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恭喜AJOY起飛
Chaoslitz wrote:
恭喜AJOY起飛
Eyy you got it ranked, nice job man, really love this song and map set 
Hopefully it stays. ^_^xRarzzz wrote:
Eyy you got it ranked, nice job man, really love this song and map set
Disqualification Notice
Hello!
Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.
Easy
Inappropriate Gameplay Elements
Rhythm issues
Inappropriate Gameplay Elements
There are a couple of elements that are not suitable for this level of difficulty, especially on this very high BPM.
- 00:21:230 (5) - Sharp-angled sliders like this can create reading problems for newbies players and they don't fit in the flow you have created here. Note that there are similar sliders throughout the whole map that should be fixed.
- 00:31:230 (3) - On this BPM, the players won't be able to react to the second repeat in time. Please avoid multiple-repeatsliders of this length.
- 00:44:230 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please avoid using 1/2-sliders on this BPM. They are too short, so they will throw newbies off when playing.
- 03:10:230 (1,2) - Repeated 1/2-sliders also don't work well on this BPM. Due to the low spacing, they even overlap each other.
A few rhythms don't follow the music appropriately. They can throw the players off, because the map's rhythm doesn't fit to what the players would expect from the music.
- 00:24:230 (4,5) - A 3/2-repeatslider would be more appropriate here, as 00:24:605 - is a very strong beat.
- 00:40:230 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems very simplified, a rhythm that would fit much better to the music would be something like: http://puu.sh/jjYVN/eb0290f397.jpg While this might look more complicated than the current rhythm, it will be much better to play for the newbies, as the strongest beats of the music will be covered by the map.
Rhythm issues
The map often uses slidertails to cover very strong beats. Those beats don't get enough emphasis this way - Having them clickable (a sliderhead or a circle) would fit to the music much better. Examples:
- 00:34:230 -
- 01:30:230 -
- 01:50:230 -
While this map is overall well done, it needs more polishing to be ready for the Ranked status. We recommend you to get more mods for this difficulty, to improve it's quality even more. Examples for issues:
- Some of the slidershapes are overcurved, they don't really fit well into the flow of the map and seem to be used quite randomly: 00:14:480 (2) - , 00:20:480 (7) -
- Some consecutive objects overlap just slightly, which makes them look aesthetically unpleasing. It doesn't seem intentional in these cases: 00:37:230 (3,4) - , 00:44:730 (3,4) -
- 01:19:730 (5,1) - The spacing between these objects is much lower than your average spacing, it doesn't seem intentional though as the pattern doesn't benefit from it.
If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.
The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.
Good luck!
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Topic Starter
where are high diffs' mods?
Are you prepare them for next DQ?
Are you prepare them for next DQ?
tbh i totally agree with the dq reasons.
tell me after things changed.
tell me after things changed.
Topic Starter
fixed all things what you said :3
Hello!
I saw this map go ranked and DQed, but honestly I'm glad it happened because I still see stuff that
feels wrong with the map. From the 4.6* diff containing deathstreams, to lack of flow I want to see a lot changed on this map.
If this isn't gonna get ranked soon, can I post a detailed mod for the mapset?
I just really love the song and it's a shame that this map would bring me no PP as it is..
I saw this map go ranked and DQed, but honestly I'm glad it happened because I still see stuff that
feels wrong with the map. From the 4.6* diff containing deathstreams, to lack of flow I want to see a lot changed on this map.
If this isn't gonna get ranked soon, can I post a detailed mod for the mapset?
I just really love the song and it's a shame that this map would bring me no PP as it is..
I really like the map, I hope it'll get ranked as it's a good song + mapping combo.
Topic Starter
but the size proportion is not suitable for rank, thanks anywayFurry wrote:
needs higher res background
it's a nice chance to change AR to 10 and OD to 9 at least.sjoy wrote:
but the size proportion is not suitable for rank, thanks anywayFurry wrote:
needs higher res background
2nd
YES, I do believe a map's difficulty should be proportional to it's value.Xilver wrote:
I really hope this is a joke. You want to mod the map in a way it'll bring more pp to you? I'm sorry if that's your intention of modding then don't bother posting the mod and never mod ever again.
