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Misure
in-game request
我还是比较好奇 一个神mapper一堆神modder
Edit: 一堆神modder 一堆翅膀
找我一个业余的作甚...嘛
顺便我摸图大概比较主观...你看看就好qwq

[General]

Enable countdown没用吧
Tag里把角色名称都加进去啊
[Insane]

00:02:004 (7) - 折返多拉一个,那个点有音
00:04:290 - 这点有音啊
00:16:232 (6,1) - 这个是要包的么
00:39:351 (1) - 可以去掉
00:47:227 (1,2) - 觉得分开好点
00:49:260 (1,2) - 觉得重叠1/2好点
01:02:217 (5,6) - 这个有点远了 要我觉得6应该从(412,180)起向左上方走的flow
01:03:488 (1,2) - 重叠1/2 01:04:250 (3,4) - 不重叠
01:18:477 (5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉上67是一组 89是一组
01:19:748 (1) - 折返少拉两个 分出去一个短滑条
01:22:034 (3,4) - 改成短滑条
01:22:797 (1,2,1,1,1) - 感觉flow没甩出去 这种节奏的话 flow应该是逐渐向外吧 发散出去的感觉应该是
01:24:489 - 转盘放这好点 感觉上
[Hard]

00:04:926 (2,3,4) - 这个组合来看 3反着弯比较好吧
00:08:101 - 这样
00:14:199 (4) - 弯一弯?顺便往下点
00:15:723 (3,4) - 感觉近了
00:22:329 (7,1) - ^
00:26:902 (1,2) - 这种感觉还是不太好 2向上?
00:29:443 (2,3) - 感觉近了
00:31:475 (2) - 左上移一点
00:32:492 (4) - ^
00:36:303 (3) - ctrl+G
00:38:716 (2) - 虽然你意思是直线 我还是觉得(248,280)好些
00:44:433 (2) - 不如ctrl+G
00:59:931 - 这样
01:03:234 - 后面那根绿线放这
01:08:315 (3,4) - 感觉形状不好呢...
[Frey's Hard]

00:15:723 (3,4) - 怎么突然贴上了
00:38:716 (2) - 再远点? 区分节奏
01:16:572 - 这样的感觉?距离上
[Karen's Normal]

00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 这要直线么 感觉4放在(324,72)的位置 那个形状比较好


水摸接好
祝好运! :)
Hakurei Yoru
(修罗场
[Insane]
00:06:831 (2) - 可以和00:07:085 (3) - 滑条尾端blanket,相对于前后的曲线滑条更加美观
00:35:922 (4,5) - x101 y133 因为前面这样的节奏都是没有这样小折一下的……稍微放上面一点可以美观(应该也better playing
00:38:335 (1,1) - 这种红线的弧度让玩家感觉挤在一起了……这样的弧度够了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3444622
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3445135 感觉这样会好打一些,影响应该不大
01:24:489 - 转盘可以改到这里开始,这里有一个比较小声的长音很适合

[Hard]
00:10:642 (1) - 这个滑条也是……这种弧度让棱角看起来有种远古图的奇怪风味..
00:20:297 (4) - 红点稍微往上面调整一点,现在的形状让00:19:534 (3,4) - 整体感有些缺失
00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里应该只在白线放1/2或者3/4滑条就可以了吧,hard里这个节奏有点奇怪

[Frey]
00:22:837 (1) - x86 y126相对于00:20:805 (1,2) - 要好看一些,后面的DS改动并不大

[Ren]
00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 3→4→5的直线flow又接上5这么大弧度的曲线太破坏美观……(可是nm我也不知道怎么改
Narcissu
[Karen's Normal]

進kiai 之前折返比圈都多…… 因為我自己一開始玩不知道折返怎麼打所以很討厭這個……

像00:41:384 (2) - 附近已經擠了三個圈了,中間這個換成長滑未嘗不可……全部折返換成長滑未嘗不可【

00:14:707 (6) - NC ?

00:18:772 (5) - ^

[Frey's Hard]

我覺得這歌滑條消了好一點,加上你音量很大又沒放什麼音效拖着非常難受

00:16:232 (4) - DS ? 你平時的1/2 都是大於1.2的

[Hard]

00:19:534 (3) - 包的好沒誠意 :(

00:24:362 (3) - unsanp

00:39:097 (3) - 這裡直接長滑比較合吧,後面反正都是3/4

01:23:652 (4) - 這個需要開osu 文件調滑條長度
Topic Starter
Mei

Euphoria wrote:

Meiの修罗场
水个摸

[Insane]
00:11:150 (3) - 改成2连+滑条不好改啊,现在这个也差不多
00:19:407 - 总觉得应该放点东西我是白线不起三连党的
00:57:644 (1) - 放个五连多好原来有但是感觉节奏太密了,先不放看看
01:02:217 (5) - 位置比较微妙,放右边点吧,和后面串的距离太远了

[Hard]
00:23:218 (2,3) - H放二连感觉不怎么好打这bpm比较低,我觉得可以有
01:02:217 (2,3) - 这个间距大丈夫?
01:23:652 (4) - 滑条结尾时间点不对不知道怎么改,滑条拉不到正确的点,随便改了下


