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Best JB of 2015
什么激霸玩意
逼我favorite
amazing!!
amazing ge pi.
nooooooooob
nooooooooob
awesome collab~ SB please /me runs
05:15:767 —> 05:22:405
y r u trolling me so hard m9?
y r u trolling me so hard m9?
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camellia <3
lol i am in tags first cause i am the best mapper here (wut
add marathon as tags xD
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Collab
02:12:577 (2) - This sounds better as a single note instead of a slider.
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I prefer the old pattern with the 2 tick sliders here it goes better with the rhythm x_x
also plz add this note here: 02:59:905 (4)
still love the map <3
plz no kudosu for this just suggesting
02:12:577 (2) - This sounds better as a single note instead of a slider.
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I prefer the old pattern with the 2 tick sliders here it goes better with the rhythm x_x
also plz add this note here: 02:59:905 (4)
still love the map <3
plz no kudosu for this just suggesting
wtf this hitsounding
Topic Starter
eh?Azer wrote:
wtf this hitsounding
req from QQ
[Collab]
collab的參與者都有哪些？
00:01:026 (1,1,1,1) - 這些滑條可以試試利用多點綠線，在slidertick可以調音效，感覺會更帶感 還有這些話條的頭可以考慮提高音效
00:43:612 (3) - 感覺這個滑條太平靜了，試一下減速型或加速型 加形狀
00:46:198 - 跳過的音有點怪，個人感覺滑條停在白線會舒服很多 不想改的話記得修一下00:46:026 (1,2) - blanket
01:02:663 - 這裡開始的強音，01:02:750 (4) - 這個感覺有點太晚了 向前挪1/4試試？挪的話最好也調一下位置
02:35:163 (1,1,1) - 分成5個圈打擊感更好
02:39:991 - 我覺得可以從這裡就開始map，這樣會更融合前面的break之前結束的樂器 和break結束后的樂器
02:43:784 (7) - 這個尾巴可以考慮減低音量
02:44:244 (1) - unsnap，這裡應該是藍線開始 正確的是這樣的：
03:22:232 (2,3,1) - 試一下更大的弧度？因為感覺之前是逐漸變大 但是這裡感覺和03:21:888 (2,3,1) - 弧度一樣
03:33:094 (1) - 試試去掉頭whistle，尾用whistle，音量提高？
04:34:129 (1,2) - 這裡我覺得跟的和歌里有點亂，感覺不是很合適，試試這個節奏：
04:50:681 (1,1,1,1) - 和開頭的建議一樣
摸完了 神
音效嚇我一跳
Good luck!
[Collab]
collab的參與者都有哪些？
00:01:026 (1,1,1,1) - 這些滑條可以試試利用多點綠線，在slidertick可以調音效，感覺會更帶感 還有這些話條的頭可以考慮提高音效
00:43:612 (3) - 感覺這個滑條太平靜了，試一下減速型或加速型 加形狀
00:46:198 - 跳過的音有點怪，個人感覺滑條停在白線會舒服很多 不想改的話記得修一下00:46:026 (1,2) - blanket
01:02:663 - 這裡開始的強音，01:02:750 (4) - 這個感覺有點太晚了 向前挪1/4試試？挪的話最好也調一下位置
02:35:163 (1,1,1) - 分成5個圈打擊感更好
02:39:991 - 我覺得可以從這裡就開始map，這樣會更融合前面的break之前結束的樂器 和break結束后的樂器
02:43:784 (7) - 這個尾巴可以考慮減低音量
02:44:244 (1) - unsnap，這裡應該是藍線開始 正確的是這樣的：
03:22:232 (2,3,1) - 試一下更大的弧度？因為感覺之前是逐漸變大 但是這裡感覺和03:21:888 (2,3,1) - 弧度一樣
03:33:094 (1) - 試試去掉頭whistle，尾用whistle，音量提高？
04:34:129 (1,2) - 這裡我覺得跟的和歌里有點亂，感覺不是很合適，試試這個節奏：
04:50:681 (1,1,1,1) - 和開頭的建議一樣
摸完了 神
音效嚇我一跳
Good luck!
