排版都好工整啊。。。没什么可挑的了,送星不要打我(其实是不太喜欢听音游曲
Kagamine Ren wrote:
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/292823
大哥好久没做音游曲,好棒。
[General] all fixed
- 怎么跟2ha一样用1365*768的BG,这是爱么
- mp3是128kbps的,虽然允许但是还是有点危险,建议换个高点的
- 这是什么,title不一样?
[Beginner]
- 00:21:886 (1,2) - 这两个碰一起略丑啊..后面那个滑条换个位置吧 算是故意的先这样试试
- 00:36:432 (1) - 今天一张图的easy因为1/2滑条被dq了,虽然感觉这个没什么问题但是,你懂得。 我懂...还是try一下
- 00:42:250 (4,1) - spacing error fixed
- 01:01:886 - 这个BPM,转盘后要空4拍 容我哭一哭,缩短了spinner
[Standard]
- 00:38:613 (3,1) - 这碰到不好看吧 确实有点..不过先这样好了.w.
- 01:16:795 - normal空两拍 [/color]
- 01:19:704 - ^
- 01:26:977 - ^
- 01:32:795 - 加个圈?后面凭空原地单点,好坑的感觉 好像还行?就先不改了
这节奏真难...
[Hard]
- 是不是说不摸这个来着?记性有点差...
[Hyper]
- 00:56:068 (7) - 跟钢琴轨的话这个圈就多余了吧 我也不知道跟的什么...
- 01:13:523 (4,5) - 感觉离太近了,容易误读,不如干脆把折返放圈下面 大概算是antijump
- 01:26:886 - 滑条头5%音量应该是必死的 [/color]
- 01:37:704 (1,2) - 这个也太近的感觉 打起来实感一般...就先这样了
[Another]
- 00:56:068 (8) - 同hyper,建议去掉这个
- 00:43:341 (3,4) - 这两个建议远一点,比如可以这样 虽然图片并没有刷出来但是拉远了一些别的找不出啥了orz。。
[Extra]
- 00:28:250 (2,3,4) - 感觉3连不能表现出这里的音乐,建议跟another一样00:28:068 - 从这里开始弄两个1/4滑条 他应该跟的是鼓,先这样
- 01:08:250 (9) - 这个finish多余的吧 done
- 01:21:523 (1,2,1,2) - 完全重叠也太坑了点,建议错开一点。。 不是特别想改这个梗
- 00:50:523 (4,7) - NC提示一下拆串吧 done
- 00:55:341 - 建议加个圈 done
昨天改了好像没回?=-=我也忘记改了啥地方好像大多都改了- -Shad0w1and wrote:
[Insane]
00:19:795 (5) - 和 00:18:977 (2) - stack?00:21:159 (1,2) - 這個也一起?(故意的話就算了)
01:10:250 (2,1) - 對直,拿尺子量我也是醉了
01:14:523 (3,4,5) - 對好 _(:3
01:20:341 (3,4,5) - ^建議關掉格子排
[Another]
00:26:977 (1,1) - 差一個像素 _(:3
01:35:613 (5,6) - ^_(:3 這個會stack其實沒關係
[Standard]
00:55:341 (1) - 音效感覺稍有違和
[Beginner]
CS4?!?!?比Standard還高?
強挑的幾個點,不改都行
Peachtrees wrote:
no more placeholders!=w=Beginner:
00:21:886 (1,2) - the overlap is most likely fine, I'm just personally dislike overlaps like this so I feel obligated to suggest a different pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3023373 kinda intended to do that~
00:37:159 (2) - very nazi, but see if you can have the little bump exactly in the middle of the slider for perfect symmetry? fixed?
00:40:795 (2) - I think slightly de-curving this would look a tad bit nicer done
00:56:795 (4) - this feels very strong uwu not sure if try to cover this sound, I think the current rythm is fine too! .w.
01:08:432 (1) - wouldnt it be super neat to have the change in the sliders shape right here 01:08:795 (1) - because it'd go along with song I think >< well, just try new things maybe?
01:42:613 (4,1) - blanket /me runs fixed?
