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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2015-07-02T02:42:12+00:00

as requested

[Marathon]
00:07:425 (2) - somehow i feel this whistle could be more appropriate if it was on either (1) or (3)
02:01:512 (3,4) - move they farther a bit ? that looks more like spacing error than an anti jump
02:05:813 (4) - finishes sounds too loud imo, change some of them to whistle or something.. ? just like 04:30:221 (4) -
02:18:437 (2) - missing clap
02:31:115 (1) - whistle at start
02:30:222 (5,6) - ^ at end for both
02:54:865 (1,2,3,1) - perform a triangle on them ? idk if this was did on purpose though
04:26:888 (3,4,5) - rhythm plays weird on the gameplay, i think the slider could be good started at 04:26:888 - instead to cover a kind of cymbal sound there
05:42:358 (1) - hmm delete the whistle ? it sounds too loud along with finish imo
07:14:147 (8) - as for the end of the song, this pattern could be more pleasing if you change it into 1/4 and note instead of reverse

just some hitsounding and other important stuffs, i'd leave the nitpicky just the way they're since the overall map itself is already good :3

alacat

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alacat 2015-07-02T03:25:05+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
as requested

[Marathon]
00:07:425 (2) - somehow i feel this whistle could be more appropriate if it was on either (1) or (3)
02:01:512 (3,4) - move they farther a bit ? that looks more like spacing error than an anti jump
02:05:813 (4) - finishes sounds too loud imo, change some of them to whistle or something.. ? just like 04:30:221 (4) -
02:18:437 (2) - missing clap
02:31:115 (1) - whistle at start
02:30:222 (5,6) - ^ at end for both
02:54:865 (1,2,3,1) - perform a triangle on them ? idk if this was did on purpose though
04:26:888 (3,4,5) - rhythm plays weird on the gameplay, i think the slider could be good started at 04:26:888 - instead to cover a kind of cymbal sound there　I prefer to use circles for taking background sound at here, well added a finish to here!
05:42:358 (1) - hmm delete the whistle ? it sounds too loud along with finish imo
07:14:147 (8) - as for the end of the song, this pattern could be more pleasing if you change it into 1/4 and note instead of reverse

just some hitsounding and other important stuffs, i'd leave the nitpicky just the way they're since the overall map itself is already good :3

fixed other points <3 Thanks

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2015-07-02T06:49:36+00:00

allright...

Bubbled #1

alacat

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alacat 2015-07-02T08:06:33+00:00

Thanks again

Mint

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Mint 2015-07-02T14:37:03+00:00

Hello alacat, as your request :3

Marathon

* 00:47:056 (4) - This slider is a bit questionable. I can't really hear the hitnormal here, considering boosting the volume to 40~50%? Even in a more quiet part in the song (05:22:838 (1) - ) you used 40%.
* 01:10:312 (3) - Hmm... since there's a bass instead of a cymbal on the repeat, replace with a whistle instead?
* 01:19:033 (5) - Don't know if you want to hitsound 1/4 ticks, but to me, the strongest sound is on the blue tick here. Consider adding a clap? Would give a similar effect as 02:43:347 (5) -
* 01:54:953 - Completely optional, but there's a vocal sound here, that you did map for instance at 01:55:813 (7) - 01:56:673 (2) - , consider mapping it out as well for consistency?
* 01:56:673 (2) - I can understand that you want to follow the vocals, but having a break here feels weird to me. The strings and drum sounds are really clear beats in this rather 'calm' section, something like http://puu.sh/iKGA1/e90f5bfaf1.jpg would catch all the sounds.
* 03:37:964 (1) - Sounds more like a cymbal to me.
* 03:48:399 - Not really an issue, but for some reason you have a 5% green line here. Maybe you had a spinner here don't remember lol, but it has no use now.
* 06:08:013 (1,2,3) - I'd turn DS on (making 1,2 smaller than 2,3) to make it clear that one has a 1/6 pauze in between and the other one 1/4. The spacing is almost identical now, with different snaps.
* 06:32:874 (3) - Was this done on purpose? I thought that red timing section is there for (3), but it's not. http://puu.sh/iKHGu/416fcdd61e.jpg - you should check and see if this is intentional.
* 06:50:892 (4) - Depends on what you did earlier, but the clap here in this triplet is the strongest to me, also consider adding a hitsound here?