水摸
[Collab]
这diff名太不霸气了
01:20:681 (5) - 144|332 might be better
02:43:784 (7,1,2,3) - consider making distance here larger, or making the flow a bit curved, since the beat snap here is different (1/3)
04:14:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this distance is like an evil after slidering such a long time. consider reducing distance here
05:15:767 - wtf this period.. i don't think beats here support such intense rhythm, and however, after the calm part (04:56:198 (1,1,1) -), it seems nonsense to map like this imo.
好像没有什么好摸的 star
[Collab]
这diff名太不霸气了
01:20:681 (5) - 144|332 might be better
02:43:784 (7,1,2,3) - consider making distance here larger, or making the flow a bit curved, since the beat snap here is different (1/3)
04:14:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this distance is like an evil after slidering such a long time. consider reducing distance here
05:15:767 - wtf this period.. i don't think beats here support such intense rhythm, and however, after the calm part (04:56:198 (1,1,1) -), it seems nonsense to map like this imo.
好像没有什么好摸的 star
03:49:646 (1,1) - is something like this rankable?
[Collab]
00:44:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 两个一组做距离渐增怎么样呀 现在这样的话感觉后面接的00:45:163 (1) - 滑条速度有点太快了
00:52:750 (2) - 稍微有点没包好
01:41:715 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里中间的间距比两遍明显的大，可以改成像01:43:094 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 间距一样
01:40:681 (1,2,1,2) - 这间距也偏小了一点
01:44:819 (1,2,1,2) - 这儿偏大
如果是故意摆的话上述算我没说
02:15:508 (1) - 总感觉挺奇怪的02:15:508 (1) - 滑条尾巴上的音太重了
02:26:801 (2) - 这也是
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉间距太小了，是不是应该放大一圈，后面也跟着放大
03:50:594 (1,2) - 没包好
！
00:44:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 两个一组做距离渐增怎么样呀 现在这样的话感觉后面接的00:45:163 (1) - 滑条速度有点太快了
00:52:750 (2) - 稍微有点没包好
01:41:715 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里中间的间距比两遍明显的大，可以改成像01:43:094 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 间距一样
01:40:681 (1,2,1,2) - 这间距也偏小了一点
01:44:819 (1,2,1,2) - 这儿偏大
如果是故意摆的话上述算我没说
02:15:508 (1) - 总感觉挺奇怪的02:15:508 (1) - 滑条尾巴上的音太重了
02:26:801 (2) - 这也是
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉间距太小了，是不是应该放大一圈，后面也跟着放大
03:50:594 (1,2) - 没包好
！
yes
good luck!
General
- normal-hitclap25.wav is unused
- AI mod says about some unsnapped objects
Collab
- 00:49:301 (2,1) - to exchange them makes better flow imo
- 01:01:026 (1) - remove NC? like 00:49:991 (3) -
- 01:02:750 (4) - it should be start at 01:02:663 - , you can be hear the strong sound
- 01:03:526 (2) - it's also strange, sound can be hear at 01:03:612 -
- 01:28:526 (2) - for safe of SV changing from x0.5 to x1.0 in calm part, add NC?
- 02:17:146 (2,1) - how about stack them?
- 02:18:784 (1) - remove NC
- 02:35:163 (1,1) - add drum-hitwhistle 98 sound on head with 20% volume? lol
- 05:19:905 (1,2) - how about ctrl+h to be symmetry with center line?
good luck!
Topic Starter
Side wrote:
Collab
02:12:577 (2) - This sounds better as a single note instead of a slider.
