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Primastella - Koigokoro

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EncoreW
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[General]


AudioLeadIn→2000？


[Insane]


排列好棒然而DT還是打不動D:

00:01:092 (1) - 這裡開始我覺得可以逐漸放大一些音量了

00:01:520 (1) - 這個滑條的速度快的有點嚇人，DT的時候就更明顯了，第一次玩的時候都沒反應過來，而且我覺得滑條的開頭加個自定義音效比較好，另外音量30%是不是有點太小？在這個滑條之前都有40%的音量了

00:10:520 (1) - 這組note我覺得可以改成這個，這組note和上一組完全一樣感覺不太好www，因為音樂在00:10:520 - 00:10:949 - 00:11:377 - 00:11:806 - 加入了一些聲音，而且上一組的00:10:306 - 相當於這一組的00:12:020 - ，前者有vocal，但是後者沒有，所以我覺得00:12:020 - 可以不放圈圈放一個滑條

00:15:235 (1) - 00:30:663 (1) - 01:13:520 (1) - 這個滑條我覺得開頭應該先增大音量，然後在變小一些，因為聽上去的話滑條頭的聲音似乎並不是那麼小，滑條的途中才是比較快的減小下去的

00:51:985 (2,3) - 這裡有可能會打的太早然後miss，但是似乎無所謂的樣子

00:55:949 (4,1) - （127，140）？強迫症

01:04:949 (7,8) - ctrl+G之後打起來似乎更加順手一點

01:53:377 (1) - 我挺喜歡把這個弄成一個1/2滑條的，而且01:53:592 - 這裡是一個比較弱的音，似乎並不違和

01:55:092 (1) - 我覺得這段間奏擺的note不能太好的表現出音樂，01:55:949 - 這些白線有那麼明顯的重音，卻什麼都不放，這讓我感覺似乎是有點太浪費了，而且01:55:092 (1) - 01:56:806 (1) - 這兩組的音樂是有很多地方不一樣的，但是卻用了除了擺放位置之外幾乎完全一樣的設置，雖然我覺得也有道理但是我還覺得可以用更好的來代替它www

01:57:877 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡的聲音要明顯比01:56:163 (4,5,6,7,8) - 要來的弱很多但是卻用了相同的音量

02:24:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個五角星擺的不是太工整


[Hard]


OD6.5？我似乎喜歡比較高一點的OD

00:00:235 (1) - 這一段我覺得還是聲音太大了，以背景音樂的音量來看根本不需要這麼大的音量的，應該還是逐漸增大音量比較好

00:01:520 (1) - 這歌滑條似乎就沒有給人太快的感覺了，但是音量方面我覺得和Insane是一樣的

00:20:806 (1) - （43，149），00:21:235 (3) - （78，278），00:21:663 (5) - （344，212）（於是後面的那個blanket滑條也要跟著動一動了），00:22:306 (8) - （309，73）？強迫症又犯了

00:29:377 (1,2) - 我挺喜歡這麼放的，而且並不難看圖

01:13:949 (4) - NC？

01:55:092 (1) - 這裡開始的間奏我還是覺得把白線這裡補上比較好，畢竟還是有比較明顯的重音的，但是圖裏面跟的是比較弱的音樂，這樣的重音我覺得還是也跟一根比較好，而且01:55:735 - 類似這樣的地方，後面一部分有note來表現它，但是前面的一部分就沒有，我覺得還是加上比較好一點

02:16:520 - 其實我覺得這裡也應該加一個的，02:16:735 (3) - 倒是這個我覺得可以不要，因為白綫上的音比紅線上的強一些，後面應該也是一樣的

02:35:377 (5) - NC似乎是從這裡開始的？


[Relaxing]


OD5？我在我這邊找了一下AR6的圖，發現OD4和OD6的圖加起來跟OD5一樣多;D

00:01:735 - 綠線沒用刪了

00:09:663 (2) - 我更喜歡這麼下節奏圖，之後幾個也是一樣的建議

00:30:663 (1) - 這個NC不要了吧？

00:52:092 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角形會好看一點？我覺得這樣會好看一點 ;D

00:59:163 (2) - 我覺得這樣子下節奏更好一些，這樣的話這個重音就不會被放在滑條的折返導致缺少一點打擊的感覺了

01:55:949 - 我覺得這裡其實放一個1/1滑條或者一個1/2折返滑條或者一個1/2滑條一個圈圈都挺不錯的。。


[117]


00:29:377 - 綠線沒用刪了



似乎沒別的什麼了，DNA什麼的最棒了wwwwwww
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

tm1209 wrote:

[General]


