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OcularNebula - Stay Inside Me [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Janko

Raediaufar wrote:

From this queue

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

General
Dont use comma “,” on your tags ☑ OK

If someone makes a GD on your map, put his/her ign on tags ☑ OK

Remove “OcularNebula” in the tag because you have already added it on artist section ☑ OK

Remove “Stay Inside Me” in the tag because you have already added in on the title ☑ OK

Because this is a soundtrack, put “ost” on the tag section ☑ OK

Add kiai time on your map ☑ OK

It’s really recommended to use “soft” hitsound rather than “normal” since the music is not really loud. It’s really annoying ☑ OK

Resize your BG to 1366 x 768 ☑ OK

Please add some hitsound to your beatmap [/color]☐ Will be soon

Disable Widescreen Support[/color] ☑ OK

I don’t know why you cut the song that actually pretty short, it’s only 1:45 and that fade out just looks so weird. Maybe you can ask someone to make a good fade out at the end I make a fade out at the end. I think that is good

The red ones are must fixed problems, unless it won't get ranked

NM - ☑ all applied
00:05:240 (5240|2) – move this to 2 or 1, up to you
00:23:169 (23169|1) – move to 4
00:26:919 (26919|2) – ghost note, delete
00:36:412 (36412|1,36529|0) – Ctrl + H
00:40:162 (40162|3) – move to 2
00:43:794 (43794|3) – ghost note, delete
00:44:029 – missing note
00:44:263 - ^

EZ - ☑ all applied
00:00:084 (84|3) – move this LN to 2
00:08:052 (8052|1) – move to 3
00:12:271 (12271|1) – move to 3 or 4, up to you
00:13:209 (13209|2) – move this LN to 2
00:18:599 (18599|0) – move to 3
00:22:349 (22349|2) – move to 4
00:27:505 (27505|1) – move to 4
00:29:380 (29380|2) – move to 3

ok that's all
Thanks :D
AJIekceu
Hi :)

Mod from the Alexey's Queue

Column |0|1|2|3|

Let's begin :3

Click
[EZ]
00:01:959 (1959|1) - move to 3
00:03:834 (3834|2) - move to 1 for pattern
00:06:177 (6177|2) - move to 3 for pattern
00:06:646 (6646|3) - move to 2
00:18:834 (18834|3) - move to 1 and 00:19:302 (19302|2) - move for 3 for mirror pattern
00:44:615 (44615|3,44849|2,45084|1) - I suggest to move it to 00:44:146 - and delete 00:44:146 (44146|0) -
[NM]
00:13:209 - add note to 1
00:13:209 (13209|0) - LN ends at 00:13:443 -
00:13:912 (13912|3) - move to 2 and 00:14:029 (14029|2) - move to 0
00:14:263 (14263|0,14380|1) - move to one column left
00:21:177 (21177|0,21294|3,21412|1,21529|2) - Ctrl+H
00:27:037 (27037|1,27154|2) - ^
00:45:084 (45084|1,45084|3) - It's unnecessary I apologize, because there are no sound anymore
[SEE's HD]
00:40:162 (40162|3,40162|1,40279|0,40279|2,40513|3,40513|1,40630|0,40630|2) - Ctrl+H for balance
00:42:388 (42388|3,42388|1,42505|2,42505|0) - Ctrl+H
00:45:084 (45084|2,45084|1) - same as NM and EZ
Vey nice diff o.o

After checking all mod, try to set offset: 132

Nice track. I love this style <3

Good luch ;)
Topic Starter
Janko

AJIekceu wrote:

Hi :)
Column |0|1|2|3|

Let's begin :3

Click
[EZ]
00:01:959 (1959|1) - move to 3 ☑ OK
00:03:834 (3834|2) - move to 1 for pattern ☑ OK
00:06:177 (6177|2) - move to 3 for pattern ☑ OK
00:06:646 (6646|3) - move to 2 ☑ OK
00:18:834 (18834|3) - move to 1 and 00:19:302 (19302|2) - move for 3 for mirror pattern ☑ OK
00:44:615 (44615|3,44849|2,45084|1) - I suggest to move it to 00:44:146 - and delete 00:44:146 (44146|0) - ☒ NO because this map must have 45 second

[NM]
00:13:209 - add note to 1 ☑ OK
00:13:209 (13209|0) - LN ends at 00:13:443 ☑ OK
00:13:912 (13912|3) - move to 2 and 00:14:029 (14029|2) - move to 0 ☑ OK
00:14:263 (14263|0,14380|1) - move to one column left ☑ OK
00:21:177 (21177|0,21294|3,21412|1,21529|2) - Ctrl+H ☑ OK
00:27:037 (27037|1,27154|2) - ^ ☑ OK
00:45:084 (45084|1,45084|3) - It's unnecessary I apologize, because there are no sound anymore ☒ NO because this map must have 45 second

After checking all mod, try to set offset: 132 ☑ OK

Nice track. I love this style <3

Good luch ;)
Thanks a lot (^ω^)
Verniy_Chan

Hi Janko-san
NM as requested from ★☭ Верный osu!mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[EZ]
00:15:132 add note, kiai part must attractive pattern
00:23:100 (23100|2) move to 2, balance
00:24:272 (24272|0) move to 3 ^
00:29:194 (29194|3) change into LN, sound like 00:28:257 (28257|2)
00:31:772 add note, consistency
00:33:647 ^
00:35:522 ^
00:36:694 (36694|0) LN
00:43:022 add note
00:44:194 (44194|0) LN

[NM]
00:03:178 (3178|0,3413|1) Ctrl + G
00:03:647 (3647|0) move to 4, balance
00:34:702 (34702|2) move to 2, balance
00:35:522 (35522|2,35757|2) avoid low jack
00:39:038 (39038|1,39507|2) Ctrl + G, balance
00:43:022 (43022|0) move to 4
00:45:132 confilict EZ & HD diff, please check

[SEE's HD]
Nice

Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Janko

Verniy_Chan wrote:

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[EZ ☑ OK all applied]
00:15:132 add note, kiai part must attractive pattern
00:23:100 (23100|2) move to 2, balance
00:24:272 (24272|0) move to 3 ^
00:29:194 (29194|3) change into LN, sound like 00:28:257 (28257|2)
00:31:772 add note, consistency
00:33:647 ^
00:35:522 ^
00:36:694 (36694|0) LN
00:43:022 add note
00:44:194 (44194|0) LN

[NM ☑ OK all applied]
00:03:178 (3178|0,3413|1) Ctrl + G
00:03:647 (3647|0) move to 4, balance
00:34:702 (34702|2) move to 2, balance
00:35:522 (35522|2,35757|2) avoid low jack
00:39:038 (39038|1,39507|2) Ctrl + G, balance
00:43:022 (43022|0) move to 4
00:45:132 confilict EZ & HD diff, please check

Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Thank you ^~^
_underjoy
EZ
SPOILER
00:29:194 (29194|3) - czemu LN? dałbym zwykłą
00:29:194 (29194|3) - dodaj 1
00:43:022 (43022|1) - usuń
Poza tym, trochę ciężko to szacować bo pattern mógłby iść cały czas tak samo, powyższe zmiany tyczą się raczej konsekwencji w ich używaniu.
Jeśli chcesz możesz podbić niektóre fragmenty 2-chordem.