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I prefer the old pattern with the 2 tick sliders here it goes better with the rhythm x_x prefer current one
also plz add this note here: 02:59:905 (4)
still love the map <3
plz no kudosu for this just suggesting
Moecho wrote:
req from QQ
[Collab]
collab的參與者都有哪些？
00:01:026 (1,1,1,1) - 這些滑條可以試試利用多點綠線，在slidertick可以調音效，感覺會更帶感 還有這些話條的頭可以考慮提高音效 這裡太小聲玩什麼都違和 試過
00:43:612 (3) - 感覺這個滑條太平靜了，試一下減速型或加速型 加形狀 懶改
00:46:198 - 跳過的音有點怪，個人感覺滑條停在白線會舒服很多 不想改的話記得修一下00:46:026 (1,2) - blanket
01:02:663 - 這裡開始的強音，01:02:750 (4) - 這個感覺有點太晚了 向前挪1/4試試？挪的話最好也調一下位置
02:35:163 (1,1,1) - 分成5個圈打擊感更好 為了平行slider就不改了
02:39:991 - 我覺得可以從這裡就開始map，這樣會更融合前面的break之前結束的樂器 和break結束后的樂器
02:43:784 (7) - 這個尾巴可以考慮減低音量
02:44:244 (1) - unsnap，這裡應該是藍線開始 正確的是這樣的：
03:22:232 (2,3,1) - 試一下更大的弧度？因為感覺之前是逐漸變大 但是這裡感覺和03:21:888 (2,3,1) - 弧度一樣 懶改
03:33:094 (1) - 試試去掉頭whistle，尾用whistle，音量提高？ 怪
04:34:129 (1,2) - 這裡我覺得跟的和歌里有點亂，感覺不是很合適，試試這個節奏 怪：
04:50:681 (1,1,1,1) - 和開頭的建議一樣
摸完了 神
音效嚇我一跳
Good luck!
Crystal wrote:
水摸
[Collab]
这diff名太不霸气了
01:20:681 (5) - 144|332 might be better
02:43:784 (7,1,2,3) - consider making distance here larger, or making the flow a bit curved, since the beat snap here is different (1/3)
04:14:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this distance is like an evil after slidering such a long time. consider reducing distance here actually they're not as hard to hit as it looks
05:15:767 - wtf this period.. i don't think beats here support such intense rhythm, and however, after the calm part (04:56:198 (1,1,1) -), it seems nonsense to map like this imo.
好像没有什么好摸的 star
[Twinkle] wrote:
[Collab]
00:44:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 两个一组做距离渐增怎么样呀 现在这样的话感觉后面接的00:45:163 (1) - 滑条速度有点太快了 懶改
00:52:750 (2) - 稍微有点没包好
01:41:715 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里中间的间距比两遍明显的大，可以改成像01:43:094 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 间距一样
01:40:681 (1,2,1,2) - 这间距也偏小了一点
01:44:819 (1,2,1,2) - 这儿偏大
如果是故意摆的话上述算我没说
02:15:508 (1) - 总感觉挺奇怪的02:15:508 (1) - 滑条尾巴上的音太重了 懶改
02:26:801 (2) - 这也是 懶改
02:57:577 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉间距太小了，是不是应该放大一圈，后面也跟着放大 跟之前串的位置 就不改了
03:50:594 (1,2) - 没包好
！
without response = fixedM o k o r i wrote:
yesGeneral
- normal-hitclap25.wav is unused
- AI mod says about some unsnapped objects
Collab
- 00:49:301 (2,1) - to exchange them makes better flow imo
- 01:01:026 (1) - remove NC? like 00:49:991 (3) -
- 01:02:750 (4) - it should be start at 01:02:663 - , you can be hear the strong sound
- 01:03:526 (2) - it's also strange, sound can be hear at 01:03:612 -
- 01:28:526 (2) - for safe of SV changing from x0.5 to x1.0 in calm part, add NC? eeeee i think no
- 02:17:146 (2,1) - how about stack them?
- 02:18:784 (1) - remove NC no, for emphasis, 02:29:819 (1) - same here
- 02:35:163 (1,1) - add drum-hitwhistle 98 sound on head with 20% volume? lol well i prefer default hitsounds here
- 05:19:905 (1,2) - how about ctrl+h to be symmetry with center line? this part will be ded or rearranged so we'll se
good luck!
did a short irc modding with yuko
fixed some minor stuff about jbsliders and general setting
fixed some minor stuff about jbsliders and general setting
As requested
No I don't want to be killed by either skystar nor crystal
[General]
320 kbps?
[Crystal's Ultimate]
Hitsounding: Not so complicated as yuko's work, I don't know if you can copy it to this diff lol
Combo colors: Try to go the same as the standard diff?
check aimod
00:31:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - some small sliders like this can produce one more fruitdrop w
00:34:129 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - You can choose to follow the more clear rhythms here, like 04:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . Players may feel boring since the patterns are all 1/2 sliders followed by 1/2 sliders.
