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GENERATIONS from EXILE TRIBE - Hard Knock Days

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Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 25 de agosto de 2017 at 02:33:33 p. m.

Artist: GENERATIONS from EXILE TRIBE
Title: Hard Knock Days
Source: ONE PIECE
Tags: Opening 18 Toei Animation Dressrosa arc Pirates Eiichiro Oda iYiyo
BPM: 184
Filesize: 24360kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Insane (4.39 stars, 564 notes)
  2. Easy (1.54 stars, 160 notes)
  3. Hard (3.35 stars, 394 notes)
  4. Normal (2.11 stars, 237 notes)
  5. Yiyo's Fourth Gear (5.39 stars, 635 notes)
Download: GENERATIONS from EXILE TRIBE - Hard Knock Days
Download: GENERATIONS from EXILE TRIBE - Hard Knock Days (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Revived 5 6 times

Extra (and collab with me) by el Yiyo

Mania diffs: https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0B1A_nVu ... 1BnejJORGs
Last edited by Atsuro , edited 69 times in total.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
ONE PIECE <3

and first o3o/
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
m4m yo

Insane
  1. 00:04:280 (4) - Adjust the Previous/Next ratio slightly
  2. 00:42:433 (1) - Fix blanket slightly. If it's symmetric to 00:42:922 (3) - , you need to fix this as well
  3. 01:21:074 (3) - Fix stack
  4. 01:22:704 (1) - Move this 1/1 back onto the downbeat and add circle
  5. 01:37:215 (1) - Fix blanket slightly
  6. 01:38:846 (2) - ^
  7. 01:43:411 (4,1) - IMO, these sliders are a bit too close
  8. 02:18:302 (2) - Fix stack slightly
Hard
  1. 00:05:911 (1,2) - Pretty sure these aren't perfectly symmetric (right one is higher than left)
  2. 00:08:193 (8,2) - A bit too close to each other
  3. 00:48:954 (5) - Fix blanket slightly
  4. 02:18:302 (6) - I advise against a wiggle slider here (some are unrankable)
  5. The S curve sliders in Hard and Insane can be better quality IMO
Normal
  1. 01:29:389 (1) - Fix blanket slightly
  2. 02:21:563 (1) - ^
Easy
  1. 00:22:867 (2) - Fix S curve
  2. 01:16:346 (1) - Fix blanket slightly

Nice song and bg ^_^
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88


Hi. From my queue. I'm gonna do this mod in spanish because sé escribir español. n.n

Easy

  1. 00:20:259 (3) - Puedes hacer este slider como una "S" para evitar consejos nazis del próximo patrón.
  2. 00:22:867 (2) Por favor, éste slider puede ser más simétrico, es decir, de igual proporción tanto arriba como abajo.
  3. 01:04:607 (3) Para no repetir la forma del siguiente slider, podrías intentar esto.
  4. 01:20:259 Siguiendo el ritmo de la canción, aquí podría encajar una nota.
  5. 01:52:215 (3) Ubica la cola de este slider aquí para manejar simetría x=363 | y=364
  6. 02:03:954 (4,5) Mejora este blanket.
  7. 02:04:607 (5) Ubica un nuevo combo en este objeto, sólo para seguir la cadena de 1,2,3,4 que manejas en todo el mapa.

Normal

  1. 00:01:998 (1) Por favor, arregla este slider, hazlo más curvo o no sé. Puedes mejorarlo. Se ve un poco feo. >-<
  2. 00:04:607 (4,1) Puedes mejorar este blanket. Haciendo el objeto (1) más curvo.
  3. 00:35:911 (2,3,1) Blanket. Te sugiero que ubiques el círculo en este posición para ello. x=272|y=184
  4. 00:39:498 Siguiendo el ritmo de la canción, ¿aquí encajaría una nota, no?
  5. 00:47:650 (1,4) Considera mejorar el Spacing de estos dos objetos. El espacio entre ellos no es simétrico. o.o
  6. 00:52:867 (1,2) Maneja aquí un poco más de simetría. Considera copiar y pegar la forma del slider uno para el slider dos. o.o
  7. 00:55:476 (1,2,3) Blanket.
  8. 01:15:693 (3,1) Utiliza la misma forma del slider para estos dos objetos y crear un patrón simétrico.
  9. 01:56:128 ¿Falta una nota aquí?
  10. 02:28:737 (6) De acuerdo con la canción, el slider debería terminar aquí02:29:389

