LoweH wrote:

Hey :3

Ugly!
01:05:126 (9) - New combo here
02:12:511 (1) - Remove new combo
02:13:434 (2) - New combo here + hitsound finish
02:41:126 (1) - Add a slider reverse here *
* example :

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ce875]screenshot113.jpg[/attachment:ce875]

02:49:203 (2) - New combo here
Done

Sorry!
00:50:818 (9) - New combo here
00:54:049 (1) - Hitsound clap
01:50:818 (10) - Hitsound finish Huh?
Done (except the last one)
Starr**

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai there
Sorry for the wait
Korean version of Morning musume, oh wait they're all boys

[General]
- you really don't need 3rd album in the tags Kk
- SB is great and funny I like that digga-digga-dance and the oh- oh- cracks me

[Ugly]
The combos aren't consistent, The combo in dragon and pianist part can last up to 9, while in bliss only 4. Cause this is the easiest diff better to break some long combo into smaller one

SPOILER

This is only a suggestion, use bliss pattern of 1 set of combo for 1 stanza Fixed
some example :
00:02:587 (6) - NC (new combo)
00:06:511 (4) - ^
00:09:741 (3) - ^

02:13:434 (3) - add finish will sound good imo Fixed
03:42:049 (1) - Fade out this? Fixed

[Sorry]
Sorry I can't find anything wrong here

[Crazy]
Just like Shulin said The inconsistent spacing in stream is very noticable and irritating. It'll play very nice if you make them more closer like in this set 00:07:895 (1,2,3,4,5)

Hmm. So I reduced stream spacing greatly in my part to be slightly easier (as in image below) since my friend complained to me about it earlier this month or so...however it makes the inconsistency more visible >< I dunno if this works - let me know?

SPOILER

Hmm...not anything major I guess, just the combo in ugly diff that's bothering me
The rest are AWSOME

have a Double Star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Crazy!]
0:53:934 (7) down 1 grid
1:12:972 (2) right 1 grid for symmetry
1:13:434 (3) left 1 grid for symmetry (4 can't move right anymore)
3:34:780 (2,3,4,1) down 1 grid

[Sorry!]
0:47:126 (8) up 1 grid
0:50:703 (9,10,11,12,13) down 1 grid, (13) down 2 grid (achieve even slope)
2:12:511 (1) remove new combo?

[Ugly] Fine.
All fixed

star~

• • Some SB images contains unnecessary transparency.
  • Add kiai

• • 03:40:203 (5) - New combo

1. Timing looks good
   
   1. You're storyboarded lyrics have a fair bit of transparent space in them. Perhaps you could crop those out to lower memory usage? There are others, but the lyrics are the main culprit.
   2. Just as an idea, how about you use soft hitsounds for the intro? (from the start - 00:15:280). Sounds better to me that way.
   3. the difficulty gap between Ugly and Sorry seems a bit big. perhaps you could map something to go in between those? (getting the other 2 mappers to come back and map another difficulty might be a little hard though, I understand D:)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Some SB images contains unnecessary transparency.See below
  • Add kiaiHmmm.

[Crazy!]

• • 03:40:203 (5) - New combo

Fixed

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing looks good
   
   1. Your storyboarded lyrics have a fair bit of transparent space in them. Perhaps you could crop those out to lower memory usage? There are others, but the lyrics are the main culprit. Cropped (hopefully nothing will shift too much).
   2. Just as an idea, how about you use soft hitsounds for the intro? (from the start - 00:15:280). Sounds better to me that way. Did for my part.
   3. the difficulty gap between Ugly and Sorry seems a bit big. perhaps you could map something to go in between those? (getting the other 2 mappers to come back and map another difficulty might be a little hard though, I understand D:)

[UGLY!]

Seems fine

[SORRY!]

hmm. Looks good.

[CRAZY!]

Some of the jumps in this don't fit well to me, mainly because the song isn't intense enough to warrant them. Could be just me though.