00:44:474 (1) - ctrl + G and move to x = 144
00:52:060 (1) - finish?
01:15:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ahh this part, I hope you can change the clap pattern as you do here 01:07:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1). The pattern changes and feels a bit absurd. Also, follow the melody in the original song will be a nice choice.
01:09:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - They just feel a bit close, 01:09:301 (3,4,5,6,7) - move to x = 176 and 01:09:819 (1) - x = 224
01:10:853 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - same ^ x = 304
01:28:612 (1) - place it like this will look better and make it a nice stop
01:49:991 (1) - 2 grids left?
05:15:767 - 05:22:405 The last part is much extremer than standard diff, make it easier plz. all 1/8 jumps, I don't know but it will kill some players before they get passed.
Though I wanna write something more, but the extreme parts are really beyond my ability. Good luck guys.
[General]
320 kbps?
[Crystal's Ultimate]
Hitsounding: Not so complicated as yuko's work, I don't know if you can copy it to this diff lol
Combo colors: Try to go the same as the standard diff?
check aimod
00:31:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - some small sliders like this can produce one more fruitdrop w
00:34:129 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - You can choose to follow the more clear rhythms here, like 04:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . Players may feel boring since the patterns are all 1/2 sliders followed by 1/2 sliders.
00:44:474 (1) - ctrl + G and move to x = 144
00:52:060 (1) - finish?
01:15:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ahh this part, I hope you can change the clap pattern as you do here 01:07:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1). The pattern changes and feels a bit absurd. Also, follow the melody in the original song will be a nice choice.
01:09:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - They just feel a bit close, 01:09:301 (3,4,5,6,7) - move to x = 176 and 01:09:819 (1) - x = 224
01:10:853 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - same ^ x = 304
01:28:612 (1) - place it like this will look better and make it a nice stop
01:49:991 (1) - 2 grids left?
05:15:767 - 05:22:405 The last part is much extremer than standard diff, make it easier plz. all 1/8 jumps, I don't know but it will kill some players before they get passed.
Though I wanna write something more, but the extreme parts are really beyond my ability. Good luck guys.
examination
examination wrote:
As requestedNo I don't want to be killed by either skystar nor crystal
[Crystal's Ultimate]
Hitsounding: Not so complicated as yuko's work, I don't know if you can copy it to this diff lol
00:34:129 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - You can choose to follow the more clear rhythms here, like 04:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . Players may feel boring since the patterns are all 1/2 sliders followed by 1/2 sliders. I wanted to make these with different rhythm.
01:09:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - They just feel a bit close, 01:09:301 (3,4,5,6,7) - move to x = 176 and 01:09:819 (1) - x = 224 fixed with my own.
01:49:991 (1) - 2 grids left? I feel like this jump is useful.
05:15:767 - 05:22:405 The last part is much extremer than standard diff, make it easier plz. all 1/8 jumps, I don't know but it will kill some players before they get passed. Will consider after the next mod.
Though I wanna write something more, but the extreme parts are really beyond my ability. Good luck guys.
Rest were fixed, thank you!
http://puu.sh/hMvy6/eda7910e33.zip
Kodora wrote:
bakamiya yuko
Let's see what I can do here. (Some of this may have been changed already from examination's mod, so yeah.)
[Crystal's Ultimate]
00:47:750 (3) - This movement is somewhat awkward, how about moving to x:48 so it feels more natural?
00:50:163 (2) - I recommend either turning this into another hyper or reducing the distance some.
00:54:388 (2,3) - While these aren't too hard I don't like this much, maybe Ctrl-H for a nice right-left movement?
00:59:646 (1) - Ctrl-G?
01:01:026 (1) - x:128? No hyper really breaks the flow on those sliders.
01:02:922 (4) - Ctrl-H and move to x:112? I think this makes a more friendly movement.
01:03:439 (2) - Move to x:304
01:52:405 (2,3,1) - This in general feels really unfriendly, I'd suggest reorganizing the pattern like this
01:53:439 (1) - Move to x:320
02:00:681 (3) - I'd say Ctrl-G and move it to x:480, too many back and forth movements right there make it a bit too hard to execute.
02:02:750 (2,3) - Ctrl-G 2 and move both to x:192, the movement is currently too sudden imo.
