1. Amethyst's Muzukashii (3.12 stars, 280 notes)
2. Baraatje123's Juicer (4.19 stars, 307 notes)
3. Normal (2.01 stars, 132 notes)
4. Nuo's Hard (3.16 stars, 199 notes)
5. Raiden's Oni (3.74 stars, 406 notes)
6. zorefire's Easy (1.45 stars, 86 notes)

Thx for icon :
Pereira006 3x
Ipas 2x
Bakari

Special thanks to the modders

Crimmi
Lumael
Kuki
KyleY
AwisaRawwrrr
Baraatje123
Sangzin
EdamaMe411
inspectorscout
Histoire
LCM01
CuticleThong
- G I D Z -
DahplA
dinopwn
Lily Bread
Raiden (Taiko IRC)
shionelove
CaffeAmericano
Yoges
Pereira006
Feb
carnivore101
ByBy13
Stjpa
A r M i N
UltraRik
Hoen
Cheesecake
pishifat
Xinely
Argon
PolkaMocha
OzzyOzrock
Ipas
RVMathew
Mako Sakata
DakeDekaane

Crimmi wrote:

From the timing request thread:

BPM: 168.00
Offset: 1365.

Also, the source is not Youtube, so remove it and add it to the tags. If anything just PM me.

Lumael wrote:

Hello! NM Request on queue

General

1. BPM: 169

Ippon Manzoku Juice

1. This diff is too squared lol
2. Increase the gridding by pressing Control + 1, so you can fix DS in some places and make better shapes
   00:03:508 (3,4) - Don't overlap like this
3. This map really feels like some old Nico Nico Douga chorus song
4. This song isn't 1/6 FFS lol
   00:13:865 (3,3) - remove, overmapped
   00:16:750 (3) - ^
   00:18:170 (3) - ^
   00:18:525 (1,1,1,1) - Remove NC in all but the first one I linked
   00:25:211 (3,3,3,6,3) - remove, overmapped
   00:24:146 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Try different patterns also, its boring to play the same pattern always
   00:56:631 (3,3) - remove, overmapped
   01:01:957 (3,3,3) - Sliders are not fitting

GL!

Kuki wrote:

[General]
Unrankable with only one difficulty.
You need to set a preview point.

[Ippon Manzoku Juice]
00:02:075 (3) - Make this slider straight.
00:02:075 (3,4,1,2) - Fix this square.
00:08:111 (4,1,2,3) - Make this a square.
00:13:850 (2,2) - Stack
00:44:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the spacing here.
01:07:607 (3) - Make this a hitcircle.

Lumael wrote:

I saw you posted in a queue asking for BPM check.

I used a BPM Analyzer program to recheck the bpm and I found that it's 168,38 . Sounds weird but this is the exacly value.

no kds ^^

BigEarsMau wrote:

Lumael wrote:

I saw you posted in a queue asking for BPM check.

I used a BPM Analyzer program to recheck the bpm and I found that it's 168,38 . Sounds weird but this is the exacly value.

no kds ^^

thank you again, lumael!

also, what BPM analyzer program you are using?

Lumael wrote:

MixMeister BPM Analyzer. You'll probably notice that sometimes it gives the bpm halfed, so just double it for the true bpm

zorefire wrote:

MY Guest Diff

Guest Diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Po Pi Po (Ryu Remix) + TF2 [MaD] feat. Ippon Manzoku..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12072,12787,32787,35644,41239,45287,48501,49156,55584,61239,61596,61953,62251,62667,62787,62965,63203,63322,63739,64096,65525,66596,67013,69870,71656,71953,72191,72489
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9499999

[Metadata]
Title:Po Pi Po (Ryu Remix) + TF2 [MaD] feat. Ippon Manzoku.
TitleUnicode:Po Pi Po (Ryu☆ Remix) + TF2 [MaD] feat. Ippon Manzoku.
Artist:wazgul
ArtistUnicode:wazgul
Creator:BigEarsMau
Version:zorefire's Vegetable Juice
Source:
Tags:po pi po hatsune miku wazgul team fortress 2 ippon manzoku bigearsmau youtube
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"OSU BG 2.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1365.44387157835,356.33685710892,4,1,0,100,1,0


