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BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?

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Scatology
IRCmod

SPOILER
17:11 Scatology: 00:21:323 (1,2,3,4) - 
17:11 Scatology: なんか物足りない?
17:11 BluOxy: あぁ~^
17:12 BluOxy: なんか音弱いなーと思って音取ってなかった
17:12 Scatology: 00:21:648 -
17:12 Scatology: ここがやっぱ欲しくなるよね
17:12 BluOxy: うむうむ
17:12 BluOxy: 入れておこう
17:15 Scatology: 00:31:783 (1) - 緑線を入れてだんだん音を小さくするのがいいかも?
17:16 BluOxy: 難易度によってはメロディを音取ってる部分があるから、スピナーを使っている難易度は音量調整しよう
17:22 Scatology: 01:40:458 (1,2) - やっぱりやりにくい印象
17:23 BluOxy: 検討しよう
17:23 Scatology: 01:40:945 (3,1) - ここが重なってるように見えるだけで実際はいいのかは不明
17:24 Scatology: ※あくまでもEdit上での問題
17:24 BluOxy: あああ、そこはBATの指摘に任せます。
17:26 Scatology: 01:41:107 (4,5,1) -
17:27 Scatology: 01:41:756 (1) - ここのスライダーにあわせて01:41:107 (4,5) - の傾きを合わせてもいいかも?
17:31 BluOxy: 確かに、直しました
17:31 Scatology: とりあえず見たところ以上かな~と
17:31 Scatology: GL
Sh1raYuKi
1つだけですー。
[ADVANCED]
00:20:026 (1,2) - ここhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2741827にしてみては?

以上です。
がんばってください
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Scatology wrote:

IRCmod

SPOILER
17:11 Scatology: 00:21:323 (1,2,3,4) - 
17:11 Scatology: なんか物足りない?
17:11 BluOxy: あぁ~^
17:12 BluOxy: なんか音弱いなーと思って音取ってなかった
17:12 Scatology: 00:21:648 -
17:12 Scatology: ここがやっぱ欲しくなるよね
17:12 BluOxy: うむうむ
17:12 BluOxy: 入れておこう
17:15 Scatology: 00:31:783 (1) - 緑線を入れてだんだん音を小さくするのがいいかも?
17:16 BluOxy: 難易度によってはメロディを音取ってる部分があるから、スピナーを使っている難易度は音量調整しよう
17:22 Scatology: 01:40:458 (1,2) - やっぱりやりにくい印象
17:23 BluOxy: 検討しよう
17:23 Scatology: 01:40:945 (3,1) - ここが重なってるように見えるだけで実際はいいのかは不明
17:24 Scatology: ※あくまでもEdit上での問題
17:24 BluOxy: あああ、そこはBATの指摘に任せます。
17:26 Scatology: 01:41:107 (4,5,1) -
17:27 Scatology: 01:41:756 (1) - ここのスライダーにあわせて01:41:107 (4,5) - の傾きを合わせてもいいかも?
17:31 BluOxy: 確かに、直しました
17:31 Scatology: とりあえず見たところ以上かな~と
17:31 Scatology: GL

sumomo301 wrote:

1つだけですー。
[ADVANCED]
00:20:026 (1,2) - ここhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2741827にしてみては?うまく修正しておきました~

以上です。
がんばってください
二人共moddingありがとう!! thanks :D
kiguniko
流石俺の弟子...
HootOwlStar

Hi I am here for giving mod idk mostly suggestions xD sry for late (okay, really late)
And I apologize if my mod is bad and useless / I am really rude to you I am a newbie in modding QAQ
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

