General:
http://puu.sh/h8saw/71e3923cd7.jpg Volume at 100% hurts ears. Adjust according to the music's volume.
http://puu.sh/h8saw/71e3923cd7.jpg Volume at 100% hurts ears. Adjust according to the music's volume.
GG
00:02:119 (3) - Move to (444,56) and 00:02:286 (4) - Move to (460,260) for better flow in this jump.
00:02:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can flow better. http://puu.sh/h8sxk/96fd5ec82f.jpg . Also make slider 6 blanket 00:03:786 (1) .
00:04:286 (3) - Ugly pattern placement. Maybe move to (272,184)?
00:05:619 (1,2,3) - I think this can make the 1 and 2 away from slider head. Something like http://puu.sh/h8sID/68e75ae412.jpg .
00:06:286 (4,1,2,3,4) - Straight line patterning is boring. Make some pattern like http://puu.sh/h8sNk/b62990f9c8.jpg where 4th note is blanketed by 00:05:786 (3) .
00:07:119 (1) - NC to emphasis SV change. Also I think 0.6x speed is more optimal than 0.75x speed as it creates a better contrast between the slider speeds.
00:07:619 (1) - NC ^. http://puu.sh/h8sWC/d15317e3ae.jpg This placing is suitable for SV changes in consecutive sliders.
00:07:952 (3) - I think this slider should be a circle at 00:07:952 instead as I hear an extra sound that does not belong to the music. Something like
http://puu.sh/h8t1D/bf7880b30c.jpg .
00:09:786 (1,2,3,4) - Orz. I recommend sliders here instead since I only hear hi-hats in the music. Something like http://puu.sh/h8t7D/2f24f187ec.jpg .
00:16:952 (2,3,4,5) - Jump patterns pls. http://puu.sh/h8tqZ/0386dbf974.jpg
00:17:786 (2) - ._. http://puu.sh/h8tw1/15933c64e1.jpg ?
00:20:369 - Add note for triplet and I think http://puu.sh/h8tCO/516034e22b.jpg looks better.
00:22:952 (5) - Square jump here? To connect flow with 00:23:119 (1) . http://puu.sh/h8tL9/47a2b08798.jpg .
00:25:619 - Missing something. Use slider instead? Just copy and paste 00:25:119 (3) then CTRL+> it.
00:26:286 - Again missing something. Add note @@. http://puu.sh/h8tYa/552e152ca9.jpg .
00:27:119 (1) - Too close to jump as 1/2 a beat is missing. Also you can make shape here since it's 1/1 beat. http://puu.sh/h8u5e/6f7d1a3679.jpg
00:47:119 (1) - Overlapping with circle 4. Move it to where it does not overlap.
00:47:620 - Can add notes for a duplet + slider for triplet.
00:50:286 - ^
00:54:452 (3,4,5,6) - I dun think this square jump fits the music here. Try http://puu.sh/h8ukr/18254503ee.jpg ?
00:58:452 (4) - Doesn't flow well like this. Change it to http://puu.sh/h8uob/7bad30d2b4.jpg .
01:03:786 (2) - Too close to slider 1. Move to (464,48).
01:04:119 (4) - I think you can make it 2.06x distance instead to make consistent jump.
01:04:952 (4) - This slider is overlapping. Make something like http://puu.sh/h8uyA/373ac7b659.jpg so that the slider end touches on 01:04:119 (4) and slightly blankets 01:04:452 (3) .
01:07:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I recommend using 1x Distance snap to place streams.
01:08:452 (1) - Overlapping and can fix shape. http://puu.sh/h8uKT/93f5eebad2.jpg .
01:08:952 - Add note. It's in the puush above.^ Ofcs then you have to space them.
01:10:952 - I think you can add a note here. http://puu.sh/h8uQn/f409d49d79.jpg .
01:12:119 (3) - Place it like http://puu.sh/h8uUj/ed48e7010b.jpg for better flow.
01:12:619 (1,2,1,2,1) - This isn't much of a problem but I think you should consider changing the pattern a bit as the jumps are quite sudden and far.
01:12:952 (1,1) - Remove NC and add NC on 01:13:786 (3) .
01:14:286 (4,5,6) - Move the whole thing to (173,85) for better blanket from 01:13:786 (3) .
01:14:952 - Add note.
01:18:952 (2) - Dun stack this cuz you made slider jumps after, therefore place it away so that you can get players ready for the jumps. http://puu.sh/h8v0C/83cc54ae1a.jpg .
