1. Apple (3,03 stars, 203 notes)
2. Easy (1,5 stars, 105 notes)
3. Normal (1,83 stars, 160 notes)

Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Apple 100%
Storyboard 100%

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Nitrousdragon wrote:

from #modreqs

[Hard]

00:25:895 (1) - This slider is not blanketed very well, either blanket it or move this object away from the end at 00:25:511 I'm trying, fixed
00:35:822 (3) - This is a necessarily calm part, you wouldn't want a jump here For a build up before I increase the sv up, play very well imo
00:47:072 (1) - Just a little thing here, why do you have this slider all the way over here? Again, it's not even Kiai time yet Intentional to match with the vocal
00:53:028 (2) - There's no blanket error here, so I don't see the point Thanks~

As for normal, that diff looks good! I hope this gets bubble ^_^ Thanks for cheer me up

1. change SB .jpg to .png : bgapple & bgapple2
2. add tag : cut version (cause this cut version of the song)

1. 00:00:749 (2) - 40|276 better (following with 00:02:513 (2,2) - x|276)
2. 00:27:219 (3) - 372|128 ?
3. 00:17:072 (1) - maybe move up a bit.. or make same like 00:18:395 (3,1)
4. 01:13:542 (1) - 136|140
5. 00:58:984 (3,1) - umm .. make same placement like 01:00:748 (3,1,3,1)
6. 00:24:131 (1) - This slider should start on 00:23:910 - vocal there ..then longer till 00:24:792
7. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head.
8. 00:40:013 (1) - more curve maybe? like this maybe?
9. 01:06:484 (1) - same case like 00:24:131 (1)
10. 01:09:132 (2,3,1) - are you copied 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - ? it's weird flow , but looks good . can you improve this?
11. 01:30:748 (4) - 464|152 better.
12. 01:37:806 (4) - 48|236 better.

1. 00:14:425 (2,3,1) - same spacing like 00:00:308 (1,2,1)
2. 00:39:792 (1) - 244|148 better. jumpy like 00:40:675 (3,4)
3. 01:09:572 (5) - better stack with 01:08:910 (2) -
4. 01:10:895 (2) - rotate 10 degree?
5. 01:23:690 (5) - 176|40 better.
6. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bgapple.jpg",320,240
_L,8248,1
__F,0,0,441,1,0
__S,0,0,441,0.6283873,0.6944515
__F,0,441,882,0

Sky Trias wrote:

#indonesian request ^^

Apple is . .

[General]

1. change SB .jpg to .png : bgapple & bgapple2 Kalo diubah jadi .png ukurannya bakal 1 mb lebih kak, kalo png kan format gambarnya lossles jadi bakal lebih besar ukurannya
2. add tag : cut version (cause this cut version of the song) Will consider

[Normal]

1. 00:00:749 (2) - 40|276 better (following with 00:02:513 (2,2) - x|276) Fixed
2. 00:27:219 (3) - 372|128 ? Fixed
3. 00:17:072 (1) - maybe move up a bit.. or make same like 00:18:395 (3,1) Fixed
4. 01:13:542 (1) - 136|140 Fixed
5. 00:58:984 (3,1) - umm .. make same placement like 01:00:748 (3,1,3,1) I'm trying, fixed
6. 00:24:131 (1) - This slider should start on 00:23:910 - vocal there ..then longer till 00:24:792 Hmm If I do that will cause bad flow with next notes, for now not change anything there
7. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head. Fixed
8. 00:40:013 (1) - more curve maybe? like this maybe? I'm trying, fixed
9. 01:06:484 (1) - same case like 00:24:131 (1) Same answer then
10. 01:09:132 (2,3,1) - are you copied 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - ? it's weird flow , but looks good . can you improve this? Not weird at all imo
11. 01:30:748 (4) - 464|152 better. Fixed
12. 01:37:806 (4) - 48|236 better. Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:14:425 (2,3,1) - same spacing like 00:00:308 (1,2,1) Diffrent SV so it'll have diffrent spacing, probably looks bigger but it's consistent imo
2. 00:39:792 (1) - 244|148 better. jumpy like 00:40:675 (3,4) Fixed
3. 01:09:572 (5) - better stack with 01:08:910 (2) - Fixed
4. 01:10:895 (2) - rotate 10 degree? The curent looks fine
5. 01:23:690 (5) - 176|40 better. Fixed
6. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head. Fixed

uhh short mod
I hope this helping ^^
GoodLuck! Thank you so much, really helpful

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!From my queue
[General]

