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Topic Starter
Buttercup

Secretpipe wrote:

Have a star! c:
thanks pipe o3o
hehe
hi

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good.

Asphyxia's Insane

  1. 00:45:917 (11) - blanket lol
  2. 01:15:055 (10,1,2) - i'd much prefer what you'd done here 01:09:538 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - to emphasize vocals as well as downbeat. consider doing something similar, maybe repeats? currently the big jump at 01:15:055 (10,1) - just feels weird as its not that loud of a sound. same with the one later on.
  3. 01:21:262 (5,6,7) - odd step down in difficulty.

Collab Insane

  1. 00:57:296 (1,3) - this was just weird to play. it seemed like it was stack leniency but its on purpose. i suggest moving 3 so it doesnt overlap with 1, if not stack it with 1.
  2. 01:26:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is so ew, so much obtuse ;_;

Shadren's Hard

  1. 00:44:021 (3) - try not tio have a clap on a repeat.

Normal

  1. 00:22:469 (3,4) - maybe not this rhythm, its weird to play this cuz the sliders are so short~ maybe http://i.imgur.com/POsA5gF.png
  2. 00:33:503 (1) - do a slider. right now you're missing out of important beats because of spinner recovery.
  3. 00:43:331 (6,2) - didnt really fit when you take the whole difficulty into consideration.

ya u definitely need something between Collab Insane and Shadren's Hard. something with that incorporate some 1/4 elements like triples but not as heavy as the insane, using repeats etc. also smaller jumps.

good luck
Asphyxia

handsome wrote:

hi

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good.

Asphyxia's Insane

  1. 00:45:917 (11) - blanket lol Can't help it, if I were to rotate it more to give the note more of a blanketish placement, it'd either touch the stream so it wouldn't matter or it would break the perfect star
  2. 01:15:055 (10,1,2) - i'd much prefer what you'd done here 01:09:538 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - to emphasize vocals as well as downbeat. consider doing something similar, maybe repeats? currently the big jump at 01:15:055 (10,1) - just feels weird as its not that loud of a sound. same with the one later on. I'll most likely change it if someone else also suggests it, but I decided to leave it for now because I like variation and I think that makes the map more interesting to play
  3. 01:21:262 (5,6,7) - odd step down in difficulty. Added some extra spacing to it, yay
Thanks a lot for modding!!

http://puu.sh/ghYK1/cafcfcf3dd.txt
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Tarrasky wrote:

short mod ask in game

Geral

adiciona Short ver. ou algo do tipo no titulo, afinal a musica original tem 5 minutos, vc adicionou "cut version" nas tag mas tag n esclarece a musica
O sliderstack fica melhor sendo 1, pq esse slider aqui da Hard ta bem troll 00:25:227 (1) - 00:27:986 (1) - 00:30:745 (1) - 00:33:503 (1) - Resposta dada no 3º post :P

Normal

01:10:400 (4,5) - muda essas 2 de posição, tipo, coloca um no lugar da outra, acho q o flow fica melhor acho que não muda muita coisa
01:24:193 (5) - faz isso aqui ser reto paralelo a 01:24:883 (1) - , fica mais legal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2823316 ok o3o
01:15:227 (3) - isso pode ser um 3/4 começando em 01:15:055 - prefiro manter o ritmo constante
01:20:745 (4) - /\ ^
01:26:262 (4) - /\ ^
01:09:710 (3) - /\, claro, é algo apenas optativo, ta bom do jeito que tá ^
01:15:917 (4,1) - essa sobreposição não combina mt com o mapa concordo, arrumei


no kds yes kds o3o

handsome wrote:

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good. Shadren's Hard is 3,27 now :3

Normal

  1. 00:22:469 (3,4) - maybe not this rhythm, its weird to play this cuz the sliders are so short~ maybe http://i.imgur.com/POsA5gF.png ok
  2. 00:33:503 (1) - do a slider. right now you're missing out of important beats because of spinner recovery. no changes ;w;
  3. 00:43:331 (6,2) - didnt really fit when you take the whole difficulty into consideration. no changes ;w;
Thanks all for mod o3o


Updated :!:

Normal and Asphyxia's Insane
BoatKrab
Shadrennnn!
xD
Shadren
handsome's mod

handsome wrote:

Shadren's Hard

  1. 00:44:021 (3) - try not tio have a clap on a repeat.

ya u definitely need something between Collab Insane and Shadren's Hard. something with that incorporate some 1/4 elements like triples but not as heavy as the insane, using repeats etc. also smaller jumps. I'm tried to map this follow spread ;( sorry, Nhawak

good luck

Nhawak, pls look at mod to fix issue with hs. Thank you for the mod, handsome

BoatKrab wrote:

Shadrennnn!
xD
hi :D
Nakano Itsuki
Hi
Yay, more dnb.