AudioLeadIn→2000？ :arrow: 忘記怎麼用了，不過現在這樣應該也還好? (系統有自動調整ALI、感覺不是很急迫)


[Insane]


排列好棒然而DT還是打不動D:

00:01:092 (1) - 這裡開始我覺得可以逐漸放大一些音量了

00:01:520 (1) - 這個滑條的速度快的有點嚇人，DT的時候就更明顯了，第一次玩的時候都沒反應過來，而且我覺得滑條的開頭加個自定義音效比較好，另外音量30%是不是有點太小？在這個滑條之前都有40%的音量了

00:10:520 (1) - 這組note我覺得可以改成這個，這組note和上一組完全一樣感覺不太好www，因為音樂在00:10:520 - 00:10:949 - 00:11:377 - 00:11:806 - 加入了一些聲音，而且上一組的00:10:306 - 相當於這一組的00:12:020 - ，前者有vocal，但是後者沒有，所以我覺得00:12:020 - 可以不放圈圈放一個滑條

00:15:235 (1) - 00:30:663 (1) - 01:13:520 (1) - 這個滑條我覺得開頭應該先增大音量，然後在變小一些，因為聽上去的話滑條頭的聲音似乎並不是那麼小，滑條的途中才是比較快的減小下去的

00:51:985 (2,3) - 這裡有可能會打的太早然後miss，但是似乎無所謂的樣子 :arrow: 注意得很好呢。這個是節奏暗示，對之後的這種節奏做的一個伏筆，比起將他們分開來，重疊起來其實更好讀，所以才會這麼擺

00:55:949 (4,1) - （127，140）？強迫症

01:04:949 (7,8) - ctrl+G之後打起來似乎更加順手一點

01:53:377 (1) - 我挺喜歡把這個弄成一個1/2滑條的，而且01:53:592 - 這裡是一個比較弱的音，似乎並不違和 :arrow: 唔，可是我比較想多一些打擊感

01:55:092 (1) - 我覺得這段間奏擺的note不能太好的表現出音樂，01:55:949 - 這些白線有那麼明顯的重音，卻什麼都不放，這讓我感覺似乎是有點太浪費了，而且01:55:092 (1) - 01:56:806 (1) - 這兩組的音樂是有很多地方不一樣的，但是卻用了除了擺放位置之外幾乎完全一樣的設置，雖然我覺得也有道理但是我還覺得可以用更好的來代替它www :arrow: 其實你可以發現幾乎整首歌都是白線重音，但是總要有一些柔和的部分，或是需要一些節奏轉換，我刻意這麼做是因為要讓大家知道"這段音樂不同了，節奏不一樣了，不同的pattern開始了"。適當的慢下來(節奏)，會讓整體譜面看起來更加多樣化，我是這麼想的

01:57:877 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡的聲音要明顯比01:56:163 (4,5,6,7,8) - 要來的弱很多但是卻用了相同的音量 :arrow: 其實那不是弱很多，是因為其他聲音把它蓋過去。那個比較強烈的聲音我只把它用在一段音樂的結束(02:00:235 ~ 02:01:735)，會有更強的銜接效果

02:24:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個五角星擺的不是太工整 :arrow: 這個其實原本就沒有打算排得太工整，大概的、不會不順眼的就可以了


[Hard]


OD6.5？我似乎喜歡比較高一點的OD :arrow: 對diff spread不是很好，而且我想要大家開心玩大圈圈:>

00:00:235 (1) - 這一段我覺得還是聲音太大了，以背景音樂的音量來看根本不需要這麼大的音量的，應該還是逐漸增大音量比較好

00:01:520 (1) - 這歌滑條似乎就沒有給人太快的感覺了，但是音量方面我覺得和Insane是一樣的 :arrow: 因為是1.5x :>，Insane 是2.00x。音量都弄好了

00:20:806 (1) - （43，149），00:21:235 (3) - （78，278），00:21:663 (5) - （344，212）（於是後面的那個blanket滑條也要跟著動一動了），00:22:306 (8) - （309，73）？強迫症又犯了

00:29:377 (1,2) - 我挺喜歡這麼放的，而且並不難看圖 :arrow: 還是喜歡現在這樣

01:13:949 (4) - NC？ :arrow: 在之前已經有仔細想過，但是我發現短NC太多反而讓人困惑，所以作為特例不加

01:55:092 (1) - 這裡開始的間奏我還是覺得把白線這裡補上比較好，畢竟還是有比較明顯的重音的，但是圖裏面跟的是比較弱的音樂，這樣的重音我覺得還是也跟一根比較好，而且01:55:735 - 類似這樣的地方，後面一部分有note來表現它，但是前面的一部分就沒有，我覺得還是加上比較好一點 :arrow: 上面解釋過

