025 (144025|2,144197|1) - Ctrl + G

02:24:882 - same pitch like 02:24:540 -

02:27:282 (147282|3) - move to 3

02:27:625 (147625|2,147968|1) - Ctrl + G, then 02:28:311 (148311|2) - move to 2, 02:28:482 (148482|3,148654|2) - Ctrl + G

02:30:711 (150711|4) - ???

02:38:425 (158425|2,158511|3,158597|4) - move to left 1x

02:47:511 (167511|0) - move to 3

03:03:111 (183111|1,183282|2) - move to left 1x, avoid spam pattern

03:13:568 (193568|3) - move to 3, eeh seem i feel "de ja vu" pattern xD

03:48:882 (228882|3) - move to 3

03:51:968 (231968|3,232140|4) - Ctrl + G

03:56:082 - 03:56:254 - add note, check pitch

04:01:225 (241225|3) - move to 1

04:28:654 (268654|2) - moveto 5

04:34:825 - avoid 04:35:168 -

04:51:454 (291454|3) - move to 2, then 04:51:282 (291282|4) - move to 4

04:55:397 (295397|4) - move to 4

04:55:740 (295740|4) - move to 3

04:56:768 (296768|2,296940|2) - avoid shield pattern, not suit

05:09:111 (309111|3,309282|3,309454|3) - avoid 3 jack

hue.. finally mod end~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
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(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only
Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all but...

OD and HP keep for now
00:50:082 (50082|0) - you put jack pattern for low stream beat, but you not put in other red tick idk where to put it
01:50:254 - 01:51:625 - oh my.. too hard keep for now
02:30:711 (150711|4) - ??? idk know waht sound it is



thanks for mod
Chronocide

Mod level: Light

From the modding plaza o/
Interesting mapping style. Many people would've made this map way more difficult, with trills and whatnot.
Also, you could easily push up the *rating, by charting the unused sounds in the song, perhaps consider adding a diff spread?

General

  1. Timing: Totally rad
  2. Sound: Awesomesauce
  3. SV-changes: Subtle, but nice <3
  4. Metadata: Seems ok
Greget

  1. 00:11:682 (11682|3,11854|0,12025|3,12197|0), etc - Alternate this a bit more
  2. 00:14:425 (14425|0,14597|4) - ^
  3. 04:27:968 (267968|4) - Uhm, what? Why the 1/8's?
  4. 04:51:454 (291454|1) - Very nice! Like these LN's!
Very short mod, since it plays really well! And I'm lazy
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hola

Sorry for long delay

Just suggestion here

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
Click me!
[Greget]00:02:768 (2768|2,2768|1) - ini knp double? perasaan ngga ada drum/kick cuman ada clap sama synth?
00:05:511 (5511|0,5511|2) - ini jg. malah suaranya kayak ini 00:06:197 (6197|2,6882|4) -
00:08:254 (8254|2,8254|3) - ini jg dst
01:00:540 - missing?
01:11:511 (71511|4,71682|1) - ini ganti ke LN sama kayak ini 01:13:911 (73911|3) - ?
01:19:397 (79397|0,79568|3,79740|1,79911|4) - ctrl + H? pitch turun
01:42:197 - add note? ada bass kek 01:42:540 (102540|4,102540|3,102882|4,102882|3,103225|4,103225|3) - . kalo kata ane mending part bas ini dijadiin 1/2 LN biar asik dimainin. but terserah cuman suggest :3
04:06:025 (246025|4,246197|3) - swap colomb? karna ini beda pitchnya lho

Cute BG. >,<)/
Well Good luck =w=)b
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Han Solo wrote:


Mod level: Light

From the modding plaza o/
Interesting mapping style. Many people would've made this map way more difficult, with trills and whatnot.
Also, you could easily push up the *rating, by charting the unused sounds in the song, perhaps consider adding a diff spread?