以上,Good Luck XD
萌Mei下次带我个bpm高点的图啊,这个bpm不会做OTL

huafenshaonv wrote:

mei肉之香

[Hard]
aimod没修完
00:40:114 (2,3) - 围着1尾巴转不好 刚右边过来的手感还没结束 不好改啊
一些无关的堆叠 00:04:545 (1,2) - 00:21:821 (6,7) -
这些等等 打起来会自动偏移 打起来会感觉很水就这样吧,看起来还行就行了.-.
没萌4d的节奏好 打起来有跳比较舒服那是我老婆,必须厉害
肉很香
[Insane]
00:00:988 (3) - 尾巴加whistle?
00:05:180 (4) - 感觉一般 shenmegui
00:05:307这个音不要漏 试试这个这里没跟那个鼓,先这样做着我在看看别人怎么说
^查下无关堆叠

Misure wrote:

in-game request
我还是比较好奇 一个神mapper一堆神modder
Edit: 一堆神modder 一堆翅膀
找我一个业余的作甚...嘛
顺便我摸图大概比较主观...你看看就好qwq

[General]

Enable countdown没用吧
Tag里把角色名称都加进去啊人?那么多角色加死我
[Insane]

00:02:004 (7) - 折返多拉一个,那个点有音故意的,加了可能会有点难打,先看看
00:04:290 - 这点有音啊不跟那个
00:16:232 (6,1) - 这个是要包的么不包,这样轨迹平滑一点
00:39:351 (1) - 可以去掉
00:47:227 (1,2) - 觉得分开好点这没啥必要吧
00:49:260 (1,2) - 觉得重叠1/2好点那是我觉得比较jb的排列,美酒
01:02:217 (5,6) - 这个有点远了 要我觉得6应该从(412,180)起向左上方走的flow还好啊,是个人都dt随手接了(小间距串我会放的跳一点这样感觉打起来爽
01:03:488 (1,2) - 重叠1/2 01:04:250 (3,4) - 不重叠压蓝线的地方是强调人声,没人声的地方spam 1/2
01:18:477 (5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉上67是一组 89是一组
01:19:748 (1) - 折返少拉两个 分出去一个短滑条感觉不贴音乐
01:22:034 (3,4) - 改成短滑条考虑下
01:22:797 (1,2,1,1,1) - 感觉flow没甩出去 这种节奏的话 flow应该是逐渐向外吧 发散出去的感觉应该是变bpm不搞太难了
01:24:489 - 转盘放这好点 感觉上_(:3 这种东西怎么样都可以啦
[Hard]

00:04:926 (2,3,4) - 这个组合来看 3反着弯比较好吧不一定,这样我感觉也能接受
00:08:101 - 这样加点平行的让图玩起来感觉不一样
00:14:199 (4) - 弯一弯?顺便往下点没啥必要吧
00:15:723 (3,4) - 感觉近了
00:22:329 (7,1) - ^
00:26:902 (1,2) - 这种感觉还是不太好 2向上?没事的,神麻婆都喜欢这样(逃
00:29:443 (2,3) - 感觉近了
00:31:475 (2) - 左上移一点没啥必要吧
00:32:492 (4) - ^^
00:36:303 (3) - ctrl+Gyoudiannan
00:38:716 (2) - 虽然你意思是直线 我还是觉得(248,280)好些
00:44:433 (2) - 不如ctrl+G太近
00:59:931 - 这样我现在的感觉好些
01:03:234 - 后面那根绿线放这做个喷泉,放哪里都无所谓啦
01:08:315 (3,4) - 感觉形状不好呢...老是对称,心累了



水摸接好
祝好运! :)

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

(修罗场
[Insane]
00:06:831 (2) - 可以和00:07:085 (3) - 滑条尾端blanket,相对于前后的曲线滑条更加美观
00:35:922 (4,5) - x101 y133 因为前面这样的节奏都是没有这样小折一下的……稍微放上面一点可以美观(应该也better playing
00:38:335 (1,1) - 这种红线的弧度让玩家感觉挤在一起了……这样的弧度够了感觉没区别.-. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3444622
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3445135 感觉这样会好打一些,影响应该不大
01:24:489 - 转盘可以改到这里开始,这里有一个比较小声的长音很适合

[Hard]
00:10:642 (1) - 这个滑条也是……这种弧度让棱角看起来有种远古图的奇怪风味..复古潮流
00:20:297 (4) - 红点稍微往上面调整一点,现在的形状让00:19:534 (3,4) - 整体感有些缺失
00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里应该只在白线放1/2或者3/4滑条就可以了吧,hard里这个节奏有点奇怪好玩

Narcissu wrote:

[Hard]

00:19:534 (3) - 包的好沒誠意 :(

00:24:362 (3) - unsanp

00:39:097 (3) - 這裡直接長滑比較合吧,後面反正都是3/4不会啊。。。我又不是艺术大师辅导员sama

01:23:652 (4) - 這個需要開osu 文件調滑條長度不会搞。。。随便糊弄了一下v(。・ω・。)
谢谢老婆们的支持
没提的=fixed
TtmnZk
yaho!