02:16:520 - 其實我覺得這裡也應該加一個的，02:16:735 (3) - 倒是這個我覺得可以不要，因為白綫上的音比紅線上的強一些，後面應該也是一樣的 :arrow: 同

02:35:377 (5) - NC似乎是從這裡開始的？


[Relaxing]


OD5？我在我這邊找了一下AR6的圖，發現OD4和OD6的圖加起來跟OD5一樣多;D :arrow: 因為這個難度1/1拍很多，混合起來的話OD5對ACC影響很大(之前常打Normal的玩家表示 : OD4和OD5天差地別)，OD調4算是有仔細思考的結果:>

00:01:735 - 綠線沒用刪了

00:09:663 (2) - 我更喜歡這麼下節奏圖，之後幾個也是一樣的建議 :arrow: 這麼做的話就比較沒有"比較柔和的part"的感覺了，我更喜歡現在用空拍來凸顯兩段音樂的強弱

00:30:663 (1) - 這個NC不要了吧？ :arrow: 這怎麼行:O，這個非常重要哦

00:52:092 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角形會好看一點？我覺得這樣會好看一點 ;D

00:59:163 (2) - 我覺得這樣子下節奏更好一些，這樣的話這個重音就不會被放在滑條的折返導致缺少一點打擊的感覺了 :arrow: 為了flow和pattern我偏向選擇不改T.T

01:55:949 - 我覺得這裡其實放一個1/1滑條或者一個1/2折返滑條或者一個1/2滑條一個圈圈都挺不錯的。。 :arrow: 同之前提的節奏強弱


[117]


00:29:377 - 綠線沒用刪了



似乎沒別的什麼了，DNA什麼的最棒了wwwwwww



no reply = fixed。 tm1209就是有卵用

真慶幸有找你，mod很有幫助，謝謝摸圖還有星星:> 我覺得差不多能找BN了
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
AudioLeadIn開.osu第一行就看的到了 :)
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
ahh sry so late
[117's Normal]
  1. 00:16:092 (2) - i dont think that fits the music
  2. 00:38:806 (2) - i dont really like reverse 2/1 in easy though, however if theres no special reason you put that, then dont put that
  3. 00:54:235 (1) - cancle nc and put a nc 00:55:949 (2) -
  4. 00:55:520 - i feel like you need a note here
  5. 01:07:949 (1) - also cancle nc, besure you dont nc before the white tick, late is okay
  6. 01:18:235 (1) - thats kinda too late though, nc right at white tick or the first note after white tick
  7. 01:55:092 - 02:07:092 - 反正我是觉得非常的空，然后这又是easy，我觉得新手适应不了这种突然空的节奏,suggest to change
[Relaxing]
  1. 01:43:092 (1,2) - just dont like things like these, i think they are weird
    thats all
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:449 (2) - i dont think there is a 1/4
  2. 00:49:092 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i think a pattern used back and forwards is not good for players body
  3. 02:02:592 (2) - whats that additional note for, the music really isnt change www
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:449 (2,3,4) - same as hard, i dont think there is a 1/4
  2. 00:47:377 (6,7) - according to 00:54:235 (6,7) - , i think you should use the first 1/2 spam rhythm cause it fits the music more, and i dont think the two should be different
  3. 01:07:949 (6,7) - ^
  4. 02:35:806 (4,5,6) - nc?
这首歌都听得能背下来了。。。
good luck
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Alex Li wrote:

  • [Normal]
  1. 01:55:092 - 02:07:092 - 反正我是觉得非常的空，然后这又是easy，我觉得新手适应不了这种突然空的节奏,suggest to change :arrow: 我認為這是他這個難度做得最好的地方，提供了break和節奏轉換作為音樂變化的提示，成為一種特色。新手不能適應...除非他只有玩1/1和2/1到底的Easy吧，新手不是該學習讀間距和掌握approching circle的時機嗎? 總而言之我覺得最不能改的地方就是這裡

No change made but thank you to your mod and star :>


m1223961117 wrote:

AudioLeadIn開.osu第一行就看的到了 :)
好哦，不過現在(系統)的ALD我覺得OK耶，需要改嗎
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

