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YUZU - REASON

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Osuology
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 14, 2016 at 4:52:36 PM

Artist: YUZU
Title: REASON
Source: HUNTER X HUNTER
Tags: sad cry hunterxhunter
BPM: 70
Filesize: 4995kb
Play Time: 05:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Riyuu (4.63 stars, 824 notes)
Download: YUZU - REASON
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This version is officially dead. I'm probably leaving it as is, and in a while I'll map again, from the beginning.

Drain time is 5:03 now! Changed the OD due to request by Shiro
EDIT: Finished, and hitsounds are many. I might die of hitsounding phobia.
EDIT: Hitsounds are done.
EDIT: Wow. I realized how weird this map can be at times! Time to fix it!
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[Mods]
~ Lonniganseaweed - Not many changes (See pg.1)
~ cheesiest - Noting the slider ends on accented beats ~~ thanks senpai! (However, I kept some of them because changing between 1/4 and 1/2 when it is still 1/4 makes no sense. Plus, hitsounding could make it better.)
~ Azer modding stream couldn't do much cause it was too easy, but the sliders in the beginning were fixed to now have only 3 points instead of like 6.
~smsh150 - many things, See pg.1
~Smoothie World - many, many, MANY things pg.1
~ Blezzing - Some general stuff.
~Handryan - Bros some stuff pg.1
~makemek - some more stuff pg.1
~Antarus - everything about prettiness.
~Kibbleru - Some good stuff pg.2
~Arphimigon - Random stuff pg.2
~CloudSplash16 - Bn crazyness
~Lasse - General stuff
~eironeia - Antarus except prffft... SQUISHED DOWN
~ and ofc Exa, the new antarus
~ Kroytz lol
lonniganseaweed
01:01:562 (1) - Should be longer
01:04:223 (3) - ^
01:15:110 (5,2,3,4,5) - Hard to read
01:40:755 (7,8) - ^
01:40:755 (7,8) - ^
02:15:594 (3,4,5) - Kinda strange, not bad, might be hard to read, consider spacing more
02:23:752 (1,2,3) - ^
02:33:413 (4,5,6) - ^
02:37:481 (4) - Seems out of place
03:06:209 (6) - you cant touch this
02:37:481 (4) - ^
03:50:376 (3,4) - space
03:51:595 (2) - you cant touch this

Really good song, keep it up!
Topic Starter
Osuology

lonniganseaweed wrote:

01:01:562 (1) - Should be longer
01:04:223 (3) - ^ These two were fixed since a weird velocity error occurred.
01:15:110 (5,2,3,4,5) - Hard to read O rly?
01:40:755 (7,8) - ^ Da heck?
01:40:755 (7,8) - ^
02:15:594 (3,4,5) - Kinda strange, not bad, might be hard to read, consider spacing more It's fine! This has been lot's of times done!
02:23:752 (1,2,3) - ^ Eh, ok!
02:33:413 (4,5,6) - ^ This works ok.
02:37:481 (4) - Seems out of place Fixed.
03:06:209 (6) - you cant touch this WTH YOU MEAN?
02:37:481 (4) - ^ WTH YOU COMMENTED THIS TWICE!!!
03:50:376 (3,4) - space
03:51:595 (2) - you cant touch this It's fine!

Really good song, keep it up!
Santtu
Hello!
Came from my queue
M4m

[General]
  1. Background's quality is low, I recommend to get better one.
  2. There is something wrong with timing, you should ask someone really experienced to help you with it.
[Insane]
  1. Check AiMod for Object's snapping:
  2. 00:08:970 - missing note here, I think
  3. 00:10:399 (3) - NC (means new combo)
  4. 00:11:470 (5,1) - Do space between these
  5. 00:11:827 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:13:256 (2) - Add NC
  7. 00:15:756 (4) - Add NC
  8. 00:25:399 (1) - remove NC
    okay, so I won't tell you all places where to start nc or remove it. Think again, where should you put NC.
  9. 00:45:902 (1) - End spinner at 00:49:683 -
  10. 00:51:158 (3) - no need to do this slider curvy when all others all straight
  11. 01:07:247 (3,4,5,1) - use distant snap to make this part more smoothly
  12. 01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make this part look and feel rational. Don't just put circles randomly there. for example: http://puu.sh/h2brk/5748cb7cd9.jpg (this is bad example, make yourself better one, be creative)
  13. 01:34:223 (9,1) - jump ins't needed place like this. replace (1) closer to (9)
  14. 01:40:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make circles of the stream same distant to each others.
  15. 01:42:207 (1) - should slider start at 01:41:965 -
  16. 02:15:957 (1) - end spinner at 02:17:650 -
  17. 03:09:768 (5,6,7,1,2) - make distant same between these all notes
  18. 03:15:107 (1) - spinner ends at odd place, try 03:25:721 -
  19. 03:31:124 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do jumps like this. replace sliders closer each others
  20. 04:50:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - make star form?
  21. 04:56:431 (5) - replace for star form
Good Luck with map! :)
Topic Starter
Osuology

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue
M4m

[General]
  1. Background's quality is low, I recommend to get better one. I had to downscale the BG and blur it so it looked better and fit. I will change this soon.
  2. There is something wrong with timing, you should ask someone really experienced to help you with it.
I thoroughly checked it, and only one part was suspicious, but it matched properly with the guitar, so I'm not sure what you are talking about. I will keep a look for it tho.
[Insane]
  1. Check AiMod for Object's snapping:
    Fixed them, except for 1 slider which has a timing section in the middle
  2. 00:08:970 - missing note here, I thinkNo, I'm going with the guitar, and thus I am disregarding the singer.
  3. 00:10:399 (3) - NC (means new combo)I kinda wanted the follow point between them but ok.
  4. 00:11:470 (5,1) - Do space between these OK
  5. 00:11:827 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:13:256 (2) - Add NC
  7. 00:15:756 (4) - Add NC
  8. 00:25:399 (1) - remove NC
    okay, so I won't tell you all places where to start nc or remove it. Think again, where should you put NC.Ok.
  9. 00:45:902 (1) - End spinner at 00:49:683 - Wow, I never noticed.
  10. 00:51:158 (3) - no need to do this slider curvy when all others all straightyes
  11. 01:07:247 (3,4,5,1) - use distant snap to make this part more smoothly can't use distance snap but I changed the slider pos.
  12. 01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make this part look and feel rational. Don't just put circles randomly there. for example: http://puu.sh/h2brk/5748cb7cd9.jpg (this is bad example, make yourself better one, be creative)ok.
  13. 01:34:223 (9,1) - jump ins't needed place like this. replace (1) closer to (9) made it a bit closer.
  14. 01:40:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make circles of the stream same distant to each others.alright, but had to change pos.
  15. 01:42:207 (1) - should slider start at 01:41:965 - I don't hear the note there though.
  16. 02:15:957 (1) - end spinner at 02:17:650 - strange, but ok I changed it.
  17. 03:09:768 (5,6,7,1,2) - make distant same between these all notesnot exactly sure what you mean, but I changed the 1/4 slider's pos.
  18. 03:15:107 (1) - spinner ends at odd place, try 03:25:721 - changed it to 3:26:547
  19. 03:31:124 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do jumps like this. replace sliders closer each othersdone
  20. 04:50:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - make star form?good idea!
  21. 04:56:431 (5) - replace for star form
ok, surprised I didn't notice

