1. Doomsday's Insane (3.73 stars, 114 notes)
2. Easy (1.65 stars, 55 notes)
3. Hard (2.87 stars, 107 notes)
4. Kardet's Normal (2.01 stars, 74 notes)

[ C R O W N S ] wrote:

Alright let's mod.

Easy by M.Y

No problems, plays just like an Easy should, slow paced nice and simple to read, very well done diff.

Normal by Kardet

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00:03:866 (2) - This slider feels awkward for me, testplayed it a few times, just feels too awkward for a place in a normal diff, I'd request a new slider here, do what you will with it but make sure it fits the diff :^) (The other uses of this slider feel fine but this one just feels, off?)
00:40:000 (4) - idk if this is meant to be a finish rather than a clap or whatever, really stuck out like a sore thumb to me, don't need to change though just wondered if it was intentional

Hard by M.Y

This SV feels a little to fast for the silkyness of the map I'd seen in previous maps, this SV made the map feel a little too intense for the beat of the map and the diff?
00:40:000 (1,2,3,4) - Square feels weird to me, for the intensity of the rest of the map this slowdown on this pattern feels a little off, no required change just my input

Insane by Doomsday

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other than that, all smooth and noice. Exactly what I'd expect from someone with your history in mapping.

1. 00:32:000 (1) - prefer this to be nicely rounded like http://puu.sh/hcU3U.png
2. 00:33:600 (3) - same thing as ^
3. 00:28:000 (4) - personal pref. you can modify the shape so the tail stacks on 00:26:800 (2). change 00:27:200 (3) too for symmetry i guess
4. 00:12:000 (4) - personal pref. move so that the tail stacks on 00:10:800 (2).

1. 00:16:666 (2,3) - i would suggest not to stack things like this in Normal diff
2. 00:12:000 (5) - that might not beis probably not rankable, lol. also kinda bad looking overlap

1. 00:24:000 (5) - stack on 00:23:066 (2)?
2. 00:25:600 (1) - remove the middle point and add it again to use the circular slider algorithm (or just remake it with 3 points)
3. 00:32:000 (1) - simplify curve a little http://puu.sh/hcV9k.png
4. 00:28:000 (7,8) - try to make more symmetrical at that angle

Nekomata wrote:

been all dogs until now heheh :3

[Easy]

1. 00:32:000 (1) - prefer this to be nicely rounded like http://puu.sh/hcU3U.png Sure
2. 00:33:600 (3) - same thing as ^ Sure
3. 00:28:000 (4) - personal pref. you can modify the shape so the tail stacks on 00:26:800 (2). change 00:27:200 (3) too for symmetry i guess Sure bit i wont change change 00:27:200 (3)
4. 00:12:000 (4) - personal pref. move so that the tail stacks on 00:10:800 (2). Sure

[Kardet's Normal]

1. 00:16:666 (2,3) - i would suggest not to stack things like this in Normal diff
2. 00:12:000 (5) - that might not beis probably not rankable, lol. also kinda bad looking overlap

Will review this with Kardet himself!

[Hard]

1. 00:24:000 (5) - stack on 00:23:066 (2)? Sure
2. 00:25:600 (1) - remove the middle point and add it again to use the circular slider algorithm (or just remake it with 3 points) Oops
3. 00:32:000 (1) - simplify curve a little http://puu.sh/hcV9k.png Sure
4. 00:28:000 (7,8) - try to make more symmetrical at that angle Sure

Anxient wrote:

if this is a m4m request, then do the map that is on the thread.
why is there so many corgis in this thread omg
as requested...
full set mod. but I cant do shit so
Easy
00:07:600 (3) - move to x123 y107 Ok!
00:08:000 (4) - if follow, move to x217 y49 Sure
^ above mods so it has arc movement
00:10:800 (2,4) - stack sliderend 4 with circle 2 Done in previous mod
00:20:400 (2) - move to x103 y156 for arc Sure
00:32:000 (1,3) - better arcs please. perfect 32 seconds. Please review my changes

Normal
00:03:200 (1,2) - blanket? if not supposed to be, make it look less like a blanket ;w;
00:12:000 (5) - what. overlap. also, make neater ;w;
00:15:200 (5,1) - blanket hump
00:29:600 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?

Will talk to Kardet for this

Hard
00:25:600 (1) - better arc Sure
00:32:000 (1) - ^ Done in previous mod
00:34:000 (7) - NC Disagree, if I place a NC it will not match the song (NC every symbol smash)
00:40:400 (1,2,3,4) - better square. delete everything but note 1, and repaste them while theyer all stacked. the press < button to form a square Its symmetrical so I disagree and like how this bit is.

Doomsday's Insane
00:28:800 (2) - glorious.
00:32:000 (1) - wha

nothing to say for Doom's diff.

good luck!

Nekomata wrote:

[Kardet's Normal]

1. 00:16:666 (2,3) - i would suggest not to stack things like this in Normal diff Bit apprehensive with this, but removing the notes before the sliders here didn't change as much as I thought it would. So applied where it can be.
2. 00:12:000 (5) - that might not beis probably not rankable, lol. also kinda bad looking overlap Guess I thought it was good at the time, changed to be a bit *lot* nicer.

Anxient wrote:

Normal
00:03:200 (1,2) - blanket? if not supposed to be, make it look less like a blanket ;w; Applied.
00:12:000 (5) - what. overlap. also, make neater ;w; See above, not sure what I was thinking with this one.
00:15:200 (5,1) - blanket hump Done
00:29:600 (2) - ctrl+g for flow? Done

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Too british. Needs moar https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGQaH3-LK54

1. 00:18:400 (4) - I would try to smooth this out. It's a little too harsh on the entry(turn wise) coming from a straight slider.
   
   
2. 00:24:000 (3,4) - Either make it exactly along the same path, or the same shape/angle exactly. It looks like it's somewhere in the middle.

1. 00:23:066 (3,4) - The flip to backwards here is a little weird for a Normal level player to read.
   
   
2. 00:37:200 (5) - I move to the center of 4 and 6, but not too serious. Just evil.

1. 00:00:000 (0) - The combos feel pretty inconsistent.

1. 00:37:066 (1,2) - This slider is a bit too cruel for my taste, but if you wanna keep it that's fine.

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hey, from q.

As always, my mods are subjective. It's your map, bro.

General:

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Too british. Needs moar https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGQaH3-LK54

SPOILER

Easy:

1. 00:18:400 (4) - I would try to smooth this out. It's a little too harsh on the entry(turn wise) coming from a straight slider.
   Done
   
   
2. 00:24:000 (3,4) - Either make it exactly along the same path, or the same shape/angle exactly. It looks like it's somewhere in the middle.

I liked it. Some sliders need a tune up though, as I pointed out.
Done
Kardet's Normal:

1. 00:23:066 (3,4) - The flip to backwards here is a little weird for a Normal level player to read.
   
   
2. 00:37:200 (5) - I move to the center of 4 and 6, but not too serious. Just evil.

Not bad.
I will tell Kardet
Hard:

1. 00:00:000 (0) - The combos feel pretty inconsistent.

8/8 m8
Please review new combos
Doomsday's Insane:

1. 00:37:066 (1,2) - This slider is a bit too cruel for my taste, but if you wanna keep it that's fine.

Why do I feel like this is the hardest <1min map to HDFL ever made?
Dooms will not change this bit for symmetry sake
Nice job, all very well made and enjoyable. GLHF Ranking! <3

MrSisterFister wrote:

Hi, I see the Normal HP drain is higher than the Hard's, perhaps you should change the Normal to 4, and the Hard to 6.