neonat wrote:

General

I recommend 2000ms of time before the map starts, add 1300 to AudioLeadIn in .osu in Notepad - Done

Easy

00:00:782 (1,2) - since you are already trying to blanket, make ti more perfect (probably not the only one but will just highlight one) - Done
00:07:639 (5) - NC - Done
00:41:924 (2) - NC here instead of 00:41:496 (1) to keep the pattern consistent - Done
00:45:353 (1) - finish on start of slider - Done
00:47:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - honestly don't see why the chorus would be so special to use a different kind of combo patterning, which is to start the new combo 2 beats earlier, it changes quite a lot in what has been done and I don't see why this is needed, especially emphasis is on the regular 1st beat of the normal phrasing like 01:02:496 (01:02:496 (3) - ) - Changed it~
01:03:353 (4,1) - shift 01:05:067 (1) - it's too low, and the movement to that object is not very smooth - Done
01:19:639 (4) - NC - Done

Normal Remapping some parts~

00:07:639 (1,4,5) - remove those finishes, it's pretty excessive and doesn't fit the mood of the music at that point removed but i changed the patterns
00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) - remove the finishes, they don't fit and drown out the music - Done
00:13:639 (3) - remove finish and add clap on both the start and end of slider - Done
00:14:067 (4) - remove finish on start of slider and add clap on start and middle of slider - Done
00:20:496 (2,3,4) - try to use a different shape, use curve sliders instead, to make it less angular in motion - Done
00:21:353 (4) - NC instead of 00:21:782 (1) - Done
00:23:924 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:24:782 (3) - NC - Done
00:25:210 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:26:496 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:29:924 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:36:782 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:41:924 (2) - NC instead of 00:41:496 (1) - Done
00:46:639 (2,3) - do not have them on the same y-axis, the motion is too straight and isn't very good - Done
00:45:353 (1) - finish on start of slider - Done
00:47:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same thing as Easy - Done
01:17:282 (3) - clap on end of slider - Done
01:19:639 (3) - NC - Done
01:22:210 (2,3) - add claps - Done

Hard - Remapping some and I'll take note of what you said

00:00:782 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - really really too angular and straight, the flow here is really bad, have more curves implemented for better play
00:07:639 (1,3,1) - remove the finishes
00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:09:353 (3) - NC instead of 00:10:210 (1)
00:16:210 (5) - NC instead of 00:17:067 (1) - Just look at what you did at 00:14:496 (1,2,3,4) - follow is through and through
00:17:924 (4) - NC instead of 00:18:782 (1)
00:19:639 (5) - NC instead of 00:20:496 (1)
00:21:353 (3) - NC instead of 00:21:782 (1)
00:27:782 (8) - have it more in line with the previous slider:

SPOILER

00:41:496 (2,3) - unstack them, that is much better
00:42:353 (5,6) - ^
00:43:210 (2,3) - ^
00:44:067 (5,6) - ^
00:48:782 (1) - you did the right thing here, but then you went back to the inconsistent NC patterns !!!!!! aaaaa 00:51:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same thing as Easy and Normal
01:15:139 (6,1) - don't overlap
01:16:210 (2) - NC


One thing I noticed is that your patterns tend to really be very angular and straight, which is not very smooth for flow and it's quite the 'old style' which doesn't really play that well ~ Changing it


Good Luck

(osu! Mania) ~UPDATED

(osu! Standard) ~UPDATED but still remapping some

Julie wrote:

Requested from Love & Julie's Best Friend Queue!

