Just say a bit opinion.
[General]
[Sayasy] Unsnapped green line : 00:25:933 -,00:41:224 -,01:11:599 -,01:33:599 -,01:54:933 -,
[Sayarmal] Seems this diff have many unsnapped,suggest fix to snappped here,won't comment anymore in another diff,you know.
[Sayard]
[Sayather]
[Sayaka] Notice: Delete那個紅線後面那一條綠線,這邊沒有放節奏,沒必要加在這裡加上一條綠線。
[Other]
媽的我的2KD阿
- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[General]
- Seems the song start have a early which I think,personally I think AudioLeadIn can add 1000~1500 ms better.
- The background size looks weird , suggest change the rule size.(800x600 is minium size in the rule,1024x768 size is better.)
- 00:37:974 (2) - Why not add a whistle in head? Feel this voice fit add this hitsound.
- 00:38:974 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks like weird,keep curve here ?
- 01:48:474 (3) - Change this rhythm and end add finish?
- 01:56:641 (1,2) - Swap NC? Seems this downbeat voice start here.
- 01:58:974 (1) - And set NC here.
- 00:14:974 (4,5,6) - These 1/2 notes keep the same DS (1.00x) better.
- 00:22:974 (4,5) - Same as above.
- 00:23:974 (1) - Follow the now rule,this spinner to close the last note (00:26:641 (1) - this note),reduce the trouble,maybe you can use this rhythm :
- 00:37:308 (1) - As the same Easy diff.(Slider end)
- 00:48:641 (6,7,8,9) - Same reason with 00:14:974.(Won't comment anymore at next timepoint in the same reason)
- 00:05:808 - Have a piano strong voice here,why not add a note make played better?
- 00:10:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - At a hard diff seems this jumps DS too far >_>,suggest reduce to 1.5x here?
- 00:19:308 (2) - Stack better.
- 00:30:308 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason with 00:10:974 -,but I suggest you can place 1/4 slider reverse here,try it?
- 00:37:641 (8) - As the same Easy diff.(Slider end)
- 00:38:308 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason with 00:30:308.
- 00:57:308 (4) - Feel use a ctrl+g will have a good flow better.
- 01:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - Combine with 1/4 reverse here?
- 00:03:641 (7) - Because change a jump distance,so suggest set a NC here.
- 00:05:308 (5) - Same as above.
- 00:08:641 (5) - Same reason,suggest set a NC here.
- 00:21:474 (9) - Set a NC make played better.
- 00:39:308 (11) - Follow now ranked map,this NC have a bit long,set here?
- 00:37:974 (6) - As the same Easy diff.(Slider head)
- 01:48:974 (1) - Missed a finish here.(You has been added finish in normal diff here)
- 00:26:058 (6) - Because change a DS here,set NC?
- 00:37:974 (3) - As the same Easy diff.
- 01:33:641 (9) - Stack 01:33:974 (1) feel fit the music.
- 01:40:974 (13) - Forgot NC here?
- 01:48:974 (5) - Missed a finish here.(You has been added finish in normal diff here)
- Umm..I can't understand the Sayaka diff jumps in there,so I point out some NC only,it is old mapping style,I'm not sure this is can be submitted for qualfied.
Good luck.