Hey Taeyang!
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Easy
- 00:01:126 - Redundant green point? There's already the red point, and you can't have two timing points at the same time.
- 00:05:878 to 00:08:254 - Might reduce the volume in this section since there isn't really beats in the music.
- 00:07:957 (4) - I'd turn this into a circle and a long slider after, like this. The head of the slider will start on the strong beat, which I think it's best since it sounds better to me. If you apply the rhythm, I think 00:10:036 (2) should be deleted because it doesn't really go with the rhythm and music.
- 00:23:700 (2) - Remove the clap hitsound because it sounds weird and you didn't add one on 00:33:205 (2) .
- 00:36:769 (1,2) - This pattern may confuse beginners due to the distance between then and the rhythm used. Extending the slider and add a repeat like this would be enough:
- 01:04:096 - Maybe lower the volume of the tail, since there's no beat in the music?
- 01:05:284 (1) - This is my personal taste. The wave slider looks like the one in the old beatmaps. I'd just bring the 2nd and 3rd nodes to the body, like this:
- 01:07:660 (1) - Make this slider's length like 01:05:284 (1) ? To keep the consistency.
- 01:19:538 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern and rhythms feels hard to me and for Easy in my opinion. I would try this rhythm:
Normal
- 00:03:353 (5) - Stacking this with the next object may confuse players, because they might not know when they should click. I recommend you move it somewhere, but in my opinion, removing the circle would be good, because the circle just add a little spice in the pattern, which I don't think it's needed.
- 00:27:264 (1,2) - This is an ugly overlap and pattern to be honest. I would make a pattern like this, but this requires to change the next patterns:
- 00:35:284 (1) - I do not recommend stacking this with the previous object, while there's a big gap between them. This could lead to confusion. I'd change the rhythm starting from 00:33:799 to this:
- 00:35:581 (2) - Personal taste. The curve is ugly to me. Consider making 00:35:581 (2,3) a blanket pattern.
- 00:37:660 (2) - You use the stacks when it comes to a 1/1 rhythm of a circle and a slider, like 00:40:036 (2,3) . So, for this note, I suggest you use a slider. The slider can have the same length as 00:36:769 (1) .
- 00:51:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion, this can be confusing. I think a rhythm like this would go:
- 00:58:155 (1,3) - Still personal taste. The pattern could be something like this, because the current pattern is like broken to me, and the curves aren't pretty.
- 01:02:908 (1,2) - Like 00:35:581 (2) . It could be like this:
- 01:21:915 (6) - I think it needs a new combo for the consistency.
- 01:26:519 (3) - I'd move this slider somewhere to x:120 y:285 because the current flow doesn't go well.
Hard
- 00:01:571 (2,4) - Stack the circle with the head of the slider? There's no reason in particular to be honest.
- 00:07:066 (3,4,5,6) - I would make the distance constant between these circles, or make a slight different at each circle. A long distance doesn't seem to fit because the music doesn't seem intense for this part.
- 00:29:492 (3) - This can bring a little confusing, and the movement from the previous object to this seems awkward to me. You can either move this circle somewhere else, or make a tweak in the rhythm. Same thing with 00:38:997 (3) .
- 00:35:581 (3,4,1) - The distance between them should be shorter because they're still in the "slow part". So the distance should be consistency.
Starting from 00:22:512 -, you decided to reduce the distance snap, but the slider velocity is still stable. And this can bring confusion, because after 00:58:155 -, the distance goes back to the way it was. The players may not notice this. I suggest you lower the slider velocity from 00:22:512 to 00:29:046 and 00:32:017 to 00:38:551 . I can help you with that if I wrote something randomly. You might want to skip this.
Insane
- 00:02:017 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I'd transfer this to Extra, since the pattern is kind of intense, so the highest difficulty should have this. While in your Extra, there are only sliders and circles.
- 00:15:680 (2) - 00:16:868 (2) - 00:17:462 (4) - Maybe switch the head and tail (Ctrl + G)? I think it would reduce the distances and the flow would be nicer.
- 00:24:591 (4) - I dislike the current flow, because the movement was uncomfortable to me. I would move it somewhere 00:23:700 (3,4) would make a blanket pattern.
- 00:27:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Increasing the distance doesn't seem fitting with the music since in that section, it's not intense. I'd stay on the same distance.
- 00:36:769 (4) - Adding a new combo would introduce the new rhythm in the music.
- 00:40:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like in the first suggestion, I would put that in Extra. The pattern is really hard since it's a 1/4 rhythm with a jump between 00:41:076 (3,4) . This pattern would suit with Extra. Compared to Extra, it's only sliders. So use another pattern, like repeat sliders in Insane, and you can do the pattern made in Insane in Extra.
- 00:51:621 (3,4) - 00:52:512 (6,7) - Because of the distance used for these patterns, it makes an awkward and uncomfortable movement. Also, I don't really like the pattern you used at 00:51:026 (1,2) and other similar patterns. You can just stack them. The pattern could be something like this:
- 01:14:754 (5) - This circle should be on 01:14:786 since there's a new timing. Also, add a new combo? Because there's a new timing. If so, don't forget to remove the new combo from 01:15:083 (1) .
Extra
- 00:27:264 (1,2) - Add more space between them so the movement doesn't feel awkward. Try changing the first slider into this:
- 00:35:581 (2,3) - The flow doesn't go very well for me. Maybe a pattern like this would go, but you have to change the next patterns.
- 00:36:769 (4) - Add a new combo, and remove it from 00:37:660 (1) .
- 00:43:898 (8,1) - Switch the new combo.
- 00:44:195 to 00:46:274 - It needs more objects because this section is too simple for an Extra.
- 00:58:155 (5) - Add a new combo, while removing it from 00:59:046 (1) . You can also add a new combo on 00:59:343 (3) .
- 01:14:457 (3) - This short slider doesn't fit with the current rhythm and patterns. In the previous measures, there's triplets, so the slider seems a little "empty". I would turn the rhythm into this:
- 01:15:380 - 01:18:201 - I would add an object on those ticks because it feels empty.
- 01:23:102 (5,1) - The new combo should be switched.
- 01:26:518 (6) - Adding a new combo would be good.
The gap between Insane and Extra requires some attention, because Extra feels slightly easier than Insane, depending on the patterns used.
Gather more mods for more improvements and opinions to the map. I feel the map going to the next level. Poke me when you got more mods to the map so I could do a recheck. If you don't questions, don't hesitate! Until then, I'll mark this thread a star.
EDIT: I forgot to add a star, since I want to.