★

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]

For creator : might want to try to fix that http://puu.sh/h9RbJ.png , seem like there was some change in the HD and MX O.O. I don't know how it end up like that, but it cause a unicode issue on AIMod. oh, i'm sorry. that was my miss. should be good right now

Also Frim's MX is the only one to have this 暁の華 in tags @.@ fix

[Frim's NM]

00:35:067 - this part should honnestly have more impact then this 00:36:782 - and 00:38:496 - . You did put drumfinish hitsound, but should be more impact while playing, like while tapping :3. i think i will keep it for now

00:47:710 (47710|3,47924|1) - wowowow still normal-hitclap?!? no more drum here LOL. Only diff you did that.fix. i forgot about that

00:48:782 - add one more note? that part should have more impact! fix. will adjusting for another dif

00:50:924 - no 2 note like this 00:50:067 - and this 00:51:782 - ? i think i will keep it for now

01:02:282 (62282|5) - change to normal-hitclap like all of your other difficulty, I don't hear a hithat here ><. fix

01:09:246 (69246|4) - delete, don't try to suddenly add a stream here, since you didn't do it at 01:02:389 - and 01:16:103 - .ok

01:09:353 - add one more note with drumfinish like you did on your other difficulty, should have more impact here!!! .ok

01:23:067 (83067|6) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - .fix

[Frim's HD]

00:10:424 (10424|5,10639|6,10853|5) - isn't it supose to be like that http://puu.sh/h9UAD.jpg judging from the instrument pitch ?ok. i just put it random. so, idk about pitch

00:16:210 (16210|3) - isn't this supose to be normal-hitwhistle like you did in NM and MX what are you talking about ?.all my dif in this section using normal-hitwhistle.

00:14:067 (14067|4,14282|3) - change those to normal-hitclap, still snare sound. okay

01:19:424 - add another note with normal-hitclap, important snare sound :3.oh. i didn't hear that


01:22:317 (82317|3,82532|3) - Hmm not you didn't add those on MX, either add or delete?delete

01:23:067 (83067|2) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - .fix

[Frim's MX]

00:14:067 (14067|2,14174|1,14282|2,14389|3) - change those to normal-hitclap, still snare sound. fix

00:16:746 - map this sound? because this part 00:16:853 - follow 00:16:746 - XD. ok

00:21:353 - only 2 notes here? Should be more impact then the same number of note as the part before. I think you forgot a drumfinish.wav here too. You did 3 notes + a drumfinish.wav in your HD ;3. oh, yes i'm forgot about it

00:45:353 - this part should have more impact then 00:45:567 - to 00:46:853 - , so add one more note with drumfinish.wav. ok

00:48:782 - same reason as 00:21:353 - , you did it good in HD :3.ok

01:15:246 - add a note here since you did it here 01:14:817 - . fix

01:19:424 - add one more note, there isn't just a hithat here, there also one drum sound that you put normal-hitclap when you map that drum sound. fix

01:21:674 (81674|2,81782|0,81889|2,81996|4) - this feel weird, suddendly small LN here. Try keep it consistent and make those normal note except this one 01:21:996 (81996|4) - can be LN till here 01:22:210 - . fix

01:22:210 (82210|6,82210|2,82424|4,82424|0,82639|2,82853|4,82960|6) - mistake maybe? should be normal-hitclap, that whistle is a bass sound O.O. And you also put normal-hitclap on HD. fix

01:22:639 - and 01:22:853 - add one more note with normal-hitclap, should be same as 01:22:210 (82210|6,82210|2,82424|0,82424|4) - .ok

01:23:067 (83067|0) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - . fix

Really a freaking nice osu mania mapset! Incredibly well map, most of the part among difficulty really consistent! Keep up the great work! This is my 1st time seing your osu mania Frim O.O! and I'm suprise !! Feel free to pm me some of your other work too !! *Star*

AND GAWD PLEASE HAVE THIS SONG RANK SOON <3!! OSU NEED AKATSUKI NO YONA!! I try mapping a song of it but I got lazy =w=

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:04:210 (3) - Personally I think the red anchor is weird in here, try to make slider smoother so that beginners can play sliders more easily - Done
   
   eg

   
2. 00:56:496 (4,5) - Better not to start slider at red tick, moreover you only mapped this pattern at 00:56:496 (4,5) and 01:14:496 (4,5), You used reversed slider for same rhythm in other place, so I think you can use it as well for consistence. - Done
   

