Hello, I'm going to disqualify the map with these reasons.
Reason for Disqualification
- Metadata issue, source should be empty
- Poor MP3 quality
- Unacceptable patterns and some LN usages
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[General]
Learning to make storyboard is a good thing. But your effect needs more improvements. Also it looks scary. I can get the feel you want to show in storyboard, but the images fuzzy. So it caused whole feel made us feel scared.
Source should be empty. Also you can add Newgrounds into tags.
And, your mp3 quality is kinda poor, you should change new one.
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Insane]
My personal suggestion about the HP and OD setting is, you can just try to make it lower.
00:49:774 (49774|3,49824|2,49874|1,49924|0,49974|2,50024|1,50074|3,50124|2,50174|1,50224|0,50274|2,50324|1,50374|3,50424|2,50474|1,50524|0) - Actually this is not 1/4, but I'm not ask you to change to 1/8 or other snapping. But before this part it was 1/4 sounds, I think it may have other way can make this part different from 1/4 parts and not to ruin it. Try to use other way to express this part.
About LN usages, I hope you can read what I said in Extra.
About SV changes, check it in Extra diff too.
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Extra]
Same as Insane, my personal suggestion about the HP and OD setting is, you can just try to make it lower.
00:12:974 (12974|3,12974|0,12974|2,13174|3,13174|2,13374|0,13374|2,13574|3,13574|2,13774|0,13774|2,13974|3,13974|2,14074|0,14174|1,14174|3,14274|2,14374|1,14374|0,14474|2,14574|3,14574|1,14774|0,14774|1,14974|3,14974|1,15174|0,15174|2,15274|1,15374|2,15374|3,15474|0,15574|3,15574|2,15774|0,15774|1,15874|2,15974|3,15974|1,16074|0,16074|2,16174|3,16174|1,16374|1,16374|0,16574|1,16574|3,16774|0,16774|1,16974|3,16974|1,17174|0,17174|1,17274|3,17374|0,17374|1,17574|3,17574|2,17674|1,17774|2,17774|0,17974|2,17974|3,18174|0,18174|2,18374|3,18374|2,18574|0,18574|1,18674|3,18674|2,18774|0,18774|1,18874|2,18974|3,18974|1,19074|2,19174|0,19174|1,19274|2,19374|3,19374|0,19374|1,19574|0,19574|1,19774|3,19774|1,19974|0,19974|1,20174|3,20174|1,20374|1,20374|0,20474|3,20574|0,20574|1,20674|2,20774|3,20774|1,20874|2,20974|0,20974|1,21074|2,21174|3,21174|0,21274|1,21374|3,21374|0,21474|2,21574|3,21574|1,21674|2,21774|0,21774|1,21874|3,21874|2,21974|0,21974|1,22074|2,22174|3,22174|0,22174|1,22274|2) - Such LN usage we can accept. But your patterns are very uncomfortable, especially in such high BPM song, I hope you rearrange patterns well. It could be better.
00:22:574 - to 00:25:774 - SV changes here are unnecessary. The effect is unobvious. Also It affected playing, you should remove it.
00:28:874 (28874|0,28874|3,28974|2,28974|1,29174|0,29174|3,29174|1,29374|2,29374|0,29374|3,29574|0,29574|3,29574|1,29774|3,29774|0,29774|2,29974|0,29974|3,29974|1,30074|2,30174|0,30174|3,30174|1,30374|0,30374|3,30374|2,30574|0,30574|3,30574|1,30774|0,30774|3,30774|2,30974|0,30974|3,30974|1,31174|3,31174|0,31174|2) - It is just same as the LN parts I mentioned. The patterns are really uncomfortable. Actually, high BPM songs aren't suitable to use much LNs. So even if we accept the LN usage here, but I'll recommend you just use normal notes.
00:31:374 (31374|0,31374|1,31474|1,31474|2,31574|3,31574|2,31674|0,31674|1,31774|2,31774|1,31874|2,31874|3,31974|1,31974|0,32074|1,32074|2) - Unacceptable patterns, as I said, it is a high BPM song, disperse the chord patterns will be better.
00:37:574 (37574|0,37599|1,37624|3,37649|2,37674|0,37699|1,37724|3,37749|2) - Unfortunately, we know you're bored with stairs patterns, but such patterns in 300 BPM is kinda nonsense. Please change to other better patterns.
00:41:574 (41574|3,41599|2,41624|0,41649|1,41674|3,41699|2,41724|0,41749|1) - Just same as I said in last point.
00:44:974 (44974|0,44974|1,44974|2,44974|3,45174|0,45174|2,45174|1,45374|0,45374|3,45374|2,45574|0,45574|2,45574|1,45774|0,45774|2,45774|3,45974|1,45974|0,45974|2,46174|0,46174|2,46174|3,46374|0,46374|2,46374|1,46574|1,46574|0,46574|3,46674|2,46774|1,46774|0,46774|3,46874|2,46974|3,46974|1,46974|0,47074|2,47174|1,47174|0,47174|3,47274|2,47374|0,47374|1,47374|3,47474|2,47574|1,47574|0,47574|3,47674|2,47774|3,47774|1,47774|0,47874|2,47974|1,47974|3,47974|0,48074|2) - LN usage could be better. Also it is same issue as I pointed out, so I won't make more explanations.
Here is an another QAT's example for you.
00:48:174 - The note still remain stream with 1/4 snap, but when at this part.
00:49:774 - All note still remain with 1/4 stream even the music stream are changing and make it more faster than before.
00:49:774 - SV changes in this part unnecessary too. First, it is unobvious. Second, it is burst part, it is unsuitable.
01:00:174 (60174|0,60199|1,60224|3,60249|2,60274|0,60299|1,60324|3,60349|2,60574|3,60599|2,60624|0,60649|1,60674|3,60699|2,60724|0,60749|1,60774|2,60799|3,60824|1,60849|0,60874|2,60899|3,60924|1,60949|0) - Unacceptable patterns, the reason is still same, so I won't just make explanations too.
After this, I noticed there are still same issues. So I won't point those issues out for avoid to write verbose disqualification reasons. Actually this map can be a challenge for players. But before that, you must make everything well, then players can just enjoy the map well. I expect you'll have a good performance, good luck after disqualified !
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