10:52 Kanari: can do in game mod?
10:52 - G I D Z -: sure
10:53 Kanari: yaaay
10:54 - G I D Z -: I'll mod from the easiest to the hardest
10:54 Kanari: alright
10:54 - G I D Z -: lol just submitted today :D
10:56 Kanari: yep xD
10:56 Kanari: but i've been working on it for a long time >~< since last year
10:56 - G I D Z -: o.o
10:56 - G I D Z -: nice 
10:57 Kanari: >w<
10:59 - G I D Z -: lol ur blankets are too perfect for me to mod XD
11:02 - G I D Z -: Moving on to Middle~
11:02 Kanari: hahaa xD alright
11:02 - G I D Z -: 00:30:879 (5,3) - The sliders are stacked and might be a little hard to read 
11:02 - G I D Z -: Maybe consider changing the seond slider's direction
11:05 - G I D Z -: btw could u tell me the NC patterning u r using?
11:05 Kanari: done
11:05 Kanari: sure
11:06 Kanari: er, for this one, every new line, like the lyrics
11:06 - G I D Z -: oh
11:07 - G I D Z -: I was wondering why the NCs were all over lel
11:07 Kanari: xD
11:09 - G I D Z -: Although I would suggest Ncs following the music patterns 
11:09 - G I D Z -: It looks more consistent and easier to understand
11:10 Kanari: give me a few examples of your combo idea o:
11:13 - G I D Z -: Since in areas of a piece of music, the vocal is not as strong therefore following things like downbeat patterning 
11:13 - G I D Z -: My combo idea is just basically following the music
11:14 - G I D Z -: When I try creating a combo pattern different from the previous in another set of 4/4 beats
11:15 Kanari: during the non kiai parts it sorta follows the idea you're talking about ouo
11:15 Kanari: i think it's okay xD but if someone else says i should change the comboing then i will
11:15 - G I D Z -: Although this is entirely up to u I am just trying to emphasis that the map will be easier to read 
11:15 - G I D Z -: xd
11:16 - G I D Z -: Cuz the music is at its strongest in the chorus 
11:17 - G I D Z -: I'm not a good combo modder so lel
11:17 - G I D Z -: I mod mostly on patterning xd
11:17 Kanari: haha xD
11:17 - G I D Z -: And ur patterning is already so good xd
11:18 - G I D Z -: I am already moving to End
11:21 Kanari: thank you xD
11:22 Kanari: i hope i can rank this faster than my other map q_q
11:24 - G I D Z -: 01:08:094 (4,5,6) - The jump feels out of the blue o.o
11:26 Kanari: end diff?
11:27 - G I D Z -: yep
11:27 Kanari: i think it's pretty small xD but i will change if mentioned again
11:27 - G I D Z -: Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/gZDkX/4ebe5cbbf5.jpg
11:28 - G I D Z -: cuz the slider direction is not flowing well atm xd
11:29 Kanari: ah, that does look better ouo will do~
11:30 - G I D Z -: XD
11:31 Kanari: >w<
11:31 - G I D Z -: btw did u make the storyboard? o.o
11:31 Kanari: yes xD
11:31 - G I D Z -: wow 
11:31 - G I D Z -: lol
11:31 - G I D Z -: nice
11:31 - G I D Z -: Although I have no idea how easy or hard making one is XD
11:32 Kanari: it can be easy, it can be hard xD depends what you're doing
11:32 - G I D Z -: lol
11:32 - G I D Z -: Moving on to the final diff 
11:34 Kanari: okaay~
11:36 - G I D Z -: AR9 too fast >_>
11:36 - G I D Z -: 158bpm should be AR8 xd
11:36 Kanari: but it doesn't play very nice D:
11:36 Kanari: try it
11:37 *- G I D Z - is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672698 Nishino Kana - Story [My Story]]
11:38 Kanari: ouo
11:41 - G I D Z -: After playing it I think u r right xd
11:42 Kanari: haha xD
11:45 - G I D Z -: 02:57:462 (3,4) - Doens't flow well imo
11:45 - G I D Z -: 02:58:411 (6,7) - The bass drum is on 1/2 beat not 1/4 o.o
11:47 - G I D Z -: 03:25:278 (5) - I think a triangle would be more suitable here for flow http://puu.sh/gZEna/acdd0cf74b.jpg
11:50 - G I D Z -: Mod ends here xd 
11:50 Kanari: did as you said on the last one, will wait to hear more opinions on the others
11:50 Kanari: thank you so much! >w<
11:51 - G I D Z -: ok >_>
11:51 - G I D Z -: np :D
11:51 Kanari: post in thread for kd~
11:51 - G I D Z -: The whole chatlog? xd

Julie wrote:

Omg sorry took me so long to mod LOL not at all~ thank you >w<

[Beginning]

http://puu.sh/h4mbS.png b-b-baka~ fix distance issue here XD so nazi~ just like a few decimals off xD

