Overall, the difficulty is a bit high for an NM due to the many SVs and some awkward placements of notes. I'd recommend changing it to an NM+.
00:01:964 (1964|2) - Change to LN that goes flush with the next note.
00:03:227 (3227|0) - ^
00:03:858 (3858|3) - ^
00:12:069 (12069|3) - ^
00:13:332 (13332|1) - ^
00:13:964 (13964|2) - ^
00:22:174 (22174|3) - - Change to chord (two note)
00:23:437 (23437|3) - ^
00:24:069 (24069|3) - ^ + move two columns left.
00:28:806 (28806|1) - Change to chord (two note)
00:29:753 (29753|3) - ^
00:32:595 (32595|0) - ^
00:33:543 (33543|3) - ^
00:37:964 (37964|3) - ^
00:41:753 (41753|0,41753|3) - Add clap hitsound.
00:43:648 (43648|3,43648|2) - ^
00:44:911 (44911|3,44911|1) - ^
00:45:543 (45543|1,45543|0) - ^
00:46:174 (46174|0,46174|3) - Why is the Finish hitsound on only one of the notes in the chord?
00:48:701 (48701|2,48701|3) - Repetitive, change placement.
00:49:016 (49016|0) - ^
00:51:543 (51543|1,51858|2,52174|1,52490|3,52490|2) - ^
00:59:437 (59437|2,59437|0) - ^
01:04:174 (64174|1,64490|2,64806|1,65122|3,65122|0) - ^
01:14:279 (74279|0) - ^
01:16:490 (76490|0,76490|3,77753|1,77753|2,79016|0) - This pattern here is very awkward, especially with the SV coming up. I'd suggest changing something with this pattern to make it less awkward.
01:22:806 (82806|2,82806|0) - Suggest changing this to clap hitsound.
01:21:858 (81858|3,82174|0,82490|3,82806|2,82806|0,83122|3,83437|0,83753|3) - Suggest changing this pattern to be less repetitive.
01:24:069 (84069|1,84069|0) - Suggest changing this to clap hitsound.
01:24:701 (84701|3,84701|1) - ^
01:25:332 (85332|0,85332|1) - ^
01:25:648 (85648|2) - Suggest changing placement to be less repetitive.
01:26:279 (86279|2) - Suggest changing this to single note at beginning of this LN.
01:30:701 (90701|2) - Suggest changing this to LN for a 1/1 beat time period.
01:31:016 (91016|1) - Suggest changing this to single note at beginning of this LN.
01:31:332 (91332|0) - ^
01:35:753 (95753|3,96069|1,96385|2) - Same as the last three suggestions for these three respectively (first change to LN, second and third change to single note at beginning of LN.
01:42:385 (102385|1,102701|2,103016|3,103016|0,103332|1,103648|2,103964|1) - Suggest changing placement of notes to be less repetitive.
01:44:279 (104279|0,104279|3,104595|2,104911|1,105227|2) - ^
01:46:174 (106174|3) - Change to chord (two note)
01:46:385 (106385|2) - ^
01:46:595 (106595|1) - ^
01:47:122 (107122|2,107437|1,107753|3,108069|0,108069|1,108385|2,108701|1,109016|3) - Suggest changing pattern to be less repetitive.
01:52:174 (112174|2) - Change to LN until next note.
01:53:437 (113437|1) - ^
02:01:964 (121964|0,121964|1,122279|2,122595|0,122911|2,123227|0,123543|2,123858|0,124174|2) -
Really important: Please change this pattern. It is too repetitive.02:05:122 (125122|0,125437|3,125753|0,126069|3,126385|0) - ^
02:06:701 (126701|1,127016|2,127016|3,127332|0,127648|2,127964|0,128279|2,128595|0) - ^
02:08:911 (128911|2,129227|0,129543|2,129543|3,129858|1,130174|2) - ^
02:10:806 (130806|2,131122|1) - ^
02:12:069 (132069|3,132385|0,132701|3,133016|0,133332|3,133648|0) - ^
02:13:964 (133964|3,134279|0,134595|2,134595|3,134911|1,135227|3,135543|1,135858|3,136174|1) - ^
02:20:911 (140911|3,140911|0,141227|2,141227|1,141543|3,141543|0,141858|1,141858|2) - Remove all of these and change to a pair of LNs starting at the marker at beginning of this suggestion in columns 2 and 3.