NM
SPOILER
00:01:069 (1069|1,1303|0) - tych dźwięków nie ma, usuń
00:01:186 (1186|2) - za słaby dźwięk jak na LN, zostawiłbym krótką
ogólnie w całej piosence te same zmiany co powyżej, overmap może brzmieć dobrze ale dalej jest overmapem :/
00:01:186 (1186|2) - można dodać 1, oraz 00:01:186 (1186|2) - można dodać 2. Ewentualnie podbij istniejące chordem, a tego nie dodawaj.
00:15:132 (15132|3,15132|0) - przedłuż do 1/1
00:16:538 - tutaj pattern jest ok, ale przez myśl przeszło mi coś takiego: http://puu.sh/ihsXC/d07e2d932b.jpg
00:25:210 - a tutaj na chwilkę zrezygnowałeś z overmapu :P
00:30:132 (30132|3) - czemu LN? dałbym zwykłą
00:42:202 (42202|3) - ^
Ogólnie to możesz zdecydować podbić niektóre fragmenty 2-chordem, jeśli * rating będzie za niski. Tylko konsekwentnie :)

HD
SPOILER
DODAJ KIAI
00:15:132 - 00:30:132 -
00:00:366 (366|3) - usuń, brak dźwięku
00:02:475 (2475|2,2710|2,2710|3,2827|0,2827|1,3061|1,3413|2,3413|3,3647|0,3647|1,3882|3,3882|2) - dobry pattern, chociaż może troszkę za monotonny gdy melodia idzie w górę?
00:14:780 - dodaj 4 i 00:14:897 (14897|3) - przesuń do 1 i 00:14:897 (14897|3) - dodaj 4 - o ile na NM to opcjonalne, w HD pasuje bardzo ładnie.
00:29:428 - brakuje dźwięku.
00:30:600 (30600|2,30600|3,30835|1,30835|0,30952|1,30952|0,31186|2,31186|3) - pattern IMO za łatwy na hard, i średnio pasuje do melodii. Proponuję http://puu.sh/ihspC/8d73f43e1e.jpg
00:41:850 (41850|2,41850|0) - zmień na [24]
00:42:085 (42085|1,42085|3,42202|0,42202|2,42436|1,42436|3,42553|0,42553|2) - ctrl+G <-- ta i wcześniejsza zmiana po to, żeby pattern nie był tak monotonny
00:43:139 (43139|3,43139|2) - usuń, brak dźwięku
00:43:257 (43257|1,43257|0) - przesuń do [34]
00:43:491 (43491|2,43608|1,43842|1,44194|0,44546|2,44780|2,45014|3,45014|2) - PLS strit PLS, usuń te notki xD A resztę jakoś zrepatternuj, może na koniec jakiś LN?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Janko

TheZiemniax wrote:

EZ
SPOILER
00:29:194 (29194|3) - czemu LN? dałbym zwykłą ☑ OK w sumie to miałem tak jak ty powiedziałeś ale w ramach innego moda zmieniłem i chciałem sprawdzić jak sie przyjmie. Jak widać słabo xD
00:29:194 (29194|3) - dodaj 1 ☑ OK
00:43:022 (43022|1) - usuń ☒ NIE nie wiem czemu miałbym usuwać
Poza tym, trochę ciężko to szacować bo pattern mógłby iść cały czas tak samo, powyższe zmiany tyczą się raczej konsekwencji w ich używaniu.
Jeśli chcesz możesz podbić niektóre fragmenty 2-chordem. ☒ NIE wolę jak najmniej ich dawać na EZ

NM
SPOILER
00:01:069 (1069|1,1303|0) - tych dźwięków nie ma, usuń ☒ NIE ustaw sobie Playback Rate na 50% albo ile i się wsłuchaj
00:01:186 (1186|2) - za słaby dźwięk jak na LN, zostawiłbym krótką ☒ NIE
ogólnie w całej piosence te same zmiany co powyżej, overmap może brzmieć dobrze ale dalej jest overmapem :/ wstawienie notek w tych miejscach zamiast krótkich LNów spowoduje to że mapa zrobi się nudna. co do gry owe LNy nie przeszkadzają więc zostawię na tę chwilę
00:01:186 (1186|2) - można dodać 1, oraz 00:01:186 (1186|2) - można dodać 2. Ewentualnie podbij istniejące chordem, a tego nie dodawaj. ☐ ?Szczerze to nie wiem o co ci tu chodzi. Można dodać 1 oraz 2?
00:15:132 (15132|3,15132|0) - przedłuż do 1/1 ☑ OK
00:16:538 - tutaj pattern jest ok, ale przez myśl przeszło mi coś takiego: http://puu.sh/ihsXC/d07e2d932b.jpg ☒ NIE fajny pattern ale wg mnie zbyt rozwaliłby całokształt. niech zostanie tak jak jest
00:25:210 - a tutaj na chwilkę zrezygnowałeś z overmapu :P jakiego overmapu :p jest git
00:30:132 (30132|3) - czemu LN? dałbym zwykłą
00:42:202 (42202|3) - ^ ☒ NIE to samo co pisałem wyżej o krótkich LNach
Ogólnie to możesz zdecydować podbić niektóre fragmenty 2-chordem, jeśli * rating będzie za niski. Tylko konsekwentnie :) SR na razie nie jest za niski ale jak by się zdarzyło to oczywiście dodam :)
Good luck!
Dziękóweczka :D
_underjoy
Tbh nawet jeśli te dźwięki są, to bardzo słabo słyszalne. A na HD ich nie ma, więc jest pewien zgrzyt :P
Ale uszanuję decyzję :P Co do tych 1 i 2 to chodziło mi aby powstał 1/2 stream.
Topic Starter
Janko

TheZiemniax wrote:

A na HD ich nie ma, więc jest pewien zgrzyt :P
a HD jest streeta i on zarządza swoim diffem więc się nie wtrącam xD co do Kiai to on nie chce go dodać w swoim diffie. w sumie kiai nie jest obowiązkowe z tego co czytałem i słyszałem
_underjoy
Ale zgodność powinna być, to nie jest taiko xD trzymam się zasady że łatwiejsze diffy nie mają notek tam gdzie nie ma ich również w trudniejszych.
Anyway może spytaj Kano to dorobi Ci 6k GD ;)
Topic Starter
Janko

