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orioncomet
[General]
- Disable countdown ?
- Set a Preview point.

[Easy]
- different offset, fix it to 525 like other diff?

[Normal]
00:14:587 (7,8,1) - a bit too hard for a Normal, imo.
01:12:946 (3) - feel so close with (2).. maybe wrong specing, plz take a look at it.
02:34:275 - hitsound after this KIAI selection a bit too loud x_x

[Insane]
02:34:275 - hitsound after this KIAI selection a bit too loud.
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
fixed :)
Leorda
NI HAO HW

[General]
You need a Easy diff, make sure the easy diff is below 3,00 of star rating

[File]
Your bg (1.jpg) is too large, maximum is 1024x768. The Height is fine, but Width is too large. (current 1091x768)

[Easy]
I think this is a Normal diff, because the star rating is 3,09. You should Rename it to "Normal"

00:22:551 (6) - Really, I don't like this object, when object is stack with 5
00:54:895 (5) - New combo??
01:17:395 (3,4) - Can you find place of this object?? It's really boring, IMO
01:32:395 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]
This is hard, rename it to "Hard" since the Star Rating is over 3,50

00:13:650 (5) - New combo
00:15:525 (1) - Stack with 8 at the end of slider is not stack perfectly

00:28:650 (6) - New combo?
00:50:681 (4,5,1) - Move 2 grid down??
01:01:462 (1) - How about delete 01:00:525 (5,6), move this spinner to 01:00:525 and extend??
01:04:275 (3) - New combo
01:59:587 (1) - Add a finish?
02:20:681 (4) - Move 1 grid up?
02:22:321 (1) - Remove new combo
02:23:025 (3) - New combo

02:24:431 (x) - Add note??
02:36:150 (5,6,7,8) - The pattern it's looks screw up, make it better pattern??
02:44:821 (4) - Maybe, cut short this slider to 02:45:056???
02:47:400 (5) - New combo?
03:03:571 (1) - Move forward to 03:04:275 and cut short??

[Insane]
00:13:415 (6) - Delete this object??
00:17:868 (2,1) - The jumps is too far, IMO
00:21:150 (1,1) - Can you combine this spinner into 1? It's kinda short

00:45:056 (11) - Move 1 grid up?
00:48:337 (7,1) - The jumps is too far, IMO
01:01:228 (8) - Allign with 3?
01:06:853 (13) - Move 1 grid left??
01:15:056 (15) - Maybe remove 1 repeating slider??
01:55:837 (1,2) - The jumps is too far, IMO
02:49:978 (5) - I don't like when this object is stack with 4
02:54:900 (10,11) - The pattern is doesn't looks right


Great song
STAR
rayxdgreatx
star~
Pokie
[Easy]
00:43:650 (1) - 刪掉這spinner, 加break
01:02:400 (1) - ^
01:16:462 (2,3,4) - 下移一格

2.84 star now :)

[Normal]
OA+1?

00:44:587 (3) - ._. like this
00:58:181 (7) - 取消whistle, 換成finish
01:00:525 (1) - 縮短至 01:02:400 ?
01:04:275 (1) - 這裡開始沒有hitsound ;_;?
01:12:243 (2,3) - 不太適合...maybe like this?
01:26:306 (1) - 取消new combo
01:26:775 (2) - new combo
01:33:571 (1) - 這個spinner 移後至01:34:275 (X) - 開始
01:33:806 (X) - 加一個note
02:18:337 (X) - ^?
02:18:571 (5) - no whistle
02:19:978 (X) - 加一個note?
02:20:446 (X) - ^?
02:22:321 (4) - like this?
SPOILER

改了這個記得要fix後面的spacing
02:26:306 (1) - 繼續用soft音效...?
02:58:181 (4) - 結尾往下一格
03:03:806 (X) - 加一個note

[Insane]
01:00:525 (5,6,7,8) - 刪掉?
01:01:462 (1) - 移至^(5)的位置?
01:15:525 (X) - 加一個note (new combo)
01:15:759 (1) - 取消new combo
02:26:306 (1) - 同Normal

