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micchi_chi
Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder....
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし! and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし! instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either.
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags.
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours)
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w-

[Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change these position so it would form a rectangular shape... rough example http://puu.sh/jl4PC/c822ce2a32.jpg
  2. 00:07:234 Maybe add a note here to support the silent sound; I mean it feels weird to stop here 00:06:829 while there's still sound after that before it's actually stopping
  3. Why you keep using the same rhythm ;-;
  4. 00:20:004 (2) - Just suggestion but I think it would be good to end this here 00:20:612 and add a circle here 00:21:018 http://puu.sh/jl545/c7493d61f1.jpg Since the sound at 00:21:018 is very big, it would be better to make it clickable so it would be more emphasized, the sound here 00:20:612 is pretty big as well so you better don't ignore it, furthermore, it's better to differentiate the long vocal with the "daisuki"
  5. 00:29:937 (3,4) - Fit more with a 1/1 reverse slider followed by a circle. DS ing btw, if you do so http://puu.sh/jl5og/90c5a7ca08.jpg
  6. 01:01:964 Very sad that you can't support the "hai" here ;-; because of spinner gap
  7. 01:05:612 (1,3) - Maybe you could make these identical, looks nice imo http://puu.sh/jl5wo/9bdd61d919.jpg
  8. 01:09:261 The sound here is pretty big actually .-. maybe you could change 01:08:856 (1) - into 1/1 reverse slider or at least at a red anchor at the clap.
  9. 01:13:112 (2) - Pls end this here 01:13:518 the sound is very big there, you can use circle to support the next sound http://puu.sh/jl5Gm/35ee118dcf.jpg
  10. 01:20:207 (3,4) - Actually rhythm like this http://puu.sh/jl5J4/0f0f99dfee.jpg would fit better since the big sound is here 01:20:815 but meh, DS
  11. 01:22:234 Ignored big sound

[Normal]
  1. AR 5 pls
  2. 00:16:964 Pls don't ignore this very big sound. Swap 00:16:761 (4,5) - place http://puu.sh/jl5UN/f5074c18b2.jpg
  3. 00:43:720 (6,1) - Blanket the tail pls
  4. 01:14:734 The sound here is more worth emphasized with reverse than the one here 01:14:329 swap 01:13:923 (1,2) - pls http://puu.sh/jl633/d9f8a6357c.jpg
  5. Nice rhythm but maybe you can improve your placement a bit. Start by fixing your blankets, most of them are still off. Use approach circle as guide.

[Hard]
  1. AR 7.5, using AR 8 kinda ruin the diff spread, the song is not that fast tho
  2. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you used harder rhythm for Normal...
  3. 00:14:531 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really hear a sound that support stream .-. don't use "filler" stream at Hard, delete this note 00:14:633 (2) - to make a triplet instead. Or you could make it into 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jl6mb/3acd9f13a5.jpg No need to NC here 00:14:531 BTW
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, DS please. Since 00:30:545 (3) - is a filler, no need to jump; for this part 00:31:558 (1,2,3,4) - I understand if you want to emphasize it so you make it kinda jumpy.
  5. 00:50:410 (3,4) - The jump is too far, reduce it a bit http://puu.sh/jl6uN/68ed1a73a4.jpg avoid 3.0+ spacing at Hard.
  6. 01:02:166 (2) - delete this note please, it follows nothing. You better make a short pause after the "hai"
  7. 01:13:923 (1) - Remove NC
  8. Fix your blankets

[Insane]
  1. AR 8.5 or 9
  2. 00:05:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g, it'll flow better from the previous note and to the next note
  3. 00:15:341 (1,2) - Why reduce spacing... DS please
  4. 00:27:302 (5) - Change this into a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/jl6XS/761bd2c3d0.jpg there's a sound here 00:27:504 you better don't ignore it
  5. 00:56:491 Add a note, there's a sound there
  6. 01:17:572 (5,1) - Stack pls
  7. 01:20:612 (3,6) - ^
  8. You overused finish hitsound; and please fix your blankets.
  9. Edit : I agree here 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - please no clap, use whistle if you want or just remove the whole hitsound

At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing.

Good luck~^^
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder.... fixed
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし! and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし! instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either. fixed
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags. fixed
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours) I'll keep the current colors :O
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break fixed
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w- fixed

[Normal]
  1. AR 5 pls fixed
  2. 00:16:964 Pls don't ignore this very big sound. Swap 00:16:761 (4,5) - place http://puu.sh/jl5UN/f5074c18b2.jpg fixed
  3. 00:43:720 (6,1) - Blanket the tail pls fixed
  4. 01:14:734 The sound here is more worth emphasized with reverse than the one here 01:14:329 swap 01:13:923 (1,2) - pls fixedhttp://puu.sh/jl633/d9f8a6357c.jpg fixed
  5. Nice rhythm but maybe you can improve your placement a bit. Start by fixing your blankets, most of them are still off. Use approach circle as guide. will work on it

[Hard]
  1. AR 7.5, using AR 8 kinda ruin the diff spread, the song is not that fast tho fixed
  2. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you used harder rhythm for Normal... ._.
  3. 00:14:531 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really hear a sound that support stream .-. don't use "filler" stream at Hard, delete this note 00:14:633 (2) - to make a triplet instead. Or you could make it into 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jl6mb/3acd9f13a5.jpg No need to NC here 00:14:531 BTW fixed
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, DS please. Since 00:30:545 (3) - is a filler, no need to jump; for this part 00:31:558 (1,2,3,4) - I understand if you want to emphasize it so you make it kinda jumpy. fixed
  5. 00:50:410 (3,4) - The jump is too far, reduce it a bit http://puu.sh/jl6uN/68ed1a73a4.jpg avoid 3.0+ spacing at Hard. fixed
  6. 01:02:166 (2) - delete this note please, it follows nothing. You better make a short pause after the "hai" fixed
  7. 01:13:923 (1) - Remove NC fixed
  8. Fix your blankets will work on it

[Insane]
  1. AR 8.5 or 9 fixed
  2. 00:05:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g, it'll flow better from the previous note and to the next note fixed
  3. 00:15:341 (1,2) - Why reduce spacing... DS please fixed
  4. 00:27:302 (5) - Change this into a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/jl6XS/761bd2c3d0.jpg there's a sound here 00:27:504 you better don't ignore it fixed
  5. 00:56:491 Add a note, there's a sound there fixed
  6. 01:17:572 (5,1) - Stack pls fixed
  7. 01:20:612 (3,6) - ^ fixed
  8. You overused finish hitsound; and please fix your blankets. will work on it
  9. Edit : I agree here 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - please no clap, use whistle if you want or just remove the whole hitsound fixed

At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing. I'll improve ^^

Good luck~^^
thanks for the mod ^^
Kyle Y

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder....
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし! and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし! instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either.
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags.
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours)
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w-

[Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change these position so it would form a rectangular shape... rough example http://puu.sh/jl4PC/c822ce2a32.jpg remain
  2. 00:07:234 Maybe add a note here to support the silent sound; I mean it feels weird to stop here 00:06:829 while there's still sound after that before it's actually stopping fixed
  3. Why you keep using the same rhythm ;-; it is easier for new-player, that's the reason.
  4. 00:20:004 (2) - Just suggestion but I think it would be good to end this here 00:20:612 and add a circle here 00:21:018 http://puu.sh/jl545/c7493d61f1.jpg Since the sound at 00:21:018 is very big, it would be better to make it clickable so it would be more emphasized, the sound here 00:20:612 is pretty big as well so you better don't ignore it, furthermore, it's better to differentiate the long vocal with the "daisuki" fixed, thanks for the explanation. I have think of this problem, but cannot think of I can do this.
  5. 00:29:937 (3,4) - Fit more with a 1/1 reverse slider followed by a circle. DS ing btw, if you do so http://puu.sh/jl5og/90c5a7ca08.jpgremain, I hate reverse, I just avoid to use
  6. 01:01:964 Very sad that you can't support the "hai" here ;-; because of spinner gap you know it... :(
  7. 01:05:612 (1,3) - Maybe you could make these identical, looks nice imo http://puu.sh/jl5wo/9bdd61d919.jpgfixed
  8. 01:09:261 The sound here is pretty big actually .-. maybe you could change 01:08:856 (1) - into 1/1 reverse slider or at least at a red anchor at the clap. fixed
  9. 01:13:112 (2) - Pls end this here 01:13:518 the sound is very big there, you can use circle to support the next sound http://puu.sh/jl5Gm/35ee118dcf.jpg
  10. 01:20:207 (3,4) - Actually rhythm like this http://puu.sh/jl5J4/0f0f99dfee.jpg would fit better since the big sound is here 01:20:815 but meh, DS fixed
  11. 01:22:234 Ignored big soundfixed


Good luck~^^
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Gakkou Gurashi! OP - Opening (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62369
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.52

[Metadata]
Title:Friend Shitai
TitleUnicode:ふ・れ・ん・ど・し・た・い
Artist:Gakuen Seikabutsu
ArtistUnicode:Gakuen Seikabutsu
Creator:XxSeonxX
Version:Ky's Easy
Source:Gakkou Gurashi
Tags:anime op gakkou gurashi
BeatmapID:748586
BeatmapSetID:335730

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Zaphkael


Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours.

add audio lead-in

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.

Ky's Easy

  1. 01:09:666 (2,3) - maybe change things around to blanket 2 in 3?
Solid, no real problems.

Normal

  1. Combo colours.
  2. 00:02:369 (1) - maybe remove every second NC like this one to keep drain at least a bit.
  3. 00:35:004 (2,3) - switch these in time and place, so you have the rhythm note note slider slider, since it plays so much better.
  4. 00:36:423 (1,2) - don't stack these, it might be hard to read.
  5. 01:27:099 (2,3) - pure preference: to reduce difficulty and to emphasise the last note, i would make these a slider.

Hard

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them.
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song.
  3. 00:20:410 (1,2,3) - these aren't completely straight, so either make them like that, or make another shape like a small triangle
  4. nice diff! :)

Insane

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them.
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song.
  3. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - I would make the sliderheads slightly overlap each other, this is really hard right now, and it would tweak the diff a bit, for the diff gap I mentioned.
  4. 00:10:275 (1) - curve for flow
  5. 00:11:288 (5) - ^
  6. 00:21:018 (4) - I would increase spacing between this and the previous, to emphasise the strong 'end' of both vocal and instruments
  7. 01:08:856 (1) - I'd remove NC here
  8. 01:11:896 (1,2,3) - I'd curve this triple :lol:
  9. 01:27:504 (4) - spacing to emphasise 'end' of vocal and instruments

Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

inspectorscout wrote:



Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours. not sure which colour to add

add audio lead-in what does this mean?? ._.

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.


Normal

  1. Combo colours. fixed
  2. 00:02:369 (1) - maybe remove every second NC like this one to keep drain at least a bit. fixed
  3. 00:35:004 (2,3) - switch these in time and place, so you have the rhythm note note slider slider, since it plays so much better. fixed
  4. 00:36:423 (1,2) - don't stack these, it might be hard to read. fixed
  5. 01:27:099 (2,3) - pure preference: to reduce difficulty and to emphasise the last note, i would make these a slider. remain

Hard

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them. fixed
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song. fixed
  3. 00:20:410 (1,2,3) - these aren't completely straight, so either make them like that, or make another shape like a small triangle fixed
  4. nice diff! :) thanks ^^

Insane

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them. fixed
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song. fixed
  3. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - I would make the sliderheads slightly overlap each other, this is really hard right now, and it would tweak the diff a bit, for the diff gap I mentioned. fixed
  4. 00:10:275 (1) - curve for flow fixed
  5. 00:11:288 (5) - ^ fixed
  6. 00:21:018 (4) - I would increase spacing between this and the previous, to emphasise the strong 'end' of both vocal and instruments fixed
  7. 01:08:856 (1) - I'd remove NC here fixed
  8. 01:11:896 (1,2,3) - I'd curve this triple :lol: fixed
  9. 01:27:504 (4) - spacing to emphasise 'end' of vocal and instruments

Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y

inspectorscout wrote:



Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours.

add audio lead-in

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.

Ky's Easy

  1. 01:09:666 (2,3) - maybe change things around to blanket 2 in 3?
Solid, no real problems.

remain atm, both of them I think okay.



Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
Therefore no change
TheMefisto
Hi! From Modding queue.

  • Normal
  1. Check AiMod
  2. DS in Normal diff less than Easy diff
  3. 00:42:910 (5,6) - Improve blanket
  4. 00:43:720 (6,1) - ^
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:477 (3,4) - Improve blanket
  2. 00:27:302 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:50:612 (4,1) - Blanket
  • Insane
  1. 00:25:680 (4,1) - Parallel them maybe? (Make 00:25:680 (4) - more straight)
  2. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ^
I hope, it's help you a little :)
Good luck with map!
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

TheMefisto wrote:

Hi! From Modding queue.

  • Normal
  1. Check AiModtheres nothing wrong
  2. DS in Normal diff less than Easy diff easy is a gd
  3. 00:42:910 (5,6) - Improve blanketfixed
  4. 00:43:720 (6,1) - ^ fixed
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:477 (3,4) - Improve blanket fixed
  2. 00:27:302 (4,5) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:50:612 (4,1) - Blanket fixed
  • Insane
  1. 00:25:680 (4,1) - Parallel them maybe? (Make 00:25:680 (4) - more straight)changed it to a curve
  2. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ^ changed it to a curve
I hope, it's help you a little :)
Good luck with map!
thanks for the mod ^^
Shmiklak
Hello!
1) I thing in Normal 01:26:896 so hard for newbies. You can change stream to slider (for example)
2) I thing from 00:08:856 to 00:21:626 must be Kiai time
3) I thing in Eazy 00:07:234 circle is not important. I offer delete it, and add reverse to slider 00:06:423
4) Add in Eazy circle at 01:01:964
5) In Eazy 01:14:734 I thing this slider don't fit for music. I think you can change it to slider with reverse.
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

shmiklak wrote:

Hello!
1) I thing in Normal 01:26:896 so hard for newbies. You can change stream to slider (for example) remain
2) I thing from 00:08:856 to 00:21:626 must be Kiai time I think that part doesn't have the umph factor :P

the map will remain unchanged, thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y

shmiklak wrote:

