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Shimotsuki Haruka - Re:Call

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KaedekaShizuru
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Joined January 2013
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KaedekaShizuru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月22日 星期一 at 20:33:59

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Re:Call
Source: できない私が、くり返す。
Tags: Dekinai Watashi ga, Kurikaesu. I will start over again and again for you Visual Novel Eroge galgame opening collab Hollow Wings Minakami Yuki imoutosan
BPM: 93
Filesize: 16380kb
Play Time: 05:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Re:Fate (5.72 stars, 991 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Re:Call
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I will start over again and again for you.
#？
Collab with Hollow Wings, Minakami Yuki and imoutosan.
Hitsound by me. Done.
StoryBoard by imoutosan. WIP WARNING ! This StoryBoard has Spoiler !

闷声作大死

Collab Part
00:08:195 - 00:49:484 ：KaedekaShizuru Done.
00:49:484 - 01:32:709 ：KaedekaShizuru Done.
01:32:709 - 02:14:644 ：Minakami Yuki Done.
02:14:644 - 02:35:289 ：Minakami Yuki Done.
02:35:289 - 02:55:934 ：Hollow Wings Done.
02:55:934 - 03:15:288 ：Minakami Yuki Done.
03:15:288 - 03:57:868 ：imoutosan Done.
03:57:868 - 04:22:384 ：Hollow Wings Done.
04:22:384 - 04:49:480 ：KaedekaShizuru Done.
04:49:480 - 04:54:641 ：Hollow Wings Done.
04:54:641 - 04:59:803 ：KaedekaShizuru Done.
04:59:803 - 05:04:964 ：KaedekaShizuru Done.
05:04:964 - 05:10:125 ：Minakami Yuki Done.
05:10:125 - Fin ：KaedekaShizuru Done.

Lyrics and Vedio
From YouTube
Many thanks for collation

Re:call
唄: 霜月はるか
作詞: 高梨栞、西坂恭平
作曲: 西坂恭平
編曲: 西坂恭平
PCゲーム「できない私が、くり返す。」OP
過去の想い　記憶の彼方
幼き日　残した悔い
胸の奥　刻む針音（しんおん）
心だけ　置き忘れたまま

掌に伝わる風が　明日（あした）へと僕を運ぶ
君に出会い　共に歩いた
……本当（ほんとう）の自分　隠して

何もかもを諦めた無垢な瞳から
涙が頬　伝う前に
悲しみの無い未来（とき）　探す

「何度だって　くり返した」
抱（だ）いた想い　消し去れずに
歩き続けてた
「望む世界（あす）は　いつかきっと……」
それはまるで詩（うた）のような綺麗事だから

遠い過去を見つめ続け
笑顔の裏　君の”哀”を知らず時を重ねて
繋ぐ手の先にある　冷たい指先を握りしめた

鳴り響く　さざなみの音　
この胸を刺す　罪の杭（くい）
頬に触れる”貴方”の体温
過去の傷　まだ癒せない

欠けた月が円を再び描（えが）くように
重ね続けた過（あやま）ち　
探していた未来（とき）　消える

「もう一度くり返すの？」
問いかけは別の道を今　指し示した
いつかの日々　貴方の声
夢の中を　藍（あい）に染めて　未だ消えないから

永遠（とわ）の別れを告げるために
貴方へと贈るでしょう二度目の「さよなら」を
さざなみは遠く消え　淡い”愛”の詩（うた）が　胸に響く

「もう二度と　くり返せない」
今　過去に背中向けて　また君に出会う
「望む結末（みらい）が　もう来ないのなら」
僕は君の傍にずっと寄り添い続けたい

まるで終わりを数えるような
弱く響くその心音（しんおん）　もう戻せないのなら……

―――どうか振り向くことなく
　　　明日へ続く道　歩いて―――
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 42 times in total.
Sakuya Minagami
10 posts
Joined February 2013
Sakuya Minagami
GOOD GOOD STUDY，DAY DAY UP？
Fia
Fia
bg不会真用这个吧 好2啊感觉
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