Because if that's not the case then the pp system is to blame?
I guess we'll have to agree to disagree.
With my post I was basically trying to avoid directly saying "I don't think this is ready for ranking."
But now you pushed my buttons and insulted my modding skills, so there's that.
If I can FC every 4.6 star map with no problem, and then have so much troube with this one,
I feel it is my duty to leave some feedback for it.
Oh well,
good luck re-ranking guys!
Is the star difficulty algorithm using now objective and accurate?UltraRik wrote:
YES, I do believe a map's difficulty should be proportional to it's value.
Because if that's not the case then the pp system is to blame?
You can see that the pp system is immediately adjusted after the first 600pp+ record is produced (in std).
What mappers make is following the music and their thoughts, not restricted in the frame of the difficulty system, which is not even proved absolutely scientific.
That's why maps nowadays are becoming more and more similar: pp farms earns more favs and plays and become popular. Personally I prefer old maps that make players feel "fun" than maps filled with jumps and streams nowadays.
2015-08-01 17:23 sjoy: 超市阿，能不能直接飞阿
2015-08-01 17:24 Chaoslitz: 泡了?
2015-08-01 17:24 sjoy: 是阿
2015-08-01 17:24 Chaoslitz: 我去看
2015-08-01 17:26 Chaoslitz: 直接來irc?
2015-08-01 17:26 sjoy: 好
2015-08-01 17:26 Chaoslitz: Easy
2015-08-01 17:27 Chaoslitz: 00:13:230 (5) - 把尾巴放下o3o
2015-08-01 17:27 Chaoslitz: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3471313
2015-08-01 17:27 Chaoslitz: 一會又說甚麼Sharp-angled sliders
2015-08-01 17:27 sjoy: hao
2015-08-01 17:29 Chaoslitz: dq post的你都改了?
2015-08-01 17:29 Chaoslitz: 00:42:230 (4) - 這也是啦-.-
2015-08-01 17:30 Chaoslitz: 00:57:730 (6) - 把這個放右 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3471323
2015-08-01 17:30 sjoy: 我不知道还有什么可以DQ的因素 太可怕
2015-08-01 17:31 Chaoslitz: 我只看EZ NM吧?
2015-08-01 17:31 sjoy: 好
2015-08-01 17:31 Chaoslitz: 我覺得qat只看了這2個diff >_>
2015-08-01 17:31 sjoy: 故意的
2015-08-01 17:33 Chaoslitz: ;w;
2015-08-01 17:33 Chaoslitz: 01:44:230 (1,2) - 我覺得最好跟00:48:230 (1) - 一樣
2015-08-01 17:34 Chaoslitz: 01:53:730 (6) - 這次放左點啦
2015-08-01 17:34 sjoy: ·好
2015-08-01 17:35 Chaoslitz: 02:36:230 (4) - ..-w-
2015-08-01 17:36 Chaoslitz: 而且02:36:230 (4) - 往左放下個slider在右邊不太好
2015-08-01 17:36 Chaoslitz: 改改slider形狀?
2015-08-01 17:37 Chaoslitz: 02:55:730 (6) - 放右
2015-08-01 17:37 sjoy: 02:36:230 (4) - 这个有什么问题
2015-08-01 17:38 Chaoslitz: 02:36:230 (4,1) - 這2個相反了
2015-08-01 17:38 Chaoslitz: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3471353
2015-08-01 17:38 Chaoslitz: 類似這樣吧
2015-08-01 17:39 sjoy: 原来是这个
2015-08-01 17:39 Chaoslitz: 03:12:355 (4) - 最好也改改形狀
2015-08-01 17:41 sjoy: 好
2015-08-01 17:41 sjoy: 这些都是2013拉的
2015-08-01 17:41 sjoy: 年
2015-08-01 17:41 Chaoslitz: 我知道;w;
2015-08-01 17:41 Chaoslitz: normal也是你改?