02:13:094 (3,4,1,2) - This seems really hard to do properly, I'd suggest making 3,4 easier to catch or moving 2 closer to 1 as it's hard to make the jump after that.
02:15:163 (2,3) - Making 3 go to the left makes it really hard to catch properly, moving it just 1 grid point right should make it look better.
02:16:457 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Please rework this into something easier, it seems just a bit too hard, and I can't seem to find a good way to balance it out.
02:20:681 (3) - Move over to x:48 so people don't miss the right half
02:30:336 (3) - Ctrl-G please
03:03:181 (2,3) - Really sudden jump, reduce just a bit please.
03:07:405 (2,3) - ^
03:10:681 (1,2) - Please increase the distance here to make it a hyperdash.
03:15:767 (2,3,4) - Ctrl-G 2 and move to x:416 move 3 to x:240 and 4 to x:176, I think it flows much better this way.
03:19:129 (2) - Move the head 1 tick right and the tail 1 tick left.
03:33:267 (4,1,2) - WOAH, really unexpected jump here, please reduce the distance just a bit.
03:35:336 (4) - x:224
03:42:405 (1) - Please move to x:256, having no hyper is really frustrating.
03:57:923 (3,4) - Movement on 03:57:319 (2) - makes it really hard to this, consider changing either part.
04:24:474 (1) - I'd consider making this curve further to the right, it's way too easy to overshoot the slider tail.
05:15:767 (1) - Move to x:80 maybe? It feels odd being so far left.
And that's it from me, hope to see this make it through.
[Crystal's Ultimate]
00:47:750 (3) - This movement is somewhat awkward, how about moving to x:48 so it feels more natural?
00:50:163 (2) - I recommend either turning this into another hyper or reducing the distance some.
00:54:388 (2,3) - While these aren't too hard I don't like this much, maybe Ctrl-H for a nice right-left movement?
00:59:646 (1) - Ctrl-G?
01:01:026 (1) - x:128? No hyper really breaks the flow on those sliders.
01:02:922 (4) - Ctrl-H and move to x:112? I think this makes a more friendly movement.
01:03:439 (2) - Move to x:304
01:52:405 (2,3,1) - This in general feels really unfriendly, I'd suggest reorganizing the pattern like this
01:53:439 (1) - Move to x:320
02:00:681 (3) - I'd say Ctrl-G and move it to x:480, too many back and forth movements right there make it a bit too hard to execute.
02:02:750 (2,3) - Ctrl-G 2 and move both to x:192, the movement is currently too sudden imo.
02:13:094 (3,4,1,2) - This seems really hard to do properly, I'd suggest making 3,4 easier to catch or moving 2 closer to 1 as it's hard to make the jump after that.
02:15:163 (2,3) - Making 3 go to the left makes it really hard to catch properly, moving it just 1 grid point right should make it look better.
02:16:457 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Please rework this into something easier, it seems just a bit too hard, and I can't seem to find a good way to balance it out.
02:20:681 (3) - Move over to x:48 so people don't miss the right half
02:30:336 (3) - Ctrl-G please
03:03:181 (2,3) - Really sudden jump, reduce just a bit please.
03:07:405 (2,3) - ^
03:10:681 (1,2) - Please increase the distance here to make it a hyperdash.
03:15:767 (2,3,4) - Ctrl-G 2 and move to x:416 move 3 to x:240 and 4 to x:176, I think it flows much better this way.
03:19:129 (2) - Move the head 1 tick right and the tail 1 tick left.
03:33:267 (4,1,2) - WOAH, really unexpected jump here, please reduce the distance just a bit.
03:35:336 (4) - x:224
03:42:405 (1) - Please move to x:256, having no hyper is really frustrating.
03:57:923 (3,4) - Movement on 03:57:319 (2) - makes it really hard to this, consider changing either part.
04:24:474 (1) - I'd consider making this curve further to the right, it's way too easy to overshoot the slider tail.
05:15:767 (1) - Move to x:80 maybe? It feels odd being so far left.
And that's it from me, hope to see this make it through.
Zak
Zak wrote:
Let's see what I can do here. (Some of this may have been changed already from examination's mod, so yeah.)