[Normal] ~ REMAPPED IT

1. 00:00:782 (1,3) - Avoid these overlapping, it looks weird and quite difficult to read, since it is only to beginning I think it is easily to fix
2. 00:03:567 (4,1) - Try curving 00:04:210 (1), Using straight slider provide a sharp turn here which flow is bad, you can also place 00:04:210 (1)'s tail higher which give out a better flow too
   
   eg

   
3. 00:05:924 (3) - ^, try to curve this slider a bit
4. 00:10:210 (5) - Place this higher for a curve flow, placing 3 notes horizontally breaks the flow of this diff
5. 00:14:067 (4) - Overlapping with 00:12:782 (1) looks weird, try to change the pattern
6. 00:18:782 (2) - Flow is bad here, I suggest you to put the reverse on the left side 00:17:924 (1) so players can hit it easily instead of moving down cursors, and then fix the following ds
   
   eg

   
7. 00:24:782 (3) - Place higher instead? so players dont need to move down their cursors but moving it along the curve
8. 00:31:639 (1,2,3) - Leave some 1/2 gap here, or else it would break the consistence
9. 01:05:924 (3,4,5) - ^
10. 01:10:210 (2) - This slider is weird to the consistence, try to map here like 00:55:639 (3,4,5,6,7,8)

[Hard]

1. 00:09:353 (3,1) - Fix DS here - Done
2. 00:14:496 (1) - Slider is curved up, but you placed following notes (00:15:353 (2,3) ) at below, may consider fixing the flow - Done
3. Generally fine, but I feel this diff is a bit like "old style' :pp ~ I think as a beginner, I learned the wrong style. haha. but im gradually learning.

~ UPDATED(Osu! Standard and Osu! Mania)

ModernTiger wrote:

Hello, I'm here to mod Mania's map!
Please note that all the list below are just suggestions. If the suggestion feels useless, feel free reject that.
If change is strongly suggested, I'll check that as a ★.

[General]
★ Recommand using more HQ MP3. I think it comes from TV Rip OP, am I right?idk. for this part i will leave this problem to creator

[Patterns]
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7
I'll take notes on consistency pattern hand balance.

Frim's HD

★ Make LNs more conscious with melodies.

00:01:424 (1424|1) / 00:03:139 (3139|4) / 00:04:853 (4853|4) / 00:06:567 (6567|5) / 00:08:282 (8282|4) / 00:09:996 (9996|6) / 00:11:710 (11710|1) - +1/8 at LNs. Also, this part is more difficult then MX.
00:12:782 (12782|3,12782|4,12782|5) - Delete notes at 4, 6ok
00:13:210 (13210|6,13210|5) - Move a note at 5 at delete another.ok
00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why?
01:02:174 - Add a note. ok
01:09:032 - ^ ok
01:15:889 - ^ ok
01:16:532 (76532|3,76639|4,76639|2,76746|3,76853|2) - Make this untangle, like 01:16:532 (76532|3,76639|5,76639|2,76746|4,76853|6) or anything.
01:24:782 (84782|5) 01:26:496 (86496|4) 01:28:210 (88210|6) - Delete this.

Frim's MX

★ This map's unicode title is different with others. fix
★ Make LNs more conscious with melodies. fix

★ 00:00:782 - Priority to consistency, LN is not match with synth line's melody fix. Also, 00:00:782 (782|3) , I couldn't find any matched sound with this LN's type.
00:12:782 (12782|4,12782|6,12782|3) - Delete a note at 4. ok
00:13:210 (13210|4,13210|2) - Move notes to 5,7 and delete 2. ok
00:16:317 (16317|2) - Delete this (a note not match with bass). ok
00:16:960 (16960|1) - ^ ok
00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here?
★00:21:353 (21353|3) - Priority to consistency, LN is not match with eletric guitar's melody. Consider to make it match with melody.i will try to make something like that
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound
00:49:317 (49317|2) - Make a note here. (matches with bass sound)
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>>
00:49:639 (49639|0,49853|2) - If you want to make this more difficult, using bass sound and closed hi hat sound("ching ching") both. Here is an example with bass chords. 00:49:639 (49639|0,49746|2,49853|0,49960|2) And that's why I recommand to use more HQ MP3. Bass line is barely to hear.

