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GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size)

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HonKAn

StarForYou wrote:

There is my Easy \o/
http://puu.sh/iEr0I/d10eee9537.zip
Thanks~
Zerss

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hi! Awesome song! Here's a mod o/

Zerss' Normal

GENERAL: Neh! Why is this diff perfect? I don't have anything to suggest. BUU! XD Thanks a lot c: On top of that, I'm a new mapper so, well xD
  1. 00:01:548 (2,3,4) This doesn't look bad... but, I don't like overlaps in easier diffs. I don't think it's a big problem
  2. 01:19:548 (4) NC, to keep Nc'ing consistency. Yup, I've forgot this one xD
  3. 01:23:673 (8) ^ This one too xD

Good luck! o.o7
Thanks for your mod ! :)

update! (sorry for the time that I've spent to do it xD)
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: mirai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 452
PreviewTime: 37735
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1548,13548,37548,60798,85548,90048
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:MIRAI (TV size ver.)
TitleUnicode:MIRAI (TV size ver.)
Artist:GARNiDELiA
ArtistUnicode:GARNiDELiA
Creator:[ Shimakaze ]
Version:Zerss' Normal
Source:ガンスリンガー ストラトス - THE ANIMATION-
Tags:ending Gunslinger Stratos Zerss hopperhtkn StarForYou
BeatmapID:725465
BeatmapSetID:326765

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"44031180_p0.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1548,750,4,2,0,40,1,0
13548,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
14298,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
14673,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
16548,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
17298,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
17673,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
20298,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
20673,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
21423,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
22548,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
24423,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
24798,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
37173,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
37548,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
61548,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
61735,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
73548,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
73735,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
85548,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,202
Combo2 : 241,135,138
Combo3 : 199,244,97
Combo4 : 130,238,253

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Almie
My first mod, hope it helps ^^

Easy
Embarrassing, but Ive got nothing to say here, its pretty much perfect hah
Zerss' Normal
General: Not much to say, no major issues in my opinion, so the following is just nitpicks
00:17:673 (2) - Perhaps this circle would fit the song better as a slider?
00:35:673 (6) - The following circle would look slightly nicer like this in my opinion: http://puu.sh/iOgm7/73d169336d.jpg
KAn
General:
- The notes seem to be pretty close together and overlapped often, which makes it hard to read. Would be fine, but not at this difficulty imo.
- OD7 seems a bit high for 2,83 difficulty
00:03:423 (1) - These 4 circles are kind of hard to read, thanks to the overlap
00:06:423 (1) - Again, hard to read
00:36:423 (1) - I dont like the placement of the circles here, makes it hard to read since its relatively low AR and theres also 2x new combo which I think could be still a part of the previous combo.

Sorry for just going on about the reading issues, but there is not much else to say, well mapped otherwise.
Zerss

Almaironn wrote:

Zerss' Normal
General: Not much to say, no major issues in my opinion, so the following is just nitpicks
00:17:673 (2) - Perhaps this circle would fit the song better as a slider? I prefer like this
00:35:673 (6) - The following circle would look slightly nicer like this in my opinion: http://puu.sh/iOgm7/73d169336d.jpg That'll break the flow
Then, no changes :)
Topic Starter
HonKAn

HonKAn wrote:

KAn
General:
- The notes seem to be pretty close together and overlapped often, which makes it hard to read. Would be fine, but not at this difficulty imo.
- OD7 seems a bit high for 2,83 difficulty Done
00:03:423 (1) - These 4 circles are kind of hard to read, thanks to the overlap Done
00:06:423 (1) - Again, hard to read
00:36:423 (1) - I dont like the placement of the circles here, makes it hard to read since its relatively low AR and theres also 2x new combo which I think could be still a part of the previous combo.
Thanks mod.~
Topic Starter
HonKAn
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Sonnyc
SPOILER
13:42 HonKAn: ㅎㅇㅇㅎ
13:42 HonKAn: 바빠 ??
13:43 Sonnyc: ㅎㅇ
13:43 Sonnyc: ㄴㄴ
13:43 *HonKAn is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725436 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [KAn]]
13:43 HonKAn: 부탁드립니다 !?
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:01:548 (1) - 피아노 소리가 00:01:923 - 에서 끊겨서 1/4 늘려서 끝낸거 어색함
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:07:548 (1) - 이거도 마찬가지
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:35:110 (3) - (2)랑은 가까운데 (4)와는 멀어서 좀 보기에 어색함.
13:47 HonKAn: 소리를 줄여도 어색한가 ?
13:47 Sonnyc: ㅇㅇ 박자가 틀려서 어색한거
13:48 HonKAn: ㅇㅋ
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Sonnyc wrote:

SPOILER
13:42 HonKAn: ㅎㅇㅇㅎ
13:42 HonKAn: 바빠 ??
13:43 Sonnyc: ㅎㅇ
13:43 Sonnyc: ㄴㄴ
13:43 *HonKAn is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725436 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [KAn]]
13:43 HonKAn: 부탁드립니다 !?
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:01:548 (1) - 피아노 소리가 00:01:923 - 에서 끊겨서 1/4 늘려서 끝낸거 어색함
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:07:548 (1) - 이거도 마찬가지
13:46 Sonnyc: 00:35:110 (3) - (2)랑은 가까운데 (4)와는 멀어서 좀 보기에 어색함.
13:47 HonKAn: 소리를 줄여도 어색한가 ?
13:47 Sonnyc: ㅇㅇ 박자가 틀려서 어색한거
13:48 HonKAn: ㅇㅋ
고마워~
rui
Topic Starter
HonKAn

rui wrote:

My Hard
http://puu.sh/jdpJ4.zip
Thanks!~
Asfand
[Easy]
  1. 01:06:798 (3,1,2) - spacing inconsistency
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:548 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:798 (5) - how about moving this here(see image) to get better flow to 00:25:548 (1) - and make nice triangle patterns
  2. 00:36:423 (1,2,1,2) - quite deceptive spacing for a Hard difficulty, maybe stack or have very low spacing
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:923 (2) - ctrl+g this and this 00:11:673 (1) -
Starfy

Asfand wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:06:798 (3,1,2) - spacing inconsistency Absolutely not
Tks for mod and no change
Sonnyc
no kd
[Easy]
  1. Consider AR3 for the spread if Zerss changes their difficulty setting.
[Normal]
  1. cs is lower than Easy. I wouldn't think this as an oridinary situation.
  2. There is currently spread issue in this map; the gap with Normal-Hard is too noticable. My conclusion is that your difficulty settings were too low, and I recommend CS4, AR6, OD5.
  3. Using the custom hitsound in this mapset is recommended for consistency. Or please at least use the custom sliderslide if you really do not prefer the other custom hitsounds.
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:110 (2) - Personally I think it would look more organized if you use the same curve rate with (1) by using ctrl+H,J.
  2. 00:49:548 (1,2) - The end of (1) and the slider body of (2) was pretty close which can be easily avoided. I would move (2,3) to (500,260).
  3. 00:58:548 (1) - 00:59:673 (1) - Slider velocity multiplier of 2.00x was way too much. I agree the idea of a speed increase here, but the current speed was pretty drastic. I'd recommend 1.5x for safety, or you could using something higher than that.
지금 보니까 노래 잔잔해서 노말 세팅 저렇게 조절하면 따로 난이도는 필요 없을듯
Starfy

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
  1. Consider AR3 for the spread if Zerss changes their difficulty setting.
Fixed and Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/jewm0/e469899743.zip
rui

Asfand wrote:


  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:798 (5) - how about moving this here(see image) to get better flow to 00:25:548 (1) - and make nice triangle patterns
    fixed
  2. 00:36:423 (1,2,1,2) - quite deceptive spacing for a Hard difficulty, maybe stack or have very low spacing changed distance. but pattern kept

Sonnyc wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:47:110 (2) - Personally I think it would look more organized if you use the same curve rate with (1) by using ctrl+H,J. fixed
  2. 00:49:548 (1,2) - The end of (1) and the slider body of (2) was pretty close which can be easily avoided. I would move (2,3) to (500,260). fixed
  3. 00:58:548 (1) - 00:59:673 (1) - Slider velocity multiplier of 2.00x was way too much. I agree the idea of a speed increase here, but the current speed was pretty drastic. I'd recommend 1.5x for safety, or you could using something higher than that. want to keep SV2.0
지금 보니까 노래 잔잔해서 노말 세팅 저렇게 조절하면 따로 난이도는 필요 없을듯
Asfand and Sonnyc thank you for mod.

http://puu.sh/jeDWc.zip
Zerss

Asfand wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:548 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency Done!

