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Alexefer wrote:
[Insane]
00:03:413 (1,2) - IMO plays better as slider (also consider changing additions on drum instead of samples?) i think both is possible, but i prefere my version since both beats are strong
00:04:465 - you can hear sound here. you should drop hitcircle here, it just plays better for me gonna think about this one - i like to set an emphasize on the strong beats before and after
00:04:816 (1) - that slider, well I understand why have you put it here, but still I think it's better to use 5 hitcircles just like last combo, your decision focus on whooooshhhh
00:10:430 (1,2,3) - long slider IMO meh, i understand a long slier would be possible but i like dem beats/color]
00:13:413 (1,1,2,3) - between 1-1 clearly sound, I would go sth like this (http://puu.sh/h43rN/4504f86904.jpg), drop clap on 1 then and put on sliders
00:16:746 (5,6) - slider? going with vocals ^^ pshhh, dont destroy that beautiful jump, the vocal is breathing not sure if that important
- that slower part really good -
00:57:974 (5)
01:03:588 (5)
01:09:202 (5) - IMO no reason to stop here, maybe go with slider -> hitcircle under it instead - still your map, your decision stops are sexy
[Hard]
AR 7.5? it's not really slow song, you could just go with 8 yea ar8 feels better, fair point
00:03:939 (3,4,5,1) - the same missing circle like Insane ^
00:06:220 (1,2) - start slider from 1? and just drop circle?removed the circle here
00:12:886 (4,1,1,2,3,4) - it plays really weird, I would try with sliders here (http://puu.sh/h45Mp/7eda924f1b.jpg)
I mean that pause with overlap is eh + those three hitcircles don't go well with rhythm I think, also changing second slider into hitcircles plays better tried to fix this part
00:57:974 (4)
01:03:588 (4) - well the same thing like Insane, but it's Hard so plays fine IMO, still if you would change this in Insane, you should be consistant
[Normal]
01:19:202 (1)
01:24:816 (1) - maybe move spinner to drop those hitcircles? not sure what you mean here, i like boom
so missed sounds in the music D: (fkin newbs )
[Easy]
00:25:869 (1,2)
00:37:097 (1,2) - repeating pattern x.x try to rotate or something i think repeating pattern are good for beginners
01:19:202 (1)
01:24:816 (1) - the same as Normal
good luck with ranking this, mate thanks mate
sumaru100 wrote:
NORMAL
00:45:518 (1,2) - maybe put these in the same direction? (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2983027) they look better imo fixed stuff here
00:47:272 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2983030 If you don't like it, i's just that I don't like a lot this kind of patterns :V ^
00:50:430 (4) - you can move this to x:348 y:76 and 00:50:781 (5,1) - to x:268 y:128 so 00:50:430 (4) - won't be behind the slider[ good idea
HARD
00:29:202 (2) - move the tail a little bit to the right, so 00:28:676 (1,2) - are completely at the same distance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2983054 okk
00:56:044 I think you can put a circle there (imo) possible but not necessary imo
01:00:255 (3,1) - this blanket looks a little weird, maybe you can fix it (or I'm really getting blind D;) nah, im the blind one here
Really nice map (I don't have kudosu to give you a star u.u)... Hope this helps you helped a lot thanks!
GL!
Cl8n wrote:
General
- I don't really know what I think about that break in the kiai time... It works, but it just seems kinda random. If anyone else comments on that, I'd consider changing it. will keep that in mind
Hard
- 00:03:763 & 00:04:465 Add circles. not necessary imo
- 00:13:237 & 00:13:588 ^
- 00:16:746 I think it would make more sense to add a circle here and end the repeating slider at 00:16:570. You might not agree, though. yup changed stuff here
- 01:17:448 (1) Remove NC and place a NC on the next slider. not sure at this one, i changed it for now but i will try to get a third opinion
Insane
- 00:04:465 Add a circle here, probably at 470x146y.
- 00:10:430 (1) Consider making this a slider, because every other note like this is a slider in the map. makes sense, marked it will change this one
- 00:10:781 (3) This note is kinda quiet so maybe make that the slider end of the last note (maybe make a repeating slider out of 00:10:430 (1,2,3)?).