[HitObjects]
356,108,1365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,180,1721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,2078,2,0,P|328:272|284:272,1,80
212,280,2790,2,0,P|132:244|112:180,1,160
80,24,4216,6,0,P|40:24|-4:40,2,80
132,84,5285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,148,5641,2,0,B|256:176|256:176|284:172|336:180,1,160
428,52,7066,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,7423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,208,7779,2,0,P|384:244|356:272,1,80
280,248,8492,2,0,B|268:160|268:160|232:152|204:124,1,160
136,272,9917,6,0,L|60:248,2,80
212,300,10986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,248,11342,2,0,P|360:252|440:240,1,160
396,84,12768,6,0,B|352:80|320:60|320:60|280:60|240:52,1,160
184,108,13837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,164,14193,2,0,B|116:248|116:248|140:324,1,160
300,332,15618,6,0,P|336:340|380:340,2,80
272,256,16687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,196,17044,2,0,L|332:36,1,160
176,76,18469,6,0,P|100:92|56:156,1,160
84,232,19538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,292,19894,2,0,P|212:276|256:212,1,160
380,112,21320,6,0,L|368:32,2,80
424,180,22389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,236,22745,2,0,B|320:304|320:304|252:348,1,160
136,240,24171,6,0,P|120:204|112:164,1,80
184,132,24883,2,0,P|200:168|208:208,1,80
280,244,25596,2,0,P|360:252|432:220,1,160
400,64,27021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,27378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,84,27734,2,0,P|216:92|176:116,1,80
104,132,28447,2,0,L|52:288,1,160
212,304,29872,6,0,B|288:328|288:328|320:304|364:304,1,160
432,264,30941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,192,31297,2,0,P|432:168|456:140,1,80
464,64,32010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,32723,6,0,L|249:0,2,80
276,136,33792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,34148,2,0,P|212:272|144:312,1,160
72,168,35573,6,0,B|112:88|112:88|168:36,1,160
224,92,36642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,36999,2,0,P|336:48|376:56,2,80
336,128,38068,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,188,38424,6,0,L|360:264,1,80
280,256,39137,2,0,L|252:332,1,80
172,328,39849,2,0,B|92:316|92:316|20:280,1,160
96,140,41275,6,0,P|56:140|16:156,2,80
160,188,42344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,224,42700,2,0,P|272:236|312:236,1,80
372,188,43413,2,0,B|436:144|436:144|464:56,1,160
304,28,44838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,120,45551,6,0,L|100:156,2,80
248,144,46620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,164,46976,6,0,P|392:208|412:280,1,160
348,332,48045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,348,48401,2,0,P|228:336|192:316,1,80
172,240,49114,2,0,P|133:223|99:200,1,80
116,124,49827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,50183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,68,50539,2,0,P|312:76|344:92,1,80
416,124,51252,2,0,P|452:200|468:276,1,160
400,316,52321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,52677,6,0,B|240:288|240:288|160:292,1,160
84,268,53746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,196,54103,2,0,P|8:196|-32:184,2,80
100,132,55172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,55528,6,0,P|180:208|196:248,1,80
272,224,56241,2,0,P|265:184|251:147,1,80
228,72,56953,2,0,B|172:48|128:40|128:40|76:56,1,160
28,128,58023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,58379,6,0,L|52:268,2,80
156,172,59448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,176,59804,2,0,L|260:100,2,80
372,260,61230,6,0,P|388:216|392:176,1,80
368,104,61942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,62655,2,0,B|168:112|168:112|128:100,2,80
272,168,63724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,64080,6,0,P|180:276|108:248,1,160
116,136,65506,2,0,P|72:120|36:124,2,80
196,152,66575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,66931,6,0,P|304:120|348:120,1,80
424,132,67644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,68356,2,0,B|312:252|312:252|232:240,1,160
164,272,69425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,204,69782,6,0,L|112:124,1,80
168,68,70494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,104,70851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,71207,2,0,B|376:84|376:84|404:88|436:80,1,120

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue
[Gerenal]

1) add the source please
2) del tags: po pi po ippon manzoku bigearsmau youtube
3) add tags: zorefire
4) bpm is always integer. I am not sure about the bpm, I think you need to set more than one red line. Ask for bpm check.
I will set it like this: MAY NOT BE TRUE