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
  1. cs is lower than Easy. I wouldn't think this as an oridinary situation.
  2. There is currently spread issue in this map; the gap with Normal-Hard is too noticable. My conclusion is that your difficulty settings were too low, and I recommend CS4, AR6, OD5. Used these diff. settings. Actually, I was the first one who made the GD, so, I didn't knew that there will be a difficulty gap :/
  3. Using the custom hitsound in this mapset is recommended for consistency. Or please at least use the custom sliderslide if you really do not prefer the other custom hitsounds. Done, I've tried to use them, but it was a bit weird, so I'll keep these (with the sliderslide)
Thanks for the mods!

Update!
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Asfand wrote:

[insane]00:10:923 (2) - ctrl+g this and this 00:11:673 (1) - umm.... no
all Update.
Zerss
Changed some little stuff :3

link
McLaren12
Hey, here's my mod!

SPOILER
Starfy's Easy

00:54:048 May be me, but the jump to the this circle and to the next circle feels a lot larger than the one previous. Moving it up just a touch should fix it
00:59:673 ~ 01:00:798 That's quite a distance, even for that pause
01:23:673 Maybe you could erase (2) and (3) and finish the song off there with an ending spinner starting at 01:23:673 to 01:25:548

Zerss' Normal

00:05:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here
00:34:548 Add NC
00:35:673 This slider could be cleaned up a little bit, feels a little plain
01:02:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here
01:08:673 ^
01:19:548 ^
01:22:923 Add NC
01:23:673 Remove NC and/or ending spinner like in easy

Rui's Hard

00:24:423 ~ 00:24:798 Not sure why these notes are here, don't really match with anything in the song
00:30:423 ^
01:23:673 Ending spinner??

KAn

00:07:548 Remove NC
00:08:298 Remove NC
00:10:548 Remove NC
00:11:673 Remove NC
00:30:798 Remove NC
00:34:173 Remove NC
00:34:548 Add NC
00:36:985 Remove NC
00:37:173 Remove NC
00:40:548 Remove NC
00:43:173 Remove NC
00:59:298 Remove NC
01:00:235 Remove NC
01:02:110 Remove NC
01:08:110 Remove NC
01:14:110 Remove NC
01:17:110 Remove NC
01:20:485 Remove NC
01:20:673 Add NC
01:21:235 Remove NC
01:23:110 Remove NC

Hope I helped! :D
rui

McLaren12 wrote:

Rui's Hard

00:24:423 ~ 00:24:798 Not sure why these notes are here, don't really match with anything in the song ok fixed
00:30:423 ^ ^
01:23:673 Ending spinner?? nope
Thank you McLaren12

http://puu.sh/jm1y7.zip
Beomsan
fuwafuwa desu
Zerss

McLaren12 wrote:

Hey, here's my mod!

Zerss' Normal

00:05:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here Done
00:34:548 Add NC Done
00:35:673 This slider could be cleaned up a little bit, feels a little plain I don't see the problem :/
01:02:673 Curved slider may look and play nicer here no
01:08:673 ^ no
01:19:548 ^ no
01:22:923 Add NC Done
01:23:673 Remove NC and/or ending spinner like in easy Done

Hope I helped! :D
Thanks for your mod! :)

Update!
Starfy

McLaren12 wrote:

Starfy's Easy

00:54:048 May be me, but the jump to the this circle and to the next circle feels a lot larger than the one previous. Moving it up just a touch should fix it I don't think so tbh => http://puu.sh/jnA80/4328c7449f.jpg
00:59:673 ~ 01:00:798 That's quite a distance, even for that pause Because of the Distance Snap
01:23:673 Maybe you could erase (2) and (3) and finish the song off there with an ending spinner starting at 01:23:673 to 01:25:548 No change
Tks for mod and no change
Topic Starter
HonKAn

McLaren12 wrote:

Hey, here's my mod!

KAn

00:07:548 Remove NC
00:08:298 Remove NC
00:10:548 Remove NC
00:11:673 Remove NC
00:30:798 Remove NC
00:34:173 Remove NC Done
00:34:548 Add NC Done
00:36:985 Remove NC
00:37:173 Remove NC
00:40:548 Remove NC
00:43:173 Remove NC
00:59:298 Remove NC
01:00:235 Remove NC
01:02:110 Remove NC
01:08:110 Remove NC
01:14:110 Remove NC
01:17:110 Remove NC
01:20:485 Remove NC Done
01:20:673 Add NC Done
01:21:235 Remove NC
01:23:110 Remove NC

Hope I helped! :D
Thanks you modding
all Update.
Luel Roseline
SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
Topic Starter
HonKAn

S A V E R Y wrote:

SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
모딩감사합니다.
GugUCorn
별 쏘고 감 ;)

조만간 모딩 해주지 흠흠;;

D-157

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Luel Roseline

HonKAn wrote:

S A V E R Y wrote:

SΛVERY's Mod

[hard]
CS is 4.5?