General
  1. As the previous mods mentioned, the difficulty spread from 2.8 > 4.6 is too large :?
Collab Insane
  1. 00:22:124 (3) Blanket this a bit better to 00:21:952 (2) ? The start of the slider could be closer to the previous note
  2. 00:24:021 (4) This beat seems pretty far from the next slider
  3. 00:40:745 (1) Move this up a bit, it's nearly offscreen
  4. 01:26:952 (5,6,7,8) This pattern... ;w; Also the last note seems awkward and far to jump to the next one
Easy
  1. 00:25:227 (1) Feels weird when this, 00:27:986 (1) and 00:30:745 (1) have slider end on strong beats in the song. Shorten the sliders to the previous white tick and add a beat there perhaps.
  2. 01:28:159 (2) Pretty inconsistent with the previous beats, probably this:
Couldn't really find anything on other diffs. Good luck. :D

I ruined my 69 postcount now
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Thanks thanks :)

I'll apply your mod soon
Kuron-kun
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Normal


00:22:469 (3,4,5) - Nas partes anteriores você tava seguindo um ritmo diferente do que você usou agora, que seria esse. Eu acho melhor você usar esse mesmo ritmo aqui pra manter a consistencia e ficar mais bonitinho. E pra não ficar sem opção de pattern, aqui uma sugestão.

00:36:779 (3) - O flow aqui ficou meio estranho, porque o slider tá curvado pra direita e a intenção é ele ir pra esquerda. É só mudar a posição dele com um Ctrl + H e ajeitar 00:36:262 (2) - depois disso.

01:07:986 - Essa parte antes do kiai é bem forte e você não usou nenhuma nota aí. Mesmo pra um Normal ficou bem vazio. Você pode colocar um slider 1/2 ou duas notas, você que sabe.

Shadren's Hard


00:25:227 (1) - The spacing here is low if you compare with the previous section. Even if the SV changes, the emphasis of the beat doesn't. I'd recommend putting the same spacing here too. Same goes for 00:27:986 (1) - and 00:30:745 (1) - .

00:35:227 (1,2) - This is the only part of this section you started a slider on a downbeat. It's better to change places and put the slider on the big white tick, instead of the red one. There is no emphasis on it. Example of pattern.

Collab Insane


00:21:434 (1) - Sempre quando vinha um tick brando grande você usava um spacing bem mais alto que o normal, aqui você não fez. Seria legal aumentar também e fazer um jump. Uma sugestão seria você simplesmente afastar o slider mais pra direita, assim não estragaria a blanket.

00:29:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a bit too much overmaped. You even used a really low volume to hide the sound of the note while on the other patterns you used 1/1 and 2/1 sliders. I don't know if it's a good idea, I'd recommend to use 1/2, 2/1 :c

00:35:055 - Essa seção tá bem legal, eu só não curti muito as partes que você não colocou jumps nos beats mais fortes, tipo 00:40:745 (1) - e 00:43:503 (1) - sendo que nos outros você colocou. Mas sei lá né, é só frescurinha minha.

00:46:262 (4) - E aqui você poderia aumentar o DS também ja que esse beat é BEM mais forte que esses 00:45:745 (1,2,3) - , mas a pattern de star ia pro saco. Mas se você quiser ver como fica, tenta mover pra algo próximo de x484 y96. Eu achei bem daora também.

01:16:607 (1) - Porra, para de usar jump errado. Aqui a enfase é bem maior que 01:15:917 (3,4,5,6) - e nem usa jump. Seu lixo!!!!!!

01:24:883 (1) - Same thing I've mentioned above about the wrong jump. This beat is really stronger than 01:23:848 (2,4) - and 01:25:055 (2,3,4) - and you used jumps on those, but didn't use on the stronger beat.

