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Mami Kawada - Gardens

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Mei
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Mei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月28日 at 1:32:17

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Gardens
Source: To LOVEる-とらぶる- ダークネス 2nd
Tags: love-ru -trouble- darkness ending I've Karen Frey
BPM: 118
Filesize: 14110kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Frey's Advanced (1.88 stars, 133 notes)
  2. Hard (2.57 stars, 183 notes)
  3. Insane (3.28 stars, 270 notes)
  4. Karen's Normal (1.57 stars, 108 notes)
Download: Mami Kawada - Gardens
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harem
Last edited by Mei , edited 23 times in total.
FreeSongs
502 posts
Joined November 2012
FreeSongs
first!
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
随便糊了个1.6的低难度，神麻婆看看口不口以
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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Garden.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Gardens
TitleUnicode:Gardens
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Mei
Version:Karen's Normal
Source:To LOVEる-とらぶる- ダークネス 2nd
Tags:to love-ru -trouble- darkness 2nd ending
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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84048,882.352941176471,4,2,1,60,1,0
89342,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,45
Combo2 : 243,214,44
Combo3 : 116,45,234
Combo4 : 240,108,135
Combo5 : 138,221,225

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Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
这可头疼了..晚上熬夜把Normal GD赶完发现人格扔了一个上来....
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen

Frey wrote:

这可头疼了..晚上熬夜把Normal GD赶完发现人格扔了一个上来....
神馬破叫我隨便做一個diff。。這撞的。
zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
wao w
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Karen wrote:

Frey wrote:

这可头疼了..晚上熬夜把Normal GD赶完发现人格扔了一个上来....
神馬破叫我隨便做一個diff。。這撞的。
打死这mei
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei
都是我的翅膀，老婆们没事这个锅我背了
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
别问我为什么不用代码..这是对mei妹脚踏两只船的惩罚 ;)

00:13:691 (2) - x392 y4

00:31:730 - 加whistle

00:31:984 (4) - 这里这么改
SPOILER

00:34:016 (3,4) - Blanket

00:57:644 (5) - 加whistle

00:58:152 (6) - 加whistle

00:58:660 (1) - 加whistle

00:59:423 (3) - 加whistle

01:00:693 (1,2) - 这么放
SPOILER

01:20:256 (2) - 加whistle

01:22:288 (2) - 加whistle

01:23:352 (4) - 加whistle
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
MARK
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
Meiの修罗场
水个摸

[Insane]
00:11:150 (3) - 改成2连+滑条
00:19:407 - 总觉得应该放点东西
00:57:644 (1) - 放个五连多好
01:02:217 (5) - 位置比较微妙，放右边点吧，和后面串的距离太远了

[Hard]
00:23:218 (2,3) - H放二连感觉不怎么好打
01:02:217 (2,3) - 这个间距大丈夫？
01:23:652 (4) - 滑条结尾时间点不对

[Frey]
00:08:610 (4) - 左挪一点包上多好
00:10:388 - 加个note?
00:22:837 (1) - 建议让00:20:805 (1,2) - 滑条开头和这个等距
00:30:205 (5) - 应该是放在这00:29:951 - ？
00:40:241 (4) - 开头在00:40:114 - ？蓝线起感觉不好。。

人格的图摸不出来就不说了

以上，Good Luck XD
萌Mei下次带我个bpm高点的图啊,这个bpm不会做OTL
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
神麻婆又做图，先膜拜下
normal改名easy，弗雷hard改成normal
wantuol
107 posts
Joined October 2010
wantuol
mei肉之香
[Karen's Normal]
NC乱乱的？
00:06:577 (1) - nazi的ds
00:07:847 (2,4) -用durm怪怪的 其他音效会更好？
00:30:967 (4,5) - 头尾近了 显得挤了
00:47:227~00:58:914 节奏变水的感觉
00:50:784 (5,6,1) - 换个摆放 没必要5扔到角落 左边很空
01:13:142 (3) - ^ 显得挤了

