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2nd utakata?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

penoreri - Everlasting Message [OsuMania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Julie

[Generals]
- BPM: Not Good Fix
- Offset: Not Good
- AiMod: Good
- Tags: Where is the "Queen" ? Added
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Doesnt have No kiai, because the most hype of the song is nearly the easiest part to play, but if is a must to have a kiai, then I'll put it XD.
- Metadata: Good
- Folder’s problem: Fine
- Hitsound: Fine
- Timing: Okay
- Preview Time: 00:43:935 - unsnapped Woops fix XD.

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“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[NOVICE]

SPOILER

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  00:01:805 - i dont think 4 notes in normal is acceptable, hard to press all for a begin / normal players, reduce a note Awnn I loved that part, it start REALLY loud there ;w;! mostly when this is easy to ready haha, oh well deleted.
  00:09:369 - this part seems lower than the part like as: 00:05:978 - this one worthy three notes than 00:09:369 - Hahah, my hitsound so loud there, deleted one note
  00:40:674 - to 00:41:848 - o.o srsly, the three-hammers like this one is hard to play They need to start get use to this, for the gap spread on novice to ADV. This isn't a Beginners level, they should train these. And actually, all my beginners tester find this part the easiest rofl.
  00:42:695 - to 00:43:543 - this too / if suggest this one, its should be on hard ↑ ^
  00:48:369 (48369|3,48500|3) - i know this is same sound, but beginner and normal players can't get same 300, the hammer seems hard with the long notes beside it: 00:47:978 (47978|1) - im recomended you to move it to another column, such as: http://puu.sh/iFK5y/24fedc5f7c.png This isn't beginner, is actually easier then the screenshot you just put. Hammer can be easy depending on how it use.
  00:49:022 - to 00:53:195 - same reason ^
  01:01:022 - why on here didnt have a the note like as before? 00:59:456 (59456|1,59978|4) - Because less chord
  01:05:717 - why three notes? its sound like over notes on here, 2 notes is enough Ohh nice spot, deleted
  01:09:891 - add a note due a louder sound than 01:08:848 (68848|1,69369|5) - added
  01:11:978 - 01:14:065 - 01:16:152 - same reason I want keep it simple and matching the main sound here><, there some part that will be a bit hard to play if I add one more .
  01:18:239 - add a note if you follow two notes on a same sound such as: 01:22:413 - Foolow piano chord like these 00:53:587 (53587|6,53978|6) - >w<! That's why no drum hitsound , even on that part louder, due to the cymbal.
  01:29:521 - loud sound, two notes Oki, I didn't add it at 1st because, didn't like how it play for novice, but this part really should have 2 notes ><
  01:32:130 - to 01:36:956 - same reason as before kepping it consistent with 00:53:195 - , not mapping all these drum sound.
  01:39:956 (99956|2,100348|4) - those are move to 4 is better for patterns
  01:42:434 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/iFLbg/72ecf5f5de.png matching pitch ><, need to still keep consistent on the pitch.
  01:46:608 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/iFLe7/bcec6b84ad.png for patterns ^
  Nice suggestion XD! just seem like some pitch isn't the good one for my style ><
  01:49:478 - to 01:51:043 - and 01:51:956 - to 01:52:738 - and 01:53:651 - to 01:55:217 - and 01:55:738 - to 01:56:521 - same reasons as before
  01:57:565 - missed a note on 3 This really really feel hard to play on this BPM, this is why I didn't want to map it here, last part 3 notes, 01:57:565 - this timing really way to close, mostly after fast part 01:56:912 (116912|4,117043|2,117173|4,117304|2,117434|4) -

[ADVANCED]

SPOILER

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  00:07:804 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/iFM8V/768aa8fa32.png Sorry that part really higher pitch.
  Feel a little werid why on hard you didnt using 3 notes hammer like as normal
  00:40:674 (40674|4,40674|2,40804|2,40804|4,41065|2,41065|4,41195|2,41195|4,41456|2,41456|4,41587|4,41587|2,41848|2,41848|4,41978|2,41978|4) - those notes is not having same sound like as 00:42:761 Following the drum smash, so feel more difference here 00:42:239 (42239|6,42239|3,42500|3,42500|0) - . and reason why is 2 notes smash instead of 3, since in novice that 3 notes you dont need to smash xD(42761|6,42761|0,42891|0,42891|6,43152|0,43152|6,43282|6,43282|0,43543|6,43543|0,43674|0,43674|6) - can
  t jack like that
  00:45:239 (45239|6) - this one is low pitch than 00:45:630 (45630|6) - so move it to 4 I hear the same O.O, just one longer.
  00:53:587 (53587|6,53978|6) - same reasons ^
  00:56:717 - add a note for a finish (mean like bell sound, i dont know what it call) Hahah nice, I think I understand, but I want to keep it consistent, since I haven't been mapping that xD.
  00:56:717 (56717|3) - two notes is enough ^ dat copie paste xD
  01:11:326 - change back: http://puu.sh/iFMLL/e168871caa.png Don't think will, don't feel good too play much ><, thats why removed
  01:24:826 (84826|4,84826|2,84826|0,84956|4,84956|0,84956|2) - the heck is this? wrong snap, definitely wrong snap, move up to: 01:24:891 - Oups accident LOL.