Hard

  1. 00:08:193 (8,1,2) Blanket.
  2. 01:05:259 (8,10) Put in the head of the slider.
  3. 01:34:280 (9,1) Blanket.
  4. 01:40:639 (3,4,5,6,7) Why the DS increase in this part?
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
M4M~

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:302 (3) - why not NC?
  2. 02:26:780 (1,2,3) - you can make more symmetric pattern about vertical line
[Normal]
  1. 00:56:128 (2) - I prefer to delete. fit to strong vocal sound very much
  2. 01:01:346 (2) - ^
  3. 01:52:215 (5) - curve more fluently for good flow
  4. 02:16:346 (1,2,3) - in this part, vocal follow is better, imo. just a suggetion
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:248 (4,5,6) - I prefer reverse slider
  2. 00:17:813 (5,1) - stack correctly
  3. 01:05:422 (9,10) - confusing pattern. I sugeest to follow drum roll correctly
  4. 01:26:454 (1) - I suggest to use other color to emphasize this part~
  5. 01:57:596 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend to decrease DS
  6. 02:16:346 (1,2,3,4) - not good flow, imo
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - considering spacing, I like this. (6 stack on 3 )
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:280 (1) - unnecessary NC
  3. 01:59:715 (1) - ^
  4. 01:23:193- add a note. follow tom drum sound
  5. 02:16:183- add a note
  6. 02:23:520 (2) - you should follow white line. so I suggest the following
I like this mapping style!
support ~☆
~Good Luck~
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
M4M

[Easy]
  1. 01:21:563 (1,2) - This might be confusing, players might click the sliderend first.
[Normal]
Nothing here

[Hard]
  1. 01:16:020 (7,1) - This pattern is too hard imo, sliderend is too far from the next.
  2. 01:26:454 (1) - ^, Ctrl+G
  3. 02:02:813 (7) - ^, Ctrl+G, you might need to adjust (7) and (1)
  4. 01:19:933 (3,4) - Blanket
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:422 (2,4) - Blanket
Edit: Posted on your queue
Last edited by Factorial , edited 1 time in total.
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro
Mods

"DahplA"
m4m yo

Insane
  1. 00:04:280 (4) - Adjust the Previous/Next ratio slightly Previous/next ratio?
  2. 00:42:433 (1) - Fix blanket slightly. If it's symmetric to 00:42:922 (3) - , you need to fix this as well I think it's good enough already
  3. 01:21:074 (3) - Fix stack Fixed
  4. 01:22:704 (1) - Move this 1/1 back onto the downbeat and add circle I'm following the drums here.
  5. 01:37:215 (1) - Fix blanket slightly Fixed
  6. 01:38:846 (2) - ^ Fixed
  7. 01:43:411 (4,1) - IMO, these sliders are a bit too close They're not even close to touching, so i think it's ok
  8. 02:18:302 (2) - Fix stack slightly Ok


Hard
  1. 00:05:911 (1,2) - Pretty sure these aren't perfectly symmetric (right one is higher than left) Fixed
  2. 00:08:193 (8,2) - A bit too close to each other I'll keep it like that, it flows well
  3. 00:48:954 (5) - Fix blanket slightly Done
  4. 02:18:302 (6) - I advise against a wiggle slider here (some are unrankable) I'm sure this one isn't, as you can see the "wiggle" on the slider shape.
  5. The S curve sliders in Hard and Insane can be better quality IMO I think they're fine, they are perfectly symmetric and stuff.
Normal
  1. 01:29:389 (1) - Fix blanket slightly Not trying to blanket here
  2. 02:21:563 (1) - ^ Fixed
Easy
  1. 00:22:867 (2) - Fix S curve It's not an s... it's... something and i like it :p
  2. 01:16:346 (1) - Fix blanket slightly Yeah

Nice song and bg ^_^


"HappyRocket88"


Hi. From my queue. I'm gonna do this mod in spanish because sé escribir español. n.n