Alex Li wrote:

ahh sry so late
[117's Normal]
  1. 00:16:092 (2) - i dont think that fits the music >OK
  2. 00:38:806 (2) - i dont really like reverse 2/1 in easy though, however if theres no special reason you put that, then dont put that ^
  3. 00:54:235 (1) - cancle nc and put a nc 00:55:949 (2) - ^
  4. 00:55:520 - i feel like you need a note here >OK
  5. 01:07:949 (1) - also cancle nc, besure you dont nc before the white tick, late is okay >OK
  6. 01:18:235 (1) - thats kinda too late though, nc right at white tick or the first note after white tick >OK
  7. 01:55:092 - 02:07:092 - 反正我是觉得非常的空，然后这又是easy，我觉得新手适应不了这种突然空的节奏,suggest to change >話說我是照的DNA的Break去製圖的，要不然我也會認為這裡是適當的Break，但如果我照著這麼做，就會和已經Rank的那張幾乎一模一樣，這是最重要的原因。而且我不認為我現在這樣的Break會對新手來說很困難，我甚至還刻意壓低難度去弄這裡，這樣反而比較好。最後一點跟DNA說的一樣，我有刻意把Follow Point顯示在比較大的Space讓人去讀圖，這樣難道不是新手判讀圖的標準嗎??

这首歌都听得能背下来了。。。
good luck
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84,312,7092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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20,84,10949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,180,156235,5,4,0:0:0:0:

DarknessAngel wrote:

m1223961117 wrote:

AudioLeadIn開.osu第一行就看的到了 :)
好哦，不過現在(系統)的ALD我覺得OK耶，需要改嗎
ADI要看你要不要動，已經Rank的版本沒動，那我想就不用動
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
updated.
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
pm req

[General]
-AudioLeadIn + 1000 or 1500? Muaic start is a little fast for me.

[117's Normal]
・00:11:377 (5) - add whistle on start?
・00:13:092 (3) - ^
・00:28:949 (4) - whistle?
・00:47:377 (5) - soft-whistle:custom1 on repeat sound better imo
・00:59:806 (3,4,5) - blanket 3 looks better and plays well
・01:15:235 (2,3,4) - blanket 2 and move 4 to make smooth. This image is stacking 2 on 01:13:092 (2) -
・01:13:092 (2) - if you change after 3,4,5, how about straight 2?
・01:38:806 (2) - hmm the end clap sound strange, try normal sampleset with low volume.
・01:39:663 (3) - NC?
・02:08:163 (4) - I wonder this is acceptable or not for the easiest map in this set.
・02:20:806 (1) - add whistle on start?
・02:31:092 (3) - soft-whistle:custom1 on repeat sound better imo

[Relaxing]
-Why use Circle Size 4? Next Hard diff is using CS3, there is a gap. How about using CS3.5?
・00:37:092 (3,4,5) - making a regular triangle?
・00:42:235 (3) - add whistle on start
・00:59:806 (3) - more curve for blanket?
・01:06:235 (4) - I prefer to lengthen this to 01:06:556 -
・01:13:306 (4,1) - How about switch the NC, it would look fine.


[Hard]
-Refer the former written. How about CS4?
・00:01:520 (1) - the speed changing x1.5 to x0.75 in Hard is overdone for me, how about using x1.25 instead of x1.5?
・00:01:735 - why this point using x2.0
・00:21:235 (3) - ,00:21:877 (6) - NC?
・00:29:377 (1,2) - add soft-whistle:custom1 on end?
・00:50:806 (5) - NC?
・01:01:520 (5) - should try another flow because 01:00:663 (3,4) - ,I think the just back flow is boring
・01:33:663 (5) - ^
・01:59:592 (2) - why only this hide under before slider, I think it's needless. I recommend it putting more visible like 01:56:163 (2) -
・02:16:520 - ,02:18:235 - ,02:19:949 - add note? these parts also picked the melody imo. And if possible putting on slider's head like 02:16:949 (4) -


[Insane]
・00:00:449 (2,3,4) - whistle?
・00:03:663 (1) - how about stack 00:02:806 (3) - head instead of the end
・00:09:020 (2,3,4) - ,00:09:663 (6,7,8,9,10) - it looks weird for the Stack Leniency, you shouldn't stack the circle or should consider the SL for this formation.
・00:13:092 (6,7,8,9,10) - why not form blanket 00:12:877 (5) - ?
・00:51:985 (2,3) - This stack kill the flow imo, I suggest put like 00:55:092 (1,2,3) - and after like this part also do.
・01:38:806 (6) - NC?

・00:49:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nazi I wonder why these rythme non adding custom1:whistle in 6,8 or more in Insane and Hard diff. It sound too short sounds, make not fun imo.


good luck
DarknessAngel
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Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
@wring : I adjusted ALI and made some blankets, thank you for mod ~ :>

@m117 : 還是決定加個1000 ALI
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

wring wrote:

pm req

[General]
-AudioLeadIn + 1000 or 1500? Muaic start is a little fast for me.