[KAn]
00:46:548 - 슬라이더 점프 간격이 2.0이상이네요. 플레이에 원할하지 않을 것 같습니다. 여기부터가...

아니면 충분하고요.
모딩감사합니다.
(뜨끔)그건 안해줬나? 星
Akiyama Mizuki
starfy
00:13:548 (1) - finish doesn't fit at all, for a calmful piano
00:19:548 (1) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1) - offscreen
01:17:673 (2) - ^ - yes, a bit

zerss
AR AT LEAST 4.5~5, 6 is beyond ridiculous for this difficulty
okay map i think

rui
AR7 fits way better IMO
00:12:423 - mute from here to 00:12:798 - , these sounds have nothing to do with the song
00:48:798 (3) - has to be notes, drum on 00:48:985 - definitely needs to be emphasized
neat

honkan
00:01:173 (1,2,1) - 여기가 점점 상승하는 톤에 줄어드는 간격에 00:04:173 (1,2,1) - 여기는 점점 줄어드는 톤에 상승하는 간격이네요. 뭔가 잘못됐습니다.
좋네요
Zerss

bbj0920 wrote:

zerss
AR AT LEAST 4.5~5, 6 is beyond ridiculous for this difficulty i'm ok with moving it to 5, i'll let HonKAn do it by him/herself
okay map i think
thx
Starfy

bbj0920 wrote:

starfy
00:13:548 (1) - finish doesn't fit at all, for a calmful piano
00:19:548 (1) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1) - offscreen
01:17:673 (2) - ^ - yes, a bit
All fixed
http://puu.sh/n3KKz/e48b8610d2.zip
Topic Starter
HonKAn
2/12 UPDATE
Abelia
[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion.

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요.
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯...
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요.
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히...
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요.




열심히 보긴 봤는데 다른 다른 난이도는 잘 안보이네요 ㅜㅠ
Gloria Guard
M4M

[General]

Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal


[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요

SPOILER
00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^
00:50:673 (1) - ^
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^
01:00:235 (1) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - ^
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^


곡이 잔잔하고 맵도 괜찮아서 딱히 잡을게 없었네요 Good Luck ~
rui

bbj0920 wrote:

rui
AR7 fits way better IMO changed AR7.5
00:12:423 - mute from here to 00:12:798 - , these sounds have nothing to do with the song changed volume 10%
00:48:798 (3) - has to be notes, drum on 00:48:985 - definitely needs to be emphasized
neat I see. this placement change
Thank you bbj0920
Dailycare


[starfy's Easy]
00:14:673 (2) - Fix blanket
00:25:548 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (2) - ^

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better

[rui's Hard]
why did you use small CS as old-style beatmaps?

00:56:673 (2,2,2) - Move to (268, 104)

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요
Zerss

Moly wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion. if you mean, make a blanket with (2), then flow would be broken

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics are you talking about 00:25:548 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:28:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Because it was right in the middle of them xD

Dailycare wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better Well, it's following the piano, so i guess it's right
okay, no changes, waiting for Gloria Guard's answer
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Moly wrote:

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.(ok)
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯... (ok)
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히... (ok)
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요. (ok)

Gloria Guard wrote:

M4M

[General]
Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal (ok)


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요네.

SPOILER
00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC (ok)
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC (ok)
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:50:673 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:00:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)

Dailycare wrote:

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제 (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요 (ok)
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요 (ok)

감사합니다.
depzdai
#modreq. Wow, the map is good...
rui's Hard
- 00:29:673 (7) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc9jV/710fe4ecbe.png
- 00:37:548 (1,2) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc8vw/8bbd21de46.png
- 00:52:548 (1) - A map would be more interesting with some slight changes of a pattern. https://puu.sh/rcbGq/6a8f596c28.png

Insane
- 00:17:673 (2) - ctrl+g. A pattern with lots of ways to play with always makes the players less bored.
- 00:49:173 (2,1) - Blanket.
- 01:04:923 (2,3) - Can it be blanket? https://puu.sh/rcacr/3674b0deac.png
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