Star :) 我基好了
AngelHoney
呼....完成...(BG大小不對 我幫你改好一起放在包里了

:) :)

Download: AngelHoney.rar
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
^^
Cyril Scarlet
Lovely ♥
Sallad4ever
Sorry for the wait :o

[General]
- Add Angel Honey in the tags for every diff
- Could you possibly remove the audio from the vid? It'll be even better if you remove it ;)
- soft-hitclap10 ? is the name right? because if it's not that means it's not used and should be deleted

[Easy]
00:43:650 (x) - add a circle here, the previous notes end so awkward and the break is too short too
01:31:462 (2,3,4) - no hitsound in these notes ?
Combo mod
00:54:900 (1) - remove NC (new combo) then add NC on 00:56:306 (8)
00:56:775 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
Increase HP drain by 1 and decreas OD by 1/2 ?
Try mixing normal hitsound with soft hitsound just like in AngelHoney diff, listen to the drum sound in the music ;)
01:45:525 (1) - I really don't like this slider shape :o
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:24:900 (5) - NC
00:24:900 (5) - new lyric, new time signature, so NC
00:45:993 (1) - remove NC
01:47:400 (6) - NC
01:54:900 (6) - NC

[AngelHoney]
- kewl hitsound, Great (~.^)b
- is the name of the diff only AngelHoney ? Kinda strange maybe add Hard or Insane or Alice or Dere or whatever do you think fit, only AngelHoney is kinda plain
Combo mod
SPOILER
I see that this diff used combo pattern of 1 stanza for 1 combo set, but then the first section kinda break this pattern. So the combo mod will be
00:09:900 (3) - NC
00:11:775 (3) - ^
00:13:650 (3) - ^
00:14:587 (1) - remove NC
00:17:400 (5) - NC
00:21:150 (5) - ^
01:09:900 (8) - ^
There are more but I'm sure you know the pattern now, just count 1,2,3,4 according to the beat and add NC on the beat that land on your number 1 count ;)

[Insane]
00:25:368 (10) - end this on the red tick
00:26:306 (2) - ^

Funny song :lol:
Star
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
im fixing :)
AngelHoney
有mod的話 和我說下 :3 (雖然他這mod我不喜歡:<

(改了幾處音量 別的照舊:P

Download: IOSYS - Alice-Dere (HatsunoWind) [AngelHoney].osu
masuo_old
:)
Sekuyi
Just wondering...after like 30 seconds the music stops it's exactly 00:38:425, then it's dead. In all diffs and when I just want to hear the .ogg it's the same. Anyone else got that prob too?
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
lol
Sekuyi
K, works now^^ Nice maps and sweet song^^
can't find anything~*

..but interesting how ppl could mod a 'broken map' :P
Asutarotto
Hello,HatsunoChu :D

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions

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[General]
-把alice margatroid加到所有难度的tag里
-把IOSYS - Alice-Dere (HatsunoWind).osb删除然后完整上传
-IOSYS - Alice-Dere (HatsunoWind) [Normal ].osu 貌似Normal后面多了一个空格?

-看到你前一个rank图也没用custom combo colour,也许用了会更好?(song setup-colours-enable custom colours)
- 一开始的Normal音效似乎响了点,我觉得50左右比较合适
- 高潮部分的Soft音效音量70也许更好
- 加个comboburst picture?

[Easy]
-我知道触姐很触>_<,不过Easy里就最好不要遮眼睛了?不然会让一些新玩家困惑的说~
00:15:525 (1,2) - 最后一repeat clap
00:19:275 (1,2) - ^
00:23:493 (2,4) - clap
00:27:243 (2,4) - clap
00:30:525 (1) - 开头finish
00:39:900 (5,6) - 开头clap,和前面呼应吧?
00:43:650 (5,6) - 尾端clap,同上
00:53:962 (3) - 开头clap
01:00:525 (1) - 把这个spinner延长到01:03:337并加上finish(easy里的spinner不能太短)
01:04:743 (2) - clap
01:08:493 (2) - clap
01:17:400 (3,4) - 3结尾clap 4 开头clap
01:19:743 (2) - clap
01:23:493 (2) - clap
01:32:400 (3,4) - Easy里不要这样排列slider,对于Easy来说太难啦XD
01:36:145-这根绿线再提前一些,到01:36:032比较好