[117's Normal]
・00:11:377 (5) - add whistle on start?
・00:13:092 (3) - ^
・00:28:949 (4) - whistle? >No
・00:47:377 (5) - soft-whistle:custom1 on repeat sound better imo >Nice :)
・00:59:806 (3,4,5) - blanket 3 looks better and plays well >It can't do that :?
・01:15:235 (2,3,4) - blanket 2 and move 4 to make smooth. This image is stacking 2 on 01:13:092 (2) - >OK
・01:13:092 (2) - if you change after 3,4,5, how about straight 2? >No
・01:38:806 (2) - hmm the end clap sound strange, try normal sampleset with low volume.
・01:39:663 (3) - NC? >OK
・02:08:163 (4) - I wonder this is acceptable or not for the easiest map in this set. >Just one, It's fine here
・02:20:806 (1) - add whistle on start?
・02:31:092 (3) - soft-whistle:custom1 on repeat sound better imo

good luck
Thanks your mod :)

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 15663
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Koigokoro
TitleUnicode:恋ゴコロ
Artist:Primastella
ArtistUnicode:ぷりますてら
Creator:DarknessAngel
Version:117's Normal
Source:ルーセントハート
Tags:Imai Sena Sakagami Nao Tsukishima Komugi Saiya Noir Korosuke Lucent Heart m1223961117
BeatmapID:674024
BeatmapSetID:300232

[Difficulty]
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SliderMultiplier:1
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Nerova Riuz GX
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Nerova Riuz GX
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被課程準備工作和GD摧殘的我終於活著走到這裡來了

General

說真的只有一小段kiai實在無法信服啊
Combo color的配置超大反差真心不解啊啊啊啊((崩潰

Insane

AR不高個一點點、一點點就好? 每到了連打的地方畫面一次就十個note同時在畫面上覺得好滿
還有的萬惡的DS哦呃 DS後轉大跳完全是個游標爆炸性噴射的速度轉換，大概是整個圖最讓我覺得奇妙的地方我詞窮了
舉例

00:08:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
以上一整長串看起來都是DS下的產物，然後就出現了00:13:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - 一個超級加速點，大概短時間加快了有四五倍有吧
接著又回到剛剛的慢速......總而言之有一些部分的速度轉換並沒有其他地方好。
打了長長的五秒鐘DS，突然就加速了，但是音樂卻沒跟上這個突然的加速，大概給我的感覺就是這樣?
  1. 00:01:735 - 00:15:449 - 00:30:877 - 01:13:735 - 這幾個點說實在沒有聲音(就算說有也只是那個聽起來像雷射的聲音結束的地方)，有點多餘但是要刪掉那個滑條實在下不了手。 綠線調一下音量?
  2. 01:07:949 (6,7) - 考慮一下? 這兩個重疊看了真的心好癢啊我的強迫症
    image
  3. 01:54:127 (7,8) - 是不是有點遠，還是是故意的?
  4. 02:08:806 (4) - 不NC?
  5. 02:36:235 (6) - ^
01:13:520 (1) - 話說這一顆的錨點這樣放貌似比較簡便好調整
image

Hard

相對而言有一點偏向Hard與Insane中間，大概是Light Insane的感覺，好像或許大概應該可能不確定要不要改名?
  1. 00:15:020 (1) - 好像NC在這裡比較好? 00:14:806 (3) - or 00:15:235 (2) -

音效GJ ((拇指
媽我終於會看音效了
GL
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
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覆蓋一張Post以示我還沒有忘記 ()

會來看的, 這周末因為被一些事卡到所以沒辦法來 :< 請再等一下下
DarknessAngel
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Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
@Nerova Riuz GX : 雷射那個地方也不用特意調低音量什麼的也感覺滿低音量了(這麼做可能還會更奇怪)，沒有改可是謝謝你摸圖:>

@Flask : 恩

updated 117's Normal.
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. widescreen support全都去掉。

Insane

  1. 00:34:520 (1,2) - 这边可以再设计一下，以及00:45:663 (4,5) - 等。
  2. 00:57:877 (2,3) - 1/4滑条？
  3. 01:54:449 (1,2) - 和01:54:877 (3,1) - 差距太大了点，3放近一点就行。
  4. 02:21:877 (1,2) - 换一下更好，不过这边那么安静还是跳的略大。