Good Luck with map! :)
Thanks! I will look over all the NC stuff later when I can! Thanks for the first legit mod(the other is my bro), that I got in 2 months.
-Visceral-
Yay M4M ^.^

[Insane]
Disable countdown
Disable letterbox
Set custom colors
AR9 please
Hitsounds??
00:07:542 (1,2) - Poor flow here. Instead swap their positions
00:08:970 - Beat missing here
00:40:536 (1,2) - Blanket or move this. Very awkward overlap
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Keep spacing consistent pls
00:58:537 - SV increases way too abruptly here.
01:02:287 (2,3,4,5) - Perfect this square
01:39:062 (1,2) - Blanket
01:40:997 (9) - NC.
01:42:932 (2) - NC. new slider velocity = new combo
01:49:707 (1,2) - Make these the same slider shape
01:54:545 (1,2) - Blanket
01:57:449 (7,1,2) - Just stack these
02:05:674 (3,4) - Blanket
02:26:040 (3,2,2,2) - Stack
02:59:345 (3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent
03:37:143 - Timing is off here. I'm bad at timing so talk to someone else about this, but it is pretty clearly off
03:53:525 (4,1) - Blanket
03:56:923 - Empty : S
04:00:956 (7,1) - This spacing omg
04:05:303 (4,5) - Blanket
04:41:462 (3,4,5) - Triangle
04:56:672 (1,1,1,1,1) - Don't nc
Blezzing
Here is my mod for your rather enjoyable map :)

[Insane]
- Overall : Nice fluid map, with some nasty angles on the spread streams in the end :) maybe consider to spread out a few of the earlier streams, just so it doesn't come as such a difficulty shock in the end, but otherwise very nice!
- 00:44:438 - It feels like something is missing here, you mapped the previous ooouuuuuhhh :3
- 00:45:902 (1) - This feels like a lost oportunity to get something going with those drums.
- 01:46:924 (5,6,7) - Should these exist?
- 02:37:989 (1,2,3) - These.. i don't know, they feel weird, but i kinda understand them, maybe a whistle slider instead? (No hate on whistles :p)
- 03:15:107 (1) - Maybe a break instead of the spinner, the song doesn't really invite you to destroy your wrist here?
- 03:35:923 - Maybe you should ad a circle here for some buildup for the oncoming massacre? (That was not intended to sound negative!) The drum is there for you to map ;)
- 03:37:846 - Same as above.
- 04:28:846 (4) - This one sounds wrong timed, maybe 1/8th earlier?
- 04:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason for that double to be stacked, a basic spread stream would be way more natural here. (imo)

Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Osuology

Smoothie World wrote:

Yay M4M ^.^

[Insane]
Disable countdownWhy?
Disable letterboxDidn't even know it existed.
Set custom colorsok
AR9 pleaseHarder to read especially with spaced streams.
Hitsounds??I have hitsounds, I don't know what you mean.
00:07:542 (1,2) - Poor flow here. Instead swap their positionsThat doesn't even help, the flow is backwards in your way, not any different other than that.
00:08:970 - Beat missing hereWhy do people think I map to the singer? I map to the guitar in this section, and there is no guitar note there.
00:40:536 (1,2) - Blanket or move this. Very awkward overlapok
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Keep spacing consistent plsok
00:58:537 - SV increases way too abruptly here.It is fine to me, I think it matches the song well, plus it's not that hard since the sliders are 1/4
01:02:287 (2,3,4,5) - Perfect this squareDon't see anything wrong.
01:39:062 (1,2) - Blanketok
01:40:997 (9) - NC. why?? doesn't make sense to me.
01:42:932 (2) - NC. new slider velocity = new comboDon't know how I missed that.
01:49:707 (1,2) - Make these the same slider shape done
01:54:545 (1,2) - BlanketIt is blanketed already
01:57:449 (7,1,2) - Just stack thesefor what reason?(no pun intended)
02:05:674 (3,4) - Blankettried harder, not sure if it's any better
02:26:040 (3,2,2,2) - Stackbut they are stacked :(
02:59:345 (3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistentno thanks, it is fine as it is
03:37:143 - Timing is off here. I'm bad at timing so talk to someone else about this, but it is pretty clearly off you may think this, but if you zoom in the timeline and put it at 25% speed it is correct.
03:53:525 (4,1) - Blanketnothing to blanket here.
03:56:923 - Empty : S that's cause there is no rhythm there.
04:00:956 (7,1) - This spacing omg ok
04:05:303 (4,5) - Blanket again nothing to blanket here
04:41:462 (3,4,5) - Triangle what about this triangle.
04:56:672 (1,1,1,1,1) - Don't nc ok, did it for HR but that's ok
Topic Starter
Osuology

Blezzing wrote:

Here is my mod for your rather enjoyable map :)

[Insane]
- Overall : Nice fluid map, with some nasty angles on the spread streams in the end :) maybe consider to spread out a few of the earlier streams, just so it doesn't come as such a difficulty shock in the end, but otherwise very nice!
- 00:44:438 - It feels like something is missing here, you mapped the previous ooouuuuuhhh :3 ok
- 00:45:902 (1) - This feels like a lost oportunity to get something going with those drums.don't want to, because of timing sections :3
- 01:46:924 (5,6,7) - Should these exist? It should be fine.
- 02:37:989 (1,2,3) - These.. i don't know, they feel weird, but i kinda understand them, maybe a whistle slider instead? (No hate on whistles :p)VERY good idea
- 03:15:107 (1) - Maybe a break instead of the spinner, the song doesn't really invite you to destroy your wrist here?replaced with more notes to prevent length of spinner
- 03:35:923 - Maybe you should ad a circle here for some buildup for the oncoming massacre? (That was not intended to sound negative!) The drum is there for you to map ;)nice
- 03:37:846 - Same as above.nice
- 04:28:846 (4) - This one sounds wrong timed, maybe 1/8th earlier?it was 1/4 earlier
- 04:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason for that double to be stacked, a basic spread stream would be way more natural here. (imo)yup, done!

Good luck with the map!
THANK YOU! :)
Handryan Bros
M4M

[Insane]
  • New Combo issue
    00:08:970 - add hitcircle
    add slider from 00:09:684 to 00:10:042
    00:12:541 - add hitcirlcle
    00:12:899 - add hitcircle
    00:14:684 , 00:15:041 , 00:15:399 - add hitcircle
    01:27:449 - kiai time !!
    01:42:207 (1) - slider should start at 01:41:965 -
    01:58:416 - end kiai time
    02:56:802 (8) - use straight slider instead repeating slider
    03:42:844 - kiai time, snap the green? line (at timing menu )
    04:13:633 - end kiai
    04:13:875 - start kiai
    04:31:261 - end kiai
makemek
M4M From Your Queue
Quick link to my map: t/312645

Insane
00:30:399 (1) remove it and extend slider to here. The reason is that although it hits on the guitar part, the strum is not loud + short enough to deserve a new note
01:38:094 (3) note is too low almost out of the screen. Bring it higher
02:15:594 (3,4,5) unstack them. Notes seems unreadable
02:23:752 (1,2,3) ^
02:37:989 (1,2,3) ^
04:11:943 (2) You can use stream here because the song is 4.53 stars already
Victoire
M4M!