[General]
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
Countdown: 1
都咔嚓掉plz

[Insane]
hp7略高,考虑一下Hp6.5,然后hard改成6

00:15:723 (4) - 可以试着移到x367y244

00:16:232 (6,1) - blanket?

00:25:124 (2) - 因为连打是从这里开始的,所以还是建议直接这样 http://puu.sh/jekgR/b85b16d11f.jpg

01:12:380 (3,5) - blanket?

[Hard]

00:00:480 (1,2) - 尾部可以设置减小一下音量这样更合曲

00:02:512 (1) - 这个折返重音没踩到,因该这样 http://puu.sh/jekDf/7321f3485a.jpg

00:39:351 (1) - 节奏很怪,之前00:39:097 (3) - 这里就是重音,也是下1/1滑条的不错选择,可现在这样下,不仅打的时候略坑,也把00:39:606这个白线clap带过了,不是很建议这样做

00:41:384 (2) - vocal是从00:41:384到00:41:765,所以建议 http://puu.sh/jekWi/e305b3d317.jpg

00:57:644 (2,3) - 建议放两组折返1/4滑条 http://puu.sh/jel8g/91ad7db8eb.jpg

01:03:234这里可以放个1/4滑条跟vocal http://puu.sh/jelcH/3248bcb92d.jpg like 01:05:266 (5) -


[Frey's Hard]

00:10:642 (1) - 这跟的音轨的音有点不明显,还是建议不要这样放

00:18:772 (1) -

00:40:114 这里加个note把,要不空个白线出来打起来也难受

00:48:244 - 我觉得白线填上比较好


[Karen's Normal]

00:06:577 (1) - spacing差了0.05




我局得浮雷那个hard完全可以当normal用,然后人格那个改成easy
美丽
yf_bmp
[G]
  1. 啥辣子鸡音质, 想办法换个MP3, 否则可能成为DQ理由.
  2. There is only 480 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  3. Add "Frey" & "Karen" to all of your tags.

[I]
  1. 我感觉非kiai的1,3whistle真略无聊,可以试试跟人声. 或者兼顾一下音乐里的高音
  2. 非kiai太弱化vocal? 我感觉这首很适合完全兼顾vocal. bpm低也是其中一个原因, 若总1/2spam, 节奏不多变就略无聊了

00:02:004 (7) - 这个辣条用1.0sv吧,可突出那种密集高速的感觉。另外建议去掉whistle只留第一个. 闹得慌
00:07:085 (3) - 这里头少加了clap吧 另外尾巴可以加个finish
00:16:232 (6,1) - 抱一下怎么样啊 (2)再复制下
00:18:518 (6) - 首尾clap
00:23:218 (2,4) - whistle
00:24:235 (6) - whistle 00:24:362 (7) - 尾whistle
00:25:366 - 漏音美丽
00:25:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 或者我建议这里直接塞满1/4跟原曲得了
00:26:648 (9) - 头尾clap
00:34:778 (6) - clap
00:46:719 (6) - 和第一条一样。这里我好像想起了反震某张图的某个梗
01:02:471 (6) - nc
01:03:233 (12,13) - clap
01:16:699 (4,5) - 这两个中间都有音的 建议跟上,kiai我感觉你都是跟上的

[H]
00:02:004 (5) - H 我的看法是简化成1/4。而且这4和5的1/4和前后都有所脱轨啊
00:38:081 - 这节奏不建议空
01:03:234 - 这里空?01:05:266 (5) - 这里都没空

[Frey]
缺乏打击感
00:15:723 (3,4) - 这点nazi还是注意下吧
00:58:660 (1,2) - 节奏不太好,之前都没怎么管鼓声,就这里突然兼顾了。删2吧

[Karen]
我感觉这NC下的有点错乱,建议检查下
Axey
Insane

00:00:480 (1) - 其实..觉得slider从这开始拉也行..因为蓝线那节拍正常听不是特别明显
http://puu.sh/jfEej/38ad8afdeb.jpg 我觉得刚开头节奏不要这么密集比较好诶..我比较喜欢这样LOL
00:06:831 (2,3) - 00:06:958 (2) - 和00:07:339 (3) - 这里作为slider开始的时间点比较合适
00:25:378 (3,4,5,6,7) - 好像不太适合放连打
00:58:025 - 加个note?
01:09:585 (1) - 这里可以做个jump
01:19:621 (10) - 加个note?

Hard

00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里2可以不加的感觉 把(3)挪到(2)的位置
00:37:065 (4) - 可以拆成2个slider? http://puu.sh/jfFe7/a0851a79d5.jpg
00:39:097 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/jfFh7/5da8e0631a.jpg

8-)
Topic Starter
Mei

TT Mouse wrote:

yaho!

[General]
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
Countdown: 1
都咔嚓掉plz

[Insane]
hp7略高,考虑一下Hp6.5,然后hard改成6我也估不准,先保持现在的三围

00:15:723 (4) - 可以试着移到x367y244

00:16:232 (6,1) - blanket?不了,保持flow的顺滑

00:25:124 (2) - 因为连打是从这里开始的,所以还是建议直接这样往蠢了改了下 http://puu.sh/jekgR/b85b16d11f.jpg

01:12:380 (3,5) - blanket?

