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FELT - Crumbling

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happy30
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 5 augustus 2015 at 19:26:44

Artist: FELT
Title: Crumbling
Source: 東方Project
Tags: renko vivienne w.nova Maurits"禅"Cornelis Grow Color C85 魔界地方都市エソテリア / Rural Makai City Esoteria 東方星蓮船 ~ Undefined Fantastic Object, stage 5 theme ZUN
BPM: 172
Filesize: 10521kb
Play Time: 06:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Broken (4,91 stars, 1271 notes)
Download: FELT - Crumbling
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I M C R U M B L I N G

Thanks mod:
blackbirdo
Woofer
nitteke
lasagna
bj0420
jonamentorilfj
kameraatje123
appel eter x
Natteke desu
FIRD
Sylith
SECD
Rapthorn
THOD
Heatherfield
FOTH
Kite
i cant count
Natteke
fuck you all, i'm forever 1rd
Topic Starter
happy30
nitteke here you are not 1rd
in my heart... you are 1rd
Natteke

happy30 wrote:

nitteke here you are not 1rd
in my heart... you are 1rd
yeahyeahyeahhh
C R U M B L I N G B O Y S
Natteke
why no rank dude?
yeahyeahyeahhh
seriously wtf dude?
Topic Starter
happy30
ok then
gregest
last and only exception I ever do

[General]

You should remove the bookmarks

The new diffname could something be like Broken

[Collab which isn't actually a collab]

01:51:651 (3,4) - stacks these maybe like 01:48:861 (5,6) -

02:33:338 (2,3,1) - this anti-jump is pretty weird

02:49:733 - note here maybe?

03:03:861 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - this spacing is a bit big in my opinion

04:09:268 - note here maybe?

04:23:396 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - same as the previous stream

04:55:227 (7,8,9) - this part feels and plays really weird

06:03:162 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - spacing

06:12:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - maybe you could make the end of the stream less spaced, something like this http://puu.sh/jlmCV/36311e86ce.jpg

sorry for the short mod but I couldn't really find anything
GoldenWolf
Dayum



01:00:896 (14) - Place the NC there instead of 01:01:157 (1) - so the rhythm change is a bit more predictable, also maybe rearrange in a more spaced pattern like this? Currently the circle at 01:01:157 (1) - is too close from the previous one, especially since you used bigger spacing on previous 3/4s aswell

03:55:314 (2) - Place a circle there and start a 1/2 slider 03:55:489 - there instead? Follows the voice better imo

04:38:396 (5) - I'd hope you'd map the drums there D: feels a little bit empty

05:14:499 (4) - Move this circle on top of 05:14:674 (1) - this slider and make it a triple? Kinda break the jumpy pattern you have going on in this section, but the piano screams me triple instead of jump ;_;

05:51:534 (2,3) - On the previous part you mapped the piano ( 04:11:535 (1,2,3) - ) but here you went for the drums? Both are fine to map but you should probably stay consistent and pick one instrument for both patterns
in any case you should place a NC 04:12:233 (4) - there like the second pattern, makes it easier to read the jump from 3 to 4


That's it for my poor mod, wonderful map <3
Natteke
SPOILER
15:57 happy30: hi mod my map
15:59 happy30: i map again :D
16:28 Natteke: :D ok
16:28 Natteke: why no rank
16:28 *Natteke is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703275 FELT - Crumbling [Collab]]
16:28 Natteke: somsing craaamring
16:28 happy30: http://puu.sh/jlpZK/4e59bed324.jpg
16:28 Natteke: chaiming*
16:30 Natteke: so
16:30 Natteke: what map
16:30 Natteke: crumbling?
16:30 happy30: yeah
16:31 Natteke: spread streams :>
16:32 happy30: i thought of you when i mapped those
16:32 Natteke: b-bakaa!
16:32 Natteke: 06:12:930 (9,10,11,12,13) -
16:32 Natteke: looks ugly
16:33 Natteke: like a curved dick
16:34 Natteke: 01:45:024 - this section here has no hs what so ever :<
16:35 happy30: i dont know what to put there
16:35 Natteke: 02:49:559 (2) - hitnormal ples
16:36 Natteke: I like the finish attack!!!
16:36 happy30: me too
16:39 Natteke: that's all I think
16:39 Natteke: cant see anything wrong with the map
16:39 Natteke: want me to post this log to threat?
16:39 Natteke: d*
16:40 happy30: yeah please


bats rank this please
Topic Starter
happy30
Thank you Natekke for mod
Lasse
m4m

General
General: How about lowering the HP drain a bit? I know you like using high drain for your maps, but I think ~7 might fit better here[
Bitrate is too high :/
Also there seem to be a few not completely beat snapped sliders according to aimod