Insane

Turn off Grid Snap. It's for the most part impossible to make evenly-spaced streams with it.

General
Decimal points in your BPM's usually are not right.
Insane? It's a marathon, naming the difficulty that isn't bad, but I think you should make some use of the freedom you have!
Consider mapping that bit at the start. Might save you from this not counting as a marathon.

00:13:970 (2) - http://puu.sh/h3te1.jpg is this supposed to be like this? I don't think it sounds good.
00:18:970 (1) - What's this timing point doing here?
00:37:122 (1) - Try replacing this with a mirrored 00:35:170 (1) -
00:41:756 (2) - Move it a little away from the slider.
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Try and make these evenly spaced.
00:52:610 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't look good, or really fun to be honest.
00:57:933 (1) - Sounds like a circle is missing 1/2 before this.
00:58:537 (2) - SV change here feels random.
01:00:836 (1) - Either overlap the slider more, or not at all.
01:06:884 (2) - The way this overlaps the last slider is ugly.
01:07:247 (3,4,5,1) - Make these evenly spaced.
01:10:029 (2,3,4,1) - Don't let them touch eachother.
01:14:626 (2,3,4,7,8,9) - Why are these so spaced?
01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The shape of this stream is not pretty.
01:16:924 (7,9) - These aren't mapped to anything.
01:21:521 (2) - Why is this (inconsistently) so close to the slider?
01:32:287 (2,3,4,5,6) - This also doesn't look pretty :(
01:35:190 (4) - It's too far away.
01:39:545 (2) - Overlap looks ugly.
01:40:997 (9) - Why not map this to the vocals?
01:42:932 (1) - The way this overlaps the last slider as well as how its starting direction doesn't line up with the last slider looks ugly.
01:51:642 (6) - Not pretty overlap.
01:54:545 (1,2) - Close, you're hugging the circle too tightly.
01:58:295 (1) - What is this circle doing there under that slider?
02:06:884 (4) - Ew overlap.
02:12:448 (5) - ^
02:12:690 (6,7,8) - Not evenly spaced.
02:24:769 (3,4,5) - It's being strangled (by 02:24:260 (1,2) - ). RIP.
02:26:040 (3,2,2,2) - They're placed so closely together, why not just put them right on top of eachother?
02:27:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this actually star-shaped
02:29:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:32:396 (2) - Sudden jump in SV
02:33:413 (4,5,6) - What's with this spacing?
02:35:955 (1,2,3) - Now if this could just be perfectly straight.
02:37:989 (1,2,3) - What shape is this supposed to be?
02:41:294 (3) - 2 and 3 are in a bit of a long-distance relationship, don't you think?
02:44:981 (1,2) - 1 and 2 here, too.
02:46:633 (1) - Touching the triple, don't like that.
02:46:633 (1,2,3,4,1) - Another case of strangulation here.
02:47:904 (3,4,5) - Not nice overlapping here.
02:47:904 (3,4,5,6,7) - Straight, curved? It's both and neither.
03:00:870 (3,4,5) - Make it evenly spaced.
03:05:446 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's almost an evenly-spaced star. Almost.
03:10:150 (7) - What's this mapped to?
03:10:747 (2) - Uninherited timing point here is wrong. BPM:118 Offset:190747 is what I ended up with.
03:13:545 (6) - Overlap.
03:14:548 (1,2,3,4) - This is some awkward spacing.
03:14:799 (2) - Put it right under 03:14:172 (8) - or not at all.
03:16:806 (1) - That finish does not belong.
03:35:192 (1) - Please have someone better at timing than me look at the few uninherited timing points here and following this.
03:45:514 (1,2,3) - Make it a real curve, or straight.
03:47:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing here feels random.
03:49:398 (1,2) - They look like they should be in one line, but they're not.
03:50:369 (3,4) - Hiding these under the repeat, are we?
03:52:554 (2,3,4,5) - Make it a square, or something else evenly-spaced that you like.
03:54:496 (1,2,3) - Even spacing!
03:57:591 (1,1) - Why are these both new combos, and why is 03:58:258 (1) - getting a hug of death?
03:58:783 (2) - Don't overlap it with the slider like that.
03:58:783 (2,3,4,5) - Even spacing please.
04:00:111 (2) - Overlap!
04:01:318 (2) - It'd look nicer if you moved it a bit down
04:01:922 (3) - More ugly overlap
04:01:922 (3,4,5) - Even spacing is wanted here.
04:06:631 (1,2,3,4) - Looks wonky.
04:15:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also looks wonky. Space it evenly, or make it consistently uneven.
04:18:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nothing wrong here. Just wanted to point out that this looks nice.
04:19:670 (7,8) - This, however, doesn't. 8 overlaps and the angle here looks kinda awkward.
04:21:602 (1,2,3,4) - Wonky.
04:23:051 (1,2,3,4) - Willy Wonka wonky.
04:25:466 (3,4) - Make the spacing consistent with 04:24:983 (1,2) -
04:32:227 (2) - Woah why is this so fast?!
04:34:400 (1) - Even spacing is not here.
04:34:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Even spacing and is not a curve nor a straight line.
04:35:970 (2) - Not mapped to anything.
04:37:298 (1) - Does there really need to be a spinner here?
04:41:462 (3,4,5) - It's almost an evenly spaced triangle.
04:48:343 (2,3) - Overlap with 04:47:498 (6) -
04:50:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Almost an evenly sided pentagon.
04:55:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - Almost an evenly sided star.

Post-mod thoughts: This is unpolished. After my mod, it will be unpolished. It is likely going to take a lot of modding and maybe some remapping before this'll get approved. There's a lot of stuff in this of which I can tell you that it's wrong, but not why, but if you are curious about anything I said, I can try to still answer. I wish you the best of luck getting this modded and hopefully approved.
Topic Starter
Osuology

Antarus wrote:

M4M!

