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SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [OsuMania]

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Deep Sea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 мая 2017 г. at 20:47:01

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Title: &Z (TV size)
Source: アルドノア・ゼロ
Tags: Aldnoah.Zero kawawa opening 2nd season 2 s2
BPM: 158
Filesize: 22876kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kawawa's Hyper - 8Key (2,92 stars, 648 notes)
  2. Normal - 8Key (1,94 stars, 457 notes)
  3. The Heavens Fall - 8Key (3,69 stars, 1038 notes)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*
Kawa's Hyper by Kawawa = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*
The Heavens Fall = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*




Bubbled by Rizqy

Ranked by Kuo Kyoka


Special Thanks
DarkSider2442 for mod
KawaEE for GD and star
HOST for mod
Frim4503 for mod
IamBaum for mod
Steins for star
ArcherLove for mod
Rizqy for check
Kuo Kyoka for check
DarkSider2442
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
Another Moon Lv. 10
00:07:910 - http://puu.sh/i4Qvd/721f3f2889.png — может стоит продолжить эту часть? http://puu.sh/i4Qzu/eb9090ea4c.png
00:11:898 (11898|3,11898|4) - на одну колонку влево или 00:11:898 (11898|3) - на 3 колонку
00:14:936 (14936|5) - на 4 колонку, 00:15:126 (15126|4) - на 6 колонку
00:26:518 - может стоит выделить долгий звук? Ноту на 7 колонку
00:41:138 - добавь ноту, тут звук пианино вроде
00:41:898 - ^
00:42:657 - ^
00:47:214 - ^
01:03:163 - ты уверен, что здесь так необходимо 6 нот?
01:15:315 - и что это? =/ 01:15:600 - удали 2 ноты, 01:15:790 - удали одну и тут одну 01:15:980 -
01:21:866 (81866|6) - удаляй, звуков там нет
01:27:467 - стрёмно выглядит, переделай лучше, например, 4 колонки с тройным молотком, хотя может ты придумаешь чего получше.

Обязательно позови, когда будут готовы остальные сложности
Удачи :)
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

DarkSider2442 wrote:

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
Another Moon Lv. 10
00:07:910 - http://puu.sh/i4Qvd/721f3f2889.png — может стоит продолжить эту часть? http://puu.sh/i4Qzu/eb9090ea4c.png
00:11:898 (11898|3,11898|4) - на одну колонку влево или 00:11:898 (11898|3) - на 3 колонку
00:14:936 (14936|5) - на 4 колонку, 00:15:126 (15126|4) - на 6 колонку
00:26:518 - может стоит выделить долгий звук? Ноту на 7 колонку
00:41:138 - добавь ноту, тут звук пианино вроде
00:41:898 - ^
00:42:657 - ^
00:47:214 - ^
01:03:163 - ты уверен, что здесь так необходимо 6 нот?
01:15:315 - и что это? =/ 01:15:600 - удали 2 ноты, 01:15:790 - удали одну и тут одну 01:15:980 -
01:21:866 (81866|6) - удаляй, звуков там нет
01:27:467 - стрёмно выглядит, переделай лучше, например, 4 колонки с тройным молотком, хотя может ты придумаешь чего получше.

Обязательно позови, когда будут готовы остальные сложности
Удачи :)
Все исправлено, спасибо
DarkSider2442
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
В описании не забудь добавить, что у харда есть один мод

Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|5) - на 3 колонку перенеси, чтобы так вышло 00:20:252 (20252|4,20632|5,20632|2,21012|3) -
00:44:936 (44936|1,44936|0,44936|3) - подобный паттерн очень неудобно и сложно играть на нормале, перенеси, например, 00:44:936 (44936|1) - на 7
Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:28:986 (28986|2) - move to 5
00:32:024 (32024|6) - move to 5
00:41:138 - add note (piano)
00:41:898 - ^
00:44:936 - add note
Kawawa

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:28:986 (28986|2) - move to 5 keep
00:32:024 (32024|6) - move to 5 ^same, it's intend about same column :D

