This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 9월 10일 목요일 at 오후 5:43:13

Artist: senya
Title: Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou kaleidoscope memories of phantasm last remote zun yuuhei satellite komeiji koishi
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6373kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (3.15 stars, 223 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.06 stars, 318 notes)
3. Normal (1.87 stars, 130 notes)

Download: senya - Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The Memories of Phantasm
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Title: 月に叢雲華に風
Arrangement: Iceon
Lyrics : かませ虎
Original Song: ラストリモート
Vocals: senya
Circle: Yuuhei Satellite
Album: 月に叢雲華に風
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Mapset
Normal By Me
Hard By Me
Lunatic By Me
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My 1st Pending Map

Replace (Short ver.) with (PV ver.) . It should be senya - Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)

no kds for this

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Replace (Short ver.) with (PV ver.) . It should be senya - Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)

no kds for this

Update! Thanks! :D

UnLock- wrote:

IRC MODDING

17:09 UnLock-: Easy
17:09 Arooma: 옙
17:09 UnLock-: Ctrl + Shift + A 누르셔서
17:09 UnLock-: 디스턴스 오류 전부 수정하세요
17:09 UnLock-: 이지는 디스턴스 안맞으면 언랭입니다
17:09 UnLock-: 00:29:718 (2) - 이런거라던가
17:10 Arooma: 아하
17:10 UnLock-: 00:46:593 (1,1) - 스피너 끝나기 전에 다음 노트가 보이면 언랭입니다
17:11 UnLock-: 00:58:593 (1,1) - 이것도
17:11 UnLock-: 그리고 전체적으로 1/2가 많은데
17:11 UnLock-: 이지에서는 보통 1/1만 쓰여요
17:12 UnLock-: 차라리 이지는 없애는 편이 좋을듯
17:12 UnLock-: 이지 없애도 맵셋에 문제는 없는지라
17:12 *UnLock- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351189 cYsmix feat. Emmy - Tear Rain]
17:12 UnLock-: 이런 맵들처럼
17:12 UnLock-: 이지가 필요없는 노래같네요
17:12 Arooma: ㅇㅎ..
17:12 Arooma: 그럼 업로드할때
17:12 Arooma: 이지는 삭제하고 다시 업로드하면 될까요
17:12 UnLock-: 네
17:12 UnLock-: 그리고
17:12 UnLock-: 이제 노말 좀 볼게요\
17:13 Arooma: :3
17:13 UnLock-: 00:01:593 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 복붙 뭡니까 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
17:13 UnLock-: 수정할 필요는 없지만....ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
17:14 Arooma: 전 전혀 귀찮아 하지 않았습니다 (진지)
17:14 UnLock-: 자 그리고
17:14 UnLock-: 노말도 이지처럼 디스턴스 오류 있으면 언랭입니다
17:14 UnLock-: 다 잡아주시길
17:15 Arooma: 옙
17:15 UnLock-: 00:36:093 (1) - 여기만 콤보 주기가 이상하네요, 뉴콤보 없애보세요
17:15 UnLock-: 00:44:905 (1) - 여기도
17:17 UnLock-: 01:36:280 (1) - 
17:17 UnLock-: 이거 볼륨 너무 큰듯
17:17 UnLock-: 5% 추천
17:17 Arooma: :3
17:18 UnLock-: 이제 하드
17:19 UnLock-: 01:00:093 (1) - 이게 왜 01:02:061 여기서 끝나죠?
17:19 UnLock-: 01:01:968 여기서 끝내보시길
17:20 UnLock-: 01:30:093 (5) - 뉴콤보
17:20 UnLock-: 01:24:280 (1) - 이것도 끝나는 부분 왜 1/4 늦죠...?
17:21 UnLock-: 01:36:280 (1) - 이거 여전히 소리 큼
17:21 UnLock-: 박자 제안입니다만
17:22 UnLock-: 01:07:780 (5) - 1/4 반복 말고 그냥 1/2로 만드시고
17:22 UnLock-: 01:07:593 (4,5) - 서로 Ctrl G 해주는게 더 박자에 맞는듯
17:22 Arooma: ㅇㅎ..
17:22 UnLock-: 으으
17:22 UnLock-: 이정도만 할게요
17:22 UnLock-: 시간이 없음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

전부 고쳤습니다아아
thanks!