General

  1. Timing: Totally rad
  2. Sound: Awesomesauce
  3. SV-changes: Subtle, but nice <3
  4. Metadata: Seems ok
Greget

  1. 00:11:682 (11682|3,11854|0,12025|3,12197|0), etc - Alternate this a bit more keep. i like the current pattern
  2. 00:14:425 (14425|0,14597|4) - ^ ^
  3. 04:27:968 (267968|4) - Uhm, what? Why the 1/8's? it's 1/8. try listen it at 50% playback
  4. 04:51:454 (291454|1) - Very nice! Like these LN's! thank you >.<
Very short mod, since it plays really well! And I'm lazy
idk what are you trying to do but thank you for mod.
about adding spread, i'm not going do that cuz it's 5 min song and i want to keep this map easy like my other map. so, many people can enjoy this
Topic Starter
Frim4503

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hola

Sorry for long delay

Just suggestion here

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
Click me!
[Greget]00:02:768 (2768|2,2768|1) - ini knp double? perasaan ngga ada drum/kick cuman ada clap sama synth? ada drum tapi samar"
00:05:511 (5511|0,5511|2) - ini jg. malah suaranya kayak ini 00:06:197 (6197|2,6882|4) - ^
00:08:254 (8254|2,8254|3) - ini jg dst ^
01:00:540 - missing? fix
01:11:511 (71511|4,71682|1) - ini ganti ke LN sama kayak ini 01:13:911 (73911|3) - ? ada 2 suara piano. ga kaya yg satunya ada 1 suara piano tpi panjang
01:19:397 (79397|0,79568|3,79740|1,79911|4) - ctrl + H? pitch turun ok
01:42:197 - add note? ada bass kek 01:42:540 (102540|4,102540|3,102882|4,102882|3,103225|4,103225|3) - . kalo kata ane mending part bas ini dijadiin 1/2 LN biar asik dimainin. but terserah cuman suggest :3 conside for now
04:06:025 (246025|4,246197|3) - swap colomb? karna ini beda pitchnya lho ok

Cute BG. >,<)/i know what you mean >.<
Well Good luck =w=)b
thank you for mod


Rivals_7
Hi~ From my queue
Not much. But I hope it helps

Mod Inside
[Greget]

1|2|3|4|5

00:19:740 (19740|1) - ke 3? biar nyaman aja ngehitnya
01:18:197 (78197|1) - ke 1?
01:20:254 (80254|0,80425|1,80597|2) - 2|3|5 berturut-turut
01:57:968 (117968|2,117968|4) - kayak gak ada suaranya? ngemap suara apa ini?
03:04:140 (184140|3,184140|2) - suaranya sama kayak single notes disini - 03:03:797 (183797|2) - dan - 03:04:482 (184482|2) - jadi delete mungkin?
03:48:368 - missing note. keep the consistencies
03:50:425 - ^
03:51:111 - ^
03:53:854 - ^
04:23:340 (263340|2,263425|3) - kayaknya gk nyaman xD. geser selangkah ke kiri

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue
Not much. But I hope it helps

Mod Inside
[Greget]

1|2|3|4|5

00:19:740 (19740|1) - ke 3? biar nyaman aja ngehitnya ok. and make some arangement
01:18:197 (78197|1) - ke 1? keep. bayangan dari 01:17:511 (77511|1,77682|3,77854|4) -
01:20:254 (80254|0,80425|1,80597|2) - 2|3|5 berturut-turut ^
01:57:968 (117968|2,117968|4) - kayak gak ada suaranya? ngemap suara apa ini? aku juga ga tau. btw fix
03:04:140 (184140|3,184140|2) - suaranya sama kayak single notes disini - 03:03:797 (183797|2) - dan - 03:04:482 (184482|2) - jadi delete mungkin? disitu ada suara clap kk. jdi keep
03:48:368 - missing note. keep the consistencies ga ada suara piano. itu yg single note suara piano yg dobel suara clap
03:50:425 - ^ ^
03:51:111 - ^ ^
03:53:854 - ^ ^
04:23:340 (263340|2,263425|3) - kayaknya gk nyaman xD. geser selangkah ke kiri oke

Good Luck :3
thanks for mod


JamesHappy
hi

right now, tbh i don't like some patterns you are using, makes me cringes so hard. Anyway that is just my opinion on this map.

