Howdy there, i'm posting this for a m4m from your queue.
[Beginning]
00:03:783 (2,1) - the 3.58 DS jump feels awkward and overmapped.
00:08:283 (1,2,3) - This seems like an abrupt halt. Maybe space these out more to continue with the earlier flow you had
00:10:083 (2) - NC for SV change
00:13:683 (1,2) - not really sure if you need a NC here since its a tiny SV change. (i also don't see the need for a tiny SV change
00:17:283 (1,2) - you blanketed 2 on the second half of 1, so why not use 00:16:683 (1,2) - to blanket the first half? It'd be cute as fuck
00:19:083 (1,1) - to me it sounds like they are following the same sound (i could easily be wrong) so why do they have such drastically different SV changes?
00:23:883 (3,4) - Just my preference here, but i would scrap the overlap, and just extend 00:23:883 (3) - to follow the vocals
00:29:283 (1,2,1) - The vocals seem more dominant for this section, so why not focus on them?
00:30:183 (1) - it's a bit uneven, just saying
00:31:683 (1,2) - you could make this a swagtastic
blanket. It would look a lot cleaner
00:45:183 (1,2,3) - NC for these 3 SV changes
00:53:883 (1,2,3,4) - as cute as this is, these jumps feel out of place because the music hasn't really changed that dramatically to foster them jumps
01:52:083 (4,5) - extend 4 and remove 5 to match the vocals better
01:53:283 (1) - this SV just clogs up the flow of the map. It feels way too funky
02:42:033 (6,1) - you really like overlapping the sliders like this in this song, but maybe you could spruce it up a bit by stacking their slider-ends
03:09:783 (6) - NC
03:29:283 (7) - Maybe you could change this into a funky slow slider to fill up the dead space
03:57:483 (1,2,3,4) - an alternative to these jumps could be to making a slider and matching the vocals
03:58:083 (1) - and 01:53:283 (1) - should really have the same SV, since they are practically identical parts in the song
03:56:583 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - and 01:51:783 (3,4,5) - should also be somewhat similar since these are also similar parts
04:32:883 (1,2) - make these into a single slider to match 04:31:683 (1,1) - since you are aiming for the vocals at this part
04:40:983 (1) - should really start where its slider-end currently is cuz red ticks are bad (and so it matches with 04:40:083 (1) - )
04:40:083 (1,1) - I don't see the big deal in these two having different SV changes
Besides some of the wild SV changes, i really liked the map, not to mention that the song is gucci. Dropping a star for good luck!