[Hard]

00:00:480 (1,2) - 尾部可以设置减小一下音量这样更合曲

00:02:512 (1) - 这个折返重音没踩到,因该这样 http://puu.sh/jekDf/7321f3485a.jpg

00:39:351 (1) - 节奏很怪,之前00:39:097 (3) - 这里就是重音,也是下1/1滑条的不错选择,可现在这样下,不仅打的时候略坑,也把00:39:606这个白线clap带过了,不是很建议这样做

00:41:384 (2) - vocal是从00:41:384到00:41:765,所以建议 http://puu.sh/jekWi/e305b3d317.jpg

00:57:644 (2,3) - 建议放两组折返1/4滑条更喜欢现在的节奏 http://puu.sh/jel8g/91ad7db8eb.jpg

01:03:234这里可以放个1/4滑条跟vocal http://puu.sh/jelcH/3248bcb92d.jpg like 01:05:266 (5) - 决定不放,搞简单点
美丽

yf_bmp wrote:

[G]
  1. 啥辣子鸡音质, 想办法换个MP3, 否则可能成为DQ理由.
  2. There is only 480 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  3. Add "Frey" & "Karen" to all of your tags.

[I]
  1. 我感觉非kiai的1,3whistle真略无聊,可以试试跟人声. 或者兼顾一下音乐里的高音哨子是抄复制另一个图的,可能我要治一下懒癌
  2. 非kiai太弱化vocal? 我感觉这首很适合完全兼顾vocal. bpm低也是其中一个原因, 若总1/2spam, 节奏不多变就略无聊了我尽量了。。感觉没漏什么啊(´;ω;`)

00:02:004 (7) - 这个辣条用1.0sv吧,可突出那种密集高速的感觉。另外建议去掉whistle只留第一个. 闹得慌
00:07:085 (3) - 这里头少加了clap吧 另外尾巴可以加个finish用的durmnormal
00:16:232 (6,1) - 抱一下怎么样啊 (2)再复制下哦我有点懒得重读了,为了让flow平滑
00:18:518 (6) - 首尾clap
00:23:218 (2,4) - whistle
00:24:235 (6) - whistle 00:24:362 (7) - 尾whistle
00:25:366 - 漏音美丽
00:25:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 或者我建议这里直接塞满1/4跟原曲得了
00:26:648 (9) - 头尾clap卧槽感觉音效大师
00:34:778 (6) - clap
00:46:719 (6) - 和第一条一样。这里我好像想起了反震某张图的某个梗这个辣条就是1.0啊
01:02:471 (6) - nc
01:03:233 (12,13) - clap
01:16:699 (4,5) - 这两个中间都有音的 建议跟上,kiai我感觉你都是跟上的这里用这个感觉也是可以的

[H]
00:02:004 (5) - H 我的看法是简化成1/4。而且这4和5的1/4和前后都有所脱轨啊还行,提起来差不多
00:38:081 - 这节奏不建议空先保留这样
01:03:234 - 这里空?01:05:266 (5) - 这里都没空感觉空着也挺好

[Frey]
缺乏打击感
00:15:723 (3,4) - 这点nazi还是注意下吧
00:58:660 (1,2) - 节奏不太好,之前都没怎么管鼓声,就这里突然兼顾了。删2吧

[Karen]
我感觉这NC下的有点错乱,建议检查下

BakaHuang wrote:

Insane

00:00:480 (1) - 其实..觉得slider从这开始拉也行..因为蓝线那节拍正常听不是特别明显
http://puu.sh/jfEej/38ad8afdeb.jpg 我觉得刚开头节奏不要这么密集比较好诶..我比较喜欢这样LOL最高难度感觉可以高难一点
00:06:831 (2,3) - 00:06:958 (2) - 和00:07:339 (3) - 这里作为slider开始的时间点比较合适
00:25:378 (3,4,5,6,7) - 好像不太适合放连打
00:58:025 - 加个note?
01:09:585 (1) - 这里可以做个jump这个感觉怎么样都好啊
01:19:621 (10) - 加个note?

Hard

00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里2可以不加的感觉 把(3)挪到(2)的位置这样好玩
00:37:065 (4) - 可以拆成2个slider? http://puu.sh/jfFe7/a0851a79d5.jpg
00:39:097 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/jfFh7/5da8e0631a.jpg

8-)
谢谢套套哥,衣服哥和黄哥
mp3还有视频等我有空在搞
Frey
要死啦这找摸速度,可恶,我马上来
Frey

Euphoria wrote:

[Frey]
00:08:610 (4) - 左挪一点包上多好 Fixed
00:10:388 - 加个note? fixed
00:22:837 (1) - 建议让00:20:805 (1,2) - 滑条开头和这个等距 待定
00:30:205 (5) - 应该是放在这00:29:951 - ? 应该没错
00:40:241 (4) - 开头在00:40:114 - ?蓝线起感觉不好。。 待定,因为音乐里面还是比较明显

huafenshaonv wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
00:09:880 (5) - 尾巴clap? 曲子听不出clap
00:17:756 (6,7) - 弧线可以改进 Fixed
00:23:218 (2,3,4,5) - 换下叠加 我听出来应该23叠 34跳 45叠这样 那个从表面就看不出来了..待定
00:47:736这个白线空了更好? 先不改..这里是mei放的..
00:57:136 (4,5,6) - 节奏怪怪的? 应该没错..可能是offset的锅