Dragonslayerxx's bit in this is a little overmapped imo. not the jumps, but mainly how the streams are spaced out wider, making them
tougher, which doesn't fit well in the song imo.

02:28:145 (1,1) - These spinners hit 2000+ bonus when auto hits them, yeah, but they still seem a bit out of place. Perhaps you could replace them with 1 spinner instead of 2? (or map something else there entirely?)
02:31:837 (1,1) - ^ Remapped for above two.
03:29:471 (1,1,1,1) - ^ (4 spinners here, so it would be 2 spinners., or just map something else here)

Not bad. Pretty solid overall, and pretty fun at times too. Nice work

Starred

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-All Good For Me

•Crazy!•
00:40:203 (10) - Please, New Combo. Changed
01:57:280 (3,4,5,6,7) - LolWut, Impossible. Make those more near.
02:02:241 (10,1) - Make those more near. Stacked
03:04:664 (12,1) - LoL? Make those more near.
03:34:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These combo make the player become confused. Please, make the notes more near. They are impossible, I think.

Nothing wrong for others diffs.

GAWWWWWWWDDDDDDDDDDDDD, I REALLY LOVE THIS SONG AND THIS MAAAAAAAAAAAAAP, YEYYY!!! Ehm, LoL. I'm crazy I know.
Anyway I love it~
Star!!!

Edit: Really PRO Storyboard, I love it.

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

Great map and sb (:

All of these are really minor things, so feel free to ignore them ><

[Ugly!]
01:52:664 (x) - Add a note? (added for blissfulyoshi *let me know if you don't want it there.)
02:47:126 (1) - Slide looks a bit funny, but its your choice if you want to change it ^^ Hopefully more symmetrical

[Sorry!]
00:06:511 (5) - Maybe copy and horizontally flip this slider and use it at 00:07:203 (6) so its symmetrical Sure

[Crazy!]
Fine!

alvisto wrote:

Yo ! Finally someone map this ! Sorry sorry~

UGLY
Cool and fun !
Why slider tick rate of 2 ? O.O Most of the lyrics match the 1/4 beats.

SORRY!
00:11:587 (1,2,3) - too quiet, raise a volume just a little bit ? However, I love what you are trying to achieve with these timing sections. Made slightly louder.
02:42:049 (2,3) - HRMMM.... I think they are fine, to any future BATs who might deem this as unrankable. xD
02:49:203 (1) - Flip this vertically ? because a jump between these 2 02:49:203 (1) & 02:50:126 (1) is kinda surprising. (I thought this 02:49:203 (1) ends here 02:49:664 xD) Just a suggestion.

CRAZY!
00:39:280 (7) - Consider add new combo to here to split up the long combo ? xD
01:43:664 & 01:47:472 - a bit quiet compared to other sections. Just raise volume a little bit ? Sure
01:57:280 (3,4,5,6) - BRUTAL !!! D: T.T D:
02:43:203 (1,2,3) - BRUTAL T.T
02:45:511 (1,2,3) - BRUTAL T.T
03:04:664 (12) - new combo here instead of to signify that 03:04:895 (1) is a jump. Btw, this jump is BRUTAL.
03:34:780 (2,3,4) - BRUTAL spacing
03:35:703 (2,3,4) - ^
03:36:626 (2,3,4) - ^

Those spacing/jumps that I mentioned above as Brutal are the jumps that I not really fond of , either because they are
1. Too huge of a jump
2. Spacing too D: for 1/4 beats

That being said, I think yoshi did the best job of utilizing jumps here. Intuitive and fun.