00:16:997 - 00:21:111 - might wanna add some 1/4 stream (same to other parts have like this) (i can hear some 1/4 streams) (but i know you will ignore this cause you don't want make it harder)

some pattern suggestions

00:26:254 -
00:29:340 - try this

00:31:740 - why not try some alternating patterns

00:37:225 - 00:38:597

00:41:682 - 00:43:054


00:54:025 (54025|0,54068|1,54111|2,54154|4,54197|3,54240|2,54282|1,54325|0,54368|4,54368|2) - ctrl + h for hand balance

02:34:825 (154825|1,154825|4,154825|2) - whis is this 3 notes when 01:50:940 (110940|4,110940|1) - is just 2

02:40:825 (160825|3,160911|2) - ctrl+G
02:43:825 (163825|2,163911|1) - ^

02:46:140 (166140|0) - do this


02:51:625 (171625|2,171711|1) - ctrl + G
03:03:968 (183968|3) - move to 4 (balance)
04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - make it one

im done with this
also don't forget mine
GL~
Topic Starter
Frim4503

JamesHappy15 wrote:

hi

right now, tbh i don't like some patterns you are using, makes me cringes so hard. Anyway that is just my opinion on this map.

00:16:997 - 00:21:111 - might wanna add some 1/4 stream (same to other parts have like this) (i can hear some 1/4 streams) (but i know you will ignore this cause you don't want make it harder) yup. cuz this only the beginning. so, i want to make it simple

some pattern suggestions

00:26:254 -
00:29:340 - try this

00:31:740 - why not try some alternating patterns

00:37:225 - 00:38:597

00:41:682 - 00:43:054


00:54:025 (54025|0,54068|1,54111|2,54154|4,54197|3,54240|2,54282|1,54325|0,54368|4,54368|2) - ctrl + h for hand balance

02:34:825 (154825|1,154825|4,154825|2) - whis is this 3 notes when 01:50:940 (110940|4,110940|1) - is just 2 the 3 notes has more louder sound than 2 notes.

02:40:825 (160825|3,160911|2) - ctrl+G
02:43:825 (163825|2,163911|1) - ^

02:46:140 (166140|0) - do this


02:51:625 (171625|2,171711|1) - ctrl + G
03:03:968 (183968|3) - move to 4 (balance)
04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - make it one synth sound. so, it must double like prev. note

im done with this
also don't forget mine
GL~
thanks for mod. i will mod your map later

dionzz99
can't mod..
its 5k lel
Topic Starter
Frim4503

dionzz99 wrote:

can't mod..
its 5k lel
-_-
makanya belajar dari skrg
dionzz99

Frim4503 wrote:

makanya belajar dari skrg
iyadeh...
no. nevermind ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Adtw_

hy mz <(")
greget diff strikes again xD

|1|2|3|4|5|


[Greget]
00:54:025 - http://puu.sh/jGNgB.png
01:04:997 - lebih enak gini menurutku http://puu.sh/jGNkU.png
01:50:940 - btw ini knp ada 2 note :o suggestion: 01:50:254 - http://puu.sh/jGNEc.png
02:12:197 - http://puu.sh/jGNS2.png streamnya enak mz <(")
02:13:568 - coba streamnya kyk gini http://puu.sh/jGNYp.png, terus 02:14:254 - kyknya ini cmn 2 note suggestion: http://puu.sh/jGO0c.png
02:51:968 (171968|4) - LN end di 02:52:311 -
04:01:654 (241654|1,241654|3) - disitu ghost note kyknya, harusnya disini mz 04:01:568 -
04:01:654 (241654|3) - missing note?
04:28:097 (268097|1,268140|0) - ctrl+g
05:10:311 (310311|0) - move ke 5
05:10:482 (310482|4) - ^ klo iya, move ke 1
05:10:482 - ^ klo iya, pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/jGOBE.png

[MOD END]

Goodluck mz :D
Take my star
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Adtw_ wrote:


hy mz <(")
greget diff strikes again xD

|1|2|3|4|5|


[Greget]
00:54:025 - http://puu.sh/jGNgB.png
01:04:997 - lebih enak gini menurutku http://puu.sh/jGNkU.png
01:50:940 - btw ini knp ada 2 note :o suggestion: 01:50:254 - http://puu.sh/jGNEc.png yg 2 note karna ada something sound. entah apa namanya
02:12:197 - http://puu.sh/jGNS2.png streamnya enak mz <(")
02:13:568 - coba streamnya kyk gini http://puu.sh/jGNYp.png, terus 02:14:254 - kyknya ini cmn 2 note suggestion: http://puu.sh/jGO0c.png
02:51:968 (171968|4) - LN end di 02:52:311 - itu udh bener. udh confirm sama ExUsagi
04:01:654 (241654|1,241654|3) - disitu ghost note kyknya, harusnya disini mz 04:01:568 -
04:01:654 (241654|3) - missing note? ?? bukannya udh ada note disitu ?
04:28:097 (268097|1,268140|0) - ctrl+g
05:10:311 (310311|0) - move ke 5
05:10:482 (310482|4) - ^ klo iya, move ke 1
05:10:482 - ^ klo iya, pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/jGOBE.png

[MOD END]

Goodluck mz :D
Take my star
thanks for mod.
no reply=aplied

Aruel


Hi Frim! Mod from Your M4M request!

|1|2|3|4|5|

[General]
BG: No problem
MP3: No problem
Spread: No problem
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: No problem But I just suggest to remove "C" hitsound and just use the Clap sound.
Timing: No problem
Etc: It seems reference the ranked map already No has any problem in Metadata.
Nice job O.O Can's find any problems!

[Greget]
00:18:197 - How about add one like 00:16:825 - Here? oh It seems hitsound. But for consistent XD

00:22:825 (22825|4) - It have to finish in here. 00:23:082 - And I suggest to add one NM note in here. 00:23:082

00:35:511 (35511|4) - How about change to LN? I saw your pattern. It should be LN I guess like 00:31:568 (31568|0) here.

00:38:597 (38597|2) - How about move to 5 for balance? And If you follow this...00:38:940 (38940|4) - Move to 3 for more more good balance XD

00:44:254 (44254|4) - I think If it be a Just NM note. More be good. Because... Yes here's has some LN sound but not good fit with 00:43:740 (43740|0,43911|1,44082|2) - This LN guys. Some players will boring I guess.

01:05:340 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564494

01:41:168 (101168|1,101340|0,101511|1,101682|2,101854|3) - This pattern should start in here I guess. 01:40:997

01:44:940 - Add two notes. Because of pattern. 01:42:197 (102197|4,102197|2) - Seems same sounds with here.

01:51:968 (111968|4) - How about add clap sound in here?

02:09:797 - How about this? 4.5 column is too long same chord and for more fun. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564552

02:39:968 (159968|3) - is sounds finish in 02:40:225 - Here. you can reference first same part 00:21:797 -

03:03:282 (183282|4) - Move to 4 and 03:03:454 (183454|3) - to 5 and 03:03:625 (183625|4) - to 4 For more good balance.

04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - Remove one for your pattern. like 04:10:311 (250311|2) - Here.

04:51:454 - I just want to say. I like this part ><

Seems really good map :)

Good luck XD
Topic Starter
Frim4503

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi Frim! Mod from Your M4M request!

|1|2|3|4|5|

[General]
BG: No problem
MP3: No problem
Spread: No problem
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: No problem But I just suggest to remove "C" hitsound and just use the Clap sound. idk what you mean by "C". cuz i'm only use custom hs and "E" for finish
Timing: No problem
Etc: It seems reference the ranked map already No has any problem in Metadata.
Nice job O.O Can's find any problems!

[Greget]
00:18:197 - How about add one like 00:16:825 - Here? oh It seems hitsound. But for consistent XD keep for now. nothing to foolow xD

00:22:825 (22825|4) - It have to finish in here. 00:23:082 - And I suggest to add one NM note in here. 00:23:082 what sound it is ?

00:35:511 (35511|4) - How about change to LN? I saw your pattern. It should be LN I guess like 00:31:568 (31568|0) here.

00:38:597 (38597|2) - How about move to 5 for balance? And If you follow this...00:38:940 (38940|4) - Move to 3 for more more good balance XD

00:44:254 (44254|4) - I think If it be a Just NM note. More be good. Because... Yes here's has some LN sound but not good fit with 00:43:740 (43740|0,43911|1,44082|2) - This LN guys. Some players will boring I guess.keep for now and i didn't care for guys get boring for this pattern xD

01:05:340 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564494

01:41:168 (101168|1,101340|0,101511|1,101682|2,101854|3) - This pattern should start in here I guess. 01:40:997

01:44:940 - Add two notes. Because of pattern. 01:42:197 (102197|4,102197|2) - Seems same sounds with here.