Hello!
3) I thing in Eazy 00:07:234 circle is not important. I offer delete it, and add reverse to slider 00:06:423 remain atm, I think circle is better at this situation

4) Add in Eazy circle at 01:01:964 if added, it will be unrankable, recovery time of spinner is 1500ms
5) In Eazy 01:14:734 I thing this slider don't fit for music. I think you can change it to slider with reverse. fixed
update
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Yamicchi
Hi, from my modding queue :3
[Easy]
00:09:666 (1,2) - DS is a bit large here, although the AiMod can't see that. Fix it
00:56:693 (3) - slider end at 00:57:099
01:15:342 (1,2) - this patterns could make newbies click in the slider tail of 3. Maybe do this http://imgur.com/4HYPGbk
01:23:450 (3,4) - ^
[Normal]
Have a look around your map, then fix all the DS first. AiMod see 2, I see a lot O 3 O~
00:15:950 (2,4) - shouldn't follow the rhythm too much like this. Delete them
00:20:815 (2,3,1) - bad patterns
00:24:261 (6,1) - ^ . Maybe make 6 cover the top of 5 for better, then Ctrl + G the 6
And there are a lot more of bad patterns. I won't mod this diff for more. ( The patterns is just my opinion, don't change if you don't like )
[Hard & Insane]
Well, the patterns is still not good for me. I can't mod the patterns because that will become my diff.
The DS is a bit weird at 00:30:342 - 00:56:288 - 00:57:504 - and more...
Anyway, good luck on your map :3 sorry for too much personal opinion and bad mod :'(
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3

[Normal]
Have a look around your map, then fix all the DS first. AiMod see 2, I see a lot O 3 O~ fixed
00:15:950 (2,4) - shouldn't follow the rhythm too much like this. Delete them fixed
00:20:815 (2,3,1) - bad patterns fixed
00:24:261 (6,1) - ^ . Maybe make 6 cover the top of 5 for better, then Ctrl + G the 6 i'm gonna remain this
And there are a lot more of bad patterns. I won't mod this diff for more. ( The patterns is just my opinion, don't change if you don't like )

[Hard & Insane]
Well, the patterns is still not good for me. I can't mod the patterns because that will become my diff.
The DS is a bit weird at 00:30:342 - 00:56:288 - 00:57:504 - and more... fixed some
Anyway, good luck on your map :3 sorry for too much personal opinion and bad mod :'( fixed,its okay for personal opinion ^^]
thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3
[Easy]
00:09:666 (1,2) - DS is a bit large here, although the AiMod can't see that. Fix it fixed
00:56:693 (3) - slider end at 00:57:099 remain
01:15:342 (1,2) - this patterns could make newbies click in the slider tail of 3. Maybe do this http://imgur.com/4HYPGbk remain atm
01:23:450 (3,4) - ^remain atm
update
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8856,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
47775,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
62369,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
86693,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
87403,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,181,181
Combo2 : 225,182,254
Combo3 : 225,176,176
Combo4 : 227,227,227

[HitObjects]
103,84,748,6,0,P|181:95|227:158,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
172,324,2369,2,0,P|252:332|336:296,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
404,156,3991,6,0,L|352:80,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,44,4802,2,0,L|217:89,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
148,140,5612,2,0,L|154:219,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
180,304,6423,2,8,L|266:337,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
341,348,7234,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,8450,1,4,2:0:0:0:
376,88,8856,6,0,P|336:162|260:172,1,160,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
180,148,10072,1,2,2:0:0:0:
109,93,10477,2,0,P|92:166|153:235,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
224,252,11693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,308,12099,6,0,B|344:290|391:293|391:293|420:232,1,160,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
428,152,13315,1,2,2:0:0:0:
367,88,13720,2,0,P|291:107|207:77,1,160,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
143,31,14937,1,2,2:0:0:0:
55,29,15342,6,0,L|78:197,1,160,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
49,271,16558,1,2,2:0:0:0:
110,334,16964,2,0,B|157:319|230:333|230:333|243:287,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
245,207,18180,1,8,2:0:0:0:
259,120,18585,6,0,P|313:91|373:92,1,120,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
490,220,20004,2,0,P|476:274|427:320,1,120,2|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
346,344,21018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,345,21829,6,0,L|105:279,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
30,257,22639,2,0,L|47:171,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
101,110,23450,1,2,2:0:0:0:
188,97,23856,2,0,P|230:86|279:84,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
341,129,24666,1,8,2:0:0:0:
412,77,25072,6,0,P|425:152|364:213,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,219,26288,1,10,2:0:0:0:
212,270,26693,2,0,P|135:279|71:234,1,160,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
19,161,27910,1,8,2:0:0:0:
82,100,28315,6,0,B|161:52|238:64,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,103,29531,1,8,2:0:0:0:
395,71,29937,2,0,L|430:158,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
465,223,30747,2,0,L|405:294,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
327,268,31558,6,0,P|269:255|211:267,1,120,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
164,342,32572,2,0,P|126:287|136:222,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
163,155,33585,1,8,2:0:0:0:
134,71,33991,2,0,B|174:55|222:76|241:112|241:112|279:100,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
348,52,35207,6,0,B|390:91|394:151|394:151|354:183,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
268,180,36423,2,0,B|230:210|230:210|234:270|276:309,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
360,332,37639,2,0,L|444:316,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,244,38450,6,0,B|506:187|497:136|497:136|444:116,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
364,96,39666,2,0,B|300:53|227:84|227:84|196:40|140:36,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
68,76,41288,6,0,B|49:109|41:183|41:183|67:242|140:265,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
220,296,42910,2,0,B|288:272|358:283|358:283|372:259,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
420,196,44126,1,8,2:0:0:0:
356,135,44531,6,0,B|265:136|230:154|230:154|258:181,2,160,2|8|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
474,194,46761,1,8,2:0:0:0:
286,310,47775,6,0,P|174:297|111:184,1,240,0|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
116,107,49396,2,0,B|128:66|128:66|190:98|257:96,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
414,65,51018,6,0,B|456:129|422:198|422:198|435:228,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
446,302,52234,1,0,2:0:0:0:
358,301,52639,2,0,B|321:293|321:293|281:212|320:138|320:138|266:124,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
196,108,54261,6,0,B|148:192|180:264,1,160,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,300,55477,2,0,P|324:260|404:276,1,160
476,320,56693,2,0,B|512:204,1,120,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,57504,12,8,60747,2:0:0:0:
120,112,62369,6,0,P|190:77|282:102,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
354,106,63585,1,8,2:0:0:0:
439,127,63991,2,0,P|426:205|375:266,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
294,300,65207,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,233,65612,6,0,B|171:216|104:231|104:231|82:198,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
50,129,66829,1,2,2:0:0:0:
84,48,67234,2,0,B|149:65|216:50|216:50|238:83,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
303,122,68450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
391,125,68856,6,0,L|377:216,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,255,69666,2,0,L|225:246,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,70477,2,0,B|128:150|66:170|66:170|56:212,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
70,285,71693,1,8,2:0:0:0:
145,328,72099,6,0,P|204:323|264:330,1,120,2|10,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
352,331,73112,2,0,L|403:258,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,232,73923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,114,74531,2,0,L|454:73,2,40
356,174,75342,6,0,P|305:142|246:136,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
117,122,76558,1,8,2:0:0:0:
68,48,76964,2,0,P|30:113|61:191,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
130,237,78180,1,8,2:0:0:0:
151,322,78585,6,0,P|208:275|206:193,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
171,113,79802,1,8,2:0:0:0:
223,42,80207,2,0,P|276:74|337:74,1,120,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
462,48,81423,1,8,2:0:0:0:
474,135,81829,6,0,L|437:212,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,292,82639,2,0,L|376:334,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,276,83450,2,0,P|270:212|196:186,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
108,186,84666,1,8,2:0:0:0:
89,99,85072,6,0,P|41:129|20:189,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
55,267,86085,2,0,P|94:276|139:306,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
211,325,86896,6,0,B|218:265|255:235|255:235|262:258,1,120,2|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
DeletedUser_3886246