BASIC


I assume this is more to Easy.
  1. 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5) – Suggestion 1 or Suggestion 2.
  2. If you want to keep 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5), then try lower 00:00:567 (1,2,3) as 00:01:864 (3,1) are kinda overlap a little when playing
  3. 00:04:134 (2) – Lower the parts start from this note for better flow and easier to play
  4. 00:04:458 (3) – Increase x of point x:114 y:233 (curve more inwards? Ok I am bad in directions idk) just for slider design
  5. 00:05:756 (1) – Maybe Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, Ctrl+G and move it higher than before (decrease y)? Still suggestion for flow and design idk
  6. 00:27:810 (1) – No NC but if it affects the combo colour, then just ignore this
  7. 00:30:404 (1) – The design seems not so perfect (nvm ignore this I can’t think of a better slider design right now)
  8. 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4) – This pattern =A= try not to because it seems copy and paste. Maybe try sth like this?
  9. If you want to keep the pattern in 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4), at least change one of the sliders in 00:38:512 (4,1) become V-shaped (no matter direction it is) or curve so that it won’t be too horizontal-vertical
  10. 00:41:431 (2,1) - Maybe not make it V-shaped but a curve that blankets 00:41:431 (2). This is just suggestion so let us just carry on the mod lol
  11. 00:48:242 (2,3,4) – Smiley face #yay
  12. 00:49:864 (1,2,3) – And here comes the sad face lol (okay you can just ignore xD)
  13. 00:55:702 (2,3) – Fix blanket
  14. 00:56:350 (3,4,5,6,1) – The star shape is not perfect yet. Move 00:56:675 (4,5,6,1) together and make 00:56:675 (4) to x:256 y:192
  15. Make 01:03:485 (2) lower than 01:03:810 (3) to form triangle pattern
  16. 01:08:026 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern not perfect but nvm let us go on
  17. 01:13:215 (1) – Maybe lower this note for better flow
  18. 01:19:702 (2,1) – Fix blanket
  19. 01:23:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) – Too many circles QAQ maybe try making some of them into sliders?
  20. 01:43:053 (3) – Move the red turning point x:372 y:266 to centre of slider to follow rhythm
  21. 01:46:945 (1,1) – Try not make them in similar slider design unless the slider is not curve
Older map is better but since you remap this diff so nvm it is still good too

NOVICE


I assume this is more to Normal.
  1. 00:01:215 (2,3) – Seems copy and paste. Increase x for point x:137 y:50 in slider 00:01:864 (3) and also for point x:267 y:90 in slider 00:02:513 (4)
  2. 00:41:107 (5) – Not making it curve seems better
  3. 00:52:134 (1) – No NC
  4. 00:52:783 (2) – NC
  5. 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern seems not perfect (nt confident for this)
  6. 01:05:107 (4) – Make the red turning point more to centre of the slider
  7. 01:06:729 (1,2,3) – Oh god 3/4 notes. Try this kind of note placement to make it easier and neat
  8. 01:12:891 (3,4,1) – Make it into one slider is easier and better, in my opinion
  9. 01:18:404 (1,2,1) – I do more prefer to make V-shaped or straight sliders for them
  10. 01:53:107 (3,1,2,3,4,1) – wut that’s why this is labelled H. Try reduce the number of circles
Seems this diff is also remapped a little?
One more thing to state about, why don’t make the AR of MASTER diff 10 I don’t even get it
I think other diffs are really nice and I am still noobie in playing too so okay that’s all of my diff
I know my English is really terrible so PM me if you hv questions about mod :D
BTW good luck for both of us :)
Topic Starter
BluOxy

HootOwlStar wrote:


Hi I am here for giving mod idk mostly suggestions xD sry for late (okay, really late)
And I apologize if my mod is bad and useless / I am really rude to you I am a newbie in modding QAQ
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

