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Asphyxia
I tested it and stuff, some suggestions ya

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20:21 Asphyxia: 00:43:287 (3,4) - I didn't like stuff like that, it's not really confusing but
20:21 Asphyxia: I liked the 1/2's to be more spacec
20:21 Asphyxia: space
20:21 Asphyxia: djust me tho
20:22 Broccoly: like not overlapping each other?
20:22 Asphyxia: 00:54:387 (1) - this felt kinda weird because the beat is a lot stronger than 00:54:087 (4,5) - , yet the spacing doesn't change almost at all
20:22 Asphyxia: yea
20:22 Asphyxia: I feel like giving the note more emphasis would follow the music better and start off that pattern better
20:22 Asphyxia: idk
20:22 Asphyxia: again, just me
20:24 Asphyxia: 01:46:879 (5) - again, just me here but the overlap seems kinda ughhh visually and also playability wise
20:24 Asphyxia: since there's jumps there
20:24 Asphyxia: aiming more down would prob feel more comfortable
20:24 Asphyxia: e.g http://puu.sh/img09/b37a881dc9.jpg
20:25 Asphyxia: 01:52:579 - could be a place for a note to emphasis that strong beat there
20:27 Broccoly: okk keep going i'll tell you what ive done for each of them when you're done
20:27 Asphyxia: kk
20:28 Asphyxia: 02:50:629 (2) - looks really flat and iffy, I'd do it like this for the sake of visuals http://puu.sh/imgef/349cf3cd32.jpg
20:28 Asphyxia: or anything as long as the first curve gets more curvy because it's kinda flat atm
20:28 Asphyxia: and it doesn't really fit as well as it could with your other sliders
20:29 Asphyxia: since your other sliders are so curvy
20:29 Asphyxia: 02:59:779 (1) - again, I'd move the note more down, especially because this one is way more strong
20:29 Asphyxia: I think the finish could use the additional emphasis
20:31 Asphyxia: 03:33:979 (1) - same as previously, prob would curve it more so it'd be more visually appealing and fitting, see http://puu.sh/imgnW/14246f90e2.jpg
20:32 Asphyxia: 03:45:679 (1,2) - maybe give 03:45:829 (2) - more spacing?
20:32 Asphyxia: because that way the pattern would make more sense musically, I feel like
20:32 Asphyxia: that part could have a gradually increasing spacing
20:32 Asphyxia: as the music gets more intense
20:33 Asphyxia: 03:47:929 (6) - prob could space this out more but it's fine tbh
20:33 Asphyxia: 04:20:029 - could be a place for a note like previously (hehe 4:20 roflmao)
20:34 Asphyxia: and I like the consistency here, but I would also would've loved to see that part mapped as it is the most intense part
20:35 Asphyxia: 04:51:229 (1) - see the spacing increase suggestions etc
20:35 Asphyxia: mk I guess that's all
20:36 Broccoly: okk
Topic Starter
Broccoly
Updated!
Kibbleru
that sb *-*
Nathan
yes
Topic Starter
Broccoly
SB fixing in progress! BNs Please do not ninja bubble #2
Kinshara
Also please add koinuri to tags! :)

It's not really required, but it would be a kind gesture since he put in a lot of effort to make you such a nice sb. Also, it would help out people in searching for his storyboards if they need to look at it.
Topic Starter
Broccoly

Kinshara wrote:

Also please add koinuri to tags! :)

It's not really required, but it would be a kind gesture since he put in a lot of effort to make you such a nice effort. Also, it would help out people in searching for his storyboards if they need to look at it.
My bad for forgetting it... will be done in the next update
captin1
yep, adjusted sb so notes are more visible