Frim4503 wrote:

Frim's HD

00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why? - That part is drum's tom tom. I think it is great to insert LN on here.

Frim's MX

00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here? - It is for bass guitar.
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound - It has Finish hitsound, so I confused. :/
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>> - It was mistaken. Just ignore this.

ModernTiger wrote:

Frim4503 wrote:

Frim's HD

00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why? - That part is drum's tom tom. I think it is great to insert LN on here.

Frim's MX

00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here? - It is for bass guitar.
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound - It has Finish hitsound, so I confused. :/
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>> - It was mistaken. Just ignore this.

General

Most of the problems have already been pointed out by BN already. Your map is almost ready (std mode). Just little suggestions

Easy

1. 00:52:639 (2) add clap ?
2. 01:14:067 (3,5) ^

Hard

1. 01:16:210 (1) remove NC
2. 01:05:924 (4) why do you put whistle here ?. It seems out of the blue from the whole song

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue

General

Most of the problems have already been pointed out by BN already. Your map is almost ready (std mode). Just little suggestions

Easy

1. 00:52:639 (2) add clap ? - Ow. didn't see that. Done
2. 01:14:067 (3,5) ^ - Done

Hard

1. 01:16:210 (1) remove NC - Done
2. 01:05:924 (4) why do you put whistle here ?. It seems out of the blue from the whole song - Nope. Not really. It fits after a clap. It's consistent throughout the song.

Good luck getting this map ranked
Be sure to contact BN when you think its ready - Ok.
Have a star

- Thanks for the STAR and for the Mod. I appreciate it.

DanSparce wrote:

Hi~~~
Mania mod

Column:
/1/2/3/ 4 /5/6/7/

It is in my rule that I would mod only 2 diffs if not 4K so I pick NM and HD

Frim's NM

00:17:924 (17924|2) - It would be better if this would be at / 4 / instead of /3/ to avoid notes at same column with 00:17:496 (17496|2) fix with another pattern
00:41:924 (41924|1) - To /7/? no
00:47:924 (47924|1) - To /3/? ?^
00:47:924 (47924|1,48139|3,48353|4) - I think it would be better if these were holds and if these were holds, add LN at 00:48:567 line /6/ and reposition notes at 00:48:782 (48782|2,48782|5,48782|3) - fix with another pattern
01:23:067 (83067|6) - In my opinion, two holds here are better, at /1/no. i prefewr the current pattern

Frim's HD

00:01:103 (1103|5,1424|4) - Ctrl+G for symmetrical pattern
00:02:067 (2067|5) - To /7/
00:02:817 (2817|3) - To /2/
00:03:139 (3139|2) - To /1/
00:04:853 (4853|1) - To /3/
00:05:924 (5924|2) - To /2/
00:06:246 (6246|6) - To /6/
00:06:567 (6567|5) - To /5/
00:06:782 - Why not add a note here? at /1/
00:08:282 (8282|4) - To /3/ and 00:08:282 (8282|4) - To /5/
00:09:674 (9674|3) - To /2/
------
and please fix your patterns until 00:12:782 (12782|3) -
I'll point them out instead(ones I haven't fixed:
00:09:353 (9353|3,9353|5,9674|1,9674|3,9996|6,9996|3) -
00:11:067 (11067|0,11389|5,11389|3,11710|2,11710|1) -
Tips:
Equal column spacing between double note
Add symmetry
------
00:48:139 - why not add LN ending at 00:48:353 - , preferably at /4/? To emphasize lyrics
00:48:567 - Here too, ending at 00:48:567 -, preferably at /5/ ""
01:02:174 - Add note at /2/?
01:23:067 (83067|2) - Double hold?
01:24:782 (84782|5,86496|4,88210|6) - These are not necessary as they are no longer part of the song
The beats are almost perfect. I think the only problem you have to fix is the patterning. Sometimes, it is also about the beauty of the whole map, like how pleasing it is to the eye so as much as possible, try to have consistent patterning. fix all ecpect the last one. i will wait another modder to ask teir opinion

Good luck!!! go for rank! There's std level?