[Frey's Hard]
00:09:880 (5) - 尾巴clap？
00:17:756 (6,7) - 弧线可以改进
00:23:218 (2,3,4,5) - 换下叠加 我听出来应该23叠 34跳 45叠这样
00:47:736这个白线空了更好？
00:57:136 (4,5,6) - 节奏怪怪的？

[Hard]
aimod没修完
00:40:114 (2,3) - 围着1尾巴转不好 刚右边过来的手感还没结束
一些无关的堆叠 00:04:545 (1,2) - 00:21:821 (6,7) -
这些等等 打起来会自动偏移 打起来会感觉很水
没萌4d的节奏好 打起来有跳比较舒服
肉很香
[Insane]
00:00:988 (3) - 尾巴加whistle？
00:05:180 (4) - 感觉一般
00:05:307这个音不要漏 试试这个
^查下无关堆叠
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
in-game request
我还是比较好奇 一个神mapper一堆神modder
Edit: 一堆神modder 一堆翅膀
找我一个业余的作甚...嘛
顺便我摸图大概比较主观...你看看就好qwq

[General]

Enable countdown没用吧
Tag里把角色名称都加进去啊
[Insane]

00:02:004 (7) - 折返多拉一个，那个点有音
00:04:290 - 这点有音啊
00:16:232 (6,1) - 这个是要包的么
00:39:351 (1) - 可以去掉
00:47:227 (1,2) - 觉得分开好点
00:49:260 (1,2) - 觉得重叠1/2好点
01:02:217 (5,6) - 这个有点远了 要我觉得6应该从(412,180)起向左上方走的flow
01:03:488 (1,2) - 重叠1/2 01:04:250 (3,4) - 不重叠
01:18:477 (5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉上67是一组 89是一组
01:19:748 (1) - 折返少拉两个 分出去一个短滑条
01:22:034 (3,4) - 改成短滑条
01:22:797 (1,2,1,1,1) - 感觉flow没甩出去 这种节奏的话 flow应该是逐渐向外吧 发散出去的感觉应该是
01:24:489 - 转盘放这好点 感觉上
[Hard]

00:04:926 (2,3,4) - 这个组合来看 3反着弯比较好吧
00:08:101 - 这样？
00:14:199 (4) - 弯一弯？顺便往下点
00:15:723 (3,4) - 感觉近了
00:22:329 (7,1) - ^
00:26:902 (1,2) - 这种感觉还是不太好 2向上？
00:29:443 (2,3) - 感觉近了
00:31:475 (2) - 左上移一点
00:32:492 (4) - ^
00:36:303 (3) - ctrl+G
00:38:716 (2) - 虽然你意思是直线 我还是觉得(248,280)好些
00:44:433 (2) - 不如ctrl+G
00:59:931 - 这样？
01:03:234 - 后面那根绿线放这
01:08:315 (3,4) - 感觉形状不好呢...
[Frey's Hard]

00:15:723 (3,4) - 怎么突然贴上了
00:38:716 (2) - 再远点？ 区分节奏
01:16:572 - 这样的感觉？距离上
[Karen's Normal]

00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 这要直线么 感觉4放在(324,72)的位置 那个形状比较好


水摸接好
祝好运！ :)
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
(修罗场
[Insane]
00:06:831 (2) - 可以和00:07:085 (3) - 滑条尾端blanket,相对于前后的曲线滑条更加美观
00:35:922 (4,5) - x101 y133 因为前面这样的节奏都是没有这样小折一下的……稍微放上面一点可以美观（应该也better playing
00:38:335 (1,1) - 这种红线的弧度让玩家感觉挤在一起了……这样的弧度够了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3444622
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3445135 感觉这样会好打一些，影响应该不大
01:24:489 - 转盘可以改到这里开始，这里有一个比较小声的长音很适合