NM from my Queue~
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so please don't take critism as offense, thanks~ c:


General

● I don't really like the combo colours, they're so bright >.< I prefer the combo colours from the easy difficulty~
● Look over your blankets once more, I only pointed out the really bad ones~

Normal

● 00:01:558 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please.
● 00:02:369 (3,4) - ^
● 00:31:558 (1) - X335 Y125 for perfect stack. DS will still be fine~
● 00:33:585 (5,6) - Try to improve that blanket.
● 00:35:612 (4,1) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, improve it.
● 00:44:531 (1) - Move one to the left for better blanket.
● 01:03:991 (5,6) - That blanket could be improved.
● 01:07:234 (4) - ^
● 01:18:585 (1) - X59 Y284 for better blanket.
● 01:21:829 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please~

Hard

● 00:11:896 (1,3) - I don't like these overlapping~
● 00:20:815 (3,4) - Improve that blanket please.
● 00:22:437 (4,1) - ^
● 00:25:477 (3,4) - ^
● 00:27:504 (5) - Copy this slider and paste it instead of this one - 00:26:693 (3)



● 00:42:707 (1,4) - I hate overlapps, how about stacking 4 on 1?
● 01:02:775 (3,4) - Improve this blanket please.
● 01:05:207 (3,5,2) - I still don't like overlapps~
● 01:07:234 (1,2) - The slider pointing downwards and the next circle above it flows bad, 'cuz the slider pointed in another direction.
● 01:15:342 (1,2) - Improve that blanket please~

Insane

● 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems random to me, would you kindly expain it?
● 00:15:950 (2,3) - Improve that blanket.
● 00:16:761 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get these jumps .-.
● 00:19:599 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
● 00:44:937 (3,5) - The slider end is pretty close to the circles~
● 00:54:261 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are these just random placed circles? I'd love to hear the explaination of these jumps.
● 01:00:139 (2,3) - How about leaving the same distance as these two - 00:59:937 (1,2) - ?
● 01:04:599 (2,3) - Improve this blanket please.
● 01:24:869 (1) - X166 Y111 for perfect stack.
● 01:26:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I still don't get these jumps, but they're at the end of the map, which is okay with me~

That's all. Good luck with ranking it! c:
Mikkuri
Hi From my queue
sorry, im late
[General]
  • fine for me
[Ky's Easy]
  1. improve your hitsound a bit, other than that it's ok for me
[Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 - missing a beat, add a note
  2. 01:14:531 (6) - remove nc
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:437 (1) - remove clap?
  2. 00:21:018 (4) - ^
  3. 00:21:829 (1) - ^
  4. 00:22:234 (3) - add clap here
  5. 00:24:261 (5) - remove clap head
  6. 00:25:072 (1) - remove clap and 00:25:477 (3) - add clap here instead
  7. 00:26:693 (3,5) - change clap to finish at both slider head
  8. 00:28:315 (1) - this is too close to 00:27:504 (5) - better move it away
  9. 00:28:315 (1) - swap clap and finish from head to tail. tail to head
  10. 00:29:531 (3,1) - swap clap
  11. 00:30:342 (2) - add clap and 00:30:747 (4) - remove clap head al so add clap tail
  12. 00:31:558 (1) - too close to previos object and change clap to finish
    im done with hitsound, there's too much to mod..
[Insane]I won't mod hitsound because it's not good, at the first part you randomly place and some is missing. just check and work hard at it. you can also look at this guide to make your hitsound better t/306177
  1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - why don't do stream instead?
  2. 00:21:423 (1) - add nc and move further away from (4)
  3. 00:22:639 (3) - 1/2 slider is better
  4. 00:27:504 (6) - move a bit further away from (5)
  5. 00:28:923 (4) - remove nc
  6. 00:37:437 (5) - ^
  7. 00:47:775 (1,2,3) - why triplet, better don't do 1/4 this part because it's a slow part
  8. 00:49:396 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 00:52:639 (1,2,3) - ^
  10. 01:00:545 - add another 1/4 kick slider
  11. 01:16:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a jump to make it more fun
  12. 01:24:869 (1,2,3) - useless triplet for me
the problem was hitsound, you can improve it by this guide t/306177
good luck!
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:



NM from my Queue~
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so please don't take critism as offense, thanks~ c:


General

● I don't really like the combo colours, they're so bright >.< I prefer the combo colours from the easy difficulty~ I'll change it to colours which are more gloomy then
● Look over your blankets once more, I only pointed out the really bad ones~ noted

Normal

● 00:01:558 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please. fixed
● 00:02:369 (3,4) - ^ fixed
● 00:31:558 (1) - X335 Y125 for perfect stack. DS will still be fine~ fixed
● 00:33:585 (5,6) - Try to improve that blanket. fixed
● 00:35:612 (4,1) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, improve it. fixed
● 00:44:531 (1) - Move one to the left for better blanket. fixed
● 01:03:991 (5,6) - That blanket could be improved. fixed
● 01:07:234 (4) - ^ fixed
● 01:18:585 (1) - X59 Y284 for better blanket. fixed
● 01:21:829 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please~ fixed

Hard

● 00:11:896 (1,3) - I don't like these overlapping~ fixed
● 00:20:815 (3,4) - Improve that blanket please. fixed
● 00:22:437 (4,1) - ^ fixed
● 00:25:477 (3,4) - ^ fixed
● 00:27:504 (5) - Copy this slider and paste it instead of this one - 00:26:693 (3) fixed



● 00:42:707 (1,4) - I hate overlapps, how about stacking 4 on 1? fixed
● 01:02:775 (3,4) - Improve this blanket please. fixed
● 01:05:207 (3,5,2) - I still don't like overlapps~ fixed
● 01:07:234 (1,2) - The slider pointing downwards and the next circle above it flows bad, 'cuz the slider pointed in another direction. fixed
● 01:15:342 (1,2) - Improve that blanket please~ fixed