BASIC


I assume this is more to Easy.
  1. 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5) – Suggestion 1 or Suggestion 2.
  2. If you want to keep 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5), then try lower 00:00:567 (1,2,3) as 00:01:864 (3,1) are kinda overlap a little when playing fixed
  3. 00:04:134 (2) – Lower the parts start from this note for better flow and easier to play
  4. 00:04:458 (3) – Increase x of point x:114 y:233 (curve more inwards? Ok I am bad in directions idk) just for slider design fixed
  5. 00:05:756 (1) – Maybe Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, Ctrl+G and move it higher than before (decrease y)? Still suggestion for flow and design idk
  6. 00:27:810 (1) – No NC but if it affects the combo colour, then just ignore this
  7. 00:30:404 (1) – The design seems not so perfect (nvm ignore this I can’t think of a better slider design right now)
  8. 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4) – This pattern =A= try not to because it seems copy and paste. Maybe try sth like this?
  9. If you want to keep the pattern in 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4), at least change one of the sliders in 00:38:512 (4,1) become V-shaped (no matter direction it is) or curve so that it won’t be too horizontal-vertical fixed
  10. 00:41:431 (2,1) - Maybe not make it V-shaped but a curve that blankets 00:41:431 (2). This is just suggestion so let us just carry on the mod lol
  11. 00:48:242 (2,3,4) – Smiley face #yay :D
  12. 00:49:864 (1,2,3) – And here comes the sad face lol (okay you can just ignore xD)
  13. 00:55:702 (2,3) – Fix blanket fixed
  14. 00:56:350 (3,4,5,6,1) – The star shape is not perfect yet. Move 00:56:675 (4,5,6,1) together and make 00:56:675 (4) to x:256 y:192
    fixed
  15. Make 01:03:485 (2) lower than 01:03:810 (3) to form triangle pattern fixed
  16. 01:08:026 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern not perfect but nvm let us go on fixed
  17. 01:13:215 (1) – Maybe lower this note for better flow fixed
  18. 01:19:702 (2,1) – Fix blanket fixed
  19. 01:23:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) – Too many circles QAQ maybe try making some of them into sliders?
  20. 01:43:053 (3) – Move the red turning point x:372 y:266 to centre of slider to follow rhythm fixed
  21. 01:46:945 (1,1) – Try not make them in similar slider design unless the slider is not curve fixed
Older map is better but since you remap this diff so nvm it is still good too

NOVICE


I assume this is more to Normal.
  1. 00:01:215 (2,3) – Seems copy and paste. Increase x for point x:137 y:50 in slider 00:01:864 (3) and also for point x:267 y:90 in slider 00:02:513 (4) fixed
  2. 00:41:107 (5) – Not making it curve seems better
  3. 00:52:134 (1) – No NC fixed
  4. 00:52:783 (2) – NC fixed
  5. 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern seems not perfect (nt confident for this)
  6. 01:05:107 (4) – Make the red turning point more to centre of the slider I changed the slider to streat, it might be better i guess.
  7. 01:06:729 (1,2,3) – Oh god 3/4 notes. Try this kind of note placement to make it easier and neat fixed
  8. 01:12:891 (3,4,1) – Make it into one slider is easier and better, in my opinion fixed
  9. 01:18:404 (1,2,1) – I do more prefer to make V-shaped or straight sliders for them I made round slider instead of your opinion.
  10. 01:53:107 (3,1,2,3,4,1) – wut that’s why this is labelled H. Try reduce the number of circles
Seems this diff is also remapped a little?
One more thing to state about, why don’t make the AR of MASTER diff 10 I don’t even get it AR10 is too fast I think! just because of it.
I think other diffs are really nice and I am still noobie in playing too so okay that’s all of my diff
I know my English is really terrible so PM me if you hv questions about mod :D
BTW good luck for both of us :)
I am still newbie at making beatmap... thank you for your modding!
Niko-nyan
Hi BluOxy random mod btw because i saw u made a collab with gero before so i stalk open your profile and saw this need mod

Let's see

MASTER

00:56:350 (1,1,1) - I'm not sure with this cymbal because it doesn't fit in here

BASIC

01:11:431 - i'm not sure with this one btw


no kds because random mod :<
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi BluOxy random mod btw because i saw u made a collab with gero before so i stalk open your profile and saw this need mod

Let's see

MASTER

00:56:350 (1,1,1) - I'm not sure with this cymbal because it doesn't fit in here I changed a hitsound from finish to whistle

BASIC

01:11:431 - i'm not sure with this one btw fixed


no kds because random mod :<
Thank you for your modding~ :D
x M e l
Wooo this song ♥♥♥ good luck Blu! :) I want to see it ranked!
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Wooo this song ♥♥♥ good luck Blu! :) I want to see it ranked!
Thank you Meiko <3
Ciyus Miapah
hello from Mod Q

umm i was delete and redownload your map but why this code is in your osu file without a storyboard?