[Hard]
00:10:642 (1) - 这个滑条也是……这种弧度让棱角看起来有种远古图的奇怪风味..
00:20:297 (4) - 红点稍微往上面调整一点，现在的形状让00:19:534 (3,4) - 整体感有些缺失
00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里应该只在白线放1/2或者3/4滑条就可以了吧，hard里这个节奏有点奇怪

[Frey]
00:22:837 (1) - x86 y126相对于00:20:805 (1,2) - 要好看一些，后面的DS改动并不大

[Ren]
00:04:036 (3,4,5) - 3→4→5的直线flow又接上5这么大弧度的曲线太破坏美观……(可是nm我也不知道怎么改
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
[Karen's Normal]

進kiai 之前折返比圈都多…… 因為我自己一開始玩不知道折返怎麼打所以很討厭這個……

像00:41:384 (2) - 附近已經擠了三個圈了，中間這個換成長滑未嘗不可……全部折返換成長滑未嘗不可【

00:14:707 (6) - NC ?

00:18:772 (5) - ^

[Frey's Hard]

我覺得這歌滑條消了好一點，加上你音量很大又沒放什麼音效拖着非常難受

00:16:232 (4) - DS ? 你平時的1/2 都是大於1.2的

[Hard]

00:19:534 (3) - 包的好沒誠意 :(

00:24:362 (3) - unsanp

00:39:097 (3) - 這裡直接長滑比較合吧，後面反正都是3/4

01:23:652 (4) - 這個需要開osu 文件調滑條長度
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Euphoria wrote:

Meiの修罗场
水个摸

[Insane]
00:11:150 (3) - 改成2连+滑条不好改啊，现在这个也差不多
00:19:407 - 总觉得应该放点东西我是白线不起三连党的
00:57:644 (1) - 放个五连多好原来有但是感觉节奏太密了，先不放看看
01:02:217 (5) - 位置比较微妙，放右边点吧，和后面串的距离太远了

[Hard]
00:23:218 (2,3) - H放二连感觉不怎么好打这bpm比较低，我觉得可以有
01:02:217 (2,3) - 这个间距大丈夫？
01:23:652 (4) - 滑条结尾时间点不对不知道怎么改，滑条拉不到正确的点，随便改了下


以上，Good Luck XD
萌Mei下次带我个bpm高点的图啊,这个bpm不会做OTL

huafenshaonv wrote:

mei肉之香

[Hard]
aimod没修完
00:40:114 (2,3) - 围着1尾巴转不好 刚右边过来的手感还没结束 不好改啊
一些无关的堆叠 00:04:545 (1,2) - 00:21:821 (6,7) -
这些等等 打起来会自动偏移 打起来会感觉很水就这样吧，看起来还行就行了.-.
没萌4d的节奏好 打起来有跳比较舒服那是我老婆，必须厉害
肉很香
[Insane]
00:00:988 (3) - 尾巴加whistle？
00:05:180 (4) - 感觉一般 shenmegui
00:05:307这个音不要漏 试试这个这里没跟那个鼓，先这样做着我在看看别人怎么说
^查下无关堆叠

Misure wrote:

in-game request
我还是比较好奇 一个神mapper一堆神modder
Edit: 一堆神modder 一堆翅膀
找我一个业余的作甚...嘛
顺便我摸图大概比较主观...你看看就好qwq

[General]

Enable countdown没用吧
Tag里把角色名称都加进去啊人？那么多角色加死我
[Insane]

00:02:004 (7) - 折返多拉一个，那个点有音故意的，加了可能会有点难打，先看看
00:04:290 - 这点有音啊不跟那个
00:16:232 (6,1) - 这个是要包的么不包，这样轨迹平滑一点
00:39:351 (1) - 可以去掉
00:47:227 (1,2) - 觉得分开好点这没啥必要吧
00:49:260 (1,2) - 觉得重叠1/2好点那是我觉得比较jb的排列，美酒
01:02:217 (5,6) - 这个有点远了 要我觉得6应该从(412,180)起向左上方走的flow还好啊，是个人都dt随手接了（小间距串我会放的跳一点这样感觉打起来爽
01:03:488 (1,2) - 重叠1/2 01:04:250 (3,4) - 不重叠压蓝线的地方是强调人声，没人声的地方spam 1/2
01:18:477 (5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉上67是一组 89是一组
01:19:748 (1) - 折返少拉两个 分出去一个短滑条感觉不贴音乐
01:22:034 (3,4) - 改成短滑条考虑下
01:22:797 (1,2,1,1,1) - 感觉flow没甩出去 这种节奏的话 flow应该是逐渐向外吧 发散出去的感觉应该是变bpm不搞太难了
01:24:489 - 转盘放这好点 感觉上_(:3 这种东西怎么样都可以啦
[Hard]