PinkHeart wrote:

bg不会真用这个吧 好2啊感觉
全CG没下 歌词翻译没去看
我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透
你们用了两张 所以我干脆用这个好了
实在抱歉跟你们撞还挖角了imouto
Fia
Fia

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

PinkHeart wrote:

bg不会真用这个吧 好2啊感觉
全CG没下 歌词翻译没去看
我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透我还没被剧透
你们用了两张 所以我干脆用这个好了
实在抱歉跟你们撞还挖角了imouto
我是大丈夫萌大奶 又不是撞我（咦
剧透和自己推感觉完全不一样 所以你大可不用担心 不过cg还是最好不要看了
顺便哪有歌词翻译啊 我也想看）
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
SPOILER
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Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
这歌翻来覆去多少人做了。。。，挺好听，兹磁兹磁
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

这歌翻来覆去多少人做了。。。，挺好听，兹磁兹磁
由此我们可以总结出规律：同一首歌有三张APP的话其中一定会有一张spinner图
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
怎么都做recall
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
[Re:Fate]
  1. hr试过没
  2. 音效貌似还没加，比如kiai音效音量至少得50
  3. 01:32:709 (1,2,1) - 太远了http://puu.sh/h4M29.jpg而且这里不适合放跳
  4. 02:54:482 (4) - ctrl+g，有点不爽，你可以隔远点
  5. 03:13:675 (6) - 尾巴y坐标-1，算出界了吧，虽然不是很多
  6. 05:02:383 (1) - 减速太多了
  7. 最后才是timing
神秘代码
8194,645.150884663151,4,2,1,20,1,0
90129,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
90788,638.297872340426,4,2,1,20,1,0
92064,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
93053,582.52427184466,4,2,1,20,1,0
93344,645.150884663151,4,2,1,20,1,0
263018,681.818181818182,4,2,1,20,1,0
263699,628.930817610063,4,2,1,20,1,0
264956,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
266274,631.578947368421,4,2,1,20,1,0
267537,681.818181818182,4,2,1,20,1,0
268218,571.428571428571,4,2,1,20,1,0
268503,645.161290322581,4,2,1,20,1,0
268825,645.091925599398,4,2,1,20,1,0
AEIM
15 posts
Joined December 2013
AEIM
新人mpd··
01:29:484 - 可以可以再加一个note，可以改成里面小四方，外面大四方中间再加这个音，这样感觉更美观。
01:41:096 (1) - 这一段和后面我改了一下排列和节奏··大致是这样
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298515501:43:677 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2985164
04:18:836 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这一段连打我觉得可以弄得和大黑最后面的一样。我觉得这样真的很不友好 ：d
看了半天只找到了这些，我是觉得难度跳跃有点大，可以试着平衡一些，有的地方节奏接的并不是很完美。减速有点多，其他的没感觉出什么来。另外这是我打过转圈最长的图233，现在时间有点晚了orz 先就这些吧，明天再来;w;。

顺便楼上的神秘代码应该怎么弄？求问= = 感谢
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

liangv587 wrote:

[Re:Fate]
  1. hr试过没 当然 自慰棒HR 转速360轻松pass 转不过的都去练电钻
  2. 音效貌似还没加，比如kiai音效音量至少得50
  3. 01:32:709 (1,2,1) - 太远了http://puu.sh/h4M29.jpg而且这里不适合放跳
  4. 02:54:482 (4) - ctrl+g，有点不爽，你可以隔远点
  5. 03:13:675 (6) - 尾巴y坐标-1，算出界了吧，虽然不是很多 fixed
  6. 05:02:383 (1) - 减速太多了
  7. 最后才是timing
神秘代码
8194,645.150884663151,4,2,1,20,1,0
90129,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
90788,638.297872340426,4,2,1,20,1,0
92064,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
93053,582.52427184466,4,2,1,20,1,0
93344,645.150884663151,4,2,1,20,1,0
263018,681.818181818182,4,2,1,20,1,0
263699,628.930817610063,4,2,1,20,1,0
264956,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
266274,631.578947368421,4,2,1,20,1,0
267537,681.818181818182,4,2,1,20,1,0
268218,571.428571428571,4,2,1,20,1,0
268503,645.161290322581,4,2,1,20,1,0
268825,645.091925599398,4,2,1,20,1,0
thank you for timing, but I forgot the last part clock sound lol.


