As a W'kanon fans to me to send some suggestion.
[We cry "OPEN"]
[We cry "OPEN"]
- 01:05:392 (3,1) - Maybe this "P" pattern need move down a bit than another pattern,because really looks like a bit taller imo.
- 01:35:564 (1,2) - Swap NC ,because heavy voice at the (2) here (Just like 01:36:935 (2,1,2,3) -same voice here)
- 02:01:964 (8) - This flow looks so sharp,also can move (224|136) do a triangle with 02:01:621 (6,7,8) - ?
- 05:13:792 (4) - Maybe can avoid overlap here,I try move a bit also you put here (good pattern too I think) :
- 05:19:792 (1,2,3,4) - Although looks no problem,just ask,are you sure use this simple rhythm here ?
- 05:41:050 (1,1,1,1) - Sounds like this last 4 notes can make a big jump here,seems these use anti-jump for playing so strange imo.