01:51:968 (111968|4) - How about add clap sound in here?

02:09:797 - How about this? 4.5 column is too long same chord and for more fun. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564552

02:39:968 (159968|3) - is sounds finish in 02:40:225 - Here. you can reference first same part 00:21:797 -

03:03:282 (183282|4) - Move to 4 and 03:03:454 (183454|3) - to 5 and 03:03:625 (183625|4) - to 4 For more good balance.

04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - Remove one for your pattern. like 04:10:311 (250311|2) - Here.

04:51:454 - I just want to say. I like this part ><

Seems really good map :)

Good luck XD
no reply=fix
thank you for mod :D

Aruel
00:54:025 (54025|4,54068|3,54111|0,54154|1,54197|4,54240|3,54282|0,54325|1) -

C means here XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565027
Topic Starter
Frim4503

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

00:54:025 (54025|4,54068|3,54111|0,54154|1,54197|4,54240|3,54282|0,54325|1) -

C means here XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565027
oh..
thank you for mention it
i didn't remember adding that hs -_-

fix


DJ Profetti
m4m from queue :D
mod this please
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/337871

mod

nice song and map, good luck :D
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Taiwan_CDZ wrote:

m4m from queue :D
mod this please ok. will mod later
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/337871

mod
  • 00:13:911 to 00:14:254 follow 1/4 is better keep. i wanna make it simple
    00:18:368 to 00:19:740 same as above ^
    00:20:082 and 00:20:768 add more notes
    00:20:597 or you want to add a note here
    00:30:025 miss note only use single note for whistle
    00:35:511 miss
    00:36:197 remove one or add here 00:32:082 and 00:33:454
    00:38:597 (38597|4) - remove no drum, maybe change to LN
    00:54:711 to 00:55:054 1/4 better keep. idk what you mean
    01:22:140 (82140|3) - remove, the bell is not in 01:22:140
    01:40:997 change http://i.imgur.com/Oe7l794.jpg?1 or http://i.imgur.com/xs9QH8z.jpg?1
    01:42:197 (102197|3,102197|4) - remove one
    01:44:940 (104940|0,104940|4) - remove one
    01:47:082 (107082|2,107082|4) - move one to 01:46:997 or remove one keep. fit the song
    01:50:940 (110940|1) - remove or you need to add here 01:50:597 and 01:51:282 there for cymbal sound if you hear it
    01:58:054 (118054|1,118054|3) - move one to 01:57:968 or remove one keep. fit the song
    02:03:625 (123625|2) - move to 4 is better to play
    02:12:882 (132882|4) - remove cymbal
    02:19:054 http://i.imgur.com/qXhDXv1.jpg?1
    02:20:768 (140768|0) - move to 2
    02:26:940 http://i.imgur.com/3lkcO6u.jpg?1
    02:28:654 http://i.imgur.com/7JhRv3Z.jpg?1
    02:40:482 http://i.imgur.com/iNmgb9o.jpg?1
    02:42:197 (162197|3,162368|2) - change
    03:02:940 http://i.imgur.com/QkOwWIX.jpg?1
    03:47:511 (227511|3,227682|2) - ctrl+J
    04:01:482 remove one keeep
    04:04:311 http://i.imgur.com/JfNLKO2.jpg?1 ^
    04:12:454 (252454|0,252454|1) - remove one ^
    04:12:625 (252625|1,252625|3,252797|3,252797|1) - remove one ^
    04:12:368 http://i.imgur.com/T6zSH5Q.jpg?1 make some change
    04:26:597 http://i.imgur.com/WCfAKgB.jpg?1 keep
    04:35:854 (275854|2,276025|3,276197|4) - move to right 1 column
    04:38:254 (278254|4) - move to 4
    05:07:397 add
    05:07:568 add cus if you dont youll break the rhyme
    05:12:711 add LN

