00:24:409 - add 2
00:58:308 - since you have changed those doublets you could 00:58:817 (58817|4) - put all these bracketing note on the 2 column till here 01:07:799 -
01:06:782 - slide in 0 till 01:06:952 -
01:06:952 - slide in 4 till 01:07:121 -
01:07:291 - slide in 6 till 01:07:460 -
remove 01:07:376 (67376|1) - and slide in 0 at 01:07:291 - till here 01:07:460 -
remove 01:07:630 (67630|4) - and slide in there till 01:07:799 - and
add in 2 01:07:799 -
remove 01:14:409 (74409|0) - and add in 5
remove 01:14:579 (74579|0,74579|1) - and add in 2 and 4
01:19:833 (79833|0,79833|1,80002|0,80002|1) - same here ^
02:30:511 (150511|6,151020|5,151528|4) - switch position for pitch relevancy (?)
02:38:817 (158817|6,158986|6) - if you are following electronic sound in background move the first one to 4 and second one to 2
02:41:528 (161528|0,161698|0) - same ^ but move to 2 the first and to 4 the second this time
03:35:257 (215257|3,215257|4) - you can remove (?) try to listen without them
04:24:579 (264579|1,264664|2) - move to 5 and 4
04:31:867 - this is the same sound of this 04:32:884 (272884|3,272884|0,272884|6) -
04:24:579 (264579|1,264664|2) - move to 6
04:29:663 - add note there is drum
04:32:715 (272715|3) - move to 5
04:33:223 (273223|6) - move to 6
04:33:732 (273732|1) - move to 2
05:07:800 (307800|0,308139|6) - not sure those are
05:07:800 (307800|0,308139|6) - I don't feel like these are good, I would keep continuous stairs
05:08:816 - add in 0
05:08:816 - add in 6
so it should be this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177053605:57:630 -
http://puu.sh/9R0pp/5d02f51144.png maybe (?)
06:03:053 - same here ^
Most of these mods are advices, it's up to you agka ^^