Insane

● 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems random to me, would you kindly expain it? fixed,I was just thinking about jumps when I mapped this
● 00:15:950 (2,3) - Improve that blanket. fixed
● 00:16:761 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get these jumps .-. isn't this a quite simple jump?
● 00:19:599 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ triangles :P
● 00:44:937 (3,5) - The slider end is pretty close to the circles~ fixed
● 00:54:261 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are these just random placed circles? I'd love to hear the explaination of these jumps. fixed,it was random
● 01:00:139 (2,3) - How about leaving the same distance as these two - 00:59:937 (1,2) - ? fixed
● 01:04:599 (2,3) - Improve this blanket please. fixed
● 01:24:869 (1) - X166 Y111 for perfect stack. fixed
● 01:26:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I still don't get these jumps, but they're at the end of the map, which is okay with me~ I'll keep it

That's all. Good luck with ranking it! c:
thanks for the mod :3
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Mikkuri wrote:

Hi From my queue
sorry, im late
[General]
  • fine for me
[Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 - missing a beat, add a note fixed
  2. 01:14:531 (6) - remove nc fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:437 (1) - remove clap? fixed
  2. 00:21:018 (4) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:21:829 (1) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:22:234 (3) - add clap here fixed
  5. 00:24:261 (5) - remove clap head fixed
  6. 00:25:072 (1) - remove clap and 00:25:477 (3) - add clap here instead fixed
  7. 00:26:693 (3,5) - change clap to finish at both slider head fixed
  8. 00:28:315 (1) - this is too close to 00:27:504 (5) - better move it away fixed
  9. 00:28:315 (1) - swap clap and finish from head to tail. tail to head fixed
  10. 00:29:531 (3,1) - swap clap fixed
  11. 00:30:342 (2) - add clap and 00:30:747 (4) - remove clap head al so add clap tail fixed
  12. 00:31:558 (1) - too close to previos object and change clap to finish position still remain, hitsound fixed
    im done with hitsound, there's too much to mod.. sorry :O
[Insane]I won't mod hitsound because it's not good, at the first part you randomly place and some is missing. just check and work hard at it. you can also look at this guide to make your hitsound better t/306177
  1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - why don't do stream instead? fixed
  2. 00:21:423 (1) - add nc and move further away from (4) fixed
  3. 00:22:639 (3) - 1/2 slider is better fixed
  4. 00:27:504 (6) - move a bit further away from (5) fixed
  5. 00:28:923 (4) - remove nc fixed
  6. 00:37:437 (5) - ^ fixed
  7. 00:47:775 (1,2,3) - why triplet, better don't do 1/4 this part because it's a slow part fixed
  8. 00:49:396 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
  9. 00:52:639 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
  10. 01:00:545 - add another 1/4 kick slider fixed
  11. 01:16:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a jump to make it more fun fixed
  12. 01:24:869 (1,2,3) - useless triplet for me I'll keep it
the problem was hitsound, you can improve it by this guide t/306177 I'll work on it
good luck!
MirinH
m4m
ill mod depend on your mod

General

  1. No,this mp3 just no. it has a higher tone than the original ending,you dont just randomly download a mp3 from youtube,you gonna listen to it mann
  2. disable countdown

ky's Easy

  1. 00:07:234 (1) - you cant mute a hitcircle
  2. 00:13:720 (3) - vocal ends 00:14:329
  3. 00:49:396 (2) - ugly, curve a bit more
  4. 01:07:234 (3) - same as 00:13:720 (3) -
  5. 01:14:531 (4) - you dont do 1/2 at easy

Normal

  1. aimod to check ds issue
  2. 00:26:288 (3,4) - this is really hard for normal,suggest change to a slider
  3. 01:03:585 (3,4) - ^
  4. 01:16:558 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - no,not 4 x 1/2circles

Hard

  1. 00:03:180 (3,1) - nasty overlap
  2. 00:10:275 (1,5) - blanket
  3. 00:28:315 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - keep ds
  5. 01:24:869 (1,2,3) - blanket

Insane

  1. 00:28:923 (4,5) - blanket
  2. 00:41:491 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:47:369 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:01:153 (2) - no clap
water
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Mackenzie wrote:

m4m
ill mod depend on your mod

General

  1. No,this mp3 just no. it has a higher tone than the original ending,you dont just randomly download a mp3 from youtube,you gonna listen to it mann fixed
  2. disable countdown fixed

Normal

  1. aimod to check ds issue it said that theres no problem
  2. 00:26:288 (3,4) - this is really hard for normal,suggest change to a slider keeping
  3. 01:03:585 (3,4) - ^ keeping
  4. 01:16:558 (3,4) - ^ keeping
  5. 01:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - no,not 4 x 1/2circles fixed

Hard

  1. 00:03:180 (3,1) - nasty overlap fixed
  2. 00:10:275 (1,5) - blanket fixed
  3. 00:28:315 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - keep ds fixed
  5. 01:24:869 (1,2,3) - blanket fixed

Insane

  1. 00:28:923 (4,5) - blanket fixed
  2. 00:41:491 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:47:369 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  4. 01:01:153 (2) - no clap wasn't supposed to have a clap ._.
water
thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y

Mackenzie wrote:

m4m
ill mod depend on your mod
[notice]

General

  1. No,this mp3 just no. it has a higher tone than the original ending,you dont just randomly download a mp3 from youtube,you gonna listen to it mann
  2. disable countdown

ky's Easy

  1. 00:07:234 (1) - you cant mute a hitcircle fixed by reverse slider (4)
  2. 00:13:720 (3) - vocal ends 00:14:329 fixed
  3. 00:49:396 (2) - ugly, curve a bit more fixed
  4. 01:07:234 (3) - same as 00:13:720 (3) - fixed
  5. 01:14:531 (4) - you dont do 1/2 at easy remain
water
update
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[General]
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walaowey
hi o/

I think u better adjust your insane hp a bit
HP+1 lol ..

and Here's my gd :v

asdasdad
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newyams99
Hi from queue~
Just wanted to let you know that I have just started to map and play standard, so my mod might not be sufficient or helpful (I play Taiko). This is my first standard mod. Also, if you read my post in the queue I will only mod up to the hard diff, as I stated. If possible, please respond to my mod with reasons why you've declined my suggestions, not just saying 'no' or something like that. It'll help me be a better standard mapper and modder.

Ky's Easy

I didn't see any issues with placements or rhythms, so there's mainly suggestions about hitsounds.

00:10:669 (2) - Change hitsound to clap. There's a clap sound there, and in this whole mapset, it follows a clap rhtyhm on every second beat starting from 00:09:858. It sounds better to me; it's more uniform. If you're going to accept this suggestion, maybe you should also change the end of 00:09:453 (1) to a whistle, to match the hitsounds on 00:11:074 (3,4).

00:13:912 (2) - ^, change the end of 00:12:696 (1) to whistle.

00:17:155 (2) - ^, change the end of 00:15:939 (1) to whistle.

01:02:561 - Add a circle with a finish here? It sounds similar to 00:09:047 (5).

01:07:426 (2) - Change hitsound to clap. For same reason as before.

Normal

00:17:561 (3,4,1,2,3) - Here, the blue combo's rhythm and the end of the green combo is matched to the vocals. Except, 00:18:777 (1) starts at the end of a phrase and has the middle of it at the start of a new phrase. It doesn't really match the vocals and I felt it awkwardly placed between the two parts that are matched to the vocals. How about a rhythm like this (ignore placements, that's up to you)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3580157
Just a personal opinion.

00:28:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo's rhythm is different from the previous two combos, even though they sound similar. Change to match them.