Source could be changed to "東方Project"

Broken
00:26:884 (1) - add a hitsound addition?
00:34:559 (9) - move the slider end a bit to the left
00:35:082 (11,1) - rotating 1 a bit like this would look smoother, probably also consider flipping 1 to blanket 00:35:779 (4) -
01:20:954 (5) - curve this abit more to make the blanket look better
01:28:105 (2,4) - stack the ends of those
01:36:477 (1,2) - better blanket? (rotate 1 by ~15° clockwise/selection)
01:37:698 (6,2) - blanket?
01:45:024 maybe use soft instead of normal hitsounds for this part?
03:15:721 (1) - end at 03:17:814 to fit the vocals? or just keep it on the instruments, won't make that big a difference
03:31:942 feels like there should be something here
03:42:931 (5) - move up a little bit/blanketing
03:43:977 (4,8) - blanket?
03:56:012 (1,2) - this would feel way better if it was blanketed
04:01:594 (1) - make this look a bit more "interesting" (wobbly or something?)
04:03:163 (1) - this maybe too?
04:18:861 (1,2) - blanket?
05:30:023 (3,4) - move 4 down abit ?
05:59:499 (1,4) - fix blanket

Maps seems well polished, I couldn't really find any major stuff => most of this mod is pretty minor and subjective...
Akiyama Mizuki
I'm lovin' it

00:33:076 (5) - This is what kinda bugs me, rhythm is much better when it's mapped like this.
00:43:018 (4) - Not important, but it should be at x210 y245.
01:47:466 (1,2) - Kinda confusing.
05:45:197 (9) - what
05:55:052 (2) - x344 y190
06:02:726 (3) - x349 y346

I tried to mod this. Good luck :D
Topic Starter
happy30
Thanks for mods!
Akiyama Mizuki

happy30 wrote:

bj0420
can i smoke some weed high30? :^)
jonathanlfj
waaaa
15:24 jonathanlfj: man why is your mp3 not 192kbps
15:24 jonathanlfj: let me fix that for you
15:24 happy30: welp
15:25 happy30: should I add a lyrics sb?
15:25 jonathanlfj: nah keep it simple
15:25 jonathanlfj: people are gonna be like omg sb optimization bla bla bla
15:26 happy30: then i should get rid of the superbigfile.png
15:26 jonathanlfj: yeah
15:28 jonathanlfj: well actually the effects sb can stay
15:28 happy30: i only kept black and white
15:28 happy30: that extra effect wasnt worth 1mb
15:32 jonathanlfj: k
15:32 jonathanlfj: testing to see if offset change is needed for new mp3
15:38 jonathanlfj: ok new mp3 seems fine with the current offset http://puu.sh/jpkZO.mp3
15:39 happy30: what
15:39 happy30: really?
15:39 happy30: are you a wizard
15:40 jonathanlfj: lol its just audition tricks
15:41 happy30: teach me master
15:41 jonathanlfj: 00:39:791 (1,1) - omg not perfectly stacked asdf
15:41 jonathanlfj: you basically just cut out or extend blank space in the mp3 to achieve a certain offset
15:42 happy30: but you have to know which offset
15:42 jonathanlfj: well you look at the waveform of the original mp3
15:42 jonathanlfj: and look for the first peak
15:43 jonathanlfj: then you go into the converted mp3 and align the peaks
15:43 jonathanlfj: they maybe 1~2ms off but its insignificant for osu's purpose
15:44 happy30: what program do you use for this?
15:44 jonathanlfj: adobe audition
15:45 jonathanlfj: 02:29:239 - i'd add a circle here to avoid misreading the stack
15:46 happy30: you can't misread that
15:46 jonathanlfj: i did click the circle too early
15:46 jonathanlfj: cause there was a sound on the blue tick
15:46 happy30: you have fast reflexes
15:46 jonathanlfj: yeah lol
15:47 jonathanlfj: the song is full of random 1/4s
15:47 jonathanlfj: 03:31:942 - now there should be a note here
15:47 happy30: usually you don't know how many repeats short repeat sliders have
15:47 jonathanlfj: well if you dont want to add it its fine just a suggestion
15:49 jonathanlfj: 04:11:535 (1,2,3) - if you listen at 25% the piano here is mistimed so follow the drums in 1/3 instead
15:50 jonathanlfj: as seen here 05:51:302 (1,2,3) -
15:51 happy30: but thats unplayable
15:51 happy30: and we don't play in 25%
15:51 jonathanlfj: then change the one i linked later into 1/4
15:52 happy30: its already 1/4
15:52 happy30: oops
15:52 jonathanlfj: lol
15:53 jonathanlfj: 04:27:931 (5) - missing clap
15:54 jonathanlfj: 04:44:326 (4,5,1) - if you want these patterns to look nice change stack leniency to 5
15:54 jonathanlfj: else you get this wtf stacking
15:56 happy30: oh thanks
15:56 jonathanlfj: 05:24:616 (3) - lower this slightly flows better imo
15:58 jonathanlfj: i think thats all
15:58 happy30: :D
15:58 jonathanlfj: update and let me know
15:58 happy30: ill upload
15:59 jonathanlfj: kk
16:00 happy30: done
16:01 happy30: also, wallpaper size is weird, it's because that's the largest available
16:02 jonathanlfj: thats fine as long as its under the max allowed
Topic Starter
happy30
Thank you! :D
Bara-
As requested
I'm already afraid of the naming coming in the modder list ;w;