1. Offset-574?then you can remove the other timing point owo I already double check, and have some people to play and they can have an SS easily, so apparently the timing is fine

[Normal]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - Well this maybe too sudden for beginners,might need a break here?so consider remove 00:08:689 (1) - I keep the curent, but will be consider about that
2. 00:25:013 (2) - consider shorten the slider and map circle 00:25:896 (3) - ?this piano key is relatively important for me I'm working on it
3. 00:27:660 (1,1) - ^ same with the first Same answer
4. consider extending the slider cuz current combination will be awkward to play to some extent
   
5. 01:09:132 (2,3) - ^ Hmm I prefer to have 1/2 rhythm instead imo
6. 01:25:895 (1,2,3,1) - It seems that you follow rap this part but you follow instrument when mapping similar part before,I suggest to keep consistency If I fully follow the rap it might be overmapped since this one is a normal diff, so I made a make diffrent rhythm but still consistent along on that ending part
7. 01:38:910 (2,1) - Anti jump maybe hard for beginners nice idea though I suggest separate them Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:10:233 (1) - ctrl+g?I feel a bit close when playing Fixed
2. 00:46:189 (2) - feel a little close,ctrl+g and adjust the degree Will consider, since the curent is prety fine to play
3. 00:53:028 (2) - I suggest curve right a blit cuz there's an oval flow Yes there's a circular flow between them, already tried to have a curve there but I don't really like, so I put straight instead
4. 00:59:425 (1) - ^curve left a bit Same, I prefer straight one ove a curve
5. 01:04:278 (3) - rotate -45°？current flow isn't imo Hmm not looking so good for me imo
6. 01:37:807 (4) - ctrl+g better flow? Prety fine imo

Nice storyboard and neat layout Really thank you so much hihihi XD
GL~

ziin wrote:

[SB]
Good to see storyboards out there! Thanks for making one! I highly recommend you open up the OSB file in notepad so you can understand what's going on a little better, as once you can create a storyboard by scripting, it makes editing storyboards after they're already created MUCH easier. I'm on my way learning it by scripting, but still not sure how haha XD

bgapple2.jpg looks like you overlaid 2 images on top of each other and didn't even center them. It looks really bad honestly. Just use bgapple.jpg to create the effect you want, or at least the effect most people expect. Yes fixed

I'd like to introduce you to loops:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bgapple.jpg",320,240
_L,8248,1
__F,0,0,441,1,0
__S,0,0,441,0.6283873,0.6944515
__F,0,441,882,0

You can use this in your code to make your life a LOT easier in the future. Might be apply, I'm checking by now

00:29:425 - As I said before, I don't really like this image. If I wanted to see blurry double I'd take off my glasses. Haha XD I don't use glasses :p need a second opinion on that not change for now

Other than that, the SB is very simple. you can leave the jpgs in the storyboard, there's no issues there. Thank you very much!

Everything else looks fine.

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

This map is really good. Enjoyable to play, match the music, and no technical errors. Cool storyboard too.
I could make a useless mod about suggestions for shapes/blankets/"flow" etc. but it's not necessary and I hate forced modding like that
So I'll just give some stars instead and hope this gets ranked soon

Good luck!

JuanCR2912 wrote:

You need make an easy difficult map, but good rhythm

1. 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - spacing looks a bit odd here. Mostly cuz the impact that (1) has and 00:35:381 (2,3,4) - being weirly spaced. I'd move 4 and 1 somewhere further from 3, or somethig like this?
2. 00:41:557 - any reason for not mapping this vocal out?o.o. The full previous pattern follows vocals. by ignoring it, makes the pattern weird.
3. 00:52:366 (1,2) - this inconsistent spacing is weird cuz you give emphasis to a weak beat like (2) is, but not to (1) which has the more impact here. I know you're trying to blank, so moving (1) more up would be better imo. (ugly example)
4. 01:13:101 (3) - this slider seems to be heavily spaced out, on the pattern context. Maybe move it to around x424y47 or just blank with 01:11:778 (1) - ?
5. 01:26:778 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm? so there's no akward offbeat sliders i guess, and also you could add a note here 01:26:667 - as you do for vocals afterwards
6. 01:36:814 - it's weird that you leave this unmapped but in the whole section you map these triples-vocals-thing. ><