00:04:926 (2,3,4) - 这个组合来看 3反着弯比较好吧不一定，这样我感觉也能接受
00:08:101 - 这样？加点平行的让图玩起来感觉不一样
00:14:199 (4) - 弯一弯？顺便往下点没啥必要吧
00:15:723 (3,4) - 感觉近了
00:22:329 (7,1) - ^
00:26:902 (1,2) - 这种感觉还是不太好 2向上？没事的，神麻婆都喜欢这样（逃
00:29:443 (2,3) - 感觉近了
00:31:475 (2) - 左上移一点没啥必要吧
00:32:492 (4) - ^^
00:36:303 (3) - ctrl+Gyoudiannan
00:38:716 (2) - 虽然你意思是直线 我还是觉得(248,280)好些
00:44:433 (2) - 不如ctrl+G太近
00:59:931 - 这样？我现在的感觉好些
01:03:234 - 后面那根绿线放这做个喷泉，放哪里都无所谓啦
01:08:315 (3,4) - 感觉形状不好呢...老是对称，心累了



水摸接好
祝好运！ :)

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

(修罗场
[Insane]
00:06:831 (2) - 可以和00:07:085 (3) - 滑条尾端blanket,相对于前后的曲线滑条更加美观
00:35:922 (4,5) - x101 y133 因为前面这样的节奏都是没有这样小折一下的……稍微放上面一点可以美观（应该也better playing
00:38:335 (1,1) - 这种红线的弧度让玩家感觉挤在一起了……这样的弧度够了感觉没区别.-. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3444622
01:14:666 (3,4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3445135 感觉这样会好打一些，影响应该不大
01:24:489 - 转盘可以改到这里开始，这里有一个比较小声的长音很适合

[Hard]
00:10:642 (1) - 这个滑条也是……这种弧度让棱角看起来有种远古图的奇怪风味..复古潮流
00:20:297 (4) - 红点稍微往上面调整一点，现在的形状让00:19:534 (3,4) - 整体感有些缺失
00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里应该只在白线放1/2或者3/4滑条就可以了吧，hard里这个节奏有点奇怪好玩

Narcissu wrote:

[Hard]

00:19:534 (3) - 包的好沒誠意 :(

00:24:362 (3) - unsanp

00:39:097 (3) - 這裡直接長滑比較合吧，後面反正都是3/4不会啊。。。我又不是艺术大师辅导员sama

01:23:652 (4) - 這個需要開osu 文件調滑條長度不会搞。。。随便糊弄了一下v(｡･ω･｡)
谢谢老婆们的支持
没提的=fixed
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
597 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
yaho!

[General]
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
Countdown: 1
都咔嚓掉plz

[Insane]
hp7略高，考虑一下Hp6.5,然后hard改成6

00:15:723 (4) - 可以试着移到x367y244

00:16:232 (6,1) - blanket?

00:25:124 (2) - 因为连打是从这里开始的，所以还是建议直接这样 http://puu.sh/jekgR/b85b16d11f.jpg

01:12:380 (3,5) - blanket?