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
1409,357.142857142857,4,1,0,100,1,0
12837,355.029585798817,4,1,0,100,1,0
35558,357.1428571 42857,4,1,0,100,1,0
61272,355.029585798817,4,1,0,100,1,0
72632,357.142857142857,4,1,0,100,1,0

5) try offset 1409

[Vegetable Juice]

00:01:409 - try this

00:09:980 - try this

00:13:909 (2) - del

um... I can't mod it if the bpm is wrong.
But, you use too much slider starting at red, do not do that as new player is following the beat not vocal.
And use more long slider in EasY

For the Normal diff, you use too much circle. SV too high, set to 1.1.

00:32:723 (1) - 00:46:976 (1) - spinner not suitable, and map the break.

Open distance snap for both Easy and Normal diff all the time.

To be honest, I do not suggest new mapper map the song like this, songs that not sure about the bpm.

AwisaRawwrrr wrote:

For you to know, I'm just passing by X)
Firstly, This is more of an Advice than Modding. lol.
Well anyway, here's some tips/mod that might improve your mapping in normal, of course. (Cause It's hard for me to map Hard and above)

[General]

SPOILER

1. Try to reduce spinner
2. Click View > Grid Level > Set to 4
3. Press Ctrl + Shift + a then check distance snapping for every map.
4. Set Approach Rate (AR) = 5 and Overall Difficulty (OD) = 5

[Ippon Manzoku Juice]

SPOILER

1. 00:03:503 (3) - Try to add a curve here like this
2. 00:32:723 (1) - Set the spinner ~Only if You Like~ to 00:34:148 then map the removed part as well.
3. 00:47:065 (1) - Long Spinner again. An Idea came up to my mind and mapped like this ~It's up to you if you'll change or follow~
   Screenshot Examples: ScreenShot1, ScreenShot2
4. 01:03:368 (3,4) - Try to move it closer. It seems too far from each other and hard to hit for new players
5. 01:09:782 (1) - Set a hit circle here and adjust the spinner from 01:09:782 to 01:10:138

That's all I guess.
Other seems fine ~
Pretty good for your 2nd map.
KDS as you like

- AwisaRawwrrr!

Baraatje123 wrote:

I accept the GD req, bu you HAVE to change the diffnames
zorefire's Easy
Normal
Hard
Insane
It's NOT allowed (anymore) to have custom diffnames, EXCEPT for the hardest diff in the spread) which will likely be mine

Also, do NOT give kudosu to GD's, I'll deny them for now
ONLY do that for mods/timing checks etc.
I'll edit this post with my diff when it's done

Baraatje123 wrote:

In case you haven't seen it, I've updated my post with my diff (a few hours ago)
However, you should know that only the hardest diff in the set should have a custom diff name
If the other mapper's diff is harder then mine, you should ask him about the name
It's better to call my diff Insane, at least for now
I'll soon fully mod this set (and prepare yourself, it'll be a long mod) into the fullest details to completely make it better (and most likely your following maps as well)

First, however, I want to say that you should use distance Snap in Normal. If you don't use it, the map becomes really hard to play for a newbie. They use the distance as a way to see when to click notes (as they are not familiar with the approachcircle)
No kudosu (if you do however, I'll just deny them )

1. 00:05:641 (3) - Consider removing the grey node right after the red one. It feels better having a red noded slider here
2. 00:08:492 (4) - ^^
3. 00:44:838 (5) - NC?
4. 01:06:931 (1,2) - Move down a lot (to like y:200 for a better flow (rememeber to change the next locations as well, you can just select everything from here until the end and move it down to 264:200 (as only the first object is displayed there (top right))))

1. 00:01:369 (1,2) - The distance between those is pretty big. If you click on 00:01:369 (1) -, you'll see a number in the top right. That is the distance. You want to have that number at 1 for a normal. And it should be the same value throughout the whole map. Ofc, the value can also be 1.1, or 0.9, but then, as said, it needs to be in the whole map. This however applies only to easy/Normal. In hard and harder diffs, distance is allowed to change.
   Back to these 2 circles. If you move 00:01:721 (2) - to 104:204, it'll fix the distance issue. Click on note (2), and look at the coordinates in top right, and keep adjusting it until these 2 numbers are shown. What you can also do, is click on note (2) to select it. Then click on the coordinates, and enter 104 for x, and 204 for y
   
