[General]
Different tags across your difficulties, please make them the same.
[Normal]
Unfinished difficulty (i guess that's why you told me that it's not finished)
In general has lot of combo problems i cant tell what the heck are your combos related to.
For the easiest diff, there are way toooo maaaanyyyy spiiineeeersss.
00:18:375 (2) - New combo because you're swithcing what your mapping to.
00:24:725 (2) - ^
00:24:725 (2,3,4) - Not sure if it's intentional, but the (4) would look better if it was aligned with (2)
I'll let you notice the rest of your combos yourself, as an example 00:47:202 (1,3) - Switch new combo.
00:54:007 (3) - Hiding below (2) i thought it was an slider.
01:11:084 (1,1) - Even if they are stacked... the time between them is too short for a Normal.
01:12:677 (4,5) - Reverse theese 2 and.. 01:12:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a mirror of 01:06:026 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:26:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unintuitive
01:33:878 (3) - wth is with the waypoints on this slider?
02:01:418 (2) - If it's gonna be that close i rather it be stacked
02:15:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Too long of a stream for a Normal.
02:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:25:888 - 02:35:210 not sure what you are mapping to here... sounds odd.
02:36:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - You effectively mapped to every otherwise unhearable sound on your mp3 nice! wanna see how anyone will pull this off, now seriously >_<
02:47:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decide what your mapping to, for god sakes, if your gonna map to the La,lalala la la la la, then start when it starts
02:47:034 (1,2) - Theese 2 i dont know what they are following, considering the ^ notes are all in the same combo they should all be following the same thing.
Sigh... too many mapping changes in a short ammount of time. Make up your mind what your mapping to, dont map to every fricken sound, map to something (1 of the vocals, another vocal, or the 3rd vocal, or maybe the 4th vocal, but not to everything at the same time, it makes it not play well and look odd, and unintuitively).
02:55:354 (1) - Awkward Slider.
02:58:538 (1) - There isnt even a sound here.
02:58:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not going to say much to it, since its in between combos, but your spacing changes here are kind of odd an unintuitive.
And everything after is just... odd.
03:09:148 (1) - Make it go up again at: 03:10:740 to make some sense?
[Hard]
00:18:441 (2) - New combo because your switching vocals (like on normal to avoid a long post about theese i'll let you check the rest of them, shouldnt be that hard, specially coz you mapped it)
00:29:727 (4) - End this slider at: 00:30:127
00:53:678 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds awkward, try this (check the timeline, ignore the positions)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1055200:55:652 (3) - Considering this slider is following the "Katamari Damachy" vocal then the next note should show that it is no longer following it, a.k.a new combo, and also make this slider make a more sense, try inserting a repeat between Katamari and Damachy vocals.
01:06:607 (1) - No new combo.
01:07:188 (1) - No new combo (theese 2 are because you followed this combo pattern in: 00:59:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:12:104 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:22:401 - Odd break.
01:26:594 (1,2,3,4) - Im not a fan of confusing sliders like theese on a Hard.
01:33:133 - 3 notes could be around here, can you add them? (they form part of the next combo as well)
01:33:133 - Feels Empty
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10553 Seriously NO! remap this section, this plays horrible.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10555 This as well... this plays horrible it's hard to tell what you are mapping to.
02:26:083 (1,2,3) - How does this make 3 sounds? (same to all the similars in this section, a slider if anything)
From there until: 02:33:294 i have no idea what you're mapping to, you always find the most hidden, awkward only hearable with 500% volume sound to map to?.
02:35:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt sound like "Eeeeeehh"
02:47:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sound too early.
02:49:826 - Feels empty (2 notes)
02:53:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds awkward (what the hell are you mapping to here now?)
02:57:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yay mapping to silence?
02:59:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why do you have to map to the least hereable sound instead of the most hearable one X_X
03:02:952 (4) - Sounds weird.
03:04:770 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - what the heck is this? X_X
orz i give up... i hope Insane is better.
[Insane]
You should mod your own map, you have lots of spacing errors :<
00:52:496 (1,1) - 200 ms for a half screen jump? plus this is unintuitive since the player isnt ready for the next 2 notes unless they have played an easier diff before.
00:58:752 (1,1) - Another gigantic spacing.
01:04:804 (1,1) - Another gigantic spacing.
01:11:084 (1,1) - Stack theese, the spacing is too big.
01:23:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Are you trying to create your own rythm? and why so much new combo?.
01:29:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same as above, are the extra notes after each slider really needed?.
01:35:343 (1,2) - Another gigantic spacing.
02:09:901 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try to not switch patterns in mid-stream it will confuse people.
02:15:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - "Something that shouldnt be mapped" 1/6 stream is just no, a map got nuked because of stuff like this once.
02:17:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive
02:26:862 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,...) - Also unintuitive, and doesnt seem to be following anything.
02:52:293 (1,1) - More gigantic spacing.
02:57:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Doesnt seem to be following anything.
02:59:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uneven spacing (timeline wise)
[Overall]
The 2nd half of each diff needs to be remapped, you dont seem to be following anything, and if anything maybe you decided to follow the most unhearable sounds in the song?