[EXHAUST]

SPOILER

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  00:06:109 - and 00:06:369 - sure is high sound pitch than 00:06:239 (6239|2,6500|2) - so move 00:06:239 (6239|2,6500|2) - to http://puu.sh/iJl5E/9bd0c56757.jpg Yes high pitch O.O, high pitch doensn't mean more note xD, added one here 00:06:109 - because of the chord
  Feel a little weird when on Normal, Hard, Extra you added Long note on Chorus but on Insane diff is not
  00:55:804 - you lost a note, since you added 3 notes on here: 00:51:630 - its same sound Oups fix~
  o o ? 00:59:717 - Snapping Conflict! On here to 01:00:500 - is 1/4
  01:00:891 - you lost on note on here, its weird when have a break on here nice, fix
  01:01:217 - to 01:01:543 - is 1/4, not 1/3 ?? I'm matching the drum, which is 1/4
  01:07:543 - to 01:07:543 - hard to hear but its 1/4 It is already 1/4 O.O
  01:11:978 - add a note for the cymbol sound Focusing piano stream
  01:12:304 (72304|4) - unsnapped, move to 01:12:326 - (1/3) Oups timing change orz
  01:12:761 - add a note on here, in here still have piano but small added
  01:14:152 (74152|1) - umm, hear to hear but this is 1/12 (move to 01:14:174 - ) Fixed
  01:14:065 - to 01:15:109 - hard to hear, very very hard! i will ask other Check Gravity screenshot, was from starru
  01:30:695 - 01:31:739 - 01:32:261 - missed note / notes, due to you add three notes as same sound like as 00:46:935 - and go on fix
  01:55:739 - this one is support to be like as 01:56:130 (116130|1,116130|0,116130|2) - Is not exactly the same sound, and reason why 2 note there, I don't want jack, is already hard this way on EXH
  01:56:130 (116130|1,116130|0,116130|2) - umm, wrong, should be like as 01:56:130 (116130|2,116130|0,116130|1) -
  Suggestion: http://puu.sh/iJlTh/9137c0dc84.jpg Yeah, have 2 note there in GRV, but this is a bit too hard to play on EXH, which is why I just put one note on center xD

[GRAVITY]

SPOILER

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  00:12:065 (12065|2,12152|1,12195|2,12239|3,12282|4,12326|5,12369|6) - sems wrong snap but i cant give you the right snap, hard to hear, will ask other Fix
  00:17:456 - to 00:17:717 - is wrong snap, its should be 1/3 I hear 4 drum before this : 00:17:717 - , starting here 00:17:456 - . Matching the drum for this part
  00:25:674 (25674|0) - i suggest you to follow piano only on here, dont add drum Fix
  00:26:065 - to 00:32:848 - this part is too easy for a Extra diff,its relax part but recommended to add full of 1/2 No thanks, I want to follow piano, is a bad reason to put note because is an extra diff ><.
  00:33:956 (33956|6) - wrong snap, its 1/3 00:33:978 - Ohh nice catch
  00:36:500 - three notes is enough, fours seems overnotes To match the cymbal, like this one 00:38:065 -
  00:40:217 (40217|4,40282|3,40348|2) - sound too small for anynote alive Clear drum part, even keysound it :3. This is pretty easy to hear, I'm suprise you find it small sound O.O. Is nearly same volume as 00:39:369 -
  01:01:217 - to 01:01:543 - is 1/4 snap Oups one of them got unsnap when changing redline. Uhh if 1/4, how can explain the 2 piano note after this 01:01:282 - ;w; .
  01:07:543 - to 01:07:804 - is the 1/4 snap Fix
  01:14:152 (74152|4) - its 1/12 snap (01:14:174 - move to this) Ohh LOL NICE, uwah sorry make you suffer with this, didn't expect 1/12 here ><
  01:14:456 (74456|3,74500|2,74587|4,74674|3,74848|2,74978|1,75109|0) - so hard to hear LOL, oh well I moved this 01:14:717 (74717|3) - , let's go with starru- pic http://puu.sh/io18Y/5a96f3147b.png
  01:15:956 (75956|1) - this is 1/3 (move to 01:15:978 - ) Omg oups, got unsnap for changing bpm ><
  01:38:782 - to 01:39:043 - is 1/3 Fix
  01:39:174 (99174|4) - this drum is wrong snap, move to 01:39:217 - (1/6) Yeah realize that after fixed above, still 1/3, could hear 2 drum cuz of my hitsound lol
  01:49:478 - this part and after this is like "Helping salesman have more money from selling keyboards" Rofl please xD, should be fine, this part should have more impact + more chord, only part where you are hear the piano go ham!
  I recommended to only 4 notes each