TheZiemniax wrote:

Anyway może spytaj Kano to dorobi Ci 6k GD ;)
jak już to bym szedł w 4k diffy bo wydaje mi sie że da sie coś z tego trudniejszego wydusić
streeteelf

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

SEE's HD
00:40:162 (40162|3,40162|1,40279|0,40279|2,40513|3,40513|1,40630|2,40630|0) - Ctrl + G - done

Raediaufar wrote:

SEE's HD
Some serious bussiness here

00:01:255 – missing note - done
00:03:130 - ^ - done
00:05:005 - ^ - done
00:06:880 - ^ - done
00:08:755 - ^ - done
00:10:630 - ^ - done
00:12:505 - ^ - done
00:16:255 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:18:130 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:20:005 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:21:880 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:23:755 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:25:630 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:27:505 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:29:380 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX

00:30:787 (30787|1,30787|0,30904|1,30904|0) – please don’t make this jacks and also at 00:32:662 (32662|1,32662|0,32779|1,32779|0) – as well and also on the next pattern - done both

00:31:255 – missing note - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:33:130 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:35:005 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
00:36:880 - ^ - there are 2 notes, I won't make 3 since it's HD, not MX
Idk why you ignore this sound, since this is the hardest diffs by the way

AJIekceu wrote:

Click
[SEE's HD]
00:40:162 (40162|3,40162|1,40279|0,40279|2,40513|3,40513|1,40630|0,40630|2) - Ctrl+H for balance - done, but in other way
00:42:388 (42388|3,42388|1,42505|2,42505|0) - Ctrl+H - done, but in other way
00:45:084 (45084|2,45084|1) - same as NM and EZ - done
Vey nice diff o.o

TheZiemniax wrote:

HD
SPOILER
DODAJ KIAI - NIE!
00:15:132 - 00:30:132 -
00:00:366 (366|3) - usuń, brak dźwięku - done
00:02:475 (2475|2,2710|2,2710|3,2827|0,2827|1,3061|1,3413|2,3413|3,3647|0,3647|1,3882|3,3882|2) - dobry pattern, chociaż może troszkę za monotonny gdy melodia idzie w górę? - Może jest monotonny, ale taka jest melodia, też monotonna. Poza tym staram się robić pod wszystkich, a nie "co dla mnie proste, dla innych też będzie" dlatego też trudność może wydawać się inna niż oczekujesz.
00:14:780 - dodaj 4 i 00:14:897 (14897|3) - przesuń do 1 i 00:14:897 (14897|3) - dodaj 4 - o ile na NM to opcjonalne, w HD pasuje bardzo ładnie. - done
00:29:428 - brakuje dźwięku. - done
00:30:600 (30600|2,30600|3,30835|1,30835|0,30952|1,30952|0,31186|2,31186|3) - pattern IMO za łatwy na hard, i średnio pasuje do melodii. Proponuję http://puu.sh/ihspC/8d73f43e1e.jpg - done
00:41:850 (41850|2,41850|0) - zmień na [24] - done, ale inaczej trochę
00:42:085 (42085|1,42085|3,42202|0,42202|2,42436|1,42436|3,42553|0,42553|2) - ctrl+G <-- ta i wcześniejsza zmiana po to, żeby pattern nie był tak monotonny - done, ale inaczej trochę
00:43:139 (43139|3,43139|2) - usuń, brak dźwięku - No to zwolnij do 25% piosenkę, IMO tam jednak jest dźwięk, uderzenie...
00:43:257 (43257|1,43257|0) - przesuń do [34] - Nie z powodu wcześniejszego nieusunięcia notek
00:43:491 (43491|2,43608|1,43842|1,44194|0,44546|2,44780|2,45014|3,45014|2) - PLS strit PLS, usuń te notki xD A resztę jakoś zrepatternuj, może na koniec jakiś LN? - Moim zdaniem to pasuje, ale dobra, jakoś zrobiłem, że pasuje i zbalansowane jest. :v
Thanks to all of you for mods. :3

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Geometry Dash - Stay Inside Me.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13651
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Stay Inside Me
TitleUnicode:Stay Inside Me
Artist:OcularNebula
ArtistUnicode:OcularNebula
Creator:Janko
Version:SEE's HD
Source:Geometry Dash
Tags:Geometry Dash Newgrounds ost streeteelf electro BGM
BeatmapID:708124
BeatmapSetID:303763