problems
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"nyaa.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21648,,222,340
F,0,21648,22296,1,0
S,1,21648,22296,0.2561142,1
P,0,21648,22296,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,567,,121,274
F,0,567,1215,1,0
S,1,567,1215,0.2561142,1
P,0,567,1215,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22296,,120,245
F,0,22296,22944,1,0
S,1,22296,22944,0.2561142,1
P,0,22296,22944,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22945,,356,130
F,0,22945,23593,1,0
S,1,22945,23593,0.2561142,1
P,0,22945,23593,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,23594,,386,230
F,0,23594,24242,1,0
S,1,23594,24242,0.2561142,1
P,0,23594,24242,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24242,,323,298
F,0,24242,24890,1,0
S,1,24242,24890,0.2561142,1
P,0,24242,24890,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24891,,100,253
F,0,24891,25539,1,0
S,1,24891,25539,0.2561142,1
P,0,24891,25539,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,25539,,269,191
F,0,25539,26187,1,0
S,1,25539,26187,0.2561142,1
P,0,25539,26187,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21323,,486,404
F,0,21323,21971,1,0
S,1,21323,21971,0.2561142,1
P,0,21323,21971,A
//Storyboard Sound Samples

im just didnt know where is ring.png, i suggest you to delete this code at all diffs
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21648,,222,340
F,0,21648,22296,1,0
S,1,21648,22296,0.2561142,1
P,0,21648,22296,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,567,,121,274
F,0,567,1215,1,0
S,1,567,1215,0.2561142,1
P,0,567,1215,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22296,,120,245
F,0,22296,22944,1,0
S,1,22296,22944,0.2561142,1
P,0,22296,22944,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22945,,356,130
F,0,22945,23593,1,0
S,1,22945,23593,0.2561142,1
P,0,22945,23593,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,23594,,386,230
F,0,23594,24242,1,0
S,1,23594,24242,0.2561142,1
P,0,23594,24242,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24242,,323,298
F,0,24242,24890,1,0
S,1,24242,24890,0.2561142,1
P,0,24242,24890,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24891,,100,253
F,0,24891,25539,1,0
S,1,24891,25539,0.2561142,1
P,0,24891,25539,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,25539,,269,191
F,0,25539,26187,1,0
S,1,25539,26187,0.2561142,1
P,0,25539,26187,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21323,,486,404
F,0,21323,21971,1,0
S,1,21323,21971,0.2561142,1
P,0,21323,21971,A

add "hardcore" to your tags, so i can easily search this song

Master:
ok at the beginning dat streams :o

00:09:810 (1) - use sofft hitsample pls
01:05:431 (1) - make some curve waypoint after 2nd red waypoint
01:10:621 (1) - slider end in 01:10:945
01:11:107 - add circle here i guess
01:12:729 (2,4) - blanket this

good luck for rank, this map is awesome bro0o0o
~ S T A R S ~
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Fort wrote:

hello from Mod Q

umm i was delete and redownload your map but why this code is in your osu file without a storyboard?

problems
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"nyaa.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21648,,222,340
F,0,21648,22296,1,0
S,1,21648,22296,0.2561142,1
P,0,21648,22296,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,567,,121,274
F,0,567,1215,1,0
S,1,567,1215,0.2561142,1
P,0,567,1215,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22296,,120,245
F,0,22296,22944,1,0
S,1,22296,22944,0.2561142,1
P,0,22296,22944,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22945,,356,130
F,0,22945,23593,1,0
S,1,22945,23593,0.2561142,1
P,0,22945,23593,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,23594,,386,230
F,0,23594,24242,1,0
S,1,23594,24242,0.2561142,1
P,0,23594,24242,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24242,,323,298
F,0,24242,24890,1,0
S,1,24242,24890,0.2561142,1
P,0,24242,24890,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24891,,100,253
F,0,24891,25539,1,0
S,1,24891,25539,0.2561142,1
P,0,24891,25539,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,25539,,269,191
F,0,25539,26187,1,0
S,1,25539,26187,0.2561142,1
P,0,25539,26187,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21323,,486,404
F,0,21323,21971,1,0
S,1,21323,21971,0.2561142,1
P,0,21323,21971,A
//Storyboard Sound Samples