- 00:13:588 Add a circle here, probably at 423x302y.
- 00:25:255 (5) This is extremely quiet in the song, so I'd consider removing it. probably the 5th time i hear this so yeaok removed
- 00:28:325 (8,9) The ends of these sliders are mapped to pretty much nothing. I'd make them both circles instead.
- 00:46:571 (7,8) Possibly make this a slider, because you're mapping to the vocals here. makes sense
- There are some places where I think you could put beats, but you stayed consistent and it goes with the map so I didn't list those.
Sorry for the kinda short mod; there wasn't a lot I wanted to change! Overall, an amazing map. Shot 2 stars and favorited! thanks mate
Me too ><pkhg wrote:
teach me how to get mods and attention ;w;
Kite wrote:
[General]
http://vgmdb.net/album/50962
add Hisashi Koyama, Kenji Tamai, Shogo Ohnishi to tags added
[Easy]
Why don't you map out the break? This is the only difficulty with a break D: mapped the break
[Normal]
00:10:605 (4,5) - dodgy spacing for a normal diff imo oh yea broken ds here
[Hard]
lower AR to 7,5? ok, since i also lowered insane
00:05:518 (1,1) - why not just keep it simple here and extend the slider til the white tick o: sounds good
[Insane]
AR 8,8 seems to work better here yeaaaok
01:29:027 (5) - feels redundant to have this beat changed back to a slider here
Squirrel wrote:
Sorryyy, war gestern dann doch etwas busy. >-<
General
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EasyNormal
- hmh, manchma hasu reeecht viele objects auf einmal auf dem Feld, sieht nen bisschen überladen aus.. ich hab's ma mit AR4 versucht und fand das etwas passender.. klar, is minimal schwieriger, aber man hat nen bisschen besseren Überblick wenn ich alles auf einmal da is.
- 00:06:220 (1,2) - tick change is richtig verwirrend und klingt auch nen bisschen off, weil du halt mehr als einen Beat auslässt (bei 00:07:448 - und 00:07:623 -). selbst wenn das nen bisschen komplizierter wär, wäre sowas denk ich passender -
is auch eigentlich akzeptabel für ne Easy, wenn solche Rhythmen nich gespammt werden xb
gleiches dann für 00:11:834 (1,2) -- 00:17:448 (1,2) - ähnlich hier. brauchst den Beat bei 00:18:500 - nich ignorieren wenn du's so versuchst -
passt auch bissi besser zu den Vocals, find ich 'w'- 00:20:255 (1) - ähnlich zu ^, auf dem red tick hier 00:20:781 - is so deutlich nen Beat zu hören, würd den Slider auch kürzen und noch nen 2. dahinterpacken. oder sowas -
- 01:14:290 (2,3) - ich wiederhol mich.. - http://puu.sh/h4JWc.jpg
Hard
- 00:29:202 - missing a circle here. >o< fühlt sich halt so'n bisschen abrupt an momentan. versuch das? -
orientiert sich halt anders, aber passt ganz gut, denk ichskipping Insane, weil kann ich nich. xD Sorry. :c
- 00:05:518 (1,1) - antijump find ich hier eher unpassend. der slow down vorher passt super, aber genau an dieser Stelle fängt's ja richtig an. würd das eher normal spacen
- 00:39:904 (1,2,3) - ich mag wie's sich spielt, aber die Sounds dazwischen so ganz ungemappt zu lassen.. mmmh.. weiß nich, is nen bisschen verwirrend. vor allem mit dem Spacing von 00:40:956 (1,2,3) - hinterher.. ich würd aus denen einfach kurze Slider machen, kannst sie jah trotzdem anders spacen als die danach? - http://puu.sh/h4KSS.jpg
gleiches dann bei 00:42:711 (1,2,3) - und 00:45:518 (1,2,3) -
hoffe iwas hilft. kd mussu nich geben, glaub nich dass da was sinnvolles steht. orz
anyway, gogo. sieht schon genial aus! >w<
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huh where did it go o.oKawaii4Life wrote:
can you add video?
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