AEIM
01:29:484 - 可以可以再加一个note，可以改成里面小四方，外面大四方中间再加这个音，这样感觉更美观。
01:41:096 (1) - 这一段和后面我改了一下排列和节奏··大致是这样
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298515501:43:677 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2985164
04:18:836 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这一段连打我觉得可以弄得和大黑最后面的一样。我觉得这样真的很不友好 ：d
看了半天只找到了这些，我是觉得难度跳跃有点大，可以试着平衡一些，有的地方节奏接的并不是很完美。减速有点多，其他的没感觉出什么来。另外这是我打过转圈最长的图233，现在时间有点晚了orz 先就这些吧，明天再来;w;。


顺便楼上的神秘代码应该怎么弄？求问= = 感谢 code代码
no fox, sorry.

edit: have a discuss with liangv587, and add new timing at last part
330753,652.173913043478,4,2,1,20,1,0
332057,659.340659340659,4,2,1,20,1,0
333375,638.297872340426,4,2,1,20,1,0
334651,645.150884663151,4,2,1,20,1,0

update
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
我草为什么我的图400都擦边死(好像还会fail最后一个转盘 你这个360就能pass

sb
http://puu.sh/hiTIZ/966a2beaa8.rar
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
电吉他部分snap有些问题，不应该全是1/6或1/8,还有些混杂的
04:10:438 (1,2,3) - 2是1/3,3是1/8
04:11:728 (2) - 这个有问题
04:12:454 (6) - 这是1/16
04:12:534 (7) - 这是1/12
04:12:575 (8) - 这个不是太听得清，但好像是1/16
04:19:550 (2) - 1/16
04:19:712 (4) - 1/12
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings

Sellenite wrote:

电吉他部分snap有些问题，不应该全是1/6或1/8,还有些混杂的 remap全跟鼓了，嗯。
04:10:438 (1,2,3) - 2是1/3,3是1/8
04:11:728 (2) - 这个有问题
04:12:454 (6) - 这是1/16
04:12:534 (7) - 这是1/12
04:12:575 (8) - 这个不是太听得清，但好像是1/16
04:19:550 (2) - 1/16
04:19:712 (4) - 1/12
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Hollow Wings wrote:

Sellenite wrote:

电吉他部分snap有些问题，不应该全是1/6或1/8,还有些混杂的 remap全跟鼓了，嗯。
04:10:438 (1,2,3) - 2是1/3,3是1/8
04:11:728 (2) - 这个有问题
04:12:454 (6) - 这是1/16
04:12:534 (7) - 这是1/12
04:12:575 (8) - 这个不是太听得清，但好像是1/16
04:19:550 (2) - 1/16
04:19:712 (4) - 1/12
仔细评估对照妹桑和nanaka的图后我决定先按兵不动 不过hw的修改暂时先收下了（改完后是什么鬼
这蛋疼死了简直
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
This StoryBoard has a spoiler.....
I think I is not good
You should to that warning notice. fix the beatmap's post
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

-Nanaka- wrote:

This StoryBoard has a spoiler.....
I think I is not good
You should to that warning notice. fix the beatmap's post
yes I know......
I will add it in. Thank you for your remind.
But...hmmm...... the opening vedio also spoiler I think. lol　
BTW, this storyboard is only a semifinished product. Maybe when it all finished, it will become a completely different looks.
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
09kami
03:15:922 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的角度稍微倾斜点比较好看
03:18:422 (2) - 这个Note删掉
03:20:116 (2) - 删掉这个Note替换成03:19:793 (1) - 的滑条结尾
03:20:922 (2) - 03:21:568 (2) - 这里感觉应该和03:20:922 (2,3) - 成一条直线，而不是03:21:568 (2) - 03:21:084 (3) - 这两个的开头叠在一起，感觉很难读
03:22:374 (3,4) -03:23:664 (3,4) - 这种梗容易误读
03:26:245 (1) - 03:26:084 (4) - 间距太远了
04:10:438 (1,2,3,1) -05:04:627 (1,2,3) - Ren?
神麻婆
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
[Re:Fate]
  1. 整個圖給我的感覺是難度好不平均=.=有的地方三星有的六星，要是能平均一點肯定更好