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - i'm almost sure it's unrankeable as is. It need to be like 2 white ticks apart or something. So maybe ask someone else or make the spinner just a long slider >w<
2. 01:26:557 (2,3) - what about this rhythminstead? Right now sounds really off, like mapping nothing in concrete. Same here 01:33:616 (2,3) -

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - 00:54:131 (1,1) - similar to normal, needs to be like 1 measure apart. so this doesnt happen http://puu.sh/hZxkO/064b4d8d33.jpg
2. 01:32:072 (4) - change it into 2 circles? like similar patterns you have, and also makes it a bit more fun i think?xd Same here maybe 00:39:131 (4) - just to vary from the 1/1 spam
3. 01:39:131 - add a green line with another sample, cuz slidertick is wut here.

Mako Sakata wrote:

I'm really sorry for the delay answer and super late reply due to college activities and busy things out there ;(

ziin wrote:

00:29:425 - As I said before, I don't really like this image. If I wanted to see blurry double I'd take off my glasses. Haha XD I don't use glasses :p need a second opinion on that not change for now

Milan- wrote:

hi Helloooo~

[apple]

1. 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - spacing looks a bit odd here. Mostly cuz the impact that (1) has and 00:35:381 (2,3,4) - being weirly spaced. I'd move 4 and 1 somewhere further from 3, or somethig like this? Fixed, tbh the curent is also fine haha XD, I flipped between (3) and (4) instead, example given not really nice imo
2. 00:41:557 - any reason for not mapping this vocal out?o.o. The full previous pattern follows vocals. by ignoring it, makes the pattern weird. Added circle
3. 00:52:366 (1,2) - this inconsistent spacing is weird cuz you give emphasis to a weak beat like (2) is, but not to (1) which has the more impact here. I know you're trying to blank, so moving (1) more up would be better imo. (ugly example) Will be considered, tbh I don't really like when this 00:52:145 (4,1) - turn too sharp because I rotated (1)
4. 01:13:101 (3) - this slider seems to be heavily spaced out, on the pattern context. Maybe move it to around x424y47 or just blank with 01:11:778 (1) - ? I don't get what you mean, but I mapped that according to "Lalalala" on the vocal and for variances I make that spaced one, since there's two "Lalalala" thing
5. 01:26:778 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm? so there's no akward offbeat sliders i guess, and also you could add a note here 01:26:667 - as you do for vocals afterwards Fixed
6. 01:36:814 - it's weird that you leave this unmapped but in the whole section you map these triples-vocals-thing. >< For a cool down before the song ended and to match the "boy boy" on vocal so yeah I prefer not to insert that triplets you mention about

[normal]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - i'm almost sure it's unrankeable as is. It need to be like 2 white ticks apart or something. So maybe ask someone else or make the spinner just a long slider >w< Tbh I think the one you mention about is a guidelines and afaik it's not a rankable issue, because it said that after a spinner there should be enough time before the next note, so yeah it's pretty much fine
2. 01:26:557 (2,3) - what about this rhythminstead? Right now sounds really off, like mapping nothing in concrete. Same here 01:33:616 (2,3) - If I make a reverse slider with circle, I should remapped the whole ending part, so I guess no

[easy]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - 00:54:131 (1,1) - similar to normal, needs to be like 1 measure apart. so this doesnt happen http://puu.sh/hZxkO/064b4d8d33.jpg Prety much fine imo as I mentioned on Normal
2. 01:32:072 (4) - change it into 2 circles? like similar patterns you have, and also makes it a bit more fun i think?xd Same here maybe 00:39:131 (4) - just to vary from the 1/1 spam Yeah sure thing
3. 01:39:131 - add a green line with another sample, cuz slidertick is wut here. I'm sowwyy my bad :p Fixed

i was actually going to ask you for m4m like you stated in #modreq, but dunno if you want to mod back cuz it's too short or something so yolo
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/309867 Sure thing, will do that on this weekend hihi, I'll try my best~

nice set, gl<3 Thank you very much for inspirational sugestion <3

ziin wrote:

What about using this bgapple2.jpg?. I just hate the fact that the current image isn't centered It seems I misunderstanding your mean on last mod :p, sure fixed with your new bgapple2 <3

Lama Poluna wrote:

Hello :3
Apple
00:47:072 (1) - Move x:220 y:308. Fixed and make a bit adjustment by rotate 3degree for better blanket
01:23:028 - 01:23:910 - The entire map looks great, and this place her spoils. Idk what you mean but thanks
01:38:910 (2) - Move x:176 y:36. The curent one is better imo
01:40:013 (1) - ^^^
Normal
Nothing to say.
Easy
Nothing to say.