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192,192,8452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,8686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,8686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,9038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,9038,128,0,9272:0:0:0:0:
64,192,9272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,9272,128,0,9507:0:0:0:0:
448,192,9507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,9507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,9975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,10210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,10327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,10327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,10561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,10913,128,0,11147:0:0:0:0:
448,192,11147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,11147,128,0,11382:0:0:0:0:
64,192,11382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,11850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,12085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,12202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12788,128,0,13022:0:0:0:0:
448,192,12788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,13022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13022,128,0,13257:0:0:0:0:
448,192,13257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,13257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,13725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,13960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,14311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,14428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,14663,128,0,14897:0:0:0:0:
64,192,14663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,14780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14897,128,0,15132:0:0:0:0:
64,192,14897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,14897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,15132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,15835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,16186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,16186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,16538,128,0,16772:0:0:0:0:
320,192,16538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,16772,128,0,17007:0:0:0:0:
64,192,16772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,17827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,18061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,18413,128,0,18647:0:0:0:0:
448,192,18413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18647,128,0,18882:0:0:0:0:
192,192,18647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,18882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,18882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,19585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,19702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20288,128,0,20522:0:0:0:0:
320,192,20522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,20522,128,0,20757:0:0:0:0:
64,192,20757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,21577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22163,128,0,22397:0:0:0:0:
192,192,22163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,22397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22397,128,0,22632:0:0:0:0:
192,192,22632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,23335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24038,128,0,24272:0:0:0:0:
64,192,24038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24272,128,0,24507:0:0:0:0:
448,192,24272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,25210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25913,128,0,26147:0:0:0:0:
64,192,26147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26147,128,0,26382:0:0:0:0:
448,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,27085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27788,128,0,28022:0:0:0:0:
448,192,28022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,28022,128,0,28257:0:0:0:0:
64,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,28960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29663,128,0,29897:0:0:0:0:
64,192,29897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29897,128,0,30132:0:0:0:0:
192,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,30835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,31186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,31538,128,0,31772:0:0:0:0:
192,192,31772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31772,128,0,32007:0:0:0:0:
64,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,32710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,33178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33413,128,0,33647:0:0:0:0:
64,192,33647,128,0,33882:0:0:0:0:
320,192,33647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,34585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,34585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,34819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35288,128,0,35522:0:0:0:0:
192,192,35522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35522,128,0,35757:0:0:0:0:
64,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,36460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37163,128,0,37397:0:0:0:0:
64,192,37397,128,0,37632:0:0:0:0:
320,192,37397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,39038,128,0,39272:0:0:0:0:
192,192,39038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39272,128,0,39507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,39272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40913,128,0,41147:0:0:0:0:
320,192,41147,128,0,41382:0:0:0:0:
192,192,41147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43725,128,0,44663:0:0:0:0:
64,192,43960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Janko
added MX diff
try24get
Hi, Here's my mod
Key notation |0|1|2|3|
Time notation [minute]:[second]:[milisecond] ([time in miliseconds]|[key])
this mod using 1/4 snaps divisor
I guess using 128 for BPM was better than 256
and I think this map ends at 00:44:428, sounds after that time are too low
---EZ---
In this mod I'm focusing melody on kiai time, and I have 2 versions for this. Just follow 1 of them (or none if too complicated :p)
version 1 for harder play
00:16:069 (16069|0) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:15:952 ) for following melody
00:16:303 (16303|3) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:16:186 ) for following melody, then add note at 2
00:17:944 (17944|2) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:17:827 ) for following melody
00:18:178 (18178|0) - move 1 snap lower (maybe you know what I mean after 3 example) then add note at 1
00:18:413 (18413|1) - move to 3 if you follow mod above
00:19:819 (19819|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:20:053 (20053|1) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 3
00:20:288 (20288|3) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:21:694 (21694|0) - move 1 snap lower
00:21:928 (21928|2) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:22:163 (22163|1) - move to 0 if you follow mod above
00:23:569 (23569|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:23:803 (23803|0) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:25:444 (25444|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:25:678 (25678|1) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 3
00:25:913 (25913|3) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:27:319 (27319|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:27:553 (27553|3) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 0
00:27:788 (27788|0) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:29:194 (29194|3) - move 1 snap lower
00:29:428 (29428|2) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:29:663 (29663|1) - move to 3 if you follow mod above
version 2 for little harder (but lower star rating)
00:15:835 (15835|1) - change to slider with 1 snap long, same key
do the same for notes on:
00:17:710
00:19:585
00:21:460
00:23:335
00:25:210
00:27:085
00:28:960
00:16:303 (16303|3) - move 1 snap lower, then change to slider with 1 snap long, same key
do the same for notes on:
00:18:178
00:20:053
00:21:928
00:23:803
00:25:678
00:27:553
00:29:428
and for 00:26:382 (26382|3) change to note at 00:26:499 for made a trick
00:36:694 (36694|0) - change to note for following your pattern
00:37:397 - add note at 1 for following your pattern
00:39:272 - add note at 3 for following your pattern
00:41:147 - add note at 0 for following your pattern
---NM---
And this mod focusing melody on all section
000:00:952 (1069|1) - remove for easier play
00:02:827 (2944|2) - ^
00:04:702 (4819|2) - ^
00:06:577 (6694|0) - ^
00:08:452 (8569|1) - ^
00:10:327 (10327|1,10444|0) - ^
00:12:202 (12319|0) - ^
00:31:069 (31069|0) - ^
00:32:944 (32944|1) - ^
00:34:819 (34819|2) - ^
00:36:694 (36694|2) - ^
00:44:194 (44194|2) - ^
00:00:835 (835|1) - change to slider, 1 snap long. Same key
00:02:710 (2710|0) - ^
00:04:585 (4585|3) - ^
00:06:460 (6460|2) - ^
00:08:335 (8335|3) - ^
00:10:210 (10210|2) - change to slider 1 snap long, but on column 1
00:12:085 (12085|2) - change to slider 1 snap long, same key
00:13:842 (13842|1,14194|2,14194|0) - remove for easier play
00:13:960 (13960|2,14311|1) - change to sliders 1 snap long, same key
00:30:835 (30835|1,31186|2) - ^
00:32:710 (32710|3,33061|2) - ^
00:34:585 (34585|3,34936|0) - ^
00:36:460 (36460|2,36811|0) - ^
00:38:335 (38335|2,38686|1) - ^
00:40:210 (40210|1,40561|3) - ^
00:42:085 (42085|2,42436|0) - ^
00:43:960 (43960|1,44311|0) - ^
00:15:717 (15717|1,16069|2) - remove for easier play
00:17:592 (17592|0,17944|3) - ^
00:19:467 (19467|1,19819|2) - ^
00:21:342 (21342|0,21694|2) - ^
00:23:217 (23217|3,23569|0) - ^
00:16:186 (16186|3) - change to note instead in mentioned time, same key
00:18:061 (18061|2) - ^
00:19:936 (19936|3) - ^
00:21:811 (21811|0) - ^
00:23:686 (23686|3) - ^
00:23:335 (23335|0) - move to 1
00:26:382 (26382|0,26382|3) - change to notes at 00:26:499 , same key for make a trick
00:27:553 (27553|3) - change to note in mentioned time, same key
00:29:897 (29897|0) - ^
00:30:600 (30600|2) - ^
00:42:202 (42202|3) - ^
00:30:132 (30132|3) - looks like that slider ends at 00:30:366 , looking for your pattern
00:35:053 (35053|3,35288|2,35522|1) - move to 2,1,0 respectively
and add some notes at these times:
00:15:835 (15835|3,16303|1) - look at the brackets, these means add notes at 00:15:835 on 3 and 00:16:303 on 1
00:17:710 (17710|0,18178|3)
00:19:585 (19585|1,20053|0)
00:21:460 (21460|0,21928|1)
00:23:335 (23335|3,23803|2)
00:25:210 (25210|0,25678|1)
00:27:085 (27085|3,27553|2)
00:28:960 (28960|2,29428|0)
---
Sorry I just can mod these diff only (and too much mods :p)
Hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
Topic Starter
Janko

try24get wrote:

Time notation [minute]:[second]:[milisecond] ([time in miliseconds]|[key])
this mod using 1/4 snaps divisor
I guess using 128 for BPM was better than 256 ☑ OK I agree
and I think this map ends at 00:44:428, sounds after that time are too low ☒ NO I don't think so
---EZ---
In this mod I'm focusing melody on kiai time, and I have 2 versions for this. Just follow 1 of them (or none if too complicated :p) ☒ NO Yeah xD This is too complicated
version 1 for harder play
00:16:069 (16069|0) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:15:952 ) for following melody
00:16:303 (16303|3) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:16:186 ) for following melody, then add note at 2
00:17:944 (17944|2) - move 1 snap lower ( 00:17:827 ) for following melody
00:18:178 (18178|0) - move 1 snap lower (maybe you know what I mean after 3 example) then add note at 1
00:18:413 (18413|1) - move to 3 if you follow mod above
00:19:819 (19819|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:20:053 (20053|1) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 3
00:20:288 (20288|3) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:21:694 (21694|0) - move 1 snap lower
00:21:928 (21928|2) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:22:163 (22163|1) - move to 0 if you follow mod above
00:23:569 (23569|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:23:803 (23803|0) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:25:444 (25444|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:25:678 (25678|1) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 3
00:25:913 (25913|3) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:27:319 (27319|2) - move 1 snap lower
00:27:553 (27553|3) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 0
00:27:788 (27788|0) - move to 2 if you follow mod above
00:29:194 (29194|3) - move 1 snap lower
00:29:428 (29428|2) - move 1 snap lower then add note at 1
00:29:663 (29663|1) - move to 3 if you follow mod above
version 2 for little harder (but lower star rating)
00:15:835 (15835|1) - change to slider with 1 snap long, same key
do the same for notes on:
00:17:710
00:19:585
00:21:460
00:23:335
00:25:210
00:27:085
00:28:960
00:16:303 (16303|3) - move 1 snap lower, then change to slider with 1 snap long, same key
do the same for notes on:
00:18:178
00:20:053
00:21:928
00:23:803
00:25:678
00:27:553
00:29:428
and for 00:26:382 (26382|3) change to note at 00:26:499 for made a trick
00:36:694 (36694|0) - change to note for following your pattern
00:37:397 - add note at 1 for following your pattern ☑ OK
00:39:272 - add note at 3 for following your pattern ☑ OK
00:41:147 - add note at 0 for following your pattern ☑ OK
---NM---
And this mod focusing melody on all section
000:00:952 (1069|1) - remove for easier play
00:02:827 (2944|2) - ^
00:04:702 (4819|2) - ^
00:06:577 (6694|0) - ^
00:08:452 (8569|1) - ^
00:10:327 (10327|1,10444|0) - ^
00:12:202 (12319|0) - ^
00:31:069 (31069|0) - ^
00:32:944 (32944|1) - ^
00:34:819 (34819|2) - ^
00:36:694 (36694|2) - ^
00:44:194 (44194|2) - ^ ☒ NO I don't think so. This is Normal diff so must be a harder than Easy diff :p
00:00:835 (835|1) - change to slider, 1 snap long. Same key
00:02:710 (2710|0) - ^
00:04:585 (4585|3) - ^
00:06:460 (6460|2) - ^
00:08:335 (8335|3) - ^
00:10:210 (10210|2) - change to slider 1 snap long, but on column 1
00:12:085 (12085|2) - change to slider 1 snap long, same key ☒ ^NO
00:13:842 (13842|1,14194|2,14194|0) - remove for easier play ☒ NO This is Normal diff so must be a harder than Easy diff :p
00:13:960 (13960|2,14311|1) - change to sliders 1 snap long, same key
00:30:835 (30835|1,31186|2) - ^
00:32:710 (32710|3,33061|2) - ^
00:34:585 (34585|3,34936|0) - ^
00:36:460 (36460|2,36811|0) - ^
00:38:335 (38335|2,38686|1) - ^
00:40:210 (40210|1,40561|3) - ^
00:42:085 (42085|2,42436|0) - ^
00:43:960 (43960|1,44311|0) - ^ ☒ ^NO
00:15:717 (15717|1,16069|2) - remove for easier play
00:17:592 (17592|0,17944|3) - ^
00:19:467 (19467|1,19819|2) - ^
00:21:342 (21342|0,21694|2) - ^
00:23:217 (23217|3,23569|0) - ^ ☒ NO already you know why xD
00:16:186 (16186|3) - change to note instead in mentioned time, same key ☑ OK
00:18:061 (18061|2) - ^ ☑ OK
00:19:936 (19936|3) - ^ ☑ OK
00:21:811 (21811|0) - ^ ☑ OK
00:23:686 (23686|3) - ^ ☑ OK
00:23:335 (23335|0) - move to 1 ☑ OK
00:26:382 (26382|0,26382|3) - change to notes at 00:26:499 , same key for make a trick
00:27:553 (27553|3) - change to note in mentioned time, same key
00:29:897 (29897|0) - ^
00:30:600 (30600|2) - ^
00:42:202 (42202|3) - ^ ☒ ^NO
00:30:132 (30132|3) - looks like that slider ends at 00:30:366 , looking for your pattern ☑ OK
00:35:053 (35053|3,35288|2,35522|1) - move to 2,1,0 respectively ☒ ^NO
and add some notes at these times:
00:15:835 (15835|3,16303|1) - look at the brackets, these means add notes at 00:15:835 on 3 and 00:16:303 on 1
00:17:710 (17710|0,18178|3)
00:19:585 (19585|1,20053|0)
00:21:460 (21460|0,21928|1)
00:23:335 (23335|3,23803|2)
00:25:210 (25210|0,25678|1)
00:27:085 (27085|3,27553|2)
00:28:960 (28960|2,29428|0) I added only in some cases
---
Sorry I just can mod these diff only (and too much mods :p) Oh no problem :p
Hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
Thanks :D
AncuL
if you have "Geometry dash" as the source then you dont need "Geometry dash" as the tag

no kd
Topic Starter
Janko

AncuL wrote:

if you have "Geometry dash" as the source then you dont need "Geometry dash" as the tag

no kd
oh. ok. thanks :D
lenpai
Ohoho Geometry Dash.

MX
Ok, I'm not good at patterns but here is a must notice.
If you look at your map starting at this section 000:14:780 there are pretty overpowering (in amount) right hand trills. Since people usually point out balance, there should also be long trills in the left hand
Examples of these trills:
00:27:905
00:34:585
00:41:147
Ok, they're not bad but there's just like one long trill on the left hand while there a four on the right. You might want to fix it by balancing the trills and/or converting some to jumps
HD
looking good
NM
00:14:663 should have a continuous stream like 00:13:842 not sure though if the one in 00:13:842 must be redone
00:15:600 hard stuff like this should be in the later part of the song
I see some patter changing. If you want a better one, I strongly suggest following a difficulty curve that is going up
Can't mod EZ stuff :(
Topic Starter
Janko

Lenfried- wrote:

Ohoho Geometry Dash.

MX
Ok, I'm not good at patterns but here is a must notice.
If you look at your map starting at this section 000:14:780 there are pretty overpowering (in amount) right hand trills. Since people usually point out balance, there should also be long trills in the left hand
Examples of these trills:
00:27:905
00:34:585
00:41:147
Ok, they're not bad but there's just like one long trill on the left hand while there a four on the right. You might want to fix it by balancing the trills and/or converting some to jumps
HD
looking good
NM
00:14:663 should have a continuous stream like 00:13:842 not sure though if the one in 00:13:842 must be redone
00:15:600 hard stuff like this should be in the later part of the song
I see some patter changing. If you want a better one, I strongly suggest following a difficulty curve that is going up
Can't mod EZ stuff :(
Ineresting mod. thank you very much ^^
Aruel
M4M Arrived :3

[General]

Only turn on Widescreen support in MX diff. Please turn off :3


[MX]

00:00:132 - Don't need three notes in here. Here isn't powerful pitch

00:06:460 - Add one for consistency

00:13:257 - Don't need three notes.