2. 00:03:147 (2) - This note. Click on it. do oyu see the distance to the previous note? It's 0.93. This means this note must be furthe from the previous note. To fix this, move this circle to 272:68
   
3. 00:03:147 (2,3) - Here is an issue, which is a rather big one. The flow is not that great. If you look at the motion following from the previous notes, you'll notice it's a circle, right? Then comes slider (3). The start of the slider here is fine. But the end is not. The movement suddenly gets abrubpted by a sharp curve. Try making this slider like in my screenshot. This has a better flow, and is recommended
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:03:859 (4) - If you apply the thing above, you need to change this, for a proper distance. If you compeltely make it like I did, the distance here would be 1.48, and that's too high. Change this slider as well to have a proper distance. However, then 00:04:216 (1) - has a incorrect distance. Look at my screenshot and try to recreate it, you'll see it has proper distance everywhere, and it flows good as well
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:04:572 (2) - 00:05:641 (1) - You can probably see this in the editor. They overlap, see
   
   SPOILER

   
   This is something which should be avoided in all cases, as it causes problems with readability. What you can do to fix this
   First, move 00:05:285 (4) - to 444:184
   Then move 00:05:641 (1) - to 388:280
   Then move 00:05:997 (2) - to 296:224. This way, it'll stack completely with 00:04:572 (2) - which is good for the readability
   Then, for distance issues, make 00:06:354 (3,4) - liek this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:14:193 (1,2) - The flow here can be improved, try doing it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   Remember to properly stack 00:16:509 (2) - under the new end of this slider
   
7. 00:15:618 (1) - 00:17:044 (1) - As you can see, these 2 are overlapping. This may not be really bad, because they are sliders, but it does make it look less appealing. Also, as the distance between 00:16:687 (3) - and 00:17:044 (1) - is quite high, try to do it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:17:935 (2) - 00:18:469 (1) - And, an overlap, but as the distance here is quite low. Please redo this part. Try to do it without overlaps, and with proper distance. Up until the spinner should be remade. 00:21:320 (1,2,3,4) - for example, are all really high spaced, which is not allowed
   
9. 00:22:745 (1) - Remove the spinner. There is too little recovery time for it to be playable, and if you make it shorter, it'll be unrankable as well, as it's too short
   
10. 00:26:309 (2) - Think about proper distance (1.0)
11. 00:28:447 (1) - ^^
12. 00:29:159 (2) - ^^
13. 00:31:297 (1) - ^^ (for all these, slightly redo it. The rhythm is fine, but please make them have correct spacing)
14. 00:31:297 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 have quite high spacing, make it 1.0
15. 00:40:384 (6) - 00:41:809 (2) - Overlap, but first fix the thing below this one. Then fix this to apply proper distance
16. 00:41:275 (1) - Low distance
    
17. 00:45:551 (4) - Sliders such as these are not allowed. The sliders are called kicksliders, and I will refer to those as kicksliders from now on. Kicksliders Always have more then 1 reverse. They are not allowed in both easy and normal, as the reverse Arrow comes in really late. This'll make newbies, who play the diff lose their combo. Instead, make them 2 sliders, or circles, or a longer slider with only 1 reverse, it's all up to you (but don't make it too complicated)
    
18. 00:49:470 (5) - Distance issue here
    
19. 00:50:896 (3) - 00:51:252 (1) - 00:52:143 (2) - Overlaps. Please fix them. A really fancy way to fix them, is by making blankets. A blanket is when the approachcircle blends in with the sliderborder. Please try to recreate my screenshot, as that looks really appealling
    An example of a blanket is this
    
    Try to make it like this, and note, there is a blanket
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 00:54:815 (6) - Sliders such as these are not allowed. The sliders are called kicksliders, and I will refer to those as kicksliders from now on. Kicksliders Always have more then 1 reverse. They are not allowed in both easy and normal, as the reverse Arrow comes in really late. This'll make newbies, who play the diff lose their combo. Instead, make them 2 sliders, or circles, or a longer slider with only 1 reverse, it's all up to you (but don't make it too complicated)
    
21. 00:57:666 (1) - Distance!
    