00:41:138 - add note (piano)
00:41:898 - ^
00:44:936 - add note
^Focus on only Bass, but i will consider this xD thanks~
Thanks for feedback xD
HOST_old
hi shana mod from pm >:D



00:30:505 , 00:33:543 , 00:36:581 - how about using whistle hitsounds instead of clap hits?


column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7 / 8

[Normal Lv.6]

01:28:037 - add 3


[]
[Kawa's Hyper Lv.8]

kawaee made kkul jam patterns

01:22:531 (82531|1) - move 6


[]
[Another Moon Lv.10]

00:05:822 (5822|1) - remove
00:08:860 (8860|3) - remove
00:11:898 (11898|2) - remove
00:14:746 (14746|1) - remove

01:17:214 (77214|5) - remove
01:18:733 (78733|7) - remove
01:24:809 (84809|7) - remove


[]


good luk and thx for request \:D/
Kawawa

HOST wrote:

kawaee made kkul jam patterns lol

01:22:531 (82531|1) - move 6 okay, nice one

Thanks for mod :D


+ FIX : OD 8.0 → 7.5
Topic Starter
Deep Sea
Thanks HOST <3
All fixed
updated
Frim4503

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|2) - move to 1. feels empty
00:38:100 (38100|4) - ^5
01:03:733 - add note. for better flow
01:27:467 (87467|1,87562|5,87657|3,87752|7,87847|4,87847|6) - make this part simple :(
Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -

i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k

Another Moon Lv. 10
same with Lv.8 feels empty in col. 1

sorry if it's didn't help you cuz idk how to mod 8k -_-
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|2) - move to 1. feels empty
00:38:100 (38100|4) - ^5
01:03:733 - add note. for better flow added
01:27:467 (87467|1,87562|5,87657|3,87752|7,87847|4,87847|6) - make this part simple :(fixed
Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -

i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k

Another Moon Lv. 10
same with Lv.8 feels empty in col. 1

sorry if it's didn't help you cuz idk how to mod 8k -_-
Thanks for mod :oops:
Kawawa

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -
i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k
Sorry, ^i will keep all.
my scratch style is only focus on cymbal or crash sound.
but, shana style is, seems The kick sound was expressed at scratch key
So perhaps you might have felt a lot of empty scratch key in my diff
but, As mentioned, I will keep. thank you xD, was good feed back. :D
Frim4503
oh..
it's so fast

yeah about kawa dif it's seem empty in col 1.
feels like playing 7k :)
Haruto
Nice! osu!mania version :D
i thought there'll be a piano/keysound in the map u.u
just passing by, you may want to add some tags,
just add this "Season 2 Opening and Slaine Troyard, because he's in the BG

Sadly i cant mod Mania :(
Really a neat/nice diff <3
Hope its ranked Sooner <3
Good luck! Credits for using some of my Hitsound and BG pls xD /me runs
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

Haruto - wrote:

Nice! osu!mania version :D
i thought there'll be a piano/keysound in the map u.u
just passing by, you may want to add some tags,
just add this "Season 2 Opening and Slaine Troyard, because he's in the BG

Sadly i cant mod Mania :(
Really a neat/nice diff <3
Hope its ranked Sooner <3
Good luck! Credits for using some of my Hitsound and BG pls xD /me runs

Thank you <3 :oops:
IamBaum
Hi there, here is the mod from your m4m with Apple, i'll mod as his substitute :)
I Hope this is kind of useful.

Columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

Normal Lv.6 / Hyper Lv.8
Try to exchange the patterns form Normal and hyper, from 00:39:619 - until 00:45:695 -
As you can see on this screenshot (Left side: Normal | Right side: Hyper) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3366147 , the normal diff is more difficult than the hyper diff.

Normal Lv.6
I'd recommend that u don't use chords with 4 notes in a normal difficulty, cause this might be too hard to read for this kind of diff.
These are the spots with those chords:
00:03:163 - Remove 1 of the notes.
00:39:619 - ^
01:03:163 - ^
01:03:923 - ^

-----------------------

I'd recommend to use the same amount of notes for these 2 chords 01:05:062 (65062|5,65062|2) - and 01:05:442 (65442|0,65442|6,65442|3) - , cause they have the same pitch and they are pretty close.
01:27:847 - Add a note, cause the sound from this "note" sounds quite strong.