Post-mod thoughts: This is unpolished. After my mod, it will be unpolished. It is likely going to take a lot of modding and maybe some remapping before this'll get approved. There's a lot of stuff in this of which I can tell you that it's wrong, but not why, but if you are curious about anything I said, I can try to still answer. I wish you the best of luck getting this modded and hopefully approved.
Especially when you know a lot about ranking when you have no ranked either.
Topic Starter
Osuology

Handryan Bros wrote:

M4M

[Insane]
  • New Combo issue
    00:08:970 - add hitcircle
    STOP REQUESTING THIS, IT DOESN'T BELONG HERE

    add slider from 00:09:684 to 00:10:042 No because I am mapping guitar, not singer
    00:12:541 - add hitcirlcle ^
    00:12:899 - add hitcircle^
    00:14:684 , 00:15:041 , 00:15:399 - add hitcircle^
    01:27:449 - kiai time !!thanks, I forgot about kiai time, but I didn't add it where you wanted it.
    01:42:207 (1) - slider should start at 01:41:965 - nope, it doesn't start there
    01:58:416 - end kiai timeyes
    02:56:802 (8) - use straight slider instead repeating sliderwhy would that make a difference?
    03:42:844 - kiai time, snap the green? line (at timing menu )done
    04:13:633 - end kiaidid the kiai's
    04:13:875 - start kiai
    04:31:261 - end kiai
Topic Starter
Osuology

makemek wrote:

M4M From Your Queue
Quick link to my map: t/312645

Insane
00:30:399 (1) remove it and extend slider to here. The reason is that although it hits on the guitar part, the strum is not loud + short enough to deserve a new noteno, it is on a downbeat, and it is accentuated so no.
01:38:094 (3) note is too low almost out of the screen. Bring it higherbut it isn't out of the screen
02:15:594 (3,4,5) unstack them. Notes seems unreadableThey aren't stacked in the first place xD
02:23:752 (1,2,3) ^
02:37:989 (1,2,3) ^
04:11:943 (2) You can use stream here because the song is 4.53 stars already the last part has no streams because I wanted to emphasize the singing.
Topic Starter
Osuology

Antarus wrote:

M4M!

Insane

Turn off Grid Snap. It's for the most part impossible to make evenly-spaced streams with it.I can work it out.

General
Decimal points in your BPM's usually are not right.Well, they work, so it doesn't really matter. Don't get OCD over it.
Insane? It's a marathon, naming the difficulty that isn't bad, but I think you should make some use of the freedom you have!Yeah, I don't know what to name it tho!
Consider mapping that bit at the start. Might save you from this not counting as a marathon.Pretty sure the qats will accept it

00:13:970 (2) - http://puu.sh/h3te1.jpg is this supposed to be like this? I don't think it sounds good.not sure what you mean
00:18:970 (1) - What's this timing point doing here?fixed
00:37:122 (1) - Try replacing this with a mirrored 00:35:170 (1) - Eh
00:41:756 (2) - Move it a little away from the slider.no, I blanketed it.
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Try and make these evenly spaced.ok
00:52:610 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't look good, or really fun to be honest.umm, that wasn't even a pattern.
00:57:933 (1) - Sounds like a circle is missing 1/2 before this.the time is used to stress the downbeat of the drum
00:58:537 (2) - SV change here feels random.many people complain but as I said before, I think it matches and is ok.
01:00:836 (1) - Either overlap the slider more, or not at all.this makes no difference in gameplay.
01:06:884 (2) - The way this overlaps the last slider is ugly.stop having ocd. this is NOT a slider art map, I don't like slider art as a matter of fact.
01:07:247 (3,4,5,1) - Make these evenly spaced. :cry: but they are
01:10:029 (2,3,4,1) - Don't let them touch eachother.Not sure what you mean
01:14:626 (2,3,4,7,8,9) - Why are these so spaced? style
01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The shape of this stream is not pretty.I know, but I've tried soooo many things
01:16:924 (7,9) - These aren't mapped to anything.wow, that was surprising.
01:21:521 (2) - Why is this (inconsistently) so close to the slider?Because, it is a double. Not a triple as many would think.
01:32:287 (2,3,4,5,6) - This also doesn't look pretty :( you a girl or somethin'. We men like it ugly and raw and rough.
01:35:190 (4) - It's too far away.it is a accentuated note, so it deserves a jump.
01:39:545 (2) - Overlap looks ugly.blanket
01:40:997 (9) - Why not map this to the vocals?I don't wanna stress the vocals then switch to bg music again.
01:42:932 (1) - The way this overlaps the last slider as well as how its starting direction doesn't line up with the last slider looks ugly.ugly mcfugly sugly mcdugly
01:51:642 (6) - Not pretty overlap.no
01:54:545 (1,2) - Close, you're hugging the circle too tightly.what do you mean?
01:58:295 (1) - What is this circle doing there under that slider?same type of note, belongs in the same place
02:06:884 (4) - Ew overlap. This is the last one I will post on, no I don't care about your stupid pretty, girly ocd on circles. I really don't
02:12:448 (5) - ^
02:12:690 (6,7,8) - Not evenly spaced.there
02:24:769 (3,4,5) - It's being strangled (by 02:24:260 (1,2) - ). RIP.yes R.I.P inanimate circle 2015-2015. Oh wait, they are just circles I forgot.
02:26:040 (3,2,2,2) - They're placed so closely together, why not just put them right on top of eachother?where do you think they are placed?
02:27:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this actually star-shapedtried but I don't really think it works.
02:29:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ok
02:32:396 (2) - Sudden jump in SVit's for drums
02:33:413 (4,5,6) - What's with this spacing?there
02:35:955 (1,2,3) - Now if this could just be perfectly straight.#straighthitler
02:37:989 (1,2,3) - What shape is this supposed to be?no shape xD
02:41:294 (3) - 2 and 3 are in a bit of a long-distance relationship, don't you think?it makes buildup to 3 which is a downbeat and accentuated note
02:44:981 (1,2) - 1 and 2 here, too.both are accentuated
02:46:633 (1) - Touching the triple, don't like that.it should be fine with ar 9.2
02:46:633 (1,2,3,4,1) - Another case of strangulation here.feels like L.A Noire
02:47:904 (3,4,5) - Not nice overlapping here.
02:47:904 (3,4,5,6,7) - Straight, curved? It's both and neither.umm, I'm starting to worry about you
03:00:870 (3,4,5) - Make it evenly spaced.no thank you
03:05:446 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's almost an evenly-spaced star. Almost.which one do you mean?
03:10:150 (7) - What's this mapped to?self generated rhythm
03:10:747 (2) - Uninherited timing point here is wrong. BPM:118 Offset:190747 is what I ended up with.I tried that, and it didn't work
03:13:545 (6) - Overlap.
03:14:548 (1,2,3,4) - This is some awkward spacing.guitar is random spacing
03:14:799 (2) - Put it right under 03:14:172 (8) - or not at all.you can only see that in editor, gameplay is not effected
03:16:806 (1) - That finish does not belong.ok
03:35:192 (1) - Please have someone better at timing than me look at the few uninherited timing points here and following this.It works, so I don't need any better
03:45:514 (1,2,3) - Make it a real curve, or straight.no different gameplay
03:47:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing here feels random.his voice gets louder, so it emulates that
03:49:398 (1,2) - They look like they should be in one line, but they're not.and what about it?
03:50:369 (3,4) - Hiding these under the repeat, are we?approach circles can't hide. They can't run either
03:52:554 (2,3,4,5) - Make it a square, or something else evenly-spaced that you like.they face the same point so I'm fine with that
03:54:496 (1,2,3) - Even spacing!ok
03:57:591 (1,1) - Why are these both new combosok, and why is 03:58:258 (1) - getting a hug of death?blankets keep them warm
03:58:783 (2) - Don't overlap it with the slider like that.
03:58:783 (2,3,4,5) - Even spacing please.yeah that's what they have
04:00:111 (2) - Overlap!
04:01:318 (2) - It'd look nicer if you moved it a bit downok whatever
04:01:922 (3) - More ugly overlap
04:01:922 (3,4,5) - Even spacing is wanted here.and we have even spacing
04:06:631 (1,2,3,4) - Looks wonky.this is true fun
04:15:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also looks wonky. Space it evenly, or make it consistently uneven. it goes with drums' down and up beat
04:18:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nothing wrong here. Just wanted to point out that this looks nice.why, thank you!
04:19:670 (7,8) - This, however, doesn't. 8 overlaps and the angle here looks kinda awkward.:(
04:21:602 (1,2,3,4) - Wonky.just what I like
04:23:051 (1,2,3,4) - Willy Wonka wonky.^
04:25:466 (3,4) - Make the spacing consistent with 04:24:983 (1,2) - listen for downbeat and upbeat
04:32:227 (2) - Woah why is this so fast?!for the drum
04:34:400 (1) - Even spacing is not here.it should be fine, since it is readable, your map does the same
04:34:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Even spacing and is not a curve nor a straight line.even spacing is here
04:35:970 (2) - Not mapped to anything.it helps to merge
04:37:298 (1) - Does there really need to be a spinner here?it causes no stress
04:41:462 (3,4,5) - It's almost an evenly spaced triangle.it wasn't supposed to be a equilateral triangle.
04:48:343 (2,3) - Overlap with 04:47:498 (6) - no thanks
04:50:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Almost an evenly sided pentagon.it's fine
04:55:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - Almost an evenly sided star.ok