im just didnt know where is ring.png, i suggest you to delete this code at all diffs
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21648,,222,340
F,0,21648,22296,1,0
S,1,21648,22296,0.2561142,1
P,0,21648,22296,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,567,,121,274
F,0,567,1215,1,0
S,1,567,1215,0.2561142,1
P,0,567,1215,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22296,,120,245
F,0,22296,22944,1,0
S,1,22296,22944,0.2561142,1
P,0,22296,22944,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,22945,,356,130
F,0,22945,23593,1,0
S,1,22945,23593,0.2561142,1
P,0,22945,23593,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,23594,,386,230
F,0,23594,24242,1,0
S,1,23594,24242,0.2561142,1
P,0,23594,24242,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24242,,323,298
F,0,24242,24890,1,0
S,1,24242,24890,0.2561142,1
P,0,24242,24890,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,24891,,100,253
F,0,24891,25539,1,0
S,1,24891,25539,0.2561142,1
P,0,24891,25539,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,25539,,269,191
F,0,25539,26187,1,0
S,1,25539,26187,0.2561142,1
P,0,25539,26187,A
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/ring.png",126,273
M,0,21323,,486,404
F,0,21323,21971,1,0
S,1,21323,21971,0.2561142,1
P,0,21323,21971,A

add "hardcore" to your tags, so i can easily search this song

Master:
ok at the beginning dat streams :o

00:09:810 (1) - use sofft hitsample pls
01:05:431 (1) - make some curve waypoint after 2nd red waypoint
01:10:621 (1) - slider end in 01:10:945
01:11:107 - add circle here i guess
01:12:729 (2,4) - blanket this

good luck for rank, this map is awesome bro0o0o

~ S T A R S ~
all fixed! <3 and thanks for your kudosu!

Oh!! your modding is really nice!! thank you for modding :D
Ciyus Miapah
soon your map will be rank

soon™
Avena
oh my god this set is beautiful

irc mod
14:10 Priti: irc mod?
14:11 BluOxy: ah,does that mean... will you do irc mod for me?
14:11 Priti: yes
14:11 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/635679 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [MASTER]]
14:12 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Change these into 1/4 sliders, starting a map with a stream (or a circle in general) is never a good idea.
14:12 Priti: since it's hard to time it
14:12 Priti: especially with HD
14:12 Priti: 00:09:810 (1) - Drum on head, soft on tail.
14:12 Priti: 00:16:134 (1) - whistle on body :3
14:14 Priti: 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1) - In my opinion, these should be more exaggerated jumps.
14:15 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950451 more like this
14:15 Priti: 01:05:431 (1) - sliderwhistle
14:15 Priti: pls don't forget to respond to me :3
14:15 BluOxy: I see, now I fixed hit sound!
14:16 BluOxy: I'll consdier about placement... Hm
14:16 Priti: 01:50:350 (1) - Should be two 1/8 sliders and a circle
14:17 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950455
14:17 Priti: 01:50:675 (1) - same
14:17 Priti: 01:51:648 (1,1) - and these
14:17 BluOxy: Ahh is that okay?.. sure I'll fix.
14:17 Priti: that's lovely :3
14:18 BluOxy: hehe yeah that might be lovely :D I'll try to make better!
14:18 Priti: I'm done with MASTER
14:18 Priti: tell me when you're done and we'll move to INFINITE
14:19 BluOxy: sure!
14:19 Priti: 01:55:134 (1) - make the end of this 5% volume instead
14:19 Priti: (this is for all diffs)
14:20 BluOxy: ah okay I also fix that
14:24 Priti: btw I won't bubble this yet
14:24 Priti: I need confirmation about the spread
14:25 BluOxy: I see, it's okay
14:25 Priti: r u done with MASTER?
14:25 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637477 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [INFINITE]]
14:26 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't start a diff with a circle like that.
14:26 Priti: 00:09:323 (1,2) - switch NCs
14:26 BluOxy: (okay I'll fix the modding of MASTER later
14:27 BluOxy: sure I'll fix the first part
14:28 Priti: 01:51:972 (1,3,4,5) - bad overlap
14:28 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950480 this will be good.
14:29 BluOxy: Ah it's nice one. I fixed like the screen shot
14:29 Priti: :3
14:29 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/578163 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [EXHAUST]]
14:29 Priti: 00:24:080 (2,4) - I really dislike the way these skip the cymbals
14:30 BluOxy: Aha,I'll fix
14:30 Priti: 01:02:512 (1,1) - colorhax messup
14:32 Priti: 01:23:756 (2,3) - pls stack these properly so players won't mistake it for a double.
14:32 Priti: 01:34:621 (2,1) - bad overlap
14:32 Priti: 01:41:107 (5,1) - ^
14:34 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581185 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [ADVANCED]]
14:34 Priti: 01:18:404 (1) - Colorhax mistake
14:35 BluOxy: ah i didn't notice this error! (01:23
14:35 Priti: 01:43:702 (3,4,1) - these don't unstack well ingame, please manually space these
14:38 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581583 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [BASIC]]
14:38 Priti: 00:09:972 (1,1) - Spacing error