Hard

  1. 01:58:520 (1,2) - 箭头推荐拉出来。
  2. 好像没蓝线物件节奏有点单调的样子，现在hard其实是可以放一些连打的。

Relaxing

  1. 01:12:235 (1,2) - 换一下比较好。
  2. 01:27:020 (1,2) - ^

117's Normal

  1. 01:55:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这边ds还是全都统一比较好，不差那么点距离。后同。
  2. 02:19:092 (5,1) - nc互换。
摸你这图心情还挺复杂。

good luck.
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

117's Normal

  1. 01:55:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这边ds还是全都统一比较好，不差那么点距离。后同。
  2. 02:19:092 (5,1) - nc互换。
摸你这图心情还挺复杂。

good luck.
修好了

謝謝HW :)

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DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. widescreen support全都去掉。 :arrow: done

Insane

  1. 00:34:520 (1,2) - 这边可以再设计一下，以及00:45:663 (4,5) - 等。 :arrow: 重疊跳算是我一貫的風格，不想改
  2. 00:57:877 (2,3) - 1/4滑条？ :arrow: 這張圖中我只想把1/4滑條用在足夠強烈的音樂上
  3. 01:54:449 (1,2) - 和01:54:877 (3,1) - 差距太大了点，3放近一点就行。 :arrow: 恩，不過(3,1)還是會比(1,2)大點
  4. 02:21:877 (1,2) - 换一下更好，不过这边那么安静还是跳的略大。 :arrow: 這種音效相較其他段落是相當突出的，這樣的跳剛好

Hard

  1. 01:58:520 (1,2) - 箭头推荐拉出来。 :arrow: 好
  2. 好像没蓝线物件节奏有点单调的样子，现在hard其实是可以放一些连打的。 :arrow: 這個我知道，不放連打是故意的，放連打會讓這個diff偏向Insane造成diff spread問題，而且我在這難度主要想表達跳的部分

Relaxing

  1. 01:12:235 (1,2) - 换一下比较好。
  2. 01:27:020 (1,2) - ^ :arrow: 意思是ctrl+g ? 我覺得好像都差不多，改了不方便就算了。如果是換pattern的話，我覺得沒什麼可以換了欸

117's Normal

[list]
摸你这图心情还挺复杂。 :arrow: 原來我圖有讓少年心情複雜的能力

good luck.
謝謝mod。不過有mod圖就一定會給kd嗎 ? 我mod圖實在不想要被紀錄上去耶... 如果是這樣的話我大概不會想再mod圖了/.\
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[Insane]
  1. 00:40:092 (3,4,5) - 尾巴疊好
[Relaxing]
  1. 01:41:377 - 這沒加到finish
[117's Normal]
  1. 00:29:377 - 這裡可以加個note吧? 空空的不大對勁 可以貼在00:31:092 (1) - 的頭上
  2. 00:55:520 (7,1) - 這兩個nc swap下
  3. 01:45:235 (5) - 是不是該nc
call me back
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

Flask wrote:

[117's Normal]
  1. 00:29:377 - 這裡可以加個note吧? 空空的不大對勁 可以貼在00:31:092 (1) - 的頭上
  2. 00:55:520 (7,1) - 這兩個nc swap下
  3. 01:45:235 (5) - 是不是該nc
call me back
全改

抱歉東西太多太雜，漏掉自己的GD了

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372,40,98806,2,0,L|304:32,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,124,99663,6,0,P|367:149|310:148,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,132,100520,2,0,L|228:68,2,50,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,101377,6,0,P|133:208|76:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,248,102235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,340,102663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,308,103092,2,0,P|240:300|364:316,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,240,105235,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,148,105663,2,0,P|108:80|96:28,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,106949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,212,107377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,52,108235,6,0,P|317:32|281:32,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,109092,2,0,P|161:110|100:104,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,109949,2,0,P|56:160|40:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,364,111235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,308,111663,2,0,P|229:294|295:293,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,344,112520,6,0,P|418:356|488:352,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,292,113806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,196,114235,2,0,L|264:128,2,50,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,292,115092,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,368,115520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,124,116806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,28,117235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,28,118520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,120,118949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,328,120235,2,0,L|80:316,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,276,121520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,344,121949,5,0,0:0:0:0:
452,320,122377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,44,123663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,124092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,348,125377,5,2,0:0:0:0:
60,248,125806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,68,127092,2,0,L|412:60,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,100,128163,2,0,L|200:96,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,48,128806,5,4,0:0:0:0:
464,224,135663,5,2,0:0:0:0:
364,52,136520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,148,137377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,320,138235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,224,139092,6,0,P|475:168|467:103,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,60,139949,2,0,L|404:-4,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,140806,2,0,P|268:148|208:140,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,141663,2,0,L|148:12,2,50,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,220,143806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,224,145092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,136,145520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,228,148949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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120,300,151949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,280,152377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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492,308,153663,2,0,P|484:252|492:184,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,154520,2,0,P|372:132|328:120,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,180,156235,5,4,0:0:0:0:
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Flask wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:40:092 (3,4,5) - 尾巴疊好
[Relaxing]
  1. 01:41:377 - 這沒加到finish

call me back
OK，謝謝！:>
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
好
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
这bg，好像有些NSFW的感觉，建议考虑一下换一张owo
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
右边的loli漏胖次了=NSFW
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
我在放這張圖前有先思考過，首先是這個