Wonderful map.
Good luck ( ´ ▽ ` )

1. I thought these offsets that the most fit are 299 and 1181 (-9ms). So if you agree about my suggestion, you can move these offsets.
   
2. I thought your volume that configure, it may too soft. So you may increase volume about 40-50% would more fit with this song, I think.
   
3. I doubt "1집 1jib" in tags what these involves about this song?

1. 00:39:131 (4,1,2) - You may make these note like this picture by have 00:41:778 (3) blanket slider tail of (2). I thought it would make these are prettier.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Star rating of Normal is 1.85, which range of that diff are rather distance with Apple diff, but close with Easy diff. I'm not sure whether any QAT are accept about that. But if possible, can you make this diff more than 2.00? Or may add other diff that easier than Normal, but more difficult than Apple diff.
   
2. 00:23:910 - I heard the vocal in this part. So you can add a note here.
   
3. 00:40:675 - ^
   
4. 01:06:263 - ^
   
5. 01:20:381 - ^

1. 00:24:572 (3) - Try move slider tail to middle area of slider (1) like this picture.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:41:557 (5) - If you want this part can play for fun, please try avoid stacking with other notes
   
3. 00:53:028 (2) - I felt it's overjump. which it causes me was force. So please move this slider to X:308 y:244. it would be flow better.
   
4. 01:03:837 (2,3) - I felt these flow are weird. I suggest that make like this picture would be better.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:601 (1) - Move this slider to x:168 y:328. I thought it would flow better.
   
6. 01:24:131 (1,2) - This flow in (1) is weird for me. So you may move (1) to x:424 y:40 , and Ctrl+G in slider (2) to flow better.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3
From #modreqs

[General]

1. I thought these offsets that the most fit are 299 and 1181 (-9ms). So if you agree about my suggestion, you can move these offsets. I've double check and confident with it, but will consider yours (since it have sb it'll such a pain just to fix some small offset diffrent) thanks for checking hihi
   
2. I thought your volume that configure, it may too soft. So you may increase volume about 40-50% would more fit with this song, I think. Hmm the curent is fine imo, the reason why I put a bit lower is S:C1 clap will sound too loud imo and a bit distracting when playing
   
3. I doubt "1집 1jib" in tags what these involves about this song? No change for now, I take a look on the album and there's two of them. Since I can't korean it can't be help XD

[Easy]

1. 00:39:131 (4,1,2) - You may make these note like this picture by have 00:41:778 (3) blanket slider tail of (2). I thought it would make these are prettier. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. Star rating of Normal is 1.85, which range of that diff are rather distance with Apple diff, but close with Easy diff. I'm not sure whether any QAT are accept about that. But if possible, can you make this diff more than 2.00? Or may add other diff that easier than Normal, but more difficult than Apple diff. I've take a look on recent ranked beatmap (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208476) and it's fine to have Normal on 1.8 then Hard on 3.2 SR, and mine is lower than that so in other word it should be still acceptable imo, furthermore I've been ask to a BN and she said that tottaly fine, so I leave it as for now
   
2. 00:23:910 - I heard the vocal in this part. So you can add a note here. Fixed
   
3. 00:40:675 - ^ Fixed
   
4. 01:06:263 - ^ Fixed
   
5. 01:20:381 - ^ Not this one, it hard to adjust the next notes if I put note there, prety much will break the whole pattern

[Apple]

1. 00:24:572 (3) - Try move slider tail to middle area of slider (1) like this picture. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:41:557 (5) - If you want this part can play for fun, please try avoid stacking with other notes Fixed
   
3. 00:53:028 (2) - I felt it's overjump. which it causes me was force. So please move this slider to X:308 y:244. it would be flow better. No change for now, since it's fun and a bit challenging probably fine imo
   
4. 01:03:837 (2,3) - I felt these flow are weird. I suggest that make like this picture would be better. Fixed, I'm aware of that since beginning lol
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:601 (1) - Move this slider to x:168 y:328. I thought it would flow better. Reduce the jump, but I don't like when it placed lower than (2)
   