Asphyxia's Insane


00:18:676 (1) - You added a jump here 00:18:331 (3,4) - but you didn't here 00:18:676 (1) - , and the emphasis on this part is higher than 00:18:331 (3,4) - . I'd recommend increase the DS a bit to create a jump. Plus, you used a jump here 00:18:331 (3,4) -.

Lindo!
Topic Starter
Buttercup

StarrStyx wrote:

General
  1. As the previous mods mentioned, the difficulty spread from 2.8 > 4.6 is too large :? Shadren's Hard is 3,27 stars now :)
Collab Insane
  1. 00:22:124 (3) Blanket this a bit better to 00:21:952 (2) ? The start of the slider could be closer to the previous note I changed the slider :D
  2. 00:24:021 (4) This beat seems pretty far from the next slider I added CTRL + G in the sliders Krfawy not kill me pls ;w;
  3. 00:40:745 (1) Move this up a bit, it's nearly offscreen I don't see a problem, sorry ;w;
  4. 01:26:952 (5,6,7,8) This pattern... ;w; Also the last note seems awkward and far to jump to the next one Krfawy part xD
Easy
  1. 00:25:227 (1) Feels weird when this, 00:27:986 (1) and 00:30:745 (1) have slider end on strong beats in the song. Shorten the sliders to the previous white tick and add a beat there perhaps. fixed
  2. 01:28:159 (2) Pretty inconsistent with the previous beats, probably this: fixed
Thank you very much :)

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Near wrote:

(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Oi gato (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Normal


00:22:469 (3,4,5) - Nas partes anteriores você tava seguindo um ritmo diferente do que você usou agora, que seria esse. Eu acho melhor você usar esse mesmo ritmo aqui pra manter a consistencia e ficar mais bonitinho. E pra não ficar sem opção de pattern, aqui uma sugestão. ok

00:36:779 (3) - O flow aqui ficou meio estranho, porque o slider tá curvado pra direita e a intenção é ele ir pra esquerda. É só mudar a posição dele com um Ctrl + H e ajeitar 00:36:262 (2) - depois disso. ok (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

01:07:986 - Essa parte antes do kiai é bem forte e você não usou nenhuma nota aí. Mesmo pra um Normal ficou bem vazio. Você pode colocar um slider 1/2 ou duas notas, você que sabe. coloquei

Collab Insane


00:21:434 (1) - Sempre quando vinha um tick brando grande você usava um spacing bem mais alto que o normal, aqui você não fez. Seria legal aumentar também e fazer um jump. Uma sugestão seria você simplesmente afastar o slider mais pra direita, assim não estragaria a blanket. acho que arrumei

00:35:055 - Essa seção tá bem legal, eu só não curti muito as partes que você não colocou jumps nos beats mais fortes, tipo 00:40:745 (1) - e 00:43:503 (1) - sendo que nos outros você colocou. Mas sei lá né, é só frescurinha minha. arrumei (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

00:46:262 (4) - E aqui você poderia aumentar o DS também ja que esse beat é BEM mais forte que esses 00:45:745 (1,2,3) - , mas a pattern de star ia pro saco. Mas se você quiser ver como fica, tenta mover pra algo próximo de x484 y96. Eu achei bem daora também. não mudei, estragou minha meiga estrelinha </3

01:16:607 (1) - Porra, para de usar jump errado. Aqui a enfase é bem maior que 01:15:917 (3,4,5,6) - e nem usa jump. Seu lixo!!!!!! acho que arrumei sua biscate ousada

Lindo! vc (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
Obrigado pelo mod Kuron-kun gatinho ヽ(´▽`)/
Nathan
[Shadren's Hard]
  1. 01:27:296 (9,1) - Doesn't this deserve a bit of a jump too? It's on a downbeat with a finish
  2. 01:28:159 (3) - Curving this a bit could carry more momentum from the downward movement of 01:27:986 (2), it should also lead better into 01:28:676 (4)
  3. 01:10:400 (8) - ^
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:21:262 (4,1) - Isn't the spacing here quite small compared to parts like 00:18:503 (2,1) and 00:15:745 (2,1)
  2. 00:27:986 (3) - Try stacking this under the head of 00:26:952 (1), it'll make spacing consistent throughout 00:26:952 (1,2,3)
  3. 00:32:469 (1,2) - Stack is off by 1 grid ;w;
  4. 00:42:469 (6,7) - Decrease spacing a bit here, it doesn't really make sense to have it as large as in 00:40:572 (8,1) when 00:42:814 (7) isn't as emphasized
That's it, nice map
have a star owo
Shadren
Near's mod