I'm still not sure about the gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED, it seems a bit big imo.
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Priti wrote:

oh my god this set is beautiful

irc mod
14:10 Priti: irc mod?
14:11 BluOxy: ah,does that mean... will you do irc mod for me?
14:11 Priti: yes
14:11 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/635679 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [MASTER]]
14:12 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Change these into 1/4 sliders, starting a map with a stream (or a circle in general) is never a good idea.
14:12 Priti: since it's hard to time it
14:12 Priti: especially with HD
14:12 Priti: 00:09:810 (1) - Drum on head, soft on tail.
14:12 Priti: 00:16:134 (1) - whistle on body :3
14:14 Priti: 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1) - In my opinion, these should be more exaggerated jumps.
14:15 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950451 more like this
14:15 Priti: 01:05:431 (1) - sliderwhistle
14:15 Priti: pls don't forget to respond to me :3
14:15 BluOxy: I see, now I fixed hit sound!
14:16 BluOxy: I'll consdier about placement... Hm
14:16 Priti: 01:50:350 (1) - Should be two 1/8 sliders and a circle
14:17 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950455
14:17 Priti: 01:50:675 (1) - same
14:17 Priti: 01:51:648 (1,1) - and these
14:17 BluOxy: Ahh is that okay?.. sure I'll fix.
14:17 Priti: that's lovely :3
14:18 BluOxy: hehe yeah that might be lovely :D I'll try to make better!
14:18 Priti: I'm done with MASTER
14:18 Priti: tell me when you're done and we'll move to INFINITE
14:19 BluOxy: sure!
14:19 Priti: 01:55:134 (1) - make the end of this 5% volume instead
14:19 Priti: (this is for all diffs)
14:20 BluOxy: ah okay I also fix that
14:24 Priti: btw I won't bubble this yet
14:24 Priti: I need confirmation about the spread
14:25 BluOxy: I see, it's okay
14:25 Priti: r u done with MASTER?
14:25 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637477 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [INFINITE]]
14:26 Priti: 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't start a diff with a circle like that.
14:26 Priti: 00:09:323 (1,2) - switch NCs
14:26 BluOxy: (okay I'll fix the modding of MASTER later
14:27 BluOxy: sure I'll fix the first part
14:28 Priti: 01:51:972 (1,3,4,5) - bad overlap
14:28 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950480 this will be good.
14:29 BluOxy: Ah it's nice one. I fixed like the screen shot
14:29 Priti: :3
14:29 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/578163 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [EXHAUST]]
14:29 Priti: 00:24:080 (2,4) - I really dislike the way these skip the cymbals
14:30 BluOxy: Aha,I'll fix
14:30 Priti: 01:02:512 (1,1) - colorhax messup
14:32 Priti: 01:23:756 (2,3) - pls stack these properly so players won't mistake it for a double.
14:32 Priti: 01:34:621 (2,1) - bad overlap
14:32 Priti: 01:41:107 (5,1) - ^
14:34 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581185 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [ADVANCED]]
14:34 Priti: 01:18:404 (1) - Colorhax mistake
14:35 BluOxy: ah i didn't notice this error! (01:23
14:35 Priti: 01:43:702 (3,4,1) - these don't unstack well ingame, please manually space these
14:38 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581583 BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE? [BASIC]]
14:38 Priti: 00:09:972 (1,1) - Spacing error

