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[General]
- BG is really low quality when viewed in osu!, the size it's at isn't very good nowadays, but it's probably still rankable.
- 00:50:940 () - Listen here on Kantan. BPM is late here. Look to ask a timing expert.
[Nardo's Oni]
00:07:913 (1) - weird coming from me, but I think a slider is better for these kinds of steady drum rolls
00:26:670 (79,80) - swapping these two matches vocals, but maybe you don't want that ;A;
Kind of weird seeing the density drop
a lot in the middle of the verses.
00:46:274 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185) - change these notes to something else, so it's not weird that 00:48:107 (190) - here, there's no finisher 00:46:774 (183) - but there is one here; and that 00:48:607 (192) - does have a finisher but 00:47:274 (185) - does not (because no HEY!)
Kind of hard to find a solution there, haha. But I really think some variation would help it not be so contradicting.
01:21:524 () - d here, so it's consistent with 01:18:857 (370) - this note existing?
The first half of second kiai, how about less 'ddk'? xP
You don't use kkk a lot there, maybe try to find some spots for it.
01:07:941 (306,307,308,309,310) - like k d kkk here? But maybe you think it's too many 1/2 in a row XD
01:10:940 (323,324,325,326,327) - kkk k D? ok now i'm making bad suggestions to add 'kkk' LOL
At least it'll be easy DT yeahyeah, but it's a great map in your style!
[Oni]
Holy macaroni those greens. 89%? Make it 90%?
Change name to Inner Oni? It's worthy :p
I am super against a lot of your scroll speed changes.They make notes look clumped a lot and don't really add any feel, as the song is pretty mellow throughout (ninja notes, a-ok though lmao)
Also, the drum roll streams go really low volume, but you're lucky it works... :p
00:16:247 (93,94,95,96,97,98) - guitar is going down-up here, so dkk ddk?
00:17:913 (106) - remove to compliment the chords here? you put gaps where the guitar stopped before
00:24:467 (147,152) - swapping these keeps the consistent 'k k' heard during these parts!
00:29:213 (181) - k, for the same 'k k' consistency stuff?
00:35:314 (223,228) - swap these for the same reason as ^
00:37:348 (238) - then 'k' here for--yeah that. Completely up to you if you want to try hard to keep that 'k k' rhythm going on. I'll quit mentioning it since it should be easy to catch if you want it!
00:42:263 (265,266,267,268,269,270,1) - not 1/3 at all, should reaaaally change it.
00:51:607 (42,43,44,45,46) - kkd k D instead?
00:52:940 (50,51,52) - then to avoid kkd again, ddd?
00:55:440 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - following vocals in a stream is weird here since it makes such a boring stream haha, but it's fine. just following drum is more immersive imo
01:02:190 (120) - d, ddd just fits more imo
01:13:607 (205) - k, fits vocal, feels better.
01:27:440 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) - kddkddkkkkd is a MUCH nicer stream here, trust me.
01:32:274 (337,338,339) - the song has a sound here that makes my ears tingle. (uhh.. big notes suggestion?)
01:38:107 (378,379,380,381) - this is just a 'kd' not a 1/6
01:38:940 () how slow it is here is really confusing because of the previous slow-down, just not done well. How about the 1/6 part is .88 then this is .75?
01:53:857 () - this is the worst speed-up ever, why isn't it like the first stream?
02:25:607 (268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - yeaaah ok trust me on this one too:
this follows drum perfectly and it's as tough as the old stream
Diff is pretty dense for such a song, but it's done in a simple way. Rethink some scroll speed changes (I recommend not going below .75)
[Muzukashii]
01:16:774 (165,166,167,168,169) - d kkk kkk to try and map the drum roll? if you want to only have one triplet, ignore this
01:27:440 (216,217,218,219,220,221) - would kkd d kkk be too hard for you? if so, just apply the 'd' change, which I think fits well.
01:29:107 () - randomly not dense here, add d?
01:47:774 () - the drums are going crazy here, add 'k' so this isn't weirdly empty?
02:10:774 (103) - k, since it's been kdkdkdd, and then kdkdkkd and this keeps it consistent
02:11:440 (106) - this is the only one that's this long (aka inconsistent)
02:15:940 (132) - k here is also because of the 'every other is k k at the end'
good for the most part!
[Futsuu]
00:26:670 (40) - open hi-hat is not a good place for a finisher :p remove finisher?
01:44:274 (154) - may as well add a finisher too with all the big notes you've spammed here XD
01:46:274 (4) - why not k? following drum maybe, but obviously also vocals
02:15:607 (50,51,52,53) - d d k D is better here imo
02:25:274 (76) - remove this to have mercy?
good overall!
[Kantan]
OD 4 should be fine.
Try to keep notes on white ticks only.
00:31:416 (22) - delete? too many notes in a row for what the density has been
00:53:607 (14,15,16,17) - change to spinner? too many red line notes for kantan
01:16:940 (45) - delete? same thing about too many
01:32:774 (67) - ^ really, don't worry about following rhythms so closely on kantan
It's good! Just red ticks are kind of bad for kantan. Don't be afraid to over-simplify!
Good mapset! I need to sleep.