2015-08-01 17:43 Chaoslitz: 01:28:230 (1) - 也是啦o3o
2015-08-01 17:43 Chaoslitz: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/744674 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Everything will freeze [hoshi's Normal]]
2015-08-01 17:45 sjoy: 是阿
2015-08-01 17:45 sjoy: 这我重新做了
2015-08-01 17:45 Chaoslitz: 好
2015-08-01 17:45 Chaoslitz: 先改改那slider ww
2015-08-01 17:46 sjoy: 都改了
2015-08-01 17:46 Chaoslitz: ok
2015-08-01 17:46 Chaoslitz: 01:27:230 - del wishtle
2015-08-01 17:47 sjoy: 没什么影响吧这个
2015-08-01 17:47 Chaoslitz: 01:32:230 (1) - del clap
2015-08-01 17:47 Chaoslitz: owo
2015-08-01 17:47 Chaoslitz: 你喜歡吧
2015-08-01 17:48 Chaoslitz: 就想統一一下
2015-08-01 17:48 Chaoslitz: 01:34:230 - del finish
2015-08-01 17:48 Chaoslitz: 01:35:230 (3) - del clap
2015-08-01 17:50 Chaoslitz: 沒了
2015-08-01 17:50 sjoy: 要到几点才飞
2015-08-01 17:51 Chaoslitz: 不清楚;w;
2015-08-01 17:51 Chaoslitz: 你先上傳
2015-08-01 17:51 sjoy: 好
2015-08-01 17:53 sjoy: 更好了
2015-08-01 17:53 Chaoslitz: 好
2015-08-01 17:55 Chaoslitz: 果然滿了;w;
2015-08-01 17:56 sjoy: ·那接下来就拜托了
2015-08-01 17:56 Chaoslitz: ok
2015-08-01 21:21 sjoy: 今天之前能飞吗？
2015-08-01 21:21 Chaoslitz: 一直在試:<
2015-08-01 21:22 Chaoslitz: 還是滿了
Qualified
I suppose diffs except EZ and NM are fine when the dq post did mention EZ and NM diffs only
I suppose.
跑去麻了一把 吃了个四 准备点图的时候发现已经飞了
我Qualified post都写好了 QAT爷爷们给点面子再坠一遍？
Topic Starter
不急阿，你看QAT很给面子了，高难度都没摸，等下周呢OniJAM wrote:
跑去麻了一把 吃了个四 准备点图的时候发现已经飞了我Qualified post都写好了 QAT爷爷们给点面子再坠一遍？
Like others have said, this ain't really ready for ranking ... it's hardly even been modded at allQuality Assurance Team wrote:
We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below.
00:44:855 (6,7) - I couldnt figure out how to play these on freezing diff
Singletap or slow alternate-Kanzaki wrote:
00:44:855 (6,7) - I couldnt figure out how to play these on freezing diff
Some words about last diff:
00:43:730 (9,10,11) - it seems overmapped a lot
00:33:355 (1,2,3) - this part can me moved upward to avoid overlapping and help with map readability
00:59:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped a lot too, reallly hard to beat and to read this (especially first slider)
^ previous same moment on 00:58:980 (11,1) have a "blue tick" between notes and this moment ^ is without "blue tick"
Everything looks good (if only thinks that singletap sliders SHOULD be to increase map difficulty), but it should be ar10 anyways, no needs to 9.8, because bpm is not 180-200. Thanks for OD8.8, some jumps had become clickable
00:43:730 (9,10,11) - it seems overmapped a lot
00:33:355 (1,2,3) - this part can me moved upward to avoid overlapping and help with map readability
00:59:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped a lot too, reallly hard to beat and to read this (especially first slider)
^ previous same moment on 00:58:980 (11,1) have a "blue tick" between notes and this moment ^ is without "blue tick"
Everything looks good (if only thinks that singletap sliders SHOULD be to increase map difficulty), but it should be ar10 anyways, no needs to 9.8, because bpm is not 180-200. Thanks for OD8.8, some jumps had become clickable