I'm still not sure about the gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED, it seems a bit big imo.
Thanks priti!
Akasha-
I think source should be: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

https://remywiki.com/BLACK_or_WHITE%3F
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552

I dont think there is a game named SOUND VOLTEX only
Have: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS

anyway, good luck :3
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I think source should be: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

https://remywiki.com/BLACK_or_WHITE%3F
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552

I dont think there is a game named SOUND VOLTEX only
Have: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS

anyway, good luck :3
Aww it's right! thanks, I changed ;)
Niko-nyan
gogo BluOxy~
Avena
BLACK or WHITE?
lol I choose pink

Bubbled!

Topic Starter
BluOxy
Thank you for bubble! I choose blue :D
Avena
rebub
Akasha-
please remove siromaru from tags, already on artist's name
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

please remove siromaru from tags, already on artist's name
I see, I removed siromaru from tags and I added "symphonic speed schranz sdvx konami".

edit:Sorry to break bubble again Priti. This time I updated without asking you ;v;
Mikayla
Take my kudoss!!!!!!
Lirai
Go Go Go ... >w<
Avena
didn't u think of PMing me so I rebub?

edit: oh god tags are inconsistent.. fix them on MASTER..
Avena
aight let's hope this is the FINAL FUCKING TIME
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Priti wrote:

aight let's hope this is the FINAL FUCKING TIME
I also hope so! thanks again
Nathan
Hm I'll take a look at this...

Just some nazi/suggestions

[General]
  1. Add "kac2013オリジナル楽曲コンテスト" and "original song contest" to tags? Taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
  2. Disable widescreen support and epilepsy warning? There's no SB
[BASIC]
  1. 00:14:837 (3,1) - Stack is off
  2. 00:17:431 (2,3,4) - Try a different placement here. For new players this arrangement might be confused with a linear pattern like this as if they all had 1/1 gaps.
  3. 00:51:161 (3) - I recommend just using a 1/1 slider instead, keep the polarity simple and easy for new players + avoid the overlap.
  4. 00:52:458 (1,2,3) - Same thing mentioned before
  5. 01:06:729 (3) - Consider just using a circle on the downbeat instead, I think the rhythm may be a bit confusing with the repeat being on the blue tick, but since it's only a repeat it might be fine. Up to you, don't forget you can avoid an overlap here too if you apply my suggestion.
  6. 01:34:621 (1,2,3) - Might wanna use circles here too, same reason above. Also isn't this kind of difficult to read?
  7. 01:41:756 (1,2,4) - ^
[NOVICE]
AR 5 might be a bit more balanced between BASIC and ADVANCED
  1. 00:40:783 (4,6) - Stack is off
  2. 01:46:296 (3,4,5,6,1) - 5 1/2 circles seems a bit much, use a 1/2 slider or repeat maybe.
  3. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
[MASTER]
  1. 01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G this? I don't see any point in the harsh flow change.
The spread for NOVICE->ADVANCED looks fine to me. Both difficulties already have a good use of 1/2, ADVANCED just introduces some slightly complex rhythms, some small jumps and a more dense rhythm in general. ADVANCED does have a fair amount of 1/4 but most are in the form of repeats which don't really count.

Let me know~
meii18
owo
Topic Starter
BluOxy

sukiNathan wrote:

Hm I'll take a look at this...