01:19:786 (1) - Remove NC.
01:21:119 (1) - ^
01:21:786 (6) - Add NC.
00:02:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can flow better. http://puu.sh/h8sxk/96fd5ec82f.jpg . Also make slider 6 blanket 00:03:786 (1) .
00:04:286 (3) - Ugly pattern placement. Maybe move to (272,184)?
00:05:619 (1,2,3) - I think this can make the 1 and 2 away from slider head. Something like http://puu.sh/h8sID/68e75ae412.jpg .
00:06:286 (4,1,2,3,4) - Straight line patterning is boring. Make some pattern like http://puu.sh/h8sNk/b62990f9c8.jpg where 4th note is blanketed by 00:05:786 (3) .
00:07:119 (1) - NC to emphasis SV change. Also I think 0.6x speed is more optimal than 0.75x speed as it creates a better contrast between the slider speeds.
00:07:619 (1) - NC ^. http://puu.sh/h8sWC/d15317e3ae.jpg This placing is suitable for SV changes in consecutive sliders.
00:07:952 (3) - I think this slider should be a circle at 00:07:952 instead as I hear an extra sound that does not belong to the music. Something like
http://puu.sh/h8t1D/bf7880b30c.jpg .
00:09:786 (1,2,3,4) - Orz. I recommend sliders here instead since I only hear hi-hats in the music. Something like http://puu.sh/h8t7D/2f24f187ec.jpg .
00:16:952 (2,3,4,5) - Jump patterns pls. http://puu.sh/h8tqZ/0386dbf974.jpg
00:17:786 (2) - ._. http://puu.sh/h8tw1/15933c64e1.jpg ?
00:20:369 - Add note for triplet and I think http://puu.sh/h8tCO/516034e22b.jpg looks better.
00:22:952 (5) - Square jump here? To connect flow with 00:23:119 (1) . http://puu.sh/h8tL9/47a2b08798.jpg .
00:25:619 - Missing something. Use slider instead? Just copy and paste 00:25:119 (3) then CTRL+> it.
00:26:286 - Again missing something. Add note @@. http://puu.sh/h8tYa/552e152ca9.jpg .
00:27:119 (1) - Too close to jump as 1/2 a beat is missing. Also you can make shape here since it's 1/1 beat. http://puu.sh/h8u5e/6f7d1a3679.jpg
00:47:119 (1) - Overlapping with circle 4. Move it to where it does not overlap.
00:47:620 - Can add notes for a duplet + slider for triplet.
00:50:286 - ^
00:54:452 (3,4,5,6) - I dun think this square jump fits the music here. Try http://puu.sh/h8ukr/18254503ee.jpg ?
00:58:452 (4) - Doesn't flow well like this. Change it to http://puu.sh/h8uob/7bad30d2b4.jpg .
01:03:786 (2) - Too close to slider 1. Move to (464,48).
01:04:119 (4) - I think you can make it 2.06x distance instead to make consistent jump.
01:04:952 (4) - This slider is overlapping. Make something like http://puu.sh/h8uyA/373ac7b659.jpg so that the slider end touches on 01:04:119 (4) and slightly blankets 01:04:452 (3) .
01:07:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I recommend using 1x Distance snap to place streams.
01:08:452 (1) - Overlapping and can fix shape. http://puu.sh/h8uKT/93f5eebad2.jpg .
01:08:952 - Add note. It's in the puush above.^ Ofcs then you have to space them.
01:10:952 - I think you can add a note here. http://puu.sh/h8uQn/f409d49d79.jpg .
01:12:119 (3) - Place it like http://puu.sh/h8uUj/ed48e7010b.jpg for better flow.
01:12:619 (1,2,1,2,1) - This isn't much of a problem but I think you should consider changing the pattern a bit as the jumps are quite sudden and far.
01:12:952 (1,1) - Remove NC and add NC on 01:13:786 (3) .
01:14:286 (4,5,6) - Move the whole thing to (173,85) for better blanket from 01:13:786 (3) .
01:14:952 - Add note.
01:18:952 (2) - Dun stack this cuz you made slider jumps after, therefore place it away so that you can get players ready for the jumps. http://puu.sh/h8v0C/83cc54ae1a.jpg .
01:19:786 (1) - Remove NC.
01:21:119 (1) - ^
01:21:786 (6) - Add NC.