Nice map. Star~

dksslqj wrote:

[Ugly!]
01:23:818 (1) - remove clap
01:24:280 (2) - add clap at the finish

[Sorry!]
00:20:818 (7) - add new combo
00:50:357 (6) - △
01:53:126 (9) - △
02:59:587 (8) - △
03:03:280 (8) - △
03:06:972 (7) - △

[Crazy!]
fine

emaal wrote:

{Ugly!}
Reduce OD by 1? :O


THAT'S IT D:

Xgor wrote:

Oh look, I'm a lazy modder

[Ugly!]
02:00:511 (1) - Ugh this spinner feels just feels lazy and unfitting
03:07:434 (2,3,4,5) - God, this pattern is so cruel for the easiest difficulty in a mapset <.< More straightforward now!

[Sorry!]
00:02:587 (5) - Move this one grid to the left (Level 3) fixed!
00:03:741 (7) - Move this one grid to the right (Level 3) fixed!
01:58:664 (1,1,1,1) - Why new combo spam here?
02:06:049 (1,1,1,1) - ^
02:41:126 (1,1) - I think you should remove these new combos

[Crazy!]
Couldn't find anything technical faults ^^

Pretty good map you got there, I liked the storyboard.
*star*

Larto wrote:

Storyboard:
Fix the "Sorry!" at the end. Its movement looks good, but in the .osb file, it takes up a huge amount of space. Make it move on every 1/4 tick or so, that way it'll look good enough and not take up so much space. Simplified~

Crazy:
01:40:664 (4,5,6) - Make spacing more equal Oops ok.
03:40:203 (5) - New Combo Changed (DSx, let me know if you really want it back)

=]

Sorry:
02:31:895 (5) - New Combo Changed
02:32:357 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - Why are the sliders ending on 1/4 ticks? It sounds horrible.
02:39:280 (3,1) - Spacing =| (DSx, I did a quick fix, let me know how you want it.)

=]

Ugly:
00:07:895 (1,2,1,2) - I don't like these whistles at all Changed
02:13:434 (3) - New combooo? Changed
02:40:203 (2,3) - New combos? Changed
03:19:895 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Eh, I'm okay with the 1/2 "streams" before this part, but this is really too confusing for a new player in my opinion. Simplified
03:34:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Simplified

MarioBros777 wrote:

There are some jumps which seem... Very unplayable. Gave you one in IRC. You could probably get away with it since this song is called "Sorry Sorry" You know, kinda fits with the title of the song.
Yes, that one jump somehow was forgotten to be fixed. It should be better now.

Another thing is that hitsounds seem to disappear. Two examples would be...

[Sorry!]
03:12:51 -
checked
and...

[Crazy!]
02:43:20 -
checked
That, I won't give pity to.

Nevertheless, do not kudosu this. This was a half-ass mod and seeing Larto post here decreased my chances of wanting to mod this further. 'Cause he's a BAT, I expect him to be good at what he does and what power he was given.

TheVileOne wrote:

SPOILER

About this mod post

* Spacing suggestions will al be made in Grid 3 and using the current distance snap of 1.1 unless I tell you otherwise.
*I suggest anything no matter how minor it is.
*Unless I tell you differently the issues I find are minor suggestions.
*Suggestions are not meant to impede upon the creativity of the beatmapper, but to point out that something is out of the ordinary, awkward, or (in my opinion) could be made better.

General

Don't use the brown note. It blends too much into the black parts of the storyboard. Color is made lighter.

Ugly!!!

00:24:511 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These are too close in my opinion. So far the rhythm has remained consistant in the song until here. It may just me being the Beat Nazi as usual, but I can notice that the beats are closer together when I play through it, because I have to slow how fast I move the mouse to each note. There is no evidence in the song that I can surmise that slows the beat down here, so the notes shouldn't be differently spaced. (This is just a matter of taste. ) (Looking at it I believe the first 1 is spaced properly, and the others are reflected about the axis to give a sense of symmetry and order. I'll let dragonslayerxx decide - it's his part.) EDIT: Nevermind, he told me to fix as needed.