  2. 靜流
    00:27:548 (6) - NC
    00:28:516 (1,1) - 這兩個不要NC
    01:22:710 (4) - 大白線重音不建議放滑條尾，可以換成單點
    04:46:887 (4) - NC
    05:04:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ren？

  3. M醬
    01:37:860 (3) - NC
    01:49:956 (3,1) - blanket
    02:14:633 (1) - 這滑條真的就這樣？說真不太好看=.=

  4. HW
    04:00:760 (3,4,5) - 這個三角建議改成像04:07:373 (3,4,5) - 的，起碼容易點按
    04:05:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整個平均間距放吧
    04:09:793 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 主要還是間距問題，間距小點還能容易點玩
    04:18:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同樣也是間距變化有點大

  5. imoutosan
    03:38:987 (1,2,3,4) - 這個讀圖困難
    03:46:245 (5,1) - 5NC，1不要NC
    03:52:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 太難了
我是打不動這圖了，感覺5000pp以上的玩家才能玩
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy

StoryBoard

  1. 如果在每一段添加上相应mapper的名字就更好了。
  2. 我挺好奇那个苹果有什么象征意义..

Fate

  1. 感觉像是normal 和 extra 难度组合成了一张图 :| 02:08:827 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这梗好难O_o
  2. 03:05:815 (2,3,4,5) - 间距好大，我更喜欢 1.0 ds 的连打。
  3. 挺多创新的东西在里面，好图..
  4. star for you..
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
[re:two]
01:06:097 (3) - 这个note的位置太蛋疼，应该往左上移比较好
01:29:323 (1) - 摆3头上吧
01:44:634 (4) - 往左下移一点做个stack
04:01:406 (8,9,1,2) - 个人倾向8129
04:49:145 (2) - 1/3滑条感觉不错
05:08:498 (1,2) - ctrl+g ！！