Post-mod thoughts: This is unpolished. After my mod, it will be unpolished. It is likely going to take a lot of modding and maybe some remapping before this'll get approved. There's a lot of stuff in this of which I can tell you that it's wrong, but not why, but if you are curious about anything I said, I can try to still answer. I wish you the best of luck getting this modded and hopefully approved.
Handryan Bros

Osuology wrote:

Handryan Bros wrote:

M4M

[Insane]
  • New Combo issue
    00:08:970 - add hitcircle
    STOP REQUESTING THIS, IT DOESN'T BELONG HERE

    add slider from 00:09:684 to 00:10:042 No because I am mapping guitar, not singer
    00:12:541 - add hitcirlcle ^
    00:12:899 - add hitcircle^
Well, usually for insane map, it must be filled to make the player less relax (b'cause its insane) (like my map)

It's up to you, since its your map :D
1319

Osuology wrote:

Antarus wrote:

M4M!

Post-mod thoughts: This is unpolished. After my mod, it will be unpolished. It is likely going to take a lot of modding and maybe some remapping before this'll get approved. There's a lot of stuff in this of which I can tell you that it's wrong, but not why, but if you are curious about anything I said, I can try to still answer. I wish you the best of luck getting this modded and hopefully approved.
Especially when you know a lot about ranking when you have no ranked either.
i lol'd
Victoire

Osuology wrote:

Antarus wrote:

M4M!

Insane

General
Decimal points in your BPM's usually are not right.Well, they work, so it doesn't really matter. Don't get OCD over it.
Ahem. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing

"Your map must be perfectly timed. This means that your BPM and offset are spot-on, sliders end when they should, notes are generally following a recognizable rhythm (such as the lyrics or drums) which is comprehensible by a player, and that there are no unsnapped notes (you can check this by running AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) in the editor)."

Given you didn't know this, I suggest you read through the rest of that wiki page while you're at it.
Topic Starter
Osuology

Antarus wrote:

"Your map must be perfectly timed. This means that your BPM and offset are spot-on, sliders end when they should, notes are generally following a recognizable rhythm (such as the lyrics or drums) which is comprehensible by a player, and that there are no unsnapped notes (you can check this by running AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) in the editor)."

Given you didn't know this, I suggest you read through the rest of that wiki page while you're at it.
lol, the wiki sucks, it is way outdated(or so I've heard), also I don't think BPM and offset are off, because most of them work, I will be fixing a certain one which is off tho. Also, I apologize for being a little arrogant.
Topic Starter
Osuology

Handryan Bros wrote:

Well, usually for insane map, it must be filled to make the player less relax (b'cause its insane) (like my map)

It's up to you, since its your map :D
I think mine is fine, but I agree with you :)
Kibbleru
SPOILER
21:12 Osuology: can you please take a quick look at my map?
21:12 *Osuology is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/644903 Yuzu - Reason]
21:15 Kibbleru: 00:58:416 (1,2,1,2) - ik bpm is low but, these are still 1/4 lol
21:16 Kibbleru: reduce spacing a bit
21:16 Kibbleru: kinda harsh
21:16 Osuology: ok
21:16 Kibbleru: dont randomly skip drum beats :X
21:16 Kibbleru: 00:53:578 -
21:16 Kibbleru: etc
21:17 Kibbleru: 00:54:545 (2,3) - in general 3/4 gaps are pretty awkward to play
21:17 Kibbleru: sliders are a great way to solve these issues :) http://puu.sh/hs9nL/dd25111bcb.jpg
21:18 Osuology: ok I think I know then
21:18 Kibbleru: 01:22:368 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - honestly difficulty spike is pretty big here.
21:18 Kibbleru: same with these spaced streams 01:14:626 (2,3,4) -
21:18 Kibbleru: i mean if u really want them u can keep them i guess..
21:19 Kibbleru: but nobody likes spaced streams lol
21:19 Kibbleru: 01:39:062 (1,2) - why the small spacing?
21:19 Osuology: they are slow tho,
21:19 Kibbleru: well
21:19 Kibbleru: i mean
21:19 Osuology: lol a failed attempt at blanket
21:19 Kibbleru: u have normal streams in the kiai 01:42:932 (1,2,3,4,5) -
21:19 Kibbleru: lol
21:21 Osuology: only because the chorus has 1/4 which is not drum, spacing makes it fit the drum better (IMO)
21:22 Kibbleru: well the chorus part is pretty.. overmapped too
21:22 Kibbleru: i hear that
21:22 Kibbleru: feint 1/4 beat
21:22 Kibbleru: but i don't know why u wud follow it lol
21:22 Kibbleru: these notes mainly 01:44:505 (1,5) -
21:22 Kibbleru: vocals are fine
21:23 Kibbleru: 01:46:441 (1,5,7) -
21:23 Osuology: hmm
21:23 Osuology: that is true
21:24 Kibbleru: i think u'd be able to make something more fun without overmapping the 1/4s
21:24 Kibbleru: 02:37:989 (1,2,3) - this is kinda cluttered
21:24 Kibbleru: eh
21:24 Kibbleru: uh
21:25 Kibbleru: try doign something similar to 02:23:752 (1,2,3) -
21:25 Osuology: ok
21:26 Osuology: got that
21:26 Kibbleru: lol the last kiai is so insane
21:27 Osuology: mainly SV, or other stuff too?
21:27 Kibbleru: nah just a comment
21:27 Kibbleru: cuz ur spaced streams lol
21:28 Osuology: oh, someone else mentioned that there were nasty streams at the end(implying difficulty)
21:28 Osuology: but the last kiai is kindof the most epic of the 3
21:29 Kibbleru: i hope this is intended to be an extra diff tho lol
21:29 Kibbleru: i wouldn't use spaced streams for an insane
21:29 Kibbleru: they're just rly hard to play
21:29 Kibbleru: anyway thats all i got for u
21:30 Osuology: yeah, I just named it insane because I thought it wouldn't be that hard + it's a marathon
21:30 Osuology: so I will name it something else, and thank you!
21:30 Kibbleru: oh wow
21:30 Kibbleru: its almost exactly 5 min LOL
21:30 Kibbleru: btw silence the spinner end a bit 05:03:673 -
21:30 Osuology: I know it was soo close
21:30 Kibbleru: kinda loud
21:30 Osuology: ok
21:31 Kibbleru: btw if u didnt know for some reason osu doesn't calculate the last spinner into the drain time
21:31 Kibbleru: so dw about it if it shows to be below 5 min
21:31 Osuology: ok thank you for that I was confused a little
21:32 Osuology: oh do you want kds?
21:33 Kibbleru: yeh why not lol
Arphimigon
[General]
BG Quality pls
Most of the SV changes are highly unreadable within the map, making parts look cramped too