Misure wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
00:15:723 (3,4) - 怎么突然贴上了 Fixed
00:38:716 (2) - 再远点? 区分节奏 这里DS应该没问题,变DS反而让人搞不懂
01:16:572 - 这样的感觉?距离上 Fixed

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

[Frey]
00:22:837 (1) - x86 y126相对于00:20:805 (1,2) - 要好看一些,后面的DS改动并不大 保持原样,说实话我比较喜欢对称

Narcissu wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
我覺得這歌滑條消了好一點,加上你音量很大又沒放什麼音效拖着非常難受 音效作祟啦。其他人都用击打音效跟乐器,就我一个人跟歌词。
00:16:232 (4) - DS ? 你平時的1/2 都是大於1.2的 Fixed

TT Mouse wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
00:10:642 (1) - 这跟的音轨的音有点不明显,还是建议不要这样放 好吧,我和下面那一条统一了
00:18:772 (1) - 不改这里
00:40:114 这里加个note把,要不空个白线出来打起来也难受 但是加了显得不伦不类的,跟两条音轨明显不是好选择
00:48:244 - 我觉得白线填上比较好 不是很好,这样全局不统一了

yf_bmp wrote:

[Frey]
缺乏打击感 纯跟歌词的后果,但是这里我又跟歌词又跟乐器玩家会摸不着北的,更何况乐器不是特别明显。
00:15:723 (3,4) - 这点nazi还是注意下吧 fixed
00:58:660 (1,2) - 节奏不太好,之前都没怎么管鼓声,就这里突然兼顾了。删2吧 fixed

十分感谢各位的mod! :)

点我打爆萌Mei
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moonlightleaf
[Karen's Normal]

00:46:719 (3) - 并不合适D-C

01:02:980 去掉F

01:17:207 去掉C

01:19:240 并不合适C

[Frey's Hard]

00:31:348 (2) - 不跟鼓点吧,3连不喜欢 ,硬要跟不如换成4那种折返

00:40:876 (5,1) - 建议滑条,00:41:003音比较明显

00:54:722 (7) - 删,在00:55:231加note

01:21:272 (4,1) - 分开吧

01:22:797 (3) - 改变红线需要NC

应该算是Normal 不是Hard

[Hard]

00:09:626 这个音效好奇怪

00:41:130 (1,2) - stack有点莫名

[Insane]

00:46:211 (1,2,3,4) - 试试

01:24:048 (1) - x-4
Frey

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Frey's Hard]

00:31:348 (2) - 不跟鼓点吧,3连不喜欢 ,硬要跟不如换成4那种折返 Fixed

00:40:876 (5,1) - 建议滑条,00:41:003音比较明显 感觉不是很适合

00:54:722 (7) - 删,在00:55:231加note 不是很有必要

01:21:272 (4,1) - 分开吧 Fixed

01:22:797 (3) - 改变红线需要NC Fixed

应该算是Normal 不是Hard 本来我做的就是N,唔,可恶的mei
Thx for your mod! :)

今天的mei也是这么闪亮
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Karen
huafenshaonv

huafenshaonv wrote:

[Karen's Normal]
NC乱乱的? 隔一大白线一NC
00:06:577 (1) - nazi的ds
00:07:847 (2,4) -用durm怪怪的 其他音效会更好? 这很符合音乐里那个音,而且这是复制来的音效,我要紧跟mei姐姐步伐
00:30:967 (4,5) - 头尾近了 显得挤了 一点都不挤吧
00:47:227~00:58:914 节奏变水的感觉 这里没有什么特殊的红线和蓝线音,所以就1/1spam了
00:50:784 (5,6,1) - 换个摆放 没必要5扔到角落 左边很空 作图要尽量填满整个play field
01:13:142 (3) - ^ 显得挤了 ^

Misure

Misure wrote:

[Karen's Normal]

00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 这要直线么 感觉4放在(324,72)的位置 那个形状比较好

Hakurei Yoru

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

[Ren]
00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 3→4→5的直线flow又接上5这么大弧度的曲线太破坏美观……(可是nm我也不知道怎么改 前面mod里改掉了

Narcissu

Narcissu wrote:

[Karen's Normal]

進kiai 之前折返比圈都多…… 因為我自己一開始玩不知道折返怎麼打所以很討厭這個……

像00:41:384 (2) - 附近已經擠了三個圈了,中間這個換成長滑未嘗不可……全部折返換成長滑未嘗不可【 因为Normal的节奏非常稀疏,怎么样节奏才能做的好玩一点,那就是00:41:765 - 这种特别的蓝线vocal用折返跟,全部1/1也太无聊

00:14:707 (6) - NC ?