01:09:613 (4) - Put that red slider point on the last stars like this : http://puu.sh/h4mBL.jpg , so you can hear it change direction at 01:10:373 - 01:11:132 - (2 important sound ) will do if said again~

02:02:018 (1) - haha cute slider, but maybe try to make it flow with 02:04:297 (2) - ? same as above~


03:21:006 (1,2,3) - probably want to change that, doesn't flow really well and can be confusing too, because while doing this slider 03:21:006 (1) - you can see the end of 03:22:525 (3) - right beside the end of 03:21:006 (1) - XD. ^

[Middle]

00:37:335 (1,2,3) - can make it a better flow? Feel like 00:38:854 (3) - close to the end of 00:37:335 (1) - . http://puu.sh/h4ojQ.jpg is the picture suppose to be the suggested placement? xD it looks the same

01:06:955 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure you try to blanket this, from the way your mapping there is so much nice blanket <3!! Probably want to use one point to blanket instead of 2 point on this slider 01:06:955 (1,2) - . That's how it look right now http://puu.sh/h4qlB.jpg >< i think it's okaaay xD very small detail

02:35:056 (1,2,3) - Probably not suggest stacking these for a normal level, usually when you put 3 notes you don't stack them except here XD. will chance if pointed out again~

03:19:487 (4) - end it here 03:19:867 - ? more easy to play, important vocal part and also have nice drum sound there. ^

03:49:867 (1,2,3) - could make something more original the stack? since 03:49:867 (1) - different instrument then 03:50:056 (2,3) - XD
i kinda like it the way it is o: just seems simple to hit

[End]

01:07:905 - Suddendly no note, really lose a lots of rhythmn here. Suggest adding something. will consider~

01:09:139 (2) - no sound ><, triplet here suddendly feel weird because there isn't any new sound at all. will remove if pointed out again

01:55:943 (4,5,1) - Could do something more original then stack 3 times, the 3 of them have different sound~ ?

01:58:221 (5) - Not sure if is a mistake, but judging from your placement I don't think is an accident. I don't suggest suddendly ending this slider on a blue stick, doesn't play well, and here 01:58:411 - you have a nice bass sound + vocal. While here 01:58:506 - is just a continuation of vocal of this part 01:58:411 -. i actually happen to really like this >~< i don't know it just sounds nice to me, but i'll consider fixing it since Verlaren also mentioned this

03:18:727 (4) - same rason as 01:58:221 (5) - same response as well

[My Story]

00:15:500 (4,2) - Make these more symetrie? XD ?

00:24:993 (2) - no new sound ><, feel like tapping empty sound. So maybe remove? feels sorta empty to me xD but will take into consideration

00:57:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like this distance is really to high D:...it get higher and higher but thats a bit to much ><. i watched a few play it, they were able to hit it o: but will change if needed

01:11:892 (8,1,2) - no anti-jump here? xD will consider too xD

03:02:493 (1) - start spinner here 03:02:778 - ? That's where the weird sound start XD. Still feel some drum here 03:02:493 - http://puu.sh/h3J5t.jpg maybe~

03:50:816 - Not mapping piano sound suddendly feel weird xD haha xD

GL KANARI-CHAN <3!!! Still remember you're my 1st standard mapper teacher o3o!!!

*star~*
thank you so much dear♥

Verlaren wrote:

Hai~! hellooo~

First of all, I want to say that this mod turned out not so, that I wrote initially because the original mod I miraculously accidentally deleted by pressing unnecessary the key combination in console; I did not like it and for a long time, I was upset; but not for long. Here I will probably miss a lot of useful and important things, because not sure, that I can re-pay attention to these moments. Total I had to run on map again but much faster. But I also hope that this mod will help as much, no less than the original version. i understand, thank you for remodding it!

End
01:58:601 (6) - remove this circle and extend 01:58:221 (5) until 01:58:601 reason is the same as i told Julie
02:57:462 (3) - remove note and extend 02:57:082 (2) until 02:57:462 same response for here too

My story
00:12:556 (3) - remove this circle but it will be empty D:
01:04:202 (10) - remove circle will do it pointed out again
01:20:911 (6) - ^ ^
01:55:848 (7) - remove circle ^
02:20:151 (6) - ^ you pretty much know what i'll say xD i will consider them though, just not on all the triplets
02:43:791 (7) - remove circle and extend 02:43:411 (6) until 02:43:791 same as what i said in end diff

thank you for the mod, about the combos, i got lazy to go through all the suggestions and just reworked them myself starting from the middle of the middle diffs haha, should be along the same pattern you suggested though

Spaghetti wrote:

Heyo o/ hellooo~
[My Story]
[*]At the beggining, I'd place a note like you did every other measure for consistency and to mark the repeat of the piano's melody. i inserted the little break in all the other diffs so i'd like it to be empty here as well
[*]00:12:556 (3) - If you remove this note, it really emphasizes the next downbeat and feels more intense. will do if pointed out again~
[*]00:28:221 (2) - Follow what the DS recommends for this slider because placing it there makes the 1/3 slider before that seem like a 1/4 slider, which can cause people to end short on it and confuse them. ^
[*]00:58:316 (1) - This spinner really removes the intensity before the kiai, and doesn't provide a good contrast either. Consider mapping a fun buildup here.will consider
[*]01:10:943 (4) - This might just be me, but that slider would play better as two separate notes. i happen to like it xD but i will change if mentioned again
[*]01:25:563 (9) - A spinner up to 01:27:082 - there (so it ends on the next repeat of the piano melody and maintains a good length) would fit better to calm down the intensity before the break. spinner there feels sorta odd and short to me so i'll keep it the way it is
[*]02:11:227 (1) - This spinner really removes the intensity before the kiai, and doesn't provide a good contrast either. Consider mapping a fun buildup here. will consider
[*]02:27:082 (4) - A star would be perfect there to compliment the vocals. replaced the slider for circle but not in a star formation
[*]02:51:955 (5) - Just two notes stacked under the slider after would play so much better. i like this short sliders >~< they're fun to play in my opinion so i'd really like to keep them D:
[*]02:58:507 (3) - [b]That slider makes no sense, it'll just choke up the player. Just place two notes there. ^

Great job! I hope you reach whatever goals you're aiming for with this map and it's definitely gonna be one of my favorites if it gets ranked

thank you~ ^^

Edit: Points 4, 7, 14, and 15 won't bold, but they're supposed to be if you could edit your post to add this, you could've also edited your post to the make those suggestions bold xD

THS wrote:

[Beginner]
01:38:474 until 01:49:107 - map this section? (since there's so many break so i suggest you to map this~) xD will consider
03:51:575 (1) - try to give some more gap between the previous slider with this spin i think it's alright xD

[Middle]
00:53:474 - add circle between the circle and sliderr? i think if i were to do that, it would look messy/confusing for the next few notes[/color
01:38:474 - i strongly recommend to map this (if you refuse to keep the break in Beginner diff)

[End]
00:39:803 (7,8,1) - kinda weird for me imo, try to replace this with reverse slider? xD will do if suggested again
01:49:487 - add circle? was intended to leave a little pause
02:02:208 (2) - remove circle (i didn't hear any sound on this xD) uguuu~ >~<
02:23:284 (1) - replace this curvy slider with (any slider you like) and place the timing like this http://puu.sh/haEUB.jpg D: i like this
02:23:854 (9) - remove slider and add single note~i enjoy this little sliders >~< i think it's more fun to play

[My Story]
00:15:784 (5) - remove?
00:19:012 (2) - ^
00:36:575 - add note? intended
02:11:038 (7) - remove?
about my triplets, i don't really know D: you guys say to remove because there's nothing there but i placed it to create something ;~;

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue

General

SPOILER

Great storyboard thank you~

Beginner
00:56:322 shorten (1-tail) to here. Then move (2) to 00:56:702. Stick with vocal in this section is a better option imo. will do if pointed out again
02:08:474 (1,2,3) you can repeat what you did at 00:55:183 applied the earlier suggestion here
03:41:512 (1) you can curve this slider here ? it is curved already o3o
03:51:506 (2) how about moving it to here x=200, y=272 ? breaks spacing >~<
[spoilerbox][/spolierbox]

Middle
00:46:639 (2) remove it. It doesn't match with any rhythm i've actually been told to remove lots of notes because there's no beat in it but i placed it there to create one >~<
00:55:943 (1) shorten tail to here. Then fill the vocal ?
01:05:816 (4,5) replace it like this there will be an odd gap, and i don't think i've have anything similar to it in the diff so i'll keep it
01:06:955 (6) NC should begins here downbeat is in the next note
01:22:355 (4,1) remove them and use this mhmm.. will think about this
03:19:867 (4) shorten tail to here. Ending at vocal ~te is clearer than ~i will think about it
03:40:753 (3,4) slider ?. Then at note at 03:41:322 ^
03:48:537 (2,1) how about remove them and reflect (1) nice suggestion but i want to hear the whistles in the notes after the sliders ><

End
01:25:373 (7,8) remove them and extend (6-tail to 01:25:563). It just lands perfectly more objects make it fun to play D:
01:58:601 (8) remove it i really like this D: i'd like to keep it if possible
02:57:082 (2,3) remove them and extend (1) to 02:57:462 i don't really want to have long sliders in a hard diff
03:51:006 (1) rotate 120 degree CCW

Good luck getting this map ranked
Have a star thank you! >w<