6. 01:24:131 (1,2) - This flow in (1) is weird for me. So you may move (1) to x:424 y:40 , and Ctrl+G in slider (2) to flow better. Idk haha how to adjust that one, I keep the current because I don't want to ctrl+g (2)

It almost perfect mapset, but I thought Normal diff shoulld harder than now. However, I give a star and good luck :3 Whoaaa thank you Nich for mod and star, I didn't expect that

[-Deemo-] wrote:

I'm pretty bad at modding like easier difficulties but I'll give it my best shot I'm sorry, I wish I can make a harder one ;(

[General]
Maybe add a difficulty that's around 2.0+ stars to even things out? Been asking to a nominator and she said it's okay hihihi
Something the AIMod said:
Background: bgapple.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. Now is allowed to use 16:9 aspect ratio to be used as SB element so I guess that's dimension is fine, I'm trying to make a good one here~

[Easy]
00:43:542 (1) - For these notes I just find them aesthetically just a little too sharp when the red thing goes to the white thing (I don't know the proper terminology). Just a suggestion Tweaking a bit

[Normal]
00:27:439 - Maybe add a note here since there's still vocals and the small pause to the slider sounds kinda awkward Nice catch, added

[Apple]
00:14:425 (2) - the slight angle on this bugs me Hmm For now I keep that as I following vocal there
01:12:660 (2,3) - Compared to the other times this shows up (like at 01:10:895 (2,3) - ), these are really far apart from each other, maybe make it consistent to the others? For variances XD, both style is still fit with the "lalalala" from the lyric

I don't know if this was helpful or not, but this map is really well made in my opinion (If my opinion is worth anything) Thanks Deemo for mod and starssss, it's sometimes I don't notice some small thing that you mention earlier

Euny wrote:

hello mako♥ as your request!came from my queue Hey Eun is E hahaha XD, thanks for coming Eun~

• General

1. for metadata : you should +add tags cause other ranked map did that. = ' 전보람 ' , ' 이큐리 ' , ' 박소연 ' , ' 함은정 ' , ' 박효민 ' , ' 박지연 ' << artist real names
   + ' Core Contents Media ' << artist agency Add both members name and agency, I really need that! I wish I can Korean ;(
   here is official site
   

• Easy

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - i'm unsure this is unrankable. but i think objects are too close you should read this forum >> https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3359424
2. 00:27:660 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:54:131 (1,1) - ^ Umm Eun, about that one in my opinion is fine, because I give time about 1000ms for recovery time after the spinner before we hit next circle, so I keep that for now

• Apple

1. 00:13:542 - i think you need to fill this. cause i heard strong cymbals sound from here. how about this time line? if you apply this, also you should nc for here. and its highest diff. i think this is more fun to playing hope you accept this. Cuz I'm trying to following pure vocal there, and yeah I'm aware there's strong cymbal sound as you mention about, but if I want to following that I prefer to put 1/1 slider instead following the instrument not the vocal, so I still keep the curent as it sound fine and well played, but will be considered though. Thanks for your concern on that one hihihi
   
2. 00:15:307 (1) ~ 00:27:660 (1) - i think its kiai time xD Yeaaaahh at first I think that too, that part must be kiai, but if I put kiai on that part 3/4 of the song will be full of kiais hahaha XD, beside when you hear closer the kiai on last part is give more impact and additionaly there's "lalalala" part hahaha I love that one XD, so I keep the curent because it fit well with the song itself~
3. 00:27:219 (5) - make same y line with 00:26:998 (4) - this lets move it on 187/112 Fixed
4. 00:27:660 (1) - remove finish for this spinner. i think only whistle already full of tempo. also its really calm part. yeah i agree 00:36:484 (1) - these start fit to finish sound but this seems dont need to. Yess you're right, silly me :p, but I don't remove finish on this one 00:36:484 (1) - because there's cymbal sound being hitted there
5. 00:42:660 (2) - NC cause there is sv chaging. Not necesarry imo, since in my opinion the diffrences itself is not over 0.20, and it's not something that fast to be NCed there
6. 01:23:690 (5) - move it to 164/76 for perfect star shape flow with 01:23:249 (3,4,6,1) - these stuffs? Eun you're really good at this stuffs, fixed~

that's it normal and other stuffs looks fine to me.
hope this is helpful... Yes it's indeed helpful mod Eun thank you♥