00:18:772 (5) - ^

TT Mouse

TT Mouse wrote:

[Karen's Normal]

00:06:577 (1) - spacing差了0.05

yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

[Karen]
我感觉这NC下的有点错乱,建议检查下 前面改的时候发现了==

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Karen's Normal]

00:46:719 (3) - 并不合适D-C 挺适合的吧

01:02:980 去掉F

01:17:207 去掉C

01:19:240 并不合适C 我。。。。看不懂这个mod。。F 和 C 是什么o.o

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感觉弗雷那个diff可以叫做Normal+
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Gardens
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
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Source:To LOVEる-とらぶる- ダークネス 2nd
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Topic Starter
Mei

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Hard]

00:09:626 这个音效好奇怪

00:41:130 (1,2) - stack有点莫名

[Insane]

00:46:211 (1,2,3,4) - 试试差不多吧,我还是保持原来的

01:24:048 (1) - x-4
谢谢2妹 :) :)
Ayakura Mei
[Insane]
00:24:870 (1,2) - 这两个改成slider在整体上感觉更好。
00:35:922 (4,5) - 这个地方节奏有点问题。建议的话把5替换到4的位置上 然后在5的末端加一个1/4的note。
00:39:478 (1) - 这个下的有点迷啊,看不太懂。而且在dt下很容易造成误导,这个你再多考虑考虑。
00:46:211 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个的话建议在35% volume左右采用whistle会比较好,然后6这个reverse slider在慢慢吧音量加到60的感觉?

音效方面就不摸了 这类歌音效也是无关紧要233

其他难度看了一下没什么大问题(其实是我不懂_(:з」∠)_
buhei
下次记得把userpage和fav先处理一下哦 ;)

[karen's normal]
00:47:227 (1,3) - 没盖上而且这时候slider出来怪怪的 按下一个小节那样处理slider和note好些
01:13:142 (3) - 忽然搞这个形状很莫名 拉直不行么
01:20:002 (1) - 这spinner出现太早了吧

[normal+]
没clap?00:46:719 - clap去掉吧 太奇怪
没啥问题

[hard]
00:00:480 (1,2) - 这完全可以用两个1/4折返换掉 难度都没啥区别
00:05:561 (3,4) - 用ctrl+j把哪个换掉吧看着难受
00:16:486 (1) - 拆了或者移到00:16:740 - 然后加个note吧
00:38:716 (2) - 换成00:38:589 - 起头的短slider
01:17:461 (1,2) - 这不节奏和音效太适合吧 :o
01:24:048 (1) - 没音?

[insane]
00:38:335 (1) - 这里漏鼓还是感觉不适合 除了vocal到高音稍微加了音量没感觉有什么这么做的必要
00:51:293 (1) - 丑 而且这对缩小和后面的间距也没啥用 不如改00:52:055 (3) -
01:19:748 (1,2) - 折返一次就够了 大不了多一点滑条
Hiten
[Frey's Normal+]

00:43:925 (3,4) - 这里不建议stack

[Hard]

00:24:870 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏与其采用x.x.xx.xx的形式,x.xxx.xxx的形式会更好
01:02:217 (2,3) - 这种排列对于初涉H的玩家来讲不是特别友好,适当减小间距,后面也有一处
01:17:461 (1,2) - 莫名的jump

[Insane]

00:11:912 (4,5,6,1) - 把4,5变成一个slider?
00:15:723 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这两个jump的排列使用标准的多边形(或者一部分)?
00:34:016 (3,4,5,6,1) - 采用ds渐增的方式会不会比较好
01:02:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 歌曲的这些部分,个人感觉用点条的组合会让衔接更加自然
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - 莫名的jump,有种为了跳而跳的感觉,43stack 65stack的形式更能让人接受
Frey

buhei wrote:

[normal+]
没clap?00:46:719 - clap去掉吧 太奇怪
我觉得这里蛮明显的,待定

ichibannobaka wrote:

[Frey's Normal+]
00:43:925 (3,4) - 这里不建议stack
应该不会有问题
感谢你们的Mod! :)
Streliteela
Booooooooom
←这个人很懒不想加格式(飞

[Insane]
00:16:232 (6,1) - 我有强迫症你来打我啊打我啊~
00:32:238 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这一串可以把向上的“\”改成向下的“/”,角度感觉舒服一些
00:34:016 (3,4) - ctrl+g,3比4音高
00:58:660 (5,1) - 我有强迫症你来打我啊打我啊~
01:01:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成如下图位置比较好些imo,整体是个折线flow + 左边一个平行四边形,看着打着都挺舒爽
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/jhyqb/d99efb8102.jpg
01:16:699 (4,5) - 2和3距离挺大然后3和4在原地感觉有点奇怪,全选两个滑条然后ctrl+g

嗯其它难度都还挺好或者已经被楼上各位提到过了,我就不重复说了111
GL~ ;)
Topic Starter
Mei

Ayakura Mei wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:870 (1,2) - 这两个改成slider在整体上感觉更好。有点麻烦.-.目前这样也挺好
00:35:922 (4,5) - 这个地方节奏有点问题。建议的话把5替换到4的位置上 然后在5的末端加一个1/4的note。
00:39:478 (1) - 这个下的有点迷啊,看不太懂。而且在dt下很容易造成误导,这个你再多考虑考虑。想了想还是这样听起来好点,空出来觉得太空了,加红线的话又觉得听起来不对,先保持这样
00:46:211 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个的话建议在35% volume左右采用whistle会比较好,然后6这个reverse slider在慢慢吧音量加到60的感觉?懒_(:3