1. A bit hesitate on the Artist, some source say its "Cynthia"

1. Nothing

1. Nothing

1. It's up to you but, stop the Kiai here 01:01:639 and create a new one at 01:02:496

1. Honestly the hitsound was fine, but it's a bit 'complicated'. Why not name it to.. Yea, like "drum-hitnormal99" ? Then, you can play the Sampleset & Additions

1. Nothing

Kazamastar11 wrote:

From Kazamastar's Queue

[General]
1. Metadata

1. A bit hesitate on the Artist, some source say its "Cynthia"

2. Design

1. Nothing

3. BG

1. Nothing

4. Timing / BPM

1. It's up to you but, stop the Kiai here 01:01:639 and create a new one at 01:02:496

5. Hitsound

1. Honestly the hitsound was fine, but it's a bit 'complicated'. Why not name it to.. Yea, like "drum-hitnormal99" ? Then, you can play the Sampleset & Additions

6. Difficulty

1. Nothing

LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Frim's NM]
00:26:496 (26496|2) - Move to 5
00:26:496 (26496|1) - Move to 2
00:29:924 (29924|4) - Move to 1/2
00:33:353 (33353|4) - Move to 6
00:36:782 (36782|3) - Move to 2
00:41:924 (41924|4) - Move to 5
01:04:639 (64639|3,64853|2) - Ctrl+J
01:07:210 (67210|4) - Move to 6
Nice pattern ^^

[Frim's HD]
00:18:353 (18353|2) - Move to 0
00:42:353 (42353|1) - Move to 4
00:50:067 (50067|2) - ^
Woah

[Frim's MX]
00:17:067 (17067|3) - 5 is so empty ;w;.. Move to 5
Only that ^^

Nice diff, nice song, STAR!
Go for rank ^^

Feedback about my mod :

i think your mod is not bad but if you can, i think you can improve it by adding reason why you suggest it. example move this to 4 for picth or avoid jack

Kazamastar11 wrote:

From Kazamastar's Queue

[General]
1. Metadata

1. A bit hesitate on the Artist, some source say its "Cynthia" ~ It's Cyntia~ looked it in the video itself.

2. Design

1. Nothing

3. BG

1. Nothing

4. Timing / BPM

1. It's up to you but, stop the Kiai here 01:01:639 and create a new one at 01:02:496 - Done

5. Hitsound

1. Honestly the hitsound was fine, but it's a bit 'complicated'. Why not name it to.. Yea, like "drum-hitnormal99" ? Then, you can play the Sampleset & Additions ~ Done(But I don't know if there might be changes) Heyy~ Frim! Can you check your diff if the hitsounds still there??

6. Difficulty

1. Nothing

-TakoYaki- wrote:

Hello From My NM queue Sorry for lateness ~ It's Ok.

[Easy]

00:07:639 (1) - This shape can be improved - Done

Good Diff

[Normal]

00:00:782 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved - Done

NICE

[Hard]

00:39:139 (2,3,4) - It maybe too fast for people to realize that it's a triplet - Done
00:39:782 (5,6) - the flow can be improved here - Done
00:48:996 (2,3,4) - Triplet problems again - Done

You map is really great, hope you can get it ranked soon, Good Luck

Eternalie wrote:

Hi desu~ mod request from ハナヤマタ
Mania diffs~
hope it will help :3

[box=Munya!]Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
Hi Frim hi.. sorry for late answer
[Frim's NM]
aply all

[Frim's HD]
01:18:996 (78996|6) - ^ add a note (drum sounds here) i have already 2 note
01:20:710 (80710|6) - add one more ( hat sound i think)^

[Frim's MX]
aplly all
That's all nice GDs there~ Good Luck and Have a nice day ^^/

bakabakemono wrote:

Hi AsakuraNe Here your request as requested from Moddar Huehue Team Mania (click banner if you want to know further about us!).
[box=These mods are only suggestion, so feel free to reject them!][notice]Column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[General]