Near wrote:

Shadren's Hard


00:25:227 (1) - The spacing here is low if you compare with the previous section. Even if the SV changes, the emphasis of the beat doesn't. I'd recommend putting the same spacing here too. Same goes for 00:27:986 (1) - and 00:30:745 (1) - .

00:35:227 (1,2) - This is the only part of this section you started a slider on a downbeat. It's better to change places and put the slider on the big white tick, instead of the red one. There is no emphasis on it. Example of pattern.
Fixed all!

sukiNathan's mod

sukiNathan wrote:

[Shadren's Hard]
  1. 01:27:296 (9,1) - Doesn't this deserve a bit of a jump too? It's on a downbeat with a finish
  2. 01:28:159 (3) - Curving this a bit could carry more momentum from the downward movement of 01:27:986 (2), it should also lead better into 01:28:676 (4)
  3. 01:10:400 (8) - ^
Fixed all!

Thank you for the mods, guys!

Diff : http://puu.sh/gxsCI/69effe365f.osu
Topic Starter
Buttercup

sukiNathan wrote:

[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:21:262 (4,1) - Isn't the spacing here quite small compared to parts like 00:18:503 (2,1) and 00:15:745 (2,1) fixed :3
  2. 00:42:469 (6,7) - Decrease spacing a bit here, it doesn't really make sense to have it as large as in 00:40:572 (8,1) when 00:42:814 (7) isn't as emphasized no changes ;3;
That's it, nice map
have a star owo
thanks :)
phaZ
yay, again someone is mapping this song <3!
Topic Starter
Buttercup
I didn't give up o3o
I'll rank this later :3
hent2222
very good beatmap. I'm waiting for ranked :3
xLolicore-
Ayy more DnB! :DDDDDD
Edit: Shot a star. Hope it gets ranked ^^
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
xLolicore-

Nhawak wrote:

Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
Can I make one? O:
Pappy

xLolicore- wrote:

Nhawak wrote:

Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
Can I make one? O:
Slots are taken.
xLolicore-

Pappy wrote:

Slots are taken.
Oh RIP ;w;
Topic Starter
Buttercup
sorry ;w;
Xilver15
The hypeeee
Irreversible
Hey I dunno which parts are mine anymore... and you deleted the description.
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Irreversible wrote:

Hey I dunno which parts are mine anymore... and you deleted the description.
sent via forum pm lel
Ciyus Miapah
hey

add galvenize diff here C:

edit: Foreverends is here! must download

edit2: the hell....
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Fort wrote:

hey

add galvenize diff here C:

edit: Foreverends is here! must download

edit2: the hell....
his diff isn't done xD
Foreverends
sorry.........QAQ
Topic Starter
Buttercup
.
Founntain
Mod From me ^^

Easy:

00:25:227 (2) - Maybe a Slider?
00:26:952 (1,2) - Same ^
00:29:710 (1,2) - Same ^
00:35:745 - Note Here?
00:41:262 - Same ^
00:42:296 - Something Like this?

01:07:296 - Something Like this were pretty nice?

01:13:848 (1,2) - Same Curves or Other Sliders? But not a Straight Line
01:26:262 (3) - Same ^
01:33:159 (1) - Same ^
01:38:331 - Maybe a Note Here?
01:42:814 (3) - Start that one here 01:42:641 - and let the slider end here 01:43:676 -
02:20:055 (1) - Maybe a Curve but the Line is Pretty well here. (Its an Idea)

Normal:

00:58:676 (2) - Slider Like This


01:01:434 (2) - Same ^ Only that you make it up

Shadren's Hard:

01:38:676 (1,2) - Make them Like these Two 01:35:917 (1,2) -
01:33:159 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:30:400 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:53:676 (5,6,7) - Single Tab Part Maybe?
01:56:434 (4,5,6) - Same ^

galv's Insane:

00:17:814 (2) - Delete this one
00:40:745 (1,2,3) - Curves?
00:44:538 (5) - A Curve is Welcome here as Well for a Sexy Flow
02:13:245 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change it to a Curve Stream.
02:35:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same ^ (maybe a Snake Stream)

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Thats From my Side

Good Luck with your map
Topic Starter
Buttercup
^
thank you, I'll apply it when the map is ready to modding/rank

edit:
mod:

raiko's dance

00:46:090 - seems empty, add a note
00:51:799 - remove it, there isn't any strong beat to emphasize this note
01:40:400 (3,4,5,6) - confuse rhythm, try to do the same rhythm that I made on insane
02:14:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - pls, this part wanna kill you cuz you made stacked notes, there is emphasis enough for you do full screen 1/2 mortal jumps 1/2 nice jumps

overmap things
imo u need to change these things cuz they are absurdly overmapped and can complicate the ranking process :c
try to put 1/2 beautiful jumps, will get cool
01:12:124 (5,6,7,8) -
01:15:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:18:676 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:434 (3,4,5,6) - do the same that you made at 01:10:227 (3,4,5,6,7) - cute non-overmapped 1/2 notes
01:23:503 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pls
01:26:952 (4,5,6,7) -
01:53:590 (5) - only this note
02:03:159 (5,6) -
02:12:814 (3,4,5,6) - 1/4 sounds starts only at 7th note
02:16:434 (5,1,2,3,4) -
02:17:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - pls
02:22:296 (3,4,5) -
02:24:193 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
02:27:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:29:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
02:32:986 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -

asphyxia's extra
sup
I collected some opinions and a lot of people think that your diff will be better ar 9,3~9,5 cuz there are MANY MANY MANY big continuous jumps and ar 9 plays slow and weird to read (I agree)
:D

edit2:
mapset done WOoOooOoOoOoOo
*mods coming*
not 100% done cuz it is missing kawa's sb but i think i can start to hunt mods uwu
ghm12


Boa sorte :3
Topic Starter
Buttercup
obrigado owo/
vitail
Gerawakversible's Insane

01:25:572 (1,2,1,2) - this is imposible

Nice song
_vanity
Hello, from my modding queue. o/
[Easy]
  1. 01:46:952 (1,2) - Blanket? ;o; http://puu.sh/mlpQU.png
[Normal]
  1. 02:01:779 (3,4) - Overlapping sliders like this aren't very appealing in my opinion.
  2. 00:30:227 (2,3) - Another possible blanket?
[Gerawakversible's Insane]
  1. 00:18:331 (4) - Move this to x: 224 y: 216?
  1. 01:59:021 (3) - I found it a bit odd that you decided to pause here so suddenly. I think you should fill in the break, but that's just what I think. :?
[]
A rather small mod, because I didn't find too many issues. I left out Damnae's Light Insane, because it seems to be incomplete. Sorry. :|
Shiny-
Hello fren! Mod as requested~

[General]
Why is SuicideSheeep in tags?
Also add Gerawakversible's collabers' names to tags

[Normal]
01:44:193 (1) - having the kink in the slider land on the snare would be much better
02:03:503 (1) - snap the red anchor to the downbeat?
02:13:159 (1) - same^
02:22:814 (1) - ^^

I can appreciate a good normal when I see one ^^

[galv]
I assume the high AR is to match the unusually high SV? Even then, I still think AR 9.5 is too high for this map :/
OD seems a little high too, I'd drop it down closer to 8

00:37:297 (10) - why is this the only snareclap that is a jump? I think all notes on the 3rd white tick should be jumps like this to emphasize the snareclaps
01:17:642 (5,1) - make this a jump to match vocals? even DS before and after the (5) doesn't make sense
00:59:193 (8) - sounds like the "me" sound you tried to map actually lands on the red tick, not the blue. i feel like this pattern would sound better
01:17:642 (5,1) - higher spacing here to emphasize the vocals
01:18:676 (4,5) - i'm not a fan of patterns like this but i can't find an objective reason to change it. ignore me, but personally i would change it
01:21:435 (1) - this note is noticeably more forceful than everything else and it has half the DS?
01:30:142 (6) - start this on the white tick since the record scratches start there
01:39:021 (2,3) - add more spacing here because of the trumpet