[Normal]
00:16:462 (3,4) - 1格左移
00:46:931 (7) - 1格右移
00:47:400 (1) - 1格右移
01:12:712 (3,4) - OTL……Normal里最好不要跳啦
01:14:587 (7,1) - spacing,这两个近了
02:35:681 (4) - 1格上移
02:52:556 (9) - 1格左移,1格上移
02:53:025 (1) - 1格左移
01:58:650 (1,2) - 同上,这里跳了
00:45:525 (4) - 按照之前的惯例,new combo
01:24:900 (1) - 按照之前的惯例,这里取消new combo
02:43:650 (1) - ^
02:47:400 (1) - ^
01:03:337:这根绿线往前移一小格

[AngelHoney]
……好insane……玩不来
所以MOD不出什么……


[Insane]
01:06:150 (9) - new combo
01:13:650 (8) - new combo
01:28:650 (11) - new combo
02:36:150 (9) - new combo
02:39:900 (11) - new combo
02:54:900 (10) - new combo

Nice map~ Star~
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
fixed T^T
Shulin
General:

-- You could cut the .mp3 and video, up to you.
-- "softhitclap10" is named wrongly, it should be "softhitclap1" / "softhitclap"?

Easy:

-- Lowest settings o_o.... okay then.
-- The spacing is kinda big for an Easy difficulty.

00:23:025 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly.
00:45:525 (1) - Spacing is kind of close.
01:19:275 (1) - Spacing is too close.

Normal:

-- + 2 overall difficulty makes the map play and look better.

01:00:525 (1) - Silence? The finish sounds bad.
01:19:275 (1) - Move from under slider? Hard to read when 01:12:243 (2,3,4,5) - was 1/2.
01:53:962 (3,4,5) - Looks weird, move 5 a bit to the left?
01:59:587 (1) - Spinner is really short for Normal.
02:25:134 (x) - Note?

AngelHoney:

01:04:743 (2) - Can't see the end with kiai and hit300. Can you reposition this?
01:45:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Plays weird.
03:34:275 (1) - End at 03:38:025

Insane:

01:01:462 (1) - Finish sounds bad.
02:11:775 (1) - End at 02:13:181?
03:34:275 (1) - End at 03:38:025?

All suggestions, + star.
AngelHoney
thx shulin :3

"softhitclap10" is named wrongly, it should be "softhitclap1" / "softhitclap"?
why? thiss just SB sounds for my diff x(

Download: IOSYS - Alice-Dere (HatsunoWind) [AngelHoney].osu
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
all fixed~~~ :) :) :)
but i dont wanna cut the moe video :( :(
ruiwh
触姐=w=
star
Bne-chan
Star~~
Backstep
Touhou ><"

Star. :)
lovhin456
Hi!
General;
- Ah I was wondering if someone was ever going to map this good
- Nice song, I like it (:
- Add some skin elements so it looks better ??
- Aren't the colors for the hitcircles a little too bright ?? I think that the blue doesn't go well...

Easy;
- Use 0.8x distance snap, if you use 1.0x is too much for easy...
- 00:38:025 >> add a finish
- 00:48:806 >> add a finish
- 00:52:556 >> ^
- 01:34:275 >> silence the end of the spinner ??

Normal;
- 00:17:400 >> maybe you can replace the spinner with notes ??
- 00:21:150 >> ^
- 01:34:275 >> silence the end of this spinner
- 01:59:587 >> end the spinner at 02:00:525

AngelHoney;
- Is okk ~ some notes are hard to read I guess but that's it ~

Insane;
- 00:13:650 >> Maybe add notes and get rid of the spinner ??

Star ~ :D
Sigillum
star
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
i fixed (泥马的 敢让我坑了么..
AngelHoney
移到WIP呀(其實我也坑了這首的想法/./
sveta-insane
<3
Lemon Water_old
This is way better than mines...
Kotone
T T 沒什么KD了
Topic Starter
Sumeragi Amane
AFK forever, it may be in the graveyarded
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