The fix

Use the current distance snap of 1.1 on these notes as well as 00:30:049 (1) - then move 00:31:895 (1,1) - down 1 unit to compensate for the spacing change.

Fixing it manually.

00:25:434 (2) - Move 1 unit right.
00:26:357 (1) - Move 1 unit right and 4 units up.
00:27:280 (2) - Move 4 units up
00:29:126 (2) - Move 1 unit right.
00:30:049 (1,1,1) - Move 1 unit down.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10264

00:38:818 (4,1,2) - Is there any particular reason why these notes do not follow the same structure as these notes 00:37:895 (2,3) - ?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10267

In the screenshot you can see that notes 2 and 3 are connected at the corner and notes 4, 1, and 2 are connected at the bottom. My suggestion here is to conform them so that they all connect to the corner of the previous note like in this screenshot.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10269 (Note that the only note that doesn't conform is 00:39:741 (2) - ,but it's negligible.

The fix is not complete yet. 00:40:203 (3,4) - These need to be distance snapped into place. It's alright if 3 is off the map, the note is visible.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10270

Fix 2

The step discrepancy can be fixed in multiple ways. You could make all the sliders connect under the previous one and that would save a little space at the end for 00:40:203 (3,4) -

(I would prefer it this way.)

00:42:972 (5,1) - Move up 1 unit. (Conforms with the snap.)

01:01:895 (2) - Make this line up better with the slider after this. I suggest that you rotate it by -13 degrees (counter clockwise) . Use the rotate by feature. Edit/rotate by

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10271

Done


01:09:280 (2) - Move 2 units to the right. (Note is unequally spaced with the rest of the combo.) Also rotate it to line it up better with the slider after it. I suggest rotating it by 18 degrees (clockwise) and moving it up 1 unit to finish the alignment.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10272

Done

Bliss's part below.
01:21:741 (1,2,3,4) - Unequal spacing.

Fix

Distance snap notes 2,3,and 4 to ensure the space is the same. Also make sure to distance snap these notes 01:23:818 (1,2,3) - after to complete the fix.
Bliss's fix implemented


01:27:972 (2) - Slider isn't straight. Move it down 1 unit and straighten it.
Fixed


01:57:741 (3,4,1,2) - Move up 1 unit.
I sense Bliss's intention has to do with symmetry (reflected over x-axis) Skipped.


02:29:126 (1,1,2,3,1) - Make all the same combo (1,2,3) or all different combos. (1,1,1) It looks odd that there is just a single note combo representing a vocal note followed by the same vocal sound represented with a longer combo. 02:31:434 (3) - shouldn't be a part of the red combo. Make it a part of the orange one. Try 123, 12 for the combo pattern.
Bliss's fix.


http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10279

02:41:126 (1) - Add a reverse to this ends at 02:42:741 - i highly recommend doing this. It feels awkward to end the slider facing away from the next note. Besides it makes sense rhythm wise. Added

03:07:664 (3) Note is hidden by hitburst. Fix this. Fixed

03:32:357 (4) - Make this a slider instead?
Sure

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10280



Normal

I will judge according to the 1.0 snap.

00:15:280 (1,2,3,4) - Why do all these sliders have different move points? I think that these 00:15:280 (1,2) - need work. They have jagged sides.
Replaced. Move points are changed when sliders are reversed / flipped.


00:43:549 (1,2,3,1) - Maybe you should change how these notes are played. Those reverse sliders are awkward to play.

The Fix

There are many ways to fix this. I came up with this configuration.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10283

After that you will need to respace these notes. 00:45:049 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -.
Nah, I don't like the overlap. Remapped differently.



01:04:664 (3) - This slider feels awkward. Maybe remove the reverse part of it and extend it to cover 01:05:126 (1) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10284 Ok.