00:01:261 (1,2) - Remove whistles, calm section yo!
00:07:542 - to 00:35:090 - should all be in lower SV as it is a clam section though! Also this suits using equal DS, so none of:
00:24:684 (1,2,3,4) - This is bad for calm section
00:15:756 - Weird to start here, offbeat slider imo. Make it a note here + another note or remove this sound
00:18:970 - Remove unnecessary inherit point
00:21:470 - Sound!
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+c and paste each of these for the same slider and neatness
00:52:610 (1,2,3,4,1) - Weird to read, and if a player isnt using leniency that last note will be r i p
01:05:674 (2,3) - Ugly stacking
01:06:037 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Weird rhythm, not nice to a player at full speed and feels overmapped
LOL SLDIERJUMPSDSD
01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Sudden lower DS? Hard to read yo
01:20:916 (1,2,3) - Fix DS
01:28:416 (3,4,1) - Stacking 4 ruins the flow here to note 5
01:45:110 (3,4,5,6,7) - Terribly hard to play this movement on 1/4
01:49:465 (1,2,3) - No. Too damn sudden
02:25:786 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Keep idea, make it less clustered
02:40:786 (1,2,3) - DS
03:32:140 (2) - That end curve... so ugly! Make it... curvier
03:47:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps are highly unneeded here
03:52:574 (2,3,4,5) - Slider overlaps are ugly
k sudden DS increase after here is sudden

Thats all imma point out im tired
gl with this!
Topic Starter
Osuology

Arphimigon wrote:

[General]
BG Quality pls Someday, someday....
Most of the SV changes are highly unreadable within the map, making parts look cramped too I take inspiration from HW. Now it all makes sense, right?

00:01:261 (1,2) - Remove whistles, calm section yo! yea
00:07:542 - to 00:35:090 - should all be in lower SV as it is a clam section though! Also this suits using equal DS, so none of: it's pretty slow imo
00:24:684 (1,2,3,4) - This is bad for calm sectionWhy? I changed it tho.
00:15:756 - Weird to start here, offbeat slider imo. Make it a note here + another note or remove this soundguitar plz
00:18:970 - Remove unnecessary inherit point removed both
00:21:470 - Sound! no singer pls
00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+c and paste each of these for the same slider and neatnessok
00:52:610 (1,2,3,4,1) - Weird to read, and if a player isnt using leniency that last note will be r i pok
01:05:674 (2,3) - Ugly stackingstacked better
01:06:037 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Weird rhythm, not nice to a player at full speed and feels overmappedI'm not sure why
LOL SLDIERJUMPSDSD adasddadofhoejgoijeoiger
01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Sudden lower DS? Hard to read yobut it is the same :(
01:20:916 (1,2,3) - Fix DSmakes the three significant
01:28:416 (3,4,1) - Stacking 4 ruins the flow here to note 5blanketed
01:45:110 (3,4,5,6,7) - Terribly hard to play this movement on 1/4ok
01:49:465 (1,2,3) - No. Too suddenwhat is sudden about it?
02:25:786 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Keep idea, make it less clusteredok
02:40:786 (1,2,3) - DSnotice the downbeat.
03:32:140 (2) - That end curve... so ugly! Make it... curvierok
03:47:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps are highly unneeded hereI call it vocal stressing
03:52:574 (2,3,4,5) - Slider overlaps are uglymade it better
k sudden DS increase after here is sudden I know this

Thats all imma point out im tired
gl with this!
Thank you! :)
Little
From my queue.