22. 00:58:379 (1) - Shorten the spinner, make it end at 00:59:804 for enough recovery time
    
23. 01:01:230 (1) - Applies to everything after this. Please check if the distance is proper (around 1.0)
    If it's not, redo it

Sangzin wrote:

Hello! From your request!
TF2 song INCOMING!!!!!!!!!

[General]

1. Only there has a combo colors in insane diff. Fix it.
2. Widescreen is checked. As far as I know widescreen is used when storyboard has, but I don't know if widescreen is used when there has a video. Ask BN about this, and decide to uncheck or check.
3. Add a tag Baraatje123

[zorefire's Easy]

1. 00:07:066 (2) - Move right not to confuse players.
2. 00:10:986 (2,3) - DS error. Fix it
3. 00:12:768 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:28:447 (4) - Move it down more
5. 00:31:297 (3) - Flow looks bad. How about this?
6. 00:33:792 (2,3) - DS error
7. 00:44:838 (5) - NC
8. 01:04:080 (1,2) - So big DS errors. Fix it

[normal]

• 
  Please check AIMod please. There's a lot of DS errors to fix it.
  
  If you want to check these errors in game, check that square(?) and fix everything. Apart from these, DS with NC is not checked. That means you may check these one by one.
  t/288639 I prefer you read this. It may help you making normal diff.
  Read that thread and check unrankable stuff.

1. 00:15:618 (1,2,3) - Overlap like this doesn't good in normal diff.
2. 00:17:935 (2,1) - Bad overlap.
3. 00:19:894 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:22:745 (1) - This is unrankable. In normal diff, recovery time after slider MUST 2 beats. Please fix it.
5. 00:25:596 (1,2,3) - Bad overlap
6. 00:40:384 (6) - Just use one anchor point. you can make good slider with one anchor point.
7. 00:52:143 (2) - ^
8. 00:58:379 (1) - Same as above.
9. 01:11:920 (1,1,1) - Make these repeat slider.

[Baraatje123's Insane]

1. 00:06:710 (6) - NC
2. 00:32:010 (3,4,5,6) - Don't you think this pattern really hard to hit?
   Seriously, I don't know what to mod. REALLY SORRY FOR BAD MOD!!!

At least please read this: t/288639
It will help you. GL!

Baraatje123 wrote:

Here we go

[Zorefire's Easy]

1. 00:05:641 (3) - Consider removing the grey node right after the red one. It feels better having a red noded slider here
2. 00:08:492 (4) - ^^
3. 00:44:838 (5) - NC?
4. 01:06:931 (1,2) - Move down a lot (to like y:200 for a better flow (rememeber to change the next locations as well, you can just select everything from here until the end and move it down to 264:200 (as only the first object is displayed there (top right))))

Good diff

[Normal]
So as I saw, you asked in general questions how to fix mods right?
I'll try to exlplain what to do as best as I can

1. 00:01:369 (1,2) - The distance between those is pretty big. If you click on 00:01:369 (1) -, you'll see a number in the top right. That is the distance. You want to have that number at 1 for a normal. And it should be the same value throughout the whole map. Ofc, the value can also be 1.1, or 0.9, but then, as said, it needs to be in the whole map. This however applies only to easy/Normal. In hard and harder diffs, distance is allowed to change.
   Back to these 2 circles. If you move 00:01:721 (2) - to 104:204, it'll fix the distance issue. Click on note (2), and look at the coordinates in top right, and keep adjusting it until these 2 numbers are shown. What you can also do, is click on note (2) to select it. Then click on the coordinates, and enter 104 for x, and 204 for y
   
2. 00:03:147 (2) - This note. Click on it. do oyu see the distance to the previous note? It's 0.93. This means this note must be furthe from the previous note. To fix this, move this circle to 272:68
   