1. Seems fine

[Frim's MX]
[*]00:47:710 (47710|1) - imo should end here 00:48:139 - and then 00:47:924 (47924|4) - imo should starts here 00:48:139 - and end here 00:48:353 - i will ask for oher opinion about this

[Frim's HD]
fix all

[Frim's NM]
fix all

Thanks for trust us to mod your map~ wow frim's patterns are awesome goodluck~

Draftnell wrote:

req from Recaro O!M Modding

etto...here ~~

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[Frim's NM]
will wait for other opinion

[Frim's HD]
it's because my pattern. I did it on purpose to not using hithat in this dif


[Frim's MX]
no change, will wait anothe opinion


Good Luck ~

DE-CADE wrote:

My Mod is mostly focusing on comfortabilty and structure,
Every Beatmap should be fun to play.
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Since i didn't see you're updating this,to avoid overlap mod
i delete some of them which is has been pointed out by the modder before
[MX]

00:13:210 (13210|4,13210|2,13210|1) - Missing Hitsound ! i use LR_Drum Hit Open. not hit hat

00:19:853 (19853|6) - Move to 6
00:20:174 (20174|5) - Move to 7

00:24:139 (24139|4) - Move to 4
00:24:353 (24353|6) - Move to 5

00:26:496 (26496|4) - Move to 4

00:33:139 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3029806

00:35:067 (35067|0,35067|1,35067|6,35067|5,35067|4) - I dont know why you put 5 chord here cymbal ?, it's to exceed

00:35:067 (35067|1,36782|5,38496|1,40210|3,41924|5,43639|3) - very not quite good to play here, bass is not really audible to map and you still force that, this is the hardest diff with sr 3.00 that i ever play

00:37:210 (37210|4) - Move to 4, Snare chord should be different with kick chord
00:40:639 (40639|2) - Move to 5
00:40:853 (40853|4) - Move to 2

00:48:567 - Add note here

01:05:496 (65496|5,65496|4,65496|6) - Seriously, this is really hard to keep holding the LN
01:05:496 (65496|6,65496|4) - Move to 4 n 1

01:15:782 - Add to 4

FIX ALL
Better update other diff first

Frim4503 wrote:

[MX]

00:13:210 (13210|4,13210|2,13210|1) - Missing Hitsound ! i use LR_Drum Hit Open. not hit hat

SPOILER

Krfawy wrote:

Neonat, please.

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi again, from my modding queue

LEGEND
BLUE = suggestions and comments
BLACK = real problems

FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments

00:00:00 - Changes - Reasons

[General]
Nice mapset, I am also one of the people who enjoys the "semi-old" mapping style in the Hard. xD
-Haha xD actually, because I was a beginner. I studied ranked maps and I accidentally learned the "Old Style". Didn't know there was a new style though.

However there is a lot of problems with making consistant New Combos. Generally you can divide your NC's by using the large white lines as guidance. Make a NC every line or every other line. In some cases there can be different NC styles but that is the easy way to make it right.
http://puu.sh/hkkcQ/3269f43ff5.jpg -Thanks


[Easy]
Fine. Minor stuff

00:00:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - NC on 00:00:782 - 00:04:210 - 00:07:639 - -Done
00:14:496 - 00:20:924 - delete all the NC here and use this - 00:14:496 - 00:17:710 - -Done


[Normal]
Good. Some minor stuff

00:12:782 (1,2,3,4) - Right! Awesome use of pattern and hitsounds here to make things interesting -Thanks
00:26:924 (1) - remove NC -Done
00:30:567 (4,5) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hkjoV/8882f7fc37.jpg - i don't like the way the 3/2 slider sounds here -Done
01:02:496 (3) - missing finish -Fixed
01:07:210 (3) - forgot hitsounds here -Fixed
01:11:924 (5) - NC -Done

[Hard]
Good! Theres a few problems but it plays smoothly in general.
The triples that have slider - circle - slider that have the circle snapped on top of the last slider are super confusing to play and should not be featured on HARD (it is using the spacing for a 1/2 time apart but it is actually 1/4)