01:42:977 (1,1) - what's with the uneven spacing? is this intentional? fixed a bit
Standard
00:16:068 (1,2) - I'd personally feel like de-curving this would end up making this blanket look neater, though this is 100% fine as it is and my personal preference. The same obviously applies to similar blankets later on. again, I this is just MY prefence ~ fixed
00:39:341 (1,1) - kinda just me again, but I feel as though both of these slider could use a little more...uuh power i guess? I mean they're mapped to represent a very strong sound so I curve seems a bit blunt Q.Q
01:05:523 (1,2) - I'm guessing this wasn't supposed to be blanekting? fixed
Hard
00:22:977 (4,5,1) - nazi blanket ;c uuh not 100% if this was supposed to be blanketing though..being a nazi is hard ><
00:38:977 (4,1) - aaah the tiny overlap is driving me crazy >< me too, fixed
01:03:341 (2) - minor suggestion: why not give this a liiiitle downward curve to match the next slider and to go for a little 'swing' into the next slider yes
I'm not going to nazi out on every single blanket just to make this look longer ><
Hyper
01:09:704 (10,1) - idk, but I feel as though this feels strong enough to justify a little jump, especially since it's the build-up so making this a bit more intense should be fine yes? fixed in another way
00:22:977 (7,1) - ^ keep this first~~
01:40:068 (1,2,3,4) - note sure if you want this to be a straight line, but it looks a little bit uneven? well, you're right
01:43:341 (4) - any particular reason for the 20% HSV? I just followed extra and fixed
01:45:886 (4,5) - I feel as though this should feel a bit more intense hmmm, I will reconsider it :3
Another
00:47:341 (3,5) - nazi stack..I guess >< done
01:08:068 (7,8,2) - ^ /me runs done
01:10:613 (1,2) - I feel like this could bit a little more intense same as hyper
Extra
Tried testplaying but tensing my arm up causes pain so I couldn't ><. I don't think I can come up with anything for this one, sorrry!
I hope I could atleast give ONE proper suggestion..very neat set ;w;
lkx_Shore wrote:
卸腿General
- Beginer的title和其他难度不一致。 done
- 添加多477ms的lead-in? 虽然不知道为什么是477但是还是加了
Extra
- 00:39:341 (1) - 00:39:523 - 音是从这里开始出现的,把00:39:341 (1) - 从这个音分成两个不同的部分体现音的变化?(就是前面反方向扭或者曲折啥的) 拆了个circle出来
Another
- AR9?...我觉得AR8.5左右最合适。 done
- 00:31:341 (1) - 改成稍微有点曲折的滑条? 改了个奇怪的形状?
- 00:32:795 (4) - 有点风险...顺便00:33:159 - 不加个note嘛。 done
- 00:39:523 - 音是从这里开始出现的,把00:39:341 (1) - 从这个音分成两个不同的部分体现音的变化?(就是前面反方向扭或者曲折啥的) 和Extra一样处理了
- 00:50:977 (1) - 我觉得用finish更好。 加上了
Hyper
- 00:08:613 (3) - 尾巴有声音感觉有点奇怪...降低音量? 20%
- 00:31:704 (2) - 这里音乐有疾走感...note弹出去会更好。 done
- 01:05:886 (2) - 间距太大了。 应该还行?这里先不改了><
- 01:24:523 - 和01:24:704 - 加note,01:24:613 (2) - 去掉。
- 01:26:977 - 着力点在这,可以把滑条改成01:26:977 - 开始,01:26:886 - 加个note。 done
- 01:44:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - 20%音量感觉不是很必要...用20%音量有什么特殊的理由吗? 这一定是饼干的锅!(强行甩锅
Hard
- 01:19:341 (2) - 尾巴加Soft-finish? done
Standard
- 01:23:886 (2) - 低难度直接跟主旋律吧?跟鼓感觉不适合。如果采用的话↓
01:23:886 (2) - 移到01:23:704 - 加折返。
01:24:432 (3) - 加折返,01:24:977 (4) - 改成在01:25:159 - 开始,01:25:704 - 结束。 done- 01:44:432 - 加Note? 好像有点难了?先这样/w\
Beginner
- Fine.
Other
- 找齐mod以后记得喊我回来。
Rixia Mao wrote:
ofcjyc-Binggan wrote:
am I pro?
No, thanks. :3Lach wrote:
Hey this map is cool but I really think you should have offset the second half of these notes 01:21:523 (1,2,1,2) - in the extra in a way that makes them more visible.
我操 星爷啊Amamiya Yuko wrote:
我操 大哥啊
lol,刚回国....我得找饼干思量思量怎么搞=3=不急~Rixia Mao wrote:
一捞三天过去了 lolMegurine Luka wrote:
...我先捞个船,晚点改