[Hard]

00:00:480 (1,2) - 尾部可以设置减小一下音量这样更合曲

00:02:512 (1) - 这个折返重音没踩到，因该这样 http://puu.sh/jekDf/7321f3485a.jpg

00:39:351 (1) - 节奏很怪，之前00:39:097 (3) - 这里就是重音，也是下1/1滑条的不错选择，可现在这样下，不仅打的时候略坑，也把00:39:606这个白线clap带过了，不是很建议这样做

00:41:384 (2) - vocal是从00:41:384到00:41:765，所以建议 http://puu.sh/jekWi/e305b3d317.jpg

00:57:644 (2,3) - 建议放两组折返1/4滑条 http://puu.sh/jel8g/91ad7db8eb.jpg

01:03:234这里可以放个1/4滑条跟vocal http://puu.sh/jelcH/3248bcb92d.jpg like 01:05:266 (5) -


[Frey's Hard]

00:10:642 (1) - 这跟的音轨的音有点不明显，还是建议不要这样放

00:18:772 (1) -

00:40:114 这里加个note把，要不空个白线出来打起来也难受

00:48:244 - 我觉得白线填上比较好


[Karen's Normal]

00:06:577 (1) - spacing差了0.05




我局得浮雷那个hard完全可以当normal用，然后人格那个改成easy
美丽
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
[G]
  1. 啥辣子鸡音质, 想办法换个MP3, 否则可能成为DQ理由.
  2. There is only 480 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  3. Add "Frey" & "Karen" to all of your tags.

[I]
  1. 我感觉非kiai的1,3whistle真略无聊，可以试试跟人声. 或者兼顾一下音乐里的高音
  2. 非kiai太弱化vocal? 我感觉这首很适合完全兼顾vocal. bpm低也是其中一个原因, 若总1/2spam, 节奏不多变就略无聊了

00:02:004 (7) - 这个辣条用1.0sv吧，可突出那种密集高速的感觉。另外建议去掉whistle只留第一个. 闹得慌
00:07:085 (3) - 这里头少加了clap吧 另外尾巴可以加个finish
00:16:232 (6,1) - 抱一下怎么样啊 (2)再复制下
00:18:518 (6) - 首尾clap
00:23:218 (2,4) - whistle
00:24:235 (6) - whistle 00:24:362 (7) - 尾whistle
00:25:366 - 漏音美丽
00:25:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 或者我建议这里直接塞满1/4跟原曲得了
00:26:648 (9) - 头尾clap
00:34:778 (6) - clap
00:46:719 (6) - 和第一条一样。这里我好像想起了反震某张图的某个梗
01:02:471 (6) - nc
01:03:233 (12,13) - clap
01:16:699 (4,5) - 这两个中间都有音的 建议跟上，kiai我感觉你都是跟上的

[H]
00:02:004 (5) - H 我的看法是简化成1/4。而且这4和5的1/4和前后都有所脱轨啊
00:38:081 - 这节奏不建议空
01:03:234 - 这里空？01:05:266 (5) - 这里都没空

[Frey]
缺乏打击感
00:15:723 (3,4) - 这点nazi还是注意下吧
00:58:660 (1,2) - 节奏不太好，之前都没怎么管鼓声，就这里突然兼顾了。删2吧

[Karen]
我感觉这NC下的有点错乱，建议检查下
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
Insane

00:00:480 (1) - 其实..觉得slider从这开始拉也行..因为蓝线那节拍正常听不是特别明显
http://puu.sh/jfEej/38ad8afdeb.jpg 我觉得刚开头节奏不要这么密集比较好诶..我比较喜欢这样LOL
00:06:831 (2,3) - 00:06:958 (2) - 和00:07:339 (3) - 这里作为slider开始的时间点比较合适
00:25:378 (3,4,5,6,7) - 好像不太适合放连打
00:58:025 - 加个note?
01:09:585 (1) - 这里可以做个jump
01:19:621 (10) - 加个note?

Hard

00:25:378 (2,3) - 这里2可以不加的感觉 把(3)挪到(2)的位置
00:37:065 (4) - 可以拆成2个slider? http://puu.sh/jfFe7/a0851a79d5.jpg
00:39:097 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/jfFh7/5da8e0631a.jpg

8-)
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