[General]
Seems fine

[Broken]
  1. 00:24:355 (8,1) - Blanket?
  2. 01:49:384 (1,2) - Can you please space them in such way the starts/tails don't overlap? That looks nicer IMO
  3. 01:57:407 (1,2) - This is rather confusing. Consider spacing them a little more, to increase readability
  4. 02:02:989 (5,6) - ^^
  5. 02:53:396 (1,3) - Consider blanketing them
  6. 03:15:373 (7) - A curve to the left (instead of to the right) flows better, following the movement from 03:14:152 (1,2,3,4) - which is quite circular
  7. 03:31:419 (3,4) - Consider spacing them slightly
  8. 04:41:797 - Add note? Seems to make the stack easier to read
  9. 04:44:326 (4,5,1) - This is quite awesome :3
  10. 04:55:489 - Add note for piano and to make it more readable? (3/4 is is little awkward if you don't know the song and such)
  11. 05:57:406 (3,4) - Ctrl G? It seems to flow better
Nice map
Poke me when it's fixed :3
Time for bubble #2 then
Bara-
Happy talked with me in-game, updated etc.
So it's now

Bubble #2'd

Mint
wait for meeee

Small IRC check, looks good to me now. Waiting for slot ...
IRC log
2015-08-05 19:07 appleeaterx: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703275 FELT - Crumbling [Broken]]
2015-08-05 19:07 appleeaterx: niet echt dingen die je hoeft te fixen
2015-08-05 19:07 appleeaterx: 00:54:791 - vind het best raar dat je deze clap niet mapped :(
2015-08-05 19:11 happy30: ok fix ik
2015-08-05 19:11 appleeaterx: 01:43:977 (1) - laat de spinner starten @ blue tick?
2015-08-05 19:15 happy30: ok
2015-08-05 19:15 appleeaterx: 02:20:605 (1,2,3) - nc echt nodig..?
2015-08-05 19:15 happy30: removed
2015-08-05 19:15 appleeaterx: 04:12:233 (1,2,3,4) - niet echt nodig maar een triplet zou leuk klinken netzoals bij 05:51:999 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-08-05 19:26 happy30: ok changed
2015-08-05 19:27 happy30: updated@
Mint
Qualified!
Rapthorn

appleeaterx wrote:

Bara-
Congratz
ugh, I keep getting Ninja'd when trying to qualify
Topic Starter
happy30
THANK YOU!
meii18
Congratulations happy30!
GoldenWolf
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