3. 00:03:147 (2,3) - Here is an issue, which is a rather big one. The flow is not that great. If you look at the motion following from the previous notes, you'll notice it's a circle, right? Then comes slider (3). The start of the slider here is fine. But the end is not. The movement suddenly gets abrubpted by a sharp curve. Try making this slider like in my screenshot. This has a better flow, and is recommended
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:03:859 (4) - If you apply the thing above, you need to change this, for a proper distance. If you compeltely make it like I did, the distance here would be 1.48, and that's too high. Change this slider as well to have a proper distance. However, then 00:04:216 (1) - has a incorrect distance. Look at my screenshot and try to recreate it, you'll see it has proper distance everywhere, and it flows good as well
   
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5. 00:04:572 (2) - 00:05:641 (1) - You can probably see this in the editor. They overlap, see
   
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   This is something which should be avoided in all cases, as it causes problems with readability. What you can do to fix this
   First, move 00:05:285 (4) - to 444:184
   Then move 00:05:641 (1) - to 388:280
   Then move 00:05:997 (2) - to 296:224. This way, it'll stack completely with 00:04:572 (2) - which is good for the readability
   Then, for distance issues, make 00:06:354 (3,4) - liek this
   
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6. 00:14:193 (1,2) - The flow here can be improved, try doing it like this
   
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   Remember to properly stack 00:16:509 (2) - under the new end of this slider
   
7. 00:15:618 (1) - 00:17:044 (1) - As you can see, these 2 are overlapping. This may not be really bad, because they are sliders, but it does make it look less appealing. Also, as the distance between 00:16:687 (3) - and 00:17:044 (1) - is quite high, try to do it like this
   
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8. 00:17:935 (2) - 00:18:469 (1) - And, an overlap, but as the distance here is quite low. Please redo this part. Try to do it without overlaps, and with proper distance. Up until the spinner should be remade. 00:21:320 (1,2,3,4) - for example, are all really high spaced, which is not allowed
   
9. 00:22:745 (1) - Remove the spinner. There is too little recovery time for it to be playable, and if you make it shorter, it'll be unrankable as well, as it's too short
   
10. 00:26:309 (2) - Think about proper distance (1.0)
11. 00:28:447 (1) - ^^
12. 00:29:159 (2) - ^^
13. 00:31:297 (1) - ^^ (for all these, slightly redo it. The rhythm is fine, but please make them have correct spacing)
14. 00:31:297 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 have quite high spacing, make it 1.0
15. 00:40:384 (6) - 00:41:809 (2) - Overlap, but first fix the thing below this one. Then fix this to apply proper distance
16. 00:41:275 (1) - Low distance
    
17. 00:45:551 (4) - Sliders such as these are not allowed. The sliders are called kicksliders, and I will refer to those as kicksliders from now on. Kicksliders Always have more then 1 reverse. They are not allowed in both easy and normal, as the reverse Arrow comes in really late. This'll make newbies, who play the diff lose their combo. Instead, make them 2 sliders, or circles, or a longer slider with only 1 reverse, it's all up to you (but don't make it too complicated)
    
18. 00:49:470 (5) - Distance issue here
    
19. 00:50:896 (3) - 00:51:252 (1) - 00:52:143 (2) - Overlaps. Please fix them. A really fancy way to fix them, is by making blankets. A blanket is when the approachcircle blends in with the sliderborder. Please try to recreate my screenshot, as that looks really appealling
    An example of a blanket is this
    
    Try to make it like this, and note, there is a blanket
    
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20. 00:54:815 (6) - Sliders such as these are not allowed. The sliders are called kicksliders, and I will refer to those as kicksliders from now on. Kicksliders Always have more then 1 reverse. They are not allowed in both easy and normal, as the reverse Arrow comes in really late. This'll make newbies, who play the diff lose their combo. Instead, make them 2 sliders, or circles, or a longer slider with only 1 reverse, it's all up to you (but don't make it too complicated)
    
21. 00:57:666 (1) - Distance!
    
22. 00:58:379 (1) - Shorten the spinner, make it end at 00:59:804 for enough recovery time
    
23. 01:01:230 (1) - Applies to everything after this. Please check if the distance is proper (around 1.0)
    If it's not, redo it

Was not that bad, modding this

Note, I gave you images to recreate.Why? This way you'll learn how ot make things better and much easier, and it'll help you improve :3

Good luck!
PM me if you need any help with something mapping related :3

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