[Gerawakversible]
00:23:503 (1,1,1,1) - why NC every note?
00:49:365 (2,3) - this slight overlap is bothering me :[
01:19:193 (7,8,1,2) - seems a little too close
01:21:779 (8) - this is snapped to 1/16 for some reason?
01:25:572 (1,2,1,2,1) - lol this has to be a joke, no way this belongs here. look at the tiny leeway the player has to hit every note without moving the cursor, and take into consideration that the diagonal patterning will cause sightread issues for the players less experienced in reading bullshit that this diff is targeted at. not sure why anyone thought this was a good idea.
01:26:952 (1) - 3/4 slider skips a beat and doesn't land on anything. i know it's in every map ever, but it's still stupid.
01:30:055 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make this part into slider jumps? Just having the stream continue with the same DS doesn't emphasize the important record scratches, since the drums stopped
01:48:762 (4) - triple doesn't belong here, there a triple here though 01:48:934 -
01:55:745 (3) - remove the whistle on the sliderend and put one on here for consistency with the previous pattern 01:57:814 (1) -
01:59:021 - not going to map this break? :[
02:13:676 (3,4) - these two barely touch the hp bar on default skin
02:09:969 (7) - this note belongs here instead 02:09:624 -
02:14:021 (3) - idk but it sounds like the stream ends here
02:28:676 (3,4,5,6,7) - this whole stream doesn't fit
02:32:124 (7,1) - these would feel so much better on red ticks to match vocals

tbh there seemed like a lot of overmapping for a ~5 star map that is the easiest insane (not counting light insane). Whoever did the part starting at 02:04:538 - always started triples and streams 1/4 late, just something I noticed.
Sorry I can't mod the rest of the set. Couldn't find anything in Easy or Damnae's, and I can't mod Asphyxia's or Raiko's.
Also I am physically unable to mod Hards, so sorry Shadren ;-;

Hope to see this ranked soon~!
Damnae

_vanity wrote:

I left out Damnae's Light Insane, because it seems to be incomplete. Sorry. :|
Bss is being weird, you have to click "update" after downloading the mapset to get the finished diff.
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Fluttershy552

Fluttershy552 wrote:

Mod From me ^^

Easy:

00:25:227 (2) - Maybe a Slider? not necessary
00:26:952 (1,2) - Same ^ not necessary
00:29:710 (1,2) - Same ^ not necessary
00:35:745 - Note Here?
00:41:262 - Same ^
00:42:296 - Something Like this? very hard for my easy style imo

01:07:296 - Something Like this were pretty nice? I prefer to keep empty

01:13:848 (1,2) - Same Curves or Other Sliders? But not a Straight Line I like straight sliders too
01:26:262 (3) - Same ^ ^
01:33:159 (1) - Same ^ ^
01:38:331 - Maybe a Note Here? nah
01:42:814 (3) - Start that one here 01:42:641 - and let the slider end here 01:43:676 - there isn't any important beat at 01:42:641 -
02:20:055 (1) - Maybe a Curve but the Line is Pretty well here. (Its an Idea) keeping straight slider

Normal:

00:58:676 (2) - Slider Like This seems nice but straight slider is a nice choice too


01:01:434 (2) - Same ^ Only that you make it up ^

_vanity

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/
[Easy]
  1. 01:46:952 (1,2) - Blanket? ;o; http://puu.sh/mlpQU.png my current pattern is nice too ;u;
[Normal]
  1. 02:01:779 (3,4) - Overlapping sliders like this aren't very appealing in my opinion. it plays well imo, I can change it soon if another people complain
  2. 00:30:227 (2,3) - Another possible blanket? nah
[Gerawakversible's Insane]
  1. 00:18:331 (4) - Move this to x: 224 y: 216?
  1. 01:59:021 (3) - I found it a bit odd that you decided to pause here so suddenly. I think you should fill in the break, but that's just what I think. :?
[]
A rather small mod, because I didn't find too many issues. I left out Damnae's Light Insane, because it seems to be incomplete. Sorry. :| it isn't xD

Shiny-

Shiny- wrote:

Hello fren! Mod as requested~

[General]
Why is SuicideSheeep in tags? removed
Also add Gerawakversible's collabers' names to tags done