Easy

  1. 00:20:259 (3) - Puedes hacer este slider como una "S" para evitar consejos nazis del próximo patrón. Nah, el slider no fluiria tan bien al siguiente circulo.
  2. 00:22:867 (2) Por favor, éste slider puede ser más simétrico, es decir, de igual proporción tanto arriba como abajo. Listo, es lo mas simetrico que pude lograr :p
  3. 01:04:607 (3) Para no repetir la forma del siguiente slider, podrías intentar esto. Pero me gusta como se vé D: y no fluiria como quiero esto 01:03:302 (1,2,3) -
  4. 01:20:259 Siguiendo el ritmo de la canción, aquí podría encajar una nota. Pero no hay nada en la canción, lo haria overmap y es el momento perfeco para darle un descanso al jugador.
  5. 01:52:215 (3) Ubica la cola de este slider aquí para manejar simetría x=363 | y=364 La movi por ahí
  6. 02:03:954 (4,5) Mejora este blanket. Pero no estoy intentando hacer un blanket ahi.
  7. 02:04:607 (5) Ubica un nuevo combo en este objeto, sólo para seguir la cadena de 1,2,3,4 que manejas en todo el mapa. Ok, se me fué ese combo :p

Normal

  1. 00:01:998 (1) Por favor, arregla este slider, hazlo más curvo o no sé. Puedes mejorarlo. Se ve un poco feo. >-< A mi me gusta como se vé D:
  2. 00:04:607 (4,1) Puedes mejorar este blanket. Haciendo el objeto (1) más curvo. No estoy intentando hacet un blanket, además no se notaría la diferencia porque el momento en el que aparece el 1, el 4 ya desapareció.
  3. 00:35:911 (2,3,1) Blanket. Te sugiero que ubiques el círculo en este posición para ello. x=272|y=184 Mmm, cambiaria un poco (ligeramente) el flujo que intento hacer.
  4. 00:39:498 Siguiendo el ritmo de la canción, ¿aquí encajaría una nota, no? Si encajaria, pero el sonido ahi no es lo suficientemente "fuerte" como para que lo enfatize asi, quiero mantener esta parte simple igual.
  5. 00:47:650 (1,4) Considera mejorar el Spacing de estos dos objetos. El espacio entre ellos no es simétrico. o.o Hice algo
  6. 00:52:867 (1,2) Maneja aquí un poco más de simetría. Considera copiar y pegar la forma del slider uno para el slider dos. o.o Ya es la misma forma de hecho, le hice ctrl+h y ctrl+g.
  7. 00:55:476 (1,2,3) Blanket. No veo como, y ya se ve bien :p
  8. 01:15:693 (3,1) Utiliza la misma forma del slider para estos dos objetos y crear un patrón simétrico. Pero la canci+on cambia ahi, no tendria mucho sentido. Prefiero dejarlo como está para que fluya mejor con el slider que sigue.
  9. 01:56:128 ¿Falta una nota aquí? Nop, en ninguna parte de la dificultad mappee esa nota. Ahi sigo a la percusion.
  10. 02:28:737 (6) De acuerdo con la canción, el slider debería terminar aquí02:29:389 Si tecnicamente, pero el ultimo sonido fuerte esta en donde yo lo terminé, asi que prefiero enfatizar ese ultimo sonido a agregar un repeat.

Hard

  1. 00:08:193 (8,1,2) Blanket. Por qué cambiaste a ingles aqui????
  2. 01:05:259 (8,10) Put in the head of the slider. Ok
  3. 01:34:280 (9,1) Blanket. No es posible hacerlo manteniendo flujo adecuado.
  4. 01:40:639 (3,4,5,6,7) Why the DS increase in this part? Saltos :3