Hyper Lv.8
00:14:746 (14746|7,14746|5,14936|3,14936|2,15126|5,15126|6) - Maybe turn these chords into single notes, cause u always used single notes in this section for this kind of sound.
01:23:100 (83100|2,83100|4,83100|1) - Remove one of the notes, cause there is no heavy Beat here.

Another Moon Lv.10
01:04:682 (64682|7,64682|4,64682|2,64682|3) - Remove 1 note, cause this note is no "heavy beat".
01:15:980 (75980|3,75980|5,75980|2) - Remove 1 of the notes. The pattern here is: 3-2-3-2-3-3-4, but i think you should keep a constant amount of notes, cause there is a constant pitch. therefore i would suggest to use a 3-2-3-2-3-2-4 pattern.

Really nice map and a great Song, good luck with getting this ranked, we need more 8K Songs ^^
SakaSak
nice map!
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

IamBaum wrote:

Hi there, here is the mod from your m4m with Apple, i'll mod as his substitute :)
I Hope this is kind of useful.

Columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

Normal Lv.6 / Hyper Lv.8
Try to exchange the patterns form Normal and hyper, from 00:39:619 - until 00:45:695 -
As you can see on this screenshot (Left side: Normal | Right side: Hyper) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3366147 , the normal diff is more difficult than the hyper diff.

Normal Lv.6
I'd recommend that u don't use chords with 4 notes in a normal difficulty, cause this might be too hard to read for this kind of diff.
These are the spots with those chords:
00:03:163 - Remove 1 of the notes.
00:39:619 - ^
01:03:163 - ^
01:03:923 - ^
deleted

-----------------------

I'd recommend to use the same amount of notes for these 2 chords 01:05:062 (65062|5,65062|2) - and 01:05:442 (65442|0,65442|6,65442|3) - , cause they have the same pitch and they are pretty close.
01:27:847 - Add a note, cause the sound from this "note" sounds quite strong. added

Hyper Lv.8
00:14:746 (14746|7,14746|5,14936|3,14936|2,15126|5,15126|6) - Maybe turn these chords into single notes, cause u always used single notes in this section for this kind of sound.
01:23:100 (83100|2,83100|4,83100|1) - Remove one of the notes, cause there is no heavy Beat here.

Another Moon Lv.10
01:04:682 (64682|7,64682|4,64682|2,64682|3) - Remove 1 note, cause this note is no "heavy beat". deleted
01:15:980 (75980|3,75980|5,75980|2) - Remove 1 of the notes. The pattern here is: 3-2-3-2-3-3-4, but i think you should keep a constant amount of notes, cause there is a constant pitch. therefore i would suggest to use a 3-2-3-2-3-2-4 pattern. fixed

Really nice map and a great Song, good luck with getting this ranked, we need more 8K Songs ^^
Thanks >w<
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

SakaSak wrote:

nice map!
Thanks :3
Kawawa

IamBaum wrote:

Columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

Hyper Lv.8
00:14:746 (14746|7,14746|5,14936|3,14936|2,15126|5,15126|6) - Maybe turn these chords into single notes, cause u always used single notes in this section for this kind of sound.
01:23:100 (83100|2,83100|4,83100|1) - Remove one of the notes, cause there is no heavy Beat here.
Apply~ THANKS FOR MOD <3
NlHIL
Normal Lv.6
00:09:239 - add a note
00:30:505 - remove a note
01:03:733 - add a note as 01:02:024
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

NlHIL wrote:

Normal Lv.6
00:09:239 - add a note
00:30:505 - remove a note
01:03:733 - add a note as 01:02:024
Thanks, all fixed
Arzenvald
welcome back <3
Topic Starter
Deep Sea

ajeemaniz wrote:

welcome back <3
<3
ArcherLove
haloo
col = 0~8 ( 0 for turntable)
I see this map as 7K+1 but with random mods so i will focus on playability (hand play and visual) not technical mapping~
anything I say "move/delete/add" is only my opinion (better for me to play) not force to apply

now lessugoo

[normal lv 6]

