Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-
[General]
[Ky's Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing.
Good luck~^^
Very moe song -w-
[General]
- Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder....
- You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし! and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし! instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either.
- Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags.
- Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours)
- Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break
- You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w-
[Ky's Easy]
- 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change these position so it would form a rectangular shape... rough example http://puu.sh/jl4PC/c822ce2a32.jpg
- 00:07:234 Maybe add a note here to support the silent sound; I mean it feels weird to stop here 00:06:829 while there's still sound after that before it's actually stopping
- Why you keep using the same rhythm ;-;
- 00:20:004 (2) - Just suggestion but I think it would be good to end this here 00:20:612 and add a circle here 00:21:018 http://puu.sh/jl545/c7493d61f1.jpg Since the sound at 00:21:018 is very big, it would be better to make it clickable so it would be more emphasized, the sound here 00:20:612 is pretty big as well so you better don't ignore it, furthermore, it's better to differentiate the long vocal with the "daisuki"
- 00:29:937 (3,4) - Fit more with a 1/1 reverse slider followed by a circle. DS ing btw, if you do so http://puu.sh/jl5og/90c5a7ca08.jpg
- 01:01:964 Very sad that you can't support the "hai" here ;-; because of spinner gap
- 01:05:612 (1,3) - Maybe you could make these identical, looks nice imo http://puu.sh/jl5wo/9bdd61d919.jpg
- 01:09:261 The sound here is pretty big actually .-. maybe you could change 01:08:856 (1) - into 1/1 reverse slider or at least at a red anchor at the clap.
- 01:13:112 (2) - Pls end this here 01:13:518 the sound is very big there, you can use circle to support the next sound http://puu.sh/jl5Gm/35ee118dcf.jpg
- 01:20:207 (3,4) - Actually rhythm like this http://puu.sh/jl5J4/0f0f99dfee.jpg would fit better since the big sound is here 01:20:815 but meh, DS
- 01:22:234 Ignored big sound
[Normal]
- AR 5 pls
- 00:16:964 Pls don't ignore this very big sound. Swap 00:16:761 (4,5) - place http://puu.sh/jl5UN/f5074c18b2.jpg
- 00:43:720 (6,1) - Blanket the tail pls
- 01:14:734 The sound here is more worth emphasized with reverse than the one here 01:14:329 swap 01:13:923 (1,2) - pls http://puu.sh/jl633/d9f8a6357c.jpg
- Nice rhythm but maybe you can improve your placement a bit. Start by fixing your blankets, most of them are still off. Use approach circle as guide.
[Hard]
- AR 7.5, using AR 8 kinda ruin the diff spread, the song is not that fast tho
- 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you used harder rhythm for Normal...
- 00:14:531 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really hear a sound that support stream .-. don't use "filler" stream at Hard, delete this note 00:14:633 (2) - to make a triplet instead. Or you could make it into 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jl6mb/3acd9f13a5.jpg No need to NC here 00:14:531 BTW
- 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, DS please. Since 00:30:545 (3) - is a filler, no need to jump; for this part 00:31:558 (1,2,3,4) - I understand if you want to emphasize it so you make it kinda jumpy.
- 00:50:410 (3,4) - The jump is too far, reduce it a bit http://puu.sh/jl6uN/68ed1a73a4.jpg avoid 3.0+ spacing at Hard.
- 01:02:166 (2) - delete this note please, it follows nothing. You better make a short pause after the "hai"
- 01:13:923 (1) - Remove NC
- Fix your blankets
[Insane]
- AR 8.5 or 9
- 00:05:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g, it'll flow better from the previous note and to the next note
- 00:15:341 (1,2) - Why reduce spacing... DS please
- 00:27:302 (5) - Change this into a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/jl6XS/761bd2c3d0.jpg there's a sound here 00:27:504 you better don't ignore it
- 00:56:491 Add a note, there's a sound there
- 01:17:572 (5,1) - Stack pls
- 01:20:612 (3,6) - ^
- You overused finish hitsound; and please fix your blankets.
- Edit : I agree here 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - please no clap, use whistle if you want or just remove the whole hitsound
At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing.
Good luck~^^