"RandomEffect"
M4M~

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:302 (3) - why not NC? Added
  2. 02:26:780 (1,2,3) - you can make more symmetric pattern about vertical line Yeah, but i prefer the current one.
[Normal]
  1. 00:56:128 (2) - I prefer to delete. fit to strong vocal sound very much Agreed
  2. 01:01:346 (2) - ^ ^
  3. 01:52:215 (5) - curve more fluently for good flow Ok
  4. 02:16:346 (1,2,3) - in this part, vocal follow is better, imo. just a suggetion I know... but i really want to cover the clap sound.
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:248 (4,5,6) - I prefer reverse slider I prefer to stay consistent with the rest of the map, i use circles all the time in that part. I changed the shape the circles make though
  2. 00:17:813 (5,1) - stack correctly It's unnoticeable.
  3. 01:05:422 (9,10) - confusing pattern. I sugeest to follow drum roll correctly I did it like that to emphasize the strong beats on the drum roll
  4. 01:26:454 (1) - I suggest to use other color to emphasize this part~ Made it orange.
  5. 01:57:596 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend to decrease DS Ok, decreased slightly
  6. 02:16:346 (1,2,3,4) - not good flow, imo Changed the patern
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - considering spacing, I like this. (6 stack on 3 ) Changed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:280 (1) - unnecessary NC Whoops
  3. 01:59:715 (1) - ^ Dam
  4. 01:23:193- add a note. follow tom drum sound Nice
  5. 02:16:183- add a note Not here, to give emphasis to the next vocal.
  6. 02:23:520 (2) - you should follow white line. so I suggest the following Won't change, i like the effect it gives when extended.
I like this mapping style! Yay! Somebody likes one of my maps :p
support ~☆
~Good Luck~


"Neil Leo"
M4M

[Easy]
  1. 01:21:563 (1,2) - This might be confusing, players might click the sliderend first. I believe in newbies!
[Normal]
Nothing here

[Hard]
  1. 01:16:020 (7,1) - This pattern is too hard imo, sliderend is too far from the next. Moved them closer.
  2. 01:26:454 (1) - ^, Ctrl+G Ok
  3. 02:02:813 (7) - ^, Ctrl+G, you might need to adjust (7) and (1) Yep
  4. 01:19:933 (3,4) - Blanket Adjusted.
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:422 (2,4) - Blanket Fixed

Thanks everyone!
@Neil Leo Post your map on my queue or something, i'll mod it.
Everything
81 posts
Joined September 2013
Everything
Hello, from my modding queue!
Easy
[notice]
02:03:954 (4,1) - I feel like this flow can be improved. You could make combo 1 into a blanket with combo 4, but as it is now, looks like the slow is choppy
Hard
01:01:183 (3) - maybe adjust so it can be blanket with combo 1? xD
Sorry it's not much, but the mapset is extremely well done. best of luck on your map! :)
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
yo.

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:541 (2) - How about changing this into two circles? It would fit because he's making two sounds and it seems you always try to emphasize the vocals.
  2. 00:09:498 (4,5,1) - here you're breaking the flow and i'm not sure if it's intentional. I suggest you ctrl + g 00:09:661 (5,1) - i also think the slider after this plays a bit weird and if you take my idea you should consider ctrl + h and ctrl + j it
  3. 00:14:063 (2) - just some beauty issue but how about you stack the end of this slider with 00:13:248 (3) -
  4. 00:16:020 (5,6) - the motion of the pen / mouse goes to the right because of 00:15:367 (2) - so to make this jump feel intuitive i suggest you ctrl + g it would also fit with the slider afterwards because you'd break the flow a bit and this supports the highlight in the music
  5. 00:23:683 (3,4) - again how about ctrl + g this for same reasons as above
  6. 00:48:628 (5,6) - i know it destroys the symmetry you have a bit but i suggest you move it down because this straight motion doesn't feel good
  7. 01:17:976 (3,4) - how about you add a little jump here because of the emphasized vocals?
  8. 02:11:617 (3) - i dont think this slider is well placed. because the emphasize is on the sliderend. change this into 2 circles.
  9. 02:22:052 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:56:454 (4) - this is just a beauty issue but i think you should make it so that the slider doesn't touch the circle
  2. 01:02:324 (5) - how about you change this into 2 circles because both sounds are equal important. map the vocal out? like you did here 01:21:563 (1,2) -
  3. 02:02:732 (7) - delete this. there's no music and it also plays weird
[Normal]
  1. it's okay
[Easy]
  1. it's okay
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro

Hard wrote:

yo.