SPOILER


再來是說，我覺得那邊看起來其實很有可能是內搭的短褲，有點微小到看不出來，這位畫師把重點焦距在兩位女孩子和景色上所以感覺很不明顯，並不會讓人感覺到色氣~

希望你們覺得這些解釋合理:>



其實之前給Karen發過PM了，既然還有人有問題那我就發出來吧
我覺得思想還是純潔一點好呃...難道一定緊盯著那地方瞧那到底是不是內褲麼



EDIT: 為了避免爭議，我用遮蔽物擋掉了。不過我覺得很奇怪，是否是全年齡的標準不應該是以「有沒有性暗示」為判定標準呢？露內褲也是有區別的，而且也有就算沒有裸露太多也依然色氣滿滿的圖片啊(看過好多samples)。單純以「有沒有露內褲」來判定我覺得很膚淺，想想看小孩子在看一位女孩子身著泳裝搔首弄姿的圖片，跟現在BG這樣的圖片，哪一個才真正對他不好？在遵照制度走的時候也不能放棄作為人的思考，不然會變得像「機器」一樣無聊
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MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
quick check
nokds

Insane

  1. 00:30:663 (1) - 我觉得前面那些红点有些影响sv了，能不能放直些
  2. 00:57:877 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这里应该用四个note突现啪啪啪，这个连打感觉有些破坏气氛，01:11:592 (2,3,4) - 同理
  3. 01:40:735 (2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:35:592 (2,3,4) - ^
call me back ingame（我不想在麻婆不在线的时候去qua他的图233
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
fixed bg and small issues
good luck
Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
[General]
  1. What's up with that unnecessary panty shot in the BG? Can't you find a more suitable BG for this map?
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:806 (10) - forgot a clap hitsound here?
  2. 00:12:663 (4) - ^
  3. 00:14:806 (1) - Why the NC?
  4. 00:20:806 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing for strong beats lower than the spacing for red tick beats? If you're going for intensity-based mapping, then you're doing the opposite of what it should be.
  5. 00:38:806 (3,1,3,4,5) - aren't stacked properly
  6. 00:51:020 (6,7,8) - Why ignore the 1/4s?
  7. 00:51:985 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure this is overmapping.
  8. 00:55:413 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:58:306 (4,1) - Why the anti-jump here? That makes no sense since the intensity is much higher in this beat.
  10. 01:04:735 (6,7,8) - Why ignore the 1/4s?
  11. 01:09:127 (2,3) - overmapping
  12. 01:09:663 (4,5,6,7) - not sure what you can do about this one and it's mostly personal preference, but the flow here seems pretty weird to play
  13. 01:31:842 (2,3) - overmapping
  14. 01:33:663 (5,6,7,8) - This flows extremely awkward..
  15. 01:33:877 (6,7,8) - 1/4s ignored again
  16. 01:35:806 (6) - I'd make this beat much more interesting by placing it at 190;286.
  17. 01:45:556 (2,3) - overmapping
  18. 01:47:592 (6,7,8) - 1/4s ignored again
  19. 01:54:449 (1,2,3) - I'm pretty sure the intensity doesn't change here to make such a big difference in spacing..
  20. 01:55:949 (x) - Why did you skip this beat? ... and apparently every other strong beat in this section? This feels so awkward to play, it's like you're making your own rhythm in the song and ignoring what the song has to offer.
  21. 02:23:377 (3,4,5) - flows really weirdly
there's probably more but this map DEFINITELY needs more work
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
we all love post-rank modding
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Ayu

VINXIS wrote:

we all love post-rank modding
No, we like quality.
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
"omgosh pls mod before rank"
"ur to late"
"this is my map style pls enjoy game"

Insane

00:13:735 (11,1) - Why is this distance so small and the next pattern extremely large?
00:40:092 (3,4,5) - Stacks?
00:51:020 (6,7,8) - What does this large spacing actually represent in the song? If it's the bass-like sound then it certainly doesn't deserve such large jumps
00:51:985 (2) - There is literally a sound on the previous 2 1/4 ticks, but you ignored those and mapped this to practically nothing
00:55:413 (2) - ^ and similar doubles