02:24:701 (144701|1) - Change to LN until next note.
02:25:332 (145332|2) - ^
02:34:806 (154806|0,154806|2) - ^
02:35:475 (155475|1,155475|3) - ^
02:53:263 (173263|1,173263|3) - Suggest remove one of these notes.
03:02:263 (182263|3,182263|2,182263|0) - Suggest removing one of these notes. It's a bit too awkward to hit a three note chord after the 1/2nd stream.
03:03:368 (183368|3,183368|1,183368|0) - Suggest removing one of these notes.
03:21:684 (201684|2,201684|3,201842|0,202000|1,202158|2,202315|0,202315|3,202473|2,202631|3,202631|1,202789|0,202947|3) - Suggest the simplification of this pattern. It's a bit hard for an NM.
03:23:579 (203579|1,203579|2) - Suggest changing these LNs iinto regular two note chord.
03:24:210 (204210|0) - Change to LN until next note.
03:24:842 (204842|3) - ^
03:26:105 (206105|0) - ^
03:26:736 (206736|3) - ^
03:38:736 (218736|2,218736|1) - ^
03:39:368 (219368|0,219368|3) - ^
03:40:631 (220631|0) - Shorten this LN to the red note.
03:43:789 (223789|1,223947|1) - Change placement to another column, preferably 1 or 4.
03:46:315 (226315|2,226473|2) - Change placement to another column, preferably 2 or 4.
03:47:421 (227421|3) - Move into line with the previous note.
04:04:000 (244000|1,244158|1) - Change placement to another column, preferably 1 or 4.
04:04:947 (244947|2,245105|2) - ^
04:05:894 (245894|2) - Change to two note chord instead of LN.
04:06:526 (246526|0,246684|0) - Change to another column, preferably 2 or 4.
04:07:631 (247631|3) - Move in line with previous note.
04:08:421 (248421|3,248631|3,248842|2) - Change all three of these to chords and change placement to be less repetitive.
04:20:421 (260421|1,260421|2) - Shorten LN to third white note.
04:21:684 (261684|0,261684|3,261842|3,261842|0) - Change placement to a different column, preferably 2 or 3.
04:23:105 (263105|2,263105|1,263263|2,263263|1) - Change placement to a different column, preferrably 1 or 4.
04:23:579 (263579|0,263579|3,263894|0,263894|3) - Change placement.
04:44:105 - In my opinion, there's no need to stop the Kiai section here and start a new one. Just keep it throughout
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04:44:421 (284421|3,284421|2,284421|1) - While I know that this was meant for emphasis, a three note chord here, especially after the 1/2nd note stream, is a bit difficult for a NM difficulty. If it is changed to a NM+, these can stay
04:44:736 - In my opinion, starting here, you should make the note placement a lot more dynamic and not as repetitive as it is currently. Definitely would help out
05:03:368 (303368|3) - Get rid of this LN. It makes the current pattern way to awkward for an NM difficulty. Also, change the pattern of all notes within the LN to make it less repetitive after removing the LN.
05:07:473 (307473|2) - Change to two note chord.
05:14:105 (314105|2,314105|1,314342|1,314342|2,314579|1,314579|2) - Again, too repetitive. Change note placement to be less repetitive.
05:17:579 (317579|2) - Change to two note chord.
05:14:105 - Again, starting here, please make the patterns less repetitive and more dynamic
05:15:684 (315684|2) - Change to two note chord.
05:16:947 (316947|1) - ^
05:23:579 (323579|2,323579|0,323736|3,323894|0,323894|1,324052|2,324210|0,324210|3,324368|1,324368|2,324526|0,324526|3,324684|2,324684|1) - Simplify pattern to make it more NM friendly. Right now, it isn't very NM friendly.
05:29:887 (329887|2,329887|1) - Delete one of these notes.
06:06:602 (366602|0) - Change placement of this note to here. Makes more sense and is easier.
06:17:590 (377590|3) - Remove whistle hitsound. Distracts from the ambiance and atmosphere.