[Normal]
01:44:193 (1) - having the kink in the slider land on the snare would be much better fixed
02:03:503 (1) - snap the red anchor to the downbeat? done
02:13:159 (1) - same^ done
02:22:814 (1) - ^^ keeping it

[Gerawakversible]
00:23:503 (1,1,1,1) - why NC every note? <~ irre
00:49:365 (2,3) - this slight overlap is bothering me :[ <~ geru
01:19:193 (7,8,1,2) - seems a little too close <~ geru
01:21:779 (8) - this is snapped to 1/16 for some reason? <~ irre
01:25:572 (1,2,1,2,1) - lol this has to be a joke, no way this belongs here. look at the tiny leeway the player has to hit every note without moving the cursor, and take into consideration that the diagonal patterning will cause sightread issues for the players less experienced in reading bullshit that this diff is targeted at. not sure why anyone thought this was a good idea. <~ irre
01:26:952 (1) - 3/4 slider skips a beat and doesn't land on anything. i know it's in every map ever, but it's still stupid. <~ irre
01:30:055 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make this part into slider jumps? Just having the stream continue with the same DS doesn't emphasize the important record scratches, since the drums stopped everything stream fits too imo
01:48:762 (4) - triple doesn't belong here, there a triple here though 01:48:934 - fixed
01:55:745 (3) - remove the whistle on the sliderend and put one on here for consistency with the previous pattern 01:57:814 (1) - <~ geru
01:59:021 - not going to map this break? :[ he will map ahah
02:13:676 (3,4) - these two barely touch the hp bar on default skin fixed i guess
02:09:969 (7) - this note belongs here instead 02:09:624 - <~ irre
02:14:021 (3) - idk but it sounds like the stream ends here fixed
02:28:676 (3,4,5,6,7) - this whole stream doesn't fit it flows the vocal
02:32:124 (7,1) - these would feel so much better on red ticks to match vocals im flowing the instrumental here

tbh there seemed like a lot of overmapping for a ~5 star map that is the easiest insane (not counting light insane). Whoever did the part starting at 02:04:538 - always started triples and streams 1/4 late, just something I noticed. <~ irre

Sorry I can't mod the rest of the set. Couldn't find anything in Easy or Damnae's, and I can't mod Asphyxia's or Raiko's.
Also I am physically unable to mod Hards, so sorry Shadren ;-;

Hope to see this ranked soon~!

thanks guyssssss
FCL
  • [Eazy]
    00:15:831 (2,1) - you coud to make nice blanket here. Yep, it's hard, but i did it
    221,304,15831,2,0,P|200:354|128:195,1,437.499940395355,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    124,292,18676,6,0,B|170:266|227:299|227:299|281:324|341:288,2,227.499969005585,4|0|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    00:24:193 (1) - move to 164 212 for nice blanket pattern
    01:20:745 (3) - blanket again, Move to 168 24
    01:27:641 (1,1) - you should to increase distance between there to 4 beats since it's minimum for easy/normal diffs

    [Normal]
    01:16:607 (1) - meh, this place. Move it to 328 48 to create a blanket here
    01:29:365 (1) - 4 beat spinner is too short for Normal. Rework it would be better
    01:59:710 (4) - again blanket. Move it to 436 284

    [Shadren's Hard]
    01:15:745 (6) - На самом деле эту ноту достаточно сложно прочитать с таким лоу AR-ом. Но стак с концом 01:14:538 (3) - смотрится и читается отлично, рекомендую переместить туда.
    01:24:710 (9) - ^. Ну и остальные похожие моменты, у тебя их достаточно
    02:10:917 (6) - А может их лучше треугольником? Перемести на 164 144
    02:15:572 (5) - тут начинается киай, ну и соответственно а вокалу добавляется музыка. Поэтому нк был бы тут логичен.

    [Asphyxia's Extra]
    00:29:710 (1,2,3) - I guess you forgot to silence ends of sliders here xD
    01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - this form... maybe make a right square?

    [Raiko's Dance]
    00:29:710 (1,2,3) - same as Asphyxia's Extra
    01:11:865 - this tick have't a strong sound for map since wood part started at 01:11:952 (4) - okay idk
    01:23:934 - okay, i am sure that here not find a strong sound for map
Good luck with this map!
galvenize
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