[Timing]
You need to fix the last two timings:
Fix, and snap all note this time by myself instead of auto and then snap by myself. Just in case I don't get wrong 1/3 snapping any longer.

[Overall]

Done, nice map and good song anyway
But the snap is just kill me lol Yeah sorry, i carefully check, and that part your unsure, I asked starry before, and that screenshot is what he sent :3
Carefully on the map, i mean the snapping conflict too

LordRaika wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

:) hi julie little check before qualify

no kudosu


switch you're hitsound with those http://puu.sh/iYCze/c61a5d1c16.rar uwah cool

there were tons of delay and cutted useless lenght to save mb


[GRAVITY]

00:12:043 (12043|1,12109|2,12174|3,12239|4,12304|5,12369|6) - the violin here is 1/3 Fixed

00:53:587 (53587|6) - according with the pitch this should be shift in two notes here 00:53:587 - 00:53:717 - Fixed

00:55:543 (55543|5) - suggest to move in 5 Fixed

00:55:804 (55804|6,55804|5,56000|4) - pretty uncoonfortable ,how about this 00:55:804 (55804|6) - move in 5 ,00:55:804 (55804|5,56000|4) - move 1 col on right Fixed

01:01:369 (61369|1,61456|0) - suggest to continue to follow the piano in 1/4 Fixed

01:05:326 (65326|3,65587|1) - snare are in 1/3 ,so putting those keysound here where there are the synth is pretty wrong , remove the keysound or rearrange adding notes in 1/3 and removing those in 1/2 Fixed, and chose to remove those keysound

01:07:609 (67609|2,67674|3,67739|4) - pretty sure the grace notes are in 1/3 only 01:07:630 - 01:07:717 -


01:09:891 (69891|6) - end the LN here 01:11:109 - Fixed

01:57:695 (117695|3,117695|4) - suggest to remove 01:57:695 (117695|5) - move in 4 Fixed

after those fix the snap consistency p,p


[EXHAUST]

01:39:565 (99565|1,99565|0,99565|2,99760|4,99760|6,99760|5) - ctrlh for pitch Fixed

[Advanced]

00:53:587 (53587|6) - like in the gravity Fixed

01:05:195 (65195|4,65326|3,65456|2,65587|1) - ^ Fixed

01:09:891 (69891|0) - end here 01:11:109 - Fixed

01:11:326 (71326|2,71587|4) - the synth here are in 1/1 like those 01:15:369 (75369|0,75630|2,75891|4) - rearrange? Fixed, also fixed on novice

01:37:478 (97478|4) - end this LN here 01:37:608 - Fixed

[novice ]

fix the snaps 01:09:891 (69891|0,71326|2,71587|4,71848|3) - like in the advanced Fixed



EDIT: D#6S_Eb6s inused remove it Fixed

ExUsagi wrote:

before heart post, i guess its better to get some better background image..

here's your BG, (because harby asked me :U)

quick note : this bg fit for 3:4 & 16:9 screen ratio..

2nd alternative bg, without title

without title, ofc

good luck asdfdgfhdj

Kyousuke- wrote:

woah penoeri!! o.o
yay we need more 7K Julie lol xDD

go go qualifyy =w=/
/take my stars

Harbyter wrote:

after fixing other little things b0000m



EDIT: cap didn't resetted? o,o

ExUsagi wrote:

hail julie

Rido wrote:

hail pp

LordRaika wrote:

Soon.... Incoming reason of

-overchord
-some part being too easy

Maybe more than you cant even predict it anymore