00:46:750 (1) - I don't think you need to start a new combo here. idk.

01:27:493 (1,2) - Here, the rhythm is different than 00:21:007 (1,2), even though they sound the same. I'd suggest changing this to match the original rhythm.

Hard

00:07:020 (1) - I'm not that knowledgeable about spacing and jumps and all that, but shouldn't the spacing go up on this hit from the previous hit? For this hit the spacing from the previous hit is about 1.5x, while the spacing of 00:06:209 (1) from the hit before that was about 1.75x. Maybe this was just to create the circular shape with the four sliders? It's possible to create the circle only using 1.5x spacing tho.

00:12:696 (2) - I think you're forgetting your clap sound at the end of this slider. Add.

00:21:007 (1,2,3,4) - I think this shape is just ugly D: Make it a square by either changing the spacing from the previous hit to 1x, or instead you could make a bigger jump than 1.1x. Maybe 1.25x or 1.5x. Maybe it's just me that thinks this.

00:36:615 (2) - I don't think you have to be so dedicated to keeping that clap sound every time. Remove. Just saying this cuz I failed here the first time I played it because of it xD

00:55:669 (5) - This slider should go up to 00:56:074, since you've matched the rhythm to the vocals imo. Delete 00:56:074 (1) if you're going to accept this suggestion.

01:02:966 - From here to 01:15:939, I think this section lacks 1/4 rhythms. Maybe add some?

Hopefully this mod was helpful. Sorry if it wasn't x.x Good luck on rank~
Kyle Y

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~
Just wanted to let you know that I have just started to map and play standard, so my mod might not be sufficient or helpful (I play Taiko). This is my first standard mod. Also, if you read my post in the queue I will only mod up to the hard diff, as I stated. If possible, please respond to my mod with reasons why you've declined my suggestions, not just saying 'no' or something like that. It'll help me be a better standard mapper and modder.

Ky's Easy

I didn't see any issues with placements or rhythms, so there's mainly suggestions about hitsounds.
fixed all, except the red one.
00:10:669 (2) - Change hitsound to clap. There's a clap sound there, and in this whole mapset, it follows a clap rhtyhm on every second beat starting from 00:09:858. It sounds better to me; it's more uniform. If you're going to accept this suggestion, maybe you should also change the end of 00:09:453 (1) to a whistle, to match the hitsounds on 00:11:074 (3,4).

00:13:912 (2) - ^, change the end of 00:12:696 (1) to whistle.

00:17:155 (2) - ^, change the end of 00:15:939 (1) to whistle.

01:02:561 - Add a circle with a finish here? It sounds similar to 00:09:047 (5). remain, I really really really want to add a circle here, but becasue of the spinner, I can't (Cry)

01:07:426 (2) - Change hitsound to clap. For same reason as before.

Hopefully this mod was helpful. Sorry if it wasn't x.x Good luck on rank~
baka baka~~
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404,156,4586,6,0,L|352:80,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,44,5397,2,0,L|217:89,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
148,140,6207,2,0,L|154:219,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
180,304,7018,2,8,L|266:337,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
288,88,9045,1,4,2:0:0:0:
376,88,9451,6,0,P|336:162|260:172,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
180,148,10667,1,8,2:0:0:0:
109,93,11072,2,0,P|92:166|153:235,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
224,252,12288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,308,12694,6,0,B|344:290|391:293|391:293|420:232,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
428,152,13910,1,8,2:0:0:0:
367,88,14315,2,0,P|308:112|228:96,1,120,0|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
143,31,15532,1,8,2:0:0:0:
55,29,15937,6,0,L|78:197,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
49,271,17153,1,8,2:0:0:0:
110,334,17559,2,0,B|157:319|230:333|230:333|243:287,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
244,208,18775,1,8,2:0:0:0:
259,120,19180,6,0,P|313:91|373:92,1,120,0|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
490,220,20599,2,0,P|476:274|427:320,1,120,6|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
346,344,21613,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,345,22424,6,0,L|105:279,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
30,257,23234,2,0,L|47:171,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
101,110,24045,1,2,2:0:0:0:
188,97,24451,2,0,P|230:86|279:84,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
341,129,25261,1,8,2:0:0:0:
412,77,25667,6,0,P|425:152|364:213,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,219,26883,1,10,2:0:0:0:
212,270,27288,2,0,P|135:279|71:234,1,160,2|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
19,161,28505,1,8,2:0:0:0:
82,100,28910,6,0,B|161:52|238:64,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,103,30126,1,8,2:0:0:0:
395,71,30532,2,0,L|430:158,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
465,223,31342,2,0,L|405:294,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
327,268,32153,6,0,P|269:255|211:267,1,120,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
164,342,33167,2,0,P|126:287|136:222,1,120,2|6,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
163,155,34180,1,12,2:0:0:0:
134,71,34586,2,0,B|174:55|222:76|241:112|241:112|279:100,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
348,52,35802,6,0,B|390:91|394:151|394:151|354:183,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
268,180,37018,2,0,B|230:210|230:210|234:270|276:309,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
360,332,38234,2,0,L|444:316,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,244,39045,6,0,B|506:187|497:136|497:136|444:116,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
364,96,40261,2,0,B|300:53|227:84|227:84|196:40|140:36,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
68,76,41883,6,0,B|49:109|41:183|41:183|67:242|140:265,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
220,296,43505,2,0,B|288:272|358:283|358:283|372:259,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
420,196,44721,1,8,2:0:0:0:
356,135,45126,6,0,B|265:136|230:154|230:154|258:181,2,160,2|6|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
474,194,47356,1,2,2:0:0:0:
286,310,48370,6,0,P|174:297|111:184,1,240,0|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
120,108,49991,2,0,B|132:67|132:67|188:117|261:97,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
414,65,51613,6,0,B|456:129|422:198|422:198|435:228,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
446,302,52829,1,0,2:0:0:0:
358,301,53234,2,0,B|321:293|321:293|281:212|320:138|320:138|266:124,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
196,108,54856,6,0,B|148:192|180:264,1,160,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,300,56072,2,0,P|324:260|404:276,1,160
476,320,57288,2,0,B|512:204,1,120,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,58099,12,8,61342,2:0:0:0:
120,112,62964,6,0,P|190:77|282:102,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
354,106,64180,1,8,2:0:0:0:
439,127,64586,2,0,P|426:205|375:266,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
294,300,65802,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,233,66207,6,0,B|171:216|104:231|104:231|82:198,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
50,129,67424,1,8,2:0:0:0:
84,48,67829,2,0,B|149:65|216:50,1,120,2|6,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
336,56,69045,1,8,2:0:0:0:
391,125,69451,6,0,L|377:216,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,255,70261,2,0,L|225:246,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,71072,2,0,B|128:150|66:170|66:170|56:212,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
70,285,72288,1,8,2:0:0:0:
145,328,72694,6,0,P|204:323|264:330,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
352,331,73707,2,0,L|403:258,1,79.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,232,74518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,114,75126,2,0,L|454:73,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,174,75937,6,0,P|305:142|246:136,1,120,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
117,122,77153,1,8,2:0:0:0:
68,48,77559,2,0,P|30:113|61:191,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
130,237,78775,1,8,2:0:0:0:
151,322,79180,6,0,P|208:275|206:193,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
171,113,80397,1,8,2:0:0:0:
223,42,80802,2,0,P|276:74|337:74,1,120,2|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
462,48,82018,1,8,2:0:0:0:
474,135,82424,6,0,L|437:212,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,292,83234,2,0,L|376:334,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,276,84045,2,0,P|270:212|196:186,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
108,186,85261,1,8,2:0:0:0:
89,99,85667,6,0,P|41:129|20:189,1,120,6|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
55,267,86680,2,0,P|94:276|139:306,1,79.9999999999999,2|6,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
211,325,87491,6,0,B|218:265|255:235|255:235|262:258,1,120,2|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~
Just wanted to let you know that I have just started to map and play standard, so my mod might not be sufficient or helpful (I play Taiko). This is my first standard mod. Also, if you read my post in the queue I will only mod up to the hard diff, as I stated. If possible, please respond to my mod with reasons why you've declined my suggestions, not just saying 'no' or something like that. It'll help me be a better standard mapper and modder.