00:04:493 (4493|4) - move to 1 -> 00:05:062 (5062|1) - to 2 -> 00:05:442 (5442|5) - to 3
00:08:480 (8480|2) - move to 7
00:09:999 (9999|1) - move to 4 -> 00:10:569 (10569|6) - move to 3 -> 00:11:518 (11518|4) - move to 7 - > 00:12:277 (12277|7) - move to 4 -> 00:13:037 (13037|6) - move to 5 00:14:176 (14176|5) - move to 3 -> 00:14:556 (14556|1) - move to 5
00:15:695 (15695|3) - move to 1
00:18:733 (18733|4) - move to 7 -> 00:19:113 (19113|3,19113|5) - move 1 col to right -> 00:19:493 (19493|6) - move to 3
00:39:999 (39999|5,39999|4,40379|2,40379|1,40758|3,40758|4,41138|6,41138|7,41518|4,41518|5) - http://puu.sh/qwi5Q/1aea989bca.jpg
then -> 00:41:518 (41518|4,41518|5) - mvoe to 6-7
00:50:632 (50632|1,50632|2,51012|4,51012|6,51391|3,51391|7) - http://puu.sh/qwi8T/5f6e069ae9.jpg
00:54:809 (54809|6) - move to 2?
01:07:531 (67531|2) - move to 3
01:08:100 (68100|6) - move to 5 -> 01:08:290 (68290|4) - move to 6
01:09:050 (69050|5,69239|6,69239|3,69429|1,69619|6,69619|4,69809|2) - and some note after -> http://puu.sh/qwifg/6d5fc502d0.jpg
01:11:138 (71138|3) - move to 1
01:12:088 (72088|6) - move to 4
01:15:315 (75315|2) - move to 6
01:15:695 (75695|5,75885|2) - move to 2 and 1 http://puu.sh/qwiiI/db9a677d41.jpg
01:19:113 (79113|4) - move to 2
01:20:062 (80062|4) - move to 2
01:28:037 (88037|2) - add 1 more note here at 7?

[kawawa'ssssssssssssssssssss ]

HOST wrote:

kawaee made kkul jam patterns
I miss this style kawawa

[Another moon lv 10]

00:14:936 (14936|3,14936|0,14936|6,15126|2,15126|5,15126|0,15315|7,15315|3,15315|0) - how about http://puu.sh/qwiBG/cd1ee27e2e.jpg (cymbal need note? ww)
00:26:518 (26518|7,26518|3,26708|5,26708|2,26708|6,26898|4,27088|3,27088|7,27277|4,27467|3,27467|7) - http://puu.sh/qwiG3/2c65675fdf.jpg, yes 00:27:657 (27657|5) - jack I actually like low bpm jack orz

00:28:227 (28227|7) - move to 6
00:38:860 (38860|4,38860|1,38860|6,39050|2,39239|4,39239|5,39429|2,39619|7,39619|4,39619|0) - http://puu.sh/qwiJD/e3cf1aba03.jpg
00:48:733 (48733|6) - add 1 more note at 7?
00:55:569 (55569|1) - move to 2
00:55:948 (55948|2,55948|3) - move 1 col to right
00:56:518 (56518|2,56708|1) - ctrl+j
00:58:417 (58417|2,58607|3,58796|2) - http://puu.sh/qwiNm/7c7f0299d6.jpg -> 00:59:176 (59176|1,59366|2) - ctrl+j
01:02:024 (62024|3,62214|5) - http://puu.sh/qwiP6/32bba63f81.jpg
01:26:328 (86328|7) - move to 5
01:27:467 (87467|4,87467|2,87467|7,87562|6,87562|5,87562|1,87562|3,87657|7,87657|2,87657|4,87752|5,87752|3,87752|6,87847|4,87847|7,87847|1,88037|3,88037|2,88037|6) - mindblock pattern? -> how about http://puu.sh/qwiUv/40ff67b57c.jpg

okay done, sorry if not helping, too long not play 8K hahaha
kudos2getwhee

gl~
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