感觉没imoto那个爽，看起来有点被掐住的样子……
Jemmmmy
526 posts
Joined September 2012
Jemmmmy
00:14:000 - 没音
00:15:290 - ^
00:16:581 - ^
00:28:677 (1,1) - 不用nc吧
01:28:839 (1,2,3,1,1) - 太大
02:08:827 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 过难
02:55:923 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 间距太大
03:21:729 (1) - why
03:22:374 (3,4) - 这个遮挡有点坑，
03:52:266 (3,1) - 。
04:00:841 (4) - 放到04:01:002 -
04:09:793 - 。
04:19:067 (4,1) - 这个的间距和 04:19:389 (4,1) - 统一下
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
都说02:08:827 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 难，那么静流帮我把它改成顺时针转一圈算了
别的感觉都是可有可无
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
SPOILER
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140,68,221245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,176,221406,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,160,221567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,96,221729,5,0,1:0:0:0:
246,225,221890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,68,222051,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,222212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,222374,6,0,P|147:71|100:77,1,95.6250036478044,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,148,222696,2,0,L|17:97,1,63.7500024318696
136,164,223019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,56,223180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,260,223341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,36,223503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,180,223664,6,0,P|372:163|419:169,1,95.6250036478044,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,204,223987,2,0,L|492:144,1,63.7500024318696
488,276,224309,1,0,1:0:0:0:
436,92,224470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,224632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,248,224793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,156,224954,6,0,L|120:140,1,63.7500024318696,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,152,225277,2,0,L|428:176,1,63.7500024318696
316,384,225599,2,0,P|304:340|320:292,1,95.6250036478044,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,225922,2,0,P|372:204|368:172,1,63.7500024318696
228,312,226245,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,340,226406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,226567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,226728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,356,226890,6,0,L|412:325,1,31.8750012159348,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,229,227051,2,0,L|308:200,1,31.8750012159348
180,224,227212,2,0,L|152:207,1,31.8750012159348,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,312,227374,2,0,L|62:342,1,31.8750012159348
97,121,227535,6,0,P|153:93|216:100,1,127.500004863739,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,242,228019,2,0,P|147:212|168:188,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,228341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,139,228503,6,0,P|278:102|216:100,1,127.500004863739,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,251,228986,2,0,P|266:219|250:192,1,63.7500024318696
200,320,229309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,96,229470,6,0,P|422:59|382:51,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,139,229793,2,0,P|364:176|404:184,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,92,230115,6,0,L|88:84,1,127.500004863739,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,241,230599,2,0,L|159:188,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,0,230922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,231083,6,0,L|296:136,1,127.500004863739,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,173,231567,2,0,L|400:208,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,336,231890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,232051,5,0,1:0:0:0:
344,152,232158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,232266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,196,232374,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,167,232481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,111,232589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,32,232696,6,0,P|40:72|112:88,1,127.500004863739,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,71,233180,2,0,P|220:64|189:67,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,164,233503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,261,233664,6,0,P|255:221|272:148,1,127.500004863739,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,9,234148,2,0,P|249:40|252:72,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,234470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,234632,2,0,P|136:170|101:189,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,234954,2,0,P|379:209|414:190,1,63.7500024318696
272,105,235277,5,10,0:0:0:0:
340,292,235438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,140,235599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,119,235761,5,0,3:0:0:0:
344,269,235922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,147,236083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,218,236244,5,0,1:0:0:0:
448,253,236406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,236567,5,0,1:0:0:0:
321,23,236675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,23,236782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,65,236890,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,134,236997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,203,237105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,245,237212,1,0,1:0:0:0:
321,245,237320,5,0,0:0:0:0:
379,203,237427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,134,237535,6,0,L|403:91,1,42.5
292,172,237696,2,0,L|250:170,1,42.5

回mod过段时间吧 现在有点忙
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
二位辛苦了 抓hw去
改了一点点
fixed some part and waiting for hw.
250th post
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Hyasalia
算是M4M吧，开始只是开着nf玩，后面直接开nf+自动转盘了Orz
[General]
  1. 试试ar9.2？感觉有几段note挺密集的
[静流]
  1. 00:23:677 (1,2,3) - 这里123太直了，这种flow打起来不太舒服，试试把2往下一点，弄个钝角
  2. 01:09:806 (6,7,1) - 感觉这里7放太高了，671是直角，后面123一个钝角，直角到钝角打起来比较生硬，试试7往下点，打起来有个弧线
  3. 01:28:839 (1,2,3,1,1) -
  4. 05:04:950 (1) - 这个是不是和前面的间距有点大
  5. 04:49:145 (2) - 换成1/3或者3/4？
[yuki]
  1. 03:05:815 (2,3,4,5) - 这里或许考虑向上移一点，照顾到12之间的间距，
  2. 05:02:369 (1,1) - 试试ctrl g，后面123是个从逆时针到顺时针的转换，根据vocal，flow转换放在05:02:369 (1) - 感觉更好
  3. 05:04:950 (1) - 这个是不是和前面的间距有点大，不过应该接的上。
[HW]
  1. 04:00:760 (3,4,5) -这里ds改成和03:58:502 (3,4,5) - 一样比较好
  2. 04:01:567 (9,1) - 感觉这里太近了，容易误读
  3. 04:05:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里好难啊，一般不都是中间note和后面一个滑条比较近嘛，好难
  4. 04:12:696 (1) - 这里前面3-7是一个转圈到8这里flow应该还是处于向上的状态，所以把转5°让滑条头偏上点比较好连上
[imouto]
  1. 03:21:084 (3) - ctrl g，不然后面相同方向的短滑条很难打
  2. 03:38:987 (1,2,3) - 这里打的时候12和4在屏幕上有同时出现，比较难读，试试取消1的nc换成3上nc
  3. 03:51:567 (2,3,1,2,3) - 这里 231是直线对跳，而后面123向左的
Good Luck
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings

09kami wrote:

04:10:438 (1,2,3,1) -05:04:627 (1,2,3) - Ren? changed to another pattern.
神麻婆

ken2010123 wrote:

[notice][Re:Fate]
  1. HW
    04:00:760 (3,4,5) - 這個三角建議改成像04:07:373 (3,4,5) - 的，起碼容易點按 先放置。
    04:05:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整個平均間距放吧 不。
    04:09:793 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 主要還是間距問題，間距小點還能容易點玩 改成了另一个梗。
    04:18:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同樣也是間距變化有點大 so？

    我是打不動這圖了，感覺5000pp以上的玩家才能玩

z1085684963 wrote:

[re:two]
04:01:406 (8,9,1,2) - 个人倾向8129 不改。
04:49:145 (2) - 1/3滑条感觉不错 改成了3/4.

Jemmmmy wrote:

04:00:841 (4) - 放到04:01:002 - 不。
04:19:067 (4,1) - 这个的间距和 04:19:389 (4,1) - 统一下 不。

Hyasalia wrote:

算是M4M吧，开始只是开着nf玩，后面直接开nf+自动转盘了Orz
[HW]
  1. 04:00:760 (3,4,5) -这里ds改成和03:58:502 (3,4,5) - 一样比较好 我把后者ds改成了和前者一样
  2. 04:01:567 (9,1) - 感觉这里太近了，容易误读 不会的。
  3. 04:05:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里好难啊，一般不都是中间note和后面一个滑条比较近嘛，好难 这梗你没见过吗？
  4. 04:12:696 (1) - 这里前面3-7是一个转圈到8这里flow应该还是处于向上的状态，所以把转5°让滑条头偏上点比较好连上 其实没差。。。
Good Luck
thx for modding!
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Hyasalia wrote:

[General]
  1. 试试ar9.2？感觉有几段note挺密集的
当作BPM186的话AR9也是足以胜任的 个人感觉BPM超过200才能用高于9.0

Good Luck
others no fixed
thank you for modding
update and waiting other collaber
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
看了挺久感觉真摸不动，丢颗星跑不要打我
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
先hold,將貼在這裡

最近送摸，來加點分數


[Re:Fate]
soft-hitclap2.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav are used data in this mapset.
01:29:484 (1) - (293|320)放正點?
SPOILER
01:51:408 (1) - Ctrl+g比較順
02:06:891 (1) - 有一個Finish聲怎麼不加，假如加起來聽得還好。
03:38:987 (1,2) - 這個2的1/8不明顯，建議去了，可以看看IMage的kanon也發生這情況 : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4198057
03:52:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這1/3 stream中途的jump有種會被挑的感覺，建議還是正常點
04:01:406 (8,9) - Ctrl+g
04:17:776 (4,5) - 看起來這1/4 stream有一點遠
04:19:067 (4,1) - 同03:52:051
04:32:937 (3) - 也是一個音不太明顯的1/4 note
04:37:533 (5) - 這音開25%聽得沒錯的話好像偏了
05:10:110 (1) - 這個pattern你是在畫什麼怎麼好像手榴彈
SPOILER
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

smallboat wrote:

先hold,將貼在這裡

最近送摸，來加點分數


[Re:Fate]
soft-hitclap2.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav are unused data in this mapset. deleted
01:29:484 (1) - (293|320)放正點? 01:29:484 (1,1,1) - 组成表盘上的时刻啊
SPOILER
02:06:891 (1) - 有一個Finish聲怎麼不加，假如加起來聽得還好。副歌全部用CLAP的钟摆音压长白线 嚓音感觉没必要
03:38:987 (1,2) - 這個2的1/8不明顯，建議去了，可以看看IMage的kanon也發生這情況 : p/4198057
呃……我觉得把这两个circle换成一个短滑条可能就比较安全了？看妹桑怎么改
04:01:406 (8,9) - Ctrl+g OK
04:17:776 (4,5) - 看起來這1/4 stream有一點遠 调了一下blanket
04:19:067 (4,1) - 同03:52:051 微调 稍微拉进一点并平均04:19:067 (4,1,2,3,4,1)
04:32:937 (3) - 也是一個音不太明顯的1/4 note
04:37:533 (5) - 這音開25%聽得沒錯的話好像偏了
这段timing超蛋疼 起初nanaka找guy爷爷做了详细timing 结果rank的时候给删了也没修mp3就这样出狱 我得去问问guy爷爷和nanaka情况
05:10:110 (1) - 這個pattern你是在畫什麼怎麼好像手榴彈
SPOILER
没错我画的就是手雷！打爆船爷 明明是怀表！
thank you for your mod
update and waiting for collaber
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
我觉得不要改啊 前面节奏都是1/8三连这里忽然不下了反而不对
哦顺便一提其实不是不明显而是根本乜有音 整张图里kiai的三连基本都是这样 不是这里一个地方的问题
1/3那个jump的话是因为前面跳接stream容易移过头 有个跳反而好打一些

连表针都没有你说是怀表 大概有人信
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[这什么J8难度名我都打不出来]


testplay 我已经尽力了，那段1/6实在太感人

这么跳的图居然只有AR9，真的不考虑一下AR9.3这样子的？

说实话这图的转盘有点长，不过我无所谓

02:09:149 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G的话我觉得滚起键盘来更顺一点，更不容易掉

03:03:665 (1) - 滑条尾和滑条的后半段没有搞出一个很好的blanket

03:52:266 (3,1) - 这两个间距还是跟前后一样的比较好吧？

03:58:502 (3,4,5) - 04:00:760 (3,4,5) - 这里的几个3连间距其实没必要这么大，刚刚打完一串1/3，现在又来打1/4，这就很难适应，基本上都会继续按照1/3处理掉，那么之后还接着一个1/2的跳就非常容易掉，这种地方对读图的要求感觉还是有点高

04:05:599 (1) - 这里之后再放这么大的间距似乎就正常一点了，因为许多人已经适应了1/4了，不过圈接滑条的间距感觉还是有点大

04:18:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这种间距我觉得给他5.72星都太简单。。6星图都不一定能见到这个。。

05:32:057 (1) - 我转完转盘都扔笔了。。结果最后还有三个东西，其实感觉也不是特别有必要


这图根本摸不动，可能更多的是打这张图的时候的感受把
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
00:29:000 (1,1) - 这两个长转盘删了。00:28:839 (5,1) - 用一根滑条代替（参考粉心版本的）给个排版的个人意见 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3217344 (372,220)(400,24)(448,208)怎么故事版在Edit里的位置跟Play里的位置有偏差
00:39:242 (1) - 这个直接一个note代替
这里是故事版的开头，直接两个转盘就挡住了效果

03:58:502 (3,4,5,6) - 我觉得好难看，而且这样刻意加难度感觉不好。可以考虑用滑条代替。其他地方也类似的，考虑一下把

静流我需要你的摸！
Wing My Way
186 posts
Joined September 2013
Wing My Way
[Re:Fate]
02:01:569 (4) - 叠到02:00:279 (4) - 下面如何？
02:06:891 (1,2,3) - 没叠好
02:11:246 (3) - 叠到02:11:730 (2) - 上面怎么样
02:58:020 (3) - 为什么相比之前的两个3要近了呢？
03:03:665 (1) - 不太好看，可能处理的不是很圆滑(会让人想到奇怪的东西)
03:38:987 (1,2) - 改成短滑条怎么样，要么干脆直接叠到3上面。或者03:38:825 (2,1) - 直接变成滑条也行。
03:52:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - (((什么鬼(((这是单点吗orz
03:57:857 (1,2) - 太远了吧
04:10:760 (1,2) - 中间有个1/6为啥漏掉?有点不爽
水kd美丽((( 祝早日飞~
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