Normal

00:17:561 (3,4,1,2,3) - Here, the blue combo's rhythm and the end of the green combo is matched to the vocals. Except, 00:18:777 (1) starts at the end of a phrase and has the middle of it at the start of a new phrase. It doesn't really match the vocals and I felt it awkwardly placed between the two parts that are matched to the vocals. How about a rhythm like this (ignore placements, that's up to you)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3580157
Just a personal opinion. fixed

00:28:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo's rhythm is different from the previous two combos, even though they sound similar. Change to match them. I wanted it to be different

00:46:750 (1) - I don't think you need to start a new combo here. idk. fixed

01:27:493 (1,2) - Here, the rhythm is different than 00:21:007 (1,2), even though they sound the same. I'd suggest changing this to match the original rhythm. same as the reason before

Hard

00:07:020 (1) - I'm not that knowledgeable about spacing and jumps and all that, but shouldn't the spacing go up on this hit from the previous hit? For this hit the spacing from the previous hit is about 1.5x, while the spacing of 00:06:209 (1) from the hit before that was about 1.75x. Maybe this was just to create the circular shape with the four sliders? It's possible to create the circle only using 1.5x spacing tho. I think I get what you mean

00:12:696 (2) - I think you're forgetting your clap sound at the end of this slider. Add. fixed

00:21:007 (1,2,3,4) - I think this shape is just ugly D: Make it a square by either changing the spacing from the previous hit to 1x, or instead you could make a bigger jump than 1.1x. Maybe 1.25x or 1.5x. Maybe it's just me that thinks this. fixed

00:36:615 (2) - I don't think you have to be so dedicated to keeping that clap sound every time. Remove. Just saying this cuz I failed here the first time I played it because of it xD fixed

00:55:669 (5) - This slider should go up to 00:56:074, since you've matched the rhythm to the vocals imo. Delete 00:56:074 (1) if you're going to accept this suggestion. fixed

01:02:966 - From here to 01:15:939, I think this section lacks 1/4 rhythms. Maybe add some? added 1 more ._.

Hopefully this mod was helpful. Sorry if it wasn't x.x Good luck on rank~
thanks for the mod ^^
Angelolz1
Your blanketing skills is daaaaaaaamn 11/10 ;u;
Honestly I can't mod this, because I feel like it's been modded well enough imo (probably cause I can't see any problems in your map lmao)
I'll just shoot a star c: (i don't have one currently but when I do, I'll shoot one :3)
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Angelolz1 wrote:

Your blanketing skills is daaaaaaaamn 11/10 ;u;
Honestly I can't mod this, because I feel like it's been modded well enough imo (probably cause I can't see any problems in your map lmao)
I'll just shoot a star c: (i don't have one currently but when I do, I'll shoot one :3)
thankiew :D :D
RVMathew
Hi there. 6 months ago you posted in my queue t/336458/start=60 for a NM request. Here I am 6 months later.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General

1) :idea: 00:04:586 - 00:07:626. Do you notice how the vocals get louder with each measure? I was thinking for that part of the beatmap, every 1/1 you add a timing point, with each successive timing point having an increase in volume to reflect the rising volume of the vocals.
- Applies to 00:58:099 to 1:02:000

2) AI mod reports some problems. Check that and fix it please.

Kyle Y's Easy
1) 00:25:667 (1) - I feel that it sounds a lot better if you split this slider into 1x 1/1 slider and a single note. The current one is fine but I think changing it will sound better.
- Applies to 01:24:045 (3) -

2) 00:33:167 (2) - I would not blanket it in my opinion. If you want to keep the blanket, fix it up as it is imperfect.

3) 00:51:207 Here there is a strong beat. I would add a note here as it seems like a waste not to use it.

Normal
1) 00:04:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 1/1 sliders sound much better here. The current one will only sound good if you make them 1/4 length. However that will be too difficult for new players.

2) 00:28:912 A 1/2 slider would fit better here, but if it seems to be too difficult (I think this should be fine for players new to normal), then keep the current one.

3) 00:57:290 (1) - Make this to a 1/1 Slider. Then with 00:57:290 (1,1,2,3,4) - you can make a really nice pattern.

Hard
1) 00:10:872 (1,2) - Make it the same shape. It looks a lot better.
- Applies to 00:17:155 (1,2) -

2) 00:36:412 (1,2) - I would reverse the order of it as it feels more comfortable than the current setup, or convert it to a triplet.

3) 00:45:331 (2) - Here if you are following vocals, make it into either 3 notes, or a 1/2 slider and 1 note, or a 1/2 slider with a repeat. It sounds a lot better, but that is if you are following the vocals.

4) 00:47:358 (5,1) - Distance between those two notes are quite large. I would ask other people to test this and see if they can hit it fine. I managed to hit this fine though it took a retry to get that.

5) 01:17:561 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a little weird to me in terms of aesthetics, but it is playable.

Insane
1) 00:24:047 (1,2,3) - I would silence the sliderends, to emphasize the synth or whatever that sound is at the start of the slider.
- Applies to 00:30:534 (1,2,3) -

2) 00:52:831 (4) - I guess making this a 1/2 slider will fit better with vocals and flow well into the next object.

3) 00:54:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - The star does not look perfect to me. I would use ctrl+shift+d as a guide when making the pattern. If you did this already then disregard this point.

Final thoughts
Good set, although there are some refinements that need to be made. I was anal with some things, but they can make a huge difference.