Just some nazi/suggestions

[General]
  1. Add "kac2013オリジナル楽曲コンテスト" and "original song contest" to tags? Taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552 fixed at least オリジナル楽曲コンテスト means original song contest, I just added "original song contest" and kac2013 that is already added.
  2. Disable widescreen support and epilepsy warning? There's no SB fixed
[BASIC]
  1. 00:14:837 (3,1) - Stack is off fixed
  2. 00:17:431 (2,3,4) - Try a different placement here. For new players this arrangement might be confused with a linear pattern like this as if they all had 1/1 gaps. fixed
  3. 00:51:161 (3) - I recommend just using a 1/1 slider instead, keep the polarity simple and easy for new players + avoid the overlap. fixed
  4. 00:52:458 (1,2,3) - Same thing mentioned before fixed
  5. 01:06:729 (3) - Consider just using a circle on the downbeat instead, I think the rhythm may be a bit confusing with the repeat being on the blue tick, but since it's only a repeat it might be fine. Up to you, don't forget you can avoid an overlap here too if you apply my suggestion. fixed
  6. 01:34:621 (1,2,3) - Might wanna use circles here too, same reason above. Also isn't this kind of difficult to read? Ahh, yes putting 3/4 reverse slider in a continuous is not good for beginners. I fixed "3/4 reverse slider, 3/4 reverse slider, 3/4 reverse slider, 2/1 slider" to "3/4 reverse slider, 1/1 slider, 3/4 reverse slider, two notes". well check it! when I updated (I must ask priti about fixing the map)
  7. 01:41:756 (1,2,4) - ^ almost same as before. check it!
[NOVICE]
AR 5 might be a bit more balanced between BASIC and ADVANCED
  1. 00:40:783 (4,6) - Stack is off fixed
  2. 01:46:296 (3,4,5,6,1) - 5 1/2 circles seems a bit much, use a 1/2 slider or repeat maybe. fixed
  3. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed
[MASTER]
  1. 01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G this? I don't see any point in the harsh flow change.
I feel a good flow than the opinion

The spread for NOVICE->ADVANCED looks fine to me. Both difficulties already have a good use of 1/2, ADVANCED just introduces some slightly complex rhythms, some small jumps and a more dense rhythm in general. ADVANCED does have a fair amount of 1/4 but most are in the form of repeats which don't really count.

Let me know~
thank you for modding! And I changed
01:44:594 (2,3) - i deleted a red repeat point of this slider to straight.
00:57:323 (1) - i just changed the slider of form more artistic.

I don't.. shouldn't upload mapset right now because the bubbles will be broken. I'll ask BN again
meii18
You can update don't worry
Nathan
Yeah it's fine BluOxy, go ahead and update it. I even asked a couple other BNs!

Edit: After doing a random file check, I found out one of the hitsounds has a slight delay of 3.5 ms


Here's a file with the delay cut off! -> normal-hitwhistle.wav

the first few ms of normal-hitclap2 were also silent so -> normal-hitclap2.wav
Topic Starter
BluOxy

sukiNathan wrote:

Here's a file with the delay cut off! -> normal-hitwhistle.wav

the first few ms of normal-hitclap2 were also silent so -> normal-hitclap2.wav
Oh, thanks! I updated!!
Nathan
Well deserved, have my virginity!

Last Check
22:27 sukiNathan: hi!
22:27 BluOxy: hi~!
22:27 sukiNathan: just take the hitsounds I posted in the thread
22:27 sukiNathan: replace and update
22:27 sukiNathan: ill check one more time then qualify if good
22:27 BluOxy: yes, thank you for your customed hitsound!!
22:28 BluOxy: sure
22:29 BluOxy: okay, then anyway I'll update!
22:32 sukiNathan: ok checking now
22:33 sukiNathan: looking at files first
22:35 sukiNathan: ah whoops I need to redl with new hitsounds
22:35 BluOxy: :)
22:37 sukiNathan: hitsounds good
22:39 BluOxy: yes, really I'm glad about new hitsound that has no delay!
22:39 sukiNathan: song setup options consistent
22:39 sukiNathan: files good
22:40 sukiNathan: ah
22:40 sukiNathan: about the two extra things you changed
22:40 sukiNathan: what difficulty was it?
22:41 sukiNathan: nvm it was master
22:41 BluOxy: two extra..? at least the hardest diff is MASTER
22:43 sukiNathan: alright
22:43 sukiNathan: everything looks good
22:44 sukiNathan: grats on your first rank!
22:44 sukiNathan: just posting
caren_sk
CNGRTZ BLXY !!
ShiraKai
とっても素敵だ :)

Gratz :3
Gamu
待ってました。

おめでとうございます!
VINXIS
oooooo dam
Euny
such a nice map thanks and gratz
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