Will finish replying later :3!! Thanks a lots for the mods~!Kruzon wrote:
Hi, my 7k modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7
NoviceSPOILER00:22:680 (22680|3,22680|6,23071|4,23071|0) - looks pretty random to me, my suggestion:
00:23:071 (23071|0) - move to 2 so it has the same gap length as 00:22:680 (22680|6,22680|3) - , neater flow
also, i don't see any problem with this jack 00:23:071 (23071|1,23462|1) - and there's no need changes on 00:23:462 (23462|1,23462|5,23723|2,23723|4,23984|6,23984|0) - it's fitting well Follow the suggestion, except the jack, decide to change something better :3!!!
00:28:680 (28680|5,28941|6) - shift them 1 time to the left, refer to 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - which has the highest pitch and legit notes placement Oups, fix
01:01:028 (61028|3) - rather than this, i would use this 01:01:549 (61549|0) - as a long note instead. contrary to this, the following are my suggestions: This 01:01:549 (61549|0) - is already long note wwww
01:00:506 (60506|6) - move to 6
01:00:506 (60506|4) - move to 3
01:01:028 (61028|3) - move to 2
01:01:549 (61549|0) - move to 4
also, refer to what i'm trying to deliver here 00:59:462 (59462|6,59984|0,60506|5,61028|1,61549|3) - All apply~ nice
01:05:462 (65462|1) - well, move it to 5 and include as part of stairs will be nice 01:05:201 (65201|3,65462|4,65723|5) - riding the ascending flow 01:04:028 (64028|0,64158|4,64419|1,64549|5,64810|2,64941|6) - No change, shouldn't be part of this flow 01:04:028 (64028|0,64158|4,64419|1,64549|5,64810|2,64941|6,65201|3) - or you can also try just listening what these 01:04:028 (64028|0,64419|1,64810|2,65201|3) - note are match for.
Optional: PR + Pattern Flow
01:19:288 (79288|0) - move to 7 OMG nice spot, I think your saying 7 because of this 01:18:636 (78636|6) - , I'm changing a bit here, and also made me realize made error here 01:17:201 (77201|2,77723|3,78245|4) -
01:19:810 (79810|4) - move to 6 no change because of above change ^ to something else xD
01:20:071 (80071|6) - move to 2 01:19:810 (79810|4) - Should be right to this note 01:19:810 (79810|4) - o.o
01:20:332 (80332|3) - move to 6 Imma think about it, right now, it feel too right side with these 01:20:071 (80071|6,80593|6) -
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01:26:332 (86332|1,86332|3) - will look nice if included as an ending to symmetrical pattern before it. therefore,
01:26:332 (86332|3) - move to 6
01:26:723 (86723|2) - you may then move this to 4
Fix , changed the pattern a bit, since didn't want to be on same column as this 01:25:288 (85288|5,85288|1) - /color]
Please try them all out first before rejecting
01:36:962 (96962|3) - hmm.. perhaps move to 5,
01:37:744 (97744|0) - move to 3, My bad, made some error, did something else xD
01:39:049 (99049|6) - move to 4 Should be more right to this 01:38:788 (98788|4) -
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AdvancedSPOILER00:05:202 (5202|5,5202|1,5202|2,5202|4,5332|5,5332|1,5332|2,5332|4) - it seems that for exhaust difficulty, you use the exact amount of notes density at this point. i'd recommended to use 2 noters for its density rather than 4, idk how to explain this due to my poor english xD but i think that you should do something about it depending on difficulty spread Fix
(your current notes density on respective difficulty)novice: without jack, 2-noters
advanced: 2-noters, with jack
exhaust: 4-noters, with jack
gravity: 5-noters, with jack
do you get what i'm trying to say? if no then just pretend you did, let's move along then
00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3,7549|5,7680|2,7810|0) - seems rather messy imo, perhaps: Fix
00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3) - shift 1 time to the left
00:07:549 (7549|5) - move to 2
Other did another pattern~ Nice spot~
00:32:332 (32332|1,32332|5) - move to 3 and 5 respectively, refer 00:30:245 (30245|0,30245|2,31288|3,31288|1,32332|2,32332|4) -
00:33:375 (33375|2,33375|4) - make a jack note here, suggest to move 00:33:375 (33375|2) - to 4 and 00:33:375 (33375|4) - move to 7
00:35:462 (35462|1) - move to 6, i believe it belong to the right side due to pr
00:37:549 (37549|5) - move to 4 only if you follow the above statement, for pattern consistency
00:38:071 (38071|3) - move to 5, only if you follow the above statement
Optional: 00:38:593 (38593|4,38593|6,38593|5) - shift 3 times to the left, refer to 00:38:071 (38071|4,38071|0) -
00:39:375 (39375|3,39375|5,39636|0,39636|6) - - hmm something feels off here, doesn't sync with the rhythm, help
00:48:506 (48506|4,48506|3) - hmm.. i would move 00:48:506 (48506|3) - to 3 for proper gap and it's comfortable
01:12:245 (72245|0,73549|0) - i don't see anything wrong with leaving this area empty,
but area between this part 01:14:158 (74158|1,74854|4) - contains "main" instrument which is necessary to plot notes along the on-going rhythm. I would suggest you to add some pattern in-between them Yeah saw that while watching testplay, I guess I should :3!! added some~
01:27:636 (87636|0) - since you're not resuming the upcoming piano stream, you should take into account the strong piano playing at this point, and use it to close the pattern sequence before the pause afterward. i suggest to add 1 more notes, perhaps on 7 Kept~
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epic song, nice choice
good luck with your map