00:13:725 - ^

00:14:194 - ^

00:14:663 - ^

00:28:022 (28022|1,28022|2) - Why two notes suddenly? o.o

00:38:335 - ^

00:43:022 - ^

00:43:725 (43725|0,43725|1) - Don't need two notes. Not good at pitch

[SEE's HD]

I won't catch patterns. Because. It's so repetition pattern. ㅠㅠ
I suggest rearrange patterns. It's kinda board :p

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Janko

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

M4M Arrived :3

[General]

Only turn on Widescreen support in MX diff. Please turn off :3 ☑ OK
I forgot about that xD



[MX]

00:00:132 - Don't need three notes in here. Here isn't powerful pitch ☑ OK

00:06:460 - Add one for consistency ☑ OK

00:13:257 - Don't need three notes. ☑ OK

00:13:725 - ^

00:14:194 - ^ ☑ OK

00:14:663 - ^

00:28:022 (28022|1,28022|2) - Why two notes suddenly? o.o I thought that this is good but I changed it

00:38:335 - ^ ^

00:43:022 - ^ ^

00:43:725 (43725|0,43725|1) - Don't need two notes. Not good at pitch ☑ OK


[SEE's HD]

I won't catch patterns. Because. It's so repetition pattern. ㅠㅠ
I suggest rearrange patterns. It's kinda board :p

Good luck :)
Thx ^^
FLint[FX]

MX
00:02:007 - Remove 3 - The First Two Patterns Have 2 Notes So Remove 3 For Balance
00:13:491 (13491|0) - Move to 3
00:20:991 (20991|1) - ^ 4
00:23:803 (23803|0) - ^ 3
00:30:366 (30366|0) - ^ 3

Suggestion - Use Patterns Properly / Or Re Arranged Your Patterns
GREAT WORK / GREAT MAP~ Good Luck
:)
Topic Starter
Janko

FLint[FX] wrote:


MX
00:02:007 - Remove 3 - The First Two Patterns Have 2 Notes So Remove 3 For Balance
00:13:491 (13491|0) - Move to 3
00:20:991 (20991|1) - ^ 4
00:23:803 (23803|0) - ^ 3
00:30:366 (30366|0) - ^ 3

Suggestion - Use Patterns Properly / Or Re Arranged Your Patterns
GREAT WORK / GREAT MAP~ Good Luck
:)
All applied. Thanks :D
Frim4503

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

EZ
00:38:100 (38100|1) - move to 1. feels good in 1 IMO

NM
00:01:069 (1069|1) - i sggest to remove this. cuz it didn't follow anything
^applied to other part with have the same sound

00:13:725 - make it simple like this http://puu.sh/iDq0H/5f3b3dba9e.png
00:30:600 (30600|2) - what is this ? suhould end here 00:30:835 -
^like other part too

00:44:194 (44194|2) - remove. more fit the song

SEE's HD
00:14:780 (14780|3) - remove. what are you following ?
00:31:069 (31069|0) - remove. this is ghost note i think
^also 00:32:944 (32944|0) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) -

for MX dif i think it's ok :D
Topic Starter
Janko

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

EZ
00:38:100 (38100|1) - move to 1. feels good in 1 IMO ☑ OK

NM
00:01:069 (1069|1) - i sggest to remove this. cuz it didn't follow anything
^applied to other part with have the same sound ☒ NO

00:13:725 - make it simple like this http://puu.sh/iDq0H/5f3b3dba9e.png I changed it but I modified your idea
00:30:600 (30600|2) - what is this ? suhould end here 00:30:835 - ☑ OK
^like other part too I don't know what's going on so nothing changed

00:44:194 (44194|2) - remove. more fit the song ☑ OK

for MX dif i think it's ok :D
Very good mod. Thanks
LothusFangirl
Hi :)
SEE's HD
Add kiai - 00:15:132 to 00:30:132
00:15:014 - add note?

MX
00:11:264 - add note
00:11:499 - add note
00:38:686 - add note
00:38:921 - remove note
00:43:139 - add note
I love Geometry Dash
Btw , Nice map :)
Topic Starter
Janko

zZ_Natsu_Zz wrote:

Hi :)

MX
00:11:264 - add note
00:11:499 - add note
00:38:686 - add note
00:38:921 - remove note
00:43:139 - add note ☑OK ALL ACCEPTED
I love Geometry Dash
Btw , Nice map :)
Thanks ^^
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
From my queue :D

Nothing to say much about this map :o
mod~
[MX]
00:26:147 (26147|2,26264|1) - ctrl + h, for hand balance

[HD]
00:01:303 - i recommend putting a note here. The sound is well heard after all
00:03:178 - ^
00:05:053 - ^
00:08:803 - ^
00:10:678 - ^
00:12:553 - ^
00:16:303 - ^
00:18:178 - ^
00:20:053 - ^
00:21:928 - ^
00:23:803 - ^
too lazy to ctrl + c everything lol

Hope these can help.
Good luck with your map! :D
Topic Starter
Janko

AlisceaSparku wrote:

[MX]
00:26:147 (26147|2,26264|1) - ctrl + h, for hand balance ☑ OK
THX \o/
Xenophilius
Hi! From Mod 4 Mod.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

MX
  1. 00:00:600 - I suggest to add 1 note because the sound here is the same of 00:00:132 -
  2. 00:01:069 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:01:538 - Same as above^
  4. 00:02:475 - Same as above^
  5. And so on, since 00:13:257 - all white lines have the same sound, so I suggest to add 1 note
  6. From 00:15:132 - to 00:42:788 - here the second and the last white line of each measure have the same sound of first and third but with the addition of a clap sound, so I think you have to use 2 notes for first and third white line and 3 notes for second and last ones. I also suggest to use clap hitsound on 3 notes white lines.

HD
  1. 00:02:007 - Suggest to add LN until 00:02:241 - Because 00:01:538 (1538|1,1772|2) - follow the melody but ony 2. And here the melody is composed by 3 notes. You can add a LN or change a note to LN.
  2. 00:03:882 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:05:757 - Same as above ^
  4. 00:07:632 - Same as above in other similar parts ultil the end of the map
  5. 00:14:780 (14780|3) - This note is for the drum, right? So, if it's right you should add another note here 00:15:014 - because the drum also feels here
  6. This diff miss Kiai time.

NM
  1. 00:27:553 (27553|3) - Delete there's no sound for another note here, thes 3 notes melody start here 00:27:788 -
  2. 00:29:897 (29897|0,30132|3) - I don't recommend using LN here because you need another LN here 00:29:663 - to follow the 3 notes melody. best thing to do will be deleting 00:29:897 (29897|0) - because a LN for the final note it's ok, but 2 LN and not the start isn't so good.