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:541 (2) - How about changing this into two circles? It would fit because he's making two sounds and it seems you always try to emphasize the vocals. I only hear vocal on the white tick, i think the slider fits better
  2. 00:09:498 (4,5,1) - here you're breaking the flow and i'm not sure if it's intentional. I suggest you ctrl + g 00:09:661 (5,1) - i also think the slider after this plays a bit weird and if you take my idea you should consider ctrl + h and ctrl + j it It's intentional, it still flows quite decently though :p
  3. 00:14:063 (2) - just some beauty issue but how about you stack the end of this slider with 00:13:248 (3) - Ok
  4. 00:16:020 (5,6) - the motion of the pen / mouse goes to the right because of 00:15:367 (2) - so to make this jump feel intuitive i suggest you ctrl + g it would also fit with the slider afterwards because you'd break the flow a bit and this supports the highlight in the music You're right, changed
  5. 00:23:683 (3,4) - again how about ctrl + g this for same reasons as above Yeah
  6. 00:48:628 (5,6) - i know it destroys the symmetry you have a bit but i suggest you move it down because this straight motion doesn't feel good Yep
  7. 01:17:976 (3,4) - how about you add a little jump here because of the emphasized vocals? Made the space a bit wider, idk if it's a jump yet but it's the best i can do for now
  8. 02:11:617 (3) - i dont think this slider is well placed. because the emphasize is on the sliderend. change this into 2 circles. It's following the background sound (idk what is making)
  9. 02:22:052 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:56:454 (4) - this is just a beauty issue but i think you should make it so that the slider doesn't touch the circle But then it won't be a perfect blanket D:
  2. 01:02:324 (5) - how about you change this into 2 circles because both sounds are equal important. map the vocal out? like you did here 01:21:563 (1,2) - Ok
  3. 02:02:732 (7) - delete this. there's no music and it also plays weird How did that get there? not intended :p
[Normal]
  1. it's okay
[Easy]
  1. it's okay

trammiexo wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue!
Easy
[notice]
02:03:954 (4,1) - I feel like this flow can be improved. You could make combo 1 into a blanket with combo 4, but as it is now, looks like the slow is choppy It's unblanketed on purpose, to mirror with 02:05:911 (2) -
Hard
01:01:183 (3) - maybe adjust so it can be blanket with combo 1? xD That would be hard to accomplish :p
Sorry it's not much, but the mapset is extremely well done. best of luck on your map! :)
Thanks both!
Sorry for the late answer
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
Joined August 2010
juankristal
Hola Asturo ! Esto está abierto para una GD de O!M 4K? De ser asi por favor avisame ! Este opening tiene la posta, al igual que todo One Piece !
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro

juankristal wrote:

Hola Asturo ! Esto está abierto para una GD de O!M 4K? De ser asi por favor avisame ! Este opening tiene la posta, al igual que todo One Piece !
Claro, si puedes hacer un hard de 4k estaria genial :)
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
Joined August 2010
juankristal

Atsuro wrote:

Claro, si puedes hacer un hard de 4k estaria genial :)
Genial ! En la semana te lo mando !
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
Joined August 2010
juankristal
Bueno Atsuro ! Ahi va nomas ! :D

JuanK's 4K HD
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64,192,122487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,122813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,122976,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,123221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,123302,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,123628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,124933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,126400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,126726,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,126889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,126889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,127215,128,2,127867:0:0:0:0:
448,192,127867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,128030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,128193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128275,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,129009,128,0,129498:0:0:0:0:
64,192,129009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,129172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,129498,128,2,129987:0:0:0:0:
448,192,129498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,129661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,129987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,130476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,130639,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130965,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,131128,128,0,131617:0:0:0:0:
320,192,131128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,131454,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131617,128,0,132107:0:0:0:0:
448,192,131617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,131780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,131780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,132107,128,0,132596:0:0:0:0:
192,192,132107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,132270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,132596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,132922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,133085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133248,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133737,128,2,134226:0:0:0:0:
64,192,133737,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,134226,128,0,134715:0:0:0:0:
448,192,134226,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,134389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134715,128,0,135204:0:0:0:0:
448,192,134715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,135204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,135530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,135857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,136020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,136346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136346,128,0,136835:0:0:0:0:
448,192,136672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,136835,128,0,137324:0:0:0:0:
448,192,136998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,138139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,138384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,138873,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,139607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,141237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,141563,128,0,142052:0:0:0:0:
448,192,141563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,142052,128,0,142541:0:0:0:0:
448,192,142052,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,142215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,143520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,144172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,144824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145150,128,0,145639:0:0:0:0:
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192,192,146454,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,146780,128,0,147270:0:0:0:0:
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192,192,148982,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
I wanna see this ranked T.T
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo

ezek wrote:

I wanna see this ranked T.T
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
[General]
  1. falta el yiyo en los tags
  2. el titulo uncode del yiyo esta buguea3
  3. iba a reclamar por el break del principio hasta que me di cuenta que no era tv size
[Easy]
  1. 01:41:943 .- podrias poner un circulo aca para resaltar la voz ya que siento medio vacio aca aunque eso dejaria una gap de 3/2 y no veo que hayas usado alguna, bueno ahi ves tu xd
  2. 02:03:302 (4) - este deberia llevar nc. intercambia estos igual 02:04:607 (1,2) - asi no rompes el pattern
  3. 02:26:780 (1,2,3) - se veria mas bonito asi http://puu.sh/uHz39/9840589165.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:922 (5) - podrias intentar esto http://puu.sh/uHzdV/0c0d418ab7.jpg asi no ignoras la voz
  2. 01:55:476 (1,2,3) - podrias usar el mismo ritmo que aca 01:34:607 (1,2,3,4) - te saltas muchos beats "importantes" con el que usas ahora
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:487 (2) - no creo que haya problema en que camibies ese a 1/4, quedaria mejor imo
  2. 00:24:172 (1) - podrias poner un circulo y mover el spinner como en el insane
  3. 01:11:128 (1,2,3) - pense que eran 1/1. es la unica parte en la que usas tanto spacing para los 1/2 puede que a alguien mas se le haga confuso
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:24:172 (1) - no creo que sea necesario ese nc
    nice
[Yiyo's Fourth Gear]
  1. http://puu.sh/uHF0Z/8d33c22258.jpg http://puu.sh/uHF5j/ae636b1c18.png
  2. 00:02:324 (1) - yo le sacaria el nc
  3. 00:04:280 (4) - podrias stackear ese en 00:04:607 (1) - asi el circulo queda hacia donde apunta el slider
  4. 00:07:541 (2,3) - le quitas importancia al resto de las notas al sobre enfatizar el 3 ya que no hay nada que necesite ser clickeable por lo que yo los dejaria como un slider
  5. 00:08:520 (1,2,3,4) - el 4 se siente algo fuera de lugar. el flow del resto va hacia la derecha excepto por ese slider. podrias hacer esto http://puu.sh/uHCja/c67b9b625b.jpg (lo rote -90°) y de paso mueves este 00:09:824 (1) - a x91 y251 asi mantienes el flow y te haces un triangulo con 00:09:824 (1,2,3) - xd
  6. 00:17:487 (1,2,3) - la voz es lo suficientemente fuerte como para que los separes mas. si lo comparas con este pattern 00:15:693 (3,4,5,1,2) - aca la voz no es tan fuerte como en donde usaste sliders pero el spacing es mayor :thinking:
  7. 00:20:259 (1,2,3) - se ve bonito pero la distancia entre 1y2 deberia ser mayor a 2y3 porque el 2 esta en un tick blanco y tiene una snare
  8. 00:22:704 (1) - yo creo que esta demas ese nc ahi
  9. 00:26:454 (4,5,1) - encontre bien raro eso. el angulo en el que esta no lo hace muy confortable
  10. 00:54:824 (1) - podrias sacarle el nc. es medio raro que el combo anterior sea de 2 notas xd
  11. 01:00:693 (1,3,1) - me gusto harto la idea. te arregle ese slider 01:01:672 (1) - 
    274,173,56454,6,0,B|287:215|287:215|279:260|279:260|324:268|324:268|366:254,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  12. 00:57:433 (6,7,1) - muy cerca po ademas de que el stack deja sin enfasis al downbeat
  13. 01:01:672 (1) - a este igual lo toque un poco
    460,57,61672,6,0,B|412:59|380:93|380:93|363:49|323:26,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  14. 01:08:193 (5) - podrias hacerle ctrl g para que tenga un poco de enfasis la snare
  15. 01:10:313 (3,4,5,6) - se te paso la mano un poco. esta seccion en general es lenta (hasta le bajaste el sv) asi que no va muy bien que uses tanto spacing. incluso es mas spacing del que usaste en algunos jumps del kiai, por ejemplo 01:33:954 (4,5,6) -
  16. 01:00:041 (4,5,6) - ^ aca igual
  17. 01:45:857 (4,5,6) - fluyen mejor asi imo 
    270,61,105857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    442,147,106020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    204,149,106183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  18. 01:46:346 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aun con esos jumps es de 5.36 peppy pls
  19. 02:18:384 - creo que se te olvido poner algo aca
  20. 02:23:846 (4,5,1) - esto es igual de raro que 00:26:454 (4,5,1) -
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro

pkhg wrote:

[General]
  1. falta el yiyo en los tags ai lo agrego
  2. el titulo uncode del yiyo esta buguea3 El yiyo fix ur shit
  3. iba a reclamar por el break del principio hasta que me di cuenta que no era tv size Yo tambien para ser sincero
[Easy]
  1. 01:41:943 .- podrias poner un circulo aca para resaltar la voz ya que siento medio vacio aca aunque eso dejaria una gap de 3/2 y no veo que hayas usado alguna, bueno ahi ves tu xd El yo de hace 2 años evito esos gaps en todo el mapa asi que creo que lo dejo
  2. 02:03:302 (4) - este deberia llevar nc. intercambia estos igual 02:04:607 (1,2) - asi no rompes el pattern ye
  3. 02:26:780 (1,2,3) - se veria mas bonito asi http://puu.sh/uHz39/9840589165.jpg Si, se ve mas guapo
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:922 (5) - podrias intentar esto http://puu.sh/uHzdV/0c0d418ab7.jpg asi no ignoras la voz Hice algo
  2. 01:55:476 (1,2,3) - podrias usar el mismo ritmo que aca 01:34:607 (1,2,3,4) - te saltas muchos beats "importantes" con el que usas ahora Aqui igual hice algo
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:487 (2) - no creo que haya problema en que camibies ese a 1/4, quedaria mejor imo o
  2. 00:24:172 (1) - podrias poner un circulo y mover el spinner como en el insane k
  3. 01:11:128 (1,2,3) - pense que eran 1/1. es la unica parte en la que usas tanto spacing para los 1/2 puede que a alguien mas se le haga confuso Pero ta bonito el patron D: fix lol
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:24:172 (1) - no creo que sea necesario ese nc a numa ci cierto
    nice
Gracias tal vez pkk
Azuren
88 posts
Joined December 2012
Azuren
Hello There!

Easy
  1. 01:50:259 (1) - Nazi blanket
Normal/Hard/Insane
  1. No ranked yet wth?
Gear Fourth
  1. 00:00:694 (1) - Un poco raro de jugar, tal vez otra forma?
  2. 00:17:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Se rompe de la nada el flow, raro de jugar
  3. 00:47:650 (1) - Todos los sliders con esta forma indicaban la siguiente nota, rompe la consistencia, tal vez otra forma?
  4. 00:56:454 (1) - Rompe el flow + No tiene una forma muy bonita + dificil de jugar dada su forma
  5. 01:46:835 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tal vez rotar un poco el segundo triangulo para mejor jugabilidad
  6. Atsuro es sexy

H T!
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Atsuro
HELLO THERE
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
!
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo

pkhg wrote:

[Yiyo's Fourth Gear]
  1. http://puu.sh/uHF0Z/8d33c22258.jpg http://puu.sh/uHF5j/ae636b1c18.png
  2. 00:02:324 (1) - yo le sacaria el nc
  3. 00:04:280 (4) - podrias stackear ese en 00:04:607 (1) - asi el circulo queda hacia donde apunta el slider no quiero que el 4 con la cabeza del slider queden stackeados, de todas maneras queda bien así como está imo
  4. 00:07:541 (2,3) - le quitas importancia al resto de las notas al sobre enfatizar el 3 ya que no hay nada que necesite ser clickeable por lo que yo los dejaria como un slider encuentro que no tiene por qué ser no clickeable, el ritmo de la batería da soporte para circulos solo creo yo
  5. 00:08:520 (1,2,3,4) - el 4 se siente algo fuera de lugar. el flow del resto va hacia la derecha excepto por ese slider. podrias hacer esto http://puu.sh/uHCja/c67b9b625b.jpg (lo rote -90°) y de paso mueves este 00:09:824 (1) - a x91 y251 asi mantienes el flow y te haces un triangulo con 00:09:824 (1,2,3) - xd
  6. 00:17:487 (1,2,3) - la voz es lo suficientemente fuerte como para que los separes mas. si lo comparas con este pattern 00:15:693 (3,4,5,1,2) - aca la voz no es tan fuerte como en donde usaste sliders pero el spacing es mayor :thinking:
  7. 00:20:259 (1,2,3) - se ve bonito pero la distancia entre 1y2 deberia ser mayor a 2y3 porque el 2 esta en un tick blanco y tiene una snare 2 y 3 tienen el mismo snare, pero las vocales enfarizan más en 3 así que creo que es mejor dejarlo así :d
  8. 00:22:704 (1) - yo creo que esta demas ese nc ahi
  9. 00:26:454 (4,5,1) - encontre bien raro eso. el angulo en el que esta no lo hace muy confortable aguante el linear flow
  10. 00:54:824 (1) - podrias sacarle el nc. es medio raro que el combo anterior sea de 2 notas xd como cambia a jumps, y la música pasa a otra sección más intensa encuentro que está bien el nc xd
  11. 01:00:693 (1,3,1) - me gusto harto la idea. te arregle ese slider 01:01:672 (1) - 
    274,173,56454,6,0,B|287:215|287:215|279:260|279:260|324:268|324:268|366:254,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  12. 00:57:433 (6,7,1) - muy cerca po ademas de que el stack deja sin enfasis al downbeat
  13. 01:01:672 (1) - a este igual lo toque un poco
    460,57,61672,6,0,B|412:59|380:93|380:93|363:49|323:26,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  14. 01:08:193 (5) - podrias hacerle ctrl g para que tenga un poco de enfasis la snare
  15. 01:10:313 (3,4,5,6) - se te paso la mano un poco. esta seccion en general es lenta (hasta le bajaste el sv) asi que no va muy bien que uses tanto spacing. incluso es mas spacing del que usaste en algunos jumps del kiai, por ejemplo 01:33:954 (4,5,6) -
  16. 01:00:041 (4,5,6) - ^ aca igual
  17. 01:45:857 (4,5,6) - fluyen mejor asi imo me gusta más lo que tengo ahora la verdad xd
    270,61,105857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    442,147,106020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    204,149,106183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  18. 01:46:346 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aun con esos jumps es de 5.36 peppy pls el pp
  19. 02:18:384 - creo que se te olvido poner algo aca
  20. 02:23:846 (4,5,1) - esto es igual de raro que 00:26:454 (4,5,1) - consistencia en rarez, eso ya es nivel avanzado. kappa xd a mi me gusta

Atheneon wrote:

Hello There!
Gear Fourth
  1. 00:00:694 (1) - Un poco raro de jugar, tal vez otra forma? Qué tiene de raro :s Es distinto solamente xd y a mi me gusta
  2. 00:17:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Se rompe de la nada el flow, raro de jugar Cambio el flow de esa manera debido al cambio en la canción que viene después del stream
  3. 00:47:650 (1) - Todos los sliders con esta forma indicaban la siguiente nota, rompe la consistencia, tal vez otra forma? Según yo están bien, se juegan bien aunque no apunte al siguiente slider.
  4. 00:56:454 (1) - Rompe el flow + No tiene una forma muy bonita + dificil de jugar dada su forma why D: Yo lo encuentro divertido
  5. 01:46:835 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tal vez rotar un poco el segundo triangulo para mejor jugabilidad Not needed imo
  6. Atsuro es sexy se sabe 8-)

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Thanks for the mods <3

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