13:04 Jenny: so chesist
13:04 cheesiest: hi jenny :3
13:04 Jenny: give mod/BN
13:04 Jenny: x:
13:05 cheesiest: send me your map and i will think abt it? i dunno if i can get to it
13:05 cheesiest: but i'll try
13:05 Jenny: well just look at it now
13:05 Jenny: and tell mw whether there's smth
13:05 Jenny:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31605013:05 Jenny: just firstglance or w/e
13:06 Jenny: SB is still in the workings with TicClick
13:06 cheesiest: ah kk :3
13:06 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/704360 DragonForce - Cry Thunder [Legend]]
13:06 Jenny: that's how mods work
13:06 Jenny: first glance :p
13:06 Jenny: unless smth is oddly weird, in which case give it three looks for detailled reply
13:07 cheesiest: 00:10:541 (4) - !! perhaps you can curve this slider?
13:08 cheesiest: since the song doesn't really feel like a straight line slider. even a slight curve to fit the flow from 3 to 4 would be fine, i think
13:08 cheesiest: 00:14:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - nice B)
13:09 Jenny:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3224887 ?
13:09 cheesiest: yeah
13:09 cheesiest: actually that seems a bit uh
13:09 Jenny: k
13:10 cheesiest: like it's not too conflicting w/ the flow w/ 3 but
13:10 Jenny: curved it mooore
13:10 cheesiest: i suppose that's smooth enough
13:10 Jenny:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/322489513:11 cheesiest: oh no i mean like not curved as much or @least angle of curve changed (which would mean like the end of the slider moves more to the left)
13:11 cheesiest: the latter i think would be "better" in terms of fitting the concept in but ye
13:12 Jenny: mhm
13:12 cheesiest: 00:33:618 (4) - is there reason for this being v close? o:
13:13 Jenny: draws more attention towards the middle again
13:14 Jenny: since previously, spacing is exaggerating
13:14 Jenny: so you get a strong snap becuase of the spacing contrast on 4
13:14 Jenny: into the spin
13:14 Jenny: rather than increasing up-down-up-down waving, you have to snap 4 in any case
13:14 cheesiest: ah, i see
13:14 cheesiest: i was gonna say you could rework it so 4 is still in the middle area but the other stuff moves
13:14 cheesiest: but ye i think your idea is better
13:16 cheesiest: 01:23:464 (1,2,3,4) - sicne like these are p much symmetrical
13:16 cheesiest: 01:24:388 (1,2,3,4) - i was thinking u could do it here too
13:16 cheesiest: it looks lopsided
13:17 Jenny: ?
13:17 Jenny: how much do you think I should rotate 3-4?
13:17 Jenny: -1o or smth
13:17 Jenny: or 10*
13:17 Jenny:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3224923 ?
13:21 Jenny: .
13:21 cheesiest: sorry, was on the phone
13:21 cheesiest: that seems good enough
13:21 cheesiest: i was thinking uh
13:21 cheesiest: you could just move it so it becomes symmetrical
13:25 cheesiest: this is real nice o:
13:25 cheesiest: 02:36:388 (3,4,5,6) - probably wasn't your aim but uh
13:25 cheesiest: you could maybe make this symmetryical
13:26 cheesiest: although that'd probably lose the emphasis you want
13:26 cheesiest: since that would mean 3->4 and 5->6 would hvae the same spacing
13:26 cheesiest: or, perhaps the flow change from 4->5->6 could provide emphasis
13:28 cheesiest: 02:43:772 (2,6) -
13:29 cheesiest: they're kinda weird since like i feel the first one doesn't fit as well as the second one does
13:30 cheesiest: i do see that you're trying to curve it a lot so it's not as intensive and so you'd have to focus a bit more on going through the slider
13:30 cheesiest: 02:45:618 (6) - i think it works here though with the sound that's introduced
13:32 Jenny: hm
13:33 Jenny:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3224991 ?
13:33 cheesiest: yeah
13:33 cheesiest: that's like p much what i did lmao
13:34 Jenny: mhm
13:34 Jenny: changed it a tiny bit
13:34 cheesiest: 02:59:003 (7,8,1,2) - perhaps you can do something with that guitar's beat patterning there? idk if it's an oversight or like you prefered keeping the same beat pattern with the drums or underlying guitar or w/e that is
13:35 Jenny: I prefer the drums tehre
13:35 Jenny: 02:57:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are perfect as-are
13:36 cheesiest: oh yeah i think those are fine
13:36 Jenny: 02:59:003 (7,8,1,2) - could replace this with tripple circle + double slider
13:36 Jenny: but not sure
13:37 cheesiest: 03:01:926 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - this seems a bit unpolished but uh idk i don't think it's of much importance since it does give a teardrop shape to it
13:37 cheesiest: and i suppose that's what you were going for
13:37 Jenny: it's not supposed to be a teardrop or circle
13:37 Jenny: the guitar is way too nutty for that
13:38 cheesiest: ah
13:38 Jenny: 03:01:464 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
13:38 Jenny: curve back and forth
13:38 Jenny: 03:02:464 (15,16,17,18) - exaggerating ending
13:39 cheesiest: hmm
13:39 cheesiest: i see
13:40 cheesiest: 03:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this could be seen as being offensive
13:40 Jenny: 03:23:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - perfect :V
13:40 Jenny: that entire section is like
13:40 Jenny: aaa
13:40 Jenny: 03:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't see how
13:41 cheesiest: im jokign lol
13:42 cheesiest: that part is stronk
13:42 cheesiest: but it's nice i think
13:42 Jenny: yes
13:42 Jenny: 03:28:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this is just
13:42 Jenny: most godly
13:42 cheesiest: 03:52:541 (1,2,3) -
13:42 cheesiest: ZOOM
13:42 cheesiest: nyoom
13:43 cheesiest: 03:53:003 (1) - 89.72x this means unrank, disregard SV change
13:43 Jenny: why :p
13:43 cheesiest: oh no i was joking again ;w;
13:45 cheesiest: o:
13:45 cheesiest: nice map
13:46 Jenny: yes
13:46 Jenny: holy dicks of greenlines, too
13:46 Jenny: #handmade
13:46 cheesiest: ;w; greenlines