[General]
  1. Background quality is awful. Please try to find a better one.
  2. There's not enough leadin time for a countdown, so no need to enable countdown.
  3. Artist should be ゆず and title should be REASON. This can be seen in the ending video: http://puu.sh/ihJ06/c394abded5.jpg
  4. Romanized artist should probably be YUZU as this is the only romanization I've seen on their website.
  5. Source should be HUNTER×HUNTER
  6. Remove reason from tags, as it is already in the title.
  7. Duplicated tag hunter is unnecessary, because osu! beatmap search does not accept exact phrase searches.
  8. Should probably remove x from tags, and add hunterxhunter instead. Web search does not take queries shorter than 3 characters, and in game search will have hunterxhunter account for x
  9. Remove osuology from tags, as it is already in the creator.
  10. There's no reason for this to be a single difficulty mapset. This song can easily be mapped for a full spread.
  11. Timing is wrong. Here are the correct timing sections: http://puu.sh/ihLDr/d582dbe0fd.png (Fix this AFTER fixing everything else, so the timestamps in my mod are still relevant.)
[Riyu]
  1. I think Riyuu is a better difficulty name, as it is a more accurate romanization in terms of actual pronunciation of the word.
  2. First offset is wrong. The first note in the song is a quarter note pickup, and the first downbeat is actually at 00:02:020
  3. 00:07:542 - I feel like normal sampleset isn't really appropriate in this section. Consider changing to soft sampleset. The finishes are also really excessive for such a calm section of the song. I recommend reducing your use of finish additions.
  4. 00:07:542 (1,2) - I think it will look better if you space these out a bit. They're really close to overlapping, and doesn't look nice.
  5. 00:19:684 (3,4) - I suggest putting larger spacing between these to put some emphasis on (4), as it is a stronger note, and also changes pitch.
  6. 00:29:684 - I recommend putting a 1/1 slider here. It fits well with the vocals. Example: http://puu.sh/ihKc1/7817923ea9.jpg
  7. 00:42:487 (5,6) - This is not really a good representation of the music. The stress in the music is on 00:42:974 which you've placed a slider repeat on. It would be nice to give the player something to click here.
  8. 00:42:487 (5,6,1,2) - Why is (5,6) stacked and (1,2) not stacked? I think it would be appropriate to make them the same, since they are representing the same pattern in the music.
  9. 00:45:902 (1) - Better to start this two beats later at 00:46:877 It fits the music much better.
  10. 00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Finishes are extremely loud here. I think finish should only be used to highlight strong beats, and not spammed like this. It loses its effect when overused, and is also noisy.
  11. 00:52:852 (2,3) - Maybe you can try to avoid using such tight curves. I just think they don't look very good, and also play a bit awkwardly because they make the slider feel very short, and coupled with the low distance spacing just makes the movement between the objects feel very slow relative the the sliders.
  12. 00:55:755 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if you put these in a straight line.
  13. 01:02:287 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest making some jumps here, because the current distance feels very small relative to the parts before it.
  14. 01:05:674 (2,3) - I think if you unstack these and make it overlap instead, it will make the beat spacing more obvious: http://puu.sh/ihMqU/0f906977b5.jpg
  15. 01:06:037 (3,1,2) - Sudden increase in distance spacing comes really unexpected. Low SV will likely confuse the player into thinking the beat spacing is 1/2.
  16. 01:06:037 (3,2) - The overlap here looks really messy. Try to avoid overlapping at the ends, as it causes a lot of lines to cross, and make the map look cluttered.
  17. 01:06:884 (2,3,4,5,1) - High distance spacing is confusing because of low slider velocity. I recommend overlapping these to make it clear that it's 1/4 beat.
  18. 01:08:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same things here.
  19. 01:20:916 (1,2) - Maintain the same spacing as the others.
  20. 01:30:836 (2,3) - Increase distance spacing. It's too small now, and could be confused for 1/4 beat.
  21. 01:42:932 - Slider velocity in this section should be increased so that the movement on the slider is roughly the same as the distance spacing. Otherwise, there will be awkward slowdowns at every slider, which is uncomfortable to play.
  22. 01:45:352 (5,6,7) - This feels really unnatural to play. Try to make it smoother.
  23. 01:48:739 (1,3) - Try reducing the curve, as the current shape is overlapping on itself too much, making it look strange and difficult to read.
  24. 01:51:642 (4) - Why did you ignore the beat on the blue tick? I think it's quite significant and should be mapped out.
  25. 01:57:449 (7,1) - Unstack to make the beat spacing clear.
  26. 02:04:707 (2,1) - Increase the distance spacing? It's really awkward to play when the distance is this small.
  27. 02:08:578 (3,4) - I recommend changing directions. It just feels better: http://puu.sh/ihMPt/0abd86c1ef.jpg
  28. 02:09:545 (1,2,3) - I don't think these go well with the song. I'd strongly recommend that you start following the drums immediately here. The 1/4 extensions on the sliders are unfitting.
  29. 02:32:396 (2) - I don't see any reason to suddenly increase the slider velocity like this. It's just confusing.
  30. 02:44:981 (1,2) - This jump is ridiculous. The song doesn't call for this. The player would expect distance spacing similar to 02:44:599 (1,2)
  31. 03:04:684 (2) - What's up with this slider shape? It's almost a circular curve, but not...
  32. 03:06:590 (1) - Start the spinner a 1/4 beat later. It fits the song better.
  33. 03:10:531 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped.
  34. 03:10:531 (2) - I suggest mapping a circle or 1/4 slider to the red tick, and starting the slider on the downbeat.
  35. 03:12:304 - The clap hitsounds really stick out here, and don't fit the song well.
  36. 03:18:920 (1) - Try to avoid using such a long spinner. Spinners are tiring to play, and the length of the spinner might ruin the playability of the map with HardRock mod.
  37. 03:27:056 - The slider ends should not be overmapped this way. It doesn't fit the feel of the song. They should all be ended 1/4 beat earlier.
  38. 03:33:157 (3) - This slider shape is kinda ugly. I don't see why you need the red node there.
  39. 03:44:546 (5) - I recommend unstacking this and adding a circle at 03:44:181 for a triple under the slider end.
  40. 03:45:763 (3) - Excessive amount of slider points. This same shape could be achieved with just four or five nodes.
  41. 03:49:655 (2) - Why are you using slider points like this?
  42. 03:52:574 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this would look better as a regular cross with 90 degree angles.
  43. 03:59:386 (7) - Slider shape could be cleaned up a bit. Try to make the curved sections have a more regular (even) curve.
  44. 04:00:473 (3,4,5,6,7) - The flow here is awkward because (5,6,7) is too straight. I'd move (6) to the right a bit to get a matching curve.
  45. 04:01:077 (1,2) - Why overlap? I think it's better to keep the spacing consistent so the player can read the beat spacing.
  46. 04:03:733 (3) - Does not fit the rhythm of the music. Something like this would be more appropriate: http://puu.sh/ihNGx/907c093407.jpg
  47. 04:05:423 (5) - The note on the blue tick is more prominent. It doesn't make sense to skip it.
  48. 04:13:271 (4,5,1) - Flow here is quite awkward. I recommend reversing the direction of (1) to make it smoother.
  49. 04:57:276 (1) - I'd end the spinner where the string is released.
You may call me to mod again after fixing these.
Topic Starter
Osuology