열심히 봤는데 별로 없네

Riviclia wrote:

Hard

00:34:593 (4,5) - 서클-슬라-서클 으로
00:46:593 (6) - 5 왼쪽으로
01:34:968 (8,9) - 슬라로...?
01:36:093 (3) - 2 오른쪽이나 아래로
(all fix)

Lunatic

00:00:843 (1) - 3/2 길이로 하는것도 좋은듯
00:01:968 (3,4) - 슬라로
00:03:843 (3) - 좀더 오른쪽 향하게 (fix)
00:18:655 (3,4,5) - 슬라로
00:24:280 (2) - 1 밑으로 보내요
00:34:218 (4) - 오른쪽으로 보내서 왼쪽 향하게 (fix)
00:57:655 (1,2) - 1을 슬라로 2를 서클로 (fix)
01:01:593 (6) - 1/4 진동슬라로 (maybe..fix)
01:14:343 (3,4,5) - 4 없애고 3 왼쪽으로
01:24:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2) -
01:28:593 (4) - 슬라+서클로 분리 (fix)
01:30:843 (2) - "
01:34:780 (8,9) - 슬라로 (fix)
01:35:718 (2,3,4) - 4를 밑으로 보내던가 2,3 위치를 바꾸던가- (fix)

열심히 봤는데 별로 없네

Update!
모딩 감사합니다!ㅜㅜ

Hello... Arooma Thank you for mod my map
I'm new to mod but I'll do my best

[All Difficulty]
00:00:843 - 00:37:593 - I think this part should use soft simpleset
01:14:718 - how about end kiai here and start again at 01:15:093 and then end at 01:27:093
01:27:843 - 01:39:843 - same as 00:00:843 - 00:37:593

[Normal]
00:38:155 (2) - feel strange...could you delete it ?
00:46:593 (1) - could you end spinner at 00:48:843 ?
01:03:655 (3) - same as 00:38:155 (2)
01:13:968 (4,5,6) - I think it too hard for normal simplify it such as 01:23:530 (5,6)
01:15:655 (2) - same as 00:38:155 (2)
01:18:655 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:46:780 (1) - could you end spinner at 00:49:218 ?

I have no idea to mod Lunatic...sorry

I hope this mod will help you

soelsoel wrote:

Hello... Arooma Thank you for mod my map
I'm new to mod but I'll do my best

[All Difficulty]
00:00:843 - 00:37:593 - I think this part should use soft simpleset
01:14:718 - how about end kiai here and start again at 01:15:093 and then end at 01:27:093
01:27:843 - 01:39:843 - same as 00:00:843 - 00:37:593

[Normal]
00:38:155 (2) - feel strange...could you delete it ?
00:46:593 (1) - could you end spinner at 00:48:843 ?
01:03:655 (3) - same as 00:38:155 (2)
01:13:968 (4,5,6) - I think it too hard for normal simplify it such as 01:23:530 (5,6)
01:15:655 (2) - same as 00:38:155 (2)
01:18:655 (2) - ^

(remapping :3)

[Hard]
00:46:780 (1) - could you end spinner at 00:49:218 ? - (fix)

I have no idea to mod Lunatic...sorry

I hope this mod will help you

Update!
Thanks Mod :33
It was useful

From modding queue





no kds please

[ Rizen ] wrote:

From modding queue

[Timing]

• 
  I got the same BPM as you but I think your offset is 1/2 a measure out. With offset 93, most of the heavy instrument notes are played on the large white tick. This can clearly be seen at 00:37:593 (1) - , where the instruments go from soft piano to hard piano

[General]

SPOILER

• 
  You have very good rhythm. It's just that your placements of objects is pretty unorganized and a little bit chaotic. You can improve this (also called flow) by utilizing blankets and linear shapes
  
  Blankets mean not this but this. Don't overblanket though

[Normal]

SPOILER

• 
  The flow of this difficulty seems very repetitive (circles, circles, circles). Consider remapping with flow in mind. This can be seen if you press ctrl+a (only one thing goes through the middle)
  I highly recommend remapping this difficulty. The rhythm is good but the placements has bad flow
  00:05:905 (3) - add a circle here?

[Hard]

SPOILER

• 
  00:17:905 (1) - stack with previous circle 3 (eg. change this to this (fix)
  01:06:843 (3) - stack with previous slider 1 (fix)
  01:07:968 (5) - move this to stack on top of slider 6?
  01:18:843 (3) - stack with end of previous slider 1 (fix)
  01:19:968 (5) - move this to stack on top of slider 6?

no kds please

Thank you mod and tips!!

normal should the remapping..