00:18:782 (1) - remove NC -Done
00:19:639 (1) - add finish at 00:19:639 OR you can remove the finish on 00:16:210 (1) - 00:17:924 (1) - either works, i can't really tell what sound is there in the music but they should be consistant -Added Finish
00:21:353 - 00:47:496 - delete all the NC here and then use this list for NC - since there is more notes in this difficulty than the others I suggest dividing the NC more frequently -Done

SPOILER

00:47:496 - 00:23:067 - 00:24:782 - 00:26:496 - 00:28:210 - 00:29:924 - 00:31:639 - 00:33:353 - 00:35:067 - 00:36:782 - 00:38:496 - 00:40:210 - 00:47:067 - 00:42:782 - 00:43:639 - 00:44:496 - 00:45:353 -

00:56:067 (2,3,4) - try putting (3) between them rather than stack - this placement really is weird to read and play -Done
01:02:496 (4) - add NC here -Done
01:05:924 (4) - ^ -Done
01:09:353 (4) - ^ -Done
01:14:067 (5,6,7,1,2) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hkiD6/aedb84ca04.jpg. Also NC on 01:14:282 - 01:16:210 - again the triple. I think this part can use a whole new pattern because there is a vocal on 01:14:282 that the reverse slider does not include. -Done

Total time spent on mod: 1:30 ~ 1:45

That's all! Song is really awesome, I don't think its ready to rank yet but its very close! good luck!
/me gives star

• Maybe you can move the note at 00:06:996(3) from its current position (x76, y152) to (x76, y172) and the note at 00:07:639(1) from its current position (x243, y158) to (x243, y172)

• If not going to go with the first idea, maybe you could at least move the note at 00:07:639(1) from its current position (x243, y158) to (x243, y152) so that it's symmetrical with the note at 00:06:996(3)

• - 00:15:139
  - 00:16:853
  - 00:18:567
  - 00:20:282
  - 01:17:710 (Alternatively, you could make 01:17:496(4) a slider)
  - 01:19:424
  - 01:21:139 (Alternatively, you could make 01:20:924(4) a slider)

1. Normally I would say this is a little bit wasted potential, because there could be a made a lot more out of this song, but I suppose the mania diffs are the most important aspect of the set . However I see a lot of things like repetitive patterns by mapping to the BG music instead of the vocals, and it makes the map kind of boring to play. I'll leave some suggestions that could make it more interesting to play.
2. Sound quality could be a lot better, but I suppose it's hard to find a good sounding version
3. What are hihat.wav and LR_Drum Hit Open.wav doing in the map folder? D:

1. You were mapping more to the vocals in the normal than in the hard lol

1. Seems okay

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my mod queue victim list

What can I say... This beatmap is near perfection- It's really well made

Only suggestions I can make for you are in the Hard difficulty, but you don't really need to take them since it's near perfect as it already is. But who knows, maybe my suggestions will give your map that extra oomph.

Hard
- The pattern at 00:06:996(3, 4, 5, 1) looks a little off compared to its previous patterns because it isn't square-shaped like the rest of them

• Maybe you can move the note at 00:06:996(3) from its current position (x76, y152) to (x76, y172) and the note at 00:07:639(1) from its current position (x243, y158) to (x243, y172)

-Did this one~

• If not going to go with the first idea, maybe you could at least move the note at 00:07:639(1) from its current position (x243, y158) to (x243, y152) so that it's symmetrical with the note at 00:06:996(3)

- Consider adding a note at the following points:

• - 00:15:139 -Added
  - 00:16:853 -Added
  - 00:18:567 -Added
  - 00:20:282 -Added
  - 01:17:710 (Alternatively, you could make 01:17:496(4) a slider) -Added a slider
  - 01:19:424 -Added
  - 01:21:139 (Alternatively, you could make 01:20:924(4) a slider) -Added a slider

- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:24:353(4) -Done

That's about all the suggestions I can give to your flawless beatmap; hope this helps you out