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
  1. Background quality is awful. Please try to find a better one. ok, I used higher quality
  2. There's not enough leadin time for a countdown, so no need to enable countdown. oh ok
  3. Artist should be ゆず and title should be REASON. This can be seen in the ending video: http://puu.sh/ihJ06/c394abded5.jpg
  4. Romanized artist should probably be YUZU as this is the only romanization I've seen on their website.
  5. Source should be HUNTER×HUNTER
  6. Remove reason from tags, as it is already in the title.
  7. Duplicated tag hunter is unnecessary, because osu! beatmap search does not accept exact phrase searches.
  8. Should probably remove x from tags, and add hunterxhunter instead. Web search does not take queries shorter than 3 characters, and in game search will have hunterxhunter account for x
  9. Remove osuology from tags, as it is already in the creator. did all the tag stuff
  10. There's no reason for this to be a single difficulty mapset. This song can easily be mapped for a full spread. too lazy
  11. Timing is wrong. Here are the correct timing sections: http://puu.sh/ihLDr/d582dbe0fd.png (Fix this AFTER fixing everything else, so the timestamps in my mod are still relevant.) these don't work right now for me, the last one is off time and for some reason everything messes up after changing the second one. I would change but I don't know what to do about this.
[Riyu]
  1. I think Riyuu is a better difficulty name, as it is a more accurate romanization in terms of actual pronunciation of the word. ok
  2. First offset is wrong. The first note in the song is a quarter note pickup, and the first downbeat is actually at 00:02:020 ok.
  3. 00:07:542 - I feel like normal sampleset isn't really appropriate in this section. Consider changing to soft sampleset. The finishes are also really excessive for such a calm section of the song. I recommend reducing your use of finish additions. ok, I like soft better and took off a few finishes
  4. 00:07:542 (1,2) - I think it will look better if you space these out a bit. They're really close to overlapping, and doesn't look nice. ok spaced em out a lot, you didn't specify how much so I just made it farther
  5. 00:19:684 (3,4) - I suggest putting larger spacing between these to put some emphasis on (4), as it is a stronger note, and also changes pitch. ok 1 arrow more
  6. 00:29:684 - I recommend putting a 1/1 slider here. It fits well with the vocals. Example: http://puu.sh/ihKc1/7817923ea9.jpgI follow the guitar the whole time, doesn't really make sense to put this in, when I'm not even mapping vocally
  7. 00:42:487 (5,6) - This is not really a good representation of the music. The stress in the music is on 00:42:974 which you've placed a slider repeat on. It would be nice to give the player something to click here. ok
  8. 00:42:487 (5,6,1,2) - Why is (5,6) stacked and (1,2) not stacked? I think it would be appropriate to make them the same, since they are representing the same pattern in the music.I did due to earlier change
  9. 00:45:902 (1) - Better to start this two beats later at 00:46:877 It fits the music much better.ok but awkward pause between isn't nice :(
  10. 00:50:675 (1,2,3,4) - Finishes are extremely loud here. I think finish should only be used to highlight strong beats, and not spammed like this. It loses its effect when overused, and is also noisy. ok
  11. 00:52:852 (2,3) - Maybe you can try to avoid using such tight curves. I just think they don't look very good, and also play a bit awkwardly because they make the slider feel very short, and coupled with the low distance spacing just makes the movement between the objects feel very slow relative the the sliders. ok did my best to fix
  12. 00:55:755 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if you put these in a straight line. um ok never really noticed that
  13. 01:02:287 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest making some jumps here, because the current distance feels very small relative to the parts before it.ok
  14. 01:05:674 (2,3) - I think if you unstack these and make it overlap instead, it will make the beat spacing more obvious: http://puu.sh/ihMqU/0f906977b5.jpg alright
  15. 01:06:037 (3,1,2) - Sudden increase in distance spacing comes really unexpected. Low SV will likely confuse the player into thinking the beat spacing is 1/2. I would like a little more reason for this, out of all the play tests I saw, no players ever were confused on this so I don't really have much reason to change it right now
  16. 01:06:037 (3,2) - The overlap here looks really messy. Try to avoid overlapping at the ends, as it causes a lot of lines to cross, and make the map look cluttered. tried to fix did alright
  17. 01:06:884 (2,3,4,5,1) - High distance spacing is confusing because of low slider velocity. I recommend overlapping these to make it clear that it's 1/4 beat. but then no spaced stream I think it's not that bad honestly
  18. 01:08:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same things here.
  19. 01:20:916 (1,2) - Maintain the same spacing as the others. I makes the third more significant though. I changed it, but made the 3 more out
  20. 01:30:836 (2,3) - Increase distance spacing. It's too small now, and could be confused for 1/4 beat. ok whatever
  21. 01:42:932 - Slider velocity in this section should be increased so that the movement on the slider is roughly the same as the distance spacing. Otherwise, there will be awkward slowdowns at every slider, which is uncomfortable to play. to me it already seems like its that way + 1/4 sliders aren't bad, the only part is the sliders after which don't have 1/4 near them so I think its fine
  22. 01:45:352 (5,6,7) - This feels really unnatural to play. Try to make it smoother. ok plays a little better
  23. 01:48:739 (1,3) - Try reducing the curve, as the current shape is overlapping on itself too much, making it look strange and difficult to read. it overlaps itself? I don't see that, so I won't change until you show me what you mean
  24. 01:51:642 (4) - Why did you ignore the beat on the blue tick? I think it's quite significant and should be mapped out. ok
  25. 01:57:449 (7,1) - Unstack to make the beat spacing clear. ok
  26. 02:04:707 (2,1) - Increase the distance spacing? It's really awkward to play when the distance is this small. ok
  27. 02:08:578 (3,4) - I recommend changing directions. It just feels better: http://puu.sh/ihMPt/0abd86c1ef.jpg ok
  28. 02:09:545 (1,2,3) - I don't think these go well with the song. I'd strongly recommend that you start following the drums immediately here. The 1/4 extensions on the sliders are unfitting. ok
  29. 02:32:396 (2) - I don't see any reason to suddenly increase the slider velocity like this. It's just confusing. I put hitsounding to make it sound like a different drum although it depends on skins hitsounds.
  30. 02:44:981 (1,2) - This jump is ridiculous. The song doesn't call for this. The player would expect distance spacing similar to 02:44:599 (1,2) ok
  31. 03:04:684 (2) - What's up with this slider shape? It's almost a circular curve, but not... ok
  32. 03:06:590 (1) - Start the spinner a 1/4 beat later. It fits the song better. ok
  33. 03:10:531 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped. will fix after timing fix since that causes this
  34. 03:10:531 (2) - I suggest mapping a circle or 1/4 slider to the red tick, and starting the slider on the downbeat. ok
  35. 03:12:304 - The clap hitsounds really stick out here, and don't fit the song well. ok
  36. 03:18:920 (1) - Try to avoid using such a long spinner. Spinners are tiring to play, and the length of the spinner might ruin the playability of the map with HardRock mod. would be nice if you could suggest a option
  37. 03:27:056 - The slider ends should not be overmapped this way. It doesn't fit the feel of the song. They should all be ended 1/4 beat earlier. ok but seems weird this way
  38. 03:33:157 (3) - This slider shape is kinda ugly. I don't see why you need the red node there. ok
  39. 03:44:546 (5) - I recommend unstacking this and adding a circle at 03:44:181 for a triple under the slider end. ok
  40. 03:45:763 (3) - Excessive amount of slider points. This same shape could be achieved with just four or five nodes. ok
  41. 03:49:655 (2) - Why are you using slider points like this? ok
  42. 03:52:574 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this would look better as a regular cross with 90 degree angles. ok
  43. 03:59:386 (7) - Slider shape could be cleaned up a bit. Try to make the curved sections have a more regular (even) curve. but it generated that curve for me so I don't see how I change it
  44. 04:00:473 (3,4,5,6,7) - The flow here is awkward because (5,6,7) is too straight. I'd move (6) to the right a bit to get a matching curve. tried my best
  45. 04:01:077 (1,2) - Why overlap? I think it's better to keep the spacing consistent so the player can read the beat spacing. overlap because it matches flow IMO
  46. 04:03:733 (3) - Does not fit the rhythm of the music. Something like this would be more appropriate: http://puu.sh/ihNGx/907c093407.jpg ok
  47. 04:05:423 (5) - The note on the blue tick is more prominent. It doesn't make sense to skip it. dont see a good fix for it tho
  48. 04:13:271 (4,5,1) - Flow here is quite awkward. I recommend reversing the direction of (1) to make it smoother. dont see how thats better but whatever
  49. 04:57:276 (1) - I'd end the spinner where the string is released. ok
You may call me to mod again after fixing these.
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