Lunatic
00:01:593 (2) - Direct this so it points more clearly to 00:01:968 (3) -
00:03:843 (3) - ^ direct to 00:04:218 (4) -
00:05:343 (5,6) - Reverse slider instead with reverse on blue tick to match vocal
00:10:218 (2) - Direct it to 00:10:593 (3) -
00:14:905 (5) - You may keep, but I can't hear this anywhere in the music.
00:16:593 (1,2) - This is ugly imo, you can change it to a different pattern, perhaps? The way it's structured with the overlap doesn't even match the music
00:18:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What in the music makes you do this?
00:22:593 (1) - , 00:23:155 (3) - , and 00:23:718 (5) - make the mapping look plain. Perhaps you would like to modify it?
00:27:655 (6,7,1) - In my opinion, the spacing does not match the pause
00:29:155 (5,6) - Make these sliders compliment each other to be visually appealing
00:44:343 (4,5) - Sliders make an awful looking overlap
01:05:343 (9) - Stack this head on to 01:04:593 (5) - for neatness
01:10:968 (8) - ^ on to 01:10:030 (5) -
01:13:405 (1) - Try to use this nice slider more often when you can .
01:18:468 (2) - Move this to the right a bit

1. Would you keep NC @ white tick after major white tick? Or would you perhaps make all the NC's on the major white ticks?
2. You know this, but BG needed
3. I wouldn't name it Lunatic

Hard
00:19:593 (1) - Stack tail/reverse arrow on top of the head of 00:18:843 (3) -
00:21:280 (5) - Direct downwards to 00:21:655 (6) - , or curve 00:21:655 (6) - more so it fits with what's before it
00:54:280 (7,1) - Make this overlap perfectly into the middle of 00:55:593 (3) -
01:11:530 (8,9,1) - Make the direction straighter
01:35:530 (1) - Fix DS just a bit

Normal
00:10:780 (1) - How about no break, 1:30 drain time; don't be lazy, try to make it out
00:28:218 (1,2) - No, not stacked.
00:31:218 (1,2) -
00:43:218 (1,2) -

1. Needs nicer sliders to be more appealing

NolanM wrote:

Lunatic
00:01:593 (2) - Direct this so it points more clearly to 00:01:968 (3) - (fix)
00:03:843 (3) - ^ direct to 00:04:218 (4) - (fix)
00:05:343 (5,6) - Reverse slider instead with reverse on blue tick to match vocal
00:10:218 (2) - Direct it to 00:10:593 (3) - (fix)
00:14:905 (5) - You may keep, but I can't hear this anywhere in the music.
00:16:593 (1,2) - This is ugly imo, you can change it to a different pattern, perhaps? The way it's structured with the overlap doesn't even match the music (maybe fix..)
00:18:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What in the music makes you do this?
00:22:593 (1) - , 00:23:155 (3) - , and 00:23:718 (5) - make the mapping look plain. Perhaps you would like to modify it?
00:27:655 (6,7,1) - In my opinion, the spacing does not match the pause
00:29:155 (5,6) - Make these sliders compliment each other to be visually appealing
00:44:343 (4,5) - Sliders make an awful looking overlap (fix plan)
01:05:343 (9) - Stack this head on to (01:04:593 (5) - for neatness (fix)
01:10:968 (8) - ^ on to 01:10:030 (5) - (fix)
01:13:405 (1) - Try to use this nice slider more often when you can .(fix plan)
01:18:468 (2) - Move this to the right a bit (fix plan)

1. Would you keep NC @ white tick after major white tick? Or would you perhaps make all the NC's on the major white ticks?
2. You know this, but BG needed
3. I wouldn't name it Lunatic

Hard
00:19:593 (1) - Stack tail/reverse arrow on top of the head of 00:18:843 (3) - (fix)
00:21:280 (5) - Direct downwards to 00:21:655 (6) - , or curve 00:21:655 (6) - more so it fits with what's before it (maybe fix..)
00:54:280 (7,1) - Make this overlap perfectly into the middle of 00:55:593 (3) - (fix)
01:11:530 (8,9,1) - Make the direction straighter (fix)
01:35:530 (1) - Fix DS just a bit (fix plan)

Normal
00:10:780 (1) - How about no break, 1:30 drain time; don't be lazy, try to make it out (consider)
00:28:218 (1,2) - No, not stacked. (consider)
00:31:218 (1,2) -
00:43:218 (1,2) -

1. Needs nicer sliders to be more appealing

Thanks Mod!!
I'll try to fix all

Hi


I think that's all. Good luck

Rhythm is fine, but in my opinion placement can be improved.
Good luck~

Hi! From my queue~

[General]

01:15:093 - Why did you end Kiai here? You should keep Kiai section going since its still the chorus. What you *could* do is create a Kiai reset here. Add a green line at 01:14:999 - to disable Kiai. Then make the green line at 01:15:093 - Kiai again. That way you get a nice reset. Apply this to all your difficulties.