nice song and map, good luck :D
thank you for mod
no reply=fix

kagiii
Mod Ready ~~ sorry for delay

jangan di buka
[GREGETS]
00:03:797 (3797|4) - move ke 4 buat balance?
00:04:825 (4825|3) - ^ ke 3?
00:08:254 (8254|2) - gak di move ke 2 aja ?
00:24:968 - 00:25:054 - add note ? ada suara atau hapus LN nya 00:24:968 (24968|0) -
00:24:882 - add note , bass
00:26:254 - ^
00:29:340 - ^
01:34:311 (94311|2,94482|1) - Ctrl + J?
02:09:368 (129368|4) - ghost note ?
02:44:854 (164854|3) - hapus 02:44:940 - add
02:50:340 - sama ^
03:03:968 (183968|1,184311|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri ?
04:12:368 - add 1 note di 3
05:07:397 (307397|3,307568|2) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri

done~
instrumen nya ok , vocal nya gak suka kwkwk :v
Good Luck~~ :)
Topic Starter
Frim4503

ExKagii- wrote:

Mod Ready ~~ sorry for delay

jangan di buka
[GREGETS]
00:03:797 (3797|4) - move ke 4 buat balance?
00:04:825 (4825|3) - ^ ke 3?
00:08:254 (8254|2) - gak di move ke 2 aja ?
00:24:968 - 00:25:054 - add note ? ada suara atau hapus LN nya 00:24:968 (24968|0) - keep. karna LN itu suara panjang
00:24:882 - add note , bass keep. karna suara bass cuma pake 1 note
00:26:254 - ^ ^
00:29:340 - ^ ^
01:34:311 (94311|2,94482|1) - Ctrl + J?
02:09:368 (129368|4) - ghost note ? ada suara om. dengerin aja bahik bahik
02:44:854 (164854|3) - hapus 02:44:940 - add
02:50:340 - sama ^
03:03:968 (183968|1,184311|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri ?
04:12:368 - add 1 note di 3
05:07:397 (307397|3,307568|2) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri

done~
instrumen nya ok , vocal nya gak suka kwkwk :v
Good Luck~~ :)
ok
thank you for mod

Bruce
Final Burst _(:з」∠)_ Need rest
1 2 3 4 5
Let's go
[marathon]
00:50:082 - You need double here too.Likes after

00:50:254 - ~ 00:52:482 - Bit boring.Suggest you make some new patterns

00:52:654 - ~ 00:53:940 - after test seems stair give me boring feelings.Suggest you https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3688126

01:03:625 - ~ 01:04:997 - This pattern seems appear 3rd

01:04:997 - Suggest you make stream instead of stair

01:38:597 (98597|0,98597|3) - Choose 1 move to 3 or 5.Here 1 sound is the same likes after.So you need make this effect.

01:42:025 - ~ 01:47:511 - Here the Doubles are abrupt.here i suggest you catch mainly sound and beat to make different feelings.

So can make 01:47:511 - Doubles clearly.

02:34:140 - ~ 02:35:511 - Make stream instead of stair

02:39:968 (159968|3) - This hold should end at 02:40:140 - end then add 1 note here.

03:19:397 - here if you want to make stair please make variety

04:01:911 - ~ 04:04:654 - Too many the same patterns please rethink.

Good Luck
Topic Starter
Frim4503
done
fix all

EDIT :internet bangsat (eror during upload)

Bruce
Bubbled #1.Congrats
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thank you so much >.<
Deep Sea
Hi, check

mp3, bg, metadata and timing is fine

[Greget]
00:53:854 (53854|1,53940|3) - ctrl + h
01:06:368 (66368|1) - move to 1
01:38:768 (98768|4) - move to 4
03:59:511 (239511|4) - move to 1
03:59:682 (239682|3) - move to 4

call me after update

p.s good 5K map
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all

Deep Sea
Bubbled #2
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thanks

let's find someone to flame this
Arzenvald
wOOOt this is interesting aaaaaa
Raediaufar
Another greget diff? o.o

Btw congratz for qualify
Topic Starter
Frim4503
salah nulis itu om :v
qualify aja belum
hrsnya good luck for qualify >.<
Arzenvald
slot when ;w;
Topic Starter
Frim4503
finally you back >.<
udh ga stress lagi ama pekerjaan ?

#aku juga tau rasanya stress disaat bekerja
Arzenvald
i'll find some slot tonight, stuff has been checked thoroughly and i love this map.. \w/
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