EZ
  1. 00:14:194 (14194|3) - I suggest to change this to a normal note since you have never followed before in this diff this sound with a LN. And also it'll be more easyer to play for EZ players

That's all for my mod, I'll wait for your. Thatsh - Xepher <- This is my map for Mod 4 Mod
Topic Starter
Janko

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

MX
  1. 00:00:600 - I suggest to add 1 note because the sound here is the same of 00:00:132 -
  2. 00:01:069 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:01:538 - Same as above^
  4. 00:02:475 - Same as above^ ☑^OK
  5. And so on, since 00:13:257 - all white lines have the same sound, so I suggest to add 1 note ☑OK
  6. From 00:15:132 - to 00:42:788 - here the second and the last white line of each measure have the same sound of first and third but with the addition of a clap sound, so I think you have to use 2 notes for first and third white line and 3 notes for second and last ones. I also suggest to use clap hitsound on 3 notes white lines.

NM
  1. 00:27:553 (27553|3) - Delete there's no sound for another note here, thes 3 notes melody start here 00:27:788 - I changed it but I modified your idea
  2. 00:29:897 (29897|0,30132|3) - I don't recommend using LN here because you need another LN here 00:29:663 - to follow the 3 notes melody. best thing to do will be deleting 00:29:897 (29897|0) - because a LN for the final note it's ok, but 2 LN and not the start isn't so good. ☑OK

EZ
  1. 00:14:194 (14194|3) - I suggest to change this to a normal note since you have never followed before in this diff this sound with a LN. And also it'll be more easyer to play for EZ players ☑OK
Grazie :)
ddfgit
GEOMETRY DASH YOUTUBER ON SCREEN IS: WeoWeoTeo (level Fast as Lightning)
for some1 who need this :3
Topic Starter
Janko

ddfgit wrote:

GEOMETRY DASH YOUTUBER ON SCREEN IS: WeoWeoTeo (level Fast as Lightning)
for some1 who need this :3
You're good. I did not know where I got this screenshot xD

after a long search... I found it!! https://youtu.be/b8VopgL-IVo?t=41s
streeteelf
Too lazy to reply to every mod, so just sayin' "all applied" instead of copying every post and answer this. :P

SEE's HD
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Geometry Dash - Stay Inside Me.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13651
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Stay Inside Me
TitleUnicode:Stay Inside Me
Artist:OcularNebula
ArtistUnicode:OcularNebula
Creator:Janko
Version:SEE's HD
Source:Geometry Dash
Tags:Newgrounds ost streeteelf electro BGM
BeatmapID:708124
BeatmapSetID:303763

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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320,192,10327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,10561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,10678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,10913,128,0,11147:0:0:0:0:
448,192,11147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,11147,128,2,11382:0:0:0:0:
64,192,11382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,11850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,12085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,12202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,12553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,12788,128,0,13022:0:0:0:0:
448,192,12788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,13022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13022,128,2,13257:0:0:0:0:
448,192,13257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,13257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,13725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,13960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,14311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,14428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,14663,128,0,14897:0:0:0:0:
64,192,14663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14897,128,2,15132:0:0:0:0:
448,192,14897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,15014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,15835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,16186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,16186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,16303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,16538,128,0,16772:0:0:0:0:
320,192,16538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,16772,128,2,17007:0:0:0:0:
64,192,16772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,17827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,18061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,18413,128,0,18647:0:0:0:0:
448,192,18413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18647,128,2,18882:0:0:0:0:
192,192,18647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,18882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,18882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,19585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,19702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20288,128,0,20522:0:0:0:0:
320,192,20522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,20522,128,2,20757:0:0:0:0:
64,192,20757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,21577,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21577,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22163,128,0,22397:0:0:0:0:
192,192,22163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,22397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22397,128,2,22632:0:0:0:0:
192,192,22632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,23335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,23686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24038,128,0,24272:0:0:0:0:
64,192,24038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24272,128,2,24507:0:0:0:0:
448,192,24272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,25210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25913,128,0,26147:0:0:0:0:
64,192,26147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26147,128,2,26382:0:0:0:0:
448,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,27085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27788,128,0,28022:0:0:0:0:
448,192,28022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,28022,128,2,28257:0:0:0:0:
64,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,28960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29663,128,0,29897:0:0:0:0:
64,192,29897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29897,128,2,30132:0:0:0:0:
192,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,30835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,31186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,31538,128,0,31772:0:0:0:0:
192,192,31772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31772,128,2,32007:0:0:0:0:
64,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,32710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33413,128,0,33647:0:0:0:0:
64,192,33647,128,2,33882:0:0:0:0:
320,192,33647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,34585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,34585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35288,128,0,35522:0:0:0:0:
192,192,35522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35522,128,2,35757:0:0:0:0:
64,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,36460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36577,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37163,128,0,37397:0:0:0:0:
64,192,37397,128,2,37632:0:0:0:0:
320,192,37397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,39038,128,0,39272:0:0:0:0:
192,192,39038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39272,128,2,39507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,39272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40913,128,0,41147:0:0:0:0:
320,192,41147,128,2,41382:0:0:0:0:
192,192,41147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43725,128,0,44663:0:0:0:0:
64,192,43960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,44311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,44663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Rivals_7
Hi~ Sorry for a very late mod ><
You requested in my queue before........

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1|2|3|4

[General]
Seems No problem..............

[EZ]

00:21:928 (21928|2,22163|1) - ctrl+g. for variation. cuz You use this pattern here - 00:25:444 (25444|2,25678|1) - and - 00:19:819 (19819|2,20053|1) -

00:36:694 (36694|0) - make this single note. You use single too here for the same sound - 00:34:819 (34819|3) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) -

00:41:850 (41850|0) - to 3
00:44:897 (44897|2) - to 2. more variative imo

[NM]

00:03:413 (3413|0,3647|3) - col 3|1 Respectively. for pitch relevancy
00:05:757 (5757|1,6225|0) - Col 1|2 Respectively. ^
00:12:788 (12788|2,13022|3) - ctrl+g. ^
00:17:592 (17592|0) - it's actually no sound here. (25% playback)
00:19:467 (19467|1) - ^
00:19:585 (19585|2) - to 2 if you accept above
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. cause you put a low pitch here - 00:22:632 (22632|2,22632|3) - so it will represent that the sound is seems like lowering.
00:24:038 (24038|0) - to 4. same reason
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. ^
start from here - 00:25:210 - seems you change your pattern style following see's HD.
00:21:342 (21342|0) - no sound.
00:38:335 (38335|2,38452|3) - to 1|3 respectively
00:39:038 (39038|2,39272|0) - 4|3 respectively
00:44:897 (44897|2) - not too audible. only players with headphone can hear it. reccomend to delete this...