Good luck and sorry for replying 6 months later.
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. 6 months ago you posted in my queue t/336458/start=60 for a NM request. Here I am 6 months later.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General

1) :idea: 00:04:586 - 00:07:626. Do you notice how the vocals get louder with each measure? I was thinking for that part of the beatmap, every 1/1 you add a timing point, with each successive timing point having an increase in volume to reflect the rising volume of the vocals.
- Applies to 00:58:099 to 1:02:000 will think about it :O

2) AI mod reports some problems. Check that and fix it please. will check the timing points in near future

Normal
1) 00:04:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 1/1 sliders sound much better here. The current one will only sound good if you make them 1/4 length. However that will be too difficult for new players. I kinda like the design so imma keep it

2) 00:28:912 A 1/2 slider would fit better here, but if it seems to be too difficult (I think this should be fine for players new to normal), then keep the current one. I'll keep it

3) 00:57:290 (1) - Make this to a 1/1 Slider. Then with 00:57:290 (1,1,2,3,4) - you can make a really nice pattern. not really sure what you mean so I'll keep it the same

Hard
1) 00:10:872 (1,2) - Make it the same shape. It looks a lot better.
- Applies to 00:17:155 (1,2) - fixed

2) 00:36:412 (1,2) - I would reverse the order of it as it feels more comfortable than the current setup, or convert it to a triplet. made this into a triplet

3) 00:45:331 (2) - Here if you are following vocals, make it into either 3 notes, or a 1/2 slider and 1 note, or a 1/2 slider with a repeat. It sounds a lot better, but that is if you are following the vocals. fixed

4) 00:47:358 (5,1) - Distance between those two notes are quite large. I would ask other people to test this and see if they can hit it fine. I managed to hit this fine though it took a retry to get that. fixed

5) 01:17:561 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a little weird to me in terms of aesthetics, but it is playable. keeping it

Final thoughts
Good set, although there are some refinements that need to be made. I was anal with some things, but they can make a huge difference.

Good luck and sorry for replying 6 months later.
thanks for the mod, was surprised to get a mod after 6 months :P
Buretsu
hOi~
From m4m queue.

HARD

00:07:020 (1) - Looks weird on the background of 00:04:588 (1,1,1)

00:05:399 (1,1,1) - NC not necessary

different spacing between 00:25:669 (1,2,3) 00:26:277 (4) doesn't looks very well.

Walao's Insane

00:04:993 (5,5,5,5) - I think it will be better, if you keep it up like sliders.

00:49:790 - Add note here because of vocal.

00:53:034 - And here.

00:58:507 (5,5,5,5) - I think it will be better, if you keep it up like sliders.


I tried my best.
Sorry for my bad english.
And I bad in mod easy/normal diffs, so i don't mod them, sorry.
Also I don't really like anime-songs, but I have no choice.

Good Luck. <3
Doormat
oh hey late m4m here sorry about that. just going to get right to it-
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[General]
  1. Gakuen Seikabutsu? lol typo error in regards to artist- Artist should be 学園生活部, and the Romanised Artist should be Gakuen Seikatsu-bu or Gakuen Seikatsu Bu; either one is fine to use.
  2. offset feels really off to me. try adjusting it by -20 ms, e.g. red uninherited timing point should be somewhere around 1325 in my opinion
[Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:07:018 (4) - clap doesn't sound right here in my opinion
  2. 00:22:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't really have a problem with this combo, but it feels out of place with this combo 00:28:910 (1,2,3,4) -, which is essentially the same thing. i'd suggest making these two combos similar to one another
  3. 00:52:829 (2) - no finish here?
  4. 00:56:072 (2) - finish here also seems appropriate in my opinion
  5. 00:57:288 (3) - this slider feels too short in my opinion; the white tick (main beat) has more emphasis than the red tick (offbeat) you mapped the slider end to. try making it into a 2/1 slider. adjust the spinner at 00:58:099 (1) - so that it starts at 00:58:302 instead
  6. 01:09:451 (1,2) - again, this feels out of place with everything else in this combo; this feels more fast paced compared to the rest of how the map feels. not something you really need to change; just something i thought felt odd
  7. 01:15:937 (1) - i was kind of expecting this to be a 2/1 slider like everything else in the chorus. while the 3/2 slider does make sense, it doesn't feel congruent with how you mapped your difficulty
  8. similar comment to before, 01:22:424 (1,2) - feels a bit out of place because it feels more fast compared to how the rest of the map feels. not really something you need to change because it still fits the song
[Normal]
  1. distance snap is fairly inconsistent throughout the difficulty. i suggest maintaining snap distance for Normal difficulties; sudden changes in snap distance might be confusing for beginner players
  2. 00:14:723 (1) - this new combo feels unnecessary to me, but whether you want to get rid of it is up to you
  3. 00:18:372 (5) - this slider feels too short in my opinion; you also missed a pretty heavy beat on 00:18:777, so i recommend changing this into a 1/1 slider
  4. 00:18:980 (1,2) - maybe try reversing the order of these notes, e.g. circle at 00:18:980 and 1/2 slider at 00:19:182. i feel this helps emphasize the vocals a bit more. move the new combo so that it starts at 00:19:182 if you decide to go with this suggestion
  5. 00:24:047 (5,6) - these blankets could be better in my opinion
  6. 00:28:912 (1,2) - i'd make this into a 1/2 repeat slider so it's congruent with the rest of the patterns you used here
  7. 00:51:615 (1) - this blanket is too curved to be blanketing 00:50:804 (5) - properly; make it less curved
  8. 00:53:236 (3,4) - more blanketing issues k
  9. 01:09:453 (3) - new combo makes sense here instead of at 01:08:844 (1) - because this is where the new phrase starts
  10. 01:22:426 (2) - ^similar comment to the above; a new combo makes more sense here in my opinion
  11. yeah just work on maintaining snap distance and your blankets for the most part
[Hard]
  1. similar to Normal, you have some blankets you need to work on; for the most part, they look too curved in my opinion. try uncurving them by a bit. some examples include 00:01:750 (2) -, 00:02:561 (4) -, 00:44:317 (1) - , etc.
  2. 00:06:209 (1,1) - why are these different shapes from 00:04:588 (1,1) -? i think you should use the same shape for these four sliders so it looks better aesthetically
  3. 00:11:277 (1) - this new combo isn't necessary
  4. 00:27:290 (3) - is slightly overlapping with 00:26:277 (4) - and it doesn't really look that nice in my opinion; maybe move it down a bit? you're going to want to move 00:27:899 (4,5) - as well if you take this suggestion
  5. 00:32:155 (1) - this sounds like there should be a finish instead of a clap here
  6. 00:38:135 (2) - and 00:44:622 (2) - claps sound really off on these blue ticks; i would recommend removing them
  7. 00:44:622 (2,2) - some more bad overlaps in my opinion. why not move the 00:45:331 (2) - to somewhere like this? adjust 00:44:622 (2) - so that it blankets 00:45:331 (2) -
  8. 01:10:669 (2,3) - i think reversing the order of these notes (1/2 slider first, then circle) captures the rhythm a lot more nicely. remember to readjust the hitsounds
  9. 01:19:588 (4,1) - ^similar suggestion to the above; reverse the order so that the circle comes before the 1/1 slider. remember to readjust the hitsounds
[Walao's Insane]
  1. why is the slider tick rate 2? hp drain isn't too high, and none of the other difficulties have a slider tick rate of 2, so it feels a little weird in my opinion
  2. 00:17:561 (1) - why not consider making this blanket 00:17:155 (5) -?
  3. 00:24:858 (3) - similar suggestion to the above; these straight sliders make the map feel rigid in my opinion
  4. 01:12:696 (1) - another suggestion to the above lol
  5. 01:14:622 - there's a beat here if you want to use a triple here-
  6. 01:14:114 (1,1) - i wouldn't put two new combos in succession like this; feels really unnecessary to have two new combos here. i'd get rid of one of these; either is fine.
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hope this helps!
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