I already told you this, but really nice map c:

Call me back o/

alacat

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alacat 2015-07-02T15:00:23+00:00

Thank you <3 All fixed

Mint

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Mint 2015-07-02T15:04:55+00:00

Bubble #2!

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2015-07-02T21:30:52+00:00

wow im still following this thread and its now bubbled owo ... go go alameow :3

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alacat 2015-07-02T22:18:54+00:00

can't wait

Xinely

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Xinely 2015-07-03T12:17:04+00:00

~~placeholder, probably i can mod in tomorrow~~

did irc mod with alanyan ~

SPOILER

19:40 Xinely: btw having time for irc? not much to mention, the mapset is too pro for me lol
19:40 alacat: oh sure :D
19:42 Xinely: ok first imo the AR could increase a bit here, normally we have Insane diffs with AR 8,5 or 9 for Insane. i can understand you arent making something hard in your mapset but at least try increase the AR a bit like 8,5 for reading the patterns better?
19:44 alacat: want to keep AR rate because This marathon is around 150 BPM and I didn't use big jumps! Then, I guess Many players will play this map with DT so AR 8 is best to me :3/
19:45 alacat: btw how about do you think OD rate ?
19:45 alacat: 6 or 6.5 or 7
19:47 Xinely: 7 is fine but you seem dont make hard so 6,5 would be nicer for me
19:48 Xinely: 02:42:722 (2) - whistle in tail? i hear like bassdrum there
19:49 alacat: ok! and added it!
19:50 Xinely: 03:12:747 (5) - add clap? the drum is a little bit strong just like 02:42:722 - i guess ><
19:51 alacat: ok! I feel so too!
19:53 Xinely: 04:01:992 (2,3,1,2,3) - just personal taste but the drums are same with 04:01:888 - , somehow i feel adding whistle for all circles would feel nicer 
19:55 alacat: omg I forget to add it xD thanks!
19:55 Xinely: 04:08:867 (4) - whistle then? :D
19:56 Xinely: 04:12:200 - somehow i feel something missed when skip the drum, but i cant find way to map it with nicely too (rip), just letting you know if you want to map or not, you seem doing it intentionally too lol
19:56 alacat: and 04:02:304 (4) - remove new combo from here
19:56 alacat: whistle, ok!
19:59 Xinely: 04:29:075 (7,8) - probably you make the stream's flow intentionally but if you dont, try 1 grid down for them to make the flow is smoother and looks more circular?
20:00 alacat: made new rhythm for taking the drum ! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337101
20:01 Xinely: sure they look great 
20:02 alacat: remake that stream for flow! http://puu.sh/iLPp8/0619411075.png
20:04 Xinely: 05:01:475 (3) - somehow it doesnt sound nice for me here, between you dont map 1/4 for 05:01:475 - 05:01:566 - 05:01:656 - or too much claps hitsound (you may remove clap for 05:01:384 - since only vocal sound at that time)
20:07 alacat: remove clap 05:01:384 - , 05:01:475 - put 50% volume section!
20:08 Xinely: sure, sounds better :D
20:08 Xinely: 06:30:055 - 06:30:861 - 06:31:666 - may add whistles for them, as i hear they sound like drums too
20:10 alacat: all done!
20:10 Xinely: 02:32:544 - oh i missed this before, you did some kiai flash in some songs but this song has no both kiai time or kiai flash, is it intentional? if not would be nice to add kiai flash that this part
20:13 alacat: added whistle! I used kiai at here 02:21:115 - !
20:13 Xinely: ups mistake lol
20:14 alacat: OP : kiai time , ED kiai flash!
20:14 Xinely: 07:00:156 (4) - clap here for the drum? if you do 07:00:257 (5) - remove clap or change with whistle
20:14 alacat: I thought OP is better than ED so I used that :D
20:15 Xinely: i never watch toaru so idk which ones are op which ones are ed lol
20:15 Xinely: yep that's all about the mod :D