Hard

00:07:949 (3,4,5) - I get the jump later on but what is this for?
00:08:806 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly undermap this entire part?
00:15:020 (1,2) - Like I said earlier, I get the jump, but why so large? I'm sure it will confuse some players as well
00:20:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm sorry but I don't think this is appropriate for a hard diff. At this point even the AR gives me 2011 maps flashbacks for patterns like these
00:24:235 (1,2,3) - This is weird. The clap gets a smaller spacing, even smaller than everything else
00:33:663 (3,4) - Large distance, 00:34:092 (4,1) - Smaller? Why exactly? I think it's better to stay consistent, or if anything, keep the larger distance for the downbeat
00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Very large spacing which completely kills the difficulty curve, and the kiai after this suddenly has a small spacing again
00:47:377 (3,4,1) - Same as 00:33:663 (3,4) -
00:53:377 (1,2) - larger distance than 00:53:592 (2,3) - ? the patterns feel rather random because the spacing is

Relaxing

  1. If relaxing means, leaving out half of the sounds in the song, then yeah, it surely is.
00:01:092 (2) - Uhm I'm not sure what the point of a x1.5 SV green line is in the middle of a slider
00:01:949 (1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - "Relaxing" but this is just heavily undermapped
00:37:092 (3,4,5) - Why the larger spacing out of nowhere?
00:43:949 (3,1,2) - This is really overdone
01:11:592 (1,2,3,1,2) - Not confusing at all?

The normal is literally the only "finished and polished" diff of this set, to say it nicely, and I even only took a look at the first halves of the diffs
I'm not trying to bash this, but just like BD pointed out, this mapset needs more work before qualifying
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating

Blue Dragon wrote:

What's up with that unnecessary panty shot in the BG? Can't you find a more suitable BG for this map?
also, no need for the bg to be so low res when versions like this exist.

I cropped the image to 16:9 and added a bit of a censor, so I suggest you use this version of the bg when possible.
image
no kds
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS

Ayu wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

we all love post-rank modding
No, we like quality.
2 different thing s that are now being inductively connected










okdad
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen

DarknessAngel wrote:

我在放這張圖前有先思考過，首先是這個

SPOILER


再來是說，我覺得那邊看起來其實很有可能是內搭的短褲，有點微小到看不出來，這位畫師把重點焦距在兩位女孩子和景色上所以感覺很不明顯，並不會讓人感覺到色氣~

希望你們覺得這些解釋合理:>



其實之前給Karen發過PM了，既然還有人有問題那我就發出來吧
我覺得思想還是純潔一點好呃...難道一定緊盯著那地方瞧那到底是不是內褲麼



EDIT: 為了避免爭議，我用遮蔽物擋掉了。不過我覺得很奇怪，是否是全年齡的標準不應該是以「有沒有性暗示」為判定標準呢？露內褲也是有區別的，而且也有就算沒有裸露太多也依然色氣滿滿的圖片啊(看過好多samples)。單純以「有沒有露內褲」來判定我覺得很膚淺，想想看小孩子在看一位女孩子身著泳裝搔首弄姿的圖片，跟現在BG這樣的圖片，哪一個才真正對他不好？在遵照制度走的時候也不能放棄作為人的思考，不然會變得像「機器」一樣無聊
你说的对，有人问过了确定漏内裤不等于NSFW，所以如果这图被dq了，就换回原来的bg吧=。= :cry:
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Ayu

VINXIS wrote:

Ayu wrote:

No, we like quality.
2 different thing s that are now being inductively connected
There's not so much difference between modding and improving quality, unless you of course "only do it for the kd"
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
yheja
Setz
1,419 posts
Joined August 2013
Setz

Ayu wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

we all love post-rank modding
No, we like quality.
let us hope that our quality is assured.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
也是不說不知道原來漏胖次了
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
所以还是那句话 不安全的BG最好就不要用
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu

Blue Dragon wrote:

[General]
  1. What's up with that unnecessary panty shot in the BG? Can't you find a more suitable BG for this map?
i just wondering what kind of map "panty shot" could fit
@passing by
hehe
1,959 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe

EvilElvis wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

[General]
  1. What's up with that unnecessary panty shot in the BG? Can't you find a more suitable BG for this map?
i just wondering what kind of map "panty shot" could fit
@passing by
possibly some good ol' rise against or bad religion.
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
If it gets DQed, you will know my feel.


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