音效方面就不摸了 这类歌音效也是无关紧要233

其他难度看了一下没什么大问题(其实是我不懂_(:з」∠)_

buhei wrote:

下次记得把userpage和fav先处理一下哦 ;)


[hard]
00:00:480 (1,2) - 这完全可以用两个1/4折返换掉 难度都没啥区别这个也还可以接受
00:05:561 (3,4) - 用ctrl+j把哪个换掉吧看着难受
00:16:486 (1) - 拆了或者移到00:16:740 - 然后加个note吧跟人声
00:38:716 (2) - 换成00:38:589 - 起头的短slider^
01:17:461 (1,2) - 这不节奏和音效太适合吧 :o 虽然不知道你在说什么,但是我懒得改了_(:3
01:24:048 (1) - 没音?有啊

[insane]
00:38:335 (1) - 这里漏鼓还是感觉不适合 除了vocal到高音稍微加了音量没感觉有什么这么做的必要
00:51:293 (1) - 丑 而且这对缩小和后面的间距也没啥用 不如改00:52:055 (3) - 间距什么的没啥考虑,感觉还行啊= =
01:19:748 (1,2) - 折返一次就够了 大不了多一点滑条多次折返感觉符合音乐一点

ichibannobaka wrote:

[Frey's Normal+]

00:43:925 (3,4) - 这里不建议stack

[Hard]

00:24:870 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏与其采用x.x.xx.xx的形式,x.xxx.xxx的形式会更好好玩
01:02:217 (2,3) - 这种排列对于初涉H的玩家来讲不是特别友好,适当减小间距,后面也有一处
01:17:461 (1,2) - 莫名的jump

[Insane]

00:11:912 (4,5,6,1) - 把4,5变成一个slider?为啥啊,没必要啊
00:15:723 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这两个jump的排列使用标准的多边形(或者一部分)?打起来有那个意思就行了=。=
00:34:016 (3,4,5,6,1) - 采用ds渐增的方式会不会比较好可以,但是我懒啊!
01:02:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 歌曲的这些部分,个人感觉用点条的组合会让衔接更加自然我感觉纯串好些
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - 莫名的jump,有种为了跳而跳的感觉,43stack 65stack的形式更能让人接受

Streliteela wrote:

Booooooooom
←这个人很懒不想加格式(飞

[Insane]
00:16:232 (6,1) - 我有强迫症你来打我啊打我啊~
00:32:238 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这一串可以把向上的“\”改成向下的“/”,角度感觉舒服一些我觉得上好些啊
00:34:016 (3,4) - ctrl+g,3比4音高。。音调和位置也要有关系啊,好麻烦
00:58:660 (5,1) - 我有强迫症你来打我啊打我啊~
01:01:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成如下图位置比较好些imo,整体是个折线flow + 左边一个平行四边形,看着打着都挺舒爽差不多吧,我主要是喜欢串那里突然一个跳过去的感觉
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/jhyqb/d99efb8102.jpg
01:16:699 (4,5) - 2和3距离挺大然后3和4在原地感觉有点奇怪,全选两个滑条然后ctrl+g原来的可以的

嗯其它难度都还挺好或者已经被楼上各位提到过了,我就不重复说了111
GL~ ;)
可以的,终于改完了 :? :? 谢谢各位老婆的摸图
Gaia
Mami (*´∀`*)ノ



but romanized should be Mami Kawada orz
Topic Starter
Mei

Gaia wrote:

Mami (*´∀`*)ノ



but romanized should be Mami Kawada orz
for the reason I use Kawada Mami is
川田 まみ
Kawada Mami

I am not sure about this since I am not a Japanese speaker, I will ask some friends about the name
meii18
Mei,the artist should be Mami Kawada according to this official website

No kds
Gaia
p/4264554

trust me, i map mami songs too and i hate this change x...x
Topic Starter
Mei
what..alright change to Mami Kawada orz
Kencho
兩個NM 233
[General]
  1. 沒什麼好說的

[Karen's Normal]
  1. 01:20:002 (1,1) - 這種轉盤低難度沒事吧

    00:46:973 (5,1) - DS變成1.06x了

[Frey's Normal+]
  1. 總覺得難度名叫Normal+不太好,改成Advanced什麼的也不錯

  2. 前面幾個地方沒有統一DS沒問題嗎

[Hard]
  1. HP6.8是什麼鬼,用回6比較好吧,想用點特別的數字就5.8也可以

  2. 00:10:642 (1,3) - blanket一下

    00:19:153 - 漏音,可以試試這樣

    00:23:091 - 漏音,可以加個圓圈或者和00:23:218 (2,3) - 組成折返滑條

    00:45:068 - 漏音,看情況改吧,加圓圈或者和把前面折返改掉也行

    00:48:752 (4) - 這裡vocal比較重,可以試試這樣

    01:03:234 - 和01:03:361 - 不要漏掉,加個1/4滑條

    01:07:045 (4) - 這個改法參考前面那個

    01:24:048 (1) - Insane難度有加finish,這個也加上吧

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:831 (2,3) - 2 blanket到3的尾部

    00:30:713 (2,3) - 滑條不是順著圓圈的,建議3旋轉順時針5度然後放回原位
美麗
Frey

Kencho wrote:

[Frey's Normal+]
  1. 總覺得難度名叫Normal+不太好,改成Advanced什麼的也不錯

    看mei的意愿吧。
  2. 前面幾個地方沒有統一DS沒問題嗎

    应该没问题
感谢你的mod!
Topic Starter
Mei

Kencho wrote:

兩個NM 233
[General]
  1. 沒什麼好說的

[Karen's Normal]
  1. 01:20:002 (1,1) - 這種轉盤低難度沒事吧

    00:46:973 (5,1) - DS變成1.06x了

[Frey's Normal+]
  1. 總覺得難度名叫Normal+不太好,改成Advanced什麼的也不錯

  2. 前面幾個地方沒有統一DS沒問題嗎

[Hard]
  1. HP6.8是什麼鬼,用回6比較好吧,想用點特別的數字就5.8也可以

  2. 00:10:642 (1,3) - blanket一下

    00:19:153 - 漏音,可以試試這樣

    00:23:091 - 漏音,可以加個圓圈或者和00:23:218 (2,3) - 組成折返滑條这里想这样下,感觉有趣一点

    00:45:068 - 漏音,看情況改吧,加圓圈或者和把前面折返改掉也行

    00:48:752 (4) - 這裡vocal比較重,可以試試這樣次难度不那么将就也行吧,我感觉现在的好看一点

    01:03:234 - 和01:03:361 - 不要漏掉,加個1/4滑條no,这样没有快感

    01:07:045 (4) - 這個改法參考前面那個

    01:24:048 (1) - Insane難度有加finish,這個也加上吧

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:831 (2,3) - 2 blanket到3的尾部

    00:30:713 (2,3) - 滑條不是順著圓圈的,建議3旋轉順時針5度然後放回原位
美麗
谢谢坑球老婆的mod >.<
Karen
--> buhei : 轉盤沒事,其他改了
--> Kencho : 轉盤沒事,其他改了


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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Gardens
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
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Topic Starter
Mei
谢谢2ha爷爷!!
Milan-
Your soft-hitclap2 has a long silence at the end. In case you want to cut it.

insane
00:07:085 (3) - tail for a strong sound and main melody is a no-no. change the rhythm so it's clickable
00:38:335 (1) - cancel clap on tail plz, sounds really annoying ><
00:44:179 (2) - this should be here instead 00:44:306 - to follow the melody. i dont think it'll play bad, but it's up to you.
01:17:207 (5) - same as before, using 2 circles or ctrl g'ng 01:17:207 (5,1) - sounds way better

hard
00:22:837 (1,2) - gap doesnt play too natural cuz the vocals at 00:23:091 - . you may want to use a slider 3/4 instead. (altho i'd prefer if u do the same here 00:23:853 (1,2) - too xd)

normal+
00:00:480 (1,2,1) - you may want to make this pattern more constant in distance
i prefer if you use "Advanced" tbh. It's way more complex to be called just as normal+ , like when u do these kind of patterns 00:22:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (also it doesn't sound cool xd and advanced is getting more known.)

normal
00:00:480 (1,1) - u better no stack. like u did here 00:22:837 (1,2,3) - is way better
00:30:967 (1,2) - these kind of slider in the lowest diff is really discouraged. pls make those curves more subtle
Topic Starter
Mei

Milan- wrote:

Your soft-hitclap2 has a long silence at the end. In case you want to cut it.

insane
00:07:085 (3) - tail for a strong sound and main melody is a no-no. change the rhythm so it's clickableit is not a that strong beat compare with the one on sliders head...and I want to keep this patern
00:38:335 (1) - cancel clap on tail plz, sounds really annoying ><
00:44:179 (2) - this should be here instead 00:44:306 - to follow the melody. i dont think it'll play bad, but it's up to you.becasue of the chaos timestamps i get missed
01:17:207 (5) - same as before, using 2 circles or ctrl g'ng 01:17:207 (5,1) - sounds way betterbecause the bpm changing here i would select slider to amke it easier

hard
00:22:837 (1,2) - gap doesnt play too natural cuz the vocals at 00:23:091 - . you may want to use a slider 3/4 instead. (altho i'd prefer if u do the same here 00:23:853 (1,2) - too xd)ummm I want keep a little challenge for this part... if it is not that disgust you i will not change this

normal+
00:00:480 (1,2,1) - you may want to make this pattern more constant in distance
i prefer if you use "Advanced" tbh. It's way more complex to be called just as normal+ , like when u do these kind of patterns 00:22:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (also it doesn't sound cool xd and advanced is getting more known.)I think advanced are for second difficulty for Jubeart songs....maybe for an anime song Normal+ fits better imo (or I will use Hard- ? lol I dont think it is a big issue here)

normal
00:00:480 (1,1) - u better no stack. like u did here 00:22:837 (1,2,3) - is way better
00:30:967 (1,2) - these kind of slider in the lowest diff is really discouraged. pls make those curves more subtle
Milan-
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next bn, wait for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331864 to get out of the qualifed zone
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Mei
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