[Crystal's Ultimate]
00:50:163 (2) - I recommend either turning this into another hyper or reducing the distance some. Reduced.
00:59:646 (1) - Ctrl-G? I think the current flow is better.
01:01:026 (1) - x:128? No hyper really breaks the flow on those sliders. non-hyperdashed jump could be better in this spot imo.
01:02:922 (4) - Ctrl-H and move to x:112? I think this makes a more friendly movement. I love this hold part. No change.
03:10:681 (1,2) - Please increase the distance here to make it a hyperdash. Continuous HDash after 1/6 HDashes are too exaggerated, I reduced the distance instead.
And that's it from me, hope to see this make it through.
Thanks very much!
http://puu.sh/hMRom/c681780a99.zip
General
- Difficulty Spread : ☑
- Unsnapped objects : Check AIBot in Ethereal diff. It seems there're some unsnapped notes & sliders' ends.
- Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : it's 320 kbps which is unrankable
- Metadata Issues : ☑
- Timeline Issues : ☑
- Combo Colors : ☑
- Unused hitsounds : ☑
- Hitsounds Issues :
- Inaudible hitsounds : ☑
- Application of every mods : ☑
Crystal's Ultimate
- 01:28:612 (1) - 여기 모양이 부자연스럽네요. 세로로 한번 시도해보시길
- 01:59:474 (3,1) - 하이퍼 유지하면서 통째로 오른쪽으로 조금 이동시키면 2하고 3 사이 움직임 훨씬 자연스러울거 같네요.
- 02:11:629 (2,3,4) - 굉장히 어렵네요 개인적으로.. 차라리 http://puu.sh/hN0tx/605f8607b3.jpg 이런걸로 대체하시는게 나을거같아요.
- 02:11:888 (1) - 그냥 둥근 모양으로 하는게 나을거같네요. 큰 씨앗 놓치기가 생각보다 쉬워서..
- 02:25:422 (2) - 하이퍼 눌러서 더 쉽게 받을수 있도록 오른쪽으로 살짝만 옮겨주세요.
- 03:01:370 (3,4) - 슬라이더 그냥 가로로 길게 하는게 받기 더 편할거같네요. 지금은 쓸데없이 미스가 잘나는 부분인듯..
- 03:13:439 (1) - 왼쪽으로 조금만 이동시켜주세요.
- 03:14:388 (2) - 받기 편하게 1하고 간격 조금 넓혀주세요.
- 03:18:957 (1,2) - 여긴 http://puu.sh/hN010/638d9f5be0.jpg 이런식으로 하는게 흐름이 자연스럽네요
- 03:19:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 개인적으로 이부분 슬라이더들 같은 길이로 해주는게 무빙 개선에 나을거 같습니다.
- 03:25:163 (1) - 리버스 왼쪽으로 옮겨주시는게 나을거같아요.
- 03:30:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여긴 개인적으로 좀 위험하다고 느껴지네요.. 차라리 1/4로 넣으시는게 나을거같은데
- 03:32:060 (1) - 모양이 부자연스럽네요. 리버스로 62도 돌리시고 재배치 한번 해보시길
- 03:41:715 (1,2) - 갑자기 움직임이 줄어서 꽤나 받기 힘든데 차라리 점프를 넣으시는게 어떠신지
- 03:56:543 (2,3) - 흐름이 자연스럽진 않네요. 오른쪽 무빙을 시도해보시는게 나을거같은데 전..
- 04:06:543 (1,2) - 이 부분 진짜 틀리기 쉽네요. 하이라이트도 다 끝났는데 쉽게 만들어주시는게 좋을거같아요
- 04:10:164 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제하셔도 될거같고, 1/8 슬라이더 조금만 더 세로로 하시는건 어떤가요.
- 04:15:854 (3,4) - 이 부분도 미스 잘 나는데 배치 조금만 바꿔주세요..
- 04:17:578 (1,2,3) - 이 부분도 좀 많이 어렵습니다. 배치 다른걸로 고려해보세요
I had some fun with those hitsounds, thanks a lot yuko \o/
poke me when it's ready
Topic Starter
alright, updated!
thanks spectator for careful check up, too amazing!
thanks spectator for careful check up, too amazing!