01:29:126 (1) - Remove this note? It feels like this requires a sudden movement instead of a fluid one to hit this stack correctly. Removing this note would make it flow more smoothly. Or this top note can be remove from the stack, properly distance spaced and the rest of the blue combo can be nudged 3-5 units to the left in accordance of the snap. Another possibility is to stack this note on 11 and make it a part of that combo and you will be able to keep the rest of the blue combo where it is. That seems to be the best configuration for this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10287
Kept as it, but the stack is moved.


02:20:818 (1,2,3) - Not completely straight. Causing a slight jagged edge. Seems to be fine...

02:51:741 (6,7) - Move left 1 unit (to straighten the combo.)
Bliss wants the symmetry.

02:57:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unequal spacing. Just apply distance snap to them to fix it.
Bliss claims equal spacing.

03:33:511 - Add a note and stack it with 03:33:280 (1) -
He doesn't agree.

Crazy!

Stack leniency - 2. It screws up some parts of your map.
Lowered

Example: 00:11:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stacks screw up when the combo changes.

00:15:280 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these different shapes? The more conformal shape is 2 and 3 and I don't like how they look. The curve is too sharp in my opinion. Maybe they can be more conformal and have a more gradual curve.
The curves should be more symmetrical.



If you absolutely must have these slider shapes, then I suggest that 00:16:203 (3) - be rotated to better line up with the slider after it.

Rotated

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289

The screenshot shows the slider rotated -33 degrees (counterclockwise)


00:24:049 (5,1) - Harsh jump. I didn't quite expect it. IMO the distance for a jump like that should be like 00:25:895 (5,1) -

Kept

00:38:357 (4) - Move 2 units left.

00:38:818 (5) - Move 1 unit left.

00:39:049 (6) - Move 1 unit right.

Bliss fix implemented

00:51:741 (6) - This should be lined more up with the note after it. Rotating this slider by -22 degrees (counterclockwise) looks good.
Rotated

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10294

The shape could be a bit less sharp too to make the interaction more smooth and make the slider look better.
Done

01:05:126 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent jumps. You might want to fix this by nudging 3 and 4 over to the right. It will be hard to fix so I don't really expect it to be done. Sorry.


01:40:664 (4) - Move down 1 unit? (It's hard to tell if it's not straight or not) Moved

01:51:511 (2,3,4) - These notes are too close together. Fix this. Moved

01:52:203 (6,7,8,9) - Move left 1 unit. (This will fix the spacing issue in this part.) There's no spacing issue..?


01:54:972 (1,2,3) - Differently spaced then the rest of the stream. Fixed

01:56:357 (13,1) - Does this reverse slider have to end facing away from the note? Yes The speed of it makes the transition feel really awkward. I suggest changing it.

01:56:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Actually this whole combo feels awkward. I don't think it flows well at all. Maybe angle all the notes at a 45 degree angle to make the triangle pattern feel less awkward. Wait, I don't see how this makes a difference.

02:00:280 (5,6,7,8) - Move 1 unit right. Moved

02:06:511 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing discrepancy. I've noticed that you have been alternating between two snaps for 1/4th notes. Notice that the distance between 2 and 4 is different than 4 and 5, and 5 and 6, and so on. You should unify these kinds of combos in your map so when you choose to clump together 1/4th notes that any other notes within that combo are snapped proportionally. It lightens some of the confusion. IDK maybe it's not approapiate in this case, but keep this in mind.
I think this is fixed.

02:09:741 (5) - New combo?

02:09:972 (6,7,8) - Too close. Expand by 1 unit (You can chose whether the spacing should be how it is or not. It only becomes an issue when the spacing is different in nearby notes) Expanded

02:11:126 (3,4,5) - Too close together. Expand by 1 unit. ( This should be the standard spacing for 1/4th notes in this map 01:51:511 (2,3,4) - If this is not the standard then all these wide space d 1/4th notes should be reduced by 1 unit.) ^

02:11:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Should be expanded. ^ Improperly spaced streams may confuse someone into thinking that this stream is faster than it actually is. ^

02:27:280 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This one might be able to stay. Editor field restrictions. I'd really like it to start on the origin.