i think we added a clap too or smth

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Nara



here we go!
Natsu
stuff
2015-06-23 23:53 Broccoly: NATSU
2015-06-23 23:53 Broccoly: YOU SHOULD RANK MAI MAPPU
2015-06-23 23:54 Natsu: AND YOU SHOULD TEST PLAY MINE !
2015-06-23 23:54 Broccoly: yes yes
2015-06-23 23:54 Broccoly: DEAL
2015-06-23 23:54 Natsu: KK
2015-06-23 23:55 Natsu: what's your map btw
2015-06-23 23:55 Broccoly: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550578 marina - Towa yori Towa ni]
2015-06-23 23:56 Broccoly: got #2 bubble from captin!
2015-06-23 23:56 Natsu: YOU WANT MY FLAME
2015-06-23 23:56 Broccoly: YES
2015-06-23 23:56 Broccoly: MY FIRST FLAME
2015-06-23 23:57 Natsu: OMG THAT SB
2015-06-23 23:57 Broccoly: I KNOW RIGHT
2015-06-24 00:03 Natsu: FK THIS THAT SB DON'T LET ME MOD, I'LL JUST CHECK HITSOUND DELAY THO AHAHAHHAA
2015-06-24 00:03 Broccoly: YES
2015-06-24 00:17 Natsu: btw I have some suggestions anyways
2015-06-24 00:17 Broccoly: ok
2015-06-24 00:17 Natsu: can irc?
2015-06-24 00:17 Broccoly: sure
2015-06-24 00:18 Natsu: 01:03:837 (7,1) - LOL first one its really nazi, but maybe blank it properly?
2015-06-24 00:19 Natsu: 01:47:029 (1,2,3) - maybe try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295370 ? I think will play better and will build nicely to do 01:47:479 (4,5,6,7,1) -
2015-06-24 00:20 Natsu: 01:55:579 (1) - shouldn't be this 1/2?
2015-06-24 00:20 Natsu: 04:23:029 (1) - ^
2015-06-24 00:21 Broccoly: ok keep em coming
2015-06-24 00:21 Broccoly: i'll reply all at the same time
2015-06-24 00:21 Natsu: 04:47:779 (1,2) - 02:20:329 (1,2) - I think people will read them as 1/2 O.O
2015-06-24 00:21 Natsu: that's all let me know what u think LOL
2015-06-24 00:21 Broccoly: lol okk
2015-06-24 00:22 Broccoly: 01:03:837 (7,1) - fixed
2015-06-24 00:22 Broccoly: altho it was intended but i think blanket looks good too
2015-06-24 00:23 Natsu: metadata should be fine right? since I think you copy it from garven right?
2015-06-24 00:23 Broccoly: lemme check just to be sure
2015-06-24 00:23 Broccoly: ah yeah
2015-06-24 00:23 Broccoly: i copied garven's
2015-06-24 00:24 Broccoly: 01:47:029 (1,2,3) - i like how this looks
2015-06-24 00:24 Broccoly: and they play good i think
2015-06-24 00:25 Broccoly: hmm sec
2015-06-24 00:25 Natsu: a btw, mind making the tail more visible? 02:40:729 (2,3) - I think some bakas will have trouble there
2015-06-24 00:26 Broccoly: 01:55:579 - for this i think it's ok cuz it builds nicely to the streams and express the vocal well
2015-06-24 00:27 Natsu: omfg look at my rank ahahahahah
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: i did this once in one of my ranked maps
2015-06-24 00:27 Natsu: 9999
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: LOL
2015-06-24 00:27 Natsu: lol 1 year without playing hurts haha, but fun numbers
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: hahaha
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: yeah
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: ok
2015-06-24 00:27 Broccoly: i moved like
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: 02:41:029 (3) - this
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: 3 grid to left and up
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: lol
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: tbh the testplayers didn't have any trouble
2015-06-24 00:28 Natsu: idk but qats will become picky in maps like this one lol
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: 04:47:779 (1,2) - same with these
2015-06-24 00:28 Natsu: so 1 or 2 pixels help ahahah
2015-06-24 00:28 Broccoly: i see..
2015-06-24 00:29 Broccoly: none of the players read them as 1/2 so far
2015-06-24 00:30 Natsu: k upload it then, I'll FLAME YOUR THREAD

Reol
Congratz!
Len

Nara wrote:




here we go!
Lavender
gratz!!
Gero
Congrats Broccoly ~
Haruto
Congratulations Broccoly :D
ac8129464363
<3
Asahina Momoko
gratz \:D/
Norman
어프 축하드립니다
Rapthorn
Didn't even notice that it got ranked, grats
Luna-
wow congrats!!!!!!!!!1111!!!!1!1!1!
CLSW
크 드디어
축하드립니다
Nakano Itsuki
Broccoly pro mapper <3
Congratz!
Asphyxia
Broccoly you're a god
Kinshara
Congratulations, Broccoly!
Aka
GRRRRRRRRRRRR R R RR R RATS :oops: :x :D ;) :) 8-) :cry: :) :D :o :( :lol: :P :| :roll: :?: :shock: :( :x :P :!: :cry: :lol: 8-) >:( :cry: 8-)
rats
_koinuri
Congrats!
Girl
:o
Beomsan
와 정말 오래 기다렸습니다 ㄷㄷㄷ 축하드려요
Irreversible
Broccoly you're so 미친 <3

Congratz!!
LQA20Ans
갓로콜리...

Gratz!
Euny
축하드려요 ^^
Topic Starter
Broccoly
Thanks everyone!!!! :) :)
HabiHolic
브로컬리님 ㅊㅋㅊㅋ
Artavia
오 랭크된지 몰랐는데... 축하드립니다!
Restia Ashdoll
Awesome.
Kibbleru
gz
Natsu
yay ranked :oops:
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