[Lunatic]

00:04:499 (2) - This is a quiet section of the song... using 1/4 notes doesn't really fit . Also its barely audible anyways so its better if you take this out.
00:24:280 (2,3,4) - Try and make slider 3 flow better into the streams. You can try rotating the slider 180 degrees from selection center.
00:40:593 (4,5) - It's always better to have sliders begin on white ticks instead of red ticks. Ctrl+G this rhythm.
00:56:718 (6,7,1) - Try and angle slider 7 a bit further to the left. Right now the spacing makes it seem like theres a jump from 7> 1 since the spacing is very similar to what you used for the entire previous pattern.
01:09:280 (2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt flow well for me . The angle going into 4 is really sharp. You can improve this by rotating the slider a bit,. I think curving the sliders would also fit nicely with the vocals here~.
01:25:593 (1,2) - Instead of 5x repeat sliders, try using 2x repeats instead. 01:35:155 (9) - This note isnt audible. Extend the previous slider.

[Hard]

00:17:905 (1,4) - See if you can reposition slider 4 a biiit so its less overlapped with 1. I'm mainly talking about the slider-head. The AR is low enough that the overlap is still noticeable in game play ;P.
00:30:280 (6) - This note isnt really audible. Better to either extend the previous slider ot change the rhythm.
00:59:530 (5) - Rotate this 90 degrees by selection center for better flow.
01:06:093 (1,2,3,4) - Not good to overlap so many times . Stick with one overlap, either 1 and 3, or 2 and 4 and reposition the other object for better readability.
01:18:843 (3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:13:593 - Why is there a break :S. It's a 1 minute 30 second song... You mapped this part out with Hard/Lunatic you can map this on Normal too .
01:14:343 (5) - Making this slider a repeat would play a loot nicer, but you'll have to do some pattern reworking. I still highly recommend it.
01:30:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You're using 1/2 rhythm throughout this section, but its supposed to be calm and easier than your Kiai section... Compare this section with: 01:15:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - which is much stronger musically, but yet mapped much simpler.

Good luck~

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hi

Mods

General

• Where are the backgrounds?!

(Mistake T-T)

Normal

• 
  00:07:593 (1) - Move the end anchor point to x:412 y:192 to make the pattern more neat (fix)

Hard

• 
  00:36:843 (4) - NC (fix)
  00:39:843 (9,10) - The slider end should be at the red tick rather than white tick (fix)
  01:07:968 (5) - Move it to x:284 y:172 (fix)
  01:14:343 (7,8,1) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/hwjZY/04e33c5742.jpg (fix)
  01:19:968 (5) - Move it to x:240 y:128 (fix)
  01:20:718 (7) - Add an anchor point at x:136 y:72

Insane

• 
  00:04:405 (1,2,3) - Overmapped, there's no streams here (fix)
  00:34:218 (4) - Make it like this. It''ll look more neat http://puu.sh/hwkfT/0f3077ea11.jpg (consider)
  00:46:593 (1,2,3) - Make some DS at the stream. The problem because it'll be invisible for anyone who uses Normal type skin (fix plan)
  00:58:593 (4,5,6) - ^ (^)

I think that's all. Good luck

Thanks Mod Xero!
Fixed almost everything

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. Add back background in your next update
2. Add combo colours

[Normal]

1. 00:09:843 - A downbeat here, try to add a note (fix)
2. 00:33:093 (6) - Unstack it, since there is a 1/1 gap between 00:32:718 (5,6), stacking may mislead player to hit 00:33:093 (6) earlier, which is not suitable in a Normal diff (fix plan)
3. 00:35:530 (3,4) - Same as above (^)
4. I think you need to add hitsound to slidertick like 00:39:468 / 01:04:968 so to keep whole clap flow in the map (Looking for a hit sound..)

[Hard]

1. 00:03:843 - Another downbeat, also there is piano, so add a note. (fix plan)
2. 00:06:843 - ^ (^)
3. 00:13:593 - Reduce volume in this tick, 70% here is too loud (fix)
4. There are jumps which is not needed in the intro part like 00:00:843 (1,2), especially when the music is soft, so DS needed to be fixed. (fix plan)

[Lunatic]

1. 00:13:593 - Same as Hard (fix)
2. 00:16:593 (1,2) - Avoid stacking like this, which is hard to read for players (fix)
3. 00:33:093 (1,2) - ^ (^)
4. 01:03:093 - 75% is loud even it is kiai part, use 70% like Hard (fix)
5. 01:27:093 (1) - Shouldn't this slider place near 01:26:343 (2)'s tail, since 01:26:343 (2) ends reverse at tail.