Here is a screenshot of it in expanded form though.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10298


02:32:587 (2,2,5,6,7,8,9) - Too close. Symmetry.

After all that you still get a star.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Easy]:
02:12:511 (2,1) - Big jump? Moved
02:49:203 (1) - Is this stream a bit too...difficult for an easiest difficulty? Changed 3 notes into a repeating slider
03:07:895 (4,5) - Big jump much? xD Oops.

There's a lot of 1/2...Though the HP drain is forgiving, neh?

[Sorry]:
This map ends at a different time? :X? Bliss's choice to end it earlier~

[Crazy!]:
01:56:357 (13) - The way the slider is ending makes a hard jump for (1). Rotated the stream to be easier to hit.

You should make the names at the topmost layer (In other words, have them the most visible object in the Storyboard). This isn't a problem at first, but at Part 3 of the Collab, the name is blocked at times. Moved most of SB into the individual .osu file.

It's very hard to read some of the darker colors, such as Dark Purple and Dark Red during the dark colored areas (Particularly the beginning). Maybe you should change some of the combo colors. Made brighter.

Maybe a Seizure Warning can help, since the song has strobing. I don't know how sensitive those with epilepsy has. Added

GO FOR THE GOLD:3

deepsea wrote:

[Ugly]

00:25:18(1)-(4) Note placed like this is hard to read, at least in the beginning of song.>_>
看不懂 ;-; 怎麼會呢?

[Sorry]

The warning sb blocked the first note of the map.
Replaced with storyboarded equivalent. Warning added on NP.


Starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrred.

MarioBros777 wrote:

I'm pretty sure deepsea means this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11079

And now that it's mentioned. Please fix that. It really is pretty hard and unreadable for an Easy.

Shinxyn wrote:

Oooh, pretty subtitled storyboard

Lots of... (nazi) suggestions-... so much I decided to use a spoiler box!

SPOILER

Ugly!- its not
00:17:126 (1) - start the claps on this note instead? (even though I think the claps are on wrong pace, oh well)
01:01:434 (1,2) - why is this closer? o.o no biggie
01:08:818 (1,2) - ^ flip of that
01:21:741 (1,2,3,4) - shift the claps over (to sound like 01:25:434 (1,2,3,4) and 02:20:818 (1,2,3,4))?
01:52:664 (3) - missed a clap?
01:59:587 (2) - remove this clap at end or add to end of 1?
02:23:357 (2) - move clap to end of slider instead of have it on start~?
02:41:126 (1) - stack?
03:06:972 (1,4) - fill in gaps? (add claps?) Sure!
Good, as long as this isn't called "Easy"
(Bliss, if you don't agree, PM me)


Sorry!-
00:17:587 (3) - eh? start the claps earlier? (on start of 00:15:741 (2,4)?)
00:32:357 (3) - missed a clap on start?
00:35:126 (3,4,3) - :S fill in the claps? (start of 3, end of 4, and start of next 3?)
00:43:203 (5,1) - ^ (on end of 5, and maybe end of 1... which matches music)
00:51:511 (13) - maybe add clap to match music?
00:56:126 (2) - ...continue claps till end of this combo?
01:04:664 (3) - missed a clap?
All fixed!
01:25:895 (2,4,5,7,8) - add claps to these to sound like the last combo?
01:35:818 (11) - add clap to match music?
01:49:895 (6,9,10) - claps?!
01:53:357 (10,11) - um.. spacing?
02:05:357 (8) - clap to match music?
02:20:818 (1) - have these TWO combos match 01:21:741 (1)'s in terms of hitsounds?
02:42:511 (3) - considering all the other sliders are aligned, why isn't this? (copy 02:41:126 (1) and remove new combo...?)
Above is fixed
02:44:357 (5) - since you can't really follow up well with this clap, remove imo
02:46:203 (3,6) - ^
03:04:434 (11) - clap to music? or not
03:11:357 (9,10) - try adding claps here~
03:19:203 (6) - clap to music?
03:27:280 - add note...? (kinda like the other two diffs)
Mostly changed, again, Bliss, would you check hitsound changes?
Weeeeee