[See's HD]

Too Many Repetitive pattern. Many Parts on this diff that can be Improved

HP OD 7,5.

00:00:600 (600|1) - to 3. avoid jack
00:01:303 (1303|0) - to 4. ^
00:02:475 (2475|2) - ^2. ^
00:03:178 (3178|3) - ^1. ^
00:04:350 (4350|3,4585|2,4702|1) - 3|2|3 Respectively for variation. Pls Don't use a repetitive pattern like you did before. and then move - 00:04:936 (4936|0,4936|2,5053|1) - to the right one column
00:06:225 (6225|0,6460|1,6577|2) - 2|3|2 Respectively, Same reason as above. and then move - 00:06:811 (6811|3,6811|1,6928|2) - To the left one column
00:08:803 - Is there any reason you didn't add note here while you put notes here - 00:06:928 (6928|2) - ? Its actually the same sound. This will make diff seems inconsistent.
00:17:475 (17475|2,17475|1,17710|0,17710|1,17827|3,17827|2,18061|1,18061|2) - Pls Don't repeat the same pattern you already did that here - 00:15:600 (15600|2,15600|1,15835|1,15835|0,15952|3,15952|2,16186|2,16186|1) -
00:18:178 - Missing note here
00:21:225 (21225|2,21225|1,21460|1,21460|0,21577|3,21577|2,21811|1,21811|2,21928|0) - Change it somehow pls. Don't repeat the same pattern
00:24:975 (24975|3,24975|1,25210|0,25210|1,25327|2,25327|3,25561|3,25561|1,25678|2) - ctrl+h. see the pattern before. you only just mirrored this - 00:25:913 (25913|1,25913|3,26147|0,26147|2,26382|1,26382|3) -
00:26:850 (26850|0,26850|2,27085|2,27085|3,27202|0,27202|1,27436|2,27436|0,27553|1) - I recommend to change it somehow....
00:34:350 (34350|3,34350|2,34585|0,34585|1,34702|2,34936|2,35053|0,35053|3,35288|0,35288|2,35522|3,35522|1,35757|2,35757|0) - Change this part somehow.....No repeated pattern pls...

[MX]

I honestly think That MX Diff isn't really needed at all. The reason is the song is quite calm. Pressing 3 notes and stairs could be kinda weird here.
(this is just my personal opinion tho, you can ignore this)

00:03:647 (3647|1,3647|2) - Move this to left. Avoid triple jack notes
00:21:928 (21928|0,22046|1) - ctrl+g
00:22:397 (22397|0) - to 2
00:44:897 (44897|3) - not audible

Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Janko

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for a very late mod ><
You requested in my queue before........ I forgot about that xD

Click
1|2|3|4

[EZ] ☑ All applied

00:21:928 (21928|2,22163|1) - ctrl+g. for variation. cuz You use this pattern here - 00:25:444 (25444|2,25678|1) - and - 00:19:819 (19819|2,20053|1) -

00:36:694 (36694|0) - make this single note. You use single too here for the same sound - 00:34:819 (34819|3) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) -

00:41:850 (41850|0) - to 3
00:44:897 (44897|2) - to 2. more variative imo

[NM]

00:03:413 (3413|0,3647|3) - col 3|1 Respectively. for pitch relevancy ☑ OK
00:05:757 (5757|1,6225|0) - Col 1|2 Respectively. ^ ☑ OK
00:12:788 (12788|2,13022|3) - ctrl+g. ^ ☑ OK
00:17:592 (17592|0) - it's actually no sound here. (25% playback) ☑ OK
00:19:467 (19467|1) - ^ ☑ OK
00:19:585 (19585|2) - to 2 if you accept above ☑ OK
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. cause you put a low pitch here - 00:22:632 (22632|2,22632|3) - so it will represent that the sound is seems like lowering. ☑ OK
00:24:038 (24038|0) - to 4. same reason ☑ OK
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. ^ ☑ OK
start from here - 00:25:210 - seems you change your pattern style following see's HD.
00:21:342 (21342|0) - no sound. ☑ OK
00:38:335 (38335|2,38452|3) - to 1|3 respectively ☑ OK
00:39:038 (39038|2,39272|0) - 4|3 respectively ☑ OK
00:44:897 (44897|2) - not too audible. only players with headphone can hear it. reccomend to delete this... ☒ NO

[MX]

I honestly think That MX Diff isn't really needed at all. The reason is the song is quite calm. Pressing 3 notes and stairs could be kinda weird here.
(this is just my personal opinion tho, you can ignore this)

00:03:647 (3647|1,3647|2) - Move this to left. Avoid triple jack notes ☑ OK
00:21:928 (21928|0,22046|1) - ctrl+g ☑ OK
00:22:397 (22397|0) - to 2 ☑ OK
00:44:897 (44897|3) - not audible ☒ NO

Good Luck :)
Thanks
Bad Apple
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Now this Mod is suuuper late, but I have a little bit of free time, so I checked some old posts in my queue >w<

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- General -

  • - Metadata:
    - BPM/Offset:
    - Hitsounds: looking good
    - Background:
    - Timing/Kiai:
    - Folder/Files:
    - Settings:
    - Random Stuff:
- NM -
- 00:15:132 (15132|3) - id suggest removing all of these second LNs and replacing them with a single note at the start and at the end. makes the song a bit harder, but fits better to the melody and in my opinion it plays alot better :3
- 00:17:007 - ^
- 00:18:882 - ^
- 00:15:835 (15835|2,15835|3,16303|0,16303|1) - why two notes? remove one at each doublechord, no need for two notes
- 00:17:710 (17710|2,17710|3,18178|0,18178|1) - ^ same here
- 00:25:678 (25678|2,25678|1) - no need for 2 notes here either, try to stick to single notes, its hard enough for NM :)
- 00:27:085 - ^
- 00:28:960 (28960|2,28960|1,29428|1,29428|2) - ^
- 00:28:257 - you could also add a single note at the end of all those Lns, i think that would improve the song, as mentioned earlier

- HD -
- 00:08:803 - missing note here, add one~
- 00:14:428 - why two notes here? you've always used 1 note there :3
- 00:18:178 - missing note~
- 00:29:428 - two notes again, remove one
- 00:31:186 - normally, you used 2 notes here and 1 note after that, not the other way around, I would stick to that, changing the way you map the song and each note isn't that nicely ;w;
- 00:31:303 - ^
- 00:38:686 - I like how you tried to make it harder here, using 2 notes instead of one all the time, but you should either start earlier, not right at the end of song, or make it go like that for an entire part of the song, like the kiai-part :)

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Sorry for the superlate mod, I hope I could still help a little bit.
Maybe you will revive this mapset some day, I think it has potential, short and easy songs aren't that hard to rank,
and i really like the melody of it :)
Cheers!
Apple


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