(fix plan)

Rhythm is fine, but in my opinion placement can be improved.
Good luck~

Thanks Mod chaos~
'fix plan' will be modified later :33

monstrata wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[General]

01:15:093 - Why did you end Kiai here? You should keep Kiai section going since its still the chorus. What you *could* do is create a Kiai reset here. Add a green line at 01:14:999 - to disable Kiai. Then make the green line at 01:15:093 - Kiai again. That way you get a nice reset. Apply this to all your difficulties.

[Lunatic]

00:04:499 (2) - This is a quiet section of the song... using 1/4 notes doesn't really fit . Also its barely audible anyways so its better if you take this out. (fix)
00:24:280 (2,3,4) - Try and make slider 3 flow better into the streams. You can try rotating the slider 180 degrees from selection center. (fix)
00:40:593 (4,5) - It's always better to have sliders begin on white ticks instead of red ticks. Ctrl+G this rhythm. (fix plan)
00:56:718 (6,7,1) - Try and angle slider 7 a bit further to the left. Right now the spacing makes it seem like theres a jump from 7> 1 since the spacing is very similar to what you used for the entire previous pattern. (fix)
01:09:280 (2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt flow well for me . The angle going into 4 is really sharp. You can improve this by rotating the slider a bit,. I think curving the sliders would also fit nicely with the vocals here~.

Something like this?

(consider)
01:25:593 (1,2) - Instead of 5x repeat sliders, try using 2x repeats instead.

Something like this, so theres a better transition after the intense stream

(consider)
01:35:155 (9) - This note isnt audible. Extend the previous slider. (consider)

[Hard]

00:17:905 (1,4) - See if you can reposition slider 4 a biiit so its less overlapped with 1. I'm mainly talking about the slider-head. The AR is low enough that the overlap is still noticeable in game play ;P. (maybe fix..)
00:30:280 (6) - This note isnt really audible. Better to either extend the previous slider ot change the rhythm. (consider)
00:59:530 (5) - Rotate this 90 degrees by selection center for better flow. (fix)
01:06:093 (1,2,3,4) - Not good to overlap so many times . Stick with one overlap, either 1 and 3, or 2 and 4 and reposition the other object for better readability. (fix plan)
01:18:843 (3,4,5) - ^ (^)

[Normal]

00:13:593 - Why is there a break :S. It's a 1 minute 30 second song... You mapped this part out with Hard/Lunatic you can map this on Normal too . (mapping T-T)
01:14:343 (5) - Making this slider a repeat would play a loot nicer, but you'll have to do some pattern reworking. I still highly recommend it. (maybe fix..)
01:30:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You're using 1/2 rhythm throughout this section, but its supposed to be calm and easier than your Kiai section... Compare this section with: 01:15:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - which is much stronger musically, but yet mapped much simpler. (mapping..)

Good luck~

Thanks Mod! mons!
'fix plan' will be modified later :33
Try to fix all

Mod


[Normal]

00:03:093 (4) - 2랑 대칭을 맞추는게 미관상으로 더 나아보입니다.





[Hard]

곡의 분위기가 조용하고 맵이 무난한 만큼 Difficulty 부분에서도 느슨한 설정이 어울릴거라 생각합니다.
cs 3.5 추천

00:04:593 (1) - 슬라가 수직이 아닌게 의도된건 아닌 거 같아서 찍었습니다. 수직으로

00:36:093 (3) -


00:51:280 (5,1,2,3,4) - 왜인지 보자마자 배치가 어색하다고 생각해서 나름대로 바꿔봤습니다. 참고만





[Lunatic]

곡의 분위기가 조용하고 맵이 무난한 만큼 Difficulty 부분에서도 느슨한 설정이 어울릴거라 생각합니다.
ar 8~8.5 추천

01:07:593 (1,2,3) - 라던지 01:16:593 (5,6,7) - 같은거 슬뒷 2타 딱 붙이는게 나아보입니다.

루나틱은 처음 보자마자 와 완전 랭맵퀄이네 생각해서 딱히 찍을거도 없네요.



다른 슬라들도 대각선을 많이 사용해서 대칭이 안맞을텐데 그건 왜 안잡냐 이중성 오지네! 라고 생각하실 수도 있는데,
그건 아루마님 매핑 스타일이라고 생각하기 때문에 고치면 좋을 거 같다 싶은 부분만 나름의 판단으로 말씀드린거라고 이해해주시면 되겠습니다.ㅋㅋ

플레이어로써의 소감은 슬라이더 비중이 너무 높지 않았나 싶긴 해도 전체적으로 정말 깔끔했고 괜찮았다고 생각합니다.

많이 배워가고 계속해서 좋은 맵 만들어가시길 바랍니다.^^