Crazy!- 15mil, orz
Hey I can play (most) of this diff
00:14:357 (5) - add clap to make the claps sound faster along with notes? (I would say for next white tick too, but thats a finish, oh well)
00:21:972 (5) - clap?
00:36:741 (6) - ^?
00:43:434 (1,5) - whistles?
00:44:126 (6) - clap?
00:55:895 (1,3,4,6) - match hitsounds in combo before...? (clap on 1, whistles on 3, both sides of 4, and 6?)
01:09:741 (3) - new combo please, I saw this as a 1/2 jump cuz of where it is + vocal Dx
01:11:126 (2,4,2,4) - continue the claps (on start of sliders)
01:27:741 (4) - clap?
01:44:818 (5,5) - new combo these? maybe?
01:50:587 (7) - clap?
01:54:511 (6) - clap..? or just leave this with finish...?
The claps seem to shift a white tick halfway through middle (between the breaks)
02:20:818 (1) - same as [Sorry!]
02:41:126 (1,2) - alignment? yes? no?
02:49:664 (3) - clap?
03:04:203 (11) - clap at end?
03:19:203 (5) - clap?
Above is changed. Bliss, if you have problems, once more, let me know.
Great!

The second Break... the mapper name really doesn't fit the lighting... maybe just have it fade out for the break (even though they map a bit more)... or make them strobe with the light! Hehe if the name strobes, it looks strange x) I'll just have it fade out~

I had my fun

Melpomena wrote:

This was one of my first map and i really enjoy playing it. Star ^_^

Sunny Holic wrote:

I like this song~

but this korean font really ugly no brush writting font it's very old font
how about try another font..? it's really ugly.......

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Crazy]
02:02:241 (10) - At first I didn't know this was part of a triplet. Could you make it look like 02:09:972 (2,3,4)?Fixed!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled!

Kagamiku123 wrote:

Hello, 'thepianist'! I have viewed through your beatmap, and I have some comments about it.
Haha thanks! (It's bubbled though;;;)

All your maps have excellent rhythms, and the difficulties are apparent. However, I suggest lowering the difficulty of 'Ugly!' and 'Sorry!'. The reason is that the beat difficulty is very far off from ‘Crazy!’, but the stars are very close.
Haha it's a collab map~ The original plan was to make a Normal Hard Insane set back in November, and it kinda went that way~

Also, the beats are spaced too far out. Many people will not be able to clear a note and later hop to a distant note, while the beats are some sort of 1/8.

Ah, I tried to space my 1/4 streams closer together (except for one place where I thought it fit), but the other mappers don't really want to.

Numerous notes are placed under other notes, and that makes a problem: when a note is clicked, there will be a score taking over its place, which will stay there for about 2 seconds. If another note is directly below it and must be hit before the score fades, then there will be trouble. Imagine someone playing and cannot find note 3 of a combo after hitting note 1 and 2 and then note 4 appears, all the while not realizing that note 3 is under note 1. There will be a danger of combo breakings.

Haha, the readibility (buh strange word) of the overlaps should be okay, considering some of the playtesting I had my friends do.

Some sliders are surprisingly SLOW, despite the fast ones seen aplenty throughout the map. Since there are so many fast sliders, players will be caught off guard when they overshoot across a slow slider when the ball hasn’t even moved that much.

I thought they fit in though :<

Overall, the map deserves its ranking. I wish you all the best in your editing. Thank you and have a nice day.

Gens wrote:

Ranked!

Xgor wrote:

Congratulation thepianist,Dragonslayerxx and blissfulyoshi!